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I was giving Lonelinesshurts ideas for her fan fiction but she is switching alot of the new things I put in there around so she gave me an idea to take on a new fan fiction. Me and her will have some alike ideas but when I gave her some she used them. So Here goes the new fan fic I made of my ideas I gave her.
Starts: (CD is still a SFPD cop and Nate is still one too and they are partners..but they just got married) CD: Nate we've looked and places and hopped from house to house. *CD complained sweating her ass off while shoving her face in front of the air conditioner in Nate's car* Nate: Last one, last one I promise. *Nate said flat out* CD: Oh my go..this is a trailer! Oh god Nate! I do not like those and you know that! Nate: We are just looking! They explained everything about it and all. Hey you might like it. *He said calmly* CD: Do I really have to get out of this car? Nate: Yes, come on sweatin's good for ya. CD: *Shoots him a look* Yeah, say that again to my face. Not to mention to someone who has PMS today! Nate: (Gets out of car) The sales lady said she'd meet us up here around 5. CD: Where the hell would they be? They just like watching 2 good old people sweat their asses off. Gun shot is fired* Nate: (Jumps up quickly while CD prepares herself with her gun) CD: (Breaks open the trailer door) Nate: These people are all dead! Ohh **** the bastard snuck out the back. CD: Jesus! What were they trying to do..kill us? Nate: I don't know..Guess his plan didn't work out the way it was suppose to. The question is were they and why. Division Credits show up. Mores later I got better ideas lol!! |
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Here is more*(Fic based on CD and Nate)Starts: (CD and Nate in Captain Kate's office) Captain: So you don't recall seeing the man up close but you saw the back door open to the trailer? CD: Right. Captain: Well, why didn't you catch the guy look to see where he went as he got out?? Come on guys! Nate: We weren't even on a case. CD: Your right Cap, we are cops and we should of treated this like a case..were sorry. Captain: It's ok. Just get on it right away. 5 hours later* Break time CD: (Takes sip of her hott coffee) (Scatters through newspapers for houses forsale section) Magda: (Eve strops on CD a little bit to see what she looked troubled about) I..uh heard what happened about the trailer and all. Thank god you didn't buy it! (She kidded approaching CD) CD: Oh hey Magda. Yeah right now I'm trying to somehow find a decent house with a reasonable price. Magda: That's why I came up to you. CD: Huh? Magda: I have a house right up the street from mine and its reasonably priced and its kinda cheap. It has 5 bedrooms and its got a 2 car garage and a nice porch just built onto it and it was just repainted. It's great. What do ya say..check it out or not? CD: Oh my gosh are you serious..it's not above me and Nate's budget we told you before...? Magda: Nope. (Magda replied very sure) CD: Great! I'll be there whenever you want me to. Magda: Cool, here's the card to where and when the open house nights are and some info about it. CD: Th..anks Mag your'e helping alot! Magda: No problem. CD: (Slips card and info paper into her pocket) Nate: (Walks up)..Hey you sexy blonde sassy cop mama (He jokes) CD: Excuse me? It is very rude to flirt with a cop without her consent. (She kids back) Nate: (leans over) Oh yes..even though you have PMS..i love ya enough to take the risk. (Kisses her on neck) CD: 0oh making out at work..Cap's gonna give you a detention. (She laughed) Jinny: Cap..im sorry but John Jr woke up sick this morning and here's some files..I can't make it to work today. (Jinny barges in mumbling on) Captain: Is he alright? Aww..poor baby. Jinny: Yeah he is..thanks. I'm on my way to get him meds..he is home with my dad but he has to leave soon and Hank is working so.. Captain: Thats fine and I hope little J.J. feels better and call me later to inform me on how he is doing. Jinny: I will, Thanks again Captain. (Leaves) Mores Soon and more ideas coming upp..this is just beginning of fic. |
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Okay i like the story so far Especially the trailer and Magda encounter (as you know CD and Magda are my two favorites) I hope there is more on the way soon (faster then I write I hope lol)
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NanCy rox!
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TY lol here more!
Starts: (CD and Nate are at home and Nate is on her computer looking up some houses for them and all) Nate: (Clicking left and right with the mouse still searching) CD: Nate Magda gave me a card today I totally forgot to mention it. It was for a house..here read it. Let me read it over first. Nate: I don't know Mag could have way different taste than we do. CD: Oh..Mr. Trailer! (She chuckled) Nate: Ok one mistake..ok one BIG mistake. (He admitted) 15 minutes later CD: A frigen graveyard! This so called good house was built over a graveyard? There is no way me and Nate would go for that Mag. (CD explained in a surprised tone to Magda on the phone) 5 days later CD: I cannot believe I agreed to come to this open house. Nate: I love this house! This is the one. CD: Yeah except for the fact that dead spirits may be haunting this house. And knowing that there are dead people living under here! You did see Poltergeist didn't you Mag? Magda: Oh come on CD..you are so weird! Dead people! Ha! CD: The thought is just plain eerie. (4 Minutes after the tour) CD: I have to say I did enjoy it. Nate: That's it were buying it! CD: Wait a damn minute I am going to call back just in case I am interested ..tomorrow. I need to have time to think this over. Nate: Alright that's fair. Magda: Glad ya liked something about this house. Ya know, I really should cut holes into Ben's old sheets I was going to put away and put it over my head and sneak in at night. CD: He he haha. (CD answered with her arms folded with a half smile) Nate: Oh..k let's grab a bite I'm starving. CD: You're always hungry. It's very piggish Natiepie. Nate: That's not what you said last night my CandySandy. (Nate said ina sexy voice) Magda: Candy..Sandy? (She laughed) Good one Nate. Nate: Oh yeah..uh oh I said CD's middle name. CD: Ok my name is Candace Sandra Basso..eh the name clashes. (CD said to herself irritated) Nate: Ha..too bad I didn't take your last name..mine would of sounded good too. But no.. Mores Laters!
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Princess Of Darkness
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I like this part CD was so true to character. Now more puh-wease
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Coolies, NEW FIC!!!!
This is really good---post more soon!
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Starts: (Magda is over CD's house on the phone with the salesman)
Magda: Yes, thank you so much. (Magda says as she hangs up the reciever) CD: Well? Can we meet alone about the house sometime today? Magda: He said we'll all have lunch first so we are all going to meet at ShadySun Buffet at 4:00. Nate: Sounds good to me. I better go get dressed.. CD: Mag you have become such a big help to me. I love ya for it. (CD hugs Magda) But..except for this house with dead people floating under it. (She kidded as she pulled away from hugging her) Nate: Hey CD! (Nate hollered from his room) CD: Yah? Nate: Have you seen my underwear? I can't find any of it! What am I suppose to wear..a thong? Don't tell me you washed all my underwear. CD: (Laughs) There is some in the dryer but I'll be so kind to go get you it so Mag doesn't have to see your little tushie. By the way Nate how is that constipation medicine working? Nate: (Turns red) Uh..he he CD come here please! Magda: (Covers mouth and chuckles) Poor Nate has a clogged up tushie. CD: (Cracks up) Now we are even! (Jinny is out getting liquids for the baby while Hank is home with him) Hank: Hey little J.J. now we are going to lay down and stop crying ok? (He talked to him in baby talk) Hank: (Goes to place baby down on his blankets and baby starts to fuss) Ohh god. Jinny where are you?? (He whined to himself) (Baby then throws up on him all over and continues to scream and it turns into a giggle) Hank: Oh..my.. Kate: Stace, would you please get that paper for me? (Phone rings) Kate: Hello, Captain McCafferty? Louis: Kate I can't seem to find Katie Ann's diapers..did you misplace them? Kate: They are in the cabinet under the bathroom sink. Louis: Thanks, bye. Kate: (Rolls her eyes and shakes her head) (She hung phone up and then picked it up again when she heard another ring) Jinny: Captain..its Jinny. Kate: Hi Jin how is John Jr.? Jinny: He's doing ok but I am going to be gone for a little while longer so can you tell Mag today when she comes back from CD's to call Hank for me? Kate: Sure, hun. Jinny: Thank you, bye. Hank: (Looks both ways just in case Jinny was there for a reason and steps into the DiVision floor with John in his carseat) Kate: Hank? Wha..what are you doing here? With the baby? He is sick. Hank: Look, Jin's been gone for a while now and the baby has never been sick before so it's kind of hecktic for Jinny shes being to over protective and shaky and I am about to go out of my mind! Kate: Let me see him..(Picks up the baby out of his carseat) (Everybody huddles up from the room around John Jr. and Kate) Kate: Uh guys..the baby is sick..throwing up...and..all. (Everyone: Aww poor baby yeah we shouldnt bother them yeah he is so cute his little nose...so on with the gossip) Hank: I'm sorry Kate. Kate: No it's ok. Jinny: (Decided to phone Hank now to tell him she'll be home earlier now.) Hank: (Gets a ring off of his cell) Hey Jin.. Jinny: How's my baby? Hank: We'll im rather good.. Jinny: Not you! My other baby. Hank: Oh..right.. Jinny: Hank, I'm sorry. I am just ina very bad mood and I just got my period and all. I am so sorry..by the way how are you. Hank: Eh..a mess. (He laughs) Jinny: Anything wrong... Kate: (Takes phone from hank) Hey Jinny this is Kate. Jinny: What are you doing at my house what a surprise..arent you suppose to be at work? (Ohh my..gosh what if they are having an affair..no that wouldnt happen..I know Hank..hmm..) (Jinny thinks to herself mysteriously in a confused way) Kate: I am at work. Hank came to me for help with the baby and all..he was having a hard time. Jinny: He.. he brang my baby out to a police station without his mommy?? I am going to kill him! I... Kate: (Cuts her off) Jinny the baby is bundled up and he is fine..it's ok I'll put him in my office and care for him for a while. Jinny: Aw, Cap I don't want you being stuck with my kid that is sick.. Kate: Jin..it's ok I want to. Hank can catch up on some of his sketchings he missed today too. Jinny: Thanks so much..I love ya. Kate: I love ya too..I guess I am a grandma to 2 kids now. Jinny: Bye (She laughed) Hank: She..mad? Kate: No..you go finish up here and I'll handle JJ. Hank: Really? Now if he is any trouble you come and get me, ok? Thanks CaptAIN. Kate: I'm sure I can manage with a 4 month old. Mores Laters
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More soon right?
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NanCy rox!
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Here is more:
Starts: (CD and Nate are at the meeting) Salesman: You now what you guys seem like such nice people. And since you know my cousin Earl and one of you's saved his life on the job..so I am going to remove the graveyard for free. CD: Oh my go..are you serious? (She chanted) Nate: Really? Salesman: (Nodds head yes) Yep, now come on let's go. CD: (Smiles at Nate) I can't believe this, now we can buy it. Nate: Happy now? (He said in a funny voice) CD: Yes..I am. Salesman: Now, ya'll come back now ya here? Tommorow come by at 6 and I will lone ya the house, k? (The jolly kind fat guy told them in his texas accent) CD: Thank you so much and we will be back. Nate: I'll give ya a call later. CD: (Calls Magda) Hey..Mag. Guess what we are buying the house! He is going to remove the graveyard for free! (She said getting excited) Magda: Oh..thats great! You and Nate should be really happy. CD: Nate and me are moving in as soon as they can remove it. Magda: I am so glad..uh I have to go..Ben is calling me. CD: Ok, well I'll talk to you at work bye. Nate: CD hand me the salt please. CD: Here. (Hands it to him) Nate: Thank you. CD: Nate, I was thinking..about what you said 2 months ago..and I have decided that I am going to go through with it. Nate: (Looks up and drops his fork down) Are..you sure? CD: Yes I am..I know you really want a baby and all and I sort of want one too now. Nate: (Puts on a big smile) I'm so happy you are doing this! CD: See I knew you had a sensitive side. Nate: Your..your sure you want to do it? Your not just doing this for me, right? CD: Absoloutly not. I have wanted to have a baby for some times now actually. Nate: Well the sooner the better. Mores Laters |
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I'm glad she wants a baby. To bad she can't adopt me lol. More soon please
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That part cracked me up! This is a cute fic---please continue!
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Starts: (9 months later)
CD: (Laying in a hospital bed awaiting for her child to be done in the nursery while she is examined) Nate: I can't belive it we have a girl. Maybe next time we will have a boy, ya think? CD: Well Nate..you are the one who creates the gender so it will just have to be all on you. (She smiled in a sarcastic way) Nate: Yep..so did you think of a name yet? CD: Can you believe all those months we still have not decided on a name? Nate: Uhh..I'm going to go to the library down stairs and search for some online names..and some other..stuff. (He said going to leave) CD: Our little princess in nameless..go print it out and come back. Nate: Oh..ok. CD: (After Nate left the room she pulled out the notice of resignation to quit the force and just stares at it feeling sad) (Picks up phone and dials Captain's office) Kate: Hello, Captain McCafferty? CD: Hey..Captain. Kate: Oh my god CD I haven't heard from you in almost 2 months! CD: I am so sorry I guess I kind of forgot and I was busy too. I'm sorry. Kate: Everyone misses you..Nate too. He has been coming to work and he is working with Raina for a while..they had a rough start at first but became good friends...finally. CD: I had the baby..last night. It's a girl. Kate: Oh my god! (She sprung up and shouted) Tha..thats wonderful! When can we see her? What did you name her? Is she healthy? CD: (laughed) Ok, Cap..calm down. She is very healthy..5 pounds 11 ounces and 19 inches. Nate is very happy and proud..but we are both kind of stumped on the name part. You will see her soon I guarantee you that. CD: I also have been working somewhere else besides desk at work. Kate: Ohh? Where? CD: At the Dare program..as a Dare teacher..I finished collage so I went to get my degree and I got it. Kate: That's great. So you are becoming a DaRE teacher in areas for drug problems. You will make good money doing that. CD: Kate, I really want to tell you I am so sad about leaving and I wanted to bring the baby in for one last goodbye and 1 last day at work before I leave. Kate: Oh CD, (Kate sighed) I will miss..you so much. It's like loosing a daughter..one of my favorite cops...you, Nate, Jinny, Magda, Raina. It's going to be hard for me to let go too. CD: Well, I kind of promised myself I wouldn't cry...ya know? Kate: It's ok to cry. I guess in your mind it would not be very professional huh? CD: (Laughed a little ina cracking voice) No..no it..it wouldn't. Kate: When are ya coming? CD: I will be comng in with Nate and I will call you before we leave, ok? Kate: Sounds wonderful, love ya and I gotta go. CD: See ya Captain, bye. (Signs the papers) (8 minutes later Nate returns) CD: About time, hand me one of the papers. Nate: Hmm..I like Ariel, Autumn, Allison, Bradie, Skye, Leanne CD: I like Justine, Jade, Michelle, Trinity.. Nate: I like the name Trinity..I do. CD: Then let's name her Trinity. Nate: Ok, what about her middle name? CD: Hmm... Nate: Trinity Michelle CD: Cute! Nate: Uh, nurse! (Nate hollered) CD: We have a name for baby girl Basso. Mores Later*
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I love the baby's name. more soon?
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Awwwwwww, that was SO SWEET! Awww.....baby Basso has a name.....that was so incredibly sweet! I really like this fic.
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Starts: (CD and Nate arrive at work)
CD: (Looks carefully to see who is in the area before she comes in) (Tiptoes quietly holding her baby in her carseat followed by Nate) Kate: (Rushes out of her office) Oh my gosh! Look at her! (Making a big fuss over the new baby) Magda: CD! (Goes over and hugs her with a big smile on her face) CD: Mag! Captain...I missed ya's. Nate: This is Trinity Michelle Basso. Kate: Ohh that is a pretty name. Hi you are so pretty..she takes after her mommy and her daddy. Magda: She has Nate's nose and CD's eye shape and she has chestnut brown hair. CD: I love her hair color..hope it stays that way. Kate: She is so tiny. KatieAnn was about the same size as her. Jinny: CD, Nate congrads! (Hugs both) CD: Thanks, Jin. Nate: Yep her name is Trinity Michelle Basso. Jinny: O0h very nice ring to it. CD: This might be weird but in the baby's facial features she kind of looks like John Jr. Jinny: Oh my god you're right..hey maybe Trinity is John's twin. (She joked) CD: Are you sure you had the baby with Hank and not Nate? (She kidded) Jinny: Wait a minute you could of also screwed my man. Kate: Umm, guys there is a little one in the room. Jinny: Sorry.. CD: (Clears throat) Sorry Trin. Mommy can sometimes have a dirty mouth. Magda: Would you mind if some of us..hold her? Raina: Ohh my gosh CD! (Hugs her) Nate: Hey Raina. Raina: How's it feel to be a daddy? Nate: Like the boss. (Nate said in a muscular tough voice) Raina: Aww, what's her name? CD: Trinity Michelle Basso. Raina: She has beautiful hair too. CD: Ok, one at a time can hold her. (Later that day) CD: Hey guys it has been great today..as you all know I am leaving today and all.. Jinny: Wha..t? Magda: Your..your leaving? Raina: You are? Kate: Uh.. CD: Captain, didn't you tell them before I came? Nate: (Sighs) Oh lord. Kate: CD is leaving and quitting the force, and she has told me last month about this and Nate turned them in to my office yesterday. CD: I am gonna miss you guys. (CD said, her voice becoming groggy and her eyes building up tears) Kate: I will certainly miss you so much, you were a good cop CD. Never forget that. (hugs her) Magda: Hey, I wouldn't blame ya if you wanted to quit and all. But I hope we can all keep in touch with you. CD: Of course Magda. Bye. (Hugs her while Magda's nose began to run) Jinny: I hope what Magda says is going to be true. You are a good cop and we all had some good times and I will miss you. (Sighs and hugs with her lip quivering trying not to cry) CD: (She couldn't bear holding back the tears so she just let them run down her face just thinking about how upsetting this was for her and this was the last time they will work together again) Nate: (Stands there frozen in silence watching CD and his co-workers say their goodbyes) Kate: By..e Nate. (Smiles in a sad and happy way because she was happy for Nate and all and he was a great cop to this Division but she was not ready for him to leave) You are a great cop..don't you forget that either Inspector Basso. Magda: Guess this is it. (She wipes her left eye) Nate: Yes..it it is. (He takes deep breath) (Hugs Magda) Jinny: See ya, buddy. I'll miss ya. Thank you for saying yes to being my date for my half sister's wedding and trying to be there for me. That also showed me that you do care. (Hugs him) Nate: No problem Jinny, you take care of yourself and that little baby boy of yours. And tell Hank to treat you good..and I am sure he will. Jinny: He will oh believe me. Thanks Nate. I'm gonna miss ya. Raina: (Sobbing even though she hasnt known Nate and CD for a long time but she was partnered with Nate and all for a long time and the others who were getting worked up got her worked up even worse then them) I know we have not known eachother that long Nate, but I gotta say you were a good partner and a good friend to me. Taught me alot and all. Have a great life with CD and take good care of her. I am glad that you are really happy. Nate: I am happy, Raina. I will miss you and I will keep in touch with you. You just give it some time and the right guy will come along, okay? Don't sell yourself short..you are too good for that. (He hugged her) CD: (Starts to sob and cup her hands over her nose while tears hit the back of her hands) ( He then hugged Kate while tear cascaded down the corner of Nate's eye as he blinked harder every second of the moment) CD: Uh..(Wipes her eyes) Bye guys..I love you all. (Picks up baby's carrier and slowly walks out the door with Nate behind her) Mores Later*
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