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Princess Of Darkness
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Okay I'm sorry it took me so long. I know y'all are sick of me saying that lol but i am sorry. Just a quick thank you to the people that help me with the idea for this chapter. you know who you are :Jessie, Tara and Kelly lol Thank y'all so much. Anyway back to the story:
After thirty minutes of explain everything to the captain and her follow inspectors CD when back home with her granddaughter. The captain let Magda go early to help CD get set up things at her apartment. When they drove up to her apartment building they found a young pacing by the front door. “Hi, are you Candace?” The girl asked after looking at folded piece of paper. When Magda and CD approached the building. “Yeah, who are you?” CD asked adjusting Alley who was still sleeping with her head laying on CD’s shoulder. “Molly Anderson . I am a friend of Abby’s.” the girl answered obviously avoiding eye contact. CD looked the teenage up and down before inviting her in. “I can’t, I’m kinda in a hurry. I just need to drop off their things.” “Their?” CD asked raising a eye brow. “Yeah Alyssa’s and Ariel’s.” “Who’s Ariel? “ CD was utterly perplexed now. “This is Ariel.” She said stepping aside showing the two inspectors a baby setting a car seat. “Who…” CD looked down at the car seat. The baby had dark hair and big deep brown eye’s, but the same smile as Alyssa., this sent off bells in CD’s head “Abby’s other daughter.” Molly said confirming CD’s suspicions “She didn’t want to drop them both off on you at the same time but I can’t keep her any longer. My parents are going to kick me out if I don’t get rid of her.” “How exactly do you know Abby?” Magda asked seeing how hard CD was taking everything that was happening. “Look I have to go.” “No you don’t. You have to talk.” Magda said showing the young girl her badge. Molly looked at the badge then sighed out loud, “She used to go out with my brother.” She admitted quietly. “Used to?” “He was killed in a car crash a couple months back, that’s when Abby started to lose it.” she explained teary eyed “What do you mean lose it?” “When he died she started to put all her time into finding you. She said she couldn’t be a mother to two kids by herself and since you got out of it once…”she trial off when she saw the look on CD’s face. “Wait, wait how do you know her? She told me she just got to San Francisco yesterday.” CD asked completely confused. “Well she lie, she’s been here for over a year?” “A year?” “Yeah., she was going out with my brother Ian for three months before she got pregnant with Ariel.” “Do you know where she might be?” “She went back to Texas.” “When?” Magda asked thinking they might be able to catch her. “This morning, she told me she was dropping off Alley off and leaving. She told me to bring Ariel and the rest of their thing here around four.” “You knew she was leaving and you didn’t tell anyone?” “She not ready to be mother. I love both of these kids and I rather them be with you then her any day. So no I didn‘t tell anyone. I didn‘t want them to stop her.” “What do you mean by that?” CD asked defensibly “She never hurt them or anything but my brothers death hit her hard and right now I don’t think keeping the kids with her is a good idea.” she explained. “I'd keep them myself if I could but I’m only 16 and I don‘t have a job or my own place. Besides I rather have them grow up without them being with my parents.” “Why?” “It doesn’t matter.” She said and pause, she looked at the car parked in front of the building. “I have to go.” “If they hurt you we’re poli…” “Look I don’t have time for this after school special crap so can you get the stuff out the car.” Then teenager said and stormed off to the car. “Magda I’m gonna go open up the apartment.” CD said bending down picking up the car seat and walking to unlock the front door to the apartment building. “Okay.” Magda called after her and walked to the car after Molly. To be continued….My goal is to end this story This year lol I’m realistic I know I’m not getting it done any time soon but I promise there will be more soon. |
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~Everybody wants to go to heaven, but nobody wants to die.~ Last edited by lonelinesshurts; 08-05-2004 at 01:27 AM. |
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CD and Nate Forever
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That was great! Post more soon!
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NanCy rox!
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Great job Daya! Love itt! Please post mores*
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Princess Of Darkness
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******** After unloading the kids things out of the car Magda help CD make a list of the things she need to get if she decided to keep them. “Okay you have a car seat for Ariel you going to need one for Alyssa too.” Magda said writing it down on the list. “Okay.” CD replied distantly. “Your also need a stroller and a crib…” “One or two?” “Well Alyssa should be able to sleep in a regular bed but you might need to get the little rails.” CD nodded and looked down at the little girl in her arms. “What else?” she asked forcing the words out. “Well you need to think about child proofing your apartment. They also need more clothes then this.” Magda answered trying hard not to pull CD in her arms to comfort her. Magda knew CD for a long time, she knew CD was the type of person that would rather work out her problems on her own then to be cuddled by someone. “I uh just brought Alley some clothes yesterday. They’re in the spare room along some toys” CD said her voice getting weary. Magda couldn’t imagine how hard all of this was for CD. “C’ it’s going to be alright.” Magda said putting a reassuring hand on CD’s knee. CD nodded and took a deep breath. “What else.” “Ariel is going to need some more diapers and formula. You have enough that will you a couple more days maybe a week but you’ll need more soon. Babies this size go through them quick.” “Is that all?” “For now. I’ll make a few calls to see what I can get you. The rest of the things we can get whenever your ready to. Okay?” “Yeah, Thanks.” she replied quietly “No problem.” Magda smiled and patted CD leg lightly “No I mean it. I really appreciate the help.” CD said honestly. “Anytime CD. I’m going to make some calls I’ll be back” “Okay.” Magda got up and walked across the room where CD phones was. While Magda made phone calls, CD put Alyssa down on the couch next to her and started to read the papers Abigail left her. Abigail had everything in order for CD in a thick vanilla envelope That contained the birth certificates medical cards and a things to know list on each child. This envelope also included adoption paper that Abby had already sighed. CD quickly signed her name on all the papers that would make her the official guarding of Ariel and Alyssa without a second thought. All she had to do now was take it to a lawyer and get everything process. Abby had a lawyer already lined up to finalize the process. She knew these kids needed her and if she was honest with herself she needed them as well. “I managed to get you a crib, a stroller and some clothes that might fit them.” Magda said walking back up to the couch as CD finish with the papers. “Really? How did you manage to get that?” “My mom still has Ben’s crib. She wouldn’t let me throw it away. I asked her if she had anything else and she did. I don’t know where she got the clothes they were probably me and Lily’s old clothes.” “Well Tell her thanks for me.” “I already did.” Magda smiled. “I can go over there and get everything today by myself or you can come with me and we can get everything one the list while we’re out.” “You think there is enough room in my car?” she asked not knowing how big the things she had to get was. “Well I can go get everything from my mom’s while you go get everything else from the list.” Magda said changing her initial suggestion. “Alright.” “Do you want me to take one of them with me since you don’t have the stroller yet?” “Um…” “I’ll bring her back, I promise.” Magda joked at CD’s already overprotective nature. “Okay I’ll take Alyssa with me.” “Alright. You might want to wake her up soon or she going to be up all night.” “Thanks for the heads up.” “No problem.” Magda chuckled To Be Continued… |
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Last edited by lonelinesshurts; 08-10-2004 at 03:16 AM. |
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CD and Nate Forever
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Awww, that was wonderful! More soon?
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