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[NancyMcKeonGal]

I really like it and I am very into it and I do agree that the thing with those 2 girls names mentioned was too much..It seems like she knew those 2 girls on the boards and she just wanted to spice it up a bit..anyway I want more! Keep posting please*

[GothicJinnyEx]

To the people who want more of this ok heres more:

Starts: (CD is christmas shopping for a while since items at the mall are beginning to go on sale)
CD: (Paying for her gifts and get's a ring on her cell phone) Goddamn it. (Ring Ring...) Hold on, hold on. (She mumbled) This better be important. Hello? (Answers)
Nate: (In a very graspy low volumed voice) Hey..CD.
CD: Nate? What is it?
Nate: (Breathing and moaned)
CD: Nate? Wha..is anything wrong?
Nate: (Swallowed) I need you to come home as soon as possible, ok? I really need to tell you something.
CD: (Quiet for a second) Oh..ok. Nate are you ok? Is Trinity home yet?...
Nate: (Hung up)
CD: (Pulls her cell phone away from her ear for a minute and just stares at it getting a bad feeling in her inner gut)
Worker: Excuse me, hun? Ma'am? Hello?
CD: (Back into focus) Wha..oh. I am so sorry..Miss. Really, it's been so hectic today.
Worker: (Laughed) It's quite alright dear. I understand. (Ringing up the objects CD has bought)
CD: (Smiles a little) My husband just paged me on my phone and..he didn't really seem ok. I'm a little nervous actually, things haven't been too good between me and my daughter at home lately. (Kind of forgot she was speaking to the cashier)
Worker: Oh. Well I'm sure everything will be ok.
CD: I'm sorry. (Places her hand over her forehead sighing)
I know you don't want to hear my personal..crap.
Worker: Hey, it's ok. I do that sometimes myself. You know what? Go home and meditate.
CD: Med..itate? (She just nodded)
Worker: Sure. Here you go, a book about it. (She took out of the isle rack)
CD: Thank, you. But no thanks.
Worker: (Handed it back to her) I'll give it to ya for free. For being a lovely customer. (Winked)
CD: Are..are you sure? I mean you don't have to.
Worker: Please, take it. It will help you unwind from pressure.
CD: Ok, thank you..very much. (grabbing her bags to go)
Worker: Merry Christmas, and Happy Holidays.
CD: You too, bye. (Exits the mall to go home)

Mores soon--sry if i offended like 2 people that read this. I didn't mean to and I was dumb for writing some stuff that was a little over the top. That's just how I write. lol And for listening to friends who helped me with it lol. Ok so bye ppls~

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Come on Jess! I want to see what happens!!! Post more soon!

[Swimgirl587]

Come on I can't wait forever to get this story to continue. SO COME ON!!!!!

[BlAcKrOsEjInNy]

Starts: (CD enters her home and looking for Nate as she puts her keys on the table)
CD: (Drops keys on table)
Nate? (Taking off her jacket feeling a little nervous)
(CD slowly walked towards the bedroom and found herself speechless when she saw her husband sitting on Trinity's bed crying)
CD: N..ate? Oh my go.. What's wrong? (She ran over practically shaking and kind of already guessing something horrible has gone wrong)
Nate: (Cry's harder and harder not knowing how to tell CD and he did not want to see or make CD cry)
CD: Did something happen?
Nate: (Nodds yes)
CD: Oh my god! (Covers her mouth and begins to get hysterical) Is..is..she ok? She..'s she is ok right? .....__
Nate: (Just stares with a tear cascading down his faded red face)
CD: Nate!? (Screamed)
Nate: (About to collapse) She..she's dead. (Continues to cry)
CD: Ohh..oh my god! Oh..oh my gosh. (She sobbs and falls into Nate's arms hysterically) Dead? (Breathes hard) Why!?! Why!? I don't underst..oh my god!
Nate: (Hugs her tightly almost wanting to just kill himself right there but CD needed him now more than ever and they needed to try to pick up the peices)
---------------------2 weeks later---------------------
(CD is puttering around the house looking at everything Trinity has done since Kindergarten for her mother)
CD: (Kneels down searching threw the cabinet) Where..where is it? God! I can't find..
Nate: (Peeks in after cooking dinner) Um, can't find what..babe?
CD: (Rubbing her head frustrated) I..I can't seem to find something of Trinity's. (Sniffling and getting ready to burst out in tears)
Nate: CD..honey...
CD: Nate, this..this isn't working! I can't find the project she made for me on Mother's Day. I swear! I placed it in this cabinet! This one Nate!
Nate: (Puts his hand on her shoulders as she breaks away)
CD: No! I'm fine. Just please stop. (Wiping her eyes)
Nate: You need to sleep, we can find it later don't worry.
CD: (Silent for a moment and then a flashback kicked in)
---Flashback---
CD: Trinity? My god, look Nate! She's walking on her own now! (Overly excited) She is not even 8 months old yet!
Nate: Shh, wait what if she falls?
CD: Nate, she'll be fine. The whole house is baby proof now.
Nate: Wish we could just put her in a big bubble. (Laughing)
CD: Think she'll give us grandchildren?
-------Flashback Ends-------
CD: (Breathing hard and then began to knock things feircly off the table)
(Crying hysterically) No! She was a good kid! A good kid Nate! She was our..she was our baby! (Layed on the ground crying as Nate came over and held her)
Nate: I know, it wasn't fair. But, I love you. I loved Trinity. We have to get through this. We can get through this, CD. I hate to see this happen to you. I will do anything to make your happiness matter. Please let me help you.
CD: (Laying there in his arms with her tear stained face against his black sweater)
Nate: Look, now we have to have a fineral for Trinity, she's our dead daughter! (Said with his voice breaking up)
CD: (Crys louder) God, god don't say that! Don't ever say that to me.
Nate: I think it would be better for you if she was cremated
CD: (Pulls away from Nate for a second with her jaw trembling)
What did you just..say? Cr..emated? You son of a bitch! Bastard! (Gets up again) With..with all the pain she has already gone through! Ohh..ohh god. (Holds her head looking at the ground)
Nate: CD, I didn't mean...
CD: (Stares at him as her head heats up growing more angry by the minute)
They stabbed her! Beat her! God, they even raped her! Drowning her flesh, so even after she was dying she couldn't rest in peice faster! (Crying in between words almost halusinating)
Nate: (Covers his face with his hands getting more upset and runs into their bedroom and wanting to go back and comfort CD but for some reason he became weaker..weaker in a way that he's never known before)
CD: (Just looked around with tears building up in her eyes and continued to search through the cabinets)
----------2 months later----------
(CD is sleeping and her phone rang)
2pm in afternoon-
CD: (Jumped up and gasped) He..hello?
Kate: Hey! CD..it's Kate!..
CD: Wha..oh my gosh! (Excited) Hi..how have you been. I haven't seen ya in almost 5 years!
Kate: Well, I'm doing pretty good. Just that my blood pressure is a little high.
CD: My god, we gotta catch up. Where's the rest of the guys?
You know we should have..like a reunion. I really would love to see them.

more l8er!

[BlAcKrOsEjInNy]

Starts: (CD is still in bed leaning over with her hair a ragged mess from being so depressed and lazy with herself)
Kate: That would be just great. I was wondering how you have been doing and all.
CD: (Nodds) Um, have you spoke to Jinny these days? How is Hank and the baby?
Kate: CD, John JR. has grown up so fast..hes 14 now, a teen. And I spoke to Jinny recently and she said John has been busy with girlfriend lately. Hank is still in the sketch artist jobs..
CD: That's great..really is. Glad to hear that nothing bad or anything happened..or tragic. (She said dozing out a little)
Kate: Well, no they are doing fine.
CD: I would really like to see them now.
Kate: Oh my gosh I shouldn't be going on and on. How's Nate..aka Inspector Basso. (Giggled)
CD: Ohh, um not tha..t good actually. But hes managing with his job and all.
Kate: CD, you seem a little unsure about things..like something is wrong. Are you and Nate ok in your relationship?
CD: Yeah, were doing ok..getting through some th_ings.
Kate: I want to see Trinity too. I can imagine how hard it is right now having a 12 or 13 year old at home.
CD: (Suddenly just lost it and as her jaw trembled and tears pack up in her eyes she hung up)
Kate:CD?... (Holding the phone just shocked and sensed something was terribly wrong and CD needed support right now) Oh my..(Shrugs and sighed)
Kate! (Captain hollered) Katie! God damn her is she deaf? Your mother will be here in 5 minutes to pick you up!
More Later!

[Swimgirl587]

that was really good and kinda of sad at the same time. I thought it was great though. Keep up the good work