Originally posted by BlairW_1
Well... hmmm... how about this... ¡El poste más ahora, mi chica, o irán a su casa y lo golpean arriba y empujan mis píldoras de ANTI blondness hacia abajo su garganta y obtienen la estupidez de su no anunciar fuera de usted!

Now, you can figure that out yourself!

I GOT IT!

The post more now, my girl, or will go to their house and they strike it above and they push my pills of ANTI blondness downwards its throat and obtain the stupidity of his not to announce outside you! .

LOL SUSAN! I just had to post something to give you 500 replies! How much do you love me?!?!?! HAHAHA!

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Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
LOL SUSAN! I just had to post something to give you 500 replies! How much do you love me?!?!?! HAHAHA!

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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LUZZZZZZZZ YOU!!! :loveya:

A few hours later, he and Jinny were on the floor, lying next to each other, quietly talking and glacing around the room at intervals.
"You're positive you wanna be a cop?" he asked her, turning towards her and fingering her face, feeling its softness.
"Yeah, it sorta runs in the family. Ever since my great grandfather was a cop, it's kinda been the family business." He laughed quietly. "What about you? You looking at colleges...careers?"
"Yeah...I'm clueless, I get good grades, and I think I'm smart enough that I could be probably anything I really put my mind to being...the problem is, I don't know what," he laughed.
She snickered. "Why don't you be a cop with me?" she winked. "We could be partners."
"Partners, huh? Aren't there rules against co-workers hooking up?"
"Depends on how exactly we define hooking up..." she grinned.
"Ahhh, I see...well, Inspector, please, enlighten me on this law..." he laughed, as he tickled her and kissed the side of her neck. She laughed as he tickled her more, and it hit her that she could never let this end. What would she do if he had to go away? What would she do if she lost him somehow? She'd been in that type of dependent, vulnerable relationship with the most important person in a daughter's life, and she'd been cruely left by that person. She suddenly stopped laughing.
"What's wrong?" he immediately said, sensing her tense up. He backed off, took his hands off her, and let her scoot away from him.
"Nothing," she lied, looking away.
"Jin, what is it? Did I do something? I won't do it again, I swear."
"No, it's not you..." she said. She felt his hand touch her shoulder, and she hung her head then rolled over so she was looking at him.
"Hey, come here," he whispered, holding out his arms, to which she gratefully fell into. He kissed her cheek lightly and brushed her hair out of the way. "So what is it?" he asked. His voice so gentle and so loving, she couldn't help but succumb and answer it.
"I just..." she started, then she composed herself and said, "I just don't want to go through the same pain if somehow I would lose you...like I lost my mom."
"Jin, I'm not depressed or anything like that, and besides, I'm not gonna kill myself, if for no other reason than it would keep me away from you."
"But why did she do that then?? Why wasn't I GOOD enough that she would stay with me? Why didn't she LOVE me enough to stay?!" she shouted, as the tears burst out.
"OMG, I didn't mean to imply that...Jinny, I'm...I'm so sorry," he said, gasping, feeling awful for the emotions he'd provoked
"No, no, it's not you, I've always know that," she wept, on his shoulder. He rubbed her back and held her so close, she felt so loved.
"Jin, I hate to say it, and I'm just speculating, but maybe your mom had some sort of..." he stuttered, not knowing how to put it.
"Some sort of what?" she asked, pulling away.
"Some sort of illness or disease, that made it so she couldn't quite think straight. Most people who committ suicide have either depression or something else that makes them extra sensetive or emotional...was she like that?" he asked, looking in her eyes.
She looked away for a moment, thinking. "I don't know, I suppose sometimes she could be a little irrational, but I can't say I helped her any...G-d, I would give anything to go back and be better."
"Hey, I'm sure you were a normal kid, and none of us were perfect kids, don't blame yourself. Like I was saying, suicide is a choice, and she didn't have to do that."
"Yeah..." she sighed.
"Hey, it's getting late, you wanna stay or your folks gonna worry if you stay out all night?" he asked, looking at his watch.
"Eh, dad's prolly passed out from his beers already, he won't notice."
"Well, I don't wanna get ya into any trouble, Jin..."
"No, don't worry about it," she smiled, gesturing with her hand. He weaved his fingers in her hand and pulled her close to him. Their noses were touching and he looked so deep in her eyes, she had found out not to even try and hide something from him, because he could see right through her. He kissed her nose lightly then nodded at her and their lips met again and didn't part for quite some time...

hehe, KK, gimme a lil time, peeps, I gotta catch up and write somemore...more tomorrow! :)

Originally posted by sue z q
"Hey, it's getting late, you wanna stay or your folks gonna worry if you stay out all night?" he asked, looking at his watch.


:grineyes: :grineyes: :grineyes:

Originally posted by sue z q
"Eh, dad's prolly passed out from his beers already, he won't notice."


:rotflmao: :rotflmao: :rotflmao:

HEHEHE! SUSAN I LOVE YOU TOO! :loveya:

MOOOOOOOOOORE PLEASE!

Awesome! This is kickin so much ass....more!

Darren quickly monopolized her time, although he was a good influence and made sure she always did her homework. Jinny's junior year flew by, and she felt herself growing in so many ways. Not only physically was she maturing, but emotionally. She felt as though she'd almost come to terms with her mother's suicide. There were still questions and anger and guilt, but it was becoming less and less part of her constant thought process. Most of this was, of course, due to Darren and the love and free acceptance she'd found in him. She was fearful and comforted at the same time. She felt as though she were almost a bad luck charm, and anyone who she would become close to and feel like she couldn't live without would leave somehow, usually by the ultimate tragedy: death. Yet, she couldn't help herself but to depend on his love and his care, and in this relationship, she not only felt comforted, but as times, she conforted him as well. She viewed their relationship as definetily a model for any: they deeply cared and were attracted to each other, they could give each other advice and help, and they'd become fast friends.
She had a small birthday bash given to her by Darren at his brother's apartment, which they used quite often as their own private getaway as his brother was rarely there.

Darren and Jinny sat comfortably on the couch, her feet up on the couch, underneath her, and his feet sprawled out, resting on the table.
"Here's to you turning 17," Darren smiled, as he lifted his mug of Sprite. He'd quickly decided against drinking any alcohol in front of her as he had challenged her to drink as little as possible. She hadn't happily conceeded, but she knew it was something she should at least try, and surprisingly, it was going well. Her mind was too busy thinking about him so often to find time to think about other things.
"Thank you, thank you," she laughed, drinking her Sprite.
"And here's to many more," he smiled, cocking his head.
"Yes, I quite agree," she smiled, looking in his eyes. "And may you be there for every one," she said, softly.
"Oh, I definetly second that," he laughed, taking another sip.
"Good," she whispered.
"OK, I gotta give ya the ritual," he said, patting his knees.
"Huh?" she asked, putting her mug down.
"C'mon, I gotta give ya 17 slaps!" he laughed, his eyes lighting up and flickering with happiness.
"Yeah, in your dreams, pal!" she snapped, laughing. "You gotta catch me first!" she hollered, starting to run out into the kitchen.
"Oh, you think I can't catch you, huh?! I'll show you, little missy!" he laughed, as he took off running after her. He chased her through the small hallway and into his brother's bedroom, where she stopped on the other side of the bed. As he leaped over the bed to jump on her, she ducked underneath him and crawled on the bed and then back into the small hallway. He shouted, "Think you're fast, huh? I'LL SHOW YOU FAST!!!" he yelled, gasping for air. He turned it into high gear and leaped over the bed and back into the hall. When he reached the kitchen and living room area, all was quiet and she was nowhere to be seen. "I'm gonna find you, I will, you know I will," he said, looking around the room. Jinny stepped out of the shower in the bathroom, as she heard him talking to her in the living room. She snuck down the hall then jumped on him from behind in the living room.
"I GOTCHYA!" she yelled, in victory, as she pounced on him.
"AHHH!!!" he yelled, in fright. Then he started laughing hard because she started tickling him. "Oh, oh, wait, that hurt," he said.
"You OK?" she asked, stopping tickling him, looking at his face, underneath her.
"I'm...GREAT!" he shouted, turning his body so he was looking face up at hers, then he grabbed her arms and set her down next to him. He wiped away a few strands of hair in her face and let out a breath, then leaned in and kissed her lips. "Oh, wait, wait," he said, thinking of something.
"What?"
"I FORGOT TO GIVE YOU YOUR 17 SLAPS!" he shouted, grabbing around her waist and throwing her over his knee as he sat up on the ground. He held her down with one hand then gave her 17 slaps on her butt with his other hand.
She shouted and screamed in protest, but could barely manage breathing as she gasped for air because she was laughing so hard.
At the end of the slaps, he flipped her over so she was lying across his lap, looking up at him. He bent down and kissed her, savoring her moist lips.
"Mmmm, now this is what I call a birthday party..." she mumbled, in between smootches. He crawled towards her, as she lay down underneath him. He smoothed her hair out on her head and kissed her lips somemore, then he gave her a few wet ones on her neck. She brought her hands up to her shirt and pulled it off and over her head as he did the same. She then rolled on top of him and he gave her her birthday present...

:grineyes:

hehe, more tomorrow!

Originally posted by sue z q
She then rolled on top of him and he gave her her birthday present...


Susan: OH MY LORDY JEEPERS!

HAHAHA! I love it..... I get Birthday pinches not slaps *shrugs* whatever!

MORE PLEASE! :happyface

Ok I have never understood the whole birthday abuse thang...its ur damn b-day...why the hell do u hafta get abused?!?!?!?!?!? STOP THE VIOLENCE...AND ADD MORE!!!!!!!!

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!

PS: DON'T KILL DARREN!! lol. jk

I want MORE now!!!

Originally posted by SleepIsGood
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AHHHHH! I so totally agree! ;) HAHA MORE!

Here's more, peeps! Thanks for replying, Amanda, thought I'd lost ya there! hehe ;)

The two graduated their junior years, more than ready to move out and be on their own, but together. They had made a committment they most definetly wanted to continue for as long as it worked, cause it was good for both of them. They were itching to start a life together.
The day of their senior year graduation, Jinny stood in front of her mirror, in her cap and gown. She didn't have the validictorian speech. She wasn't singing a sentimental song that would make everyone cry over the life-changing experience of leaving home and starting a life by yourself. Yet this day was just as special for her. It guaranteed and gave her her freedom. She looked in her eyes in the mirror staring back at her. She was thankful that she'd lived through high school and that she'd found Darren, but another part of her saw the huge change she was facing. She wouldn't see Casey nearly as much, she woudn't see her father nearly as much, she wouldn't live in the home she'd always grown up in and that was familiar to her. But still she looked at the future with hope that maybe things would start to go right. They already had with Darren, and she hoped other situations would follow. She'd been accepted at Cal-State San Fransisco and was looking forwrad to it. She'd visited the campus several times, and her father even knew several of the staff who had been police officers and now taught toward her selected degree/major: criminal law enforcement. With that degree, she could go above the ranks of patrol officer to Inspector and even higher, her ambitions. She wiped away a strand of hair that was in her face and slowly put it behind her ear. Just then her father knocked on the door.
"Jinny girl?"
"Yeah, dad?"
"I come in?" he asked quietly.
"Sure," she said, stepping further away from her mirror to greet him. He opened the door slowly then stepped in and looked at her, radiating in her cap and gown.
"Oh, Jinny girl," he smiled, shaking his head. "I can't believe it...you're graduating high school today."
"No, I thought I'd wear this tjust for the heck of it," she cracked. He chuckled, then coughed a bit, the biproduct of his smoking.
"I remember when John graduated. I couldn't believe my first born had grown up so fast, and now you, my daughter, oh, Jin, happy graduation," he said, visibly tearing up as he hugged her close. "I love you, baby, I do, and I'm gonna miss you when you leave," he said, choking up, feeling his throat tighten.

"Oh, dad, I'm not moving that far, just to the northern part of town. Don't worry, I'll be back to bug ya in no time," she laughed.
"Oh, Jinny, I just...can't believe my little girl is graduating high school," he whispered, still holding her close to him. "But I KNOW, that you are gonna be a success."
"Thanks, dad, I hope I will be, too. I just..." she paused, then pulled back. "I just want to make you proud," feeling her own eyes slightly tearing up.
"Oh, baby, I was proud the very first day I saw you, when the doctor came out and told me the great news and held you up to the light then handed you to me, and I held you in my arms...gosh, you were so little..." he marveled at the miracle of life and birth. "...and I've ALWAYS been proud, and I will always be proud." He brought her close again and squeezed her tightly, realizing his life was changing drastically. Two of his three kids were out of the house now, and he'd soon be alone; the thought terrified him.

"Well, I think we should be going now," she said, as he squeezed her so tight, she didn't think she could breathe.
"Okay, let me drive you," he said, wiping his wet eyes.
She smiled. "Okay, dad."
"Hey, Casey! Ready?" he called, to his youngest son.
"I'm ready dad," Casey called back, walking into Jin's room. "Oh, Jin, wow, you look old," he laughed.
"Oh, thanks..." she deadpanned, taking one last look in the mirror.
"Nahh, I'm just kidding, you look great, Jin," he said, sincerely.
She smiled back. "OKay, guys, let's go," John Sr. said, walking out of her room quickly, to avoid any more shedding of tears.
Casey looked at Jinny and gave her an expression, of, "Is he OK?"
She shrugged then the two walked out and they all got in the car for the big day of graduation.

hehe, funny stuff coming tomorrow...anyone besides Britt, Caitlin, and Amanda reading? LOL

HAHA! You know I'm reading more please!

AHHHHHHHHHHAHAHAHA! I GAVE YOU ANOTHER PAGE! YAY! YAY! YAY!

This is sooooooo awesome! People are reading...just not replying...I do that on alot of fics. MORE!

MORE!!!!!! This is awesome!!! She's all grown up
:crying:<hysterically
*sniff sniff...wipes eyes* All betta!! Sry...got caught up in a moment...hehehe!

(this is Jojojojojojojojo)

OMG OMG OMG....finally GRADUATION!!! awwwwwwww, i'm so proud :*) I can't belive it....*sniff sniff*

MORE!!!

Here's somemore!

Darren's high school had graduated a few days before, and she had gone, cried, and clapped when he was handed his diploma. It was his turn this time to cry and clap for her, and when the Exsteads sat down, Darren was already there and had reserved the twp seats for Casey and John Sr.
"Hi, Darren," Casey smiled. He liked Darren, he knew he could trust his sister with him. It was all to Darren's credit that Jinny had cut down on her drinking. Casey sat down next to him.
"Hiya, Cas! Working on that dribble?" he joked. He'd helped Casey with his basketball skills and the two were good buddies.
"Hi, Darren," John Sr. smiled, also proud of Jinny's choice in men this time.
"Hi, Sir," he said, nodding respectfully and shaking his hand firmly. John Sr. sat next to his son as Jinny said goodbye to go and line up where the graduates would walk across and sit.
"Bye, Jin!" they all called in unison, then laughed at their simultaneous bids of farwell. She turned around and smiled at them then walked slowly, deep in thought, to the building where all the graduates would parade from in a few moments. She reached room C where all students whose last name's ended in E were.
"Jinny, you're late," Miss Lane called, looking at Jinny through her thin glasses and her pointy nose.
"Gonna mark a tardy on the report card I already got LAST week?" she snickered. A few giggles filled the room.
"Miss Exstead, if you PLEASE," she said, her nasally voice showing quite a bit.
"I PLEASE," she said, imitating her voice, "if you please."
Some calls of, "Way to go, Jin!" and "Ooooo!!" filled the room.

The old lady backed down, huffed, then looked back at her role list and checked her off that she was there...and on time, too. ;)
"Hey, Jin!" called Harry Effrin, sitting on the other side of the room.
"Hm?" she said, walking over towards him.
"Wanna play?" he asked, as he dealt some cards and got out a few poker chips.
"Sure, deal me in," she grinned, pulling up a chair.

About fifteen minutes later, five minutes before the cerimony was to start, Jinny was winning big, and 7 people were playing against the Jin master, as they began calling her.
"Ooooo, Royal Flush!" she laughed, grabbing everyone's chips as she won again. Just then Miss Lane walked to the back and saw them playing poker. Her thin mouth made an O and she gasped slightly.
"Just WHAT do you think you're doing?!" she wailed.
"Playing poker... you want in?" Jinny asked, casually.

hehe, just so everyone knows, Britt inspired this and the next post. ;)

Originally posted by sue z q
Here's somemore!

Darren's high school had graduated a few days before, and she had gone, cried, and clapped when he was handed his diploma. It was his turn this time to cry and clap for her, and when the Exsteads sat down, Darren was already there and had reserved the twp seats for Casey and John Sr.
"Hi, Darren," Casey smiled. He liked Darren, he knew he could trust his sister with him. It was all to Darren's credit that Jinny had cut down on her drinking. Casey sat down next to him.
"Hiya, Cas! Working on that dribble?" he joked. He'd helped Casey with his basketball skills and the two were good buddies.
"Hi, Darren," John Sr. smiled, also proud of Jinny's choice in men this time.
"Hi, Sir," he said, nodding respectfully and shaking his hand firmly. John Sr. sat next to his son as Jinny said goodbye to go and line up where the graduates would walk across and sit.
"Bye, Jin!" they all called in unison, then laughed at their simultaneous bids of farwell. She turned around and smiled at them then walked slowly, deep in thought, to the building where all the graduates would parade from in a few moments. She reached room C where all students whose last name's ended in E were.
"Jinny, you're late," Miss Lane called, looking at Jinny through her thin glasses and her pointy nose.
"Gonna mark a tardy on the report card I already got LAST week?" she snickered. A few giggles filled the room.
"Miss Exstead, if you PLEASE," she said, her nasally voice showing quite a bit.
"I PLEASE," she said, imitating her voice, "if you please."
Some calls of, "Way to go, Jin!" and "Ooooo!!" filled the room.

The old lady backed down, huffed, then looked back at her role list and checked her off that she was there...and on time, too. ;)
"Hey, Jin!" called Harry Effrin, sitting on the other side of the room.
"Hm?" she said, walking over towards him.
"Wanna play?" he asked, as he dealt some cards and got out a few poker chips.
"Sure, deal me in," she grinned, pulling up a chair.

About fifteen minutes later, five minutes before the cerimony was to start, Jinny was winning big, and 7 people were playing against the Jin master, as they began calling her.
"Ooooo, Royal Flush!" she laughed, grabbing everyone's chips as she won again. Just then Miss Lane walked to the back and saw them playing poker. Her thin mouth made an O and she gasped slightly.
"Just WHAT do you think you're doing?!" she wailed.
"Playing poker... you want in?" Jinny asked, casually.

hehe, just so everyone knows, Britt inspired this and the next post. ;) Thanx for the credit chik...you da best and so is this fic! AHHHHHHHH it kicks so much ass! MORE!

i'm reading!!!!!!!! i luv this...PMS!!!!!!!(isn't the abbreviation 4 post more soon just ooo so nice?)

Originally posted by FOL_lover
i'm reading!!!!!!!! i luv this...PMS!!!!!!!(isn't the abbreviation 4 post more soon just ooo so nice?)

O...thank god...I m not the only one who has noticed that!!! NEwayzie...post more soon...or PMS!!

Here's a lil more!

The woman lightened up. "Oh, I love 7 card stud, deal me in!" she gayly laughed, clapping to herself as she pulled up a chair. Jinny gave the other players a look like, "Is she serious?"
"Oooooooookay," Jinny chuckled, to herself, as she shuffled the cards in many trickey and eye-catching ways. She then flipped them across the table and did other tricks that impressed the others. Then, trying to contain her laughter, she dealt everyone a hand, including the now very happy and elated Miss Lane.
She took her glasses off, and reached in her bag and got out her viser, or poker-playing hat.
"Hey, go Miss Lane!" a girl called out, laughing as the others gathered around to watch.
An announcement came across the speaker, "Graduates, please, now begin to walk towards the gym where you will be walking to the field."
"Oh, shut the h-ll up, crazy b---h!" Miss Lane yelled, in the heat of the game. The students, even Jinny, looked at her surprised. "What?" she said, looking at them. "Make your move, Exstead!" she called, as if speaking to someone miles away.
All the others had folded, it was now between Jinny and Miss Lane.
"You can beat her, Jin!" one girl yelled.
"Beat her pants off!" another guy hollered.

She looked deep into Miss Lane's eyes to scare her off, but surpisingly this lady had played a few poker games in her life, and she glared right back at her.
"I call," Jinny said, slowly.
"OK," Miss Lane said. And she layed her hand down.

More tomorrow, peeps! hehe ;)

Haha thats great! Altho my teacher didnt say "O shut the hell up crazy bitch" LOL...MORE!

Miss Lane kicks ass!! lol, great want more!! Finally, police acadmey!! Aww, was it just a couple of months susan that I was asking you about when your going to get to this part? Time goes by fast.......

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

hehe, heeeeeeeere's more!

Jinny grinned, knowing who'd won.
"I'm afraid my full house beats your pair," she said, snidely, in victory.
"Oh, oh, oh!" the old lady yelled, angrily, throwing her cards down. "I'll-I'll-I'll not graduate you!!!" she shouted, standing up.
"Mm, hmmm. Sure, lady...." Jinny laughed, as the other students started congratulating her, and she grinned.
"Stupid children, stupid game" Miss Lane grumbled under her breath as she marched off, in a huff.
"Somebody woke up on the wrong side of the nursing home bed," Jinny cracked.

The announcement came over, "Will the graduates please start walking to the field from the gym now."
"OMG, we're not even near the gym yet!" one guy yelled.
"Whoops," someone muttered.
"OK, guys, let's go graduate!" Jinny hollered, happily.
"Amen, sister!" one of Jinny's friends hollered back. She gave her a high five as the flood of students with the last names of E ran out of building C to the gym.

They reached the gym, all our of breath and panting, some girls were redoing their hair and checking for any false eyelashes that had been lost on the running trip to the gym.
All the students got in their assigned places and waited for the music to begin, their cue to start walking to the field, where they would sit then walk, one by one, to get their diplomas.

One guy, rather short and slightly out of shape walked up to Jinny and tapped her on her shoulder. She turned around and guessed, "Jesse?" not really recognizing the guy.
"That's right, wow, I'm surprised you know my name," he said, his high pitched voice coming through loud and clear. Jinny winced slightly then looked at him like, "Sooo?? What do you want??"
"So, I just....wanted to..." he stuttered. "OK," he said, taking in deep breaths. "I've been waiting my entire 4 years in high school to do this, and I'll never forgive myself if I don't do it now."
"And what exactly is this you hafta do?" she asked, raising an eyebrow.
"This," he said, his heart skipping a beat. He grabbed her face, squeezing her two cheeks together to the center of her face and planted a kiss on her that would rock Noah's Ark.

hehe, more tomorrow!

oooooooooo billy! This is too damn awesome! MORE!

*finally lets out emotions* MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!(LOL MAG)....c'mon i need more now!!!!!!!!! dont keep me in suspence!!!!!!!!!!! what her reaction to the kiss?!!?!?!the big kiss...the one that would rock noah's ark!!ahhh tell tell*cant wait til tomorrow*

this rocks!! susan add more please...cuz i got in trouble and have nothing to do....blah

Geez...just like Roy...NEwayzie...post more soon!!!

Originally posted by #1JoFan
Geez...just like Roy...NEwayzie...post more soon!!!

lol...ur right! well n e way...PMS!!!!!lol

Originally posted by #1JoFan
Geez...just like Roy...NEwayzie...post more soon!!!

LOL!!! haha, I didn't even think of that...hehe, here's more!

She stumbled back after he let go, as several whoops and cheers rose, mainly from a few of his select friends in the back.
"You have no idea what that meant to me," Jesse said, walking away, shaking his head and gasping for air. Jinny watched him walk away and had to laugh.
"Been leading a double life on me, Jin? I didn't know you were going out with HIM," Amy laughed.
"I didn't know I was either," she laughed back. Just then the music piece always played at graduations, Pomp and Circumstance, began playing.

The rustle of eager students nealy drowned it out, but not long enough till everyone had started to walk to the field, accompanied by claps and applauding from proud family members.
Jinny glanced over at her father, brother, and Darren and smiled and gave them a small wave back, as they clapped and whistled. The students all sat down in their assigned and practiced seats, as the principle approached the podium, to mild clapping.

He gave a heart-warming, encouraging and sentemental speech, which brought tears to many of the student's eyes, except Jinny. Nothing was sad about this day for her. It was a new beginning, something she'd been waiting for forever. As she stood up and got in line with her row to be called up to recieve her diploma, she caught a glimpse of Darren's smiling and supportive face, and she actually blushed at his love and attention. Her thoughts were stopped when she heard a familiar phrase.

"Jinny Exstead," one the administrative people in her school called, holding out a diploma, with the same name on it. She glanced up then walked onto the podium, smiled at the man and recieved her diploma, all the while hearing the loud shouts and hoops and hollers of a certain family in the bleachers to the right.

hehe, more later!

No Susan, MORE NOW!

Originally posted by FOL_lover


lol...ur right! well n e way...PMS!!!!!lol

Hehe!!! Yep!!!


Originally posted by sue z q


LOL!!! haha, I didn't even think of that

Will u should have!! :joke: :joke: :joke: :joke:

NEwayzie...post more soon!!!

no susan more now!

OMG this is Great! More!

Heeeeeere's more!

That afternoon, once the ceremony was over, the Exstead clan and Darren went out to eat, a rare occurrence in the Exstead family, where money was usually somewhat tight.
"So Darren, what plans do you have now that you're graduated? Thought any about college?" John Sr. asked, taking a bite into his salad.
Darren looked at Jinny nervously, like he was hiding something. She gave him a confused look and sensed something was wrong.
"Well, Sir," Darren coughed. "I had planned on attending either U.C.S.F. or Cal State SF, but I'm afraid that won't be what's happening."
"Oh?" Casey said, noticing Jin's obvious confused reaction to this.
"What?" Jinny said. "I didn't know about any change in plans."

All of a sudden it seemed her worst fears were being confirmed. The man she loved, dearly, once again, was leaving her.
"Well, against my will," Darren said, through clenched teeth, obviously angry, "my parents are FORCING me to go to military school. I supposedly need to shape up," he said, sarcastically.
"That's ridiculous," Casey blurted. Darren was one of the nicest and sweetst guys she had ever gone out with. He then looked nervously around the room and sank slightly in his chair for stating such a strong opinion.
"I agree, Cas," John Sr. said, to make his son feel better, patting him on his shoulder. "I can't imagine why they'd want to send YOU there. You're certainly better behaved that some of the other gallootes Jin's brought through our door," he laughed. He stopped when when he realized no one else was laughing at his little joke.
"I had no idea," Jinny muttered, sinking into a depression she had hoped and prayed wouldn't come, but was finally here. "So, what camp are you going to?" she asked, looking at her salad, and moving the tomato around with her fork.
"I think they said it's in Idaho," he said, shaking his head. "I'm sorry, Jin, I meant to tell you sooner, but I just found out last night, and I didn't want to spoil your graduation."

She shook her head and placed a hand on his. "It's all right..." she whispered.
Casey looked at his father as if to say, "Do something!" but there was nothing any of them could do.
"I promise you, Jin, I'm gonna write to you everyday and visit as often as I can."

She nodded and sighed, taking a few deep breaths to try and comprehend everything. She was angry at Darren for acquiescing to his parent's wishes, he was 18, he was an adult, why did he feel so obligated to do what they wanted when it was obvious he really wanted to be in SF with her? She wondered if maybe there were other factors she didn't know about. She resoluted to asking him about it later, privately, not in front of her family.
The Exsteads and Darren finished lunch, then Casey and John Sr. took off as Darren and Jinny went to Darren's older brother's apartment to talk.

hehe, a lil intrigue for ya there...more later! ;)

Originally posted by sue z q

All of a sudden it seemed her worst fears were being confirmed. The man she loved, dearly, once again, was leaving her.
"Well, against my will," Darren said, through clenched teeth, obviously angry, "my parents are FORCING me to go to military school. I supposedly need to shape up," he said, sarcastically.


Even though you told me that was coming Susan I still say....... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Originally posted by sue z q

The Exsteads and Darren finished lunch, then Casey and John Sr. took off as Darren and Jinny went to Darren's older brother's apartment to talk.


:rolleyes:Yeah, TO TALK! :rolleyes: Yeah, TO TALK! :rolleyes:

:lol: JK!

AHHHHHH MORE! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!

OMFG!!!!!! NO!!!!!! You HAVE to add more NOW!!!!!!!!!!!

MORE!!!

OMG MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!he cant leave!!!!!!!!!!!noooooooooooooooooooooo SUSAN POST MORE NOW!!!!!!AAAAAHHHHHH*holds a sign up in the air* more more more!!!!

OKies, just for you, Britt, a lil more...LOL ;)

The two walked in, in silence and Darren motioned for her to make herself comfortable on the couch, while he walked to the kitchen. She sighed and sat there for a while, thinking about how her life would change from the perfect picture she'd had of it only a few hours ago.
"Jin, I'm really sorry ya found out like that, in fornt of them and all...." Darren said, pouring some chips into a bowl for them.
"It's all right...I just..." she mumbled. "I just don't want to let you go," she whispered, feeling tears well up in her eyes, looking away.
"Jin, I promise, no, I swear to you, I'm not leaving permanently. It'll be a couple years, but-"
"A couple years?" she said, standing up. "How am I supposed to live without you for a couple years?"

He sighed and looked away then took her hands in his and brought her back sitting down. "I don't want to, but..." he mumbled.
"But what? That's what I don't understand. Darren, I respect your parents, but you are 18, and you're not legally responsible to them to do what they want!"
"It's not that simple, Jinny-" he started.
"Yes, it is!! You tell them, this is your life, and you love them, but you're gonna do what YOU wanna do!" she said, raising her voice.
"No, it's NOT that simple!!" he shouted back at her, standing up. He stomped back into the kitchen, away from her. "Jinny, you don't understand," he muttered in there. Jinny walked into the kitchen after him, confused and lost.

hehe, more tomorrow!

Gee Golly Susan(wow that sounds like something you would say lol) thanx! MORE!

SUSAN! THAT'S DOESN'T HELP ME! (I won't say why but you know!)

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!

SUSAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO KNO WUT DARREN SAYS!!!!!!!! POST!!!!!

Originally posted by sue z q
"Jinny, you don't understand," he muttered in there. Jinny walked into the kitchen after him, confused and lost.


"Then make me understand!"

HAHA SORRY HAD TO SAY THAT!

KK, I'ma done........ damn I think I'm on CSDTMYMU!!!! AHHHHHHH NO!

OMG SUSAN!!!dont leave us hangin like dis!!!ooo MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by sue z q
"Jin, I'm really sorry ya found out like that, in fornt of them and all...." Darren said, pouring some chips into a bowl for them.

I FOUND A TYPO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHAHHAHA YES!

SUSAN, It's FRONT not fornt!

I CAUGHT U! HAHAHAHHAH

*Sighs* the side effects of CSDTMYMU.......... haha I'm HIGH! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Here's a lil more!!

"Then tell me, explain to me, I wanna know what's making you feel so d-mn obligated to them!"
"It's very hard to explain, okay, and I'm just not in the mood to go into it all now. Jinny, my parents are...well, they're not really..." he paused, then throwing his hands up in the air, he muttered, "I just can't explain now. I'll tell you another time," he mumbled, walking out of the kitchen and back to the couch, leaving her in the kitchen.
"OKay," she said, absoring everything, standing in the kitchen alone. "I can understand that, I'm a reasonable person, just, please, don't keep walking away from me," she said, almost laughing, walking back into the living room, where he had slumped into a cushion on the couch. He was looking down at the remote control in his hand, staring at it, although his thoughts were far from thinking about a remote control.
She sat down next to him, something he didn't notice as he was so lost in his thoughts. She put her hand over one of his and it jerked him back to reality.
"Ah," he jumped when she touched him.
"Hey, it's only me," she laughed. He looked over at her with red eyes that were near tears. She looked deep into them to see if she could find out what the problem was, but she came back clueless. He threw the remote down and hugged her tightly. "I'm sorry, Jin, I wanna tell you, but I...I..." he gasped, holding her so close.
"It's OK, shhhh," she soothed, rubbing his back. She fell back slightly and kissed his cheeks and nose then his lips a few times, in recognition and show of her love for him, despite any secrets he felt he couldn't share. She went back to hugging him and rested her head on his strong shoulder, while he kissed her hair and cheeks.
"Jin," he said, pulling back. "When the time comes, I'll tell you, OK? I'm just not ready yet."
She sighed. "All right; I understand," she whispered.

hehe :D

AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's so sweet!

Umm... Susan, can the time be NOW? CUZ I WANT TO KNOW! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

(HAHA, good thing you edited it! :p)

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
I FOUND A TYPO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHAHHAHA YES!

SUSAN, It's FRONT not fornt!

I CAUGHT U! HAHAHAHHAH

You know you want my gift, Caitlin... ;)

Originally posted by sue z q


You know you want my gift, Caitlin... ;)

You know that I already got it! :lol:

awwwwwwww *tear* susan i need more!!!post more!!! dats so sweet!!

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
(HAHA, good thing you edited it! :p)

hehe, oh, my Lordy jeepeers, you peeps should see how dis fic looks B4 I edit it...LOL

Originally posted by sue z q


hehe, oh, my Lordy jeepeers, you peeps should see how dis fic looks B4 I edit it...LOL

We can only imagaine.... All I can say is..... Thank God for the Spell-Checker!!!!!!!!!!!

LOAFIE LIMBO!!! post more!! this is soooo good.

O...Susan...next time u reply I want y Darren can't go college!! Now go to your room and think about how mean u r!!!

Post more Susan! I'm depressed! THE RAMS LOST AT THE LAST SECOND! Grrrrrrrrrr....... anyway.......post more

Originally posted by #1JoFan
O...Susan...next time u reply I want y Darren can't go college!! Now go to your room and think about how mean u r!!!

awwww, :( , I'm sorry, maybe this will get me back on your good side...LOL :)

He smiled and looked down in his lap then back up at her.
"Hey, c'mere," he laughed, pulling her on top of him, as he layed back. "Jin, you know something?"
"What?"
"We are gonna make beautiful babies together."
She'd never thought about having children, ever, her own experience had soured her to the prospect of being a mother, and he noticed her lose the color in her face. "Uhhh, Jin, I didn't mean that in the way you're taking it...I don't think...I mean...uhh...how long do you expect this to last? I thought we had a committment..."
"We do; I just never thought about having children before."
"Well, Jin, you are the woman; as much as I'd like to, I can't do it for ya," he joked.
She snickered. "Ha, ha..."
"Well, for the time being, let's just enjoy the process without the product," he smiled, pulling her even more on top of him.
"Hm?"

He grinned and began kissing her passionately, one of the things she loved most about him. "Oh, wait, wait, I got a surprise for this little...how shall we put it...excursion," he winked.
"A surprise?" she marvelled, rolling to his side towards the couch, so he could get it up. He got up, went to the refrigerator, then came back out, with his surpise.
She looked at the bottle, then squinted to make sure she was reading it right. "Lemon juice?" she asked, puzzled.
"Yeeeeees...it requires lemon juice," and he gave her the most sexy look she'd ever seen from a man.
"Oh, my."

That night, Jinny's eyes opened slowly from sleep as the phone rang. She looked over next to her on the floor at Darren, and she saw that he was sound asleep. She smiled at his peaceful and nearly angelic face. His lips were slightly pursed and his eyes seemed tranquil. She slowly got up and answered the phone.
"Hello?" she whispered, to not wake Darren up, her voice cracking slightly.
"HI, is Darren there?" a woman's sharp voice called, much louder than necessary, into the phone. Jinny moved the phone away from ear a ways. She recognized the voice, however, it was Darren's mothers. One thing that she had always wondered about was the relationship he had with his parents. He didn't seem to talk about them much, unless to say they were fighting again. And in this new light of mystery about him having to go to military school, her curiosity peaked all the more.
"Yes, he's here. Just a moment, please," she said, putting the reciever down and walking back into the living room. "Darren?" she whispered, kneeling down beside him, as he was still sound asleep. "Darren, honey," she whispered, kissing his cheek, then neck, then lips. She felt him slightly jerk awake as she kissed his lips.
"Mmmmmm, hey, Jin," he said, quietly, stretching his arms.
"Hey, your mom's on the phone," she said, looking in his eyes for his reaction.
"Oh," he said, bluntly. "I'll...uhhhh...get it then," he said, getting up, his demeanor having changed dramatically. "Hi, mom?" he said, into the phone, quietly, like he didn't want Jinny to hear. "Yeah....OK...sure...yeah, you, too...bye." He hung up the phone. "I gotta go, Jin," he said, tersely, walking swiftly. "Maybe we can go somewhere tomorrow."
"Yeah..." she said, standing up. "Look, I dunno what's going on with your parents, but you can tell me, Darren, whatever it is, I doubt it will have much affect on our relationship. I mean, if you're worried I'm gonna reject you for something to do with-"
"No, Jinny, it's not that..." he mumbled, looking down, away from her.
"Then what?" she asked, getting closer to him, not really irritated, but wnating to know what was making someone she loved so much so upset. She put a hand on his cheek and his head drooped, he had to surrender to her. He coudln't hold anything back from her now.
"OK, Jinny, I'll tell you..."

:D Don't ya allz jes luzzz me?

OMG OMG OMG NOOOOO DAT IS AWFUL MAG!!!C'MON!!1 DONT LEAVE ME HANGIN..I M,UST KNOW OMG POST MORE TONITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

BITCH! You just...left us hangin! What the hell?!?!?!?!? There better be more when I get home tomorrow damnit....o ya BTW...THIS KICKS ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lemon Juice?
Lemon Juice?
Lemon Juice?

OH MY LORDY JEEPERS!

SUSAN! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!

What is it? WHAT IS HE GONNA TELL HER?!?!?!?!?!? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!

Originally posted by sue z q
"Well, for the time being, let's just enjoy the process without the product," he smiled, pulling her even more on top of him.


:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

:lol: :lol: :lol:

Originally posted by sue z q
but wnating to know

*Sighs* Susan, Susan, Susan, Susan... *Sighs*

WANTING not Wnating

HAHAHA! That's one of the ones that you screw up on alot! ;)

Speck check it again cuz you know Imma catch you 99.9876568998765688% of the time! :D

:lol: :lol: :lol:

Originally posted by sue z q


awwww, :( , I'm sorry, maybe this will get me back on your good side...LOL :)

Good Susan!!!

Originally posted by sue z q

"OK, Jinny, I'll tell you..."

Ya wanna finish that sentence!?!?!?!?

Originally posted by sue z q

:D Don't ya allz jes luzzz me?

No...grrrrrrr...:joke:...Post some more!

hehe, knew ya'd like that ending... ;)

"Look, that woman who just called isn't my mother. That's my sister and her husband. I lied to you, Jinny. I'm so sorry," he said, turning his body away from her, because he coudln't bear to think of hurting her.
"Darren, why didn't you tell me? I mean, I'm not angry with you, I'm just wondereing why you kept it a big secret? Did you think I would love you any less because of it?" she asked, moving closer to him to reassure him of her unconditional love.
"I don't know what I was thinking, Jinny," he said, shaking his head, his hands clasped before him. "I have just really tried to make everyone think I'm from a normal home so I don't have to go through a lot of explanations."
"So, where are or what happened to your real parents?" she asked, scooting even closer to him, laying a hand on his. He reached over with his other hand and patted it and smiled at his softness.
"Well, they just left. I was prolly 4, I don't really remember much except sitting at a police station waiting for someone to take me home. I remember asking the police men about where my parents were, and they just shook their heads and woudln't answer me. I suspect," he said, his voice softening, "that they were killed."

Jinny put a hand on his neck and massaged it softly as he continued. "I don't know how or by who or the circumstances, but they were killed somehow...but I don't really know...maybe they just left cause they didn't like me or something," he said, tearing up slightly. He brought a hand to his face and held his chin and sniffed so his nose wouldn't start running.
"I don't know how anyone could leave you, Darren. I know I couldn't," she said, resting her head on his shoulder. He smiled and looked over at her.
"Thanks for being so understanding, I thought you'd be mad about me lying to you."
"Hey, don't worry about it," she said, shaking her head and rubbing her nose against his cheek.
"But on thing I still don't understand," she said, thinking of something else, "how come you feel obligated to your sister about going to military school?"
"Jin, she lays this guilt trip on me everytime I bring up doing something different," he said, his aggravation growing. "She reminds me how she didn't have to take care of me and take me in, and how it was out of her kind heart that I'm alive today and livng with someone, and I just can't say no to her after all she's done for me."
"Hm..." Jinny thought over.
"And it's something she's always wanted for me, to be in the military and serve our country. I'm not exactly sure why. We don't have any vets in our family, at least I don't think we do."
"Maybe," Jinny began, "No, nevermind, it prolly doesn't have anything to do with it..."
"What?" he asked, turning towards her. "What are you thinking?"
"Maybe it had something to do with your parents death or disappearance."

hehe, more later!

AWE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was shocking!

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!

hehe, here's some early, cause I won't be home till like 10, so enjoy!

"Sometime I wonder if that's it. And I wanna ask her, cause I know she knows what happened. She has to, but so far, she just hasn't found the time to tell me, I guess," he said, angrily and sarcastically.
"Maybe you should ask her sometime."
"Yeah...maybe...if I can ever work up the courage. You don't know my sister, Jinny, she can be...well...intimidating..." he let out a laugh.
"Hey, if you've had enough courage to put up and stay with me, I'm sure you can take her on," she winked.
He laughed then smiled and leaned over and gave her a soft kiss on her lips. "It's amazing, Jin," he said, his face returning to its serious phase. "Family's have so many secrets," he said, shaking his head. Jinny nodded at that, she certainly knew what that was like. "I wish we could all just deal with them and get them out in the open, it would make everyone's lives a lot easier."
"Yeah, but the truth about those secrets can hurt," she said, looking in her lap, her hair dangling down.
"Yeah..." he agreed, both lost in deep thought.
"But hey, I've never been one for much deep thought or discussion, so what do ya say we change the subject?"
"Suits me," he said, letting out a deep breath. "So, Jin, read any good books lately?" he laughed.
She laughed again then remember something. "Oh, wait, weren't you gonna go home like your sister wnated you to?"
"Naaah, she prolly just called me to come home cause she was bored and has forgotten all about it by now."
Jinny smirked.
"Hey, let's just stay here tonight," he said, reclining back into the couch, putting his hands behind his head. "I'm exhausted...we can pretend we're married and we live here," he said, dreamily.
She laughed. "Yeah, I'm sure dad won't mind. Besides, he loves you," she smiled, thankful her father approved of him.
"Hey, Jin, do you think we'll get married someday?" he asked, out of nowhere, looking towards her as he rested.
"Kinda depends on if you ask, doesn't it?" she joked.
"Oh, right..." he laughed. "OK, then, Jin, when the time comes, will you marry me?"
She sat there, shocked at the sudden proposal. Marriage was something she'd always seen as very far down the raod in her life, as in after she was steadily supported with a job. He noticed her expression and said, "Well, we are 18, it is legal," he laughed. Then, as if reading her mind, he said, "Yeah, I know ya prolly didn't wanna get married for a while, but I'm not asaking like to get married NOW, but kinda like if you would EVER marry me...know what I'm saying?" he said, looking over at her, expectantly. "Nahh, nevermind, Jin, I didn't mean to turn you sheet white," he laughed, noticing how pale she'd gotten when he menioned that word. When she was dating someone, she didn't take it that seriously, but having seen how a person's marriage could make or break them she was extremely apprehensive about making such a committment. She had to be sure that other person would never take the easy way out and kill themself or leave in some other way.
She put a hand up and shook her head and said, "No, I'm OK, I just...it's such a huge deal."
"Yeah, true..." Darren nodded. '"Well, like you said, off the deep subjects for a while," he laughed. "Ya know, you're looking awfully pretty right now." He grinned over at her then scooted so he was right up next to her. He put a hand on her cheek then kissed her lips and let the kiss grow, till they were off the couch...

more tomorrow!

Geezus Susan! You are sacring me cuz you hit close to home alot! Haha... you sure you don't know "MY" Darren? HAHA J/K!

I love this! So add more when you get home cuz you know me, and alot of other people, are dying to read it! :D

Originally posted by sue z q
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Originally posted by sue z q
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Originally posted by sue z q
asaking

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menioned

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Originally posted by sue z q
committment

commitment

Damn Gurl! Use the spell checker! HAHA! You know that Imma re-read and check it just so I can poke fun at your "gift"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HAHA! But you know I love you! :loveya: Aint it the THURTH! ITS THE DAMN THURTH! THRUTH! THRUTH! THURTH!

:lol: :rotflmao: :lol:

great!!! more!!!!!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

SUSAN! It'S TOMORROW ON MY TIME AND YOURS SO POST MORE!

Here's more! :)

One week later, Jinny stood in her room, looking at the boxes she'd been packing the last several days and noticing how bare the room looked without her touch of clothes on the floor, hot guys on the wall, etc. Just as she had put the last shirt from her closet into a box, Casey walked in.
"Oh, my gosh," he exclaimed. "It looks so empty!"
"Yeah..." she sighed, agreeing.
"Ya know, Jin, it's not gonna be the same," he said, looking deep in her eyes. She could see his eyes reddening and filling with tears.
"Cas, I'm not gonna be that far away, and anytime you need something, anything, why, you can just holler," she laughed.
He didn't laugh. "Cas, c'mon, it'll be all right."
"I hate change," he said, looking away.
"Cas, change is part of life, in fact that's pretty much what life is."
"What? Ya finally get used to something then life changes and ya hafta start all over again?" he said, with an anger she rarely saw from him.
"Cas, really, life will be OK, you will be OK," she said, putting a hand on his shoulder.
"Yeah...I guess...but Jin, what am I supposed to do without you? You make living here fun! Now it's just gonna be me and," and he lowered his voice, "dad," he finished.
"I heard that!" John Sr. called, walking in the room. He chuckled to his son then slapped his back, to which Casey winced. "Awww, Cas, dont worry, we'll survive without Jinny girl here to keep us on our toes," he laughed, winking at his daughter.
She smirked then looked around, making sure she wasn't leaving anything.
"I remember when my older sister, Irene, moved out. I was sad," John Sr. said, lost in old memories.
"You were sad when Aunt Irene moved out? I wouldda been praising God!" she joked.
"No, we make fun of her now, but she really...she really was something..." he said, dreamily, his lip slightly quivering. "Well," he said, regaining reality, "you all packed?"
"Yeah, I'm all packed," she said, breathing in, elated that she was finally moving out.
"Well, lemme drive ya to your new apartment," John Sr. said, getting the keys out of his pocket, which were well places and prepared.
"Oh, dad I can check in by myself."
"Yeah, yeah, you know you want me there to handle it," he laughed, already walking out to the car.
"Jin, I can't watch you go," Casey said, beginning to cry profusely. He wound his bulky arms which didn't seem to fit him around her and higged her tightly. "Jin, I'm gonna miss you so much," he said, as tears rolled down his face and wetted his cheeks.
"Aww, Cas, I'm gonna miss you, too," she said, when the thought actually hit her. She hadn't really thought much about how large a part he was of her life, and then it hit her how little time they would be spending together now. A few tears rolled out of her eyes.
"Hey, c'mon! I'm waiting!" John Sr. called.
"Well, Jin, I'll be talking to ya. I'll prolly call ya as soon as dad gets home and you're at your place. If that's all right," he added.
"Cas, you call me anytime, I'd love to hear from ya," she smiled, then kissed his cheek and rustled his hair.
She took in a deep breath, grabbed two large boxes and headed out, followed by Casey who was carrying several other smaller boxes. A few other larger things, like her bed and chest were already packed in the back of the car. Jinny put the last few boxes in the back seat with Casey's help, hugged him once more then sat in the passenger's seat as her father put the key into the ignition.

hehe, father daughter talk coming up...more tomorrow!

NO! Make it come up now! NOW NOW NOW! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i took a quick break from studying for my history test and yay! you posted more!!!!! Hopefully by 10pm i'll be done studying for this damn thing......ug, I hate HISTORY!! Have me some mroe by then!!! Please?! lol

hey, Susan... one word for ya - MORE!

by the way, Amanda, what are you studying?

This is so good!!! Add more ASAP!!!

SUSAN!!! I want the father/daughter talk NOW!!

*bUmP*

:o :lol: :talk: I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:mad: :eek: :o :mad: :eek:

hehe, sorry for the delay, peeps, VERY busy with the play...hehe, our vice principal came to our dress reheasal tonight, and he said I was a very good stripper...hehe, I wonder how he knew...LOL j/k Heeere's more! :)

"Jin," John Sr. said, letting out a big breath, as he backed out of their driveway. "Today is a big step for you."
"I now, dad," she said, rolling her eyes.
"No, don't roll your eyes at me, just listen...please."
She smirked then looked at him. "OK, I'm listening."
"Jinny, I know that..." he started, then he stopped and said, "You smell like lemon juice."
"Uhmm..."
"Oh, nevermind," he said, waving her off and starting again. "I know that you've been pretty much living the way you wanna live, and now you really have freedom, living at your place and all, but-"
"But what?" she asked, fearing a confrontation or insults and reccommendsations on how she should live.
"But Jin, I just...I just want to wish you well," he said, changing what he was going to say. "Jinny, girl, I've made a lot of mistakes...a lot..." he said, reviewing his life briefly. "I just don't want you to make the same ones," he said, his bottom lip coming over his top one, staring into traffic to avoid eye contact with his daughter.
"Don't worry, dad, I'll try," she said, looking out her window, neither looking at each other.
John Sr. nodded his head and continued to stare into traffic. "It'll be a big change," he said, sighing, after a while, as they stopped at a stoplight.
"Yep..." she agreed, still looking out her window.
"Yep..." he echoed, not knowing what to say, yet having so much he wanted to say. "Jin, if you ever need anything, anything at all, please, let me help you."
She nodded, still looking out her window.

Finally, he pulled up to the apartment building, but didn't get out of the car immediately. He sat there for a few moments and she took his cue to stay sitting there.
"Jin," he started, looking over at her for once. She took her eyes off the boring scenery and looked back at him. "Good luck," he said, putting a hand on her shoulder, which drew her into him.

They hugged for several minutes. He kissed her forehead and smiled a sad smile. "I can't believe you're all grown up," he said, whistfully.
"Well, I am," she said, raising her eyebrows, smiling.
"Yeah, yeah, you sure are..." he sighed. "Well, we prolly should go in, huh?" he laughed.
"OK," she smiled, stepping out of the car.

They walked in, and within a few minutes, Jinny was standing inside her new apartment, being informed of the building's rent policy and other policies. Jinny nodded and made a mental note of each of them as she looked around the place that she'd seen before and loved. She still loved it. It was spacious and it's organization was as follows: as you walked through the door you were in the living room. Off to the left was the kitchen, separated with a wall about waist height, then to the right was the bedroom, which could be closed off by a door, and the bathroom was off of the bedroom. She looked at her dad and smiled. "It's just what I wanted," she beamed, glad she'd been working as a secretary for a while so she had saved enough money to pay the first few month's rent.
He nodded. "Good...so Jin, I guess I'll be off, so you can get settled in and everything. Hey, don't forget to come every Wednesday night for poker, and just stop by anytime," he smiled.
"OK, dad, no problem."
"Good, bye, Jinny girl," he said, hugging her again, with his eyes tearing up.
"Dad, I'm right around the corner, and so is John, you're gonna be fine," she reassured him, still hugging him. She breathed deep into his fuzzy sweater and knew she would miss him and his presence.
"Yeah, you're right..." he mumbled. "You alls are just leaving me!" he chuckled. He leaned back, but still had his hands on her shoulders. He was still taller than her, and that made him feel a little better, but he knew she was all grown up now. "Bye," he whispered, his lip still quivering. He started towards the door and the turned around and smiled at her then left.

Jinny breathed in and admired the apartment again. After a few moments she screamed, at the top of her lungs, having the time of her life, "FINALLY!!!!!! FREEDOM!!!!!!!!!" She plugged her stereo in first thing and put in a CD of the song "Freedom" and began dancing to it as she got all her things out of boxes and began rearanging her own, very first apartment.

hehe, more I dunno when but it's coming...LOL ;)

Originally posted by sue z q

"Jinny, I know that..." he started, then he stopped and said, "You smell like lemon juice."
"Uhmm..."
"Oh, nevermind," he said, waving her off and starting again.

:lol: SUSAN! YOU DID THAT! YAY!

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE PLEASE!

Originally posted by sue z q
hehe, sorry for the delay, peeps, VERY busy with the play...hehe, our vice principal came to our dress reheasal tonight, and he said I was a very good stripper...hehe, I wonder how he knew...LOL j/k

:rolleyes: SUSAN! HAHA! STAY AWAY FROM HIM! He obviously knows a thing or two about strippers! :lol: J/K!

OMG, i got goosebumps!! This is great! more!!!!!!! :happyface

Originally posted by sue z q
hehe, sorry for the delay, peeps, VERY busy with the play...hehe, our vice principal came to our dress reheasal tonight, and he said I was a very good stripper...hehe, I wonder how he knew...LOL j/k Heeere's more! :)



Ya kno wut...I don't even wanna kno!! Post more soon!!!

Originally posted by #1JoFan
Ya kno wut...I don't even wanna kno!! Post more soon!!!

hehe, oh, ya don't wanna hear about the night he and I- AHEM...I mean...well...on with the fic... ;)

She was just putting the last pair of jeans in her closet when she looked back at the empty boxes. Everything was put away and in its place. She walked out of the bedroom, which she'd decorated with her bed, with dark purple and red sheets and covers and a black bedstand, with a dark navy lamp, and on the other wall was a dresser, already having socks and underwear hanging over the sides of the drawers.
Just as she was walking around to admire her decorating skills, there was a knock on the door. Her brows furrowed and she wondered who it could be. 'Is it dad?' she wondered, thinking that he couldn't even last a few hours without her. She sauntered to the door and opened it.
"Dad!" she cried, opening her door.
"Jinny!" he said, angrily. "What did I ALWAYS tell you? Look through the little eye glass thing, open the door slighty, keeping the lock on, that's how to prevent robbery and rapes!" he shouted at her.
"Oh, my word..." she said, rolling her eyes.
"Just checking up on ya, Jin," he laughed.
"Dad, it's been 3 hours," she said, looking at her watch.
"Yeah, I know, and I'll leave ya alone, but I just wanted to see if- Oh, ya got it all done and decorated!" he marvelled.
"I work fast," she grinned. He stepped in and she gave him a tour. He left quickly and let her be as she smiled and sat on her couch in her apartment and turned on her TV to watch for as long as she pleased, after all, this was HER place.

A few hours later, she heard a knock on the door. It should be Darren, as he said he would be coming over that night. They had even thought about living together, as long as she had her own place, and they were as committed as they thought they were, it seemed like a reasonable idea. She got up, smiling all the way, and answered the door, but not without first exercising what her father had wanted her to do, just in case.
"Darren!" she cried, happily, when she opened it. She threw her arms out and around his neck and pressed herself close to him. "Doesn't it look great?" she said, excited, speaking of her apartment. She broke their hug for a second to pull him in the doorway, and close the door. Once she closed the door, she leaned back against it as he gave her a welcome kiss he'd be saving for quite a while, revelling the privacy of having her own apartment afforded them. He pressed her against the door with his force and put his hands in her back jeans pockets.
"Ooo, it looks great!" he said, looking around, once they'd stopped kissing. She led him over to her couch and sat him down.
"So, what have you decided?" she asked, never one to beat around the bush.
"Well," he started, "I decided to just go into the Marines."
Jinny sighed.
"I have to go down to the station and see if I qualify or not, I'm gonna do that tomorrow. It is a good experience and opportunity... good benefits, good pay, good employment...you're practically guaranteed a good job once you get out, and when I get out, I've been thinking...maybe we could get married." He looked in her face for a reaction.
"Uhm," she said surprised. "You wanna ask me formally?" she joked.
"I will," he smiled. "When the time is right." His constant smile always reassured her.
"So, how long will you be gone?" she asked, looking away, and out her window.
"Well, I make a contract for 5 years at first, then-"
"5 years?!" she hollered, standing up. She walked into the kitchen area of her apartment and got a soda, she needed to be drinking something while she heard all this.
"Yes, but here's the good part," he said, joining her in the kitchen.
"There's a place right her in SF, so I won't hafta be outta state or city or anything. I will be very busy, cause first there's boot camp, which is around 4-6 months of heavy training, but after that, it'll be more like a regular job, where I can come home to someone at night," he said, raising an eyebrow and walking up closer to her. He put his hands on her waist as he kissed her and she leaned back on the counter.
"Mmmm, I love a man in a uniform," she murmured, in between kisses.
He grinned then said, "So you eaten already or no?"
"Nope, but I was just hoping you would drop by, because I got some chicken and vegetables to make you, along with some mash potatos," she smiled, opening a cupboard and taking a few pots out.
"I love a woman in the kitchen," he joked.
"Shut up!" she yelled, hitting his arm, laughing.
He kissed her neck from behind her as she began boiling the water for the potatos.

hehe, welp, got two shows today, so more tomorrow!

Liking it? ;)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dis is so swet *tear* lol..and yet so funny susan i'm laughing my BUAST off lol!!!!!!!! I NEED MORE MORE MORE MORE WE CRY MORE MORE MORE LOL!

Originally posted by sue z q


hehe, oh, ya don't wanna hear about the night he and I- AHEM...I mean...well...on with the fic... ;)



HAHA!!! :rotflmao: Post more soon!!!

Originally posted by sue z q


hehe, oh, ya don't wanna hear about the night he and I- AHEM...I mean...well...on with the fic... ;)



SOME ONES FEELING REBBLY! MORE HUN!

YAY! I GAVE U PAGE 40! AHAHAHAH YES!

GEEZ! I didn't know that Jinny could boil water! ;)

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
SOME ONES FEELING REBBLY! MORE HUN!

YAY! I GAVE U PAGE 40! AHAHAHAH YES!

hehe, you know I'm rebbly...so does my vice principal...AHEM... ;)

THANKS FOR MAKING PAGE 40!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That night, after dinner, Darren sat on her couch, flipping through stations on Jinny's new T.V. as she was lying on the couch with her head resting in his lap. She thought about how perfect this seemed: her own place, a great boyfriend, but everytime it seemed she made that realization of perfection something came in and crushed it. She had been depressed for a long time, but it was always the men in her life, which could help bring her out of it. She knew she should learn at some point to stand on her own feet, so that her emotions and life wouldn't have to be ruled by whichever boyfriend she had at the time and what might happen to him or what he would do. She knew that sometime she would have to learn to be the controller of her emotions, but she resigned to deciding that now wasn't the time to start dealing with that. She didn't want to, but she knew that someday she would have to...
Darren smiled down at her as he turned the volume down on the T.V.
"You asleep?" he whispered.
She nodded her head, and he laughed softly.
"Night, Jin," he said, tenderly, turning off the T.V. and smoothing her hair out. He leaned over and kissed her forehead. "Love you," he whispered.
She mouthed the same words back to him, and he smiled. But one thing she knew was not to get too used to life going well, because somehow it always seemed to screw up...

Darren's eyes opened slowly as he awoke in the middle of the night to slight whimpering and something on his lap shaking. He wiped his eyes and looked down. It was Jinny. She had a hand over her face and was sobbing quietly to herself. Her body was quivering slightly as she wept.
"Jin?" he said, concerned. "Hey, baby, what's wrong?" he said, always wanting to make everything better.

She shook her head and wiped her hair out of her face. "I saw her again," she said, barely understandably amidst the crying.
"Hm?" he said, as he pulled her up on his lap. He wrapped his arms around her as she sat up in his lap, facing him. She rested her head on his shoulder and whispered in his ear, "In a dream. She was talking to me...telling me how much better I could have been, and how awful I made her life," she said, losing it. She began crying uncontrolably, as her body shook harder.
"Baby, nothing you did caused it," he soothed her, letting his hand run through her hair and smoothing it out. He tilted his head so his was resting next to hers. He kissed her cheek. "It wasn't your fault," he repeated. "It wasn't your fault..." He held her like a little girl in his arms, realizing how truly vulnerable and childlike she really was.
Underneath that tough as nails, hard phisad was a tragically crippled child, depserately in need of someone to make it all go away. He rubbed her back and held her, doing everything he could to be that someone for her.

hehe, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE EP TONIGHT!!!!!! AHHH!!!! hehe, more tomorrow!

Originally posted by sue z q


hehe, you know I'm rebbly...so does my vice principal...AHEM... ;)



EWWWWWWWWW! SUSAN! NO NO NO! No student/teacher relationships! EWWW!

HAHA! I LOVE DARREN! ;) YOURS AND MINE! MOOOOOOORE PLEASE!

ahhsuzaboo dis is soooooo goooooooooooooooooood!!more more more!!!!!!

SUSAN

DO

YOU

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COMBINED

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86

PAGES

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YAY

HAHA! Don't cha love me?!?!? I gave you a new page! YAY! :loveya:

wuts dat mean mixed numbas?lol o n/m hah w/e lol

Originally posted by the_biggest_nancy_fanatic
wuts dat mean mixed numbas?lol o n/m hah w/e lol

LOL, if you combine the pages from Part 1 and Part topics of dis fic, it's 86 pages!! hehe, YAY!!! LUZZZ YA, CAITLIN!!
Anyone else stiill reading besides Lugaboo and Caitlin? LOL, prolly not... ;)

Jinny woke up groggily on Darren's lap then remember that today was the day she had made an appointment to schedule the classes she wanted for the first sememster up. She stretched as she sat up straight then looked at her sleeping boyfriend. He was sitting up with his head back and his mouth open, very lightly snoring to himself. She smiled at him the leaned in and kissed his cheek. He slowly opened his eyes then looked at her, and at first he jumped back like he didn't recognize her.
"Hey, I don't look THAT bad in the morning," she laughed.
All of a sudden he started bursting out laughing. She looked at him and smirked.
"And just what is so funny?" she said, putting her hands on her hips. He nearly fell off the couch from laughing so hard.
"What is it?!" she demanded.
He couldn't stop laughing long enough to tell her.
"Fine," she said, like a pechalent child. She pouted then stomped up to a mirror then started bursting out laughing also. She then furiously began wiping at her face to remove the huge bright red crease marks dug into her cheek by the creases in Darren's jeans. She also calmed her hair down, which was flying in every direction.
"Aww, you look great, Jin," he smiled, after he'd stopped laughing.
She rolled her eyes. "Oh, you always say that."
"I only speak the truth," he smiled, giving her a slap on her butt as he passed her.
She grinned.
"I kinda like living with someone," he smiled, as he stopped and wrapped his arms around her. "Especially cause that someone is you." He kissed her cheek, remember that last night when she had woken up crying. He was happy he was able to be there for her.
She smiled and looked away. She couldn't dare to let herself enjoy the moments. They always seemed to leave her the second she found them.
"Hey," he said. "Don't you like waking up to me in the morning?" he asked, trying to get a response from her. That was one of the only things he didn't like about her. He would put himself out there and tell her how he felt, but he always seemed to be met with silence or just a smile, no compliment in return.
"Yeah, I do," she smiled, turnign to face him. She hugged him in gratitude for last night and him comforting her.
"Hey, I'm gonna make you breakfast, k?" he said, walking into the kitchen. "What sounds good?" he asked her, as he called off the names of some breakfast items she had in her fridge. She made her choice, and he quickly prepared her the scrumptious meal. They talked for a while then Jinny left and signed up for her fall classes for her first sememster in college, as Darren went to the enlisting station and was checked to see if he qualified physically and mentally to be a Marine. The answer wold decide their fate for the next few years...

more tomorrow! :)

SUSAN! PLEASE MORE NOW!

HAHA I KNOW YOU LOVE ME! EVERYONE DOES! ;)

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
SUSAN! PLEASE MORE NOW!

HAHA I KNOW YOU LOVE ME! EVERYONE DOES! ;)
lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o yeah everyone loves ya...kepp sayin dat.. lol J/K!!! hehe
SUSAN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ahh! need more!!!!!

ok gurl i'm sorry i couldnt come ovadis weekend n see ya srtip but ya cant punish me like dis!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by the_biggest_nancy_fanatic
ok gurl i'm sorry i couldnt come ovadis weekend n see ya srtip

Ya know, if we didnt know thats he was in a play, that sounds HORRIBLE!

"Oh , what did you do last weekend?" "Oh I saw Susan strip."

:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
"Oh , what did you do last weekend?" "Oh I saw Susan strip."


LMBO, hehe it sounds even worse when ya ask me:
"So, Susan, what did ya do this weekend?"
*casually* "Stripped."

LOL, here's more!

That night they met up at her apartment.
Jiny had put in a few TV dinners for them as they sat down and discussed their days.
"Well, I qualified...just barely, but I did. They said I was in good shape, and I showed the stamina, intelligence, and drive they wanted," he smiled, glad at their cimpliments.
"So, you're OK with going into the Marines now?" she asked, putting out a few plates for them.
"Yeah," he sighed. "It wasn't my first hoice, but honestly, I wasn't exactly sure what else I'd do anyways. I mean, maybe I'll finally find out what happened to my parents," he said, looking in his lap.
"Yeah..." she agreed.
"So, you sign up for classes?" he asked, wanting to change the subject.
"Yup, I'm going to be taking all my general ed. this semester: freshman English, social studies, a P.E. type of course, and one on basic criminal law. Next semester I think will be a little more interesting..."
"That's good," Darren nodded.
"Yup." They had a quite dinner and each pondered their pending futures as it approached them quickly. Jinny wondered how she would do in college. She was looking at the next four years of her life. She had always had the same end in sight, being an Inspector, but now began the preparation for that goal.
Darren also wondered how he would do in the Marines. He was a tough guy, a strong man, but being in the Marines also carried a certain amount of risk, which he was afraid of. There is sometimes a price to dedicating your life to your country...

Darren was snoozing on the couch as Jinny watched some T.V. when the phone rang. She sighed and picked it up.
"Hello?" she said, yawning to herself. She heard Darren wake up and turn on his side on the couch.
"Hi, is Darren Campell there?" a gruff sounding voice said. She guessed it was someone in the Marines, one of the recruters most likely...
"Who's calling?" she asked, to be sure.
"This is Sergeant Manners. I have some information about his parents he might like to know."

more tomorrow! :D

Originally posted by sue z q
"Hi, is Darren Campell there?" a gruff sounding voice said.

SUSAN! ISnt his last name Sands?

U MESSED UP! LOL ANYWAYS MORE PLEASE!

Originally posted by sue z q
re.
"This is Sergeant Manners.

What a name for someone in the Military! LOL!

I MADE ANOTHER NEW PAGE! YAAAAAAAAAY!

ahhH! more now, not tommorow!!!

:notworthy please!

ahhhhhhhhh SUSAN MORE NOW!!!!!! WHAT BOUT HIS PARENTS?!!? AHHH MUST KNOW!!!!!!

This is awesome hoe lol...I need more NOW!

hehe, here's some more! :)

"You do?" Jinny asked, in disbelief.
"Yes, is he there?"
"Uhh...just a moment," Jinny stuttered, not knowing what she was saying she was so surprised. She put the reciever down and walked into her living room and shook Darren gently. "Hey, babe," she whispered, close to his ear.
He breathed in then opened his eyes. "Hey," he smiled. He kissed her lips lightly then said, "What is it?" He stretched out his arms for a moment.
"It's a Sergeat Manners on the phone. Says he has some information about your parents." She looked in his eyes and knew what those words meant to him. His eyes woke up instantly, and he sat up on impulse.
"He does?" he said, after a few moments, to say something.
She nodded. He stood up quickly and hugged her closely. She could feel his stomach quivering and his pulse elevating. This was the information he'd been waiting for all his life.
Darren stood back from her, looking at her with scared, vulnerable eyes, then determined, he walked to the phone and picked it up. She followed him and stood behind him, her hands resting on his firm shoulders. She kissed the crown of his head as he said, "This is Darren. What's this about?" Jinny waited breathlessly to find out. She continued to massage his shoulders gently, as Darren remained silent, obviously listening to the revelation about his past and family history.
"We found some interesting bit of information you might want to know about. We always do routine searches on entering Marines, find out their family history, background, etc, just to get a feel for them or found out anything we should know about it which they neglacted to tell us."
"Yes, I understand, Sir, please, what's this about my parents?" he asked, annoyed at the man's verbose style.
"Well, as you know they disappeared in 1969, and you went into custody with your sister," the man said, and he sounded like he was reading it off a piece of paper or computer. "Well, some evidence has come up on our files that they became hostages of the Vietnam War and have never returned or been released. There is a slight chance that they may be alive still in a POW camp still in operation that our troops failed to release."
Darren has just felt a glimmer of hope return to him. Maybe they were still alive. Jinny felt his shoulders rise with hope, and she wondered what he was hearing.
"But, unfortunately, it is more likely, that they were killed by the Vietnamesse before the troops were able to reach wherever they were being held or that they simply died from beatings, starvation, malbutrition, etc."
Darren breathed out again, feeling his eyes well up. Though he'd never really had the chance to make a bond with his parents, the idea of someone so closely related having undergone such treatment wounded him.
"Look, why were they captured? That's what I don't understand, what did they have to do with the War?!" Darren cried, in confusion. He was never told anything about them, their professions, anything.
"You mean you don't know who they were?" the man asked, agast.

:D More tomorrow!

I DONT KNOW! MAKE ME KNOW! POST MORE! NOW!

I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU!!!!!

No, I don't, but I will if you dont post more NOW!

Originally posted by NancyRulz24
I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU!!!!!


AMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *I* LOVE YOU! :kiss:

...bitch...how dare you leave me haning!!! :mad: MORE NOW MORE!

Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
...bitch...MORE!
..ahem...oh uh uh...lol

BUT SUSAN NO I DONT KNOW WHO THEY WERE...h-ll if i know..dont ask me...are they over there?sure is sure is sure is h-ll gotta be somewhere haha somewhere somewhere!!!..ahem..i'm ok...sry angela moment hehehehe
SUSAN MORE WHO WERE THEY!?!?!??!

MORE!

hehe, it's so nice to read such complimentary and sweet replies, thank you Amanda, Lugaboo, you guys always cheer me up...LMBO, here's more! And Amy, yours deserves a special nodd... ;)

"No, I don't know anything about them!! I was never told! Please, tell me!" Darren yelled, standing up. Jinny almost jumped back and let her hands slide off his shoulders. She could feel the pain in his voice and wound her arms around his chest from behind to comfort him as best she could. She felt his hands touch hers and hold them on his chest. Her sweatpants she was wearing couldn't keep her warm, and she felt a chill run up and down her body. Darren felt it and turned around facing her and brought her into his side to keep her warm. She tried to smile, but looked at him with curious eyes to find out what was happening. He shook his head to tell her that he didn't know and looked out the window with a wistful and sad expression. She would her arm around his bare back and brought a hand to his cheek and held his face with tenderness and care. He put his other hand over her hand, and she could feel it trembling.
"Oh, I'm sorry, Mr. Sands, I had no idea. Well, OK, guess I'll hafta tell ya everything."
"It would be much appreciated, Sir," Darren said, sitting down. He held onto Jinny's arms and brought her so she was sitting on his lap. He had to have his arm around someone while he heard the answer to his questions for the past 18 years.
"Your parents were one of our best research teams. They did research for the government and often went undercover for us, you know, finding out about cultures, societies, other government secrets hopefully...anyways they were sent before the war even really began to heat up in Vietnam. They were sent it looks like in June of 1962. It has been revealed that...let's see..." the man said, with papers shuffling in the background, obviously he was reading this off government papers. Darren wondered if his sister knew all this. "Ahh, here it is, OK, you were born in 1966 over there in 'Nam. And according to these records here your parents were sent back here for a few years while you were a baby, then they were sent back in 69 and almost immediately when they got there they were captured and kept as prisoner's of war."
Darren breathed a heavy breath and Jinny felt his chest fall. She kissed his cheek again as she sat on his lap. He rested his head in her shoulder, and kept breathing deeply.
"So you have no real evidence as to their whereabouts now or whatever happened to them after that?" he clarified.
The man gruffly groaned and said, "No. Many troops were sent over even after the war to free all the POW camps, but I'm afraid some remained unfound and overlooked, and the Vietnamesse government kept them well-hidden."

Suddenly it clicked in Darren's mind. His sister had wanted him to join the military and armed forces so that he could possibly be sent over to search for remaining camps and also so he could be a better officer than those troops sent over who overlooked his parents."
"Thank you," Darren uttered, barely audibly as his breath was so taken away. There it was. Every question of his whole life answered in a few minutes.
"Sure, so I have other business to attend to. Hope I cleared some things up. Bye," the man said, putting the phone down. Darren put the phone down carefully, in a daze, not even seeing where he was supposed to hang it up. He retold the story to Jinny, and he collapsed in her arms and wept. They had likely been brutally killed or at least not kept well as POWs are hardly given good care. Jinny brought his weeping face into her and she held his head as it drooped with his hands covering his face in pain.

*sniff, sniff* More tomorrow!

aww! This is sooo great!!! I want more!:crying:

awwwwwww *tear tear* i need more suzabooooooooo

Originally posted by sue z q
And Amy, yours deserves a special nodd... ;)


MWAHAHA!! I HAVE THE POWER!!!! Okay I don't know where that came from.....

YOU KNOW WHO WANTS MORE???

WE WANT MORE!!!!!!

http://www.plauder-smilies.de/happy/invasion.gif

this is kicking some serious ace.....please add more!!! come on this rocks1

Originally posted by NancyRulz24
YOU KNOW WHO WANTS MORE???

WE WANT MORE!!!!!!

http://www.plauder-smilies.de/happy/invasion.gif

LMBO, awww, look at all dose adorbale peeps!!! hehe, here's more!

Daren became more and more enthusiastic about being a Marine, especially since the revelation about his parents. Jinny worked the rest of the summer, doing a clerical job at a Division, getting to know certain people along the ranks. She was reaquainted with Kate McAfferty, the young woman she'd met when she was only 15. Miss McAfferty was still an Inspector, but she was chomping at the bit to be Capatin, one of the few and first female Captains in the U.S. Darren began boot camp, and Jinny rarely saw him as he had to stay there and train and work, but there was the occassion call to which they talked for as long as they possibly could before hanging up. Darren sounded tired, and she could hear it in his voice. She hoped he was doing OK, while she prepared to start college in the fall.

One night in August, as Jinny was chomping on a slice of pizza she'd ordered and feeling wuite melancholy without her lover, her doorbell rang. She rarely had vistors. If Caser or John Sr. wanted something they just called her up. She put the slice of pizze down and answered the door, wondering who it could be. She nearly woke everyone in the building up when she shouted, "Darren!" as she saw his face. He wasn't supposed to be out of boot camp for 3 more months.

He pushed himself inside her apartment and shut the door quickly, as if he feared being followed or captured. He turned toward her and kissed her like he'd been starved for 40 years in the desert
"Mmm, oh, Jin, you have no idea how much I've missed you," he cooed, as he kissed her neck voraciously, lodging his hands tightly on her butt. She grinned then took his hand and lead them to her couch, an old one her family had kept that she'd gotten when she moved.
He sat down and it was then that she realized what a terrified look he had on his face.
"Darren, what are you doing here? I thought boot camp wasn't over till-"
"It's not," he interrupted her, looking in his lap. He looked nervous and jittery and she realized he'd escaped.
"Darren, how'd you get away?" she asked, quietly, trying to remain calm, putting a hand on his knee.
"It wasn't easy, but I did. Jin, I can't be a Marine. Even for the guys who this is their dream it's difficult, and that makes it tons of times worse for me. I want to find my parents, if they're even still alove, but I don't think this is the way to do it."
"What are you gonna-?" she began.
"Jin, before we talk and catch up and everything, there's something we need to do."
"What?" she asked.
He lunged at her and kissed her passionately. She slid underneath him on her couch as he made his way on top and began undressing.

hehe :D More tomorrow!

THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please i beg add more...i really need something nice

AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! I need more!!!

:eek: More!!

Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
:eek: More!!

DITTO! MORE PLEASE! REAL SOON!

Originally posted by sue z q


He lunged at her and kissed her passionately. She slid underneath him on her couch as he made his way on top and began undressing.


Ew.

Oh yea...

M O R E ! ! ! !

Originally posted by sue z q


"Mmm, oh, Jin, you have no idea how much I've missed you," he cooed, as he kissed her neck voraciously, lodging his hands tightly on her butt. LMBO SUSAN U CRACK ME UP HAHAHAHAHA




hehe :D More tomorrow!

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NO MORE NOW!!! ahhh i need more now!this is jus too sweet to wait a naohter day for!!!!!!!!!!11

It's tommorow! 2:01 PM here in SC...... so more!

Originally posted by NancyRulz24
Ew.

haha, just wait till your guy climbs on top of you and begins undressing, it won't be so ew then!! LOL Heeeeeeere's more!

"It was murder, Jin," he moaned, as they were lying on her couch, after their "welcome back."
"I can't imagine..." she agreed.
"Gees, I ache everywhere," he groaned, holding his arms in pain. His arms had swelled to nearly twice their size in muscle mass, but it was obvious he was weak.
"Maybe I can do something about that," she grinned. She turned him over so he was lying, stomach down on her couch and she was sitting on top of him, on his back. She began giving him a back rub and massage, going all over his arms, neck, back, and further south.
"Oh, Jin, that feels great..." he smiled, as he looked back at her briefly.
"Good," she replied.
"Oh, Jin," he sighed. "What am I gonna do?" he asked, looking out her window, at the rain drops as they splashed against her window then fell.
"Darren, it's not too late to start college. You can start next semester."
"But I don't even know what I want to major in."
"So, you can take all general education classes that ya hafta take anyways. Get them outta the way till ya decide on a major, which ya don't hafta declare to your sophomore year."
"Hmm..." he said, thinking. "Oh, right there," he said, as she rubbed a sensitive spot. She narrowed down to that spot and massaged it gentler. "Mmm, that feels better..." he murmured, nearly falling asleep.

She looked into his face, which was half-asleep, and it looked so peaceful. She loved every ounce of him, from his soft brown hair crown to his big feet, twice her size. She slid off of the top of him and lied down next to him. She laid her hand around his back and nuzzled her face into his neck as they both fell asleep and she let her cheek rub softly against.

Several hours later, in the middle of the night, a loud banging on her door woke Jinny up. "Who would be banging my apartment at this hour?' She figured it must be important, so she got up, carefully, so she wouldn't disturb her exhausted Darren.
She tiptoed to the door and peeked through her eyehole, and just as she did a man's booming voice said, "MARINES! OPEN UP!" She gasped as a feeling of terror ran through her.

:D

Originally posted by sue z q


haha, just wait till your guy climbs on top of you and begins undressing, it won't be so ew then!! LOL Heeeeeeere's more!

LMBO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ooo and would u know susan ;) LMBO! oi gurl dont leave us hangin ike dis WE WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!

oooooooomg more!

SSSSSSSUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSAAAAAANNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHH!! Don't leave it there you freak!!! lol MOREEEEE!

Originally posted by sue z q


haha, just wait till your guy climbs on top of you and begins undressing, it won't be so ew then!! LOL Heeeeeeere's more!


:rolleyes: Umm... *ahem*

MORE PLEASE! I LOVE IT SUSAN!

Susan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gimme more!!!

Ive been online for 8 hours. 8 long hours. 6 1/2 of which... I have spent READING THIS!..... Im gonna go crazy... I NEED MORE FAN FICTION!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!

Originally posted by sue z q


:D

NO NO NO NO NO!
You: :D CUz you are killing us and....
Us: :mad::livid: :angryfire :smash: :boxing: CUZ YOU WNT GIV US MOE!

SO MAKE US :D AND GIVE US MORE!

Limbo....IIIIII need more fic!!!! MOOOOREEEEEEE!!! NOWWWWW!!!!!!! or you shall die the death of THE SPEARED WHORE!!

hehe, glad you're luzzzing it...glad you spent those 6 1/2 hours reading Jinny girl! LOL

She knew the best thing to do was cooperate. She wanted to grab a robe to put around herself but there was none in sight. After another loud bang of the men's large sticks on her fragile door, she opened the door and said, in the clamest tone she could muster, "Can I help you?"
"Is a Darren Sands here?" one of the uniformed men asked her, blsuhing slightly seeing her in her bra and thong. She put her arms up over her bra and tried her best to retain some modesty in front of the men.

She hesitated, unsure of the best move or thing to say, and her hesitation told them all they needed to know. They pushed past her and walked into her living room. They immediately spotted Darren lying on her couch, snoring. He had slept through the whole thing.
"Officer Campell!" one of the men shouted.

Darren was so exausted he nearly slept through it. He opened his eyes slighty and said, "Whoa, Jin, you sick or what? Your voice is all deep and bleck..." he murmured. "C'mere, baby," he said, reaching for someone who wasn't on top of him. When he realized she wasn't there he groggily said, "Jinny?"
"ATTENTION!!" the other man yelled.
Darren's eyes bugged open, and he immediately knew who's voice that was and what was happening. He leaped off her couch, threw the blanket off him and stood at attention stifly, all in his naked glory. Jinny tried not to giggle as she could imagine his emabrassment. She grabbed the blanket he'd thrown off and put around herself.
"Sir, I have one request, sir," Darren stuttered.
"Oh, and what might that be, Officer Campell?" one of the men growled.
"May I please be allowed to put some clothes on?"

hehe, more later!

DOOM...post moreDOOM

HaHa that was hillarious...MORE!

Haha! More!

Originally posted by Divisionbabe05
HaHa that was hillarious...MORE!

DITTO! MORE PLEASE!

omg hahah dat is funnay stuff Suzaboo hahaha...ITZ OFF DA CHAIN!LMBO! more more more!!!!!!

I need some more Susan!!!

hehe, sorry, this is a little bit...but more later!! :)

Jinny snickered to herself at his request.
"I think that's fair," the first man grumbled. "I don't enjoy seeing you in your birthday suit anymore than you enjoy standing her in front of me in it!"
"Thank you, Sir," Darren mumbled, as he looked around for his clothes in the dark. Jinny turned a light on and handed him his clothes, which were on the other side of the room. He mumbled a thank you to her and quickly changed into them, then went back to standing at attention.
"I'm ready for orders, Sir," he said, his body standing in its rigid attention stance.
"You do realize we're not here to serve you orders, but rather to charge you with not following through on previous ones. Like, I might mention, the fact that you escaped from boot camp." The man growled right in his face, enjoying the fact that Darren couldn't move a muscle in the attention stance.
"Sir, I plan on finding any loop hole I can to get out. Being in the Marines is something I have found is not what I want or can do," Darren said, remaining at firm attention, with his eyes fixed on something behind the men, not looking at them.
"Well, isn't it too bad that you already signed a five year contract?"

I'll have a BIG part next...hehe *evilly frin*

That was a midget post! MORE!

Hun you go back and forth between calling Darren Sands or Campbell........... LOL! WHICH ONE IS IT?!?!?!

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
Hun you go back and forth between calling Darren Sands or Campbell........... LOL! WHICH ONE IS IT?!?!?! Fo sho! Pick one and stick with it...I like Sands better tho. HeHe :)

Ok...I SINCERELY need more or I m gonna have a heart attack!!

OK suzabo i need more..we all need more!! c'mon sistah!!!!!

omg i luff this!!!!! mooreeeeeeeee please!!

How many ways are there to say more??

42677467844194248615762169

MORE!!!

*still waiting* c'mon susan itz been alll day !!! more more more more more!!!!i want that REAL LONG part now pleeze!!!!!!!!

hehe, thanks for waiting guys, heeeeeeeere's more!

Darren hung his head. "With all due respect, Sir," Darren started, and he could see the Sergeant laugh as he'd heard that line before. "I need to get out. I can't do this for the next 5 years of my life. I made a mistake, I'm very sorry, but I have to quit."
"You were never Marine material anyway," the man growled at him.
Darren tried his best to not say anything and get himself back in the Marines by taking up some sort of challenge. "Whatever you say, Sir," he muttered. "Maybe I'm not. So I can get out of it?"

"No." The old man gruffly and loudly sighed. "Those contracts are binding, and even though you're not exactly our idea of a dedicated Marine ready and willing to serve your country-"
"Pardon me, Sir, but I do love this country and there are people called to serve it, but I'm not one of them. There are other-"
"It is the duty of every American to serve his or her country. Whether that be as an actor to entertain, a designer to design, a coal miner to mine coal, it all profits the country. Then there is what you chose to do for five years: direct service. It is an HONOR to be a Marine and be defending your country to the death." The man let his chest swell as he filled with pride for his line of work. Jinny shifted her feet.
Darren hung his head, and knew he was defeated. The man's words did summon a sense of pride in what he was doing. "OK, you win, I'll stick it out," he whispered, looking down, but still in the attention stance.
"Officer Sands (it is Sands BTW...LOL), I'm not here to win anything," the man said, a softer side of him showing. "I merely am trying to give you some good reasons to enjoy something you've committed the next five years of your life to. And don't worry, time flies, and once boot camp is over, you can get a full ride for college and study whatever it is you want, only you'll be wearing a uniform."
"Well, thank you, Sir, for your encouragement," Darren said, moved by the man's display of love.

He smiled an elderly and wise smile then said. "So pack up your things, our orders are to take you back where ya left. There will be sever punishment for your escape but nothing your young body can't handle." He gave Darren a punch on the shoulder, which rocked Darren a few inches to the side.
"At ease," he finally said, as Darren went and grabbed everything of his.
"Sir, I request to kiss my girlfriend goodbye," Darren said, back in his attention stance, looking straightforward.
"Ehh, we'll let ya get away with it this time," the man laughed. "We'll be in the car with the military symbol on it outside." The men walked out of her apartment and Jinny closed the door behind them.

"Well, guess it's back to boot camp," Darren sighed, almost laughing at how little he had accomplished by escaping. He stepped forward towards her and hugged her closely. "I'll miss ya, Jin," he whispered, as he rubbed her back.
"Me, too," she said, hugging him as close as she could. He stepped back and let his hands slide from her back to her arms to her hands.
"Bye." He leaned in and kissed her lips passionately, as he knew he wouldn't be able to do that for a while. He played with stray pieces of her hair for a few moments, trying to delay the moment. She nodded and looked down. He took her face in his hand gently then kissed her forehead. He walked towards the door and smiled at her as she watched him leave.

Once the door had closed, Jinny, feeling downright depressed, sank in a chair and let a few quiet tears pass out of her eyes. Those first few months without him had been torture, and now it had been implied that his training time would increase as part of punishment. She wondered how long she could keep her stamina up. She, under normal circumstances, could remain fairly faithful. But she wondered how long that would last. She certainly never planned to sleep with someone else, but things do happen, and going to bars because you're lonely one night and getting too drunk and getting carried away had been known to happen to her. She sighed, trying to put out any thoughts of unfaithfulness aside. She slipped back into bed, looking at her clock, and realizing that all that had happened in a mere 45 minutes. She set her alarm so she could be at work on time and closed her eyes, still seeing Darren once they were closed and wishing he were lying beside her.

more tomorrow!

KK! KEEP SANDS!!!

45 min? LOL! WOAH!

MORE PLEASE!

This is awesome! More!

aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww*sniff sniff* dats so sad!! =-o shes gonna cheat isnt she???isshe??? =-o will he find out? oh the questions!!!! MORE SUSAN MORE!

Originally posted by the_biggest_nancy_fanatic
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww*sniff sniff* dats so sad!! =-o shes gonna cheat isnt she???isshe??? =-o will he find out? oh the questions!!!! MORE SUSAN MORE!

OOOOOOOO LETS FIND OUT!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHH!

I need some more Susan!!!

*does the MORE MORE MORE dance*:dance::dance::dance: SUSAN WE WANT TO :read: more now!!!!! oh please oh please oh please :notworthy: so :typing: some more right now!! please ;)

everyone that wants more now do that MORE MORE MORE DANCE WITH ME :dance: :dance: :dance:

LOL, LUGABOO!!!! That dance looks fun!! Right up there with my agging funger dance! LOL

The first day of college, Jinny woke up to her alarm buzzing widly. She slammed it off and rolled over, wishing she could be greeted by a warm body next to her. She pictured Darren as still sound asleep, with his mouth hanging open a ways. She laughed to herself at the thought as she she got out of bed. She grabbed the blue shirt and black jeans she'd layed out the night before and headed for the shower. The hot water woke her up and by the time she was dressed and had her make-up on she was wide-awake. She looked in the mirror as she brushed her long hair. She'd grown slightly deprressed withtout the love of her life beside her everyday. And her face seemed to sag and hold a constant melancholy expression. But she knew she had to fix that for her first day at colllege, so she had put on a little more make-up than usual and did her hair in a French twist. Admiring her very professional looking appearance, she grabbed some fruit that she'd mixed together the night before and headed off for her first day of college. She knew she was most certainly taken, but flirting and acting coy had always seemed to be part of her nature, that and drinking and sleeping with strangers. She only hoped her "natural" self wouldn't make an appearance

She finally found building C, which was where her first calls, freshman Englsih, would be. Sighing, and happy she'd found her destination, she found the right room then walked in and looked for a place to sit. This room was larger than all of her high school classes, and she found that all the backseats were taken. She spotted one seat left, in the very first row, center seat. Begrudgingly she trudged to that front seat and sat down in it, putting her book bag next to her and her binder on the desk. The person who taught the class, sat behind his/her desk, directly in front her, with a newspaper in the way, so she couldn't see what sex the teacher was. Finally, a few minutes after a muted bell had sounded and several murmurs and laughs had risen as to why the teacher hadn't started class, the person behind the newspaper put it down and revealed his tanned, gorgeous face and muscly, hulky arms and looked out at the class with a wise smirk and said, "Welcome to college."

:D hehe, more later!!

LMBO MAG ITS THE SEXY TEACHER THAT I WANT HAHAHAHAHA LMBO OMG DAT IS FUNNAY...hehe ok...must do the MORE MORE MORE DANCE cuz it semed to have worked..c'mon everyoneo do the MORE MORE DANCE!!!!!!!!!
:dance: :dance::dance::dance:
OMG AND I KNOW WHAT WILL MAKE HER POST MORE!! DO THE AGGING FUNGER DANCE!!!! THAT WILL DEF. WORK!!!...*does the aggin funger dance* :nonono: :nonono: :nonono: hahah dis is fun :nonono: nonono: :nonono:

Originally posted by the_biggest_nancy_fanatic
LMBO MAG ITS THE SEXY TEACHER THAT I WANT HAHAHAHAHA LMBO OMG DAT IS FUNNAY...hehe ok...must do the MORE MORE MORE DANCE cuz it semed to have worked..c'mon everyoneo do the MORE MORE DANCE!!!!!!!!!
:dance: :dance::dance::dance:
OMG AND I KNOW WHAT WILL MAKE HER POST MORE!! DO THE AGGING FUNGER DANCE!!!! THAT WILL DEF. WORK!!!...*does the aggin funger dance* :nonono: :nonono: :nonono: hahah dis is fun :nonono: nonono: :nonono:

HAHA. OK Lauren... :rolleyes: MORE PLEASE SUSAN!

AHHHHHHHHHH! A MADE 46 PAGES! GEEZ! MAYBE YOU CAN GO HIGHER THAN 45! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!

MORE!!!

Originally posted by sue z q
muscly, hulky

Susan, are those even REAL words?

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
Susan, are those even REAL words?

YES! In the Susan Dictionary of typos yeah...LOL ;)

Jinny was now very awake and oggled the man up and down as he stood up and revealed god like thighs and calves, muscles like an Olympian champion. His tight shirt spread thin over his chest only magnified what lied beneath and Jinny had to contain herself. He was a far cry from the old, aged, bespectacled professers she'd imagined she'd have in college
"So, you're all freshman, right? And this is your first period, so according to my calcullations, this is your first college experience. Besides, of course, finding your class on these 5 acres," he winked.
One hand was up in the back. "Yes, Simon," the teacher sighed, "I know you've had this class twice and still failed." The class laughed amused, most of the women captivated by the man's unusually beautiful looks. Jinny was one of them and had to remind herslef she was taken and had a boyfriend who she loved with all her heart.
"So, to ease you into college, let's try the old high school way of going around the room with names. I guarantee you I won't remember yours, but I try to make the effort," he laughed. "There are of course, some of you who I will remember, for one reason or another..." he said, bemused, winking at Jinny. "So, starting with, oh, say....you," and he pointed right at Jinny.
"Jinny Exstead," she murmured quietly.
"Lil louder so-" he began.
"JINNY EXSTEAD!" she shouted, so that people in the whole building could hear.

"Phone number?" the teacher asked, then laughed as he winked at Jinny. People introduced themself, but Mr Simmons didn't hear. He was flirting with Jinny from day one, and she knew he wouldn't exactly help her relationship with Darren. He opened the class by spouting off when midterms and exams would be and recommending keeping a notebook but none was required and all the basic, boring stuff the first day of school usually entails.

Just as the muted faint sound of a bell rang to dismiss the class, Jinny was writing down in her planner, one her father had gotten her to keep her organized, the assignment: to get a copy of Wuthering Heights and read the first 2 chapters. Mr. Simmons walked up to her and started some small talk.

"So, your a freshman huh?" he asked, used to small, shy girls wanting a"guide" and "aid" to help them through their first year at college. He seemed like just the guy to "lend a helping hand" to those type of women.
'Lend a helping hand all the way to undo your bra,' Jinny thought to herself. Even though she clearly recognized his type, there was no misatking the attractives of his body.
"Yup, I'm a freshman," she answered, confidently, packing up her bag and standing up.
"If ua ever need anyone to show ya around or anything at all. You can catch me here or at this number," and he pulled out his card which read, "Jay Simmons, professor of English at UCSF."
"Thanks," she muttered, slightly disgusted, yet at the same time, finding that hard body irresistable.
'First period of college, and I'm already racking up phone numbers,' Jinny muttered to herself on her way to her next class.

hehe, liking it? ;)

.....susan......

Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
.....susan...... I agree lol

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

Originally posted by sue z q
He seemed like just the guy to "lend a helping hand" to those type of women.
'Lend a helping hand all the way to undo your bra,' Jinny thought to herself.

:rotflmao: MORE SUSAN!

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl


:rotflmao: MORE SUSAN!
lmbo caitlin said it all...MORE MORE MORE*does the aggin funger dance* :nonono:

Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
.....susan......

Double ditto that.

ok ya think dis thing can go to 47 pages? i'ma try and see hehehe......

NANCY

Originally posted by the_biggest_nancy_fanatic

lmbo caitlin said it all...MORE MORE MORE*does the aggin funger dance* :nonono:

Yeah, I can say It ALL! lol

Originally posted by the_biggest_nancy_fanatic
NANCY

McKeon

ROCKS!

SUSAN, you little HOOKER!!! POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

HAHAHA! YES! I MADE PAGE # 47!

YAYAYAYAYAYYAYA!~!

YAY!!! 47 pages!! WHAHOO!!!!! hehe, TY, CAITLIN! Love you! :loveya: And a big *muah* to everyone else who's STILL (lol) reading after all this time, can ya believe it that we'll be having our one year anniversary end of June? Yikes! hehe, here's more!

She found this class easier than the first and was relieved to see a tall, sturdy woman sitting in the teacher's desk. Male teachers seemed to spell trouble for Jinny Exstead.

Jinny sat down and chatted with the girl next to her, while they waited for class to begin and others to file in.
"You a freshman, too?" the blonde asked, her liquid blue eyes bearing all the innocence Jinny had lost over the years.
"Yup," Jinny nodded, taking in the room. It was completely bare, with no posters, no pictures, no nothing.
"Gees, I can't believe I'm in college already. Seems like yesterday I was learning to go potty!" The tiny blonde laughed a fluttery laugh at her little joke, and Jinny tried to nod and smile as class began.

With a booming voice, which seeemd to fit her large body, the teacher began her class.
"Psychology is not the study of people for your own, personal benefit and knowing the reason for actions people do, but rather, it is an analyzation of mankind involving history, language, culture, society, beliefs, traditions, and religion. It's likely too much of an analyzation for those of you born with the small undeveloped and unevolutionized brain, which is likely more than half of you, so save everyone's time and drop the class and take home ec or something worthwhile for your nonexistant intelligence."

The class sat in silence as each one was trying to figure out the definitions of half the words she said.
"But for the rest of you with functioning half-normal brains, maybe we can work." The lady actually feigned a slight smile. Jinny hoped she would be in the latter group.

After the hour and a half class, Jinny had a break between classes. It was 11:30 and her next class wasn't until 2. She hopped in her car and put the key in the ignition but it wouldn't start.
"Oh, wouldn't ya know," she grumbled to herself, after swearing several times.
"Need a hand?" grinned her hot English teacher from earlier, Mr. Simmons, as he leaned in the passenger's window and rested his arms on the ledge. He had his eyebrows up and his biceps were bulging out of his shirt.
'You have a boyfriend, you have a boyfriend, you have a boyfriend,' she repeated in her mind.

:D More later!

Originally posted by sue z q
'You have a boyfriend, you have a boyfriend, you have a boyfriend,' she repeated in her mind.


'Keep remembering that, keep remembering that, keep remembering that.... ah screw it the teachers so hott!'

Geezus... umm... nvm I dont like what I just said... flashback *sighs*

SUSAN! MORE PLEASE! And more as in NOW!

add more!!!! ok since that is too short ill give u a few reasons why:

1- i did nothing today....soooooo add
2- im depressed with the US womans team....go darwitz!!
3- it kicks ass
4- i have a black and blue mark of my leg from a puck AGAIN
5- i have a black and yellow mark on my elbow since i dont wear elbow pads
6- from my boots on my right side they cut into me and made me bleed
7- this rocks
8- im tired
9- this still rocks
10- i want Jinny to screw the teacher already!

Originally posted by hockeybabe528

10- i want Jinny to screw the teacher already!

:rotflmao: HAHAHAHA! SUSAN PLEASE! I AM BEGGING YOU ON THE BAORDS AND IN OUR IM! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!

Originally posted by sue z q


"Need a hand?" grinned her hot English teacher from earlier, Mr. Simmons, as he leaned in the passenger's window and rested his arms on the ledge. He had his eyebrows up and his biceps were bulging out of his shirt.


ooooooooo theres gonna be troubleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! lol!! whole lotta cheatin goin on..dang susan ur good..u make a make believe guy sooooo hot!lol!!! but uh..this part kinda sounds liek the begining of SM..*twilight zone music plays* do do do do do do do do
lol!! ahh susan more!!!!!!!! and god reasons keightee lol!

LOL, guys!!! haha, your replies...they're the greatest...haha

"No, that's OK, really, I got it," she tried to smile and wave him off.
"Oh, c'mon, everyone can use a hand. Let me attach your car to mine then we can drive it to a mechanic." His face looked honest enough. This wasn't a trick. Maybe he was really just trying to help out. Ha! This is a hot guy who had been asking for her phone number earlier, he certainly WASN'T just trying to help out...
"Umm..." she said, thinking.
"No problem, I'll be back with my car in just a sec," he grinned, like she'd said yes. Before she could stop him, he was driving his car in front of hers and attaching it to his car. She sighed and hoped she could keep her hands to herslef. She knew he was a teacher, but she hadn't exactly had a perfect record where they were concerned...

"Passenger's seat is free up here!" Mr Simmons called from out his car window after he'd hopped in his car. She knew she shouldn't have let him get this far, but she kept reminding herself he was only driving her to a mechanic, nothing more.
"Umm...sure..." she mumbled, getting out of her car and getting in the passenger's seat in his.
"There," he grinned at her, those collasal muscles ripping through his sheer and tight shirt. She tried to smile as she felt bits of persperation rise on her body.
"Here let me roll down your window," he grinned, reaching across her and pushing the button. He was not so conspciuously flexing his arm and chest muscles as he lay across her lap rolling down the window. Once it was all the way down he still didn't move and return to his corner.
"Umm...window is all the way down now," she said, trying to get him off her.
He took his eyes off her for one minute and looked at the window. "Ha, by so it is..." He let his hand slip on her leg slighty, making it look accidental as he straightened back up in his seat.

She looked in his eyes to let him know she didn't wanna buy cause she wasn't for sale. He nodded his head as if understanding then started the car and headed off.
"So, whatchya majoring in?" he asked, to get onto a safe subject.
"Criminal Law/Law Enforcement."
"Oh," he said, impressed.
"Why, what did you think I was majoring in?" she laughed, noticing his surprise.
"Oh, I dunno...I thought you might be undecided like every other freshman I've met."
"Nope, not me," she said, looking out her window.
"Nope, guess not..." he mumbled. "You lived in SF long?"
"All my life."
"Oh, really?"
"Mm, hmm."
"I just moved here from Sacramento where I got my teaching credentail."
"New teacher?" she asked.
"Yup."
"Oh..."
They drove in silence. Jinny was thankful at least that he had stopped flirting.
"Here we are. I know the guy here. Old buddy of mine. He'll fix your car up." He smiled at her an actually nice smile, without any hidden motives.
"Thanks for the ride," she said, getting out of the car.
"No problem. Sorry I came off as...you know..." he said, gesturing, looking down, his muscles glimmering in the sunlight and in a constant flexing state.
"Horny the word you're lookin for?"

hehe, more later tonight! :)

Originally posted by sue z q
He let his hand slip on her leg slighty, making it look accidental as he straightened back up in his seat.



:eek: :eek: :eek: PERVERT! :eek: :eek: :eek:

Originally posted by sue z q

"Horny the word you're lookin for?"


:rotflmao: HAHA! MORE PLEASE SUSAN! NOW!

LOL...hornay teacha! More Loafie!!!

Here's some more!

He laughed and nodded slightly. "Prolly...well, I'll let ya off here. Just ask for Marty, he'll take care of you."
"Thanks." She walked into the shop as he unhooked her car from his. She found Marty, a young man with a large black mustache and told him what the problem was, and he proceeded to take it in a garage and fix it as she waited.

After only a few minutes of inital checks Marty walked back out. "Looks like it's gonna take a few hours, miss, we can call ya to come back when we're finsihed," the man said, with a Southern accent.
"Oh, OK, thanks," she muttered, wondering how she was going to get home then back.
"Need a ride?" Mr Simmons, appeared, behind her. "We both have to eat, might as well be together," he grinned.
She began to wonder if he had planned all this. Her car rarely had problems; now they both seemed free for lunch. But she had to succomb to his Olympic god like body and she nodded and got in his car again.

He drove her to a bar, which he could enter legally, and he let her have a sip of his Scotch on the rocks. They chitchatted for a while, both wondering when their talking would get down to business and enter the phase they were both waiting for. Jinny had a vague picture of Darren in her mind while she talked with Mr. Simmons and she felt a few pangs of guilt for having such desires, but somehow, as she looked at Mr. Simmons, the pangs lessened, and she almost forgot about Darren completely. Something about the way that gorgeous body moved was irresistable.

He shared with her an exotic past which she doubted every word of. And she told him a few sparse, unrevealing details about herself. When Jinny looked at her watch she saw that it was already 1:45. 'Time flies when you're flirting,' she thought to herself. She tried to politely excuse herself from their conversation, but his persistence had to pay off. Something in his eyes which looked at her with desire appealed to her. Of course, it was superficial. Of course, it was not genuine. Of course, it was all a game. But still it was something. And despite her better judgement and love for Darren, she agreed to meet Mr. Simmons at a bar that night around 7. 'It's harmless enough,' she thought. 'And besides, Darren is miles away...' Or was he?

;) haha, I'll leave ya with that thought till tomorrow!

Or is he?!?!?!?!?!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! SUSAN! PLEASE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

Originally posted by sue z q
They chitchatted for a while, both wondering when their talking would get down to business and enter the phase they were both waiting for.

BOTH?!?!?!?!?!

:grineyes: :grineyes: :grineyes:

Originally posted by sue z q
'It's harmless enough,' she thought. 'And besides, Darren is miles away...' Or was he?


=-o *turns into angela* where is he?where is he?well he's gotta be somewhere..somewhere sure is srue is sure is sure..where is he?is he over there?sure is sure is sure is h-ll gotta be somewhere..somewhere somewhere haha somehere..where is he??????!!!!!!!!!!!

...ahem..i'm ok..really lol..OMG SUSAN WHERE IS HE?MORE MORE MORE *does the more more more and the agging funger dance* :dance: :nonono:

SWEET POST MORE:happyface

SUSAN!!!! DON'T MAKE HER CHEAT ON DARREN!!! :nonono: NEWAYZIE...post more soon!!

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Jinny walked into her next class at 2, freshman physical education, another of the dreaded required classes she had to take. She was physically fit, but as she looked around the room, she realized she was probably the only one. One girl did stick out at her. Jinny guessed she was a swimmer on account of her thin streamline body and massize arm muscles, due to many hours of laps in the pool. Another thing that tipped her off was the fact that she had a deep, almost natural tan. Jinny decided to walk up to her and introduce herself.
"Hi, Jinny," she said, holding out her hand. "Know where the teacher is?" she laughed, looking around, as they all waited for the instructor to show up.
"Nope," said the redhead, also laughing. "I'm Megan, just call me Meg," she smiled warmly. Jinny detected a far away, drugged-like look in her eyes. She wondered if that was just her personality or if she was on actual medication or something else...
"Hi, Meggy! We got in the same class! All right!" one guy called from the other side of the gym.
Meg rolled her eyes.
"You know him?" Jinny asked, noticing Meg in disgust.
"Yeah, we went through school together, same class, every year from kindergarten, so where does he decide to go to college after I tell him I'm going to UCSF? Yeah..." Jinny snickered.
"He got a crush on you?" she joked.
"Oh, G-d, I wish it was just that, he's obsessed!" she moaned.
"Guys are strange," Jinny laughed.
"Tell me about it," Meg laughed. "So you been in SF long?"
"Yup, all my life," Jinny said, taking in a breath. "You?"
"Just moved here from Sante Fe."
"New Mexico?"
"Yeah, this school sounded like it had good sports programs, plus it doesn't hurt that I got a full swim scholarship."
Jinny laughed. "Nope, doesn't hurt at all." Just then the teacher walked in. Finally, a male teacher without sex appeal. She breathed a sigh of relief as the 60 year old man walked in, in jogging suit and whistle, in good shape, but with a face like a dog. His nose protruded past a normal measure and his head was completely bald.
"Ok," he said, in a shaky high pitched voice, quieting everyone down. "I'm Mr. Webber..." and he began the class and went through all the preliminaries and put everyone nearly to sleep with his sing song voice.

Once the hour class was over, Jinny said bye to Meg and walked on to the parking lot when she remember her car was still in the shop. She swore then was just about to find a phone and calll them to ask if her car was ready when Mr. Simmons just "happened" to show up behind her.
"Hey!" he said, startling her.
She turned around and saw him. "I scare you? Ha, didn't mean to..." he laughed, walking on in front of her. She stayed where she was when he turned around then said, "You coming?"
She looked at him confused.
"Aren't you coming with me in my car to go see of your car is ready?"
"Uhhmm...Sure," she said. 'This guy doesn't give it a rest.'

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AHHHHHHH! SUSAN! MORE PLEASE! The teahcers umm... *weird* LOL MORE PLEASE!

hahah that old teacher guy sounds like my dad..cept hes not in shape hahahahaha

oh i almost forgot *does the more more more and the agging funger dance* :dance: :nonono: :D

SUSAN I MUST HAVE MORE!!!

Originally posted by #1JoFan
SUSAN I MUST HAVE MORE!!!
DUTTO THAT (lol suzaboo)

LOL, guys!!! hehehe, here's more!

They went to pick up her car, and luckily, it was ready. Jinny paid the man the absorbinant sum of $500. 'Thank God for that trust fund,' she thought to herself. Mr. Simmons nodded his head and winked as she drove off, in anticipation of the dinner she'd promised to eat with him.

At 6, he pulled up to her apartment, as she was standing in front of her mirror, deciding what to wear. He'd said he'd be by at 7. She felt this was awfully strange and didn't even want to know what this guy's plan was. She answered her door in her jeans and a bra, holding a skirt and sparkly black top.
"Hi," she said. "Umm...didn't you saw 7?"
"7? Did I say 7? Oh, I'm sorry..."he replied, planting his eyes in one conspicuous place on her, which was revealed at the moment. Something about the way he said it showed her he was far from sorry.
"Well, ummm...." he started, making it clear he wasn't going to leave and come back at 7.
"Why don't you come in?" she muttered, unhappily, knowing that's what he wanted, but it was also, in a way, what she wanted, too.
"Well, don't mind if I do," his face lighting up, even his muscles seeming to shine more. She closed the door after him as he sat down on her couch.
"Nice place ya got here," he smiled.
"Thanks," she mumbled, exploring in her mind the ambiguity most women have. 'Is it possible for me to like two people at the same time?' The answer in this situation was a definite yes. She loved Darren, beyond what words could express, but Mr. Simmons, though he was hardly someone she truly loved, did excite her in certain "ways."

"I'll just...go change..." she mumbled. He nodded and she walked back to her room, locking it for obvious reasons. She changed into the sparkly black shirt and nice slacks and put on some black sandals, after all, it was hot outside that day in SF.

"Hey, where's the bathroom?" Mr. Simmons asked, startling her as he shouted from right outside her door. She jumped and let out a gasp to which she could hear him giggling.
She opened her door and said, "It's right there," pointing to the open door next to her bedroom.
"Oh, guess I didn't see it..." he laughed.
"Guess not..." she smirked, playing along. She was about to close her door and go back to getting ready when he stopped the door from shutting with his hand and said, "Actually, it wasn't the bathroom I wanted."
"Oh?"
"It was you."

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o0o0o0o0oo0o0o hunay ya gotta post more like...NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dis is getin steamay!!!!

oops dangit i almost forgot again!! *does the MORE MORE MORE and the AGGING FUNGER dance* :dance: :nonono:

Originally posted by sue z q
"Actually, it wasn't the bathroom I wanted."
"Oh?"
"It was you."


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Holy Sh*t......MORE!

Glad everyone's enjoying it...LOL ;)

"Me?" she clarified.
He nodded. Then he put one hand over her hand, which was holding the door. His hand was flaming hot and nearly burned hers. She also noticed that he flexed for a milisecond, knowing exactly where her weakness was. She felt persperation form on her with every gorgeous move his body made. He then took a step towards her and slowly shut the door behind him with one hand, not taking his eyes off her or her body for a second.
She hesitated and was still unsure exactly what she shold do.

"This may not be such a good idea," she said, aloud, feeling the pangs of guilt hit her suddenly. She stepped back and away from him a few steps, then she turned her back to him and was looking out her window, through the small cracks in her blinds. She looked out there. Darren was out there somewhere. He would be tremendously hurt and devastated if she did this. She loved him with all her heart, but was it possible she still didn't love him enough to control her own desires? She had everything with Darren, a deep, unconditional love, a great sex life, could she risk all that with the possibility of throwing it all away? 'He's miles away,' she kept telling herself, but she'd had a bad history of being found out.

She let her head sink in all the confusion going on in her mind. Suddenly she felt Mr. Simmons' large hands on her shoulders, rubbing them sensuously, still burning with desire. He pressed his chest up to her back and his legs up to hers, and she could feel his heart beating loudly and his breathing become lighter.

"C'mon," he prodded, in her ear, then kissing her neck and pulling her hair back. He let his hand slide down from her shoulders, on her arms, then to her waist where he rubbed her stomach and along her thighs, then slowly led his fingertips to the bottom of her shirt, which he started to pull up. She stopped him pulling up her shirt and put her hand over his.
"What's wrong?" he asked.
She tried to find the words, tried to reconcile everything in her mind, tried to do the right thing, but those rock hard arms and abs were so close to her body at the moment that all her willpower had to succomb.
"Nothing," she whispered, turning around violently and kissing him long and hard. She closed her eyes and tried to forget what she was doing as he picked her up and let her fall, not so gently, on her bed, to which he climbed in with her...

:D More later!

ooooooooooooo fu*ker! MORE!

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Geez, hasn't she had enough of the "Teacher Experience" I mean I know teachers are there to help the students and care for them but this is a BIT MUCH! HAHA! :lol:

Originally posted by sue z q
He seemed like just the guy to "lend a helping hand" to those type of women.
'Lend a helping hand all the way to undo your bra,' Jinny thought to herself.

And did he do that?!?!? YES! And he did more than that too! AHHHHHHHHHH!

Geezus, SUSAN! MORE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL AND SHE'S GETTING LAID BY HER TEACHER!

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Awww...poor Darren!!! Post more Susan!!!

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It wasn't right, but she'd done it. Her only hope was that Darren didn't find out.
"Mmmm...you smell good," he whispered as they lied there, immediately after the pinicle had been reached. He kissed her lips some more and breathed in her scent of her neck, as he let his body adjuct back to normalcy.
She couldn't answer. She just lied there and accepted whatever overtures he had to make. He crawled on top of her once more and she moaned and turned the other way.
"What?" he said, annoyed, as he saw her roll over, underneath him.
She shook her head. "I shouldn't be doing this," she whispered, mainly speaking her thoughts out loud, with no intention in confiding in him.
"What? You engaged or something?" he joked, laughing.
She glared at him. "No, I just...I have a boyfriend."
"Oh, you do?" he said, getting scared, fearing what that boyfriend might do if he found out.
She rolled her eyes. "No, need to fear, he's miles away." If only she knew the fallacy in that statement.
"Oh, good," he breathed a sigh of relief.
"That doesn't make it any more right," she said, still speaking mainly to herself, as she looked over the edge of her bed at the carpet.
"Here, I know what'll cheer you up," he said, kissing down her bare back before he got up. He stepped back to her living room then came back in, bearing a bottle of Vodka. Her enemies had returned, both of them, sex and alochol. "One drink of this, you'll forget all about what's his name. It's a bottle of Vodka."
"I can read, thank you," she said. It had been a while since she'd drunk the hard stuff, at that was all to Daren's credit, but she figured as long as she'd gone this far, might as well, go the whole way.

She grabbed the bottle and drank a fourth of it in one gulp. The immunity level she'd built up so long had not gone away, and that small amount of alcohol didn't satisfy her. She kept drinking till she couldn't feel anything again, the feeling of knowing nothing and caring about nothing what just what she needed right now. Or was it?

A while later, after the deed was long over and several bottles that Mr. Simmons had bought had been consumed, Jinny was lying on her back on her bed, exhausted. Mr. Simmons had his head resting on her chest and his arms wrapped around her desperately, and he was fast asleep, mostly from the alcohol, not to mention exhaustion. She breathed in heavily, regretting what she'd just done, and she hated the part of herself that actually enjoyed it. She couldn't even bear to look at him by now, though his face was fuzzy from how much she had drunk. She was about to drift into her alcoholic daze when her doorbell rang just then, and then she heard persistent knocking. She panicked first, but then clamed herself down, realizing it was probably just her landlord to give her another notice on her rent which had been climbing.

She moved his heavy body off her, groggily got up but then sat back down on her bed as her head began to ache. She hadn't felt that ache in a long time, but all of a sudden it was back and just as painful as before. She rubbed her head and looked back at the lump besides her. She groaned as she saw Mr. Simmons sleeping like a baby, unaware of what their recent actions might cause. She groaned somemore as the evening came back to her, but then heard a shout from her front door.
"Jinny, I don't care who you're screwing, open up!"
Jinny groaned even more when she recognized the voice as John Jr.'s.

hehe, more later!

:eek2: That is all that Imma say... just :eek2: just plain :eek2: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
:eek2: That is all that Imma say... just :eek2: just plain :eek2: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol.... ditto!

Whoa...MORE!

more! now! More! O ri will stalk you w/ more IMS!

POOOOOOOOOOR POOOOOOOOOOOOR DARREN!!! Ok...well NEwayz...I like John Jr and Jinny scenes...so pleez post...now!

HOLY #^$@$%@&*($@!%!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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hehe, here's more! And I believe this should make 50 pages!!! WHAHOOOOO!!!!!!!!

She got up, slower this time, and grabbed a bra and put it on on her way to the door. After having fastened it she opened her door slightly and as soon as she did, John Jr. pushed it all the way open, nearly making her topple backwards.
"Oh, Jin, put some clothes on," he muttered, strutting past her in his boxers. She rolled her eyes. "And what do you want, dare I ask?" she said, closing her door. She put her hand back on her forehead and rubbed it somemore.
"I got evicted. Gonna hafta room with you for a while," he casually said, like the decision was entirely his.
"What? Ohhh...." she groaned even more. "Why can't you stay with dad and Casey?"
"Are you kidding?" he laughed. "Nooo way...they're...weird..." he said, putting his suitcases down.
"Ok, you get the couch," Jinny muttered, walking back to her bedroom, not up to a fight with her older brother.
"Umm, no, Jin, I get the bed. I'm the man, and I'm older, that gives me 2 points over you so I get the bed," he said, pushing past her roughly and into her bedroom. Her back hit the wall, and she groaned again. "Oh, great, JUUUUUST great, Jin, get this guy outta hear!" he grumbled, seeing the naked amn in her bed.

"John, number one, this is my place, two, this is my place, and three, this is my place, that gives me 3 points over you, so YOU can have the couch." She pushed him back out of her bedroom with the same force as he'd shown to her.
"Oh, fine," he pouted, like a stubborn little boy. He stomped to the couch and lied down, pretending to be very upset. She rolled her eyes somemore then walked back out to her living room where the couch was.
"Do you want something to eat?" she asked, always having a small soft spot for her older brother somwhere.
"Yeah, that'd be nice," he said, in the most pathetic little voice he could muster.
"OK, fine, what'll it be?" she asked, walking to her kitchen, still exhausted. She opened the door to her fridge and said, "Eggs? Left over chicken? Soup? Tuna sandwich?"
"How about the leftover chicken," he smiled, getting up and sitting down at the little breakfast table she had set up for herself and Darren.
"OK," she said, pulling the chicken out and putting it on a plate. "So, how come you got evicted?" she asked, curious.
"Oh, the manager said he didn't want 'Playboys' in his apartment building, and I'm a little behind on the rent..." he said, his voice trailing off. She handed him a plate and he quickly cleared it asking for more.
"So why are you in your boxers?" she asked, having some of the chicken, too.
"Well, uhh...that's kinda when the manager came in and told me I was a 'Playboy.' "
"Ooooooh," she said, understanding.

Just then Mr. Simmons came out of the bedroom.
"Hey, Jin, having a party and ya didn't invite me?" he laughed, still tipsy. Jinny lowered her eyes and felt her embassment growing. He, buck-naked, wobbled to the little table where Jinny and her brother were eating. "YAY!! FOOD!! GIMME, GIMME!!" he shouted, in his drunken bliss. She sighed then handed him a wing of the chicken, and he nibbled at it.
"So, you a one night stand or you two going together?" John Jr. asked the wild drunken man. "With Jin, I never can tell."

hehe, more tomorrow!

MAN SUSAN! M-A-N! LOL! Not Amn.....

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mroe more more more more
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Get the picture?!

MORE!

Wait, John Jr has never meet Darren right?

More Damnit!

:happyface AAAAAAAHAHHAHAHA!!!!! "John, number one, this is my place, two, this is my place, and three, this is my place, that gives me 3 points over you, so YOU can have the couch." AAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA :happyface

AHHHHHHH...MOOOOOOOOOORE!!!

I have 1,000 posts..........

right...............

NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!! GO ME!!! PARTY PARTY!!! I decided share it with you guys at my favorite fan fic!!! Aren't ya happy?!?!? :lol: :happyface :crazy: :happyface :lol:

HAHAH I LUZZ IT!!!!! MORE MORE MORE SUSAN!!!!!!!! :dance: :nonono:

Originally posted by NancyRulz24
NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!! GO ME!!! PARTY PARTY!!! I decided share it with you guys at my favorite fan fic!!! Aren't ya happy?!?!? :lol: :happyface :crazy: :happyface :lol:

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Jinny glared at him and he quickly stopped the giggling he was doing.
"John, could you please refrain from making derrogatory comments to me in MY apartment? Let me remind how easy it is for me to kick you out," she glared.
He laughed harder and his voice got higher, almost making her laugh at how girly it could sound.
"Aww, Jin, can't ya take a lil humor...so, what's your name, pal?" he asked, hitting the guy on his shoulder.
Mr. Simmons looked at him with his mouth full of chicken and said, in a mumbled, not understandable voice, "I am Queen Elizabeth the 9th!" He then proceeded to laugh his head off, spitting bits of chicken everywhere. Jinny moaned at the mess she was going to have to clean up.
John Jr. yawned. "Well, as much fun as this party's been," he laughed. "I'm still hard, and I'm tired...that woman was wild...sheesh," he said, giving out details Jinny could have lived without knowing. "Anyways, night all." He got up from his chair and trudged to her couch where he collapsed, his thick body hitting the cushions with a thud. And within a few seconds, his snoring was filling the room.

Jinny sighed, got some earplugs then headed back for her bed. Mr. Simmons began to follow her back to the bedroom giggling, still drunk, but she closed her bedroom door in his face and he hit his nose and she lied down.
"Hey!" he said, putting a hand on his nose. "That hurt!" He was so drunk, pain even seemed funny, and he laughed somemore. Jinny rolled her eyes as she set her head down on her pillow.
"Awww, come on, let me in!" he cried. "The couch is already taken!" he pouted, looking over at John Jr., someone he didn't want to have to spend the rest of the night with.

She groaned, got up and let him in. "You can sleep here tonight, then you're going," she said, tersley, spinning back around towards her bed. She now saw the not so attractive side of Mr. Simmons. He was a drunken child, and what seemed hilarious to him was not even slightly amusing to her. He giggled his way all the way back to the bed, and she, annoyed, said, "Oh, shut up." He stopped giggling and climbed onto his side of the bed, inching his way closer to her. She finally gave up and let him wrap his gigantic arms around her. In her mind, it seemed there was a vast distinction between men you loved and men you had sex with, unlike the usual connection of the two. Despite how annoying Mr. Simmons was drunk when those arms were around her, she could rest easy. She could be at peace. She had always needed a nurturer in her life. Someone she could be intimate with. The intimacy of friendship and maternal guidance had left her at 14, now it seemed that all that was left was physical intimacy to bring her comfort and love... Jinny drifted off to sleep, with Mr. Simmons foreign yet comforting arms, completely unaware of the surprise arrival a certain person was going to give her.

Several hours later, Jinny was again woken up by her doorbell. She groaned for the millioneth time that night and wondered when this night would finally be over. Her body ached of sleep deprivation and the fact that it was still pitch dark out didn't comfort her, nor did the clock by her bed, which only read 2:10. Suddenly she was jolted awake and to a panic when she heard a too familiar voice call out, excitedly, "Hey, Jin, open up! I got a day of leave! Surprise!"

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ooooooo sh*t that aint good...SUSAN YOU BETTER NOT LET HIM FIND OUT BOUT MR F*CKFACE!!!!!!! I WILL HAFTA KILL YA THEN! O YA...MORE DAMNIT!

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
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OOOOOOHHHHHHHH MYYYYYY GAAAAAAWD!!!!!!!!!

MORE!!!! Now would be nice.