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Snowfall · 05-12-2005, 12:54 AM

OMG....Kelly, GET BACK HERE!!!!!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 05-29-2005, 12:18 AM

Hey guys. I'm not gonna be posting on this here anymore. Not a lot of people here to read it anymore..but if you are reading this, and want to know what happens, PM me and I'll show ya

Thanks!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 06-28-2005, 10:46 AM

Okay I know I keep changing my mind but I am going to post here after all cause I get no replies at the other place lol Hopefully this different. I will post later tonight. Please reply to it LOL I work so hard on them

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 07-08-2005, 03:50 AM

Well SOMEONE wanted me to post more on this so I am

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Jinny noticed his voice. It was strange. Like he inhaled helium. She couldn't tell who he was. Then he hit her on the head again, harder this time and she was again knocked out. There she was, lying on the floor, hoping for someone to find her. As Magda was heading home and realized she too forgot her history book and had to go back. This was not her lucky day. She was now even madder than before. She couldn't be late coming home. Her mother got very suspicious about what her other daughter Lily did afterschool and didn't need a lecture from her mother. She ran there. When she got to her locker, she was out of breath. Her locker was near the girls and boys bathrooms. She thought she heard something as she was opening her locker, but wasn't sure. It sounded like moaning, but this was highschool. In the hallways, they always heard moaning. But she heard it again and it sounded like a painful moan. So she went into the girls bathroom and there was nothing. She hesitated but went into the boys, covering her eyes.

Magda- Hello? Anyone in here?

Magda didn't hear anything but then she took a quick peek and found her best friend, on the floor bleeding.

Magda- Jinny!! Oh god please be alright. Please.

She took out her cell phone and called 9-1-1. Then a janitor came into the bathroom.

Janitor- Sorry girls, you know you're not supposed to be in here and I'm cleaning now so you'll have to go home.
Magda- My friend is unconsious. I found her here.
Janitor- Did you call someone!?
Magda- Yeah 9-1-1.
Janitor- Good.

He took off his shirt and rolled it up to put under her head.

Magda- You don't think it was the boy going around raping girls do you?
Janitor- I don't know, maybe.

Then the paramedics showed up. They examined her and then put her on a stretcher.

Paramedic 1- It looks like this girl was raped then knocked out.
Magda- Oh my gosh..can I please come with her? She's my best friend.
Paramedic 2- Alright just this once.

Magda rode in the ambulance with Jinny. She just held her hand. On the way there, Magda felt Jinny move her hand. Magda looked over to see Jinny's eyes flicker open.

Jinny- Mag..
Magda- Shh don't talk Jinny. You were hurt in school and you're on the way to the hospital.
Jinny- I don't know who it was.
Magda- Who what was?

Jinny couldn't talk. She was really tired. She just closed her eyes. Magda continued to hold her hand and stroke her hair out of her face. She figured she would call her family when they got to the hospital. She also had to call her own mother. When they got there, they quickly rushed Jinny into a room to be examined. Magda called her father. John Sr.'s phone rang.
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How's that for ya? LOL I'll spend my day writing tomorrow and have more

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 07-16-2005, 09:07 PM

Ok here's more. Replies please!
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Jinny couldn't talk. She was really tired. She just closed her eyes. Magda continued to hold her hand and stroke her hair out of her face. She figured she would call her family when they got to the hospital. She also had to call her own mother. When they got there, they quickly rushed Jinny into a room to be examined. Magda called her father. She told him what happened and he would meet her at the hospital. She sat in the hospital waiting room and waited to hear any news. A nurse came out to talk to her.

Nurse- Are you the friend who came in with Jinny Exstead?
Magda- Yes I am. Is she alright?
Nurse- Yes she is. She should be able to go home soon. That’s all I am permitted to tell you I am afraid.
Magda- Can I see her?
Nurse- Well we’re really not supposed–
Magda- Please!
Nurse- Ugh okay. But only for a few minutes.
Magda- Okay.

The nurse led her to Jinny’s room. She had a big bruise on her head already from where she was knocked out. She had cried herself to sleep. Magda could easily see the tear stains on her face. She went over to her bed and whispered softly.
Magda- Jin..
Jinny- *Moaned as she was waking up* Hey..
Magda- How are you doing?
Jinny- I’ve been better.
Magda- Well I called your Dad. He should be here soon. I’m so sorry Jinny.
Jinny- Don’t be Mag. This was bound to happen to me eventually. I mean, in the last 6 months, I’ve been sexually harassed, bullied, humiliated, and now to add to the list, I’ve been raped. *Starts to cry again* What did I do?
Magda- Don’t do that. You did not do anything wrong, you hear me?

At that moment, Jinny’s dad walked into the room and saw Jinny crying.

John Sr.- Jinny girl?
Jinny- Hi Dad.
Magda- I’ll leave you all alone for a little bit.
Jinny- Thanks Mag.
John Sr.- Jinny, the doctor told me what happened. Are you okay?
Jinny- Well..I have a killer headache, I’m in a hospital, and oh yeah I was raped. I’m ducky Dad.
John Sr.- I’m sorry Jin..
Jinny- No I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to snap at you. This day has just been pretty intense.
John Sr.- Well why don’t we go home? I talked to the doctor and he said you can leave.
Jinny- Yeah okay.
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I know it's not much but I'm kinda blocked.

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 08-19-2005, 12:06 AM

K with school coming up, I have to end some fics. This one had a good run and maybe I will do a sequel in the future! Thanks for reading!

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The school immediately started an investigation due to all of the rapes. Magda and CD helped Jinny during school. Jinny looked at every male, wondering if he’s the one that did this. CD and Magda didn’t know how to help her. They just did all they could to protect her. One afternoon during school, the principal called Jinny down to the office, as well as some other girls. They were each put into different rooms and questioned. After the principal had all of their stories they called them all into one room.

Principal- Well we compared all of your stories and we believe we know who has been doing this. We have school police picking them up right now. Jack Ellis is one of the boys and his best friend Shawn McFarland is the other. They switched girls and used helium to disguise their voices. I’m sorry for what happened but at least they were caught and you’ll never have to see them again.
Jinny- Thanks Mrs. Denum.

At lunch, Jinny told CD and Magda the incredible news.

CD- That’s great Jinny!
Magda- I’m so happy for you. Now they’re gone.
Jinny- Yeah..

As Jack and Shawn were being escorted out to a police car by Kate McCafferty, everyone could hear Jack screaming.

Jack- I’ll get you Jinny Exstead!

Jinny didn’t let it bother her. She decided she was going to forget all about Jack Ellis and go on with the rest of her life.

The End
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TDivisionInspector · 08-19-2005, 12:18 AM

OMG KELLY!!!!!!!!!!! HELIUM?!?!??!?!??! YOU HAD to throw in our inside joke, huh? rotf Well I love it! You're a genius!

05-12-2005, 12:54 AM	#91
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05-29-2005, 12:18 AM	#92
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Hey guys. I'm not gonna be posting on this here anymore. Not a lot of people here to read it anymore..but if you are reading this, and want to know what happens, PM me and I'll show ya Thanks!

06-28-2005, 10:46 AM	#93
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Okay I know I keep changing my mind but I am going to post here after all cause I get no replies at the other place lol Hopefully this different. I will post later tonight. Please reply to it LOL I work so hard on them

07-08-2005, 03:50 AM	#94
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Well SOMEONE wanted me to post more on this so I am _________________________________________________________________ Jinny noticed his voice. It was strange. Like he inhaled helium. She couldn't tell who he was. Then he hit her on the head again, harder this time and she was again knocked out. There she was, lying on the floor, hoping for someone to find her. As Magda was heading home and realized she too forgot her history book and had to go back. This was not her lucky day. She was now even madder than before. She couldn't be late coming home. Her mother got very suspicious about what her other daughter Lily did afterschool and didn't need a lecture from her mother. She ran there. When she got to her locker, she was out of breath. Her locker was near the girls and boys bathrooms. She thought she heard something as she was opening her locker, but wasn't sure. It sounded like moaning, but this was highschool. In the hallways, they always heard moaning. But she heard it again and it sounded like a painful moan. So she went into the girls bathroom and there was nothing. She hesitated but went into the boys, covering her eyes. Magda- Hello? Anyone in here? Magda didn't hear anything but then she took a quick peek and found her best friend, on the floor bleeding. Magda- Jinny!! Oh god please be alright. Please. She took out her cell phone and called 9-1-1. Then a janitor came into the bathroom. Janitor- Sorry girls, you know you're not supposed to be in here and I'm cleaning now so you'll have to go home. Magda- My friend is unconsious. I found her here. Janitor- Did you call someone!? Magda- Yeah 9-1-1. Janitor- Good. He took off his shirt and rolled it up to put under her head. Magda- You don't think it was the boy going around raping girls do you? Janitor- I don't know, maybe. Then the paramedics showed up. They examined her and then put her on a stretcher. Paramedic 1- It looks like this girl was raped then knocked out. Magda- Oh my gosh..can I please come with her? She's my best friend. Paramedic 2- Alright just this once. Magda rode in the ambulance with Jinny. She just held her hand. On the way there, Magda felt Jinny move her hand. Magda looked over to see Jinny's eyes flicker open. Jinny- Mag.. Magda- Shh don't talk Jinny. You were hurt in school and you're on the way to the hospital. Jinny- I don't know who it was. Magda- Who what was? Jinny couldn't talk. She was really tired. She just closed her eyes. Magda continued to hold her hand and stroke her hair out of her face. She figured she would call her family when they got to the hospital. She also had to call her own mother. When they got there, they quickly rushed Jinny into a room to be examined. Magda called her father. John Sr.'s phone rang. _________________________________________________________________ How's that for ya? LOL I'll spend my day writing tomorrow and have more

07-16-2005, 09:07 PM	#95
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Ok here's more. Replies please! _________________________________________________________________ Jinny couldn't talk. She was really tired. She just closed her eyes. Magda continued to hold her hand and stroke her hair out of her face. She figured she would call her family when they got to the hospital. She also had to call her own mother. When they got there, they quickly rushed Jinny into a room to be examined. Magda called her father. She told him what happened and he would meet her at the hospital. She sat in the hospital waiting room and waited to hear any news. A nurse came out to talk to her. Nurse- Are you the friend who came in with Jinny Exstead? Magda- Yes I am. Is she alright? Nurse- Yes she is. She should be able to go home soon. That’s all I am permitted to tell you I am afraid. Magda- Can I see her? Nurse- Well we’re really not supposed– Magda- Please! Nurse- Ugh okay. But only for a few minutes. Magda- Okay. The nurse led her to Jinny’s room. She had a big bruise on her head already from where she was knocked out. She had cried herself to sleep. Magda could easily see the tear stains on her face. She went over to her bed and whispered softly. Magda- Jin.. Jinny- Moaned as she was waking up Hey.. Magda- How are you doing? Jinny- I’ve been better. Magda- Well I called your Dad. He should be here soon. I’m so sorry Jinny. Jinny- Don’t be Mag. This was bound to happen to me eventually. I mean, in the last 6 months, I’ve been sexually harassed, bullied, humiliated, and now to add to the list, I’ve been raped. Starts to cry again What did I do? Magda- Don’t do that. You did not do anything wrong, you hear me? At that moment, Jinny’s dad walked into the room and saw Jinny crying. John Sr.- Jinny girl? Jinny- Hi Dad. Magda- I’ll leave you all alone for a little bit. Jinny- Thanks Mag. John Sr.- Jinny, the doctor told me what happened. Are you okay? Jinny- Well..I have a killer headache, I’m in a hospital, and oh yeah I was raped. I’m ducky Dad. John Sr.- I’m sorry Jin.. Jinny- No I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to snap at you. This day has just been pretty intense. John Sr.- Well why don’t we go home? I talked to the doctor and he said you can leave. Jinny- Yeah okay. _________________________________________________________________ I know it's not much but I'm kinda blocked.

08-19-2005, 12:06 AM	#96
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	K with school coming up, I have to end some fics. This one had a good run and maybe I will do a sequel in the future! Thanks for reading! _________________________________________________________________ The school immediately started an investigation due to all of the rapes. Magda and CD helped Jinny during school. Jinny looked at every male, wondering if he’s the one that did this. CD and Magda didn’t know how to help her. They just did all they could to protect her. One afternoon during school, the principal called Jinny down to the office, as well as some other girls. They were each put into different rooms and questioned. After the principal had all of their stories they called them all into one room. Principal- Well we compared all of your stories and we believe we know who has been doing this. We have school police picking them up right now. Jack Ellis is one of the boys and his best friend Shawn McFarland is the other. They switched girls and used helium to disguise their voices. I’m sorry for what happened but at least they were caught and you’ll never have to see them again. Jinny- Thanks Mrs. Denum. At lunch, Jinny told CD and Magda the incredible news. CD- That’s great Jinny! Magda- I’m so happy for you. Now they’re gone. Jinny- Yeah.. As Jack and Shawn were being escorted out to a police car by Kate McCafferty, everyone could hear Jack screaming. Jack- I’ll get you Jinny Exstead! Jinny didn’t let it bother her. She decided she was going to forget all about Jack Ellis and go on with the rest of her life. The End _________________________________________________________________

08-19-2005, 12:18 AM	#97
TDivisionInspector Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 01, 2004 Posts: 73	OMG KELLY!!!!!!!!!!! HELIUM?!?!??!?!??! YOU HAD to throw in our inside joke, huh? rotf Well I love it! You're a genius!