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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 05-16-2004, 06:27 PM

Hi all. I will be posting on my fics again and I started another one. This fic is based on a true story of someone very close to me. I hope you enjoy it.

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It is the year 1978 and Jinny Exstead was part of an college program. She was best friends with Magda Ramirez who was also involved in that program as well as Candace DeLorenzo. It was to help high schoolers get into college. Jinny had met a friend there about 3 months ago. His name was Jack. They had been talking a lot while they were there. Jinny and Jack did not live near each other so the only time they talked was at the program which met once a month. They were getting a long nicely and had gotten to be best friends. Jinny would talk to Magda and CD all the time about him. They was very happy for Jinny. All three of them would spend the time at the program together talking and talking. He liked Jinny a lot. Jinny liked him too. But not the way he liked her. One day, they were in a class. The teacher got a little annoyed by all the trouble the other students were giving her and she told the kids to take a break. All the kids left the room. CD, Magda, Jinny, and Jack left to go get a drink.

Magda- Hey guys I will meet you down the the soda machine. I have to use the bathroom.
CD- Yeah me too. We will see you down there.
Jinny- Ok. Let's go.

On the way down there, Jack stopped. Jinny was a little confused as to why he did.

Jack- Come over here.

Jinny did. He walked her over to a dark corner. He then kissed her. They had given little pecks on the lips before so she didn't think it was a big deal.

Jack- You are a very pretty girl.

Jinny just smiled. Jack then started kissing and sucking her neck. That had never happened to her before and she wasnt expected it. He then touched her chest. Jinny just froze. She did not say a word. She couldn't believe what was going on. He lifted her shirt. Jinny pulled it back down.

Jinny- What are you doing?
Jack- Am I going to fast?
Jinny- Yes!

Jack touched her back. Then he heard voices coming. It was Magda and CD. Jack stopped and they got out of the corner.

Magda- Hey. Aren't you guys supposed to be down at the soda machine?
Jack- There was a line so we came back up here. Why don't we just go back to class? We dont have enough time to go down there now anyway.
CD- Ok. You ok Jin?
Jinny- Yeah. Fine.
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Let me know what you think.

MinnIeMcKeOn · 05-16-2004, 07:55 PM

pOST MORE..YOU ALREADY KNOW WHAT ILL TIHNK OF IT! LOL GOOD LIFETIME MOVIE GOOD LIFETIME MOVIE!! LOVE YOUR STORIES LOL AND THE 2 YOU POSTED WERE TRUE! LOVE YA
GIMME MOREMOREMORE STORY!!~X0X0jESSIE AKA JO

bananasplit · 05-16-2004, 08:08 PM

post more soon!

Snowfall · 05-17-2004, 01:16 AM

Awwww, Kelly, that was great. Post more soon.

candace~n~nathan · 05-17-2004, 08:52 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Snowfall
Awwww, Kelly, that was great. Post more soon.

yep, what Tara baby said!!

CandyBasso · 05-17-2004, 01:28 PM

Whohooo! A new fic! That was great Kelly. Keep it coming!

Btw, Jinny could meet a good guy (whos name is Teddy) and she could tell him everything and he could beat the crap outta Jack, and then Jinny and that good guy(Teddy) could live happily ever after!

Oh, and that good guy(Teddy) could have a good friend (whos name is Nate)

Ain't I smart?! lol

MinnIeMcKeOn · 05-17-2004, 07:51 PM

CandyBassos got a good point!!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 05-17-2004, 09:10 PM

Wow that's a lot of replies! lol I am glad you all like it. I know it isn't much but I wrote a little more. I will add more to it tomorrow.
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They were walking back to class. Jack acted like nothing was wrong. Jinny, however, was ready to cry her eyes out. She felt so ashamed. How could he let him do that to her? They went back to class and she tried to forget nothing happened. Unfortunately, she just couldn't hold back the tears anymore. Tears came streaming down her face. She covered her face so no one would see. A teacher's aide knew exacrly what was going on and took Jinny outside of the classroom.

Teacher- I saw you were crying. What's wrong?
Jinny- Oh nothing. I just sometimes cry for no reason. It's ok nothing is wrong.
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MinnIeMcKeOn · 05-17-2004, 10:24 PM

ThAts so saD i want mores! i feeL for ya KellY x0x0Jessie

Snowfall · 05-18-2004, 12:28 AM

Awwww, how sad!

Post more soon.

ANYSNTHATWORKS · 05-18-2004, 05:41 PM

YOU SUCK, YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU TOTALLY SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!

Where's more? hehehehe

bananasplit · 05-18-2004, 10:03 PM

post more soon!!!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 05-19-2004, 12:23 AM

Here is a little more
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They were walking back to class. Jack acted like nothing was wrong. Jinny, however, was ready to cry her eyes out. She felt so ashamed. How could he let him do that to her? They went back to class and she tried to forget nothing happened. Unfortunately, she just couldn't hold back the tears anymore. Tears came streaming down her face. She covered her face so no one would see. A teacher's aide knew exacrly what was going on and took Jinny outside of the classroom.

Teacher- I saw you were crying. What's wrong?
Jinny- Oh nothing. I just sometimes cry for no reason. It's ok nothing is wrong.
Teacher- I am a very emotional person myself. No one saw you crying. I know something is wrong. Please tell me.

Tears were still coming down her face. She figured the teacher basically already knew so she should tell her.

Jinny- Well..a boy..touched me.
Teacher- Touched you how?
Jinny- *Explained everything*
Teacher- Ok what was the name of the boy who did this?
Jinny- I can't say.
Teacher- He didn't threaten you or anything did he?
Jinny- No.
Teacher- Then why aren't you telling me who it is?
Jinny- Because I don't want him in trouble.
Teacher- If he did something wrong, then he needs to be in trouble.
Jinny- He was the only one really talking to me when I came here. I have no real other friends.
Teacher- If you don't want to tell me that's ok. Just remember that if he gets away with it, he might do something worse next time.
Jinny- I know. I just don't want to cause any problems.
Teacher- The only person who is causing problems is this boy.

Jinny started crying again. She just couldn't hold it in anymore.

Jinny- It..was..Jack.
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Snowfall · 05-19-2004, 01:11 AM

Kelly, you're writing this so well.....it's a very good fic. Post more soon!

MinnIeMcKeOn · 05-19-2004, 03:13 PM

I agree with Snowfall..your a great writer Kelly! Me and you ahve something in common..lol like its the 1st! If I was Jinny, id rip his balls off and shove them down his throat. Then make him **** them out and make him eat them again!! LOL..sry people im not very ladylike all the time lol* Good joB KeLLy~by the way...more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

05-16-2004, 06:27 PM	#1
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	She Didn't Expect This Hi all. I will be posting on my fics again and I started another one. This fic is based on a true story of someone very close to me. I hope you enjoy it. _______________________________________________________________________________________ It is the year 1978 and Jinny Exstead was part of an college program. She was best friends with Magda Ramirez who was also involved in that program as well as Candace DeLorenzo. It was to help high schoolers get into college. Jinny had met a friend there about 3 months ago. His name was Jack. They had been talking a lot while they were there. Jinny and Jack did not live near each other so the only time they talked was at the program which met once a month. They were getting a long nicely and had gotten to be best friends. Jinny would talk to Magda and CD all the time about him. They was very happy for Jinny. All three of them would spend the time at the program together talking and talking. He liked Jinny a lot. Jinny liked him too. But not the way he liked her. One day, they were in a class. The teacher got a little annoyed by all the trouble the other students were giving her and she told the kids to take a break. All the kids left the room. CD, Magda, Jinny, and Jack left to go get a drink. Magda- Hey guys I will meet you down the the soda machine. I have to use the bathroom. CD- Yeah me too. We will see you down there. Jinny- Ok. Let's go. On the way down there, Jack stopped. Jinny was a little confused as to why he did. Jack- Come over here. Jinny did. He walked her over to a dark corner. He then kissed her. They had given little pecks on the lips before so she didn't think it was a big deal. Jack- You are a very pretty girl. Jinny just smiled. Jack then started kissing and sucking her neck. That had never happened to her before and she wasnt expected it. He then touched her chest. Jinny just froze. She did not say a word. She couldn't believe what was going on. He lifted her shirt. Jinny pulled it back down. Jinny- What are you doing? Jack- Am I going to fast? Jinny- Yes! Jack touched her back. Then he heard voices coming. It was Magda and CD. Jack stopped and they got out of the corner. Magda- Hey. Aren't you guys supposed to be down at the soda machine? Jack- There was a line so we came back up here. Why don't we just go back to class? We dont have enough time to go down there now anyway. CD- Ok. You ok Jin? Jinny- Yeah. Fine. _______________________________________________________________________________________ Let me know what you think.

05-16-2004, 07:55 PM	#2
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05-16-2004, 08:08 PM	#3
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05-17-2004, 01:16 AM	#4
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	Awwww, Kelly, that was great. Post more soon.
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05-17-2004, 01:28 PM	#6
CandyBasso Member Frequent Poster Join Date: May 09, 2004 Location: Drooling over Jay picture Posts: 120	Whohooo! A new fic! That was great Kelly. Keep it coming! Btw, Jinny could meet a good guy (whos name is Teddy) and she could tell him everything and he could beat the crap outta Jack, and then Jinny and that good guy(Teddy) could live happily ever after! Oh, and that good guy(Teddy) could have a good friend (whos name is Nate) Ain't I smart?! lol
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05-17-2004, 07:51 PM	#7
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05-17-2004, 09:10 PM	#8
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Wow that's a lot of replies! lol I am glad you all like it. I know it isn't much but I wrote a little more. I will add more to it tomorrow. ____________________________________________________ They were walking back to class. Jack acted like nothing was wrong. Jinny, however, was ready to cry her eyes out. She felt so ashamed. How could he let him do that to her? They went back to class and she tried to forget nothing happened. Unfortunately, she just couldn't hold back the tears anymore. Tears came streaming down her face. She covered her face so no one would see. A teacher's aide knew exacrly what was going on and took Jinny outside of the classroom. Teacher- I saw you were crying. What's wrong? Jinny- Oh nothing. I just sometimes cry for no reason. It's ok nothing is wrong. ____________________________________________________

05-17-2004, 10:24 PM	#9
MinnIeMcKeOn NMKMarCAurora* Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 13, 2004 Location: Levittown, Pa..wish HollyWooD though! Posts: 64	ThAts so saD i want mores! i feeL for ya KellY x0x0Jessie

05-18-2004, 12:28 AM	#10
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	Awwww, how sad! Post more soon.

05-18-2004, 05:41 PM	#11
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05-18-2004, 10:03 PM	#12
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05-19-2004, 12:23 AM	#13
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Here is a little more ____________________________________________________ They were walking back to class. Jack acted like nothing was wrong. Jinny, however, was ready to cry her eyes out. She felt so ashamed. How could he let him do that to her? They went back to class and she tried to forget nothing happened. Unfortunately, she just couldn't hold back the tears anymore. Tears came streaming down her face. She covered her face so no one would see. A teacher's aide knew exacrly what was going on and took Jinny outside of the classroom. Teacher- I saw you were crying. What's wrong? Jinny- Oh nothing. I just sometimes cry for no reason. It's ok nothing is wrong. Teacher- I am a very emotional person myself. No one saw you crying. I know something is wrong. Please tell me. Tears were still coming down her face. She figured the teacher basically already knew so she should tell her. Jinny- Well..a boy..touched me. Teacher- Touched you how? Jinny- Explained everything Teacher- Ok what was the name of the boy who did this? Jinny- I can't say. Teacher- He didn't threaten you or anything did he? Jinny- No. Teacher- Then why aren't you telling me who it is? Jinny- Because I don't want him in trouble. Teacher- If he did something wrong, then he needs to be in trouble. Jinny- He was the only one really talking to me when I came here. I have no real other friends. Teacher- If you don't want to tell me that's ok. Just remember that if he gets away with it, he might do something worse next time. Jinny- I know. I just don't want to cause any problems. Teacher- The only person who is causing problems is this boy. Jinny started crying again. She just couldn't hold it in anymore. Jinny- It..was..Jack. ____________________________________________________

05-19-2004, 01:11 AM	#14
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	Kelly, you're writing this so well.....it's a very good fic. Post more soon!

05-19-2004, 03:13 PM	#15
MinnIeMcKeOn NMKMarCAurora* Occasional Poster Join Date: Apr 13, 2004 Location: Levittown, Pa..wish HollyWooD though! Posts: 64	Moresies I agree with Snowfall..your a great writer Kelly! Me and you ahve something in common..lol like its the 1st! If I was Jinny, id rip his balls off and shove them down his throat. Then make him **** them out and make him eat them again!! LOL..sry people im not very ladylike all the time lol* Good joB KeLLy~by the way...more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!