uuuh yeah, so I was bored and I had an idea and uhh... well fanfic.

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"Hey hang on a second, I'll be right back" Jinny said and put her cellphone on the edge of the table, where it wouldn't be in the way for CD and Nate who occupied the table.

While Jinny headed to the restrooms Magda, on the other end of the line started to hear the familiar voices of her co-workers and friends who hadn't even noticed Jinny pass by.

Nate was laughing. "Hey I score twice as much as you, so stop pretending you're good."

Magda frowned upon that but then again it wasn't that unusual for CD and Nate to tease each other, waiting for Jinny to get back she continued to listen. "Hey at least when I score it's always more than one."

"More than one eh? Well I just had two at the same time, try to beat that." His voice sounded triumphantly.

She seemed to think for a moment. "Hmm, okay haven't had that in a while... At least not today... not yet at least"

"Hey if it wasn't for me you never would've gotten that last one." He chuckled.

"And you're proud of that? Because I got what you could've gotten easily yourself?" Now it was her turn to laugh while Magda frowned even more, now certain she shouldn't be witnessing this conversation but continueing to listen nevertheless.

"I felt sorry for you and sacrificed" He chuckled again.

"Yeah right." Her tone made clear she didn't buy that.

"You know what I'm really good at?" Nate's voice sounded again. "To use one to score another."

"Ooooh, I love doing that too, just when I do it I usually take in the one I used first right after I scored the second." CD sounded proud about that.

'This is starting to get disguisting' Magda thought to herself, getting way too much information here now.

"Shut up and bring it on cause it's your turn to score again now." Nate said.

"Oh really? I thought it was yours." Her voice sounded playful and challenging.

"Really? You're making it damn easy for me there. Not that I mind though." He chuckled.

CD chuckled too. "Oh go ahead. I can hardly wait."

Magda listened more closely and heard some shuffling. "I don't believe this" she mumbled.

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Anybody want me to write more?

Ooooookay,pleez tell me they're playin cards lol
good so far,post more soon

Go Cat Go Cat Go Cat!!! lol Of course we want you to write more... We should post some of our fan-fiction on here sometime! :) KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!

hehe :) okay 1. they are not playing cards
2. yeah we should, we also should write some more in the first place lol.
3. I'll write more later cuz I'm watching Dogma right now.

Here's some more... *evil smirk*

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"So how do you want me to handle this? Hard and fast or soft and tender?" Nate asked.

"As hard as you can cuz I won't be gentle with you either." Magda gulped and considered to just hang up, but somehow she couldn't.

"Alright then, you know this won't last much longer then, right? I'm already almost done." He paused for a moment. "Ahhh damn, that wasn't planned."

Then CD spoke again. "I think I'm going to set the pace now. My turn to take over and finish off here."

"Oh my god, you're really damn good at this!" Nate exclaimed after a moment and then called out: "Whoa!"

"YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!" CD yelled at the same time and cheered.

"Holy crap." Magda muttered and started to wonder if they were doing this frequently.

But then CD's voice caught her attention again. "Nate... NATE! STOP! CAREFUL!" After that she groaned followed by: "Damnit Nate! Now you got me all wet and sticky!"

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So you want the surprising last part too?

ok...i'm definitely intrigued...

Please post more. I like it so far, very nice.

Jeanie

:kiss::grineyes: Woo hoo! go Nate! lol post more now.:happyface

hmh, okay so here's the end. Enjoy.

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At that moment Jinny walked up again and started to chuckle. "Way to go Nate."

"And I even warned him!" CD groaned again.

Teddy followed close behind Jinny "Hey, even I saw that one coming from a mile away.... The way you fumbled around with your ... uuuuh ... stick there... no wonder you spilled it all over her."

Nate was pouting and gave CD the most apologizing look. "I'm sorry CD, I'll buy ya a new iced tea."

"That's the least you can do after you spilled it all over me!" Her voice was still a little snappy but his look just made her smile again and he smiled back immediately.

Suddenly Jinny remembered the phone and Magda. She picked it up again. "Hey Mag I'm back."

"About time! What the hell was that?" Magda couldn't believe it still.

"What that?" Jinny gave Teddy a look, hoping Magda wasn't suspecting anything.

"CD and Nate! What the hell were they doing there?" Though she wasn't sure she really wanted to know the answer, having a pretty good idea already anyways.

"Ooooh them!" Jinny sounded relieved and chuckled. "Playing pool. What did YOU think they were doing, eh?"

She rolled her eyes. "Let's just say if THAT was playing pool I don't ever wanna hear their pillow talk..."


The End

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Anybody want a sequel? Cuz Jeanie had a lot of ideas and we started to write some more together :)

:rotflmao: that was great!

I'd love a sequel!

Heh :D I'm glad you liked it, and here's the beginning of the sequel, just for you, even though I hope there's somebody else still reading it too. :)

Oh and this sequel now is called Such Is My Love, To Thee I So Belong (it's a quote from Shakespeare, one of his sonnets. I like that dude, thanks to him I graduated. Oughta buy him a beer for that or sumthin... a Shakesbeer... okay lame pun lol)

I know I mentioned it before, but she deserves the credit so I'll say it again, Jeanie is helping me with this from here :)

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CD noticed the look between Jinny and Teddy and raised her eyebrow and smirked. She was a good enough inspector to pick up on the guilty tone Jinny had had when talking to Magda again, plus that look was speaking louder than words.

Nate nudged her and motioned towards the restrooms. CD chuckled and nodded, knowing what he meant without him needing to verbalize it. She had also seen that they basically had walked out of the restrooms again together. She smiled at her friend and the handsome ADA until she had to chuckle again, noticing his fly was open still. "Hey zip it up again cowboy." She couldn't help but tease as she smirked at him.

He cleared his throat and blushed while he did what he apparently had forgotten to do earlier.

Nate had to laugh himself and gave Jinny a slightly confused look. "Nice style I didn't notice you wearing your shirt wrong side out earlier."

Mag was still on the line and heard this and replied, "What is your shirt doing wrongside out Jin?"

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So who wants to know what's up with her shirt? *smirk*

Or hate it completely? If so blame Jeanie. *points finger at Jeanie* She made me! She had the ideas for a sequel!

*gasps and points to Jeanie* You poor excuse for a idea maker!!!!!!!!! :o

lol... j/k It's good so far... post more soon! Oh I loved the original also- I read it to my boyfriend last night. lol

LOL, cool :) Hope he liked it too :) And okeeeeeeee, you wanted more, so here it goes...

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"Uhhh good question... what is my shirt doing wrongside out?" She repeated mumbling to buy herself some time. "You see, the thing is..."

CD jumped in, seeing her friend had no idea what to say and grabbed the phone from Jin. "New fashion, I'm wearing mine like that all the time too now"

Mag said "Since when?"

Now CD was the one who had to think for a moment. "Since.... since Nate is."

Upon that Nate grabbed the phone. "Magda I don't believe it! Please don't tell me you're..." he gasped for dramatic effect and then his voice sounded pretty disguisted. "...you're not wearing it like that yet!"

Jinny surpressed her laughter and decided not to be too hard on her partner. So she spoke up, taking the phone back and replied, "Actually we all are trying something new tonight."

Nate looked at Teddy as he said under his breath, "Yeah or somewhere new rather."

Teddy smirked back at Nate and looked over at CD "Or someone..."

Mag by now was completely confused. 'Where is Jonah when you need him?' She thought to herself and sighed. "Hey Jin... I'm gonna hang up, I have to make an important phonecall."

"Alright Mag... whatever." Jinny hung up, not really giving a damn, she just wanted to be with Teddy anyways.

Nate still was glaring at Teddy for his comment. Thankfully CD hadn't heard it.

"So... you guys done here?" Jinny asked. "Cause maybe then we could play some too, eh?" She smiled at Teddy who made a face.

"Ahhh... I'd rather not." He leaned closer to her and whispered into her ear. "Hey why don't we just go home and we can play another game with balls and a stick..."

Jinny chuckled and grinned. "Ohhh yeah. I like that game."

Teddy smirked and led her outside, both of them forgetting to even say bye to CD and Nate.

"Wonder what game" Nate couldn't help but comment to CD.

"Chess Nate... I'm sure they'll play chess" She laughed.

He smirked. "Most likely... so whatcha say, one more?" He motioned at the pool table.

"Hmm, another time, okay?" She tugged at her shirt. "This iced tea really is sticky and right now I pretty much just wanna go home and take a shower." Not only because of the iced tea though, but of course that was information she didn't have to share with Nate.

"Sure, I'll go home too then." He paid their bill, and Jinny and Teddy's who also had forgot to pay. He chuckled at that. It was so obvious how much in love they were. Sighing he thought 'If only I could have that too.'

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So hmmm.... more?

I'm so special right after I post you add more :) LOL... Continue...................waiting............

of course you are special! *starts to sing* "You are so speciaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee"

LOL anyhow, another short part especially for ya.

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Silently he and CD walked over to where they had their cars parked. Arriving at his first they paused there and smiled at each other. "So I'll see ya tomorrow then." CD spoke up first.

Nate nodded, like so often hating having to part ways with her. "Yeah tomorrow." He couldn't resist the urge to hug her though. "Sleep tight... and I'll buy ya a new shirt, I'm really sorry about..."

CD smiled as he hugged her but cut him off as she realized it was just guilt. "Don't worry about it. I'll wash it and it'll be okay again. Bye Nate."

"Bye CD." He smiled at her one last time before walking to the driver's side and opening the door.

She looked after him sadly for a moment and sighed before starting to walk over to her own car.

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There, that's it for now. :) Like?

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
of course you are special! *starts to sing* "You are so speciaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee"

LOL anyhow, another short part especially for ya.


Oooohh ooohh.. *points up at what you said and looks around to everyone* That was especially for me! *bows* I feel so honored... *sniffs and contineus to remind everyone I got you to post just for me!* :D

Originally posted by #1_Nancy_McKeon
Oooohh ooohh.. *points up at what you said and looks around to everyone* That was especially for me! *bows* I feel so honored... *sniffs and contineus to remind everyone I got you to post just for me!* :D

Can I have a post specially for me too?!?! Miranda's not all that special.

post more soon,this is really good!

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
Like?

Love!

*waits for more*

Can I have a post specially for me too?!?! Miranda's not all that special.

Miranda is VERY special. Period. She knows why and I'm glad I know her! Besides if it wasn't for her and Jeanie I'd never have joined these boards, so in fact the only reason why I started to write this fic is Miranda, and Jeanie too. So they are both very special to me. So this next part is for them and for everybody else who wanted more, and maybe when I know you better you get a part especially for you too. :)

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Still lost in thoughts about her partner she started her car and drove off but passed Nate who still was there, trying to get his car started and now walked out and started to inspect the engine, looking under the hood. She had to grin as that gave her a nice view of his rear. Of course she stopped and walked up to him. "What's up?"

"I don't know, stupid thing won't start up." He furrowed his brows and started to fumble around at something as if he was a mechanic.

She nodded. "Hmh... I see. Need help?"

"Nah, I'm sure I'll get it fixed in no time. Go ahead and go home." He didn't want to keep her there so he could embarress himself, of course having no clue about what he was fumbling around on even.

"Ahh... I can try to start again at least." CD said and got behind the wheel. "Just tell me when.... no wait, forget that. I found the problem." She got out again.

"What?" He looked at her stunned.

"No gas... car needs gas to drive... no gas, can't start." She walked over to him, where he still was fumbling around.

"Oh." He looked at her dumbfounded. "Must've forgott... *****!" He jumped back as his fumbling around had loosened something and now a little fountain of oil spurted out, of course right at CD, soiling her shirt even more.

She looked down at that and then at Nate and they both started to laugh and CD closed the hood again. "Come on, I'll give ya a ride home. Unless you'd rather smear some chocolate or ketchup or something over my shirt first..."

"Very funny!" He rolled his eyes but had to laugh.

"C'mon now." CD went back to her car and he got in next to her.

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shalala.... the 'lil pervert' posted more ;) LOL I dunno why but I like that nickname.

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo


shalala.... the 'lil pervert' posted more ;) LOL I dunno why but I like that nickname.

;)

good nickname...i give credit to the person who called u that :lookaroun

That post was great! Loved the chocolate/ketchup comment!!

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
;)

good nickname...i give credit to the person who called u that :lookaroun

That post was great! Loved the chocolate/ketchup comment!!

LOL yeah... hmh... who coulda called me that? Hang on, I think I remember...

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CDDeLorenzo: Hiya! I got your ID from the sitcoms boards, so I added ya :)
Lavenderangel7: cool, who are ya on da boards?
CDDeLorenzo: CD DeLorenzo
Lavenderangel7: oooooooooooooo the lil pervert ;)
CDDeLorenzo: LOL yeah
Lavenderangel7: ur pretty funny
CDDeLorenzo: thanks :) glad ya like it
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hmh, gotta see if I can pick up on that comment about chocolate/ketchup again then when ya loved it :)

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
Miranda is VERY special. Period. She knows why and I'm glad I know her! Besides if it wasn't for her and Jeanie I'd never have joined these boards, so in fact the only reason why I started to write this fic is Miranda, and Jeanie too. So they are both very special to me. So this next part is for them and for everybody else who wanted more, and maybe when I know you better you get a part especially for you too. :)


shalala.... the 'lil pervert' posted more ;) LOL I dunno why but I like that nickname.




Thanks you are way too kind. You are the best.

Originally posted by Jeanie
Thanks you are way too kind. You are the best.

aww *huuuuuuuuuuuuuugs* you're the best too! LY!

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
LOL yeah... hmh... who coulda called me that? Hang on, I think I remember...

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CDDeLorenzo: Hiya! I got your ID from the sitcoms boards, so I added ya :)
Lavenderangel7: cool, who are ya on da boards?
CDDeLorenzo: CD DeLorenzo
Lavenderangel7: oooooooooooooo the lil pervert ;)
CDDeLorenzo: LOL yeah
Lavenderangel7: ur pretty funny
CDDeLorenzo: thanks :) glad ya like it


;)

Here's the next part.

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On the way to his place they first talked about their current cases a little but dropped that topic again fairly soon. Work was something they really didn't need to discuss more than necessary.

"So whatcha say... Teddy and Jin?" He smiled.

She smiled back at him. "They're a great couple... actually they got together before you came, back when I was teamed up with Angela. You remember I told you about her, right?"

He thought for a moment and then nodded. "You might've mentioned her, yeah..." He didn't blame her for not bringing her last ex-partner up often. From what he'd heard the two had been like fire and ice, though at time he wasn't sure which of the elements CD was. Hot as fire... or cold as ice... but thankfully that side was one she usually just showed during interrogations. The hot part though... but he couldn't allow himself to think about that, not now with her in the car too at least. But he was certain this aspect would come back to him during his dreams at night. It always found the way into his subconciousness somehow as soon as he closed his eyes.

"Anyhow.. so Jinny and Teddy. They make a wonderful couple I think and I just hope it will last this time, when she still was having her problems she screwed up somewhat. But then again she did with all of us. I'm sure Teddy found it in his heart to forgive her. It really wasn't her fault. I mean she's not like Magda who... nevermind. What I'm trying to say here is that yeah... Jinny and Teddy. Anthony and Cleopetra... Romeo and Juliet..."

"Hey, those couples killed themselves." He interrupted.

"My point here is that they are a wonderful couple and I'm sure we haven't heard the end of it yet. And PS: I like Shakespeare!" But was that really her point? Wasn't it more something like wanting to hear her name on that list too? Hers and a certain other one that was tattooed into her heart.

"Weary with toil, I haste me to my bed,
The dear repose for limbs with travel tired;
But then begins a journey in my head
To work my mind, when body's work's expired:
For then my thoughts--from far where I abide--
Intend a zealous pilgrimage to thee,
And keep my drooping eyelids open wide,
Looking on darkness which the blind do see:
Save that my soul's imaginary sight
Presents thy shadow to my sightless view,
Which, like a jewel hung in ghastly night,
Makes black night beauteous, and her old face new.
Lo! thus, by day my limbs, by night my mind,
For thee, and for myself, no quiet find." He smiled at her as he finished reciting. It was exactly what he had been thinking about mere moments ago. How at night she always seemed to be haunting him.

"Wow... not bad. A sonnet. I'm impressed." She smiled at him. "It's one of my favorites actually."

"It is?" He grinned broader

She nodded. It had been ever since he started to keep her awake at nights or her dreams about him confused the hell outta her.

"Mine too." he was glad she liked it too and didn't think he was a dork because he liked Shakespeare. "It's amazing, isn't it? How much we have in common I mean..."

She pulled up in front of his place and nodded. "Yeah I know. Sometimes I feel like you're the only person who ever really knew me... that you know me better than I know myself even."

He nodded, feeling the same way about her. He unbuckled his seatbelt but hesitated, not getting out yet. He turned to her again. "Do you believe in fate? That two souls who have been destined to be together will find each other eventually? That the moment they look into each others eyes they can see the love?"

She turned away, trying to hide a solitary tear that she couldn't help from sliding down her face. It hurt so bad that he'd ask her that. Just to imagine that he could be in love with somebody was killing her. "Once I loved but love is dead." She whispered.

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I'm craving feedback. What do ya all think? Honestly.

It's great, really. Add more.

It's great!! I love it!!!!!! Shakespeare...I read Romeo and Juliet in school...and I actually liked it...

*taps foot, waits for more*

Here's the part you've all been waiting for :)

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He swallowed but realized or hoped at least, why she suddenly was so sad. He turned around and gently placed his hand on her cheek and made her look at him again while he caressed her tear away with his thumb. "Sometimes love is only sleeping." He whispered and leaned even closer and gently brushed his lips over hers.

She couldn't believe this was happening at first but then smiled.

He smiled back at her, relieved that she wasn't slapping him. But instead she drew him closer again and softly nuzzled her lips against his. "I think I believe in it after all." She whispered against his lips.

"Good." He whispered as they looked deep into each others eyes, for the first time able to recognize what they had been seeing their all along, but having been too blinded to acknowledge it before: Love.

She unbuckled her own seatbelt so she could scoot over to him closer and wrapping her arms around his neck her lips found his again. He slightly opened his mouth and carefully let his tongue caress her lips, savouring her taste. Having waited for this moment so long she repeated his actions, first softly licking over his lips before their tongues met and meshed in the middle. Years of built up passion got resolved in their kiss, jolts of electricity shooting through their bodies as they felt so close to each other like they knew they could never feel to anybody else.

Eventually they had to come up for air though but they just took a quick breath and resumed kissing like they never kissed before, arousing their bodies and their souls all the more. As they had to part again to catch their breath he smiled and leaned his forehead against hers, looking deep into her eyes and caressing her cheeks. She smiled back at him, her hands running through his hair tenderly.

"You wanna come up for a coffee?" He finally asked.

"Coffee huh?" She smiled at him.

"Well I'd offer you some if I actually had any." He grinned. "But I'll make you the best hot chocolate ever for breakfast."

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Will she stay or not? Find out in the next post.... if you want...

*shrieking* I WANT MORE NOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!! *jumping up and down*

Okay, here's the last one for this one. thanks for reading it everybody and thanks for all your feedback.

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She chuckled and gave him a loving and lingering kiss. "How could I possibly say no to that?" She held his hand for a second before she opened her door and got out of the car. He did the same and while she locked it he walked up behind her and kissed her behind her earlobe as he picked her up and carried her into his appartment. As soon as she was in his arms they started to kiss again and once they were inside and the door was closed again their hands started to roam their bodies, exploring every inch while their jackets were tossed aside carelessly followed by a couple of clinking sounds as their gunholsters and badges fell to the ground. Even his bedroom seemed too far away so they slowly made their way to his couch, more and more items of clothing lining a path over there.

He smiled broadly as their undergarments now were scattered somewhere too. "You're so beautiful."

With adoring eyes he watched her for a moment while she did the same. "So are you."

He pulled her close to him and slowly kissed a trail down her jawline over her neck to the valley between her breasts. "You taste like iced tea." He whispered in between nibbling on her skin before he started kissing her with all his emotions and they fell onto the couch and melted into what they were destined to be: two lovers sharing one soul.


The End

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:wave: Buh bye.... or another sequel?

SEQUEL?!?! HELL YEA!!!!!!

SEQUEL!!! SEQUEL!!!! NOW HURRY THAT WAS AWESOME!

Here's the next sequel. :) This part is called "Take My Hand, Take My Whole Life Too" Hope ya'll like it too. It's gonna have more Teddy/Jinny in it too from now on, but still a lot CD/Nate too :)

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In the morning the sun seemed to rise way too fast and Jinny made a face and hid her face in Teddy's chest. "Can ya switch that damn light off please?" She muttered, not wanting it to be morning yet, not wanting to get up yet. What she wanted was to stay in bed with the love of her live and continue where they had left off about half an hour ago.

"I wish I could honey." He whispered and kissed into her hair before gently stroking through it. "It's not Sunday yet, is it?" He sighed, wanting nothing different than the woman in his arms. He wanted to make love to her until exhaustion eventually drove them into a peaceful sleep.

"I'm afraid not." She sighed too. "When do you have to be at the office?"

"At ten, you?" He tilted her head up and kissed her lips gently.

"Eight already." She made a face, not wanting to leave him.

"Hmmm... how about you just drag me along until ten then? If I'm not in the way there or anything of course." He wanted to spend ever single second of his day with her, or at least as much time as possible.

That brought a smile on her face again. "If anyone starts bitching around we'll just tell them we're going over a case or something." She kissed him passionately. "But right now we still have an hour... so whatcha say? We go take a nice shower and grab a breakfast burrito on the way in?" Her hands were caressing his body in a way that even had he wanted to say no to that preposition he wouldn't have been able to.

"Sounds wonderful my love." He whispered huskily and took her hand into his and together they walked into the bathroom.

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See? I said it's gonna have Teddy and Jin :)

:clap: Yay! you posted! post again!

hehe, thank you, thanks you :) *smiles*

There ya go

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In another part of town another couple was doing their best to ignore the rising sun.

Still panting Nate stroked CD's hair out of her face. "I can't believe we haven't slept at all. It's around seven already."

"Ugh." CD sighed and was still trying to catch her own breath. "We have to be at the office in an hour?" She made a face.

"'Fraid so baby." He kissed her temple.

She smirked. "Can we take your couch along?"

He laughed and kissed her passionately. Everytime they kissed, evertime they made love, it just seemed to become better and better. It still was new and exciting even though they had done it all night through. And his livingroom was bearing more than enough signs to prove that. They had never made it to his bedroom. "I promised you a hot chocolate if I remember correctly." He whispered into her ear.

"Nuh uh. You promised me the best hot chocolate ever." She smirked at him. "But after last night I have no doubt you can live up to that promise."

"Is that so?" He grinned, obviously enthralled because she was enjoying the seemingly eternal desire that burned in them as much as he did.

Her reply to that was another hungry kiss. He picked her up nd carried her over to the kitchen and tried to make that hot chocolate without getting distracted by her. Naturally he didn't quite succeed as she was sitting on the counter and blew him a kiss, smiled and winked and then maked a 'come hither' gesture with her forefinger.

"Good lord, I died and I'm in heaven." He whispered still unable to believe this was true and not another illusion.

"Then be my angel and save me from the unbearable pains I suffer." She whispered huskily.

Soon the hot chocolate was forgotten again as Nate climbed on the counter with her.

At last they had to leave tough, an hour late they walked out of his door again, leaving behind kitchen, livingroom ad bathroom that looked like a battlefield and hoping no one at work would notice she was wearing one of his shirts today.

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stay tuned for the rest of the CD and Nate shirt drama lol

ooooh Nates shirt? I wonder if they are going to notice!!! POST NOW!! lol...Finally a Cd/Nate fic and not to mention, a GREAT one..so pooooooostttt!!!! lol

Alright, here's more :)

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Eventually they made it to the office after stopping for some extra strong coffee and saw the elevator was about to close. "Hold it." Nate called out and they walked in there, seeing the other two persons in it were Jinny and Theodore, their expressions of exhaustion and pure bliss mirroring their own.

"Did you guys play pool all night long?" Jinny grinned and placed her hands over Teddy's who had his arms wrapped around her from behind.

"Something like that." CD grinned.

"I see." Jinny grinned and gave them a knowing look.

Soon they arrived at the sixth floor and walked into the bullpen. Magda saw them first and grinning proudly got up, wearing one of her shirts inside out. She frowned though when she saw she was the only one wearing this 'new fashion'.

Of course they noticed what Magda was wearing and gave her very distressed looks. CD shook her head and Nate spoke up. "Yuck Magda.... that's SO yesterday!"

Jin said "You need to keep up Mag."

Mag looked at the lot of them, "Well it looks like I am the only one smart enough to get any sleep, last night."

CD replied, "Don't knock it til you try it. I had a good time didn't you Nate?"

Nate said "Uh huh.... very good time. What about you Jin?"

Jin poured some more coffee into her cup as she said. "Words can't describe the fun I had last night."

CD looked at Jin and asked, "Before or after the bathroom?"

"Both" She took another sip of her coffee while Magda looked at all of them bedazzled again.

Teddy smirked. "Hey, we gonna go and ... play pool again tonight?" He winked at Jin.

"Anytime." She grinned and looked back at Nate. "So what did you like best about yesterday evening Nate?"

"I especially liked the part where I got CD wet." He winked at her.

CD looked at Nate and said, "Yeah I could have done without getting wet but you did help me clean it up."

Nate smirked and poured his coffee over her shirt. "Ooooooops"

She looked at him and replied "Hey that is a little warm."

Jin said, "I think that is the point."

Grinning Nate leaned into CD and whispered into her ear. "Not warm... hot babe."

"Yeah it is getting hot in here." CD replied.

Teddy nodded and looked at Jin "Big time... hey you wanna go for a walk? Some fresh cold air... to cool down?"

Jin replied, "Sure" and they left, both grinning broadly

Mag looked at the bunch and said, "Like a bunch of over sexed rabbits." She sat down at her desk again knowing full well it would be a while before her partner returned.

"You're just jealous cuz you're not getting any" CD said and smirked at Nate who smirked back at her.

Mag said "Why don't you two just take each other right here?"

CD replied, "Wouldn't want you to see what you are missing."

"But Kate's office is vacan't. She isn't here yet and we can close the blinds" Nate looked at her challenging. "Race you?"

"You're on" CD jumped up and ran over

Nate caught up with her and they closed the blinds before he right away pulled her close to him and kissed her with all he got.

Mag shook her head at the two. She got up and decided to take a walk, not wanting to hear what she couldn't have.

She couldn't help but walk by Teddy's office and heard something so she went a little closer as she heard Jin's voice say, "Baby that feels so good." She leaned in a little closer as she heard Teddy reply, "You feel so good."

Back at the Division Nate picked CD up and laid her down on Kate's desk, scattering files everywhere by that. She pulled Nate on top of her and they kissed passionately. Suddenly the door opened and Kate walked in, seeing Nate on top of CD, his shirt on the lamp, her's unbuttoned and his hand on her thigh, his other hand fumbling with her belt, her hands all over his chest, kissing like there was no tomorrow.

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And I'd like to remind ya again that Jeanie helped me write this :) So tell her how you like it! :) And me too of course lol

For both CD and Jeanie: This is great, post more soon! :talk:

on her desk :eek: OMG...POSTMORE SOON!!!!

Originally posted by TLC4Whitney
on her desk :eek: OMG...POSTMORE SOON!!!!

well gotta keep up my lil pervert reputation here ;)

here's some more

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Kate blinked, closed the door and opened it again but what she had seen wasn't an illusion. "What the hell?" She called out and CD and Nate jumped up "We... we were just... uhh..." Nate reached for his shirt and pulled it on again.

CD quickly buttoned hers up again too "... we were going over.... a witness statement.... she said she was seeing this guy killing the victim while she and her husband were .... busy.... so in order to solve the case we had to see if that could have been possible..."

Kate nodded. "I see.... well do me a favor and get a room, where you can... investigate these matters further..." She figured better they do it somewhere else than on her desk, knowing neither heaven nor hell could part them anymore now. Apart from that they were her friends and she was happy for them because they certainly deserved some luck and happiness. Just like another Inspector whose life seemed to be just great again at the moment and she hoped that lasted as well. "Before you leave though do you know where the rest of my inspectors are?"

CD replied "Jinny is working on a case with ADA Blumenthal and Mag was outside."

"Working on a case.... That doesn't happen to be the case in question here too, does it?" Kate asked with a slight smile on her lips.

Nate smirked. "I think they investigate another angle to it, yeah."

Kate replied, "I wonder whose desk they are using?"

"Just be glad it isn't yours...." CD said and got a look from Kate.

"Not that yours isn't nice..." Nate said and knocked on Kate's desk. "Very stable..."

CD nodded. "Not too hard either...."

Kate glared at them "OUT! NOW!"

Knowing they were pushing their luck already because with most other captains they would have lost their jobs for that they quickly hurried off.

Down at Teddy's office, his secretary arrived to hear some groans from inside the office. She slowly walked over to the door and turned the knob as she peered in and saw Teddy on top of the brunette that worked upstairs. They were lying on her bosses desk with all his files strewn on the floor. She closed the door again and went for a coffee break, sighing because she knew she'd have to tidy up all these files....again.

Quite a while later Teddy's secretary walked slowly back to his office and as she approached she heard more noise going on inside her bosses' office. She turned around and headed back to the break room replying on her way, "This is going to be a long morning." As she was sipping her at least fifth coffee she thought to herself, 'Those two are always going at it. Wonder if she isn't pregnant yet.'

Inside Teddy's office, Teddy was now sitting in his chair and Jin now on top of him as they were exploring each other's body with their hands, too engulfed in their lovemaking to remember anything about space and time.

Suddenly though Teddy stopped and looked deep into Jinny's eyes.

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Now you decide who is naughtier lol

Naught Naughty! Its getting hot in here...wooh! Great Fic!!! Post more!!!!:D

:grineyes: oooh! great fic! I need MORE!!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
:grineyes: oooh! great fic! I need MORE!!


Did i mention i need it tonight?

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
Did i mention i need it tonight?

LOL wow... somebody's impatient here... or addicted... anyhow... to fulfill your need... seeing I'm a very nice person... *smirks*

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He kissed her like never before. "I love you so much Jinny"

Jinny looked deep in Teddy's eyes and replied, "I have never before felt like you make me feel. I have fallen in love with you Theodore and that is not an easy accomplishment for me. When I am with you I feel like the part of me that is missing is whole again."

Teddy replied, "When I am with you I don't know where you begin and I end. I have never felt like this with anyone else. Jinny Exstead will you marry me?" He slowly opened his office drawer and produced a box that he handed to a very stunned Jin.

Jinny was sitting on top of Teddy with him still very much inside of her holding a black velvet box in her hand, with a stunned look on her face.

Jinny looked at him shocked. That was the last thing she had expected. Maybe even that she ever had expected. "Teddy, oh my god!" She swallowed and looked at him shocked again and then kissed him with all her love. "Yes! Yes I want to marry you!" Her answer surprised her just as much as his proposal, but it just felt so perfect.

Teddy returned the kiss full force. After what seemed like an eternity Teddy slowly broke the kiss and took the ring box that was still in Jinny's hand as he opened the box and slide the stunning 1 carat diamond engagement ring on her finger. After the ring was in place he once again captured her mouth with his as they began to explore each others bodies as a engaged couple.

Jinny hadn't ever been happier in her life before and that transmitted into their lovemaking.

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There you go. Hope y'all like :)

Oh wow post more!

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!


I won't be on tomorrow night and if I'm on tomorrow it will be brief...I expect to have lots during that time to read ;)

Post more soooon!

alright, here's more :)
PS: I love my new signature! *smirks*

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CD and Nate pulled into a hotel parking lot as Nate got out and went in to rent a room. CD followed him of course and immediately started to attack his neck by nibbling on it, not giving a damn about the looks the clerk behind the counter was shooting them.

Nate had troble filling out the registration card with what CD was doing to the lower half of his body that they clerks couldn't see.

CD whispered "Hurry and fill out that damn card."

"I'm trying!" He hissed and continued to scribble and as he was done eventually he picked up CD who wrapped her legs around his waist. He kissed her passionately. "Damn woman, what are you doing to me?" He whispered

CD replied, "What you don't like? I can always stop."

"Don't you dare. What way to our room?" Nate asked, an urgency sounding in his voice. He immediately kissed her again as she pointed the way. "Besides that's not what I meant." He whispered and carried her over to their room and gently placed her on the bed. "I mean, what kind of spell have you put on me?"

CD leaned up and kissed Nate passionately as they broke the kiss she replied, "IF I have a spell on you then it must be the same one you have on me."

He smiled and kissed her again, placing his hands on either side of her body, slowly leaning down and making her lean back down again too. "Baby love me, like no one ever could" He whispered into her ear.

CD reached for his shirt as she couldn't get it off fast enough she ripped it off his body as she rolled him over on his back sitting atop of him she reached for his pants.

"Whoa baby" He was surprised by her urgency but then again his own was all too obvious. Not bothering with her buttons he ripped her shirt off too as she got rid of his pants. Soon all their clothes were torn and scattered all over the room.

Nate took charge as he rolled her back over on her back and leaned gently down on top of her kissing her with an urgency that he had never known.

She moaned into his mouth and pushed him on hs back again, kissing her way down all over his body, using her hands and her tongue to drive him insane.

The maid was passing by as she heard the sounds coming from room 1226 and hung a Do Not Disturb sign on the door.

Meanwhile back at the station Mag arrived back in the felony division as she entered the room she saw that her partner was still not back. She stepped in the Cap's office and asked, "Hey Cap have you seen Jin lately?"

"According to CD and Nate she's working on a case with ADA Blumenthal" Kate looked up from her paperwork briefly.

Mag replied, "I bet she is working on ADA Blumenthal."

Kate cleared her throat. "As long as you're not working ON anything else than your case..."

Mag rolled her eyes, "No Cap I am not working on anything but my case. WOnder when Jin will be done with ADA Blumenthal?"

KAte said, "Well his office is downstairs you could always go down and check... what I wonder is when CD and Nate are coming back. I really need them here."

Mag replied, "Where did they go?"

Kate cleared her throat. "Work a case... I need them for another asignment though"

"You could always page them or call the cell phones." Mag replied.

"I guess that's what I'm gonna do." Kate made a movement with her hand to signal Magda she was dismissed.

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:wave: you asked for it... :)

yay u posted!!! GREAT post...but um, hello...MORE MORE MORE!!!
oh and by the way, love your siggy!

:cow: MOO!

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Still high on post-orgasmic chills CD and Nate were snuggling in each others arms. Nate smiled at her. "You're so amazing." He whispered and caressed her face.

CD smiled back at him, drawing lazy circles over his shoulder. "No you are." She whispered and gave him a small kiss on his lips. She couldn't believe this was true, that they had the power to make one another feel like this. She always thought she'd had good sex before, but nothing could measure up to what was happening between her and Nate.

"We both are." He whispered his face close to hers and gently kissed her. "Together." He kissed her again.

"Yeah that's it." She smiled and kissed him back, the kiss a little more lingering now. "The together part." She whispered and the next kiss was more passionately again, building up their desire so much they felt as if they hadn't seen each other for a century.

"Trust me." He whispered into her ear and slowly started to kiss his way down her body with the goal to drive her into the highest hemispheres.

She moaned full of pleasure, unable to believe what he was doing to her, how anytime she thought it couldn't ever possibly feel any better he did the littlest things to prove it always could get better.

He continued, glad she was enjoying it as much as he was. He just wanted to make her feel as divine as she made him feel.

But suddenly an annoying noise pulled them back into reality.

CD groaned and snatched her cellphone. "WHAT?!?"

Kate spoke into the phone, "I need you back here as soon as you can get here I have another case for you to work on."

"What NOW?" CD actually whined.

"ASAP I need you back here like 30 minutes ago actually." She said sternly.

"I hate you!" CD snapped and gave Nate a look that made sure this was bad news.

Kate rolled her eyes and hung up. She knew CD didn't mean it that way.

CD shut the phone and raised up to get out of bed as Nate said "What is up? Where are you going? I am just getting started." He took hold of her hand and pulled her back down into bed with him again and kissed her belly.

"We have a case.... a real one. Apparently something Magda and Raina are too dumb to handle or whatever. Kate wants us back, period." She growled, hating this as much as he did. "I don't want to go, trust me I don't." She sighed.

"Shhh." He sat up and held her close, softly kissing her cheek, "What about Jinny?"

"Apparently Cap hasn't found Jinny yet? Or she was smart enough to turn off her cell." She got up again and started to gather their clothes.

"Something we should have done." He sighed.

She climbed back in bed for a moment and kissed him passionately again. "Next time" She whispered huskily, making it a promise she'd certainly keep.

Nate replied, "I guess Jin has been doing this longer and knows all the ins and outs."

She nodded and started to get dressed again. "Uhhhh we should stop by the gift shop and get new shirts and stuff..." She tossed him his torn shirt.

"Yeah... probably a good idea." He nodded and grinned at her. "Not that I don't like you naked or anything..."

"Oh shut up!" She tossed the rest of his stuff at him but he ignored that ad walked up behind her, embracing her, his hands sliding over her arms and kissing her neck. "I promise I'll continue where we left off." He whispered into her ear.

She smiled and turned around in his embrace, now facing him. "Can't wait." They kissed each other full of passion again.

He pulled back and looked deep into her eyes, obviously struggling to say something but somehow not able to do it.

"What?" She asked, noticing that.

"Nothing." He planted a kiss on top of her nose. "Just... we better get going."

"Yeah." She sighed and and they got dressed as much as possible.

He smiled at her again and held his hand out to her. She slipped hers into his and they walked out together.

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:cow: MOO!

YAY!!! The lil pervert posted more!!!! YIPPPPPPPEEEEEEEE!!!

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
YAY!!! The lil pervert posted more!!!! YIPPPPPPPEEEEEEEE!!!

:lol: thank you, thank you :) I am so proud of my reputation here *smirk*

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"I love you" Teddy whispered and kissed Jinny's temple, gently stroking through her hair.

She smiled a little and entertwined her hand with his but she seemed to be a million miles away.

"Jinny? Everything okay honey? You're not regretting you said yes, are you? I mean if you regret it... we can wait..." He was scared she'd change her mind again.

But she quickly quieted him with a kiss full of love. "No. I don't regret it." She sighed though. "It's just... whenever I'm with you... I'm so... happy... I think... I've never felt this way before Teddy and that scares me. I'm scared that one day I'll wake up, ve a horrible hangover and lie in some bed and have no idea how I got into it, and then I realize this was all just a dream and I'll always be a drunk slut."

He swallowed and hugged her close. Hearing her say that hurt him. All he wanted in his life was to make Jinny happy. "Don't say that darling, please don't say that!" He showered her face with a million kisses. "You're not a drunk slut, you're my sunshine. You're the reason why my heart keeps on beating. To make you happy is my destiny on earth, I was born to be with you, I live for you, I breathe for you, I'd give my life for you. And most importantly I promise you that this is not an illusion, this is real." He smiled at her.

She looked at him baffled. That was the most romantic thing anyone had ever told her. Not able to believe a man could actually feel this way about her a couple of tears streamed down her face. "I love you so much Teddy." She whispered and held him close. "Don't ever leave me. Don't ever let me go."

He kissed her tears away. "I won't my love, I promise I won't."

She smiled at him again. "You promise this is real?"

He smirked and slightly pinched her ass. "Yup."

"Hey!" She gave him a playful glare but kissed him passionately. "Hey, whatcha say? Wanna just skip work today and go somewhere nice? Just you and me?"

"Sounds lovely." He sighed. "But skip work? I can't just... like go away... I'd have to ask for leave... maybe if I call my boss now I can get some time off next week."

"Yes you can!" She got up and took his hand and pulled him out of the chair. "I got engaged today and not sometime next week! We both deserve that. So here's what we're gonna do. We're going to leave all of this behind... work, bosses, nosy friends... other friends who aren't nosy but totally in love themselves... this is gonna be just me and my fiance today. We're going to walk out of here and get in my car and drive 2 hours, after which we'll arrive in Big Sur. And there I'll make you forget there even is such a thing as work." She smirked and winked at him and started towards the door.

"I can't believe I'm doing this." Teddy mumbled. Never in his life had he ever skipped work, neither class back when he was at school still. "Uhhh hey Jin... wait... there's one tiny problem about your plan." He said just before they were about to walk out of the door.

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I hope that can live up with my reputation ;)

Great post more!

:grineyes: :kiss: :loveya: ooooh! I think i know what what the problem is!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
:grineyes: :kiss: :loveya: ooooh! I think i know what what the problem is!

oh really? Now I'm curious, whatcha think?

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
oh really? Now I'm curious, whatcha think?


They were about to walk out of the office but they don't have any clothes on? Is that what the problem was?

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
They were about to walk out of the office but they don't have any clothes on? Is that what the problem was?

See yourself :)

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She sighed and turned around again. Of course she could understand him, usually she wouldn't just leave either but after all this was their big day, they had just gotten engaged, so didn't they deserve to enjoy that all alone? "What?" She asked slightly disappointed.

Teddy chuckled and grinned at her. "You're buck naked my friend." He used a line he remembered her saying to him once. Though that had been a completely different context back then.

She realized he was right and slightly blushed. "Okay, good point..." They laughed together and Teddy gathered their clothes and carefully started to dress her again as if she was a precious china doll. He knew she'd hate that image but yet he couldn't help seeing her like that, his precious Jinny - a china doll in Levi's and a leather jacket. But one thing was certain, she really was the most precious thing in his life and he'd make sure she'd never get hurt again.

As they were dressed again he peaked out. "God I swear I have the laziest secretary! Have you ever seen her? She's always gone when you visit me!" He shook his head.

Jinny laughed. "Admit it Teddy... you don't actually have a secretary, she's just an imaginary friend."

"I don't need an imaginary friend, I have an unbelievable girlfriend." He winked at her. "Well fiancee now."

They kissed again and sneaked out of the office and through the stairway managed to get to the parkinglot unseen.

As they walked to the car Jinny suddenly grabbed Teddy and buried her head in his shoulder to keep from laughing too loud.

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*smirks* You're good. Guess why she's laughing and you'll win... uuuh... you'll win... a virtual hug :)

*chants* MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

Wow...that word looks funny after a while.

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo

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*smirks* You're good. Guess why she's laughing and you'll win... uuuh... you'll win... a virtual hug :) [/B]


Thanks!:) Lets see.- shes laughing because....? hmmmm?lets see? gotta get the hug lol! I don't know! there wearing eachothers clothes?!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
Thanks!:) Lets see.- shes laughing because....? hmmmm?lets see? gotta get the hug lol! I don't know! there wearing eachothers clothes?!

lol, good one, but nope sorry. Try again :)

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
lol, good one, but nope sorry. Try again :)


Dern! hmmm? I DON'T KNOW! i give up! by the way i just LOVE you siginuture! its so cute!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
Dern! hmmm? I DON'T KNOW! i give up! by the way i just LOVE you siginuture! its so cute!

Thank you! :) I just made it, and uhhh well she kinda does laugh about clothes.... just not theirs.... so oh well, you'll get that hug lol :hug:

Yay! thanks for the hug! How bout some more fic? im dying to know what jin is laughing bout!

heh, find out what's so funny lol I hope the image will work.

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"What the hell?" Teddy asked but Jinny had a major laughing fit and then he saw it too and chuckled. "Hey, You should have a shirt like that." He smirked at her.

"You better mean CD's shirt." She chuckled again and they walked over to CD and Nate who had just arrived at the parkinglot and had caused Jinny's amusement.

"Hey guys." Jinny grinned at them.

"Hey." CD said and smiled. "Cap called us in about some case... you know what's going on?"

"Sorrie cutie, no idea." Jinny chuckled.

"HE picked that!" CD said and pointed at Nate. She knew exactly Jinny was referring to the new shirt she had from the giftshop. 'Too cute for words' was written all over it.

http://traceyneedham.tripod.com/shirts.txt

Nate grinned proudly. "Made for her, ain't it?"

"Yeah well I know another girl who needs a shirt just like that. Where'd ya get it?" Teddy asked.

"Giftshop at the Travelodge at Fisherman's Wharf, near Johnny Rockets." He told him.

"So ya both needed new shirts, eh?" Jinny smirked.

"Yeah... uh the old ones... are... uhh..." CD didn't exactly want to tell them they had torn eah others clothes off so the shirts were beyond repair now.

"Out of fashion." Nate grinned. "This is the new trend!" He slightly posed in his shirt with 'Genius in disguise' written on it.

Jinny laughed. "That my friend, is a VERY good disguise." She teased him and they all laughed.

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And? Whatcha all say?

:lol: :lol: LOL!! omg! that is too funny! all i can say is MORE!

Very good... need I say more? No, really, need I say more?

Okay, I'll say more...


MORE!!!!!!!

I am so sorry... English isn't my native language... me not understand... more... what's that mean? more?

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
I am so sorry... English isn't my native language... me not understand... more... what's that mean? more?

MORE: a greater quantity, number or amount; an additional amount.....

Thanks to Franklin and Merriam-Webster


Now... don't make me come back there....

Originally posted by dovesong
MORE: a greater quantity, number or amount; an additional amount.....

Thanks to Franklin and Merriam-Webster


Now... don't make me come back there....

*hides behind big pile of laundry with lotsa funny shirts in it*

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"Anyways, we better get going." Jinny said. "If anyone asks you haven't seen us, okay?"

Teddy looked around a little nervously. "I'm still not sure this is such a good idea."

"Oh come on Teddy! Ease up a little. No one's gonna notice!" Jinny said. "We'll come back tonight again, it's not like we're running away for a year or something."

"Okay, okay, I'll make ya a deal. I'll ease up enough to forget all about work, duty and so on, and you'll ease up enough to wear a shirt like that." He motioned at CD and smirked again.

She rolled her eyes. "Okay, fine, but I'm wearing that just for you, is that clear?"

"Crystal." He kissed her temple.

"So you're sneakin off for today?" CD smiled at them.

Jinny nodded. "Big Sur... we have something to celebrate."

"Really?" Nate grinned.

"Uh huh." Jinny nodded and showed them her hand with the engagement ring. "Isn't that beautiful?"

"Oh god Jin!" CD hugged her friend. "That's wonderful! Congratulations to you both!" She hugged Teddy too.

"Yeah, wow. That's amazing." Nate grinned but then saw something behind them. "Get going, Raina's heading this way. She hasn't see ya yet but if she does..."

Jinny nodded. "She'll tell cap she saw us and so on. Thanks guys... just don't tell anybody yet, okay?"

"Of course not." CD said. "Enjoy Big Sur."

"We sure will." Teddy grinned and they hurried off to Jinny's car and drove off just in time.

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*peaks out from behind the laundry pile and smiles*

*shrugs* oops

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
*hides behind big pile of laundry with lotsa funny shirts in it*

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*peaks out from behind the laundry pile and smiles*

You're hiding? Now, there's really no reason for that... *hands behind back* Really... I would never hurt you... honest and for real....

Come on... come on out now... I SAID COME OUT FROM THERE...

*storming off* How do you expect me to get a good shot at you if you won't stop hiding from me?

Originally posted by dovesong
You're hiding? Now, there's really no reason for that... *hands behind back* Really... I would never hurt you... honest and for real....

Come on... come on out now... I SAID COME OUT FROM THERE...

*storming off* How do you expect me to get a good shot at you if you won't stop hiding from me?

*runs away screaming* She wants to hurt me! She wants to hurt me! HEEEEEEEEEELP

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
*runs away screaming* She wants to hurt me! She wants to hurt me! HEEEEEEEEEELP


Ill help you! unless you don't post more,if you don't IM GONNA HURT YOU TO! lol just kidin- its weird, you post more everyday and dovesong threatens to hurt you but i post twice a month and shes not even reading my fic! see how bad of a writer i am! 2 people are reading my fics! 2!! AM I THAT BAD A WRIGHTER!!!

NO!! NONE OF THIS!! MICHELLE UR HANDCUFFED!!! THIS IS NOT APPROPRIATE BEHAVIOR!! MICHELLE, YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE HELPING PEOPLE, NOT INJURING THEM!!!

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
NO!! NONE OF THIS!! MICHELLE UR HANDCUFFED!!! THIS IS NOT APPROPRIATE BEHAVIOR!! MICHELLE, YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE HELPING PEOPLE, NOT INJURING THEM!!!

he he! :P See you can't hurt me! *hides behind the others*

Thanks for the laundry btw, but why is everything pink now?

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
NO!! NONE OF THIS!! MICHELLE UR HANDCUFFED!!! THIS IS NOT APPROPRIATE BEHAVIOR!! MICHELLE, YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE HELPING PEOPLE, NOT INJURING THEM!!!


Gee, thanks. She didn't know WHY my hands were behind my back... I had her sceered.


and besides.... it's called job security, missy. hehe

Michelle, you're handcuffed to the keyboard, you can't move :p

Cat, everything is NOT pink!!!

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
Michelle, you're handcuffed to the keyboard, you can't move :p

Cat, everything is NOT pink!!!


You know... mine looks a little pink, too....

What, did you have Zombies helping you or something? They're undead, you know...they don't know the difference between the colors... they just throw things in there.... and if they change my channel one more time... I'm gonna scream....



















*SCREAMS*














That was just practice...

LMAO .... yeah the zombies.... always the zombies... but what about the vampires? Did you guys notice how often they mention Divisadero Street there? (that's where the Interview with the vampire was. Anne Rice insider maybe)
*gasp* CD actually lives close to that, Green Street, that's just around the corner! OMG! I got it! CD actually is a vampire too. She's just so old that the sun doesn't harm her anymore...

CD: Nate... this isn't working... there's the whole age thing...
Nate: Age thing? What age thing? That I'm 2 years older than you are?
CD: No not that, the other age thing. The I'm about 3000 years older than you are age thing... and then there's he lunch thing...
Nate: What the hell? And what lunch thing?
CD: The I'm starving and you're my lunch thing...

:lol: :p :wave:

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
LMAO .... yeah the zombies.... always the zombies... but what about the vampires? Did you guys notice how often they mention Divisadero Street there? (that's where the Interview with the vampire was. Anne Rice insider maybe)
*gasp* CD actually lives close to that, Green Street, that's just around the corner! OMG! I got it! CD actually is a vampire too. She's just so old that the sun doesn't harm her anymore...

CD: Nate... this isn't working... there's the whole age thing...
Nate: Age thing? What age thing? That I'm 2 years older than you are?
CD: No not that, the other age thing. The I'm about 3000 years older than you are age thing... and then there's he lunch thing...
Nate: What the hell? And what lunch thing?
CD: The I'm starving and you're my lunch thing...

:lol: :p :wave:


Okay... let's just not talk about vampires, okay. There are very few things in this world that this 28 year old is afraid... spiders, snakes, you know, things like that... but I have ALWAYS been afraid of vampires.... I have never, as much as I love Stephen Kings, seen Salem's Lot, not have I read any vampire books, nor watched any vampire movies... I STILL to this day have nightmares when I even talk about vampires....







*cringes in the corner, vowing not to sleep to keep the vampires away*

Originally posted by dovesong
Okay... let's just not talk about vampires, okay. There are very few things in this world that this 28 year old is afraid... spiders, snakes, you know, things like that... but I have ALWAYS been afraid of vampires.... I have never, as much as I love Stephen Kings, seen Salem's Lot, not have I read any vampire books, nor watched any vampire movies... I STILL to this day have nightmares when I even talk about vampires....







*cringes in the corner, vowing not to sleep to keep the vampires away*

:blush: ahhh... uhhh... sorry... there's nothing to be afraid of though cuz she is... she is a vegetarian vampire... she lives on Tabasco...

CD: Just kidding... *drinks tabasco bottlle*
Nate: Ah... okay

happy end... no evil done :) And no more mention of the bad guys. Or those little creepy things that start with s...

C.d's a vampire? what? i don't understand this anymore?! 3000 years older!:eek: :confused:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
C.d's a vampire? what? i don't understand this anymore?! 3000 years older!:eek: :confused:

no, don't worry, that wasn't part of the fanfic, that was just me joking around... here's a real new part :)

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"Finally!" Raina called out as she ran up to them. "Cap's desperetaly waiting for you... what's the matter with those shirts?" She grinned. "I like that though! Back when I was in highschool I used to have this funny shirt..." She giggled.

"Raina, we need to see Kate." CD cut her off and together with Nate hurried inside catching the elevator short before the doors were closing. CD rubber over her eyebrows and stared at the control panel, watching Nate push the button 6.

Nate looked at her and gently stroked a strand of hair behind her ear, glad they were alone in the elevator. "Everything okay?"

She smiled at him and nodded. "All peachy."

"Peachy?" He chuckled and kissed her temple. "I hope whatever this case is we'll solve it soon."

"Yeah me too." The elevator stopped and they b-lined into Kate's office.

Meanwhile Teddy and Jinny were on the way to Big Sur already. Jinny was driving and stared out of the window rather blankly. She was paying attention to the road but yet she appeared to be a million miles away.

"Penny for your thoughts." Teddy broke the silence.

"Huh?" She looked over at him for a split second.

"What were you thinking about?" He smiled.

"Nothing really... I don't know. I just... I feel ... weird... A good kind of weird... just weird... as if something's completely different with me. But I guess it's just starting to really sink in that we're engaged... I mean wow..." She smiled back at him.

He slipped his hand into hers. "Yes we are. And yes that feels... I wouldn't say weird, it's wonderful, but certainly it's new and different. But it's perfect."

She nodded and smiled. "Yeah it is. I don't really know about the weird feeling... I guess it's some sort of girl thing."

"Oh." He said and nodded. "Alright... cool. You're okay, right?"

"Yeah I am." She chuckled. Somehow all men were the same. Call something girl thing and they drop the topic faster than a hot potato.

He squeezed her hand and smiled, looking forward to spending some time with her away from everything.

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blame the zombies :wave:

Originally posted by dovesong
Okay... let's just not talk about vampires, okay. There are very few things in this world that this 28 year old is afraid... spiders, snakes, you know, things like that... but I have ALWAYS been afraid of vampires.... I have never, as much as I love Stephen Kings, seen Salem's Lot, not have I read any vampire books, nor watched any vampire movies... I STILL to this day have nightmares when I even talk about vampires....







*cringes in the corner, vowing not to sleep to keep the vampires away*


I would assume since you don't like the book called Interview with a Vampire?

Originally posted by dovesong
Okay... let's just not talk about vampires, okay. There are very few things in this world that this 28 year old is afraid... spiders, snakes, you know, things like that... but I have ALWAYS been afraid of vampires.... I have never, as much as I love Stephen Kings, seen Salem's Lot, not have I read any vampire books, nor watched any vampire movies... I STILL to this day have nightmares when I even talk about vampires....







*cringes in the corner, vowing not to sleep to keep the vampires away*


*laughs evilly*

if you don't post large amounts of fic daily the vampires will come and fiiiiiiiiiiiiind yooooooooooou

my parent's always call me a vampire...:happyface

CAT, GREAT, AS ALWAYS!! I'll be waaaaaaaaaaaiting...

*does everyone's laundry*

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


if you don't post large amounts of fic daily the vampires will come and fiiiiiiiiiiiiind yooooooooooou

CAT, GREAT, AS ALWAYS!! I'll be waaaaaaaaaaaiting...

*does everyone's laundry*


Yeah! same goes with me!





ps-by the way thanks for doing my laundry,i haven't done it in a few months so it might take a while;) lol! j/k

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
*laughs evilly*

if you don't post large amounts of fic daily the vampires will come and fiiiiiiiiiiiiind yooooooooooou

my parent's always call me a vampire...:happyface

CAT, GREAT, AS ALWAYS!! I'll be waaaaaaaaaaaiting...

*does everyone's laundry*

LOL I've been called a vampire countless times already. Seeing I'm always awake at night and never sunbathe and all the blood donations in my fridge and the coffin I sleep in... lol, j/k about the last 2

and I absolutely loved the interview with the vampire book! I read the whole vampire chronicles actually though I'm not that fond of everything there, but oh well...

hmh, does this board have the evil vamp smilie? :vamp:

*taps foot impatiently* *waits for more*

CD and Nate entered Kate's office and saw she was working on some paperwork so they looked at each other and waited for her to start talking to them.

Cap looked up from her paperwork and saw how they were dressed saying, "So is the new wardrobe what took you so long to get here?"

"We came here as fast as we could!" CD said. She grinned at Nate and then at Kate. "But we brought you something." She handed her a shirt with the printing 'If I'm so smart, why do I work here?'

Kate looked at the shirt and then at her inspectors as she replied, "Hmmm I see clothes shopping is more important now than cases that need to be worked on? I have been asking myself the same question though why do I work here when I can't get a hold of one of my inspectors at all, either her phone has been turned off or something and I have an inspector waiting on said partner to help her with their case. You haven't seen Jinny by chance have you, after all bringing me a shirt like this would be something she would do. I wouldn't have expected it from you two though."

CD smirked at that. "I bet there's a lot you wouldn't have expected from us."

Nate couldn't help but chuckle at that comment.

Kate replied, "Yeah I am beginning to see that. Still didn't answer my question. Have you seen Jinny? She was supposed to be working on a case with ADA Blumenthal but she isn't answering her cell."

"Maybe the cell broke? Battery empty? Bad network coverage? Could be a million reasons." CD said

Kate looked at the two standing before her as she said, "I need you two to get changed and go down to 125 Waterfront Street and see why we have two dead bodies there. You need to get changed first. I don't want my inspectors running around on a case dressed like that. And thanks for the shirt. I can see if you had seen Jinny you aren't talking huh."

"Of course we saw her." CD said. "In the elevator earlier when we came in. Teddy was with her too." Then she looked down at her shirt and back at Kate. "There uuuh... there's a problem about getting changed.... The old shirts kinda.... " She looked over at Nate to help her out of this one.

Kate replied, "Kind of what?"

"Out of fashion?" Nate grinned at their boss, hoping she'd let that slip but knowing better actually.

Kate replied, "IF the old shirts were out of fashion what are the shirts you are wearing. If you can't use the old shirts then I suggest you button your jackets up."

"We'll do that." CD nodded. "These were the only option we had for new shirts, sorry cap. We'll get to work then."

Kate replied, "Keep me informed and if you run into Jinny tell her I need her here asap."

"Why?" CD asked, hoping it wasn't that important.

Kate asked, "Why what?"

"Why do you need her here? I think that case with the ADA was a high priority thing." She gave Kate a 'don't expect to see her again today' look.

Nate nodded. "Very important, I heard that too."

Kate looked at the two knowing they knew more than they were willing to tell as she took her glasses off and held them in her hand she said, "I see so I can expect not to see Jinny until tomorrow as the case with the ADA is a high priority case. Isn't it what you and Nate were working on earlier when I interupted you in my office?"

"Not quite the same... their case apparently had a surprising twist to it... " Nate said and grinned again.

"Nate." CD said and looked at the door and motioned for him to leave her alone with Kate.

"I.... eh.... gotta.... do.... something." He said and smiled at CD once more before leaving.

Kate saw the exchange between the partners as she watched Nate leave.

yay! you posted again! :o need more fic!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
yay! you posted again! :o need more fic!

yeah I did :) I'm back at my place again and bored to death.... so here's another part

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CD sat down in front of Kate's desk. "Look, give her a break today, okay? You know you can trust me. They both deserve that, they'll be back tomorrow, and they have a reason. I can't and won't say more though."

Kate looked at CD as she pondered if she should just let it go and let Raina work with Mag today. She looked up at CD and said, "Fine as long as they are both here and ready to work tomorrow. May I ask the suprising twist Nate referred to is this is what you are not willing to say more about?"

CD nodded. "It's something happy, so don't worry. And don't tell Mag anything, I already told you way more than I should have. But I know you're in a difficult position here now, and you have to know something so... "

Kate replied, "Thanks for that. I can give Jinny a break. I am not as hard on her as everyone thinks I am. I just know that she is one of my best inspectors not excluding yourself mind you and I don't want to see her jeopardize what she can achieve." She paused for a moment. "I won't say a word to Mag. But on your way out can you ask Mag and Raina to come in here and Thanks I won't ask about the shirts. I was young once myself."

CD nodded. "I know that, and I can assure you Jinny wouldn't just run away for nothing." She grinned. "Young... back in the gold rush days? Say is it true you helped to hunt down Bonnie and Clyde?"

Kate looked at her inspector and a smile came to her face as she remarked, "I wouldn't push it Candance."

"Candace? Uh oh... I'm outta here.." She chuckled and left.

Kate smiled to herself as she waited for Mag and Raina come towards her office, thinking 'I still have it.'

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and I'm still bored :(

pffffffft, even though nobody wanted more, here's more, just to torture you all because you didn't want more. Ha! :P

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"Mag, Raina, cap wants you in there." CD said and walked over to Nate again.

Raina looked up at Mag and said, "I wonder what that is about?"

Mag replied, "Only one way to find out jsut get up and go and see." She looked back at CD and Nate again though.

"New fashion. You're behind again." CD said. "And now move it, she said it was important." She looked over at Nate. "And you come on, we have a case too." She grabberd her jacket and walked out of the door.

Mag looked at her shirt inside out and said, "Does Jin have a shirt with writing on it too? And why doesn't anyone keep me informed of fashion changes?"

Raina shrugged. "Your shirt is kinda... inside out though..." She thought that was weird.

"You think?" Mag looked at Raina and said, "Let's just go see what the Cap wants."

"You mean you did that on purpose?" Raina looked at her like she lost it completely now but followed her into Kate's office.

The two walked in, just as Kate was holding up her shirt, looking at it again.

Kate quickly put the shirt away again and cleared her throat, giving them a look that stopped them from even thinking about commenting on that.

Mag looked at the Cap and then to Raina as she said, "Am I the only one here that feels out of the loop?"

"I'm starting to myself." Raina said and looked at Kate.

"This is a police station if I may remind you. You're not here to bother about stuff like that, you have a case to work on. Jinny unfortunatly has to work on something very important today, highly classified, so don't ask, that's why Raina, you will help out Magda for today." She looked at the younger woman who started to grin like the cat that ate the canary. Kate had seen eager cops before already, CD for example, and herself too, and underneath her tough exterior she knew that also Jinny was eager to solve their cases, get justice, but for Raina it sometimes appeared like she thought this was some kind of game. She was overeager already, but Kate didn't care that much. "So fill her in on that and get back to work." She looked back at the hispanic woman. "And don't even try to contact Jinny, she'll be back tomorrow and that's that. Understood?"

Mag looked at Cap as she said, "What is up with this highly classified case and if I am her partner then why don't I know, Why can't I try to contact her? How do you know she will be back tomorrow?"

"See? That's why I'm Captain and you're not. Now get to work!" Kate gave her a stern look.

Mag relunctlanty got up and follwed Raina out of the office mumbling after she was at her desk, "What is it everyone know all the little details around here but us?"

Raina shrugged and started to scribble something down. "How'd she say it again? That's why she's the cap? I gotta remember that, cuz one day I'll be Captain too! And then I can tell that to people." She grinned proudly.

Mag just shook her head at the african american woman sitting before her not even wet behind the ears yet.

"So that case..." Raina scooted over to Magda, ready to make notes again.

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and guess what? I'm still BORED!

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
I'm still BORED!



im bored to.:( tomorrow im going to my best friend's birthday sleepover thing and guess what!? HER B-DAY WAS 2 MONTHS AGO!! and she waited till now to have a party! thats just plain cooky!:eek: lol :lol:

by the way great fic- need more jinny teddy tho:crazy:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
by the way great fic- need more jinny teddy tho:crazy:

I'm mainly a CD Nate shipper, but there will be more Jinny Teddy scenes too later.

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
I'm mainly a CD Nate shipper, but there will be more Jinny Teddy scenes too later.


good thats just what this fic needs!! but right now i need MOOORREEE

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
good thats just what this fic needs!! but right now i need MOOORREEE

ehh... I actually posted more earlier... except... it never showed up here apparently... because my comp crashed right after I posted it I suppose and it didn't really got posted... oh well, alright...

anyhow, wat I said earlier... because I'm in such a good mood... which I STILL am... here's MORE! yessa! :wave:

:love: CD & NATE FOREVER! :love:

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CD and Nate were driving to the crime scene, of course as usual with her behind the wheel. Nate was watching her and sarted to grin as he traced the outline of her ear with his forefinger, "Have I ever told you that you have cute ears?"

"Hey!" CD slightly pushed his hand aside. "What? Are you nuts?" She looked oer at him as she stopped at a red light.

He chuckled. "Everything about you is cute."

She groaned. "Stop making fun about me and that stupid shirt! You picked that in the first place!"

"Hey, I wasn't making fun. You are cute!" He smiled at her but she glared at him. "Well... sometimes." He teased her and kissed her gently.

The light switched to green and CD started to drive again. "You're driving me crazy!" She sighed. "Come on Nate, we have to focus... this is work and we have to be professional aga...." She stopped talking when she felt his hand on her thigh and his lips in her neck.

"I know... in 5 minutes." He whispered and continued to nibble her neck.

She softly moaned and stopped at another red light. "Okay." She whispered and turned around and kissed him back, soon the kiss got deeper and deeper and they forgot everything around them until the cars behind them started to honk like crazy because the light was green again. That made them pull back again.

"All professional now." Nate promised.

CD sighed. "I'll try." She kicked down the gas again and soon they arrived at the crime scene.

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Next scene is my second fav couple again... but I ain't gonna tell who that is! :p

PS: CD AND NATE KISSED!!!!! :D

CD and Nate...tsk tsk tsk...

Your Online! that means MORE FICCY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
Your Online! that means MORE FICCY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
lol dang! busted! okay then....

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Meanwhile in the other car, Jinny was driving, still heading towards Big Sur. Suddenly she saw a red light blinking. "Ahh damn, I need a gas refill." She said.

"Huh? Wha? What?" Teddy had dozed off and snapped awake upon hearing her voice.

She chuckled. "I need a gas refill." With that she pulled up at a gas station. She smiled and leaned over and kissed him. "So tired?"

He blushed. "What shall I say, you've worn me out and I need to gather some energy again so you can wear me out again." He smirked.

She chuckled. "We're halfway there I think. How about we grab a bite for lunch before we head off again?" She motioned towards a truck stop next to the gas station.

"Sounds good to me, now that you mention it... I'm starving." He kissed her temple. "I can drive afterwards if you want."

"I don't care, up to you." She smiled and they both got out of the car and filled it up again.

After that they walked into the truck stop that was pretty dirty and they both made faces right away. "Ewwwwww." Jinny wrinkled her nose.

"Big ewww, I'm not eating anything here." Teddy said.

"Me neither." She agreed.

"Tell ya what, we'll get some sandwiches at the gas station, drive some more til we find a nice spot and have a roadside picnic?" He led her out again.

Smiling she nodded. "Sounds great."

"Alright then." He smiled back at her and they bought some sandwiches, chips, sodas and some more unhealthy stuff for a nice picnic.

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like?

lol unhealthy stuff sounds like me :lol:




nneedd MMMMMMOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
lol unhealthy stuff sounds like me :lol:




nneedd MMMMMMOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

yeah! I need more too! LOL somebody write me a CD Nate fic that has Snapple in it too and I'll post more! He... now there was a good idea :):D :wave:

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
yeah! I need more too! LOL somebody write me a CD Nate fic that has Snapple in it too and I'll post more! He... now there was a good idea :):D :wave:




ok! if you post more ill right you a fic! but you have to post first them ill wright-promise! *puts hand behind back and crosses fingers lol* just kidding....



Nate: Ceeds (a little nickname i made up), ever since the first time i saw you i knew i really liked you. but all this time i was scared to tell you how i felt, and them lily came along,-i like her,i really do-shes good but you? you're great and i love you! Candice Lauraine DeLorenzo will you marry me?
CD:......................









:D want more fic? wright more fic!:D;)

hahaha! okay that's cute! That deserves more :)

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CD and Nate got out with their jackets covering the shirts walking up to the uniformed officer as Nate asked, "So what have we got here?"

"Two dead hookers. Looks like they ODed on heroine." The uniformed officer told them.

CD nodded and walked up to where the bodies were lying. She glanced over them and suddenly stopped dead in her tracks.

Nate walked up behind CD and seeing her reaction as he said, "Do you know them?"

She shook her head. "Not really...." Pointing at the woman that was lying at her feet she said "Her name is Charlotte I think..."

Nate bended down to get a closer look, "Someone you arrested once?"

She shook her head again and looked at the officer again. "You sure they are pros?"

"Yeah, they have records and everything." He affirmed and walked away then.

Nate looked up at CD and said, "He is gone now what is it?"

She looked down at the woman again for a split second. "Oh god.... I'm gonna be sick." She uttered and held her hand in front of her mouth before rushing off towards the bathroom, slamming the door shut behind her.

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:) poor CD :( lol

Your Online! that means more FIC!!!!!!!!!!!:D

Nate quickly got up and started toward where his partner had headed as Nora the medical examiner said, "Time of death was about 6 am this morning looks like they have needle tracks in between their fingers."

Nate stopped and looked at Nora as he said, "So you think they ODed on something?"

Nora said, "It looks like it. Can't be 100% sure until the lab results come back. What CD have a weak stomach this morning?"

Nate looked off where his partner had headed as he replied, "We need those lab reports ASAP. I am not sure what happened with CD, if we are finished here, I wil go check and see if she is okay."

Nora replied, "That should do it. I will get the results to you as soon as I can. By all means go check on her, tell her I hope she feels better."

Nate didn't hear the last part as he was already jogging towards the direction his partner had went.

CD had thrown up and now was letting the cool water stream over her hands and splashed some into her face, wondering if this really was happening.

Nate came up to the bathroom as he slowed his job to a brisk walk he walked up to the women's door and knocking on the door he said, "CD are you okay?"

"Yeah I'm fine." She called out.

Nate stood outside the door waiting for his partner to come out leaning up against the wall, worried what had happened to CD back there.

CD knew Nate was waiting outside most likely so she quickly regained her composure and gathered her facade again to pretend she was fine when she walked out. "Sorry bout that" She smiled at him.

Nate looked at CD as she walked out, seeing how pale she looked, knowing she had thrown up in there, he said, "Mind telling me what is going on?"

"Nothing." She shrugged. "So you talked to Nora already?"

Nate looked at CD as he said "Nora said the time of death was around 6 am and they had needle tracks between their fingers. She will get the lab results to us as soon as possible. Nora also wanted to know if you had a weak stomach this morning and wanted me to tell you she hoped you felt better. Now that is out of the way how about the truth now. Who is the woman you thought was Charlotte, and why did she affect you like that?"

She took a deep breath and ran her hand over her eyebrows, knowing there was no sense in pretending, he knew her better. "Look, I don't know her personally or anything, it's a case like any other."

"I am not buying that? I saw your face when you saw her like you knew her?" He looked at her like he looked at witnesses who weren't quite telling the truth.

MMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
MMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ha, my lone little reader... so just for you, cuz ya know, no one else is reading it anymore... but oh well :)

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CD knew that look all to well so she swallowed and nodded. "Okay, alright, you really wanna know how I know her and why I'll never forget her face? Because you're bound to never forget the face of a woman who you catch in your own bed with your husband! There you know it! Satisfied?"

Nate walked towards CD as he took her in his arms and replied softly in her ear, "I am so sorry you were married to a total idiot. Why would he want to be with any one else other than you. I have no clue what he was thinking but I know if I had been lucky enough to have been your husband I would never wanted to be with anyone else. CD you mean a lot to me and I am thankful that we have found each other, you never have to worry about that happening with the two of us."

She smiled at that and hugged him back. "Thanks Nate, that's sweet of you, and yeah, he was a jerk, I mean knowing he cheated on me was one thing, I'm over that, I really am.... but I had no idea... I mean... dammit a cheap crack whore? Sorry that caught me off guard."

Nate held CD away so he could look in her eyes as he replied, "You never have to apologize to me for how you feel. I want to know how you feel, that is a part of you and that is what I love about you."

She smiled at him. "You know you're the only one who even gets close to knowing how I feel." She tenderly kissed his lips after making sure no one was watching. "But this really is just another case, it just shocked me, okay?"

"As long as you are okay is all I care about." He smiled back at her.

"I am okay. Any witnesses?" She let go of him again.

Nate looked back up at the crime scene as he shyly admitted, "I didn't get that far, I was to worried about you."

"I'm sorry I got you worried." She looked down guiltily. "I didn't mean to do that"

"I know you didn't, I am just glad you are okay. Maybe we should head back up to find out if there was any witnesses?" He looked over to where the usual commotion was still happening.

"Sounds like a good idea." She nodded and walked back over again to the officer and Nora, not realizing her jacket was open again now because she had put it off in the bathroom.

Nora noticed the partners walking back up as she saw the shirt that CD is wearing she commented, "Feeling better and nice shirt there? New style."

"Yeah. I'm fine thanks. Upset stomach, nothing to worry about." She looked down and quickly buttoned up her jacket again. "So what else can you tell us?"

Nora looked at her clipboard as she said, Nothing to add taht I haven't already told your partner."

CD nodded and looked at the officer who held out a little bag with a white powder in it. "Found that underneath the redhead when we turned the body."

Nate stuck his finger in and pulled some of the white substance out as he sniffed it and then put the small amount in his mouth he replied, "It is pure. Any witnesses?"

The officer shook his head at that. "None we know of."

"Who found the bodies?" CD asked.

He motioned over to one of his collegues who was talking to a very suntanned man who had his hair shoulderlong and pulled back into a ponytail, sunglasses on his head, a hawaiian shirt and a lot of golden necklaces, bracelets and rings with big rocks.

"Let me guess, a concerned bypasser?" CD asked sarcastically.

The officer looked over towards the collegue and the man he was talking to as he replied, "You got it."

CD rolled her eyes and looked at Nate before walking over to the two men. "Thank you officer, we'll take it from here."

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MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!







where is everyone?!

here's more

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He nodded and walked off as CD showed the other man her badge. "I'm Inspector DeLorenzo, this is my partner, Inspector Basso. We need to ask you some questions."

The man in the hawaiin shirt looked at the badge as he said, "Any relation to a Paul DeLorenzo?"

She raised her eyebrow. "How do you know him?"

"He was one of my best customers." He smirked.

"Customers, huh?" She asked. "Customer as what?"

Chuckling he answered "Can't really say Inspector."

CD had enough of it. 'best customer... bastard.' she thought and upon seeing the guy's smug grin something in her just clicked and she reached out and punched him right into the face, breaking his nose by that.

The man looked at the Inspector as he held his nose and said, "I take it you are related to Paul."

"Not anymore." CD hissed angrily

"Ex husband then?" He smirked even more.

"That's none of your buisness." She growled and walked away, fighting the urge to break more than just his nose.

Nate watched as his partner walked away then turned his attention to the man, "What kind of customer was Paul?"

The guy had to laugh a little but then his nose hurt too much and he cringed. "He was that kind of customer who came to me for help because he wasn't getting what he needed at home, if you get my drift."

Nate resisted the urge to slug the man himself as he looked over to see his partner waiting by the car, knowing she desevered better than the sleezeball she had been married to he returned his attention to the man as he said, "I get your drift alright. You pimp these poor innocent girls for cash to make a living how low is that? Do you know how patheitc it is?"

"I never said anything like that. I'm not a pimp." He smirked. "And you can't prove me otherwise... so if that was all Inspector... I have a buisness that I need to run"

"No that is not all. Do you know those two women that were killed?" Nate didn't let him off the hook.

"Never seen em before." He shrugged.

"Can I ask what you are doing here then?" Nate asked.

"I was taking a walk during my lunchbreak and saw it, and being the concerned citizen I am I thought I'd tell these cops that drove around the corner."

"Concerned citizen I see, how about coming to the station and making a statement then." This guy was pissing him off more by the minute.

"Of course inspector... right after I call my lawyer to sue her." He motioned over at CD and held his bleeding nose still.

Nate looked over at CD too and back at the perp. "I think you can call your lawyer from the station if that is what you want but I think you should come with us to the station for now."

He slightly glared at Nate but knew there wasn't much he could do. "Alright..." He then smirked and gave him his businesscard. "In case you need more than she's giving you..." He motioned over at CD again and winked at Nate with a grin.

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no idea where everyone is, not here.

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
MMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm here!!! That was great post more!

okee, here's some more :)

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"You can keep your card. I am very satisifed with what I have thank you. Let's go." Nate glared at him.

He chuckled but walked over to the car where CD was still waiting. "So how is Paulie doing these days? Haven't seen him in a while."

She glared at him and opened the backdoor of the car and shoved him inside hard and slammed the door shut behind him.

"I swear I'm going to hurt him." She muttered under her breath

Nate looked at her and said, "I am sorry for what he said and what Paul did but he was the one that found them so we need to take his statement."

She nodded. "I know... but he's so close to getting me really mad!"

"Tell you what when we get back to the station I can handle this jerk alone." He was getting mad himself though.

She smiled at him. "Thanks. That's nice." She then got into the car and sat down behind the wheel again and started the engine.

"I see you like to be in control." The guy smirked from behind. "No wonder Paul came to me... he needed more of a woman than a control freak."

Nate got in the car as he heard this statement he looked in the back at the man saying, "I think it would be wise if you keep your comments to yourself"

CD nodded at that. "Not a good idea to piss of a control freak who has a gun and knows how to use it."

At that he quickly shut his mouth and CD smirked at Nate.

CD put the car and gear as the three headed for the station knowing it would be a long ride she glanced at Nate for a second before looking back at the road as she said, "When we get to the station you are on."

Nate nodded at that. He could understand all too well why she was getting pissed off. Every comment had infuriated him too and he just hoped he wouldn't lose his temper when he was alone with the guy.

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Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
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Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*


LOL quoting yourself?

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Theodore opened the passenger door for Jin taking her into his arms he covered her mouth with his. The kiss seemed to go on forever as they broke apart. Teddy said, "I will drive the rest of the way, get some rest you will need it when we get to the picnic."

Jinny chuckled at that. "Got something up your sleeve for that picnic?" She grinned, not that she did mind. Obediently she sat down in the passenger's seat and caught herself yawning. She really needed some rest.

Teddy got in the driver's side as he saw Jinny yawning. "You will have to wait and see when we get to the picnic. A little tired are we?"

"Who me? No way." She grinned at him and kissed his cheek but yawned again.

He grinned back. "The yawn that was because of?"

"Because... I'm bored." She teased him. "Now are you going to drive or do I have to hitch a ride?"

"No you don't have to hitch, we will be in the picnic area in no time so get some rest." He kissed her cheek.

She entertwined her hand with his. "I will, I promise" She smiled at him.

Teddy headed for the highway as he looked over to see his beautiful fiancee with her eyes closed, glad she was getting some rest.

Still holding his hand Jinny relaxed and nodded off a little, knowing she was safe with Teddy by her side. If somebody had told her a few years ago that she would settle down with a guy like him she would have laughed her ass off, but now she knew that he was perfect for her and that finally somebody had managed to tame her. Though how that had happened she had no idea.

Teddy headed down the road to Big Sur as he kept his eyes open for a remote spot for a picnic. He looked over to Jinny as he looked at her he was so glad that he decided to ask her this morning about marrying him. When he was not with her he was always thinking about her. He knew she was the one for him the moment he laid eyes on her.

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there there.... hope ya like this too

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
LOL quoting yourself?



:D yep! my hands were sore and i didn't feel like typing





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and its about time time you post more jin and teddy!:rolleyes:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
and its about time time you post more jin and teddy!:rolleyes:

sorry, I'm just a tid more of a CD/Nate shipper person :) but here's even more Jin and teddy! :)

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A little while later Teddy found the perfect spot for their picnic. He parked the car and quietly got out and took the stuff down to the little beach where some rather big rocks would perfectly hide them so they could enjoy watching the waves but no one could possibly spot them. Satisfied with having set up everything nicely on a blanket he had found in the trunk he walked back to the car and opened the passenger's door and started to shower her face with kisses. "Rise and shine sweetheart." He whispered.

Jinny responded to the kisses on her face as she moved slightly as soon found her way to his mouth the kiss deepening quickly as their bodies started to respond to one another's touch. Teddy finally broke the kiss as she helped Jinny out of the car, "Close your eyes and follow me."

"You really think I'd follow you blindly?" She smiled at him.

"Sweetheart you really think I would do anything to you? I am shocked." He put his hand over his heart.

"Yes. I am convinced you led me here because you want to sell me to some rich guy to be his house slave. And of course I am naive enough to fall for your trick." She laughed and closed her eyes. "There, see? I trust you completely."

"HA HA nice one, But seriously, you know I trust you completely also." Teddy entwined his hand with Jinny's as he led her to the beach. Once there he turned around as he said, "Okay you can open your eyes now." Jinny opened her eyes as she looked at what Teddy had done to the picnic spot as she noticed that noone could see them also from the highway. "Well what do you think?"

"I think you do have ulterior motives my dear." She smirked and kissed his cheek. "But I love it! It's wonderful."

Satisfied with that Teddy grinned at her and sat down on the blanket and pulled her down with him. "Ulterior motives aren't all that bad. You know seize the day, live for the moment."

"I never said it's bad." She grinned. "As a matter of fact I can't wait to find out more about yours." She winked at him and Teddy smiled mischeviously.

"Mine..." He grinned and opened a sandwich and held it out in front of her. "... are to feed my starving fiancee."

She chuckled and took a bite. After chewing she smirked at him. "Somehow I doubt that's all you wanna do."

"I just want to feed my fiancee and maybe have a little desert."

"Ooooh, is that so?" She grinned. "I think I'd rather want the dessert right away."

"Right away huh, I can do that." He smirked

"Then go for it." She smiled at him

Teddy laid his sandwich down as he leaned in towards Jinny he captured her mouth as he slowly laid her back with him as he continued to deepen the kiss on the way down, Jinny's hands went up around his neck, pulling him closer to him if that was possible.

"Who needs food with a dessert like this?" Jinny whispered slowly unwrapping him from his clothes.

Teddy removed all of Jinny's clothes and added them to the pile that had accumlated. "I am glad you approve." he said as he took her mouth again.

"More than approve" she whispered and gave herself to him completely.

He trailed kisses down her neck and back up again taking her mouth with more urgency this time, both of them giving in to their ulterior motives.

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YAY!!







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For my loyal reader here :)

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A little while later CD pulled up at the station again. Nate opened the door and led the pimp out. He nodded at CD who gave him a smile in return. "This way." He said and the two men went inside.

CD took a deep breath. She knew exactly what was going to happen next and she needed a break. So she headed over to Anchorside knowing Nate was leading that jerk into an interrogation room and let him sweat there for a few minutes while he told Kate what they had found out so far.

"CD! HEY!" Raina called out upon seeing her walk in. She and Magda had just ordered lunch and she waved at CD frantically, wanting her to come over.

CD forced a smile and walked over to them. "Hey guys. How's it going?"

"Great!" Raina grinned. "We just ordered lunch, wanna join us?"

"Ah, no thanks, I just stopped for a coffee. We actually have a suspect upstairs." With that she motioned the waiter to come over and ordered a coffee, extra large and extra strong.

Magda made a face at that. "Not exactly healthy."

"But exactly what I need right now." She said. "I think I'll wait at the bar. See ya later." With that she walked over to the bar because these two were exactly what she did not need right now.

"Afraid you'd kill them?" The bartender chuckled. He knew the bunch well enough.

"Right now I'm afraid I'd kill anybody." She gave him a small glare.

"Whoa whoa..." He held his hands up. "I'm just the guy who brings the coffee." With that he put hers down in front of her.

"Thanks." She paid for it and he nodded.

CD left the Anchorside again and walked up to the interrogation room and took a big sip of her coffee as she started to look through the two-sided mirror to watch Nate.

Nate sat there staring at the pimp in front of him waiting for an answer as to how he knew the deceased.

The pimp looked up and said, "Your partner going to join us or is it just us guys?"

He glared at him. "What my partner is doing is none of your buisness."

"Yeah just like I bet she didn't have time for her husband that is why he came to me." He smirked.

CD crumpled the papercup in her hand at that, glad that she wasn't inside. But Nate got pissed as well. He jumped up and slammed his hands down on the table and now glaring him straight into his eyes. "The two women! How do you knew them?"

But he smirked even more at that. "Calm down maybe you need to get laid so you aren't so edgy."

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Nate took a deep breath and decided to use that against him. "Let me guess you have just the offer for me?"

He grinned, he knew he had been right. "Of course, tall blonde who will fulfill your wildest dreams."

"What about those two women?" Nate asked again. "Whose dreams were they supposed to fulfill last night?"

"Seesh is that all you care about those two deceased women, man you really need laid. But I have a wonderful women who will not turn down any request that you ask for." He had smelled his chance to make money and used that.

"I'm not interested. And in case you haven't noticed yet, I'm a cop, investigating a murder case, so yes, all I care about are these two poor girls who didn't deserve to die like they did." Nate narrowed his eyes again. This jerk was giving him the creeps.

"Fine it is your loss you don't know what you are missing, as for those two girls they weren't working for me last night at all, maybe they were working on some extra cash for themselves." He shrugged.

He nodded at that. "Then how come you found them?"

"Well officer I was walking to my job and I found the young ladies and I thought I would do my good deed of the day by calling and letting some one know instead of continuing on my way. Is that okay with you?" He smiled a fake smile.

"First of all it's Inspector." Nate sat down again. "And your good deed of the day is greatly appreciated, but you need to give us some more information here."

"Inspector huh? Who did you do to get that ranking?" He chuckled over his joke. "As for all the information I have well like I said I was on my way to work when I saw the two women laying there and not moving of course being the concerned citizen I am I went to check to see if they were alright before I called 911 to report it, coming back to show the officers where I found the ladies at."

"And what about their names? One of them was Charlotte, is that correct?" He tried to stay calm.

"Who said I knew their names?" he shrugged again.

"Alright, so you don't know their names..." He took a dep breath again, this wasn't going anywhere.

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
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:o im famous for quoting myself..........

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
:o im famous for quoting myself..........

yes you certainly are lol.

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At the same time outside CD's cellphone rang. "DeLorenzo" She answered. "Nora, yeah... okay. Yes, thank you." She hung up again andknocked on the door before popping her head in. "Nate, you got a minute?"

Nate looked up at his partner as he said, "Sure I have a minute." Turning his attention back to the pimp he said, "Maybe you could jot down on a piece of paper the events of what happened when you found the young women."

CD waited until Nate had followed her out. "Nora called, time of death was definitely around 6 am, they ODed on crack and both had a huge amount of sperm in their stomachs."

Nate replied, "I see they were apparently give some johns a good time I see. Was there any sperm any where else or just in their stomachs?"

"Nora said she found sperm everywhere, just most of it in the stomachs. She said we'll get the official report in a couple of hours. I think he knows more than he's telling." She motioned at the mirror where the guy was scribbling on a notepad.

Nate looked up at the pimp in the interogation room, "Well at least he is writing more than what I was getting out of him. I think you are right and he knows more than what he is stating."

She nodded. "You need my help in there?"

Nate nodded, "I would love to have your help in there but I know it is not where you want to be so I can handle it."

She smiled at him. "If I see you keep on getting nowhere I'll come in okay?"

"Thanks, I think I will let him stew for a minute while I go get some coffee." He smiled back.

She held up the crumpled papercup. "I'll come with ya"

"I see you weren't having as much fun as I was." He motioned at it.

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
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more more more more more more!!!!!!!
HEHE!

Originally posted by CD_Nate _4ever
more more more more more more!!!!!!!
HEHE!

yay! TWO!!! readers now! wow!

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She rolled her eyes. "I'm just glad when we're done with this one." She started to walk towards the elevators. "You got plans for lunch yet?"

"Yeah spending it with you? Wonder where Jinny and Teddy are at this moment, miles aways from here and enjoying themselves I would imagine." He sighed.

CD grinned. "Wouldn't surprise me. Jealous?" She entered the elevator.

"Well let's see they are off galvanting the countryside probably having a picnic and we are stuck here with a pimp. Does it show?" He asked.

She chuckled and pressed the button for the lobby and the elevator doors closed, leaving them inside alone. "Okay, I'm jealous too."

"See I knew I wasn't the only one, they are getting to do what they want when they want to do it. If Teddy wants to hold her he can and kiss her when he wants. I don't think that is fair you know." He sighed.


"Well we could sneak off for lunch and go somewhere where we're alone?" She smiled at him. "Or we'll join Raina and Magda at Anchorside."

He made a face at that. "Knowing our luck it will be with Mag and Raina."

"Better not. Apart from that I'm sick of running around with my jacket! This is warm." She sighed

"Maybe we can tell Cap we are going to go change?" He suggested

"Good idea." She nodded.

"Might work, it would be nice though to do what we want today when we want like a couple of other people I know. Yes I know they got engaged today and that is why." He smiled, happy for them.

She smiled back. "Yeah. It's great though, I'm happy for them. And we can meet up again after work and do what we want to do then. Right now unfortunately we have a case to solve, no matter how annoying it is."

"Yeah I know, wonder if Jinny and Teddy will be back to play pool with us tonight. I thought that we all were going to play more pool." He looked at her.

"They said they'd be back tonight, right? And as for the pool, sure, anytime when you wanna lose again." She grinned.

"Yeah we will see about the losing remark. I think Teddy and I held our own against you and Jinny." He objected

"But you lost big time against me only. And don't you dare say you let me win!" Pointing her forefinger at him she grinned triumphantly.

"Okay I won't say it." Nate smirked back.

She rolled her eyes. "Just wait and see, I'm gonna wax your ass again tonight"

He arched up his eyebrow. "OH wax my ass huh where did that come from. Not if I wax yours first."

"Admit it Nate, what you really wanna wax is the floor." She winked at him.

"I can name a few things you might like to wax." A mischevious smile was playing on his lips. "...and the floor isn't one of them

"Oh really? Like what? Now I'm curious." She crossed her arms.

"I would love to show you but I don't think the cap would like that. So it will have to wait til lunch." He smiled.

"You're such a tease." She pouted.

"I will show you tease." Nate backed CD up against the wall as his hands went to the stop button, turning his attention back to CD he said, "I bet you wouldn't mind waxing my member now would you?" leaning in to capture her mouth before she could think of replying.

CD totally hadn't expected that but couldn't help but kissing him back full of fire.

As the kiss really heated up and Nate's hands went for the shirt he had so carefully picked out all of a sudden a loud shrill could be heard from inside the elevator.

CD pulled back at that. "What the hell?"

"Who cares." Nate then went straight for her body as he pulled it close against his and leaned in for a kiss.

She captured his mouth with her own again, knowing they shouldn't but just not able to resist.

The loud shrill sound continuing in the backgorund as people from all over the building could hear the shrill sound coming from the elevators. Meanwhile inside the elevator stuck between 3rd and 4th Nate pushed CD's jacket off her shoulders as he had her pinned against the wall, she could feel what these kisses were doing to him in the elevator.

CD's hands weren't idle either, the shrill long forgotten she helped Nate out of his jacket and the shirt too, making sure not to tear it since they didn't have another.

Nate carefully helped CD out of her shirt as he gently lowered her to the floor of the elevator. Knowing that he couldn't wait much longer to make her his.

CD fumbled around with his belt and got rid of his pants before pulling him on top of her.

Nate helped CD out of her pants as he joined the two there on the floor of the elevator.

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
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YEA!!!


btw-i just...umm...posted more on my fic and....um...not that i care cause....umm.... i don't... and ummm... sneeze read it please sneeze .....uhhh.... scuse me....:o

okay, i read it and I think it needs... uhh how shall I say? More CD/Nate ;)

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
okay, i read it and I think it needs... uhh how shall I say? More CD/Nate ;)



read what? my fic? if you did which fic? i wrote 3? and if you read it why didn't you reply?! huh?! huh?! lol j/k

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
read what? my fic? if you did which fic? i wrote 3? and if you read it why didn't you reply?! huh?! huh?! lol j/k
the one you just updated. And I didn't reply because I just read it when you said read it cause I pretty much just read CD/Nate

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
the one you just updated. And I didn't reply because I just read it when you said read it cause I pretty much just read CD/Nate


oh.:o you didn't reply cause there was no cd/nate in it? if i add sum will you start readin'?

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
I pretty much just read CD/Nate


:eek: cool! thats just like me! exept i only read jin/teddy fics! and sumtimes cd/nate.....

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
oh.:o you didn't reply cause there was no cd/nate in it? if i add sum will you start readin'?

no, that's not what I meant. I didn't read it at first because it wasn't a CD/Nate fic. Then you said please read it here, so I went to read it, and then I came back here and said I read it because you had said please read it here. If you wanna add CD/Nate that's great, but if you don't wanna add them then don't. Don't write what you think others want to read, write what you want to write.

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
no, that's not what I meant. I didn't read it at first because it wasn't a CD/Nate fic. Then you said please read it here, so I went to read it, and then I came back here and said I read it because you had said please read it here. If you wanna add CD/Nate that's great, but if you don't wanna add them then don't. Don't write what you think others want to read, write what you want to write.



ahh!:cool: i see. well 'Moon Lake' will have cd and nate in it but their probly not going to be together-i havn't decided yet~ im mostly a jinn/teddy person, but they'll be cd and nate in my other fics! promise;)


btw- how bout sum more fic?

!YAY!!! New Page! lets celebrate with more fic!

Whoopee !!!!!!!!!!!! Go Nate go!:yourock: And more !!!!!!!

More Please

haha, thanks guys! :)

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Eventually the elevator doors opened again and CD was running her hand through her hair, to smoothen it out a little again

Kate was standing on the first floor waiting through the shrill to take the elevator back upstairs after her lunch was now over as she looked up and saw CD and Nate coming off the elevator and noticed that there were now wearing the same shirts only CD had Nate's on and Nate had CD's on. Cap said. "Didn't like how the shirts were that you had to change who was wearing what?"

"Huh?" CD frowned and then looked down and saw what had happened. "Oh"

Nate replied, "Just got tired of what mine said so we switched."

CD nodded. "Yeah, he kept on getting stupid comments."

Cap replied, "I see and you don't?"

"Nope, see, I'm smart enough to actually be a genius." She grinned.

Nate replied, "I heard that."

"Then think about it." She grinned at him.

Cap looked at her two inspectors as she said, "So what do you have so far on this case?"

"A pimp in the interrogation room. Nate's grilling him, we just stopped for some coffee and gave him some time to sweat, hopefully that'll make him a little more talkactive." CD summed it up.

Cap said, "What has he given you so far?"

"He's just a concerned citizen who happened to walk by." Nate answered.

"But he also happened to offer Nate the fulfillment of his wildest dreams." CD added.

Cap looked at CD as she said, "Hmmm maybe if all else fails Nate should take him up on it."

"Hey!" CD protested angrily

Cap looked at CD as she said, "Calm down. I was just thinking that there is no better way to get to know him then by asking one of his employees."

CD nodded, of course she hadn't thought about it that way. "Yeah... actually... good point."

Cap said, "Well keep me informed I think Nate should set up a date with one of his employees for tomorrow night that way Jinny can help CD keep an eye on Nate and his date."

CD nodded. "Alright." She then looked at Nate. "Come on, let's get this over with." He nodded and followed her back to the interrogation room.

Kate watched after those two and smiled slowly to herself as she thought 'CD really has him whipped into shape'.

yay! That was great!! Post more

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MOREMOREMORE!
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shel

Hey!! I'm new here, but cat knows me!! SO POST MORE!!!!!!!! This is awesome!!!! We need to know what happens next!![/

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
Hey!! I'm new here, but cat knows me!! SO POST MORE!!!!!!!! This is awesome!!!! We need to know what happens next!![/

Yeah I know ya... for an amazing 5 minutes or so ;) lol. Anyhow, welcome here! And here's some more. :)

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"Ehhh... wait." Jinny stopped Teddy from walking back to the car again. "You buttoned your shirt up wrong" She smiled at him and kissed him while she adjusted it. "There, that's neat again."

Teddy looked at Jinny as he said, "Are you sure it is straight now?" He looked down and then up at Jinny with a mischeavous grin.

"That my dear depends on what you're talking about." She smirked back at him.

"My shirt and when did you think I was talking about, I see where your mind is even after that incredible picnic we just shared." Teddy looked at his watch as he leaned in and kissed Jinny softly on the lips and said "we were only here for 2 1/2 hours."

She chuckled and wrapped her arm around his waist. "Which means we needed about twice as long to reach Big Sur than it's usually estimated. Wonder if they noticed we're gone yet?"

"Twice as long, what are we going to do for the rest of the day when we get there? I bet they notice we are gone." Teddy wrapped his arm around her waist and headed back towards the car.

"Oh I don't know, play scrabble? What else should recently engaged couples do in Big Sur, huh?" She grinned and kissed his cheek. "I just hope Cap won't be too mad." She sighed.

Teddy said, "I don't know probably the same thing we have done most of the morning and on the way here. I am sure she will understand once she finds out why."

Jinny nodded. "She's not THAT bad... sometimes."

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
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Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

lol you really are the queen of quoting yourself... hey maybe I should do that.. I just quote my last post so it looks like I posted more... and then I say they had a Deja Vu... yeah that's a good idea...

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Teddy replied "Only sometimes she is not that bad."

Jinny replied "Yeah only sometimes and of course we are going to do what we have done most of the morning in Big Sur, if we get there at this rate."

He chuckled. "In that case I can't wait to get there." He gently kissed her again.

The kiss rather quickly turned passionate as Jinny slowly pulled back from the kiss as she took a deep breath before saying, "I think I should drive in order to get there in time."

"Good Idea." He handed her the keys. "We should have taken a patrol car, with the lights and siren" He smirked.

Jinny smirked as she got in behind the wheel and gently reached under the seat and pulled out a red light stating, "Your wish is my command."

He chuckled. "You're the perfect woman for me, you know that?" He kissed her cheek. "Now come on Inspector, get us to the crime scene"

Jinny put the red light on top of the car and flipped the switch as she put the key in the ignition and started the car putting it in gear she looked over at her finace and said, "I would buckle up if I was you."

He did that and was pressed into the seat as she raced off. "Hey whoa..." He smirked

Jinny glanced over as she said, "You wanted to get to the crime scene."

"Oh yeah... Though I think we have to turn it into a crime scene first" He winked at her.

"I think we can accomplish that once we get there." She smirked and kicked down the gas even more.

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
lol you really are the queen of quoting yourself... hey maybe I should do that.. I just quote my last post so it looks like I posted more... and then I say they had a Deja Vu... yeah that's a good idea...




HEY!!:eek: :mad: you can't do that! thats cheating your readers!



I WANT !!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!! and i don't want a quote! lol

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
HEY!!:eek: :mad: you can't do that! thats cheating your readers!



I WANT !!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!! and i don't want a quote! lol

Jinny glanced over as she said, "You wanted to get to the crime scene."

"Oh yeah... Though I think we have to turn it into a crime scene first" He winked at her.

"I think we can accomplish that once we get there." She smirked and kicked down the gas even more.

Jinny glanced over as she said, "You wanted to get to the crime scene."

"Oh yeah... Though I think we have to turn it into a crime scene first" He winked at her.

"I think we can accomplish that once we get there." She smirked and kicked down the gas even more.

Jinny glanced over as she said, "You wanted to get to the crime scene."

"Oh yeah... Though I think we have to turn it into a crime scene first" He winked at her.

"I think we can accomplish that once we get there." She smirked and kicked down the gas even more.

Jinny glanced over as she said, "You wanted to get to the crime scene."

"Oh yeah... Though I think we have to turn it into a crime scene first" He winked at her.

"I think we can accomplish that once we get there." She smirked and kicked down the gas even more.




Major Deja Vu-ing there.... :p ;) :happyface

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
I WANT !!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!! and i don't want a quote! lol



i want a new part of fic! do you understand me!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
i want a new part of fic! do you understand me!

lol you're lucky that I'm such a nice and caring person.... and that I'm desperate and don't wanna lose my last reader...

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CD slammed the black case folder with the SFPD logo down on the table and sat down opposite the pimp, glaring at him. "Alright. I want their names. Now."

The guy just stared at CD as he said, "What names would that be, and why are you in here now?"

"You know what names I'm talking about." She opened the case folder and shoved it over to him with photos of the dead girls. "And I'm here to get the answers that I want. And I won't leave until I have those answers."

The man looked at the pictures and then back up to the blonde standing in front of him as he said, "Look sweetheart, I don't have their names as I have told you I was only walking by and being a concerned citizen I've done what any concerned citizen would. I called the police and this is what I get for my troubles."

CD got up and walked up to him. "You might wanna take a closer look" She slammed his head down so his nose was not even an inch above the pictures now. "This should refresh your memories."

The man looked at the pictures as he adressed Nate, "Nope not a clue and when I get out of here I am pressing charges on your partner here, she really needs to get laid she wouldn't have so much anger and tension if she did, oh wait is that why the MR. always wanted some action on the side."

"I get laid enough." CD hissed and let go of his head again but quickly shoved the table aside and slammed her foot in between his legs on the chair, hardly missing his crotch and kicking the chair back against the wall. "The names. NOW!" She glared at him and made sure that if she wouldn't get the names this time he would regret it for the rest of his life.

The man looked up at the blonde and then looked over at the guy as he said, "Your partner is nuts. I feel for you having to work with her all day. The offer still stands if you want to meet some nice young women." Looking back to the blonde he said, "I believe I have a right to request a lawyer do I not?"

"Unfortunately even scumbags have that right." She glared at him again and then gave Nate a 'it worked, take up the offer' look and left the room.

OOOOOH I like...POST MORE

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
I'm desperate and don't wanna lose my last reader...



oh, don't worry im almost impossible to lose- unless....

This is GREAT!! MORE please!!!!!

Here's some more...
We don't have much more written yet though...

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Nate looked at the guy as he said, "I have been thinking when can I set up an appointment with one of these nice young women?"

He smirked at that and got out his phone. "Whenever you want. What are your preferences?"

"Why don't you suprise me." He forced a smile.

CD stood on the outside of the interrogation room looking in the window shaking her head at the comment Nate just made saying under her breath, "I hope you know what you are getting yourself into with that statement."

"Hey, I can make all of your fantasies come true. No matter if you want a naughty nurse or maybe you have fantasies about that little bitch of partner you have there eh?" He played with the cellphone in his hand.

CD glared in the window as she wanted to put that man in his place but thought against it.

He grinned. "I have this really tall blonde chick... she looks a lot like her. And she will do everything you want her to do. Your wildest dreams will come true, no doubt."

Nate looked at the guy and then towards the window as he smiled a little before he replied, "Sure why not let's do it."

Ohhhhhhhhhhh, i can't wait to see what happens next. ;)

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
This is GREAT!! MORE please!!!!!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*


*gasp* you didn't quote yourself!

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
*gasp* you didn't quote yourself!




hows this for a quote?! :mad: lol j/k

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
hows this for a quote?! :mad: lol j/k

how's this for a reply then? peace:

lol

ahhh whats gunna happen? POST MORE :D

He made a call and set up a date for Nate the next evening. "That's 300 the hour"

Nate looked at the guy as he said, "Are you out of your every loving mind?"

"Alright. 250. Badge bonus." He grinned

Nate took out his wallet mumbling the whole time, "That is highway robbery, maybe I am in the wrong line of business."

"Oh I always need security guys... if you ever wanna change profession." He took the money and laughed

Nate looked at the man as he said, "Let me think about it. I will go get your lawyer here if you will write the name and number down."

"Alright" He did that and handed him a card. "That's him"

Walking for the door Nate responded, "I will be back when your lawyer arrives, putting the card in his wallet he said, but before I leave how will I know who she is?"

"Go to the Ramada on Market street. book a room and sit down in the lobby. You will recognize her."

"Sure, now let me get that lawyer for you." he nodded.

He nodded too and grinned to himself.

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
This is GREAT!! MORE please!!!!!

CD looked at Nate as he walked out and couldn't help but grin. "So you have fantasies about that bitch of a partner you have, eh?"

"Well I wouldn't go that far." He answered.

She raised her eyebrow. "What? No fantasies?"

He smirked at her. "You're doing a pretty good job making my deepest and darkest fantasies come true already."

"Oh is that so?" She grinned back.

"Well there's this one thing..." He winked at her.

She raised her eyebrow. "What thing?"

He leaned closer so he could whisper into her ear. "You still have your uniform from when you were on patrol?"

She blushed slightly and giggled. "I do. Do you?" She grinned at him.

At that moment Raina walked up to them. "Hey guys, I ran a background check on your guy in there." She handed CD a folder.

Nate looked over her shoulder and read it together with her. "Concerned citizen... yeah right." He rolled his eyes.

"But this doesn't give us anything we didn't know already. He's a jerk and a pimp. I think we really have the best chances with your 'date' tomorrow." She looked at Nate and then at Raina again. "Thanks."

Nate nodded at her too and then left with CD to inform Kate about what they had set up now.

Originally posted by TLC4Whitney
OOOOOH I like...POST MORE

Meanwhile Teddy and Jinny finally arrived in Big Sur. They found a nice little cozy hotel and Jinny pulled up there.

"Wait here. I'll get us a room." Teddy said and kissed her cheek.

She smiled at him. "But hurry."

"Oh I will." He winked at her and then went inside.

She smiled after him and waited for him to get back. A while later he walked back to her again and without warning picked her up and carried her inside and to a room.

"Hey hey hey!" She protested with a smile.

"Hey hey hey yourself." He grinned and opened the door that had a sign with 'Honeymoon Suite' written on it.

"Honeymoon eh?" She traced the outline of his ear with her forefinger.

"Well we gotta practice for the real honeymoon. But seeing we're on our engagement moon..." He carried her over the threshold and kicked the door shut behind him.

"Ohhh we definitely need to practice." She grinned and nibbled at his earlobe.

"Hmmmm bed..." He whispered and carried her over there.

"Comfortable and big bed." She smiled as he put her down in it.

"Good." He winked at her and slowly started to strip out of his clothes for her.

"Good show!" She grinned even broader, enjoying to watch him do that for her. "Damn I just discovered another of your hidden talents!"

"Another, eh?" He raised his eyebrow. "So you're saying I have hidden talents? Like what?"

"Apart from the stripping?" She smiled and motioned him to come closer with her forefinger. "C'mere and answer your own question." She purred seductively.

"Hmmmmh yeah." He grinned and climbed on the bed with her and slowly wrapped her out of her clothes, caressing every inch of skin that he revealed.

well its about time! you post more jinny and teddy!!!

Now post more CD and Nate!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
Now post more CD and Nate!!!!!!!!

ehhh sorry. This is Jinny Teddy again :) But there should be more CD and Nate in the next part again... I think...

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After that they didn't leave the bed until it started to get dark again outside. Jinny snuggled close to him and sighed. "We need to go back."

"I don't want to!" He pulled her even closer to him.

"Me neither..." She kissed him.

"... but we have to." He sighed.

She nodded. "It's pretty late already."

"But we had an amazing day." He stroked her hair out of her face.

"We sure did." She kissed the top of his nose and then forced herself to get up again.

He got up too and started to gather her clothes and kissing her everywhere again before he covered her up again he helped her to get dressed while she did the same for him.

"I love you." He whispered and smiled at her. "And you're so beautiful."

She slightly blushed at that and hugged him. "I love you too"

He took her hand into his own and they left and headed back to San Fran.

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
ehhh sorry. This is Jinny Teddy again :) But there should be more CD and Nate in the next part again... I think...


:eek: you mean i might get even MORE jinny and teddy! this is like a dream come true!! youre like my genie! you make all of my wishes come true!! i wish i had a lifeime supply of jinny and teddy fic!!!!!!!! *starts dancing around waiting for my wish to come true!*

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
:eek: you mean i might get even MORE jinny and teddy! this is like a dream come true!! youre like my genie! you make all of my wishes come true!! i wish i had a lifeime supply of jinny and teddy fic!!!!!!!! *starts dancing around waiting for my wish to come true!*

and i wish i had a lifetime supply of cd and nate!!!!lol :D o yes, post more!!!:crazy:

No, I more meant like... this is a scene with all of em... :)

So enjoy it, all of you guys :)

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Back in San Francisco after CD and Nate had tried to interview various witnesses on the case and coming up empty handed walked into the Division to give Cap an update of the progress made so far, Nate and CD rounded the corner of the Felony Division as Magda and Raina were gathering their things. Mag said, "Hey CD, Nate, want to join us at Anchorside after you have finished?"

CD nodded. "Yeah, we were heading over anyways."

Nate replied, "As soon as we fill in Cap."

Raina grinned at them. "I'll come too!" She loved to hang out with them.

Cap walked out in the bullpen looking at her Inspectors she stated "Nate, CD you can fill me in at Anchorside, it is supper time and I thought I might join you if no one minds."

"Of course we don't mind." CD smiled at her. "God I'm staving myself actually." She and Nate never went to lunch because they spent their lunchbreak in the elevator.

Raina replied, "Now if Jinny was only here we could all enjoy supper together."

"She should be back later." Nate smirked.

Mag looked at CD and Nate knowing they knew more than what they were saying but also knew they weren't telling either and she would just have to find out from Jin.

CD saw Magda's look and grinned at Nate.

They made their way over to their hangout and sat down at a table. CD, Nate and Kate on one side and Raina and Magda on the other one. Then a waiter came to the table. "Hey guys.. what can I help you with?"

Mag said, "What is the specials today?"

"The soup of the day is clam chowder... and the roasted turkey breast sandwich with french fries and side salad is what I'd recommend" He said.

Mag said, "That sounds good I will have that, with a beer."

Raina piped in "Make that two."

"Ehh I'll have a coke and Cheeseburger and fries." CD ordered.

"Two of that too." Nate grinned.

Captain said, "I will have a chef's salad and an Ice tea."

He scribbled all of that down and nodded at them. "Coming right up." With that he left to get their orders to the kitchen.

Kate looked at her inspectors as she said, "So what did you find out on the case this afternoon?"

CD opened her mouth to answer but at that moment the door opened and smiling at each other happily Teddy and Jinny walked inside and looked around for their friends.

Nate spotted the couple as they entered and he waved them over to the table.

Raina said, "Wow Jinny is here now the gang is all here."

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!

!!YYAAYY!! you posted!! do it again!!

yeah and here's sum more

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Raina giggled when she saw them walk over. "What's it with these shirts today?"

Mag looked up as Jinny and Teddy approached straining her eyes trying to see what Jinny's and Teddy's shirt said as the couple approached the table.

"Hey guys." CD smiled as they walked over. "I see you found that shop." She motioned at Jinny who now also was wearing a "Too cute for words" teeshirt.

Nate said, "And I see you found the perfect one for the ADA"

Teddy looked down at his shirt that said 'Restraining orders are just another way of saying I love you' "Yeah. Jinny said it's perfect for me..."

Kate chuckled. "Talking 'bout perfect shirts... I see you two switched back again?" She raised her eyebrow at CD and Nate.

Jinny smirked as she looked at CD and Nate as she said, "So you decided you wanted to see what it was like wearing the other's shirt for a while."

"Something like that. Yeah." CD grinned and the waiter came over with their drinks.

He looked at Jinny and Teddy. "Can I get you something too?"

Teddy replied, "Cheeseburger and fries and ice tea."

Jinny said, "That sounds good make it two."

He jotted that down and left again.

Nate looked over at Cap and said, "So did you try on the shirt CD and I brought you?"

Kate smiled and removed her jacket and now indeed was wearing the 'If I'm so smart, why do I work here?' shirt.

"Wooo Captain!" Raina cheered at that.

Mag looked at the bunch and said, "I suppose this is now in fashion."

"Damn straight" replied Jinny

"You suppose right." CD grinned and took a sip of her coke.

Jinny and CD looked at each other, chuckled and high fived each other upon that.

Mag mentally made a note to check into stupid t-shirts with stupid sayings on them tomorrow on the way to work.

TOO FREAKING FUNNY!!!!!!!!!

WENDI

lol! !MMMMOOOOOORRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!!! !NOW!

lol, this is great!!!!

I'm glad you're enjoying this :) More shirt fun yet to come btw ;)

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Kate looked at CD and Nate again. "So you were telling me what you found out..."

At that moment the waiter walked up again and handed Kate her salad and put an iced tea in front of Teddy and held the other one out to Jinny.

They group waited for the waiter to retreat as Nate said, "We tried to interview some working women but so far no one knows nothing, we basically came up empty handed."

Jinny reached for her Ice tea as she took a sip Mag said, "What is that on your finger Jin?"

CD nodded. "We hope that's gonna change tomorrow though" Then she looked at Jinny. "By the way, we need to fill you in because you're gonna be helping us"

Jinny finished her drink as she casually replied, "Some call it an engagement ring."

CD smirked at that.

Raina looked at Jinny's finger as she said, "Ooohh let me see."

Kate smiled. "Congratulations you two!"

Magda gasped in shock and looked over at Teddy. "You mean you... got engaged? To him?"

CD rolled her eyes at that. "No to Nate. Teddy just poses as her boyfriend so Nate and Jinny can keep their passionate affair a secret."

Jinny smirked at that as she said, "Thanks Cap."

Mag looked at her partner as she said, "I didn't mean it like that. It was just kind of a shock, I just didn't think that you would get married before I did."

Then Kate looked at CD and Nate. "And you two knew that!"

Teddy smiled at Jinny and kissed her cheek.

Jinny gave Magda a look at that. "You ARE married Magda... true you tend to forget that ever so often when you meet what's his face again?"

CD said, "Yes Cap sorry couldn't tell you." trying to change the topic from the partners that were glaring at each other.

At that Magda jumped up. "Crap! I forgot I have an.... appointment!" She grabbed her purse and rushed off.

"Hello? What was that?" Raina didn't get it.

keep it coming..............:D

More please!!:p

and some more here too :)

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Nate couldn't help but chuckle. Under the table her reached for CD's hand and squeezed it.

Raina said, "Who is going to pay for Mag's meal?"

"Oh I'll eat it." Nate said right away. "I'm starving anyways."

Cap said, "What did you skip lunch?"

"No no, we had lunch." CD said and grinned remembering what they had done for lunch. "But you know my partner" She emphasized that word. "He could devour an elephant and would still squeeze in chocolate dessert."

"Yeah yeah... Nate and his Candy addiction." Jinny smirked.

CD just looked at Jin hoping no one caught the reference with her name as she said, "Actually Nate would eat anything that won't eat him first."

Nate chuckled and slipped his hand on CD's thigh under the table. "Though that can be pleasant too ya know... if done with skill."

Teddy replied, "Yeah it can be."

Jinny said, "Hey"

Raina blinked and looked at them confused. "What? You watch too many horror movies!" She thought they were talking about some weird cannibalistic ritual or something and made a disguisted face.

CD laughed. "They were thinking about a different movie genre Raina."

Cap thought it would a good time to change the subject as she wasn't in the mood to explain sex to Raina tonight as she said, "So Jin when is the wedding?"

"Uhhh." Jinny looked at Teddy. "When is the wedding?"

Raina said, "IF you want help planning your wedding just say so. I can help with all the arrangements."

Jin said, "Thanks Raina but I think we are going to plan it ourselfs."

"Whoa... but that's so much work! You need help! I mean you saw all the stuff Magda had to do!" Raina was eager to help.

"Ahhhh. yeah... but.... actually... CD and Nate already offered to help!" Jinny said quickly.

CD coughed as she said, "Yeah that is right we offered this morning."

She really didn't want Raina to have her fingers in anything that had to do with her wedding so she smiled a silent 'thanks' at CD

"We did?" Nate frowned as he didn't remember that. CD elbowed him and he nodded. "Oh yeaaah! Right. We did."

CD mouthed 'no prob'.

"As for the date..." Teddy smiled at Jinny. "We didn't exactly discuss it yet, but personally I can't wait."

Jinny replied, "Will let you know when we set one."

Awwwwwwwwwww more

O yay, you posted!!!!! Today's my birthday, so why don't you make it awesome by posting more?????!!!;) :)

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
O yay, you posted!!!!! Today's my birthday, so why don't you make it awesome by posting more?????!!!;) :)

hmhhhhh... in that case I should post some more, yeah :)
:birthday: party: :bouncers

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The waiter approached the group with another waiter following behind with another tray of food on it. They sat down the plates in front of the cops who ate there often.

"Oooh food!" Jinny was starving herself and started to devuor her burger.

Raina said, "Wow Jin it looks like you haven't eaten for days."

"I feel like it too." She grinned. "Got some major work-out today" She said in between some bites.

Raina said, "Oh yeah what gym did you go to as I have been looking for a good one."

Teddy said, "I don't think you would like the one that Jin belongs to."

Raina said, "And why is that?'

CD burst out laughing at that and nodded. "It's a 'couples only' gym"

Raina said, "Well why do they have gyms like that?"

Cap replied, "They want to get couples in to work out together as the couple that plays together stays together."

Jin replied, "Nice one Cap."

CD nodded. "And they have the best... uhh... aerobic exercises."

Raina frowned. "Have you all been to a gym like that already?"

"Yeah Raina sorry about that." Nate replied with a smirk.

Raina looked at Nate as she said, "You have been to one also?"

"Don't worry Raina. Your time will come too." Jinny said. "Eventually..."

CD replied, "Yeah Raina someday."

Teddy shook his head. "And people say I'm naive" He whispered.

Jinny leaned over and said, 'NO one said you were naive sweetie."

"My mom does." He smiled and kissed her gently and then started to feed french fries to her.

Raina replied, "Awww isn't that sweet."

"Yeah." CD said and sighed.

Nate looked at the couple and wished that he could be that open with CD in front of everyone. But instead he shrugged "What's sweet about fries?" and stuffed a handful into his own mouth.

Cap looked over at CD and Nate as she said, "You will have to bring Jinny up to speed on the case before tomorrow, I have to be getting back I have a few more things to take care of before I can go home." She was wanting to get home to be with Louis after seeing the happy couple.

CD rolled her eyes and wished that Nate could be just a little bit more like Teddy was. But then again what she and Nate had was different. They had fun and the sex was amazing, but that was pretty much everything it was. Not that she was complaining. Lost in thoughts she played around with her food, not hearing what Kate had said.

Nate replied, "Sure thing Cap."

"And sorry about today... just..." Jinny looked over at Teddy, a dreamy look in her eyes.

Kate smiled, glad to see one of her favorite inspectors was as happy as she deserved to be. "Don't worry about it." With that she left the two couples and Raina.


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now where's the cake?

:D :D :D

Okay....I am loving it..... I want more shirt fun though!!!

Wendi

Yay!!! THANK YOU for posting!!!!!!!:) :D

hey,why don't you get back here and post MORE,huh?

Originally posted by planet_stella
hey,why don't you get back here and post MORE,huh?

How about 'because I was sleeping.' ? :D you gotta post more yourself btw :happyface

but here's some more...

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CD saw the look in Jinny's eyes as she looked at her finace, CD thought 'they are so in love with each other, a person can see that just from looking at the two, anyone that couldn't needed their eyes examined.'

Raina said, "So where did you two go today besides the gym?"

Teddy snickered at that. "The beach too... and another gym in Big Sur."

Raina said, "So you belong to a couple's gym in Big Sur also?"

Nate turned his head as he didn't want to burst out laughing in front of Raina.

CD caught the smile on his face knowing if Raina kept up the questioning he would lose it before the night was over.

Nate took a deep breath. "God. All this talking about ... gyms... I really need to work out again myself."

Jinny laughed and then looked at Raina. "It was a one day trial trip. Our usual gym offered that as a special." She loved to tease Raina who had no clue what they actually were talking about.

Raina said, "I need to find a gym and start working out. Did you ever work out before you were a couple?"

Jinny replied, "Not like I do now."

Nate lost it as he was taking a drink of his coke and it went down the wrong windpipe he started coughing.

CD quickly patted Nate on the back asking "Are you all right?"

Nate nodded and coughed as CD chuckled and said "Yeah... the single working out has different exercises and uhhh different equipment, right?" She smirked at Jinny.

Nate coughed even harder at that.

Teddy said, "yeah the couple's have different positions so they can work out together."

Nate couldn't take it any longer as he said, "I need to go be back shortly."

CD had to laugh out a little herself at that. "I uhhh better check on my partner there..."

"yeah you do that" Jinny laughed and then looked at Raina. "Say, isn't it past your bedtime already?"

Raina looked at her clock as she said, "I do have to get up early I think I will call it a night. But if you think of a good gym for non couples let me know okay?"

Jin looked into Teddy's eyes as she said, "Sure no prob, night Raina."

Raina replied, "Tell CD and Nate I said night."

Teddy smiled back and kissed Jin and then shook Raina's hand. "We will. I'll see ya,"

Um, since it's the day AFTER my birthday, do you think you could post more????;) :) :D

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
Um, since it's the day AFTER my birthday, do you think you could post more????;) :) :D

pffft, why would I? I didn't even get cake! :crying:

!!!!!YYYYEEEESSSSSS!!!!!! i finaly got to post! the last few days whenever i tried to post the thing would say sorry no page avalable!


neway !!!this is great! !!!!!!!MMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
pffft, why would I? I didn't even get cake! :crying:

Sorry, I forgot!!!! damn, there's no cake icon on here, is there???!!!! PLEASE forgive me!!!!!:(

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
!!!!!YYYYEEEESSSSSS!!!!!! i finaly got to post! the last few days whenever i tried to post the thing would say sorry no page avalable!

neway !!!this is great! !!!!!!!MMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!


yay! wb! I was wondering where you have been. :)


Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
Sorry, I forgot!!!! damn, there's no cake icon on here, is there???!!!! PLEASE forgive me!!!!!

hmmmm... actually I want CD/Nate fanfic even more than cake...
I guess I can forgive you for the lack of cake... ohno:

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CD walked up to Nate outside. "Hey... you okay? Apart from the obvious I mean..."

"Yeah has she always been that naive?" Nate asked.

"I think she does know what sex is... but you have to point it into her direction." She laughed.

He grinned "I couldn't take it anymore without laughing in her face, although Jin seemed to like to egg her on."

CD nodded. "It WAS fun. But hey, as long as she doesn't ask if she can work out with us someday..."

He laughed. "I can see her asking. Then what will you all tell her?"

"Ask her if she ever worked out while she was cuffed?" CD laughed too.

"I bet you could do that with a straight face couldn't you?" He raised his eyebrow at her.

CD nodded. "Course I can. There's a lot I can say with a straight face where your head turns into the shade of a tomato already."

"It does not." He protested.

She grinned and leaned in to whisper into his ear. "The whole talk about gyms made you horny huh? You wanna get it on with me right here? Or you want me to just do this..." She unzipped his pants. "... and get down on my knees and let my tongue do things to your c0ck that you never thought possible?" She continued to whisper into his ear and gently tugged at his earlobe with her teeth. "If you think you ever got a good blowjob before I'll prove you wrong because you have no idea just what I can do to you." She whispered all that seductively and then gave him an innocent peck on the cheek and looked at him as if she had been talking about cute puppies in the park.

Nate couldn't take it any longer he grabbed CD and pulled her close to him as he covered her mouth with his backing her up against the brick wall moving his hands up under her shirt as he pressed against her letting her know what she had suspected all along.

CD jumped up at him and wrapped her legs around his waist and pressed her groin against his as she responded to his kiss. She started to nibble at his neck when she suddenly pulled back from him. "fu ck" she muttered.

"What?" Nate said as he stood there holding CD and running his hands up and down her back touching her bare skin making it hard for her to think. Nate once again captured her mouth with his as he pressed her against the brick wall more wanting to make her his right then and there and not caring who found out.

CD pulled back again and pushed him off. "Not that kind of fu ck... fu ck as in there comes Raina." She slid off him again, sure Raina hadn't seen them yet. She smiled as she approached them.

"Hey guys... I neeed to get up early tomorrow, so I'm heading home." Raina indeed had no clue what she was interrupting.

CD said, "Yeah we should get back in and brief Jinny and head to our homes also tomorrow is going to be a long one."

Nate said, "Night Raina"

CD and Nate turned and started in as Nate said, "That sure was close."

CD nodded and then innocently smiled at him. "Your fly's open partner." With that she walked back inside again and sat down at their table again and grinned to herself because neither Jinny nor Teddy noticed she was back again because they were too engulfed playing tonsil hockey.

yay!!:woohoo: MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

Originally posted by planet_stella
yay!!:woohoo: MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

Yep, exactly!!!!!:)

omg! i can't believe you posted that! i can't believe tj let you post that! wow! couldn't you have used these things? ***



neway !!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMOOOOORRRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!!!

[QUOTE]Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
[B]omg! i can't believe you posted that! i can't believe tj let you post that! wow! couldn't you have used these things? ***


Now why would she want to do a thing like that???!!! There are more "lil pervs" on here too who enjoys it, lol!!!!!!!:D :)

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
[QUOTE]Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
[B]omg! i can't believe you posted that! i can't believe tj let you post that! wow! couldn't you have used these things? ***


Now why would she want to do a thing like that???!!! There are more "lil pervs" on here too who enjoys it, lol!!!!!!!:D :)


haha yep, exactly, gotta keep up with my reputation here... :D

besides.... I'm not writing this alone, remember? Blame Jeanie too! :D

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Nate zipped up his pants as he took the same direction his partner took a few moments before heading over to their table he saw Jin and Teddy still engrossed with each other. He cleared his throat so he could get CD home and pick up where they just left off.

CD smiled at Nate when they still didn't notice anything and continued to make out there. "I'm jealous." She sighed.

Nate said, "It wouldn't be nice to just leave and brief her in the morning would it?"

CD sighed and shook her head. We'd all get our asses chewed off then. And neither of us is in a position where we need that right now." She looked around and saw that apart from Jinny and Teddy no one else who knew them was at the bar anymore.

Meanwhile Jinny and Teddy really got into it and Jinny climbed into Teddy's lap without breaking the kiss.

CD looked at Nate with her eyes as she motioned for him to look around at the clientel in there. Nate scanned the room as he noticed also no one there knew them as he slowly leaned in and gently kissed her on the lips.

Teddy's hand went up the back of Jinny's shirt as he pulled her closer to him, Jin able to feel his manhood growing underneath her.

CD smiled and wrapped her arms around his neck and soon they were as busy with each other as Jinny and Teddy were.

Jinny felt Teddy's hand on her bare skin and knew they needed to find somewhere a little more private then out there in the open. Jinny pulled back as she bent to whisper in Teddy's ear, "Baby we need to find a private place now."

"Oh yeah." He whispered and slid her shirt up a little, just to get a glimpse of what he needed so badly. He kissed her neck and inhaled her scent deeply and then stroked a strand of hair behind her ear and then gave her a funny look as he saw what was going on behind her back.

Jinny couldn't help but slide Teddy's shirt over his head right there. The way he was making her feel she couldn't wait much longer til they were one. Jinny noticed the looking and asked "What?"

Teddy leaned up and whispered in Jinny's ear seductively "Looks like CD and Nate are going at each other also." Teddy then kissed her neck again as his hands slid her shirt up further, letting her breasts show in their lacy bra touching his bare skin from when Jinny had gotten rid of his own shirt.

Bringing Teddy to pull her closer yet to him as he took her mouth once more as Jinny squirmed on top of Theodore feeling his manhood bulging beneath her.

He moaned into her mouth and his hands wandered on her thighs. He couldn't believe what this woman was doing to him. But thanks to her his 'naive' reputation had been shot to hell already.

On the other side of the table CD now also climbed into Nate's lap. "I wish I was wearing a skirt." She whispered.

Jinny's hands went down his back as his hands started up her thighs toward the inside of her legs causing Jinny to moan into Teddy's mouth. God he needed her now. They needed to find a place and soon or he wouldn't be responsible for what was soon to happen.

Nate replied, "Would make it a lot easier." He looked over to see Jinny and Teddy going at it he motioned with his eyes behind her.

She slightly turned around and smiled and turned back to him. "Wanna bet Jinny's wearing a skirt tomorrow too?" She grinned at him and kissed him full of passion again and her hands roamed all over his chest and slipped under his shirt.

Teddy's hands found the inside of Jinny's jeans as he slowly massaged them causing Jinny to squirm more in his lap. Just as soon they started upwards towards the button and zipper on her pants while Jinny managed to unbutton his pants and slid the zipper down releasing some of the tension in his lower half Jinny's hand making it on the inside of his pants reaching her destination and slowly caressing her target with her fingertips managing to get Theodore to stroke up towards her as a familar voice said, "You know you all should be grateful I am off duty or I would run the lot of you in on indecent exposure and disorderly conduct."

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Guess who that is :) If you know the right answer I'll make ya an av from any character you want :)

Wow! This is SO great.And that voice belongs to Cap. right?:happyface

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and i vote captain -am i right? of coarse im right i want my avatar just like yours exept instead of cd and nate i want jinny and teddy!




and if captain is wrong i vote raina!;)

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and i vote captain -am i right? of coarse im right i want my avatar just like yours exept instead of cd and nate i want jinny and teddy!




and if captain is wrong i vote raina!

nope :D neither cap nor Raina

JOHN JR. EXSTEAD!! is he it?



if hes not how bout casey?




btw since your online how bout more fic?

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
JOHN JR. EXSTEAD!! is he it?

if hes not how bout casey?

btw since your online how bout more fic?

haha, I could be cruel and say naaaaaaaaaaah I'm too tired...
but even though I'm actually in a bitchy mood...

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Teddy's hands found the inside of Jinny's jeans as he slowly massaged them causing Jinny to squirm more in his lap. Just as soon they started upwards towards the button and zipper on her pants while Jinny managed to unbutton his pants and slid the zipper down releasing some of the tension in his lower half Jinny's hand making it on the inside of his pants reaching her destination and slowly caressing her target with her fingertips managing to get Theodore to stroke up towards her as a familar voice said, "You know you all should be grateful I am off duty or I would run the lot of you in on indecent exposure and disorderly conduct."

CD pushed off of Nate and found her seat as Nate scooted further in towards the table so Casey couldn't see what CD had done to him as the couple looked at Jinny who remained on top of Theodore.

Trying despartely to catch their breath and slow their breathing as Jinny turns slightly on Theodore's lap getting a quick breath in she says, "Cas damn what are you doing here?"

Casey replied, "Apparently not getting lucky like you are. Sheesh Jin right here in public?"

Jinny looked at her brother as she said, "Cas this isn't just anyone this is my fiancé."

Cas looked at his sister as she said, "Congrats Jin, when?"

Jinny replied, "Today actually."

Casey looked at CD and said, "I know why Jinny was all over Teddy but what do you have to say for yourself?"

CD said, "Hey Cas, not a lot except mum's the word, deal?"

Cas looked over at his sister as Teddy helped her put on her shirt again and she helped him zip his pants as Jinny slowly slid off Teddy taking her seat again. Theodore taking Jinny's hands in his as Casey said, "Sure I guess."

Nate said, "Well we weren't half as bad as what your sister was."

Cas replied, "I can see that."

Nate said, "Want to join us?"

Casey replied, "Actually I have a date."

Jin replied, "Oh who is he?"

Casey replied, "A new guy on the force."

Jinny replied, "Go Casey."

Casey walked off towards the back as he meet his date and they took their seats.

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so... ehhh the 4th guess? Dunno if that still counts as getting it right... Anyhow I'm really too tired to do anything today. So I'll make sth tomorrow :)

awwwwwwwwwww! casey got a date! thats so sweet!











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sorry it took me a while, but here's what you won :)

*stares at av* omg! its bootyful! i wuv it! lol THAN YOU!!!!:notworthy :notworthy :notworthy :notworthy :notworthy :notworthy :notworthy




now how bout more fic?!

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
*stares at av* omg! its bootyful! i wuv it! lol THAN YOU!!!!:notworthy :notworthy :notworthy :notworthy :notworthy :notworthy :notworthy

now how bout more fic?!

:) I'm glad you like it! And I'm getting lost here... now I have what? 4 fanfics started here? lol This one with Jeanie, the one with Miranda, which she is posting thankfully lol, then 1011 23rd Street #6, the one with my twinny where we both post (when she's at home at least) and uhhh the Thus with a kiss one and the new one... oh my....

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Nate said, "Well Jin we need to bring you up to speed on the case so we can all continue what was started here."

Jinny rubbed the inside of Theodore's leg as he sighed wanting to get somewhere private as his manhood was starting to rise again.

"Okay... alright this isn't working." Nate sighed. "We need to focus on work... for like 5 minutes here. Seating rearrangement... or else we'll never get this done. We all want to go home, but we need to fill you in." Nate sighed again and then said, "CD and Jinny you guys change places so we can get this briefing over with and we can all get back to what we really want to do."

Jinny said, "If I have to but one question how long have you two been intimate?"

"Change places better not mean you wanna make out with my fiancee." Teddy muttered and shot Nate a small glare.

CD laughed. "Oh Teddy, and here I thought you'd like to get to know me better." She teased as she and Jinny switched places.

Teddy replied, "CD I am sure you are a nice woman and all and I do know you but sorry not in that way."

CD laughed. "Teddy relax, I don't want to know you in that way either."

Nate said, "Glad to know it."

"Would somebody answer my question here?" Jinny spoke up. "Since when are you doing your partner Candace, eh?"

CD said, "Since last night actually. Not like we have been at it as long as you two have though."

"You're pretty good for being beginners." Jinny laughed. "Last night? Really? Wow... I mean I would've guessed a few months or so from they way you were going at it there... but then again I bet I woulda noticed before.. so last night, yeah that makes sense."

CD replied, "Like when you and Theodore came out of the bathroom last night. I noticed that you and Teddy have been at it for a long time."

Jinny replied, "What can I say I love him."

"Oh yeah. And every second of it was amazing" Teddy leaned over the table to steal a quick kiss from her.

Nate looked at the two as he said, "Five minutes is all we need to get all of us off to where we want to be."

"Alright... Five minutes... fill me in." Jinny said.

Teddy said, "Make it fast."

"Okay then." CD started to sum it up. "This morning... 2 dead hookers... 'concerned citizen' aka their pimp reported it. ... pimp being an ass... not talking... kept on trying to set up a date for Nate... Kate said go for it... Tomorrow evening, Ramada, Market Street, you and I surveillance."

Jinny said, "Sure see you there. Now if you will excuse me we still have some more celebrating to do."

"You sure do." CD smiled. "Have fun... and really... congrats, you two deserve it." She got up and looked at Nate.

Jinny grinned at them and slipped her hand into Teddy's and walked out with him.

CD watched as Jinny held Teddy's hand wishing that Nate and her could walk out into the night holding each other.

Nate grinned at her. "Soooo... your place or mine?" He smirked.

CD said, "Well your place."

"Great let's go." He wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her out to his car with him.

Originally posted by planet_stella
yay!!:woohoo: MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

Anybody still reading this? lol

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In the next morning Jinny and Teddy arrived at the station and they felt like their hearts were breaking as they had to part and go to different offices. After occupying the elevator for the sake of saying goodbye to each other until lunchbreak Jinny kissed him one more time and he held on to her until another man walked into the elevator and he had to let go of her again. With a sigh Jinny walked through the doors that read 'Felony Division' and smoothened out her long black skirt that she was wearing today. She walked over to her desk and sat down there yawning. Still tired she crossed her arms on the desk and laid her head upon them, just watching what else was going on there. She noticed that Mag had not arrived yet. She looked over and saw that CD and Nate had just entered the division noticing CD was also wearing a skirt made a smile came to her face.

CD smiled back at her and sat down at her desk, smirking over at Nate she said, "I told you Jin would have a skirt on today."

"You're a psy-chick" He smirked at his pun and handed her 20 bucks because she had won the bet.

CD rolled her eyes at him but took the money.

Jinny saw the money exchange and raised her eyebrow at them. "For a job well done." CD grinned. "I'd charge him more but he can't afford that."

Jinny said, "I know what you mean on the wage we make around here. Wonder where Mag is? And is Mag helping tonight also?"

"God I hope not... I think Cap still has her working with Rai... speak of the devil." She chuckled as the two women walked inisde.

Jinny turned around as she spotted the shirt that Mag was wearing along with the shirt Raina had on.

CD said, "What is up with the shirts Mag? That is so yesterday's news."

"Totally." Nate nodded as he too saw Magda now was spotting one of the infamous 'Too Cute For Words' shirts. She had immediately bought one after having seen CD and Jinny wear them the day before and had hoped to be 'in' with the fashion today. She had also brought Raina one that said 'I am with Stupid' with an arrow pointing to the right.

Jinny raised her eyebrow as she saw that. "Magda reallly... you're out of the run again. Here let me spice it up" She walked over to her and with a marker crossed out 'cute' and wrote 'annoying' above it. "There... THAT's the shirt of the day honey." Jinny smirked.

im reading! and i want more! tonight!

I'm reading this too!!!! LOL, I can't get enough of it!!!!:D

yay! :) I'm glad you guys like it, so here's more

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Then she walked over to Raina as she said, "Yours needs some help also." Taking her marker she crosses out the word 'with' and says, "There that is better, that is the shirt of the day for you Raina."

CD and Nate both laughed at that.

Magda frowned. "If this is the new trend... how come you aren't wearing shirts like those?"

Jinny said, "Yes that is the new trend and I can take care of that with my marker."

"You and your marker, eh?" CD laughed.

"Yes me and my marker." Jinny grinned and walked over to Nate and wrote 'I don't dip my pen in company ink' on his shirt and then crossed out the 'don't.'

Raina frowned as she read that. "What's funny about pens and ink?" She didn't get it again.

"It's the fact that something is crossed out that makes the trend Raina!" CD said and gave Jinny a small glare because of what she had written on Nate's shirt.

Jinny walked over to CD as she took her marker and wrote 'I don't flirt with danger' and also crossed out the 'don't'. CD gave her another look at that and Jinny laughed. "See? Now that's perfect. Now you're all in the trend again."

"But you aren't." Nate pointed out and motioned towards her textless shirt.

Jinny replied, "Well what do you think you are going to do about that?"

CD snatched the marker from her. "Hmmm let's see..."

Jinny said, "I think not. Teddy likes this shirt."

"I liked mine too!" She protested.

"I see, at least give me something that is true like I did for you." She agreed.

CD growled at her. "This is not true!"

Nate chuckled. "I think there's truth in all of them." He whispered so only CD and Jinny heard him.

"Oh really you aren't flirting with danger at the present?" Jinny quietly whispered back.

"I have no idea what makes you think that." She smiled innocently.

"Just keep saying that you might begin to believe it." She smirked.

Nate chuckled again. "Oh come on, it's not like we're trying to hide it... well not too much at least."

"No you're not trying to hide it to some people but others that is a different story." Jinny glanced over to Raina and Mag.

CD rolled her eyes. "Magda joked around with us but I think she really thought it was a joke." She was whispering now. "And before Raina finds out we can announce it on CNN just as well."

She nodded at that. "Yeah best not let the Rona Barret of the division find out or everyone on every floor will know by lunch today."

"See?" CD pointed at her with the marker which reminded her. "So let's see... something that suits Jinny here..." She started writing on Jinny as the rest waited for CD to get finished to see what has been written on Jinny.

awwww! she messed up the shirt that teddy likes :( lol



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yippee!!!!!!!! more shirt fun!!!!!!!!!!:D :clap: :clap:

Wendi

hey, we'd like some more of this NOW!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
If you don't mind of course!!!:D

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
hey, we'd like some more of this NOW!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
If you don't mind of course!!!:D


hmmmmm I think you convinced me ;)

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As CD stepped back from writing on Jinny's shirt Nate read, "Love is a name, sex is a game, forget the name and play the game." he then raised his eyebrow at CD, wondering where the hell that one came from.

Jinny read what CD had written and chuckled as she read it herself. "Good one"

Mag said, "I see you found one that fit."

CD grinned and handed her the marker back. "There now you're all trendy again too."

Jinny said, "Thanks but I think I know someone who isn't trendy be right back need to take care of that."

"Bet she'll be gone for an hour at least?" CD whispered to Nate.

Nate replied, "I would be a fool to take that bet."

She chuckled and then sat down at her desk.

Mag looked at Jin as she headed out the door, "Cap should be here any minute and where is she off to?"

"On duty as fashion police officer, has to take care of the poor and deprived who didn't know about the latest trend. Be glad you have Jinny and her marker as your friend Mag" CD said with a smirk.

Mag looked at CD as she said, "Fashion police officer what are you talking about we are inspectors."

Raina said, "Yeah not for the fashion police."

CD rolled her eyes. "Do I have to announce it when I make a joke now?" With that she turned back to her paperwork.

Nate chuckled and then leaned over slightly. "Interesting quote there." He whispered and smirked. "So you like to... play?"

"Depends on the players." CD grinned at him.

Mag replied, "Well excuse us."

"Whatever Mag." CD muttered and then turned her attention back to the work that had piled up on her desk.

Jinny rounded the corner heading toward Teddy's office seeing his secretary sitting at her desk she sais, "Hey Marge Teddy in?"

Marge replied, "Yes Jinny, I hear congratulations are in order."

Jinny replied, "Why thank you."

Jinny continued for Teddy's door as she turned the handle and let herself in before Marge could announce her.

In his office Teddy heard the voice of the love of his life. He still couldn't believe she had agreed to marry him. Smiling broadly he looked up as she entered. "Hey beautiful." The he laughed as he saw her shirt and read it. "Somehow I remeber that shirt plain and without writing this morning."

Jinny replied, "It was very much plain this is the new trend today."

"New trend, eh?" He chuckled. "I see." Then he got up and wrapped his arms around her. "So you came here to play?" He whispered seductively.

Jinny replied, "Play is always good, but first I came to make you trendy also."

"Oh no." he sighed. "Do I have a word in this?"

Jinny slowly leaned up and kissed Teddy as her hands went around his neck kissing him with an intensity as she moved closer to him backing him into his desk.

"Hmmm" He moaned. "No idea if that's a yes or a no but I like that answer." He wrapped his hands around her and kissed her back full of love and passion.

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NNNNNOOOOOOOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!





tonight im spending the night at my best friend's house so i exspect more by the time i leave! i leave at 7....

Well,it's about time to post more!!!

Originally posted by planet_stella
Well,it's about time to post more!!!

Yeah!!!:)

ooookay

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Jinny slowly broke away from the kiss as she brought the marker up to his shirt saying, "Before there is no shirt I think I need to make you trendy". Ahe said taking the cap off and writing on Teddy's shirt as he ran his hands up and down Jinny's body. She stopped momentarily as she said, "How is a woman supposed to be creative when you have your hands all over me?" Jinny finished the last word with some difficulty as Teddy's hands were now under Jinny's shirt exploring her bare skin. Jinny threw the marker on the desk as she leaned up and captured Teddy's mouth as the two teased at each other's tongues while their hands explored each other's bodies.

"I'd read it but I'm busy." He whispered as he unbuttoned her shirt and nibbled at her earlobe. "What did ya write?" He asked, his hands sliding her shirt off her shoulders now.

Nipping at his ear before replying she said seductively "Love is the answer - but while you're waiting for the answer sex raises some pretty good questions." Jinny slid her hands over the top of his shirt as she undid the buttons and slid his shirt off him running her hands over his nipples while careessing them Teddy took her mouth in his own as the couple played and toyed with each other's tongues while Jinny's hands went lower on Teddy's chest finally reaching their destination as she undid the buckle and slid the zipper slowly down taunting Teddy with each move she made.

"And I've got some questions for you here." She purred as his pants fell to the floor and her hands found their way into his boxers.

He moaned and with just a flick of his wrist opened her bra and carelessly tossed it aside before his hands slipped under her skirt. "I'm gonna give you all the answers." He looked deep into her eyes and caressed her through the fabric of her panties before sliding them off as well now.

Walking backwards toward the couch that was against the far wall "Question number one, is it true you are now engaged?"

Teddy picked her up as she wrapped her legs around his waist feeling his manhood rising beneath her she moaned as he replied, "Only to the most beautiful woman I know" walking over to the couch he turns to sit.

She smiled at that and he reached up to unzip her skirt as he placed kisses all over her belly. "Next question... Is it true that you're spending work time on showing your fiancee your affection?" She sat down in his lap as she asked that, her skirt lying on the floor somewhere too now.

"What better way to spend work time." Teddy cupped Jinny's breast.

Jinny squirmed in his lap before saying, "Is it true... that ummm your finacee is.... more than ready to ummmm... have you show her ..... just how... affectionate you can.... ummm be."

"That you should ask her, not me." He kissed her passionately. "But I am." He proved that to her, rubbing his erection against her.

She moaned into Teddy's mouth when he rubbed his erection against her wanting him to enter her. He continued with caressing her breast as he gently flicked the nipple on her breast, she pushed Teddy back on the couch as she straddled him allowing him entrance into her, Teddy running his hands along the outer sides of her legs as he moved his hands up around her and flipped her over on the couch so he was now on top of her.

She moaned out his name as he slowly started to move.

Teddy started to move more rapidly inside of her as he said, "God Jin I want you"

Marge heard a noise behind her as she knew her employer and his finacee were at it again. She looked at her watch as she thought 'Well I could take a break I supppose.' Marge came back an hour later and still heard noises so she decided to take a lunch.

In the meantime at the felony division the Captain came out into the bullpen as she looked at Jinny's empty desk saying, "Anyone know where Jin is today?"

"Oh she's here Cap." CD spoke up. "She just went to... uhh the ADA's office... she said she has to...." she shot Nate a look.

Nate replied, "She was umm... going to work on that case she was working on the other day."

Mag looked at Nate and CD as she said, "What case is that and why haven't I been informed?"

"You know... that case... she just had to set something straight... about a statement... she'll be back soon." CD said.

"Statement, yeah right." Magda muttered.

Kate looked at her inspectors and said, "Well since Jinny isn't here yet looks like Mag you can work with Raina today on this case a young woman found behind her home floating in the pool. None of the neighbors have heard or seen anything. Get out to the crime scene and see what you can come up with." Kate handed the file folder to Mag as she turned to look at CD and Nate, "So anything new with the slain working girls?"

CD shook her head. "We checked the neighborhood some more, but nothing. I think everything really depends on that date tonight."

Kate replied, "Did you fill Jinny in on the case?"

CD nodded. "Yeah yesterday night. She's prepared. Nate will go in and she and I will wait in a van outside, armed with laptop and headphones..."

Kate replied, "You ready for this Nate?"

He nodded. "I mean I'm not going to do anything there, right? I just have to talk to her. I can manage that."

Kate replied, "You need to get as much information from this working girl as you can and not let the pimp know what you are up to. Think you can handle that?"

Nate nodded. "Sure thing. I mean hey, if worst comes to worst I'll get laid, right?" He joked.

In response to that CD glared at him and threw a paperball right into his face.

Kate looked at the two and said, "Try not to go that far. "

"Trust me I have no intention of even coming close to that." Nate said, now seriously. "Don't wanna get killed after all." He looked over at CD who rolled her eyes.

Kate replied, "Wise choice." Turning to go back to her office she turned around as she said, "When Jin gets back from this case she is busy working on with the ADA maybe she should work with you two on this case today so she will be fully brought up to speed."

CD nodded. "We'll let her know."

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i think its about time you post more!

As Kate entered the doorway she replied, "Oh and change those shirts before tonight, I suppose this is the new trend for today?"

"It is." CD grinned. "According to our very own fashion cop"

"I didn't think we had a fashion cop here." Kate frowned.

"Jinny is... just kidding." Then she looked at Nate. "Hey.. how about we go and find Jinny and tell her?"

Nate replied, "Sounds like a plan."

CD got up and smiled at Kate before heading out.

Kate shook her head as she picked up the file folder on her desk to look over.

CD smiled at Nate as they were in the hallway. She made sure no one was watching them as she took his hand and pulled him into Interrogation 1 after seeing the room was empty.

Knowing they still had time before Jin was done with the ADA, Nate took the hint and captured CD's mouth with his as his hands slid over her body.

She wrapped her arms around his neck and backed him up to a chair, kissing him back full of lust. Pushing into the chair she said, "The way I see it we have at least an hour before Jin is close to being back. So why not make the best of it."

He smirked at her. "Sounds interesting... Care to share what exactly you have in mind there?"

"Of course" CD grinned placing her legs over Nate's as she sat down on top of him and removed his shirt before placing a kiss above his left nipple.

He moaned and ran his hands all over her body, caressing her through the fabric of her shirt before wrapping her out of that.

CD moaned as he also removed her bra and kissed all over her breasts while his hands found their way under her skirt. He claimed her mouth and stroked her through the fabric of her panties before sliding them off. She moaned into his mouth again and her hands moved between their bodies to unbuckle his belt and help him out of his pants while he got rid of her skirt. Kissing her full of desire he laid her down on the little table there and climbed on top of her, caressing every inch of her body. She touched him in ways she knew that would drive him crazy and soon they were rocking each other into oblivion.

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TODAY!!!!!!!!

WOW, you sure know how to get people's attention!!!! Thank you very much for posting on my fav fic!!!:D And for this, I just might have something waiting for you on another fan fic!!!;)

geez, don't you think its about time ya post more?! today!!:crazy:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
geez, don't you think its about time ya post more?! today!!:crazy:

YEP, I AGREE!!!!!!!

hey ya think you could post more sumtime soon?:rolleyes:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
hey ya think you could post more sumtime soon?:rolleyes:


I'm sorry but there isn't really much written yet. And apart from depressive stuff or complete nonsense I don't seem to be able to write anything here. I really wanna write more on all my fics, or write together on this with Jeanie, but ehhh parents driving me up the walls here. Ya know when you startle a cat and that think screeches and gets the claws out and all and looks really dangerous and mean? That's me when I visit my family. Unless I get filled up with nice drinks. Then I write nonsense like Tequila Sunrise lol. But anyhow, I'm afraid it's just a lil teaser but that's the last I have for this one so far. I really gotta work on this again soon. Thanks for the patience :)


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When they left the room again CD straightened her shirt and then looked back at the table that had crashed under them and now was in shatters. "Think anybody will notice?"

Nate turned around once more too. "Nah." He shook his head slightly and chuckling they walked out again to see how Jinny exited the elevator. "Oh hey Jin." Nate called out as he and CD approached her.

"Hey guys." She grinned at them.

"Cap assigned Mag to Raina when you weren't there. So you're stuck with Nate and me today." CD filled her in.

"We figured we'd talk to some of my old friends from Vice and show the girls pictures around. Maybe anybody knows more about them." Nate added.

"Alright let's go." Jinny agreed and the three left together.

well its about time!! geez, i was starting to think you were dead!!!!!



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and don't wait forever this time lol j/k:lol:

ok, i can accept that, even though it was really short!!:p since i LOVE this fic, I'll take what I can get!!

hey guess what, we wrote some more :)

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Talking to the people Nate still knew from his days at Vice didn't help them either, so in the evening they hoped that he'd get the information they needed from that hooker.

They arrived in front of the hotel, Nate was wired up so they could hear what was going on and he could hear them too and he had a hidden camera as well. "You ready for this?" CD asked to make sure.

He nodded. "As long as you watch my back."

"You bet we will." CD said.

"Don't worry." He smiled at her and leaned over and gave her a little peck on the lips before he left the car and entered the lobby while CD climbed into the back to Jinny.

"Everything's working fine." Jinny said, referring to the equipment and montioned to the monitor where they saw how Nate stopped at a mirror, ran his hand through his hair and winked at the mirror reflection. Though actually at them, but no one knew that.

CD laughed. "What a dork."

Jinny said, "Yeah and he is all your dork."

Before CD could reply to that Jin's phone rang as Jinny reached for it and said, "Exstead."

The voice on the phone said, "Hey I miss you. How is it going and how long is this going to take?"

Jin replied, "We just got here and I am not sure how long it will be. I miss you too."

CD replied, "Speaking of respective others."

Jin looked at CD who was watching her man's camera and saw him approaching the hookers at the moment.

"Okay then." Teddy sighed. "Hey, want me to make dinner? You could come over to my place later."

"I don't know what time I will be getting out of here? I can still come to your place after though." Jinny smiled already looking forward to that.

"Okay then." He sighed again. "I love you baby."

CD nudged Jinny when Nate sat down. Right away a tall blonde woman approached him and they shook hands.

"Are you the cop?" She asked to make sure.

"Depends on who you are." Nate answered.

"I'm what you've been waiting for all your life darling." She winked at him.

CD made a face at that.

Jin said, "I have to go, I love you too." As she hung up the phone she looked at the screen and then at CD as she said, "That blonde is moving in fast on Nate isn't she?"

"It's her job." CD shrugged, pretending it didn't phase her at all.

Ok i won't be bad and post dancing smileys here but pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee post more :D :D :D

Hadar

yay! more jinny and teddy! it wsasn't much jinny and teddy but it was jinny and teddy!!!!!!!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

since this fic isn't very good, you don't need to post anymore

haha j/k you know it's my fav!!!! i won't put any of your favorite dancers tha pressure u on here, but i will say something-- MMMMMMOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
since this fic isn't very good, you don't need to post anymore

ha, then now I'm gonna post in spite of it, just to torture you!!! peace:

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"So, you wanna spend some quality time?" The hooker slipped her arm around Nate's waist and led him to the elevator.

"Yeah, that's what we're here for after all, right?" Nate forced himself to smile. He knew that he had to be alone with her before he could start to question her.

CD tried to not let it phase her as she watched Nate and the hooker arm and arm head for the elevator.

Jin looked at the camera knowing if that was her watching Teddy she wouldn't be as calm as CD was pretending to be.

CD took a deep breath when now that woman had her hands all over him and pulled him into a hotelroom. She slightly growled because Nate wasn't protesting the slightest bit.

Jin looked at her friend and said, "if he doesn't act like he likes it we won't get any info."

"I know that." CD hissed and then the phone rang again while in the hotelroom Nate was being pushed on the bed.

He cleared his throat at that. "Whoa... hang on. This is all going a little fast here. I uuuh, I've never done this before..."

She grinned at that and stroked over his cheek. "Don't worry, you're in the best hands. I'm very good at this job."

"That's good to know." Nate smiled and moved away from her a little more again. "Hey, can we just talk a little so I get more comfortable with this?"

"You'll have to pay for talking as well though." She said and sat down next to him but kept her hands to herself now.

Meanwhile Jinny answered her phone again. "Exstead."

"Hey it's me again. I was thinking... I mean, do you have an idea how long you need there approximately? I mean like one hour, two hours or five or how long?" Teddy wanted her back by his side and spend a wonderful evening with her.

"I don't think it'll take five hours." Jinny replied and had to smile. "But I really don't know how long we're stuck here. I mean that all depends on if Nate gets her to talk and in case he does, what kind of information we get. I'll call you when we're done." She promised.

"I love you." He smiled and knew she had to work again now.

"I love you too. Bye for now." Jinny hung up the phone again.

CD grinned at her and chuckled. "You're being missed, huh?"

"Yeah a little." Jinny grinned back at her before they both turned their attention back to what was going on in the hotelroom now.

"Okay then..." Nate gave her a small smile. "I'm Nate by the way. What's your name."

"Candace." She said and winked at him. Her employer had told her what exactly Nate wanted in bed, and the name was a part of that game just like the blonde wig.

Nate slightly frowned at that and wondered if that was just a weird coincidence.

"WHAT?" CD exclaimed upon hearing that.

"Shhhh." Jinny could understand why that pissed her off but she had to keep her calm now.

Nate startled when he heard CD yell into his ear because of the headset. And he coughed because he didn't want that woman to realize what was going on.

When he coughed like that she thought it was because of the name and frowned scared that she had said a wrong name. "Wait, Candace was right wasn't it? Like your partner?"

"Ohh oh yeah. That's her name..." Nate said and smiled at her. "But uuuh, I was wondering about your name. Forget about the masquerade... I wanna know some more about the real you."

"Like what?" She asked.

"Anything you're willing to share. Or ask me something..." He offered. He knew that usually these women just got abused from all sides and he already felt bad enough because all he actually wanted from her was information. So he didn't want to treat her like shiit completely.

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that was SUCH torture!! i hope you don't post anymore on here tonight or tomorrow!!!:rolleyes:

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
that was SUCH torture!! i hope you don't post anymore on here tonight or tomorrow!!!:rolleyes:

:P Here, TAKE THIS!!!! Yes more torture for ya!!!!! *evil laugh*

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CD relaxed a bit when she saw that Nate was trying to get her to talk. Jin noticed that CD had calmed a bit since the hooker wasn't trying to shove Nate in the bed.

"Why do you want to know my name?" was the hooker's response.

Nate shrugged. "Because I don't wanna call you 'hey you.'" He smiled at her again. "Look, I don't wanna hurt you or anything, I'm a nice guy."

At the same time Jinny's phone rang yet again and CD couldn't help but chuckle.

Jinny replied, "Exstead."

Teddy said, "Hey sweetie was wondering if you had a prefrence in what you want when you get here to eat?"

CD looked at the screen where the woman told Nate that her name was Eloise but everybody called her Elly.

Jinny smiled. "I don't care. Actually, I could bring some pizza from on my way to you? That way you don't have to cook or do dishes or anything."

CD smiled as Jinny was trying to figure out what was for supper and at least Nate wasn't in bed with this woman. She didn't know if she could handle that.

Teddy replied, "It is no trouble unless you want pizza?"

"I just don't know when I get back Teddy. You know what? Surprise me!" She thought it was cute how he cared about her.

Teddy replied, "Okay I will. Love you."

Jinny replied, "Love you too."

Teddy hung up again and started to wonder what he could make for his love to surprise her.

Jinny looked at CD as she said, "Sorry about all the interupptions."

CD grinned at Jin. "No problem. I think it's cute." She hadn't finished her sentence yet when the phone rang again.

Jinny picked up. "Look, we actually have to WORK here... not that I'm not happy that you call me. So what is it this time?"

Teddy cleared his throat. "I uuuh, I was thinking... if you want pizza I could make some myself?"

Jinny took a breath. She knew he wanted to make everything perfect for her. "Darling... I couldn't care less what we eat. What I'm looking forward to is to come home to YOU, nothing else matters."

Teddy immediately grinned broadly at that. "I can't wait either."

CD couldn't help but smile and look at Jin at that comment as Jin looked at CD and shrugged.

Teddy replied, "I will have a fire waiting with food waiting when you get here."

"Hmmm, you gonna feed me too?" Jinny grinned broadly. He really knew how to get her impatient.

Teddy replied, "I will feed your stomach first and then I will feed your passion for dessert."

"Oooooh. Know what? Forget the main course in that case." She smirked.

CD turned to look at Jin when she said that.

Teddy replied, "We can always have the main course after we work up an appettite."

"Now that sounds perfect." She winked at CD. "I'm already starving. And now I have to do the work thing again okay?"

Teddy replied, "I guess if you have to, or I could always just sit here and tempt you."

CD slightly shook her head, wondering if she had a dirty mind or if they really hadn't exactly been talking about food.

"Hmmm. Too bad that I'm not alone. CD is with me." She held the phone to CD.

CD replied, "Hey Teddy."

"Hey CD." Teddy said.

Then Jin took the phone back herself. "See? So that isn't an option right now I'm afraid."

CD laughed. "Hey I could go and join Nate there..." With that she realized she should pay more attention to him and the hooker anyways.

Teddy replied, "I see. But before I let you go. I miss you and would love to be showing you exactly how much right now, by running my hands all over that gorgeous body of yours."

Jinny replied, "Hmmm you could, and then Teddy could come join me in this van."

Teddy replied, "We haven't done it in a van yet."

CD said "But we need to work." Then something caught her eye. "Hey hey hey! What the hell?" The hooker was sitting all relaxed and Nate was massaging her shoulders in order to make her losen up some.

"No we haven't." Jinny said. "Damn, I need to hang up." With that she put her phone away again.

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Jin looked at the screen as she said, "Sorry."

CD replied, "I should have been watching instead of trying to firgure out the one sided conversation." But she trusted Nate. And she knew he just wanted that woman to be comfortable so she would talk.

The two looked at the screen as CD tried to get her mind off Nate running his hands on the hooker as she said, "So was all that about food?"

Jin laughed. "Yep, we were trying to figure out what we'll have for dinner. He's going to cook something and surprise me." She smirked. "And dessert."

CD chuckled. "I bet Nate will suggest something like 'Hey let's go to your place and you can make some sandwiches then.' later." She sighed. "Not that I mind..."

Jin replied, "I bet you don't."

"No I don't!" She said and growled. "I really don't."

Jin could tell that watching this was not something CD should be doing at the moment as Nate's hands were going lower on the hooker.

CD narrowed her eyes. "Bastard." She muttered. She couldn't believe Nate was touching her that way.

Jin looked at the monitor as she said, "CD he is only trying to get info."

"Yeah right." CD muttered. "So he's gonna **** her because she told him her name? Great job."

"Yeah that's where it hurts." Elly leaned into Nate's touch. She didn't know why but he seemed more worried about making her comfortable than getting laid. And a massage was really exactly what she had needed now.

Nate had enough of this all. He just wanted to be back with CD and he hated that he had to do what he was doing. And that CD had to watch it even. "So... that guy you're working for... do you know a lot about him?"

CD watched as Nate was still massaging away at Elly was it.

Elly replied, "Like what are you wanting to know?"

CD replied, "Just answer the question whore so we can leave soon."

"I'm sure he's only doing what he has to do." Jinny tried to reassure her friend.

CD sighed and nodded. "Yeah I know... he wants her to feel comfortable to get her to trust him... but does he have to have his damn hands all over her?"

Jinny replied, "No I don't think so."

Nate realized she was going to talk so he stopped to massage her and sat down facing her, his hands in his lap. "I don't know... maybe something like if you knew the girls that got killed?"

"Thanks Jin, that was exactly what I needed to hear." With that CD left the van and slammed the door shut behind her.

Jinny sighed. She knew she had to stay in the van and couldn't follow CD and maybe it was good that she could cool off a little now. Then her phone rang again. "Bad timing Teddy, really."

He sighed. "Sorry... I just... I was worried... that what you're doing there, that isn't dangerous, is it?"

"Only for Nate if he keeps that up." She sighed.

Teddy replied, "Nate is going to get hurt?"

Jinny replied, "Only if he doesn't keep his hands to himself."

He chuckled. "CD with him, huh? And why would that get him hurt?"

Jinny smiled as she replied, "Nate is with a hooker and trying to get information from her and CD has had to watch him and the hooker."

He cringed. "Ouch... wait, you don't mean WITH a hooker, right, he's just there with her, or what?"

"Nate is in a motel room with a hooker that he is trying to extract information from and in order to do that he is having to touch her like massaging her and CD didnt' really like that. She just slammed the door and left right before you called."

Teddy said, "What would you do if you had to watch me doing something like that?"

"Kill you." Jinny answered. "But right now I have to watch Nate and hope CD won't kill him. I'll see you later baby. Bye." She hung up again and continued to watch Nate and the hooker.

She checked her watch. "Okay... you don't actually want to get laid, right? You're not a horny corrupt cop, you just didn't know how else to get the information you need and you probably hate just being here because you feel like you're cheating on your wife just because you're here with me and wanna just go home and admit it all to her. Right?"

Nate replied, "Something like that."

Elly replied, "Okay here is the deal I will give you information and you don't use my name or anything."

"I'll see what I can do. We might need you to testify against him." Nate was honest.

Elly nervously looked sown at her hands as she replied, "Will he be able to hurt me?"

"No, we will protect you." Nate promised.

She sighed. "Alright. Tell you what... I have a real customor now first. Wait here and I'll come back as soon as he's done and then we can talk. Deal?"

"Deal." Nate nodded.

"Great." She said and left then.

Nate went into the bathroom and looked into the mirror. "What now?"

Jinny was glad that was done so far. "You wait there and I'll go find CD." She got out of the front of the van as she went in search for CD who had stormed out a few moments earlier. She had just entered the hotel lobby as her cell phone rang. "Exstead" she replied into the phone.

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