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CD DeLorenzo · 06-21-2003, 12:31 PM

uuuh yeah, so I was bored and I had an idea and uhh... well fanfic.

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"Hey hang on a second, I'll be right back" Jinny said and put her cellphone on the edge of the table, where it wouldn't be in the way for CD and Nate who occupied the table.

While Jinny headed to the restrooms Magda, on the other end of the line started to hear the familiar voices of her co-workers and friends who hadn't even noticed Jinny pass by.

Nate was laughing. "Hey I score twice as much as you, so stop pretending you're good."

Magda frowned upon that but then again it wasn't that unusual for CD and Nate to tease each other, waiting for Jinny to get back she continued to listen. "Hey at least when I score it's always more than one."

"More than one eh? Well I just had two at the same time, try to beat that." His voice sounded triumphantly.

She seemed to think for a moment. "Hmm, okay haven't had that in a while... At least not today... not yet at least"

"Hey if it wasn't for me you never would've gotten that last one." He chuckled.

"And you're proud of that? Because I got what you could've gotten easily yourself?" Now it was her turn to laugh while Magda frowned even more, now certain she shouldn't be witnessing this conversation but continueing to listen nevertheless.

"I felt sorry for you and sacrificed" He chuckled again.

"Yeah right." Her tone made clear she didn't buy that.

"You know what I'm really good at?" Nate's voice sounded again. "To use one to score another."

"Ooooh, I love doing that too, just when I do it I usually take in the one I used first right after I scored the second." CD sounded proud about that.

'This is starting to get disguisting' Magda thought to herself, getting way too much information here now.

"Shut up and bring it on cause it's your turn to score again now." Nate said.

"Oh really? I thought it was yours." Her voice sounded playful and challenging.

"Really? You're making it damn easy for me there. Not that I mind though." He chuckled.

CD chuckled too. "Oh go ahead. I can hardly wait."

Magda listened more closely and heard some shuffling. "I don't believe this" she mumbled.

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Anybody want me to write more?

MovieHuntress17 · 06-21-2003, 04:36 PM

Ooooookay,pleez tell me they're playin cards lol
good so far,post more soon

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 06-21-2003, 04:50 PM

Go Cat Go Cat Go Cat!!! lol Of course we want you to write more... We should post some of our fan-fiction on here sometime!

KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 06-21-2003, 05:40 PM

hehe

okay 1. they are not playing cards
2. yeah we should, we also should write some more in the first place lol.
3. I'll write more later cuz I'm watching Dogma right now.

CD DeLorenzo · 06-21-2003, 09:56 PM

Here's some more... *evil smirk*

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"So how do you want me to handle this? Hard and fast or soft and tender?" Nate asked.

"As hard as you can cuz I won't be gentle with you either." Magda gulped and considered to just hang up, but somehow she couldn't.

"Alright then, you know this won't last much longer then, right? I'm already almost done." He paused for a moment. "Ahhh damn, that wasn't planned."

Then CD spoke again. "I think I'm going to set the pace now. My turn to take over and finish off here."

"Oh my god, you're really damn good at this!" Nate exclaimed after a moment and then called out: "Whoa!"

"YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!" CD yelled at the same time and cheered.

"Holy crap." Magda muttered and started to wonder if they were doing this frequently.

But then CD's voice caught her attention again. "Nate... NATE! STOP! CAREFUL!" After that she groaned followed by: "Damnit Nate! Now you got me all wet and sticky!"

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So you want the surprising last part too?

Ewan's My Man · 06-21-2003, 10:24 PM

ok...i'm definitely intrigued...

Jeanie · 06-22-2003, 12:14 AM

Please post more. I like it so far, very nice.

Jeanie

*Nancy Mckeon* · 06-22-2003, 01:07 AM

Woo hoo! go Nate! lol post more now.

CD DeLorenzo · 06-22-2003, 11:46 PM

hmh, okay so here's the end. Enjoy.

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At that moment Jinny walked up again and started to chuckle. "Way to go Nate."

"And I even warned him!" CD groaned again.

Teddy followed close behind Jinny "Hey, even I saw that one coming from a mile away.... The way you fumbled around with your ... uuuuh ... stick there... no wonder you spilled it all over her."

Nate was pouting and gave CD the most apologizing look. "I'm sorry CD, I'll buy ya a new iced tea."

"That's the least you can do after you spilled it all over me!" Her voice was still a little snappy but his look just made her smile again and he smiled back immediately.

Suddenly Jinny remembered the phone and Magda. She picked it up again. "Hey Mag I'm back."

"About time! What the hell was that?" Magda couldn't believe it still.

"What that?" Jinny gave Teddy a look, hoping Magda wasn't suspecting anything.

"CD and Nate! What the hell were they doing there?" Though she wasn't sure she really wanted to know the answer, having a pretty good idea already anyways.

"Ooooh them!" Jinny sounded relieved and chuckled. "Playing pool. What did YOU think they were doing, eh?"

She rolled her eyes. "Let's just say if THAT was playing pool I don't ever wanna hear their pillow talk..."

The End

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Anybody want a sequel? Cuz Jeanie had a lot of ideas and we started to write some more together

Ewan's My Man · 06-23-2003, 12:44 PM

that was great!

I'd love a sequel!

CD DeLorenzo · 06-23-2003, 01:02 PM

Heh

I'm glad you liked it, and here's the beginning of the sequel, just for you, even though I hope there's somebody else still reading it too.

Oh and this sequel now is called Such Is My Love, To Thee I So Belong (it's a quote from Shakespeare, one of his sonnets. I like that dude, thanks to him I graduated. Oughta buy him a beer for that or sumthin... a Shakesbeer... okay lame pun lol)

I know I mentioned it before, but she deserves the credit so I'll say it again, Jeanie is helping me with this from here

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CD noticed the look between Jinny and Teddy and raised her eyebrow and smirked. She was a good enough inspector to pick up on the guilty tone Jinny had had when talking to Magda again, plus that look was speaking louder than words.

Nate nudged her and motioned towards the restrooms. CD chuckled and nodded, knowing what he meant without him needing to verbalize it. She had also seen that they basically had walked out of the restrooms again together. She smiled at her friend and the handsome ADA until she had to chuckle again, noticing his fly was open still. "Hey zip it up again cowboy." She couldn't help but tease as she smirked at him.

He cleared his throat and blushed while he did what he apparently had forgotten to do earlier.

Nate had to laugh himself and gave Jinny a slightly confused look. "Nice style I didn't notice you wearing your shirt wrong side out earlier."

Mag was still on the line and heard this and replied, "What is your shirt doing wrongside out Jin?"

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So who wants to know what's up with her shirt? *smirk*

Or hate it completely? If so blame Jeanie. *points finger at Jeanie* She made me! She had the ideas for a sequel!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 06-23-2003, 01:14 PM

*gasps and points to Jeanie* You poor excuse for a idea maker!!!!!!!!!

lol... j/k It's good so far... post more soon! Oh I loved the original also- I read it to my boyfriend last night. lol

CD DeLorenzo · 06-23-2003, 01:21 PM

LOL, cool

Hope he liked it too

And okeeeeeeee, you wanted more, so here it goes...

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"Uhhh good question... what is my shirt doing wrongside out?" She repeated mumbling to buy herself some time. "You see, the thing is..."

CD jumped in, seeing her friend had no idea what to say and grabbed the phone from Jin. "New fashion, I'm wearing mine like that all the time too now"

Mag said "Since when?"

Now CD was the one who had to think for a moment. "Since.... since Nate is."

Upon that Nate grabbed the phone. "Magda I don't believe it! Please don't tell me you're..." he gasped for dramatic effect and then his voice sounded pretty disguisted. "...you're not wearing it like that yet!"

Jinny surpressed her laughter and decided not to be too hard on her partner. So she spoke up, taking the phone back and replied, "Actually we all are trying something new tonight."

Nate looked at Teddy as he said under his breath, "Yeah or somewhere new rather."

Teddy smirked back at Nate and looked over at CD "Or someone..."

Mag by now was completely confused. 'Where is Jonah when you need him?' She thought to herself and sighed. "Hey Jin... I'm gonna hang up, I have to make an important phonecall."

"Alright Mag... whatever." Jinny hung up, not really giving a damn, she just wanted to be with Teddy anyways.

Nate still was glaring at Teddy for his comment. Thankfully CD hadn't heard it.

"So... you guys done here?" Jinny asked. "Cause maybe then we could play some too, eh?" She smiled at Teddy who made a face.

"Ahhh... I'd rather not." He leaned closer to her and whispered into her ear. "Hey why don't we just go home and we can play another game with balls and a stick..."

Jinny chuckled and grinned. "Ohhh yeah. I like that game."

Teddy smirked and led her outside, both of them forgetting to even say bye to CD and Nate.

"Wonder what game" Nate couldn't help but comment to CD.

"Chess Nate... I'm sure they'll play chess" She laughed.

He smirked. "Most likely... so whatcha say, one more?" He motioned at the pool table.

"Hmm, another time, okay?" She tugged at her shirt. "This iced tea really is sticky and right now I pretty much just wanna go home and take a shower." Not only because of the iced tea though, but of course that was information she didn't have to share with Nate.

"Sure, I'll go home too then." He paid their bill, and Jinny and Teddy's who also had forgot to pay. He chuckled at that. It was so obvious how much in love they were. Sighing he thought 'If only I could have that too.'

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So hmmm.... more?

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 06-23-2003, 01:26 PM

I'm so special right after I post you add more

LOL... Continue...................waiting............

CD DeLorenzo · 06-23-2003, 01:33 PM

of course you are special! *starts to sing* "You are so speciaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee"

LOL anyhow, another short part especially for ya.

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Silently he and CD walked over to where they had their cars parked. Arriving at his first they paused there and smiled at each other. "So I'll see ya tomorrow then." CD spoke up first.

Nate nodded, like so often hating having to part ways with her. "Yeah tomorrow." He couldn't resist the urge to hug her though. "Sleep tight... and I'll buy ya a new shirt, I'm really sorry about..."

CD smiled as he hugged her but cut him off as she realized it was just guilt. "Don't worry about it. I'll wash it and it'll be okay again. Bye Nate."

"Bye CD." He smiled at her one last time before walking to the driver's side and opening the door.

She looked after him sadly for a moment and sighed before starting to walk over to her own car.

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There, that's it for now.

Like?

06-21-2003, 12:31 PM	#1
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	Imaginations From The Other Side uuuh yeah, so I was bored and I had an idea and uhh... well fanfic. ************************************************** "Hey hang on a second, I'll be right back" Jinny said and put her cellphone on the edge of the table, where it wouldn't be in the way for CD and Nate who occupied the table. While Jinny headed to the restrooms Magda, on the other end of the line started to hear the familiar voices of her co-workers and friends who hadn't even noticed Jinny pass by. Nate was laughing. "Hey I score twice as much as you, so stop pretending you're good." Magda frowned upon that but then again it wasn't that unusual for CD and Nate to tease each other, waiting for Jinny to get back she continued to listen. "Hey at least when I score it's always more than one." "More than one eh? Well I just had two at the same time, try to beat that." His voice sounded triumphantly. She seemed to think for a moment. "Hmm, okay haven't had that in a while... At least not today... not yet at least" "Hey if it wasn't for me you never would've gotten that last one." He chuckled. "And you're proud of that? Because I got what you could've gotten easily yourself?" Now it was her turn to laugh while Magda frowned even more, now certain she shouldn't be witnessing this conversation but continueing to listen nevertheless. "I felt sorry for you and sacrificed" He chuckled again. "Yeah right." Her tone made clear she didn't buy that. "You know what I'm really good at?" Nate's voice sounded again. "To use one to score another." "Ooooh, I love doing that too, just when I do it I usually take in the one I used first right after I scored the second." CD sounded proud about that. 'This is starting to get disguisting' Magda thought to herself, getting way too much information here now. "Shut up and bring it on cause it's your turn to score again now." Nate said. "Oh really? I thought it was yours." Her voice sounded playful and challenging. "Really? You're making it damn easy for me there. Not that I mind though." He chuckled. CD chuckled too. "Oh go ahead. I can hardly wait." Magda listened more closely and heard some shuffling. "I don't believe this" she mumbled. ************************************************** Anybody want me to write more?
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06-21-2003, 04:36 PM	#2
MovieHuntress17 #1 Actress ever Forum Regular Join Date: Oct 28, 2002 Location: "Over yonder" Posts: 886	Ooooookay,pleez tell me they're playin cards lol good so far,post more soon
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06-21-2003, 10:24 PM	#6
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	ok...i'm definitely intrigued...
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06-22-2003, 12:14 AM	#7
Jeanie Jinny & Theodore Fan Forum Regular Join Date: Nov 12, 2000 Location: NE Posts: 910	Please post more. I like it so far, very nice. Jeanie
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06-22-2003, 01:07 AM	#8
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	Woo hoo! go Nate! lol post more now.
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06-21-2003, 04:50 PM	#3
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Go Cat Go Cat Go Cat!!! lol Of course we want you to write more... We should post some of our fan-fiction on here sometime! KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!

06-21-2003, 05:40 PM	#4
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	hehe okay 1. they are not playing cards 2. yeah we should, we also should write some more in the first place lol. 3. I'll write more later cuz I'm watching Dogma right now.

06-21-2003, 09:56 PM	#5
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	Here's some more... evil smirk ************************************************** "So how do you want me to handle this? Hard and fast or soft and tender?" Nate asked. "As hard as you can cuz I won't be gentle with you either." Magda gulped and considered to just hang up, but somehow she couldn't. "Alright then, you know this won't last much longer then, right? I'm already almost done." He paused for a moment. "Ahhh damn, that wasn't planned." Then CD spoke again. "I think I'm going to set the pace now. My turn to take over and finish off here." "Oh my god, you're really damn good at this!" Nate exclaimed after a moment and then called out: "Whoa!" "YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!" CD yelled at the same time and cheered. "Holy crap." Magda muttered and started to wonder if they were doing this frequently. But then CD's voice caught her attention again. "Nate... NATE! STOP! CAREFUL!" After that she groaned followed by: "Damnit Nate! Now you got me all wet and sticky!" ************************************************** So you want the surprising last part too?

06-22-2003, 11:46 PM	#9
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	hmh, okay so here's the end. Enjoy. ************************************************** At that moment Jinny walked up again and started to chuckle. "Way to go Nate." "And I even warned him!" CD groaned again. Teddy followed close behind Jinny "Hey, even I saw that one coming from a mile away.... The way you fumbled around with your ... uuuuh ... stick there... no wonder you spilled it all over her." Nate was pouting and gave CD the most apologizing look. "I'm sorry CD, I'll buy ya a new iced tea." "That's the least you can do after you spilled it all over me!" Her voice was still a little snappy but his look just made her smile again and he smiled back immediately. Suddenly Jinny remembered the phone and Magda. She picked it up again. "Hey Mag I'm back." "About time! What the hell was that?" Magda couldn't believe it still. "What that?" Jinny gave Teddy a look, hoping Magda wasn't suspecting anything. "CD and Nate! What the hell were they doing there?" Though she wasn't sure she really wanted to know the answer, having a pretty good idea already anyways. "Ooooh them!" Jinny sounded relieved and chuckled. "Playing pool. What did YOU think they were doing, eh?" She rolled her eyes. "Let's just say if THAT was playing pool I don't ever wanna hear their pillow talk..." The End ************************************************** Anybody want a sequel? Cuz Jeanie had a lot of ideas and we started to write some more together

06-23-2003, 12:44 PM	#10
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682	that was great! I'd love a sequel!

06-23-2003, 01:02 PM	#11
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	Such Is My Love, To Thee I So Belong Heh I'm glad you liked it, and here's the beginning of the sequel, just for you, even though I hope there's somebody else still reading it too. Oh and this sequel now is called Such Is My Love, To Thee I So Belong (it's a quote from Shakespeare, one of his sonnets. I like that dude, thanks to him I graduated. Oughta buy him a beer for that or sumthin... a Shakesbeer... okay lame pun lol) I know I mentioned it before, but she deserves the credit so I'll say it again, Jeanie is helping me with this from here ************************************************** CD noticed the look between Jinny and Teddy and raised her eyebrow and smirked. She was a good enough inspector to pick up on the guilty tone Jinny had had when talking to Magda again, plus that look was speaking louder than words. Nate nudged her and motioned towards the restrooms. CD chuckled and nodded, knowing what he meant without him needing to verbalize it. She had also seen that they basically had walked out of the restrooms again together. She smiled at her friend and the handsome ADA until she had to chuckle again, noticing his fly was open still. "Hey zip it up again cowboy." She couldn't help but tease as she smirked at him. He cleared his throat and blushed while he did what he apparently had forgotten to do earlier. Nate had to laugh himself and gave Jinny a slightly confused look. "Nice style I didn't notice you wearing your shirt wrong side out earlier." Mag was still on the line and heard this and replied, "What is your shirt doing wrongside out Jin?" ************************************************** So who wants to know what's up with her shirt? smirk Or hate it completely? If so blame Jeanie. points finger at Jeanie She made me! She had the ideas for a sequel!

06-23-2003, 01:14 PM	#12
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	gasps and points to Jeanie You poor excuse for a idea maker!!!!!!!!! lol... j/k It's good so far... post more soon! Oh I loved the original also- I read it to my boyfriend last night. lol

06-23-2003, 01:21 PM	#13
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	LOL, cool Hope he liked it too And okeeeeeeee, you wanted more, so here it goes... ************************************************** "Uhhh good question... what is my shirt doing wrongside out?" She repeated mumbling to buy herself some time. "You see, the thing is..." CD jumped in, seeing her friend had no idea what to say and grabbed the phone from Jin. "New fashion, I'm wearing mine like that all the time too now" Mag said "Since when?" Now CD was the one who had to think for a moment. "Since.... since Nate is." Upon that Nate grabbed the phone. "Magda I don't believe it! Please don't tell me you're..." he gasped for dramatic effect and then his voice sounded pretty disguisted. "...you're not wearing it like that yet!" Jinny surpressed her laughter and decided not to be too hard on her partner. So she spoke up, taking the phone back and replied, "Actually we all are trying something new tonight." Nate looked at Teddy as he said under his breath, "Yeah or somewhere new rather." Teddy smirked back at Nate and looked over at CD "Or someone..." Mag by now was completely confused. 'Where is Jonah when you need him?' She thought to herself and sighed. "Hey Jin... I'm gonna hang up, I have to make an important phonecall." "Alright Mag... whatever." Jinny hung up, not really giving a damn, she just wanted to be with Teddy anyways. Nate still was glaring at Teddy for his comment. Thankfully CD hadn't heard it. "So... you guys done here?" Jinny asked. "Cause maybe then we could play some too, eh?" She smiled at Teddy who made a face. "Ahhh... I'd rather not." He leaned closer to her and whispered into her ear. "Hey why don't we just go home and we can play another game with balls and a stick..." Jinny chuckled and grinned. "Ohhh yeah. I like that game." Teddy smirked and led her outside, both of them forgetting to even say bye to CD and Nate. "Wonder what game" Nate couldn't help but comment to CD. "Chess Nate... I'm sure they'll play chess" She laughed. He smirked. "Most likely... so whatcha say, one more?" He motioned at the pool table. "Hmm, another time, okay?" She tugged at her shirt. "This iced tea really is sticky and right now I pretty much just wanna go home and take a shower." Not only because of the iced tea though, but of course that was information she didn't have to share with Nate. "Sure, I'll go home too then." He paid their bill, and Jinny and Teddy's who also had forgot to pay. He chuckled at that. It was so obvious how much in love they were. Sighing he thought 'If only I could have that too.' ************************************************** So hmmm.... more?
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06-23-2003, 01:26 PM	#14
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	I'm so special right after I post you add more LOL... Continue...................waiting............

06-23-2003, 01:33 PM	#15
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	of course you are special! starts to sing "You are so speciaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee" LOL anyhow, another short part especially for ya. ************************************************** Silently he and CD walked over to where they had their cars parked. Arriving at his first they paused there and smiled at each other. "So I'll see ya tomorrow then." CD spoke up first. Nate nodded, like so often hating having to part ways with her. "Yeah tomorrow." He couldn't resist the urge to hug her though. "Sleep tight... and I'll buy ya a new shirt, I'm really sorry about..." CD smiled as he hugged her but cut him off as she realized it was just guilt. "Don't worry about it. I'll wash it and it'll be okay again. Bye Nate." "Bye CD." He smiled at her one last time before walking to the driver's side and opening the door. She looked after him sadly for a moment and sighed before starting to walk over to her own car. ************************************************** There, that's it for now. Like?