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Old 08-13-2003, 01:11 AM   #1
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Title: Back to You

Disclaimer: These characters aren't mine. I'm just borrowing them for a while!

Rating PG-13 so far

Summary: Someone from CD past comes and changes her life


A young teenage girl walked in the door of the division looking scared and nervous.

“Hi can I help you with something?” Magda asked the scared looking teenager.

“Um…I’m not sure… Do you know Candice DeLorenzo?”

“Yeah, She not here right now. She just went on her lunch break. She won’t be back for awhile, what’s your name I can tell her you came by?”

“Oh yeah sorry it’s Abigail.” She gave her a nervous smiled and extend her hand to Magda“ Thanks for the offer but I think I should wait.” Magda nodded

“Okay you can wait by her desk if you like.” Abby nodded. “ Well if you need anything I’ll be right over here.” she said setting back in her chair.

“Okay Thanks.” Abby said walking to set at CD’s desk. She sat down and began to run her fingers nervously through her long blond hair. ‘Okay you’ve gotten this far don’t back down now.’ Abby thought to her as her nervousness start to rise even higher.

“Hey who’s that?” Jinny asked handing Magda a cup of coffee.

“I don’t know? She came her for CD.”

“She looks a lot like her may it’s her sister.”

“Does she have a sister?” Jinny shrugged and went to speak when CD and Nate walked in. they hadn’t got to eat lunch yet they were half way to the restaurant when Nate realize her forgot his wallet. So they turn around and came back to the division.

“Who’s that?” CD asked the two women when she saw someone setting at her desk.

“Don’t you know? She came to see you.” Jinny replied. CD shook her head and walked over to her desk and placed her hand softly on the young girl’s shoulder.

“Hi. You needed to see me?” CD asked as Abigail as lifted her head to see the face of the person whose hand occupied her shoulder.

“ Are …You Candice?” She asked slowly. CD nodded. ‘So this is what she looks like. I was right she is beautiful.’

“Yeah. But everybody calls me CD.” She smiled and extended her hand Abby hesitated slightly before shaking her hand.

“I’m Abigail. Well Abby.” Abby released her hand and stood there starting at her with a distant look on her face.

“Are you okay?” CD asked confused why this girl was staring at her.

“Oh yeah sorry about that.” Abby said when she realized she was starting.

“It’s okay. What did you need to see me about.”

“Well it’s kind of personal you think I could talk too you in private.” Abby said her voice was just above a whisper. CD nodded sensing the fear and nervousness in the young girl’s voice.

“Yeah sure could you wait here for a second.” CD walked over too Jinny and Magda’s desk too Nate who was standing there talking too the two women. “Nate you going to have to go to lunch with out me.”

“Why?”

“She said she need to talk to me in private and she seems scared and I don’t want to tell her to wait until I comes back.”

“Alright.” Nate sighed. “I’ll bring you something back.” He said and kissed her on the cheek.

“Okay.” She smiled and walked back over to the young girl.

“Um we could talk in the interrogation room if you like.” Abby nodded and followed CD to the room.

To be continued………..
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The story continues


“Well have a seat.” CD said pointing to chair by the table as they walked in. Abby nodded and walked over to the chair and sat down. CD sat across from her and waited for her to start talking. After a couple minutes of silence CD decided she would try to ease they girl nervousness and start talk to her and wait for the girl to tell her why she was there. “So Abby how old are you.” CD smiled.

“18 I’ll be 19 in a couple of months.” Abby said softly and took a deep breath. ‘Get it over with Abby the sooner the better’ Abby though to herself. “Um I have something to show you. But you have to promise you won’t hate me.” She whispered

“I promise.” CD said softly with hint confusion in her voice. Abby pulled out a folded piece of paper out of her pocket and held it out for CD. CD took the piece of paper from her and unfolded. She started to read it and felt tears come to her eye. ‘Oh My God’ she though to herself and lifted her head and look at Abby. Tears slowly streamed down the young girl face as she returned CD's gaze.

“I sorry I know you probably didn’t want to see me but I had to come and see you. I needed to speak to you.” Abby cried. CD stared at her speechless. “I’m sorry for making you uncomfortable I’ll… I’ll leave.” Abby said and got up and started walk towards the door but CD softly grabbed her arm to stop her.

“Wait please.” CD said in a weary voice. Abby nodded.

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now back to our story....

Abby turned to face CD and tried to resist giving her a hug but couldn’t. She held on to CD like her life depended on it and CD returned the hug with the same intensity. They stood there crying in each other’s arms. CD pulled and looked at Abby really good for the first time and smiled. “God you look like me when I when I was you age.” She said flatly.

“I hope that’s a complement.” Abby smiled

“It is. Well I guess owe you and explanation?” CD said sadly. Abby shook her head no.

“You don’t I read the file at the orphanage I know you were only fifteen when you had me and that you were sexual assaulted and I was the result of it. I know it must hurt you to see me but it hurts me not to see you.

“It doesn’t hurt me to see you. You’re all I ever think about. I’ve always regretted giving you up but I knew you would have better life with out me I wasn’t old enough to raise you by myself. I just figured …”

“Shh you don’t have too.” She smiled. “You have any idea how long I waited for this day.”

“I have and idea.” She smiled. “Hey stay right here I be right back.” CD said and walked out the room. She came back two minutes later. “Come on we can go to my apartment to get to know each other a little better.”

“Don’t you have to work?”

“No. I just talked to my captain. To her family is the most important thing so she gave me the rest of the day off.”

“Oh okay but I have to pick something up first.”

“Oh alright. You want to your car or use mine?”

“I don’t have a car I just came for Dallas yesterday.”

“Okay so where to?” CD asked as they walk to out of the room. Abby gave her the address.


To Be Continued...

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Now Where were we? Oh yeah i remember now!:

They were in the car for around twenty minutes talking getting to know eachother better before they got to the address Abby gave CD.

“We shouldn’t be here long. You want to come in?” Abby asked smiling over at CD she still couldn’t believe that this was actually her real mom.

“No I’ll wait in the car.” CD replied and returned the smile.

“Okay. I’ll be right back.” Abby said and got out the car and walked towards the building. CD laid her head on the steering wheel and smiled to her self. She was actually spending the day with her daughter. Her daughter she couldn’t believe it after nineteen years she finally got her baby back. She was shaken out of her thoughts when Abby opened the car door. CD looked over to see Abby holding a little girl that couldn’t be more than 2 years old.

“Who’s this cutie.” CD asked softly caressing the sleeping toddler’s cheek. CD thought maybe she was baby-sitting for the friend that she said she was staying with, but she didn't remember her saying she had a kid.

“Well …This is my daughter.” Abby whispered nervously. CD’s eyes widened.

“Your daughter?” CD asked in shock. Abby nodded.

“Yeah. Her name is Alyssa she just turned two.” Abby said softly. CD silently looked from Abby to Alyssa and smiled.

“She gorgeous.” CD said as the shock of her having a grandchild wore off.

“Thanks but don’t let her angelic face fool you when she wakes up she will talk your head off.” Abby laughed

“I can’t wait.” CD smiled

to BE continued...

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Here we go again:

“You want to order something to eat? I’m starving.” CD said as they walked in to her apartment.

“Yeah sure. What do you have a taste for?” Abby said walking in after CD carrying Alyssa in her arms.
“I don’t know me and Nate was go eat at this little Chinese place today.” She said taking her jacket off and putting her keys on the table.

“Nate is that the guy at the station?” Abby asked walking over to the couch.

“Yeah he’s my partner.”

“Just your partner?” Abby smirked as she laid Alyssa on the couch.

“No. He is my friend to.”

“Really so it’s normal for detectives to kiss there partners on the cheek.”

“Okay so Nate and I are more than just friends.”

“That’s what I thought.”

“What about you are you attached to someone?”

“Other then Alley here no. Before you asked her dad took off when he found out I was pregnant.” She said rubbing Alyssa back. CD looked at her sadly. “I’m glad he did he doesn’t deserve her.” she said when she saw the sad look on CD’s face. CD smiled. “Do you have any other kids?”

“No.” she said sadly.

“Why not.”

“I didn’t want to feel like I was replacing you.” She said softly. Abby smiled ‘She really does care about me’ she stood up and gave CD a hug and whispered and her ear.

“I’m here now.” Abby pulled back grab CD’s hand and led her over to the couch. “It’s not to late. Your still young and from what I know healthy. So why don’t you go for it.” CD laughed. “What I’m serious.”

“So you want a brother or sister younger then your own daughter.” CD smiled

“It’s not that uncommon now a days besides Alley love babies and god know I not have anymore kids any time soon. Specking of Alley what do you want her to call you?”

“I don’t know?”

“What about me? Can I call you mom or does that make you uncomfortable.” CD thought about it for a moment and then smiled.

“It doesn’t bother me and as for Alyssa I don’t care what she calls me just as long as she don’t call me grandma it makes me sound old.”

“Okay. You got it.” Abby laughed

“So back to our original question do you want Chinese?”

“Yeah Chinese sounds great.”

“Okay let me go see if I could find a paper.” She got off the couch and when into her bedroom. Two minutes later she came out holding a paper. “Here you go.” CD said and handed Abby the paper. Abby looked over the paper for a minute before giving back to CD.

“You know what you want already?”

“Yeah when I order Chinese I always get the same thing I just wanted to make sure they had it.”

“What is it?”

“Chicken and broccoli with a sweet and sour sauce and brown rice.” CD laughed “What?” Abby asked confused why she was laughing.

“That’s what I was going to get.” Abby smiled. “ What about her what is she going to have?” CD said motion to Alyssa.

“Oh she’ll just eat off of my plate.”

“Okay.” She smiled and picked up the phone and ordered the food. “Hey you want to watch a movie while we wait?”

“Yeah sure what did you have in mind?”

“I don’t know. All my tapes and dvd’s are in my bedroom why don’t you go pick.”

“Alright.” Abby said and stood up and walked in CD’s room. CD laid her head back against the couch and closed her eye. She was again very happy to spend a day with her daughter. CD’s eye’s immediately open when she felt something on her lap.

“Hi I’m Alley.” Alyssa said and softly in a small voice still looking a little sleepy. “ Your pretty. You look like my mommy.”

“So do you.” Alyssa smiled and cuddled closer to CD and laid her head on her chest.

“Wow she never went to anyone that fast but it looks like she took a liking to you.” Abby said as she walked back in the living room. CD looked at Alyssa and smiled. Abby walked back over to the couch and set next to CD.

“Hi mommy.” Alyssa said happily and leaned over and gave her mom a kiss but stayed on CD’s lap.
“Mommy why do look like her.” Alyssa said pointing back to CD. Abby took deep breath and thought how to tell a two-year-old that the women that looked so much like mommy was her grandmother.


“Alley you know how you look like me right.” Alyssa nodded. “We’ll I look like her because she’s my mommy.”

“Really?” Alyssa asked with big smile on her face. Abby nodded and smiled. She didn’t have any grandparent sense her mom grew up in an orphanage so she was extremely happy to be getting one. Alyssa turned around to face CD. “Are you really my abuela?” CD looked at her confused.

“It’s Spanish for grandmother.” Abby said seeing CD’s confused expression.

“How does a two year old learn Spanish.”

“Her baby-sitter back in Texas taught her and yes Alyssa she is your abuela.” Alyssa smiled and gave CD a hug and kissed her on the cheek.


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