Ok...this is my new fic...um its kinda boring right now but it'll get somewhere.



Nate sat on the couch of his living room with his head in his hands. He’d had a pretty rough day. He didn’t even go to work. CD had to work alone. Nate felt bad for leaving CD, but he needed time to re-gather himself and his emotions.

Captain Kaitlyn McCafferty sat on the couch of her living room as well. Her day hadn’t been so bad, but Charles was getting on her case today. She recalled the events of the day in her head, ‘ Jinny and Magda were working on a homicide. Raina was nagging her and being a pain as usual. CD had to work alone because Nate hadn’t showed up for work’. Kate had pondered all day why Nate hadn’t showed up for work. Kate thought for a few minutes. She decided to pick up the phone and dial Nate’s number.


Back at Nate’s house, Nate had dozed off. When the phone rang he jumped up. His eyes were wide. The ringing phone scared him. Nate took a minute to gather himself. The ringing phone
only seemed to grow louder with each ring. “Alright already! Alright.” Nate said to the phone. He picked up the phone and spoke into it. “Hello?” “Nate?” the voice of Kate McCafferty came
through the phone penetrating Nate’s ear. “Captain?” Nate asked. “Yeah its me.” Kate said. “Hi Captain. Uh, how ya doin’?” Nate asked. “I’m Fine. Look, I was calling to see if you were
okay. You didn’t show up for work today.” Kate said. Nate didn’t know what to tell his Captain. He wasn’t sure if he could muster the strength to say it. Nate paused for a minute. He didn’t speak.

“Nate?” Kate spoke into the phone, “Are you there?” Nate snapped back into reality and answered Kate. “Yeah I’m here. Sorry.” “That’s okay.” Kate said. Nate decided to answer Kate’s initial question even though he was reluctant, “Captain, I didn’t come into work today because…” Nate’s voice trailed off. From her end of the phone Kate could hear Nate sob. “Nate, what’s wrong? Something’s obviously bothering you.” Kate said. “Captain, its just…one of my family members died and I just needed some time.” Nate said. “You wanna talk about it?” Kate asked. “No…Its hard. I…can’t.” Nate replied in a shaky voice. “I know its hard to lose someone, but its better if you talk about it. Look, its still early. You can come over and we’ll have coffee and you can talk to me about it.” Kate offered. “That’d be good.” Nate said. “So, you’re coming over, right?” Kate asked. “Yeah. I’ll be there in fifteen minutes.” Nate said. “Okay I’ll be here.” Kate replied.


Both Kate and Nate hung up their phones. Nate got dressed, got his keys and headed to the Captain’s house. Kate on the other hand was preparing coffee and asking herself why she even offered to have Nate over.



thats it for now...more later

Post more!! NOW!!!!

pleeeeeeez:D

It is good so far. I can't wait to read more! post more soon please!

I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next! You HAVE to post a LOT more today!

Okey Dokey...heres some more...


Nate arrived at Kate’s house around eight- thirty. It was pouring rain outside and Nate was soaking wet. Kate had just finished setting up the coffee on the coffee table when she heard the doorbell ring. ‘That must be Nate’ she thought. She walked to the door and opened it. There was Nate, standing out in the rain. “Nate, you’re all wet. Come on in. Let me take your coat.” Before Nate could even start to take off his own coat, Kate began sliding it off his back. “Uh, thanks” Nate said. “No problem. Have a seat.” Kate motioned towards the couch.

Nate took a seat on Kate’s white couch. Kate seated herself next to him. There was silence for a few minutes until Kate’s voice broke the silence. “So Nate, how are you doing? Are you okay?” Kate said while looking at the face of her inspector. “I’m okay. I’m still trying to grasp the idea that my mother’s gone.” Nate said in a shaky voice. “Your mother?” Kate asked. “Yeah. She died yesterday of cancer.” Nate said. “Tell me about her” Kate said in a soft, tender voice.

An hour later Nate was a wreck. His conversation with Kate had gotten so emotional that he just couldn’t control his emotions. Kate felt bad for him. She didn’t know what to say or what to do. She knew how it felt to lose someone close, she knew how hard it was. Nate sat there looking down at the cup of coffee in his hands. He couldn’t even drink it. He put it back on the coffee table and slouched back in his seat. Kate watched as he grew even more upset. She put her arm around him to try to comfort him. She then began massaging his shoulder. Nate closed his eyes. Kate never took her eyes off of him. She watched his every facial expression. She could almost read him like abook.

Tears came flowing down Nate’s cheeks. Still, Kate massaged his shoulder. She ran her fingers up his neck and began caressing his neck. This sent a shiver down Nate’s spine. He couldn’t believe this was happening and he didn’t want her to stop. Kate’s hand worked its way up to Nate’s head. She ran her fingers through his hair a few times. Then she stopped. Nate’s eyes opened, tears still in them. They looked at each other. Kate placed her hand on Nate’s face. She looked into his eyes. “Its gonna be okay.” Kate said while placing her other hand on the other side of Nate’s face.

They stared into each other’s eyes for a moment. Nate knew what he wanted and so did Kate. They leaned towards each other and kissed. It was a long intense kiss. Then Kate pulled away. She looked at Nate and Nate looked at her. There was a silence for a minute or so. Kate couldn’t help herself. She began kissing Nate again. Nate was kissing her as well. He worked his way down to Kate’s neck and began to kiss her. Kate enjoyed it. She was trying her best to let him know just how much she enjoyed it. Kate leaned back, now almost laying down, she brought Nate with her.

Two hours later, Nate was putting his clothes back on. Kate was doing the same. They hadn’t spoken to each other for a couple of minutes. All they could do was look at one another. “This wasn’t supposed to happen.” Kate said. “I know” Nate answered back. “But it was fun and I enjoyed it.” Kate said. “Yeah me too” Nate replied. Kate smiled. “Look, I uh…gotta go. I guess I’ll see you tomorrow.” Nate said. “Yeah, but not a word to anybody. Okay?” Kate said. “I wont say anything.” Kate stood up and walked towards the front door to say goodbye to Nate. Before Nate left he decided to give Kate a goodnight kiss and so he did. “Bye Captain” Nate said. “Bye Nate. See you in the morning.” Kate said. Nate left and kate closed the door.


so what do ya think?

All I can say is:

Oh.....my.....god!!!!!!!!!


I soooooo did not see that coming!!!


You have to post more!

o baby o baby taray!!!!!!! lol!!!!! this is gooooooooooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!! india arie gooooooooood ;) i luf it!!!!!!!11 post more ASAP

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!
All I can say is:

Oh.....my.....god!!!!!!!!!


I soooooo did not see that coming!!!


You have to post more!


I second that oh my God!!!!!!!!! I can't stand it I have to know what happens! Post more soon!

Originally posted by Bonnie Is Great!



I second that oh my God!!!!!!!!! I can't stand it I have to know what happens! Post more soon!

I third that! You better post more ASAP! :)

Here's more:


The next morning Nate woke up in his bed barely remembering the night before. He knew something different had happened but he wasn’t sure what. His mind was elsewhere. He was still an emotional wreck. Nate got out of bed, walked to the bathroom, and took a shower.

Kate woke up in her bed, she was still tired and worn out. She took a minute to think about the night before. She smiled to herself. She slowly got out of bed and looked in the mirror. Kate wanted to look special today. She played with her hair a bit. “Eh, I’ll fix it later” She said out loud. She walked into the bathroom and took a shower.

Forty-five minutes later, both Nate and Kate were ready to head for work. Nate was dressed neatly. He even shaved this morning. Kate was dressed in her favorite hunter green suit. Instead of pants, she wore a skirt with a slit on the side. She figured that showing off a little leg wouldn’t hurt.

Kate arrived at the division before Nate did. When she saw that he wasn’t there, she panicked. ‘Did I scare him away?’ She thought as she walked into her office. Kate was just getting settled when she saw Nate walk into the division. She was relieved but she realized how nervous Nate looked.

Nate walked into the division and took his usual seat at his desk. He put his head in his hands. He definitely did not want to be there. ‘What the hell was I thinking last night?’ Nate thought. “Hey what’s the matter?” CD walked over to Nate. “I just have a headache” Nate said. “Oh” CD walked away thinking Nate didn’t want to be bothered. Just then Kate came out of her office with a folder. “Ok. Cases…” She opened the first folder. “Jinny and Magda. Another homicide. A young man, around 20 years of age, was found dead in an alley. No suspects. Nothing so far. Get on it.” Kate said. “Sure Cap no prob” Jinny answered. “CD and Nate. Let’s see here.” Kate said as she walked towards Nate. “There’s been a nice little robbery and murder down on Baker Street. Have fun.”

Kate looked at Nate. She put her hand on his shoulder. “You look sick. You alright Mr. Basso?” Kate said. “I’ll be fine. I think.” Nate said. “You wanna talk about it?” Kate asked. Nate looked down remembering that that was the question that had started this whole ordeal. Nate looked up at Kate and shook his head. “No…that’s uh…okay.” Nate said. “I’m always here when you need to talk.” Kate said. “No Captain. I’ll be fine. Thanks though.” Nate said. “Well anytime you need me you know where to find me. Okay?” Kate said. “Yeah. Thanks” Nate answered back. Nate grew terribly uncomfortable. As Kate began to walk away she smiled and winked at Nate. Nate looked down at the ground. He couldn’t believe how obvious it was that something had happened between them. “What was that all about?” CD asked. “I don’t know.” Nate shrugged.

Kate walked into her office, shut the door and sat down. She thought about last night and how much she liked it. She was in a daze for a couple of minutes. Then she snapped out of it. Kate began her work for the day.



Okay...that sucked and it was so boring. ugh..sorry guys...more later tho

Woooo!
Hurry up and post more!!
I can't wait to see what happens next!

Heres some more. I know this is boring as hell but whatever.


An hour later Kate wanted to check on everyone’s progress with their cases. Kate got up out of her chair and walked out of her office. “Hey guys. How’s it goin’?” Kate said. “Well, so far, there are no witnesses or anything.” CD said as Kate walked by. Kate walked over to Nate’s desk. She smiled at him and leaned against his desk. “Jinny, Magda? Anything so far?” Jinny looked up at her Captain. “Well, we know the victim was shot three times. Once in the left leg. Once in the chest and once in the head. And so far there are no witnesses.”

Kate shook her head in disappointment. “Guys we gotta get cracking on these cases. Or else I’m gonna have Charles on my case for the rest of my life. Come on” Kate said. “Why doesn’t he just back off?” Nate said defensively. “Yeah I know. He’s up all of our asses every other minute.” Jinny said. “Guys, I hear you but I can’t do anything about it. He’s my boss. I have to eat whatever crap he feeds me whether I like it or not. Its out of my hands as of right now.” Kate answered her inspectors.

Kate started heading back to her office, but she decided to turn around. She walked over to Nate and put her hand on the back of his neck. “By the way, Mr. Basso, you look a lot better now. I hope everything is okay.” She said. Nate quickly stood up. He got so nervous that his reflexes caused him to jump. “Uh thanks Captain. “ Nate said nervously. “Yeah.” Kate said with a grin. Kate headed back to her office. CD questioningly looked at Nate. “What the hell was that?” CD asked. Nate shrugged it off once again. He couldn’t handle this. He just wanted it to stop. “Nate, Cap’s a nutcase. Don’t even bother thinking twice about half of the things she does. She’s just, you know, crazy.” Jinny said reassuringly. “Yeah. I’ll keep that in mind.” Nate said.

At that moment, Kate walked out of her office once again. CD, Nate. I need to see you in my office for a second. CD groaned. “What? What does she want now?” CD whispered to Nate as they made their way to Kate’s office. “Shut the door” Kate said to CD. CD did as she was told and took a seat. Nate however decided not to sit down. He stood behind Kate instead. Kate read over the case with them. “I just got a phone call. We have a witness.” Kate said. As Kate spoke to CD and Nate, Nate put his hand on the back of Kate’s chair and leaned over her shoulder. CD watched all of this with great suspicion. “What in the world?’ CD thought. Kate could feel Nate breathing on her. Kate looked up at him, “Uh Mr. Basso, could you uh…back off just a little bit?” Nate looked shocked. “Uh sure” Nate said. “Thanks ever so much.” Kate answered back with a smile. “Now, where were we?”

Ten minutes later CD and Nate were walking out of Kate’s office. Nate was waiting for CD to question him. CD thought it was best that she didn’t say anything.


Geez...that probably sucked big time....

krabby patty #2/taray...ive gotta wonder wut u mean wen u say, "that sucked"...i think u have a different definition for that word because well....that DIDNT suck!!!!!! its....GR8! :D

That was great! It didn't suck at all. I want more. I need more. Post more soon please!!!!:)

Okay...heres some more...

The rest of the day went pretty smoothly. It was six o’clock in the evening. Jinny, Magda, CD, and Raina had all left the division by this time. Kate was still there going over some paper work. She heard a knock at the door. The door slowly opened. It was Nate. “Hi” Kate said with a smile. “Hey Captain.” Nate said. “Shut the door” Nate did as he was told. “Have a seat.” Kate said. Nate took a seat across from the Captain’s desk. “So…” Nate started the conversation. “So…” Kate answered back. “Look, I’m sorry about today. It was hard to keep myself together. I didn’t mean to make it so obvious.” Kate apologized. “Yeah I was worried someone would catch on.” Nate said. “How come you haven’t gone home yet?” Kate asked. With a grin Nate answered her question, “I was waiting for you.” Kate looked at him and smiled. “Oh really?” Kate asked. “Yeah. Any objections?” Nate said. “No not at all.” Kate answered back. Kate leaned towards Nate from her desk and whispered, “But you’ll have to leave before me just so its not too obvious.” Nate stood up from his chair. “Okay. Um…I’ll see you in the lobby I guess.” Nate whispered back. “Okay. I’ll be there in a minute.” Kate said with a smile.

Nate left Kate’s office and got his stuff at his desk. He put on his coat and walked out of the division. He headed towards the elevator and got in. He reached the lobby a few minutes later. He waited for Kate. Kate had finished her paperwork for the day. She got up from her chair, put on her coat and grabbed her bag. She exited the division and walked to the elevator. She got in. When she reached the lobby she found Nate waiting for her. They walked outside together. “So, whose house is it tonight?” Nate whispered. Kate smiled. “How about mine?” She whispered back. “Sounds good to me.” Nate said.

They separated and walked to their cars. Kate got in her car. Nate got in his. Kate drove off and Nate followed. When they reached Kate’s house, Kate parked her car in the driveway and got out. Nate had parked his car down the street and walked back to Kate’s house. Kate was waiting for him at the front door. When he got there she unlocked the door and they both walked in. Kate took her coat off and hung it up in the closet. She took Nate’s coat and did the same. “Nate, I have to change. I’ll be right back. Just sit down or something.” Kate said. “Okay” Nate answered back. Nate sat down on the couch and waited for Kate. Kate walked upstairs to her room to change.

When Kate came back downstairs Nate was stunned. He couldn’t believe that his Captain could look the way she did. Nate saw her and his jaw dropped. She was dressed in a red, silk nightgown with a silk robe over it. Her hair was down and it just touched her shoulders. Nate stood up and just stared at her. “Do you like it?” Kate asked. “Its…its…wow” Nate replied. Kate walked towards Nate. She stood right infront of him. He looked at her in amazement. For him it was still like a dream. ‘This can’t be happening…again.’ Nate thought. Despite his reluctances, Nate kissed Kate. Kate kissed him back. They kept going at it until Kate pulled away, just like she had done the night before. She looked at Nate. She took his hand and said, “Come on.”

Kate led Nate upstairs to her bedroom. They began to kiss again. Nate untied her robe and took it off. Kate unbuttoned his shirt. Nate sat down on the bed and Kate crawled on top of him.

The next morning Kate woke up. She turned over and saw Nate. He was still asleep. She looked at him and smiled to herself. She looked at her clock and realized she was late for work. And so was Nate. “Oh geez.” Kate rolled her eyes. She looked at Nate and began to shake his body. “Nate wake up! We’re late!” Kate yelled. Nate jumped up. “What!?! We’re late?. Oh great just great. This is all I needed.” Nate said. “Just get up. Lets go.” Kate said. “You should go home and get ready.” Kate suggested. “Yeah. I will.” Nate said. Nate got out of bed and started putting his clothes back on. Kate got out of bed as well. She looked at Nate and laughed. “What?” Nate asked. “Nothing. I just never thought I’d be having an affair with any of my inspectors.” Kate said. “Hey. I never thought I’d be doing this with my Captain.” Nate answered back. Before Nate left he gave Kate a kiss. “Oh, wait a minute. Try to get to the division before me. Just so its not so obvious. Okay?” Kate said. “Will do” Nate answered. “Good. Now gimme another kiss.” Kate said with a smile. Nate did so and left Kate’s house. Kate headed to the bathroom to take a shower.


I know this is boring....but tell me wut ya think anyway.

How can you say it sux? It's awesome! I luf it! I can't wait to see what happens next! You have to ppost more either tonight or tomorrow! :D :D :D

taray...wut can i say...ur ff really makes my day...it is so cool in every way...it wud be an understatement to just say its funkay...i hope theres more on the way!;)

Originally posted by Blair n' Jo Rock
taray...wut can i say...ur ff really makes my day...it is so cool in every way...it wud be an understatement to just say its funkay...i hope theres more on the way!;)
lmao,
Yeah,what she said!

Ditto!!!

Heres some more...


Nate parked his car in the parking lot of the police department. Just as he got out of the car, he saw Kate pull up in her car. She waved at him and parked. She got out of her car and walked over to him. “Hey.” She said with a smile. “Hey” Nate said back. “Come on, we’re already late.” Kate said. Nate and Kate walked into the building and into the elevator. They found themselves alone in the elevator. “So Nate” Kate said. “So Kate” Nate said. Not many words were needed, they knew where this was going and it went there. They began to kiss each other. They immediately stopped when the elevator stopped. The doors opened and Raina was standing there. “Hey guys!” Raina said. “Hi uh Raina” Nate said. The elevator doors closed. “You two are two hours late” Raina said as she looked at her watch. “Yeah I know.” Kate said. “By the way, Inspector Basso, why are you so late? Did you have a hot date last night?” Kate said with a chuckle. “No Captain. I was just…uh…planning the funeral for my mother.” Nate said. “Oh I see.” Kate answered back. “Your mother? She died? Oh I’m so sorry Nate.” Raina said to Nate. “Its…its okay.” Nate reassured Raina.

The elevator stopped and they all got out and headed to the division. They walked in and found CD, Jinny, and Magda chatting away. “Hey guys” Kate said. “Hey Captain.” CD said. “Hey, you guys are late.” Magda informed Nate and Kate. “Oh I know.” Kate said. “Yeah, I had to make plans for my mother’s funeral.” Nate hated having to use his mother’s death as a cover up. “Oh Nate, I’m so sorry.” Magda said. “And what’s your excuse Cap’n?” Jinny asked. “Me? Oh I…uh…well…I was...uh…well…that’s none of your business.” Kate said. “Oooh Cap must’ve had a long night. She must be gettin’ some booty. Are ya? Huh?” Jinny said. Everyone laughed except Kate and Nate. Kate was embarrassed beyond belief. She could not believe Jinny would say something like that. “Exstead, my office.” Kate said. Jinny just sat there and looked at the Captain. “NOW” Kate said. “Alright, alright. I’m comin’. Sheesh.” Jinny said as she got up from her chair. She walked into Kate’s office, shut the door, and took a seat.

“Jinny…” Kate started. “Captain...” Jinny said. “Jinny…” Kate said again. “Captain…” Jinny said with a grin. “Stop. Now what the hell was that out there?” Kate asked. “What? I was just kidding” Jinny snapped back. “It was completely uncalled for.” Kate said. “Yeah well…” Kate looked at Jinny and shook her head. “Y’know, you have got to be one of the best cops on my squad. But you’ve got the worst attitude.” Kate said. “Gee thanks. I feel so special now.” Jinny said. “Can I go now?” She asked Kate. “Yeah go ahead. And tell Nate to get in here.” Kate said. “Gotcha” Jinny walked out of Kate’s office.

“Nate!” Jinny called. Nate looked up. “What?” He said. “Cap’n wants ya.” Jinny said. “Oh Ok.” Nate made his way to Kate’s office. “Yeah?” Nate said as he walked in. “Shut the door.” Kate said. Nate did as he was told and took a seat. “I was wondering, when is your mother’s actual funeral?” Kate asked. “Well, it’s tonight. I’m gonna go after work.” Nate answered. “Oh I see.” Kate looked down. There was a silence for about a minute. “Do you uh, wanna come with me tonight? I mean…I really don’t wanna go alone.” Nate said. “Nate, I…I don’t know.” Kate shook her head. “Its just that…I mean…I’m not sure that it would be appropriate for me to go.” Kate said. “But…I need you.” Nate said as he looked into Kate’s eyes. Kate felt so bad for Nate. And she couldn’t do anything to comfort him because they were at work. How would it look to her other inspectors? She wanted so bad to hug him or something but she knew she couldn’t.

“Nate, if it would make you feel better…I’ll go with you.” Kate said. Nate’s face lit up. “I just didn’t think it was right for me to go.” She said. “I know. But I really appreciate it Captain.” Nate said. “Nate…” Kate started with a grin. Nate looked up at her. “Nate…with everything that’s happened between us, I don’t think it’s necessary for you to call me Captain. But when we’re here at work, I’m always Captain. Okay?” Kate said. “Yeah. Okay.” Nate answered back. “You can leave now.” Kate said. “Okay. Bye” Nate said with a smile. Kate winked at him as he left. Nate smiled and walked out of Kate’s office.

“What’d she want?” Jinny asked. “Oh uh…she wanted to ask me if I wanted to take a few days off to plan my mother’s...uh…funeral.” Nate said. “Oh.” Jinny replied. Nate took his seat at his desk and began discussing the case with CD.


Sooo....watcha think?

ooo krabby patty number two, this ff does not make me feel blue, this is sooo gr8 u kno its true, and if u add some more every1 will luf u!!!!!!!

*shakes head* just not the same the 2nd time around

This is great! I can't wait to read more. Post more soon please!!

Ya wanna know wht I think huh?

Well here's what I think:

I want MOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!

This fan fiction rox! You have to post more REAL soon! And I mean like TODAY!

Guys....I am so deeply depressed right now.....Bonnie left the show.....I just cant believe it...so I dont know if I can even continue this fic....I am just so upset right now.....but I'll try to write more.....

Originally posted by consentida25
Guys....I am so deeply depressed right now.....Bonnie left the show.....I just cant believe it...so I dont know if I can even continue this fic....I am just so upset right now.....but I'll try to write more.....

*hugs taray* she'll be back......until we get proof shes gone.....ya gotta keep thinkin shes comin back:)

Originally posted by Blair n' Jo Rock


*hugs taray* she'll be back......until we get proof shes gone.....ya gotta keep thinkin shes comin back:)

It's to hard right now! :( It's to hard! :(

Originally posted by consentida25
Guys....I am so deeply depressed right now.....Bonnie left the show.....I just cant believe it...so I dont know if I can even continue this fic....I am just so upset right now.....but I'll try to write more..... Hey, I really dont think she's gone for good. Think positive cuz I think she'll be back next season...btw this fic is awesome and I cant wait for more!

It's just to hard right now! :(

Originally posted by consentida25
Guys....I am so deeply depressed right now.....Bonnie left the show.....I just cant believe it...so I dont know if I can even continue this fic....I am just so upset right now.....but I'll try to write more.....

Aww poor Tara *pats ur back*

Okay, I want you to repeat after me,and we are gonna keep repeating it until ya get it through ur little head,okay? here we go:

Bonnie is NOT leaving!
Bonnie is NOT leaving!
Bonnie is NOT leaving!
Bonnie is NOT leaving!

Now, you just keep repeating it untill, you feel better okay.
Remember, Kate is just going on vacation! * nods head vigorously*

I REFUSE to believe that Bonnie is leaving, until she confirms it herself! Or until next season gets here and I turn out to be wrong,wich ever comes 1st.
BUT, I am NOT wrong!!


oh,yeah almost forgot.....

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ, post more!!

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!


Aww poor Tara *pats ur back*

Okay, I want you to repeat after me,and we are gonna keep repeating it until ya get it through ur little head,okay? here we go:

Bonnie is NOT leaving!
Bonnie is NOT leaving!
Bonnie is NOT leaving!
Bonnie is NOT leaving!

Now, you just keep repeating it untill, you feel better okay.
Remember, Kate is just going on vacation! * nods head vigorously*

I REFUSE to believe that Bonnie is leaving, until she confirms it herself! Or until next season gets here and I turn out to be wrong,wich ever comes 1st.

BUT, I am NOT wrong!!


oh,yeah almost forgot.....

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ, post more!!

I guess that you are right. But still....

Originally posted by consentida25
Guys....I am so deeply depressed right now.....Bonnie left the show.....I just cant believe it...so I dont know if I can even continue this fic....I am just so upset right now.....but I'll try to write more.....




I really have to agree with all of you who say that Bonnie will be back next season. I am really sorry that you feel depressed. But until we know for sure that she is leaving, don't give up hope.



pleaes keep writting your fanfic, it is awesome!

Thanks guys....I feel better today...I'm gonna add more to my fic later today...right now i have to study for a regents exam so...yeah...:wave:

Good girl! I'm glad you feel better! I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Okay...heres some more:

That evening, when everyone left, Nate made his way to Kate’s office. He knocked on the door. “Come in” Kate said. Nate opened the door and walked in. “Hey” Nate looked at Kate. “Hey” Kate said with a smile. “You ready?” Nate asked. “Yeah. Are you?” Kate looked up at Nate. “I think so.” Nate said as he looked down at the ground. Kate stood up and walked over to Nate. She rubbed his back. “Come on. Let’s go.” Kate said.

They left Kate’s office clinging to each other for comfort. They had totally forgotten where they were. Even though nobody was there to see them, the situation was still risky. Neither of them cared though. Kate and Nate made their way to the elevator and got in. Kate put her head on his shoulder and Nate put his arm around her. “Nate…” Kate said. “Yeah?” Nate looked at Kate. “Are you gonna be okay? I mean, is it gonna be alright if I go tonight?” Kate asked. “Yeah Cap. Its okay if you come with me tonight.” Nate said. Kate smirked. “What?” Nate asked as he saw the look on Kate’s face. Kate whispered in his ear “You called me Cap.” Nate smiled. Kate looked up at him and smiled back. Nate leaned in for a kiss. “Mmm…That’s what I like about you. You know just what to do.” Kate said.

The elevator doors opened and they both walked out of the building holding hands. They made their way to the parking lot. “I guess I’ll follow you.” Kate said. “Why don’t you just come in my car?” Nate said. “Okay” Kate followed Nate to his car. Nate opened the door for her. She got in. Nate walked around to the other side of the car and let himself in. He started the car and drove off.

For most of the ride, there was silence. When they were about half way to the funeral home Nate spoke. “Captain…I mean Kate.” Kate looked at him. “Yeah?” She put her hand on his arm. “What is it?” She said in a tender voice. “ Thanks for coming with me.” Nate said. “You’re welcome.” Kate said. “I’m still not sure if I can handle this.” Nate said while a tear rolled down his cheek. Kate wiped the tear from his cheek and looked at him. “It’s gonna be okay. I’m here with you now.” More tears streamed down Nate’s face. “This is so difficult right now. I mean, I lost the most important woman in my life and I also gained another important woman who treats me with tenderness and compassion. Its something I never expected.” Kate looked at him. She felt tears welling up in her eyes. She shook her head. “You’re not talking about me are you?” She said. “I am” Nate answered back. Kate, now felt that she had a purpose in her life at that moment. Nate was emotionally unstable and she had to protect him.

Nate pulled up to a parking spot at the funeral home. He got out and opened the door for Kate. She got out of the car. And once again clinging to one another they walked into the building. When Nate saw the scene that took place before him, he almost fell to the ground. There was his mother in front of the room lying in a casket, her eyes shut and hands folded across her chest. The room was filled with family photos and flowers. As Nate’s eyes scanned the room he saw all of his family members looking pale and grim. They felt what he felt. And he no longer felt alone.

Nate walked to the front of the room to pay his respects. He brought Kate with him. Kate really didn’t want to go, but she wanted to be there for him. When the reached the casket, Nate looked down at his mother’s face. “You were so sick and in so much pain, but its all over now Mom. You’re safe and happy now.” Nate said to his mother’s lifeless body. “Oh Nate” Kate said. Kate could see the sadness in his eyes. She wanted to comfort him, but she was interrupted.

“Hi Nate” The voice of Nate’s sister Irene penetrated his ears. “Irene…hi” Nate said. He hugged his sister. “How are you doing?” Nate asked Irene. “I’m okay Nate. It was hard at first but at least she’s not hurting anymore.” Irene said. “Yeah…” Nate looked down to the ground.
“Oh by the way, this is Kate McCafferty, my…um…Captain.” Nate said. Kate extended her hand and shook Irene’s. “Its nice to meet you Irene.” Kate said with a slight smile. “Its nice to meet you too.” Irene said. Irene walked away and left Nate and kate by the casket. All Nate could do was look at his mother.

Two hours later the service was over. Nate and Kate walked out of the funeral home and to the car. They got in and sat in silence for a minute or so. “Tomorrow morning is the burial.” Nate said. “Oh Honey, its gonna be alright.” Kate said. Another moment of silence passed. Kate thought for a moment. She was reluctant about saying what she was about to say, but it came out of her mouth anyway. “If you want, I’ll go with you tomorrow.” Nate looked at Kate. “You will?” Nate asked. “Yeah. We’ll be late for work, but I’ll go.” Kate said. “Thank you so much Kate.” Nate said. “No problem." Kate smiled. "We have to pick up my car.” Kate said. “Oh yeah that’s right.” Nate said. “And I think you should stay with me tonight.” Kate said as she stroked Nate’s hair. “You can get whatever you need from your place and you can come home with me tonight.” Kate said. “That would be okay I guess. I mean, because then we can leave straight from your house tomorrow morning.” Nate said. “Yeah.” Kate answered back . Nate started the car and drove off.



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Nate took Kate to pick up her car. Kate followed him back to his house and waited outside for him. Nate went inside his house and grabbed the stuff that he needed. When he came out of the house, he had a huge bag full of things that he needed. Nate lugged the bag from his front door to the trunk of Kate’s car. Kate opened the trunk for him and he put his bag in the car.
Nate got in the passenger seat of the car. Kate looked at him curiously. “What?” Nate asked in response to Kate’s facial expression. “Nothing.” Kate said with a smirk. “What?” Nate asked once again. “I don’t even need that much stuff to stay over someone’s house for one night.” Kate said with a chuckle. “Yeah well” Nate said. Kate started the car and drove off.

When the reached Kate’s house, Kate opened the trunk once again. Nate got out of the car and lifted his bag out of the trunk and lugged it to Kate’s front door. Kate got out of the car and walked to the door. She unlocked it and let Nate in. Nate put his bag on the floor and took off his coat. Kate took off her coat and hung it in the closet, she did the same with Nate’s coat. “What time is it?” Nate asked. Kate looked at the clock hanging on the wall, “Its 10 o’clock.” She said. Kate walked over to Nate and rubbed his back, “Why? You wanna go to bed. I know you must be tired.” She said. “I’m not all that tired. It’s just that we gotta be at there at 9 o’clock tomorrow. I don’t wanna be late. So maybe we should go to bed, y’know?” Nate said. “I understand. I mean I’m not really tired either. I’m just kind of hungry. I haven’t eaten all day.” Kate said as she rubbed her belly. “Yeah. I’m hungry too.” Nate said. “You wanna eat something? I mean I could cook, if you want.” Kate said. “No, that’s okay. It would be too much trouble.” Nate said. “No really, I’ll make something.” Kate said as she departed from Nate. “Alright then. If that’s what you wanna do.” Nate said. “Yeah. I’m gonna go change first.” Kate said. Kate made her way upstairs to her room and changed into something more comfortable. Nate sat down on the couch and waited.

Kate came down the stairs in a t-shirt and shorts and headed to the kitchen. Nate followed her to the kitchen. “So, what do you wanna eat? Lets see what we have here…” Kate said as she opened up her refrigerator. “I gotta go shopping big time. I have nothing to eat.” She said. “Oh wait a second…I could make pasta. You like pasta?” Kate said to Nate. “Of course. I’m part Italian so I grew up on that stuff.” Nate said. “Are you really? I would’ve never guessed.” Kate said. “Yep. I’m half Italian and proud.” Nate said. “Oh, now I can call you my Italian Stallion.” Kate said with a smirk. “And what am I supposed to call you? Sweet Cakes?” Nate said with a chuckle. Kate pushed him away. “There is no way I’m gonna let you call me that.” She said as she laughed. “Anyway…so you want pasta, is that correct Mr. Basso?” Kate said with a smile. “That’s right.” Nate said. “Okay then.” Kate said as she took out the box of pasta. “I’m gonna go change.” Nate said. “Okay.” Kate answered back.

Nate picked up his bag and hauled it up the stairs to Kate’s room. He plopped it down on her bed and opened it. He took out a t-shirt and a pair of shorts and put them on. When he was finished changing, Nate made his way downstairs to the kitchen. He found Kate standing by the kitchen counter preparing everything and humming to herself. He snuck up behind her very quietly. He put his hands on her hips. Just as he did so, a smile came to Kate’s lips. Nate brought Kate’s body close to his. “Mr. Basso…” Kate said with a smile. “Hey” Nate said as he kissed her on the cheek. “Hey” Kate said in a soft voice. Nate backed off of Kate and sat down at the kitchen table. “How’s it goin’?” He asked. “It’s goin’ good. This should be ready in about half hour.” Kate informed Nate. “Good” Nate said. “Yeah” Kate said as she took a seat at the kitchen table.

“So…” Nate started. “So…” Kate said in response to Nate. “I never thought this would happen.” Nate said. “What? Us?” Kate asked. “Yeah. I mean…you’re my captain. And its just not supposed to happen.” Nate said. “But it did. How do you feel about it though?” Kate said. “I’m not sure. I mean…I don’t know. How do you feel?” Nate said. “This was an unexpected thing that happened here. All I wanted to do that first night was comfort you. And it led to something else. We can’t change that. I care about you. I care about all of my inspectors and officers, but now with everything that’s happened, I see you differently.” Kate said. “You’re different than any other woman I’ve been with. The way you touch me and make me feel…its something I’ve never experienced before. I feel so comfortable with you.” Nate said. Kate shook her head. She got up from her chair and made her way to the other side of the table where Nate was sitting. She kissed him on the lips and embraced him.

A few minutes later Kate was preparing two plates of pasta for Nate and herself. She set the plates on the table and they began to eat. “This is good.” Nate said. Kate smiled, “Thanks.”
Ten minutes later they were done eating and. Kate cleaned everything up. “Its almost eleven. Come on, let’s go to bed.” Kate said as she took Nate’s hand. They headed upstairs to the bedroom. They got in bed and fell right to sleep.



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The next morning, Kate and Nate woke up bright and early. They took showers and got dressed. Both were dressed appropriately for the burial and work. Kate put on her coat and grabbed her bag. She waited for Nate by the front door. He was still putting on his coat and making sure that he looked his best for saying the last goodbye to his mother. Nate walked out the front door and Kate locked it. They headed towards her car and got in. Kate started the car and pulled out of her driveway.

They got to the funeral home earlier than they had expected. They went into the building. Nobody was there yet, only they were. Nate walked up to his mother’s casket. Kate sat down in a chair. Nate looked at his mother’s lifeless body. “Mom…I love you. I miss you.” He said. Nate put his hand in his mother’s. “I can’t believe this happened to you. I’m so glad that you aren’t in pain any more, but I’m gonna miss you so much.” Nate said in a shaky voice. Nate sat down in the chair next to Kate. Kate looked at his saddened face. She felt so bad. She grabbed his hand and squeezed it.

A half an hour later, after everyone arrived and the service took place, Nate found himself starting to shake. Four men walked up to the closed casket and lifted it. They hauled it out of the room. Everyone followed behind it. Nate was first. Kate followed close behind him and then the rest of the family. They followed the four men who carried the casket outside where there was a black hearse. The casket was put into the back of the hearse. Everyone walked to their cars and got in. The hearse began its journey from the funeral home to the cemetery. All the cars containing family members followed it.

The hearse reached the cemetery about ten minutes later. Those same four men took the casket out of the hearse and walked it over to its plot. Nate and Kate got out of car. Just as they began to walk towards the plot, Nate felt a tap on his shoulder. He turned around and saw the sad face of his sister Irene. She had been crying. “Irene…” Nate said. Nate hugged his sister. He grabbed his sister’s hand and together as brother and sister they walked to the final resting place of their mother. Kate followed close behind them. She stood next to Nate. He put his arm around her.

As the casket was being lowered, Nate felt his legs start to tremble. He could barely stand. Kate tried to hold him up, but it didn’t work. Nate fell to the ground. Nate’s sister knelt down beside him. “Nate…it’s gonna be okay. She’s free.” Irene said. Kate watched the scene that took place before her. She wanted to walk away. She didn’t want to be there. She felt that she didn’t have a right to be there, but she stood by Nate’s side.

Twenty minutes later it was all over. Nate’s family was having a gathering afterwards. Nate didn’t want to go. After all, he had to go to work that day. “Nate, if you wanna be with your family today…” Kate started. “No. That’s okay.” Nate interrupted. Kate looked at him. She could see his sadness. “Come on.” Kate said as she took his hand. They walked to the car and got in. Kate started the car and headed to work.

Kate pulled into a parking spot and took her keys out of the ignition. She looked at Nate. “So…are you ready for the rest of the day?” Kate asked. “Yeah. I think so.” Nate answered back. “Come on. Let’s go.” Kate opened her door and got out. Nate stood in the car. He was afraid to get out. “What’s the matter?” Kate asked. “We can’t go in at the same time…” He said. “Oh that’s right.” Kate said. “Well…maybe you should go in first. I’ll wait a few minutes before I come in.” Kate said as she got back in the car. “Okay.” Nate said. Kate put her hand on Nate’s arm. “Before you go in…” Kate cut herself off. “What?” Nate asked. “Never mind. Just have a great day. Okay?” Kate said. “I’ll try.” Nate said as he started to get out of the car. “My Italian Stallion.” Kate said with a smile. “Sweet Cakes” Nate said with a chuckle. “Don’t call me that.” Kate laughed.

Nate made his way into the building and into the elevator. A few minutes later the elevator doors opened and he stepped out. He made his way to the division. “Hi Nate.” CD said. “Hey CD” He answered back. “You’re late again. Where were you?” CD asked. “I was at my mother’s burial.” Nate said. “Oh.” Jinny brushed it off and went back to work. Nate sat at his desk and put his head in his hands. His day and been very stressful so far. He was hoping it didn’t get any worse.

A few minutes later Kate entered the division. She rushed into her office before anyone could say anything. She was hoping no one would suspect anything. Just as Kate got herself settled, Raina knocked on the door. “What?” Kate said. Raina walked in and closed the door behind her. “Captain, we’ve all noticed a change in you the past couple of days. Are you okay?” Raina said. “Yeah. I’m fine. I’ve been so busy and everything. I’m just a little tired that’s all.” Kate said. “Oh okay. We were beginning to worry about you.” Raina explained. “Well, thanks for caring.” Kate said with a smile. Raina smiled and walked out of Kate’s office.

‘Dammit! I hate hiding like this.’ Kate thought to herself. She didn’t want to tell anyone. She couldn’t tell anyone. She could lose her job.


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Raina walked back to her desk and sat down. “What’d Cap say?” Magda asked. “She said that she’s been tired lately. That’s all.” Raina informed Magda. “I’m not falling for that.” Magda said. Jinny jumped into the conversation, “Why not?” she asked. “It’s just not right. She’s come in late two days in a row, she ignores us for half of the day, and she’s just not right lately.” Magda said. “I’m gonna go ask her myself.” She said as she stood up from her chair. “Mag, it’s none of our business. Just leave it alone.” Jinny insisted. “If there’s one thing I know about Puerto Rican women, it’s that we’re nosey. So, I’m gonna go see for myself what’s up with Cap.” Magda said.

Magda walked to Kate’s office and knocked on the door. She walked in. “Hey Captain.” Magda said with a smile as she closed the door behind her. “Have a seat.” Kate said as she motioned towards the chairs in front of her. Magda did so and looked at Kate. “So, what’s on your mind?” Kate asked. “Captain, I know Raina came in here a little while ago and asked if you were okay, but I feel the need to ask you myself. You haven’t been good old Cap’n lately. You seem panicky and nervous. Captain, what’s the matter?” Magda said. Kate didn’t know what to say. She found herself trying to come up with another lie to tell. She wanted to tell the truth, but it was such a risk. “I’m just tired…you know? I’m busy and I have a lot of work to do. It gets tiring.” Kate said. Magda raised her eyebrow. She didn’t believe Kate at all. “I don’t believe you.” Magda said. “There’s something wrong. Something’s bothering you. I can see it in your eyes.” Magda said. Kate shook her head. “Magda, really, I’m fine.” Kate reassured Magda. “I’m still not buying it.” Magda said. “Look, Magda, I appreciate tour concern but I’m fine. Really.” Kate said. “Alright then. Just remember that if you need to talk about anything, I’ve got an open ear. Okay?” Magda offered. “Thanks Mag.” Kate said.

With that said, Magda walked out of Kate’s office and closed the door. She was disappointed that she couldn’t get anything out of Kate. Magda sat down at her desk. “So, what happened?” Jinny asked. “She’s not a very good liar. I can tell you that much.” Magda said. “What? She didn’t tell ya anything?” Jinny asked. “Not a word.” Magda answered. “I told ya it was none of our business Mag.” Jinny said. “Yeah, but still. I wanna know what’s going on around here.” Magda said. “We all wanna know what’s going on, but I don’t think Captain’s gonna say anything.” Raina jumped into the conversation.

Nate was having a hard time concentrating on the case he and CD were working on. His mind was racing with thoughts of his mother, his sister, the burial, and Kate. “Nate…” CD said. Nate didn’t answer. “Nate…Nate, come on we gotta get this done.” CD said. “Huh? Oh…okay…” Nate said. “You haven’t been yourself lately. I think you need some rest. I mean…you look dead.” CD said. Nate looked at CD and then down at the ground. CD realized what she said and apologized. “Nate, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean that the way it sounded.” CD said. “Its okay. I know you didn’t mean anything by it.” Nate said.


Later that evening, everyone had gone home. It seemed that every night the same scene took place. Nate passed by Kate’s office. The door just happened to be open. Kate looked up at Nate. “Five minutes.” Kate said. Nate nodded and he left the division. He headed to the elevator and got in. He waited for Kate.

Kate finished up some paper work and got up from her chair. She put her coat on and grabbed her bag. She left the division, walked to the elevator and got in. She met Nate downstairs. “Hey” She said with a smile. “Hey” Nate answered back.

They walked outside to the parking lot together. They made their way to Kate’s car and got in. Kate looked at Nate. “Should I drop you off at your house? Or…” Kate asked. “My stuff is still at your house. Do you mind if I stay with you again tonight?” Nate said. “Nate, of course I don’t mind. You’re always welcome in my home, especially after…well…everything.” Kate said. “Yeah. Thanks Kate.” Nate said. “No problem.” Kate said as she started the car.

Kate pulled into the driveway of her house. She turned off the car and got out. She walked to her front door and opened it. Nate stood in the car for some reason. Kate looked at him. She motioned for him to come inside. Nate slowly got out of the car and walked to the house. Before Kate could even take off her coat, Nate was all over her. Kate pushed him back. “Hey, what’s gotten into you?” Kate said with a chuckle. “I was just watching you from the car and the way you walk and just everything about you…” Nate stopped talking and just kissed Kate.

Kate somehow managed to take her coat off. She pushed Nate away once again. She grabbed his hand. She wanted to go upstairs but she figured that this couldn’t wait. She led Nate to the couch and sat him down. With a sly grin on her face she placed her body on top of his.


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Guys...this next part is kinda explicit...so you cant say that i didnt warn you....


The next morning Kate found herself naked on the couch of her livingroom. She looked around for Nate, but she couldn’t find him. She found Nate’s shirt and put it on since she couldn’t find her own. As she got up from the couch she placed one foot on what she thought was the floor. She looked down at the ground. It was Nate. She started to laugh. She knelt down beside him and woke him up. “Nate wake up.” She said. “Huh? Oh hey.” Nate said as he awoke. He stood up and looked at Kate. Kate smiled at him. “Come on. We’ve got to get ready for work.” Kate said as she took his hand and led him upstairs. They didn’t have much time to get ready, let alone take separate showers. They decided to take a shower together.

Fifteen minutes later they were out of the shower and getting dressed. “Come on. We don’t have much time.” Kate began to rush Nate. “Okay I’m coming” Nate answered back. They left Kate’s house and got in the car. They had exactly twenty minutes to get to work. Hoping that they wouldn’t be late, Kate started the car and took off. She had never driven that fast. When they got to work, they were actually on time. They entered the division at exactly eight o’clock. Kate walked in first. She rushed into her office. Nate strolled into the division. CD noticed a drastic change in him. He had a smile on his face and he seemed content.

“What happened to you?” CD asked. “What do you mean?” Nate said. “You seem so…happy.” CD said. “What? A guy can’t be happy?” Nate asked. “I never said that. Its just…nevermind.” CD said. “Okay then.” Nate answered. Nate sat down at his desk. He got a piece of paper and a pen and began to write. Just then CD walked over to Nate. Nate stuffed the paper in his desk drawer. “Come on. We gotta give these papers to the Captain.” CD said as she picked up the stack of papers. CD took the stack of papers and walked them to Kate’s office. Nate took out the paper the he had stuffed in his drawer. He folded it and out it in his pocket. He stood up from his chair and walked to Kate’s office. He closed the door behind him. Nate didn’t want to sit down, therefore he stood by the wall.

As Kate discussed the case with them, Nate walked over to Kate’s desk and picked up the stack of papers. He walked back to where he had been standing and skimmed through the papers. When he was sure no one was looking, he took the piece of paper out of his pocket and placed it in the stack of papers. He then placed the stack of papers back on Kate’s desk.

Ten minutes later CD and Nate were out of Kate’s office and back at their desks discussing the case. Nate seemed a bit on edge. “Are you okay Nate? You’re acting strange.” CD said. “I’m fine.” Nate reassured CD. “You know, you have been acting weird. What’s up with everybody around here lately?” Jinny jumped into the conversation. Magda surprisingly had nothing to say. She wanted to keep her mouth shut and just watch everything from a distance. ”Well, whatever it is, its gonna come out sooner or later.” CD said.

As Kate sat at her desk, she thought about the situation. 'I cant believe this. It was my fault. I shouldn't have laid a hand on him that night. I shouldn't have touched him.' Kate thought.'But I wanted to. I was only comforting him. I didn't mean for it to go that far.' Kate tried to convince herself. 'You have to be calm McCafferty. This too shall pass.' Kate said to herself. However, Kate knew that she just couldn't let this situation run its course. She and Nate had to control it so it wouldn't get out of hand. But she had no idea how out of hand it was about to become.

Kate went through some papers concerning CD and Nate's case. She came across a piece of paper that had Nate's handwriting on it. It read:

Kate,
We had fun last night huh? Well anyway, I wanna come in and talk to you.
When you're ready, close all of the shades in your office. Make sure nobody can see inside. Then call me in.
Nate


Kate raised her eyebrow. She had no idea what he was going to talk to her about. And she had no idea why he wanted her to close the shades. Although she was reluctant, she got up from her chair and closed the shades to each window in her office. She saved her door for last.
As she was about to close the shades on her door, she looked out at Nate. He had been watching her. She gave him look and shrugged. Then she closed the shades. It was so dark in her office that she could barely see. She turned on one of her lamps. "There. Thats better." She said aloud. Kate sat in her chair. She decided to wait a few minutes before she called nate in.

“Why’d she do that?” Jinny asked. “Why’d who do what?” Magda asked Jinny. “Captain. She closed all of her shades.” Jinny said. “Oh. I don’t know.” Magda said. “Well, there must be a reason.” Raina said. “Yeah.” Jinny answered back.

Kate walked out of her office. She seemed a bit nervous. She didn’t know what to expect. She looked over to Nate. “Nate” She said. “Yeah Captain?” Nate stood up. “My office.” Kate said as she turned around and walked back into her office. Nate into Kate’s office and closed the door. Jinny, Magda, and Raina all exchanged suspicious looks.

Kate stood there looking at Nate. “What do you want?” Kate asked. “You” Nate said. He placed his hands on her hips. “Nate, we’re at work. This can’t…” Kate was interrupted by a kiss from Nate. It was a long kiss. Kate pulled away and looked at the man that stood before her.
Nate grinned. He picked her up and sat her on the edge of the desk. He began to kiss her lips and worked his way down to her neck. He stopped and looked at her. Kate was still reluctant but she wanted it. Kate placed her hands on Nate’s belt and unbuckled it. As she did this, she looked up into Nate’s eyes. She could see his anticipation. She unzipped his pants.

Nate on the other hand was busy unbuttoning Kate’s blouse. Her chest was exposed but not bare. He kissed her lips and once again started to work his way down her neck. Kate closed her eyes. Kate put her arms around him and brought his body closer to hers. As she did so, she began to breathe more heavily. Kate was trying not to be too loud for the risk of getting caught. But the more intense the situation got, the louder she got. As the minutes passed, more clothes were taken off.

Outside, Jinny and Magda heard some noises come from Kate’s office. “I wonder what the hell is going on in there.” Jinny said. “I know. Me too” Magda agreed.

The situation inside Kate’s office grew more and more intense as the minutes slipped away. Kate pulled Nate closer to her she whispered in his ear. “Come on. Make me happy.” Kate’s words crept into Nate’s ear. Nate looked at her with confusion. Nate did as he was told. Kate nearly screamed, but she held herself back. Kate wrapped her leg around Nate’s body.

Then came a knock on Kate’s office door. Nate and Kate froze. They looked at each other. Kate could not believe she put herself in this predicament. “Uh…hold on a minute!” Kate yelled to whoever was at the door. Kate and Nate rushed to put their clothes back on.

Two minutes later they were dressed. Kate walked to the door and opened it. It was Charles. Kate almost fainted. She could barely stand. “Uh…Charles.” Kate managed to spit out. “Kate, I wanted to discuss the case that Inspectors Basso and DeLorenzo are working.” Charles said. “Oh. That’s what Nate and I were just doing.” Kate said. “Oh I see.” Charles looked over at Nate. “Ahem” Charles said and motioned towards Nate’s pants. Nate looked down and almost jumped out of his skin. His fly was open. Nate quickly closed it and walked out of the room.

As Nate made his way to his desk, he got strange looks from everyone. “What?” Nate said. “Nothin’.” Jinny said as she turned back to her desk and started to work again. Nate sat in silence for a few minutes. He could not believe what just happened.


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A few minutes later, Haysbert was on his way out of the division. Kate wanted to run away and hide. She was almost caught, by Charles. She couldn’t believe she let it go that far. She was disappointed in herself for it as well. As Kate sat at her desk with her head in her hands, she felt everyone’s eyes on her. She looked up. Her door was open. She saw the curious faces of Jinny and Magda. Kate looked at them and then down at her desk again. She needed to get out and fast. She got up from her desk and walked out of her office as fast as she could. “Hey Cap. Where you goin’?” Jinny asked suspiciously. Kate avoided eye contact. “Uh…to the bathroom. I’ll be right back.” Kate said. Kate rushed out of the division and to the bathroom. “I’m gonna go talk to her.” Magda said as she stood up and left the division. She walked into the bathroom.

“Captain.” Magda said. Kate looked at her. “What?” She said. “I know what was going on in your office. We all do.” Magda said. “What? What was going on in my office? I was talking to Nate. That’s all.” Kate said. “Captain, I’m not stupid. So don’t try to pull that crap with me.” Magda informed Kate. “I know you’re not stupid. But you all seem to have the wrong idea.” Kate said. “Captain. You can’t deny this. You were having sex with Nate. Weren’t you?” Magda asked. Kate couldn’t believe that Magda had just said that. “How dare you accuse me of such behavior. I would never…” Kate started to say. “Oh Bull.” Jinny said as she walked into the bathroom. “Captain, we heard you. We heard you loud and clear. As a matter of fact we heard BOTH of you.” Jinny said. There was a long, awkward silence. “Jinny, Magda. I don’t know what to say.” Kate said as she shook her head. “So you’re admitting it?” Magda asked. “No…I…I don’t know what I’m saying. Just let it go.” Kate said. “No! I won’t let it go…I wanna know what’s been going on now. I want an explanation.” Magda demanded. “Magda…not right now. Just…its bad timing.” Kate said. “Bad timing? You call this bad timing? What about fifteen minutes ago when you were screwing Nate? Huh? It wasn’t bad timing then, was it?” Magda yelled. Kate had nothing to say. She didn’t want to say anything. “That’s what I thought. I want an explanation. Now…” Magda demanded once again. “Excuse me but who the hell are you demanding an explanation from me?” Kate yelled. “Captain…I just wanna know why.” Magda said. “Look, I’ll arrange for everybody to gather at my house and we’ll talk. Because I think Nate and I need to straighten things out with all of you. And I need to get some things off my chest. I’m sure Nate does as well.” Kate suggested. “That’s a little better.” Magda said as she turned away from Kate.

Just as Jinny and Magda were about to leave the bathroom Kate called Magda back. “Magda, can I talk to you for a minute?” Kate asked. “What?” Magda said furiously. “Magda, listen, I know this must be kind of hard to take this all in at once but…” Kate began to say. “Kind of hard? This is a total shock. I’m shocked, disappointed, disgusted, and I have lost some respect for you.” Magda informed her Captain. “Magda, I understand where you’re coming from, but I mean…look just forget about it for now. We’ll talk later. Okay?” Kate said as she put her hand on Magda’s arm. “Don’t touch me.” Magda said with disgust. Kate took her hand off of Magda’s arm. She couldn’t believe Magda was acting like this. She thought Magda would’ve been more understanding.

While all of this was taking place, Nate was being grilled by CD. He was bombarded with all kinds of questions concerning the events that took place in Kate’s office. CD was hard in her questioning. Nate didn’t want to talk about it. He was disappointed in himself for doing what he did. He couldn’t believe that they almost got caught. And now everybody knows what happened.

Kate, Jinny, and Magda all entered the division. Magda was still furious. Jinny didn’t know what to think. She was kind of confused. Raina watched Kate as she passed by. Raina was a bit disappointed in Kate. She didn’t think the Captain would stoop so low. Kate walked into her office and shut the door. One by one each shade was opened and light shined through the windows. Kate plopped in her chair. She put her head in her hands.

Raina got up from her chair and made her way to Kate’s office. She knocked on the door. “Come in.” Kate said in soft voice. “Hey Captain.” Raina said. “Hi Raina. Can I help you with something?” Kate asked. Raina shut the door and took a seat. “Captain, we all heard what was going on in here today. And I must say that I’m a bit disappointed in you, but Captain, I know there’s a reason for everything. And I wanted to tell you that no matter what the reason is, I’m here to support you.” Raina said. Kate was moved by Raina’s statement. “Raina, thank you so much. I needed that. And I completely understand why you’re disappointed in me. I’m disappointed in myself. But as I told Magda, I’m gonna arrange for everyone to gather at my house so we can straighten things out. Okay?” Kate said. Raina stood up from her chair and headed to the door. “And Raina.” Kate said. Raina turned around “Yes Captain?” She said. “Not a word about this to Haysbert. And make sure they all know that too.” Kate said. “Right.” Raina said as she left Kate’s office.

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Kate sat at her desk and once again put her head in her hands. She wanted to scream. She couldn’t believe this was happening. And if she felt this way, she could only imagine how Nate was feeling. Kate got up from her chair and walked out of her office. She hated to do this, but she had to know how he was dealing with the whole situation. “Nate.” Kate said. Nate stood up and walked over to Kate. “Yeah?” Nate said. “Come on. I need to talk to you.” Kate said as she rubbed his back.

Jinny, Magda and Raina exchanged glances. “Not again.” Jinny said sarcastically. CD was still kind of shaky about the whole thing. She had suspected that something was going on, but she still wasn’t sure. She decided to ask Magda about it. And Magda gave her a straight answer.

Kate was seated at her desk and looking at Inspector Basso who was seated across from her. She could see fear in his eyes. Nate was doing his best to keep himself together. He looked at Kate. She seemed to be worried and nervous. “Nate…” Kate sighed. “Nate, I don’t even know what to say to you. I mean, this…this. I don’t know what ‘this’ is. You know what? We’ll talk about this after work.” Kate said. “Okay” Nate answered. Nate stood up and started heading to the door. “Wait.” Kate said in a soft voice. “Yeah?” Nate said as he turned around. “Sit.” Kate said. Nate sat back down in the chair. “How are you holding up? I mean…this is pretty tough stuff here.” Kate said. “Kate…Captain, I’m doing my best not lose control of myself.” Nate said. “Yeah. Look, Nate, I told Magda that I would arrange for everyone to come to my house so we can talk about all of this. Is that okay with you?” kate said. “That’s fine. There are some things that need to be said.” Nate answered.

Nate slouched in his chair and looked down at the ground. Kate stood up and walked out of her office. “Jinny, Magda, Raina, and CD…my office.” Kate said. They all looked up at her. One by one Jinny, Magda, Raina, and CD stood up and made their way to Kate’s office. Kate let them in and they crammed into her office. “Shut the door.” Kate said to CD. CD shut the door and leaned against it.

Everyone was quiet for a minute or so. They were all waiting for someone else to speak.“Guys, I know what went on today was kind of…shocking, but we’re gonna straighten this all out. I think that Nate and I need to discuss some issues with all of you. But we can’t do it here. I would appreciate it if you all could just come to my house later on tonight. I need to let some things out.” Kate said. “Yeah. I need to say a few words myself.” Nate said. “Will you guys be there?” Kate asked. Everyone nodded. “I’ll be there.” CD said. “Yeah. Me too.” Jinny said. “Thanks. I really appreciate it.” Kate said. “Can we leave now?” Magda asked. Kate looked up at her. “They can leave, but you can’t.” Kate said. Everyone left as quickly as they could. Nate was the last one out. He shut the door.

Magda looked at Kate. “What do you want?” Magda said furiously. “Sit.” Kate said. Magda took a seat and looked at her Captain. “What?” Magda said. “Magda, there is no need for you to talk to me like that.” Kate informed Magda. “Yeah well, if you were as pissed off as I am you would talk to your Captain like this too.” Magda said. Kate’s jaw dropped. She couldn’t believe Magda was acting this way. She expected this from Jinny, but not Magda. “Magda…why are you so angry? That’s all I want to know.” Kate said. “Captain, you are one of the most respectable women I know. You’re smart, kind, generous, independent and you serve as a role model for some of us. I had so much respect for you. But everything that happened today…I mean, I lost a lot of respect for you today. That was so low. It’s not enough that you went ahead and had sex in your office during working hours, but you were doing it with one of your Inspectors. If that’s not low then I don’t know what is. I thought you were different than a lot of those women who hold authority over men. You obviously know how to use your position as Captain. You proved it today.” Magda said.

Kate could not believe what had just come out of Magda’s mouth. Tears welled up in her eyes. “Magda, you have no idea what you’re talking about. You don’t know about anything that happened between Nate and I. You act like I just called him in here and we went at it just because I said so.” Kate said. “Wait a minute. What are you saying?” Magda asked. “I’m saying this wasn’t the first time. And I don’t think its gonna be the last.” Kate said. “You’ve been with him before?” Magda asked. “Yes.” Kate sighed. Magda couldn’t believe it. “How…how long has this been going on?” Magda asked. “Listen, we’ll talk about this later okay? You should really get back to work.” Kate said. “Uh…okay.” Magda answered. Magda stood up and almost fell over. She couldn’t believe what she had just heard. Magda regained her balance and walked out of Kate’s office.


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That evening as Kate sat on the couch in her living room. She recalled the day’s events. She shook her head. She couldn’t handle all that was going on. It was too much. And now her job was at risk. She wanted to call Nate but she didn’t want to bother him, especially after what happened today. Just then, she heard a knock on the door. ‘Who could that be?’ Kate thought. She got up from the couch and walked to the door. She opened it. It was Nate.

“Nate? What are you doing here? It’s still early.” Kate said. Nate walked into Kate’s house. “I think we need to discuss some things before everyone gets here.” Nate said. “Yeah. I was thinking the same thing.” Kate said as she took Nate’s coat and hung it in the closet. Kate sat down on the couch. Nate just stood there in a daze. “Nate. Come…come sit next to me.” Kate said. Nate walked over to her. She extended her arm to him. As Nate sat down he embraced her. He put his head on her chest. He could hear her heart beat. Kate rested her chin on his head.

“Nate…honey…I know today was very difficult. I hope we don’t lose what we had because of it.” Kate said. “But what I did today was wrong. It was my fault. I knew the risks, but I went and did it anyway.” Nate said. “No. It’s not just your fault. It’s my fault too. I should’ve stopped it before it got out of hand, but I didn’t. I don’t know what I was thinking.” Kate said. Nate looked up at Kate. Kate cupped his face in her hands and smiled at him. “I care about you. I didn’t realize it until today. I really do care about you. I feel like my job is to protect you from everything because I don’t want to let you go.” Kate said. Nate was surprised. “Kate, I’m so glad to hear you say that.” Nate said happily. “What? You didn’t think I cared?” Kate asked. “At first I thought this was a big mistake. I thought you were gonna blow me off after that first night. And then when you didn’t, I was kind of shocked. I didn’t think you cared. I thought I was just a passing fling for you. But every time we were together, I would think that maybe this could last.” Nate said. Kate looked at him. She was a bit confused. “You thought I would blow you off just like that? I’m not that kind of person. That first night…I mean, I wouldn’t have invited you over if I didn’t care. I even sat down to think about why I invited you over. I couldn’t quite put my finger on it. And then when we made love, I knew.” Kate said.

Before Nate could say anything in response, the doorbell rang. Kate stood up and walked to the door. She opened it. Jinny, Magda, Raina, and CD had all arrived at the same time. They had driven together. “Hi Captain.” CD said. They all walked into Kate’s house. Jinny saw Nate sitting on the couch. “We didn’t interrupt anything, did we?” Jinny said. “No.” Kate said with a chuckle. Kate took all of their coats and hung them up in the closet. “Have a seat.” Kate said. They all seated themselves wherever they could. Kate repossessed her seat next to Nate.

“Guys, I know that today’s events may have caused some commotion. I cannot begin to tell you how sorry I am. I should’ve stopped it before it began. I knew it was wrong. I knew it was low, but I decided against my instincts and I can’t change that.” Kate said. Kate looked over at Nate. She nodded. “Um…I don’t know where to begin. What happened today was mostly my fault. I was the one who asked her to close the shades in her office. I was the one who asked her to call me into her office. She only did what I told her to. She had no idea what was going on. It was all me.” Nate said. “But I went along with it and I shouldn’t have.” Kate said. There was an awkward silence. Nobody knew what to say. They just glanced at each other. “Captain, Nate…I just wanna know how long has this been going on. And why?” Magda said. Kate looked down. She grabbed Nate’s hand. “I believe this started about four days ago. Nate didn’t come into work. I called him up to see if everything was okay. He told me that one of his family members died. I asked him if he wanted to come over to talk. He came over. We talked for a while. Our conversation had gotten really emotional for him. All I wanted to do was comfort him. And it led to something else. It wasn’t supposed to happen. It wasn’t planned or anything. It just happened.” Kate explained. “You wanted to comfort him? It looks like ya did a pretty good job of that, now doesn’t it?” Jinny said. “Jinny, there’s no need to be like that.” Kate said. “Captain, you never call us when we don’t come into work. Why’d you call Nate?” Magda asked. “At first I wasn’t sure why I called him. I just wanted to hear his voice. I guess I’ve always cared for him. I care about all of you. But I felt differently about him. I didn’t know why I felt different with him until that first night that we were together. Then I realized how much I cared about him.” Kate explained. “Nate, how do you feel?” CD asked. “I felt the same way with Kate.She’s different than any other woman I’ve been with. The way she is with me, its unbelievable.” Nate said. “The way she is with you? What do you mean by that?” Jinny asked curiously. Nate looked at Kate for approval. She nodded and he went on. “The way she treats me. The way she touches me. Everything.” Nate said. Kate looked at him and smiled. Jinny felt as though she had been told a little bit too much information. “Oh yeah I really needed to hear that. ‘The way she touches me’ God give me a break.” Jinny said as she shook her head. “You’re the one who asked.” Nate snapped back.

Kate looked at all the faces in the room. “Raina, you’ve been very quiet tonight. Are you okay?” Kate asked. “I’m fine. This is just really hard to accept.” Raina said. “I understand what you mean.” Kate responded. “This must come as a shock to all of you. I can only imagine what you’re thinking.” Kate said. “It is really shocking. I work with you everyday Nate. You never said a word about anything.” CD said. “That’s just it. I couldn’t say anything.” Nate said. “I noticed a difference in both of you, but I never thought it would turn out to be something like this.” CD said. “I found it really suspicious when you two came into work late two days in a row…and now that I think of it…you both came in at about the same time.” Jinny said. “Yep.” Nate said. “No offense or anything, but you two are such an unlikely couple that you would never suspect anything.” Jinny said.

“Captain.” Magda said. “Hmm?” Kate answered back. “I just wanted to apologize for treating you the way I did. I was really angry and disappointed.” Magda said. “It’s okay Magda. I understand.” Kate said. “I know some of you may have lost some or maybe all respect for me, and I’m sorry about that. I know some of you may never look at me the same way again and I completely understand that.” Kate said. “Captain, I haven’t lost all respect for you. Just some. I just thought your actions today were really low. It seemed as though you had no respect for yourself or anybody else that was working today.” Magda said. ‘Magda, you’re right. I didn’t have any respect for anybody. I was caught up in the moment. And when Charles knocked on my door, I snapped back into reality and realized what I had done.” Kate said.

Raina grew extremely uncomfortable the minute Kate mentioned Charles. She knew she couldn’t keep this from Kate. She was bound to find out anyway. Raina decided to speak. “Captain…” She said.



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Kate looked over at Raina. “Yeah?” She said. “Captain, I have to tell you something.” Raina said. “Go ahead.” Kate said. “About D.C Haysbert…when you and Nate were in your office earlier today…he heard you as well. He didn’t say it at the time, but later on in the day he asked me what was going on…” Raina explained. Kate’s eyes widened. “What…what did you tell him Raina?” Kate asked. Raina looked down at the ground. “Captain, I tried my best to lie, but that didn’t work. He didn’t fall for it at all. He kept asking me questions concerning what had taken place in your office. But I didn’t talk. He threatened me. He said that if I didn’t talk that my job would be on the line…” Raina said. “Then what happened?” Kate asked. “I still didn’t talk. He said he was gonna call you tonight and question you about it. Captain, I’m so sorry.” Raina said. “Raina, don’t worry about it. You shouldn’t have had to lie for me. He shouldn’t have asked you to begin with. He should’ve come to me first. Thank you for telling me before he called though.” Kate reassured Raina. Raina let out a huge sigh of relief. Kate smiled at her. “Lets just hope I don’t lose my job now.” Kate said.

Then the phone rang. Kate looked at everyone in the room. “Guys, be really quiet. Don’t make a sound.” Kate said. She leaned over Nate to pick up the phone. “Hello?” Kate said. “Kate, its Charles.” Kate panicked. “Charles. What can I do for you?” Kate asked. “Kate, I don’t know how to address this issue. I’m going to do it the best way that I can.” Charles said. “Okay. Go on.” Kate said as she put the speaker on so everyone could hear. “Kate, today when I came by your office…I heard some…noises.” Charles began to explain. “What kind of noises?” Kate asked. “Well…it sounded like…” Charles started to say. “Sex?” Kate said point blankly. Nate’s jaw dropped and his eyes widened. “Well, yes. Were you and Inspector Basso…?” Charles said. “No Charles. How could you think something like that? It was a video.” Kate said. “A video?” A confused Charles asked. “Yes. It was a video pertaining to Inspectors Basso and DeLorenzo’s case. The murder victim in their case had made some videos. And we figured that maybe it could help the case. We plan on finding out where the video was shot and seeing if there are any witnesses who may have seen the victim.” Kate explained. Charles sighed. He was disappointed. He almost got her this time. “Kate, if you don’t mind, I would like to see that video some time tomorrow.” Charles said. Kate almost busted out laughing. “Charles…I didn’t know you were into that kind of thing. The nights must be really lonely, huh?” Kate said with a chuckle. Everyone in the room was trying not to laugh. Jinny had to leave the room and laugh. “Kate, that wasn’t funny.” Charles said. “I thought it was.” Kate said. “Kate, just…nevermind. I’ll see you tomorrow.” Charles said. “Okay Charles.” Kate said as she hung up the phone.

Kate sat on the couch and looked down. She was silent for a moment. And then she just started laughing hysterically. “I can’t believe he asked to see the video. I mean…there is no video.” Kate said. “I’m gonna have to go buy one now.” Kate said. Jinny walked back into the room. “Cap…that was too funny.” Jinny said. “Yeah well” Kate said. “Now…where the hell am I gonna get a video by tomorrow?” Kate said. “If you want, I can go get ya one.” Jinny suggested. Kate looked at Jinny. “I can’t believe you’re all in this with me.” Kate said. “Well Captain…you’ve done so much for us. I think we should return the favor.” Magda said. “And Nate has done more than retuned the favor.” Jinny said sarcastically. Everyone laughed. “Jinny, you don’t have to go. I can do it tomorrow.” Kate said. Magda jumped up. “Captain, we owe this to you. It might as well be us in an Adult shop than you. Somebody might see us and not suspect anything. But you…well you.” Magda said. “That wasn’t very convincing Mag but thanks.” Kate said.

Magda and Jinny put their coats on and left. Kate, Nate, Raina and CD were left in the house. “Do you guys want something to drink? Coffee or something?” Kate offered as she got up from the couch and made her way to the kitchen. Raina, Nate and CD followed her. They sat at the kitchen table. “Captain, your house is nice.” Raina said as her eyes wandered around the kitchen. “Thanks.” Kate accepted the compliment. “So…” Nate said. Kate walked over to him and put her hands on his shoulders. “How are you guys doing? I mean, I feel like I’ve been ignoring you two.” Kate said to Raina and CD. “I’m fine, now that I told you about Haysbert.” Raina said. “Yeah.” Kate said. “And all of this, its kind of weird. Y’know?” Raina said. “This is all still kind of…new. This is something you’d never expect to happen. And when you think you know someone, you find out that you really don’t know them.” CD said. “Are you referring to me?” Nate asked. “Yeah. I mean, I spend hours upon hours with you and you never said a word to me about this.” CD said frustratedly. “CD, I couldn’t say anything. It was too much of a risk.” Nate said trying to defend himself.

Kate listened to all of this and sensed that CD was a bit jealous. She could see it in her face and hear it in her voice. ‘This is gonna be a problem’ Kate thought to herself. Kate decided to take a seat and listen to what each of them had to say to each other. “Nate, I wouldn’t have said anything. You know that. I wouldn’t have gone and told the world about it. All I wanted was a heads up about this. For all of us to find out the way we did was wrong.” CD argued back. “CD, I know what you’re saying but you don’t understand.” Nate started to say. “What don’t I understand?” CD asked. “Kate could lose her job over this. I couldn’t let that happen. If I’d told you before, someone might have over heard and it would all be over. I didn’t want that to happen. That’s what you don’t understand.” Nate snapped back. “Guys, don’t.” Kate said as she shook her head. “Please don’t argue. Its not worth it.” Kate said.

Twenty minutes later, Jinny and Magda had returned. Kate opened the door. “Here” Jinny handed a plastic shopping bag to Kate. Kate looked inside and there was a video. Jinny and Magda stepped inside the house. They found everyone in the kitchen and took seats as well. Kate made her way back to the kitchen. She had a big smile on her face. “Burning Desires: The Confessions Of A Sex Fiend” She read the title of the video with a chuckle. “Jinny…” Kate shook her head. “What?” Jinny asked. Kate looked at the video and then at Jinny. “It was all they had. Its not like…nevermind.” Jinny tried to explain. “Its okay.” Kate said. “Yeah. Jinny picked it out herself.” Magda said. Everyone laughed. “Lay off Mag. Geez.” Jinny snapped. “I was just kidding Jin.” Magda explained.

Kate seated herself in the last available seat at the table. “So…” Kate started. Everyone looked at her. “So…” Nate answered back. “Guys, I just want you to know that I really appreciate all that you have done. I appreciate the fact that you all have been so understanding and have shown your concern. It means a lot to me because I don’t really have anybody around.” Kate said. “You’re welcome Cap.” Jinny said. Magda looked at her watch. “It’s getting late. I have to go home.” Magda said. “Yeah we should go.” CD said. “Yeah.” Jinny agreed. “I’m sorry I can’t stay Captain.” Magda said. “It’s okay. Go be with Ben.” Kate said with a smile. “Thank you all so much for coming over. I really appreciate it.” Kate said. Jinny, Magda, CD, Raina, and Nate all headed to the door. Kate followed behind them. “Bye Cap.” Jinny said. “Goodnight Captain.” Raina said as she walked out the door. CD walked out the door without saying a word. Magda passed by, “Bye Captain. Thanks for clearing everything up.” She said with a smile. Kate smiled, “No problem.” Magda walked out of Kate’s front door. The group of women waited for Nate outside. “Bye Kate.” Nate said as he was about to kiss her. “Uh-uh. You’re not going anywhere Mr. Basso.” Kate said with a grin. Nate smiled. “Okay.” He said. Jinny, Magda and Raina laughed. CD walked away. Kate pulled Nate’s collar and kissed him. She pulled away forgetting the front door was wide open. Everyone had been watching her. “Oops. Sorry. You’re not getting a free show tonight guys. Buh bye now.” Kate said with a chuckle as she closed the door.

Kate grabbed Nate’s hand and led him to the couch. “Sit.” She motioned to the couch. Nate sat down at Kate seated herself beside him. “What’s the matter?” Nate asked. “Its CD.” Kate sighed. “Why? What happened?” Nate asked. “I don’t know. It’s just that tonight she seemed a bit angry. Almost like she was jealous or hurt. I don’t want this to become a problem.” Kate explained. Nate looked down at the floor. “I thought she seemed a bit jealous too. I was hoping that you wouldn’t notice.” Nate said. “How could I not notice? I was standing right there.” Kate said. “I’ll talk to her tomorrow.” Nate suggested. “Maybe its better if all three of us talked about it.” Kate said. “Yeah.” Nate looked down at the ground. “Are you gonna go home tonight or…” Kate asked. “Do you want me to stay here?” Nate asked. “That would be nice.” Kate said with a grin. She leaned in and kissed him. “Come on. Let’s go.” Kate said as she got up. She grabbed Nate’s hand and pulled him up off the couch. They headed upstairs and to her bedroom.


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When Nate woke up the next morning, he found himself in Kate’s bed. He turned over to look at Kate but she wasn’t in bed. Nate sat up and looked around the room. Kate walked into the room already dressed for work. “Hey.” Nate said. “Hey. Sorry I didn’t wake you. You just looked so sweet while you were sleeping.” Kate said with a smile. She walked over to the bed and leaned over to Nate and kissed him. “Come on. Get up. We’re gonna be late.” She said. Nate got out of bed and walked into the bathroom and took a shower.

Twenty minutes later, Nate was ready for work. He walked into the kitchen and found Kate sitting at the table having her morning coffee. “Hi” Nate said as he took a seat. “Hi” Kate replied. “How’s it going?” Nate asked. “Good. I’m a little nervous about today. I just hope Charles falls for that whole story I told him yesterday.” Kate said. “Yeah me too.” Nate put his hand on Kate’s. “Nate, he might want to talk to you too. I mean, you were in the office with me. So just be careful with what you say.” Kate said. “I will.” Nate reassured Kate. “So, are you ready to go?” Kate asked as she stood up. “Yeah.” Nate answered back.

In the car, Nate and Kate hardly talked. But there was something on Kate’s mind and she had to bring it up. “Nate…we really have to talk with CD today. It’s been on my mind. I don’t want to be on bad terms with her because of all of this.” Kate explained. “I know what you mean.” Nate said. “And if it turns out that she is jealous…I don’t know what’s gonna happen. Jealousy just isn’t a good thing.” Kate said. After Kate’s statement, the car ride was silent.

Nate and Kate walked into the division a few minutes late. The tension that they once had was all gone. They could look everyone in the eye now and not have to worry. “Hey.” Magda greeted them with a smile. Kate smiled, “Hey.” Nate took his usual seat and greeted CD. “Hey CD!” He said. “Yeah hi.” CD said as she went through some paper work. “So how was your night Captain?” Raina asked innocently. “Raina…” Kate said as she shook her head and made her way into her office. Raina just brushed it off.

A few hours later, Kate decided it was time to have a talk with CD. She stood up from her chair and walked out of her office. “CD, Nate. My office.” Kate said. CD and Nate stood up and headed to the Captain’s office. CD walked in first and Nate followed. He shut the door. They both took seats. “Yes Captain?” CD asked. “CD, Nate and I couldn’t help but notice that you were a little upset yesterday. Is everything okay?” Kate asked. “Of course I was upset. Everybody was.” CD explained. “You know what? Nate, could you just step outside? I think I should talk to CD alone.” Kate said. “Sure Kate.” Nate said as he walked out of her office and closed the door behind him.

CD stood up. She was about to leave. She had no intention of listening to what the Captain had to say. “CD.” Kate said. CD turned around and looked at her Captain. Kate looked at CD’s face and saw fresh tears in them. Kate stood up. “CD, talk to me. Tell me what’s bothering you.” Kate said as she walked over to CD. “I don’t want to bother you with it. You wouldn’t understand.” CD said. “CD, whenever you need to talk. I’m here. You know that. But please talk to me.” Kate was almost begging now. “Captain, I don’t want to talk. I just need to be alone.” CD said. CD walked out of Kate’s office. Kate followed right behind her. She wasn’t going to let this go. Kate followed CD to wherever she was going. It ended up being the bathroom. CD slammed the door open and walked in. Kate followed right behind her.

Kate was obviously worried about CD and CD knew it. “Just tell me what’s going on. It wont do you any good if you hold it inside.” Kate said. CD looked down. She really didn’t want to tell the Captain about this. But she knew she had to do it. It was her only choice.



I left ya hanging again....:D

yarat, era u gniyrt ot llik em? fi os, ru gniod a yrev doog boj. ;)

Originally posted by Blair n' Jo Rock
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ho yarrek knaht uoy yrev chum rof eht tnemilpmoc! mi yrros mi gnillik uoy...tub ll'uoy tsuj atfah tiaw...

Originally posted by Blair n' Jo Rock
yarat, era u gniyrt ot llik em? fi os, ru gniod a yrev doog boj. ;)

DITTO! I can't wait to see what is going to happen next! this fan fiction rox!

Originally posted by BonniesLilCutiePie


DITTO! I can't wait to see what is going to happen next! this fan fiction rox!

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I wasn't trying to copy you! I just liked what you said.

hey i am begging here more please

Yeah! So am I! :D

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[QUOTE]Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!
[B]Y'know what I think wud be a REALLY gooooood idea?

I think it wud be an awsome idea for you to POST MORE!!

pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez!

Yeah! What she said! :lol:

Here's some mooore:

“Captain, this is gonna sound really selfish and wrong but I have to tell you.” CD sighed. “CD, just say it.” Kate said. “Yesterday when I found out about you and Nate, I was so hurt. And then last night at your place, I saw how affectionate you and Nate were with each other. I was so jealous. I didn’t even want to be there. I can’t believe that I feel this way. I didn’t know that I felt this way about him. And to see you with him, it breaks my heart. I couldn’t even stand to look at you yesterday. I felt like you, my Captain, betrayed me.” CD said. Kate gave CD a puzzled look. “CD I had no idea. If I’d known how you felt, I would’ve never let any of this happen. I can understand how you feel. I sensed that you were a bit jealous. I hope this doesn’t become a problem.” Kate said. “Captain, I don’t want to talk about this anymore. I really don’t.” CD said. Kate put her hand on CD’s arm. “CD, I’m really sorry.” Kate said. CD shook Kate’s hand off her arm. “I bet you are.” CD said as she walked out of the bathroom.

Kate sighed and looked at herself in the mirror. She couldn’t believe what a problem this whole situation was causing. She decided to go back to her office and think for a little bit.

When Kate reached her office, she found herself face to face with Charles Haysbert. He had been waiting for her for quite some time now and he was getting impatient. “Kate.” Charles said as he nodded. “Charles.” Kate said as she walked into her office. Charles followed her in and closed the door behind him. “Kate, as I told you yesterday over the phone, I want to take a look at that video you were talking about.” Charles said. “Sure. No problem.” Kate said as she opened her desk drawer and took out the video. She walked over to the television and popped the video in the VCR. She pushed play and took her seat.

An hour and a half later, Charles and Kate had watched the whole video. Kate could not believe she was able to stay in the same room with Charles for that long. “Well.” Kate started, “That was graphic wasn’t it?” She looked at Charles for his reaction. “Yes it was.” Charles said. “Is that all you needed from me Charles?” Kate asked. “Yes. I’ll see you tomorrow.” Charles said as he stood up from his chair and left Kate’s office. “I’ll be here.” Kate said. Kate got up from her chair and walked out of her office. “Well, that was interesting.” Kate said with a chuckle. “Did you have fun Cap?” Jinny asked sarcastically. “Hardly.” Kate responded. Kate walked over to Nate and rubbed his arm. “Hey. How you holdin’ up?” Kate asked in a soft voice. “Pretty good. How ‘bout you?” Nate asked. “I’m okay.” Kate nodded. Kate hadn’t realized that CD was standing next to Nate and had been watching her. Kate looked up at CD and immediately backed off of Nate. She didn’t want to push any of CD’s buttons.

Kate headed back to her office not realizing Magda was following her. Kate seated herself in her chair. Magda walked in and closed the door. “Captain…” Magda said. “Oh Magda. Hi. What can I do for you?” Kate said. Magda seated herself across from her Captain. “Captain, I noticed that CD seems bothered by something. She won’t talk to anybody. Did she say anything to you when you spoke to her?” Magda asked. “Yeah. She told me what was bothering her.” Kate said. “What is it?” Magda asked. “I’m not sure that I should be discussing someone else’s business with you.” Kate said. “But Captain, CD’s my friend too. I care about what happens to her.” Magda said. “I know but I just wouldn’t feel right talking about it with you.” Kate informed Magda. Magda sighed. She felt that she had a right to know what was going on. “Captain, maybe I can help her if you just told me.” Magda said. “Magda, this cant be helped. I can’t do anything about it and neither can you, but I’ll tell you anyway. Well, evidently, CD has a thing for Nate. She was jealous when she found out that we were together.” Kate explained. Magda looked puzzled. “Captain, she’s jealous? Of you?” Magda asked. “Yes.” Kate sighed. “What are you gonna do?” Magda asked. “I’m not sure how to handle this situation. I don’t want to break it off with Nate. I don’t want to hurt CD’s feelings either. I don’t know what to do.” Kate said. “Well, I don’t think you should break it off with Nate just to please CD. You spend too much time thinking about other people to think about yourself. Think about yourself this time.” Magda said as she stood up and walked out of Kate’s office. Magda walked over to CD. “I need to talk to you.” Magda said. Magda walked out of the division and to the bathroom with CD following her. They entered the bathroom and stared at each other. Magda put her hands on her hips and looked at CD. “What kind of stunt were you trying to pull huh?” Magda asked. “Magda, what are you talking about?” CD asked. “I’m talking about Captain and Nate. You told Captain that you were jealous? CD what the hell is your problem?” Magda said furiously. Magda wasn’t sure why she was so angry but she wanted an answer from CD. “Magda…” CD started



well...imma leave ya with that...

:mad: <--mag.

shes maaaad.

anyway...post more asappppp

I need more NOW!

Mag is really pissin me off in this fic! She needs to keep her damn mouth shut! LOL...btw, MORE!

more please.

Okay guys...here's some more

Magda stood there waiting for an explanation from CD. CD had no idea what to say. She couldn’t believe the captain told Magda about this. CD thought for a moment and then decided to speak. “Magda, I wasn’t trying to pull anything.” CD said. “Heh. Sure seems like you were.” Magda said. “Magda, I have no idea what you’re talking about. Captain asked what was wrong and I told her. That’s all.” CD explained. “Yeah. I know, but at the same time, you’re putting Captain in a very difficult position.” Magda began to explain. “How?” CD asked. “Well, how would you feel if you were with someone and found out that a long time friend had feelings for that person too? I bet you’d feel bad. Right?” Magda said. “Yeah. I would feel bad.” CD said. “Exactly. Now, how do you think Captain feels? She doesn’t wanna hurt you CD. She doesn’t wanna hurt anybody. She can’t help who she’s attracted to…”

Just as Magda made her statement, Kate walked into the bathroom. “Magda…” Kate said as she shook her head. “It’s alright. You don’t have to say anymore.” Kate said. Then she turned to CD. “CD, Magda’s right. I can’t help it if I’m attracted to Nate and neither can you. I can understand why the fact that him and I are together bothers you, but I can’t do anything about that. I’m not gonna jeopardize my relationship with Nate. I care about him and I don’t wanna lose him.” Kate explained. “Does he care about you?” CD asked. Magda looked at CD. She could not believe CD would ask something like that. What was she trying to get at anyway? “Well CD…” Kate started. “He never said that he loved me. I mean, I’ve never said that to him either. But from the looks of things, this isn’t going to end any time soon. We care about each other.” Kate explained.

An hour later, Kate was back in her office and CD and Magda were back at their desks. Jinny knew something was up but decided not to ask. Raina wasn’t about to open her big mouth and get involved. Nate could tell there was something wrong. He knew what CD was feeling and he felt bad for her. But at the same time he didn’t want to send CD the wrong signals, so he just stayed silent for the remainder of the day.

That evening after everyone had gone home, Kate sat at her desk in her office. She wasn’t really doing anything. She just sat there in silence. Thinking. Waiting. She eventually got up, put her coat on and grabbed her bag. Just as she was about to leave, Nate stopped by. Kate grew happier and a smile came her lips. “Nate.” She said. “Hi.” Nate said with a smile. “I was waiting for you. And when you didn’t come I thought…” Kate started to say. “You thought I forgot about you?” Nate asked. Kate nodded. “Nah.” Nate said as he shook his head. “Come on.”

The couple walked to the car and got in. The car ride was slow and quiet. They exchanged a few words but that was all. They reached Kate’s house and walked inside. They took their coats off and hung them up in the closet. It was a very quiet night for some reason. They went upstairs and changed. They got in bed. And right before Kate fell asleep Nate put his arms around her. “I love you.” He said. Kate turned around and looked at him. She wasn’t sure if she should say it back. She wasn’t sure she was ready. She stared at Nate for a moment or so more. “I love you too.” She said as she turned back around. Nate still held her in his arms. He kissed her on the cheek and they fell asleep.

They woke up the next morning still in each other’s arms. Kate smiled at Nate. “Hi.” She said. “Hi” Nate responded. Kate kissed him. “What time is it?” Nate asked. “6:30.” Kate said. “It’s still early.” Nate said. “Yeah.” Kate smiled. At that moment Kate and Nate disappeared under the covers.


I know it was short this time...maybe i'll post more later....

*whistles* Things sure are getting serious!

Post more SOOOOOOOOOOON!

this is sooooooooooo sooooooooooo ssooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait for more

Girl, you have gotta post some more TODAY! This is getting better in every post!

great great great work. I don't know how many times I need to say the word great. Maybe I need to throw a couple of wow's in there too. IM goning be doing a little happy dance whlie I scream and bang on the computer whlie I beg for more.

Originally posted by chrissya
great great great work. I don't know how many times I need to say the word great. Maybe I need to throw a couple of wow's in there too. IM goning be doing a little happy dance whlie I scream and bang on the computer whlie I beg for more.


thank you for the wonderful compliment. have fun doing your little happy dance. lol and dont scream, bang on your computer, and beg too much cuz I'm about to post more

Okey Dokey...here's some more :D

Two hours later Kate and Nate were walking into the division. They were about a half an hour late. Kate rushed into her office and tried to ignore everyone. Magda looked at her watch and smiled. “Hey Jinny, they’re late…again.” She said. Jinny looked at Magda and laughed. She wheeled around in her chair so that she was able to see Kate in her office. “Wake up late Cap?” Jinny said with a chuckle. Kate looked up at her and gave her a look. “Jinny…shut up.” Kate said. “Alright, alright.” Jinny said as she turned back around.

Kate walked out of her office. She looked over at CD and Nate trying to decide which one of her inspectors she should call in. She thought for a moment. “CD.” Kate said. CD turned around. “Yes Captain?” CD sighed. “I need to see you in my office for a minute.” Kate said as she turned around to walk back into her office. CD stood up and made her way into Kate’s office.

“Yes Captain?” CD said. “Close the door.” Kate said. CD closed the door and took a seat. “What do you have to say to me now?” CD asked. Kate looked at CD. “CD, all I wanted to know was how you were doing. You were pretty upset yesterday.” Kate explained. “Captain, if I wanted to talk about how I was doing I wouldn’t be talking to you.” CD said as she got up and headed for the door. “CD.” Kate said. “Don’t be like this. Please. I told you yesterday that I had no idea that you felt anything for Nate. And if I’d known I would’ve never let this happen. But it did happen. I can’t change that. CD, I don’t wanna be on bad terms with you.” Kate said. CD decided to sit back down.

From outside of Kate’s office, Nate, Jinny, Magda, and Raina were watching the whole scene. “I wish she would just give it up.” Magda said. “Give what up?” Raina asked. “This whole act she’s putting on. I think she’s trying to get Cap to feel bad for her and break it off with Nate.” Magda explained. Nate looked at Magda. “You think she’s what?” Nate asked. “You heard me. I think she’s trying to break you two up.” Magda said. Nate tried not to show it, but he was worried. He really cared about Kate and didn’t want to lose her over something stupid.

Kate finished her conversation with CD and decided it was time to call Nate in. She walked out of her office. “Nate. I need to speak with you.” Kate said. Nate stood up from his chair and made his way to Kate. He put his hand on her hip and followed her into her office. “Close the door.” Kate said. Nate closed the door and took a seat. Kate seated herself at her desk.

“Nate, what you said to me last night…I was really surprised. I didn’t even think I was ready to say it. I mean, we’ve only been together for a couple of days. But I guess it was something I’ve always felt.” Kate explained. Nate smiled and looked up at her. “I feel the same way. I haven’t said that to anyone in a long time. And last night, I knew it was coming. I felt it. So, I just said what I felt.” Nate said. “Well, I’m glad you did.” Kate said. There was a brief silence. Then Nate spoke. “Kate, I need to talk to you about CD.” Nate said. “Yeah. I think it’s becoming a problem here.” Kate said. “Look, Magda thinks that CD’s trying to break us up. I’m not sure if CD would do something like that, but Kate, I don’t want her to get between us. I mean I care about CD. She’s my partner, but I don’t think we should let her get between us.” Nate explained. “I know exactly what you mean. I was going to tell you the same thing. I care about CD too. I’ve known her for a long time but we can’t let her break us.” Kate said. “Well, I guess I’d better get back to work.” Nate said as he got up. Kate got up as well. She walked over to Nate and kissed him. “Alright hun. I’ll see you later.” Kate said with a smile. “See you later.” Nate said.

Nate walked out of Kate’s office with all eyes on him. “Aww!” Raina exclaimed. “What?” Nate shrugged. Nate walked back to his desk and sat down. He was greeted by a stern look from CD.

thats it for now....:D

Ahhhhhhhhh!!!!
It just keeps getting better and better and better ,and better,and better!!!!
post more soooooooooon VERY sooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!

once again wow. I swear this is great and keeps getting better with each post. right now I am on the edge of my seat wanting tio know what happens thought, I must admit I am afarid of what CD's gonna do.

I'm still doing my happy dance though but, Ive layed off the coffee so I aint screaming and beating on the computer but, im tempted too anyway becouse this is great.
PS i'll post more to mine later

Originally posted by chrissya
once again wow. I swear this is great and keeps getting better with each post. right now I am on the edge of my seat wanting tio know what happens thought, I must admit I am afarid of what CD's gonna do.

I'm still doing my happy dance though but, Ive layed off the coffee so I aint screaming and beating on the computer but, im tempted too anyway becouse this is great.
PS i'll post more to mine later

#1. Thank you for the wonderful compliment.
#2. Keep doing your happy little dance.
#3. I'm glad you're not screaming and beating the computer anymore. *shakes head* the things coffee can do to ya
#4. YAY!!!!! You're gonna post more of your fic!!!
#5. I'm probably gonna post more tomorrow.

:D :D :D

this....is....so......so.....gooooooood. I CANT WAIT FOR MOOOORE! do it for bonnay da luv festering law breaking womens voice loving bosom flashing hand flapping bunnay!*yah i left out the first part lol*

Originally posted by Blair n' Jo Rock
this....is....so......so.....gooooooood. I CANT WAIT FOR MOOOORE! do it for bonnay da luv festering law breaking womens voice loving bosom flashing hand flapping bunnay!*yah i left out the first part lol*

LOL kerray u are too funnay. I'll do it for Bonnay da ******** luv festering law breaking womens voice loving bosom flashing hand flapping bunnay.....but i'll do it tomorrow. LOL

Originally posted by consentida25


LOL kerray u are too funnay. I'll do it for Bonnay da ******** luv festering law breaking womens voice loving bosom flashing hand flapping bunnay.....but i'll do it tomorrow. LOL

fair enough ;)

As long as you post some more TODAY then I'll be happy! :D

This is a short post this time...but I'm gonna post more later...

Nate couldn’t believe it. ‘Who the hell does she think she is anyway?’ Nate thought. He stared at CD for moment. She looked up at him. “What?” CD asked. “Nothing.” Nate said. Nate stood up and made his way to Kate’s office. He knocked on the door and let himself in. Kate was on the phone. “Yeah…okay…I’ll have to call you back. Alright. Bye.” Kate hung up the phone and looked at Nate. “What’s the matter?” Kate asked. Nate closed the door and sat down. “CD has got to cut this out. She’s really ticking me off.” Nate said. “Why? What happened?” Kate asked. “Kate, she acts like she owns me. She gives me looks every time I come in here or show you the least bit of affection. I don’t know who she thinks she is.” Nate explained. Kate could tell that Nate was furious. She didn’t know exactly what to do about this particular situation. She sighed. “Nate, what am I supposed to do? I mean, I don’t know if I can go on like this.” Kate explained.

Ten minutes later, Nate walked out of Kate’s office looking sad and grim. He sat at his desk and put his head down. CD stared at him. She was a bit worried. “Nate, what happened?” CD asked. “She broke it off with me.” Nate said. A small smile came to CD’s lips. Magda heard what Nate had said and quickly turned around. “What?!?” Magda exclaimed. Nate looked at Magda. “We’re not together anymore.” Nate said. “Just like that? She gave up on you just like that?” Magda asked. “I guess so.” Nate said. “I’m sorry Nate.” Magda expressed her sympathy. “Its alright. I just need some time.” Nate explained. “Yeah. I understand.” Magda said. Nate stood up and began to walk. “Tell Ka- I mean Captain that I decided to take an early lunch.” Nate said as he walked out of the division.

“I’m gonna go talk to her.” Magda said. “To who?” Jinny asked. “Captain.” Magda said as she stood up and headed to Kate’s office. “Mag.” Jinny said. “Yeah?” Magda said as she turned around to look at Jinny. “Don’t butt in. I’m sure she’s having enough problems already. All she needs is one of us butting in.” Jinny said. “Yeah. She’s right Magda.” Raina agreed. Magda sighed. “Alright. I’ll leave it alone this time.” Magda said as she made her way back to her desk.


So...what'd ya think?

i think you ned to add more because this is awesome!!

i think mag needs to stop bein annoying...lol i luv thisssss! cant wait for moooooooooooore :D

Awww! That's so sad! :( More soon! I have to know what is going to happen next!

Okay...read carfully...its a bit wierd....


That evening, Kate sat at home on her couch. She realized how lonely it was without Nate. She missed him. She wanted him to be there. She wanted to feel him close to her, as he had been for the past nights. Her thoughts were interrupted by a knock on the door. Kate smiled. She stood up and walked to the door. When she opened it, she was greeted with a familiar face.

It was Nate. He was standing there with his luggage. “Hey honey.” Kate said with a smile. She put her arms around him and hugged him. Then she stepped aside to let Nate in. Nate dragged his luggage across the floor. He finally put it down by the stairs. Nate took his coat off and faced Kate. He put his arms out. Kate smiled and walked over to him. She hugged him and kissed him. “I guess they fell for it, huh?” Kate said. Nate laughed. “Yeah. They did. I put on my best puppydog face.” Nate said. Kate grabbed Nate’s face. “You’re best puppydog face, huh?” Kate said. “Yeah.” Nate answered. Kate kissed him once again. Then she parted from him and walked back to the couch. Nate followed her.

“What’d CD say when you told her we broke up?” Kate asked. “She didn’t say anything. She had a little smirk on her face. But that was all. Magda seemed a bit upset.” Nate explained. “Magda’s always upset.” Kate said. “Nate, now we have to act like we aren’t together anymore. This whole thing is going to be harder than I thought.” Kate explained. “Yeah. I know.” Nate said. “I can’t believe you’re moving in with me. This is gonna be great.” Kate said. “I’m a little nervous.” Nate said. Kate started to caress his neck. “Oh sweetie, why?” Kate asked. “I just hope that this lasts. I mean, we’ve been together for what? Six days and we already have problems.” Nate said. “Nate, I know six days isn’t a long time, but we’ve known each other for a while. I think we know each other well enough to hold a stable relationship. And we can’t keep lying to everyone. The truth is gonna come out one day. We wont be able to hide it then. They’re gonna suspect.” Kate explained. “I know we can’t keep lying. But this was the only thing I could think of to get CD off my back.” Nate said as he grew angrier. Kate could see his rage. She could see it in his eyes. “Calm down honey. Its gonna be alright. We’ll figure something out. But for now, lets just enjoy each other’s company.” Kate said as she placed her head on Nate’s shoulder. Nate put his arm around her. They fell asleep that way.

Kate woke up on the couch the next morning with a headache. She stood up and walked to the kitchen. She found Nate at the kitchen table quietly and contently reading the paper. “Hi sweetie.” Kate said as she leaned over and kissed his forehead. “Hey.” Nate said.

The rest of their morning was quiet and calm. They took showers. Got dressed. And headed out to work.

Before they entered the division, Kate put on her best ‘I am so upset that I had to break up with Nate’ look. Nate put on his best puppydog face once again. They entered the division side by side. They did not look at each other nor did they speak to one another. Kate rushed to her office as usual, trying to ignore everyone. Nate made his way solemnly to his desk. That was the act they had to put on by day. But by night things were completely different.

This act went on for the next three months. By then Nate and Kate were still living together. Kate was on the verge of breaking down. She didn’t want to hide anymore. She just wanted it to stop. Nate knew this was hard on her. It was hard for him too. It was hard hiding it from everyone at work. It was hard hiding it from Haysbert. He was always on Kate’s back. They had to figure something out. They had to set the record straight once and for all.

It was a quiet night at Magda’s house. She had invited Jinny over. They had just planned to hang out, which they did. As they sat on the couch watching T.V, Magda wondered about the situation between the Captain and Nate. “Jinny.” Magda said. Jinny looked over at Magda. “Yeah?” She said. “Do you think they’re still seeing each other?” Magda asked. “For crying out loud! Get over it Mag. Its none of our business.” Jinny said. “What? Its not like you don’t wonder about these things.” Magda said. “But Mag, I don’t keep at it ya know? You are so just so nosey that you cant let these things go.” Jinny said with a chuckle. “Shut up Jinny.” Magda said.

Kate sat at her kitchen table with a cup of tea in her hands. Nate was seated across from her. Nate’s eyes wandered all over the kitchen. He couldn’t focus on just one thing. All Kate could do was look at the tea. “We gotta tell ‘em. We gotta come clean.” Kate said. Nate looked at her. He saw her face. She was worried. “These past couple of months have been great, but I can’t harbor this secret anymore. We have to tell them. We’ve been lying to everybody: Amanda, Jinny, Magda, Raina, CD, your family, everybody. Its not fair to them and its not fair to us.” Kate explained. “I know. We should’ve never lied to them in the first place. But how was I supposed to get CD out of our way? I mean, She would’ve kept bugging me. And you…you could’ve lost your job over this.” Nate said. Kate looked at him. “I could still lose my job. And Charles isn’t exactly in my favor either.” Kate said. “Maybe he won’t be so hard on you if you told him that we’ve been together for a while. Maybe he’ll understand. Maybe he’ll see that our relationship hasn’t affected our work.” Nate suggested. “Maybe, but I doubt it.” Kate said.

The next morning, Kate awoke with Nate next to her. She smiled. She kissed his cheek. “Come on wake up.” Kate said. Nate looked at Kate. “Hi.” He said with a smile. “Hi. Come on hun, get up.” Kate said. Nate got out of bed and so did Kate. They showered and dressed and headed out the door.

The car ride was the same as usual, quiet and slow. Kate seemed like she was a bit nervous. Nate noticed it right away. He knew something was up. “What’s the matter?” Nate asked worriedly. “Huh? Oh nothing.” Kate answered. “No. I know there’s something wrong. What’s up?” Nate said. Kate sighed. “Honey, I was thinking about our conversation last night. I’m thinking about telling Haysbert and everyone else.” Kate said. Nate looked at her. “What?” Nate said in astonishment. “I think its time we told them what’s really been going on for the past three months.” Kate explained. “But you could still lose your job if you tell Charles.” Nate said. “I know. I’ll see what I can do.” Kate said.

Kate knew exactly what she was going to do. She just hoped that nobody would find out. She wasn’t sure if this was going to work and she knew she was taking a big risk. But she knew she had to do it. There was no other way.


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Kate and Nate entered the division putting on their usual act. Everyone was used to it by now. Kate made her way into her office, closed the door and sat down. She had to think things out. She wasn’t sure how she was going to tell Haysbert about her relationship with Nate. She knew that he would want to fire her for it. And she knew what she had to do in order to keep her job. She was just hoping Haysbert would be weak enough to fall for it.

“So, how are things going?” CD asked Nate. “Everything’s okay.” Nate said. “Look, I was wondering, do you wanna have dinner with me tonight?” CD asked. “Uh..I might be busy. I’m not sure what I have planned. I’ll let you know by the end of the day.” Nate offered an excuse. “Okay.” CD said with a smile.

That afternoon, D.C. Charles Haysbert stopped in to check on Captain McCafferty. He knocked on her door and then let himself in. “Kate.” He said as he nodded. “Charles.” Kate nodded. “What can I do for you?” Kate asked. “I just wanted to know the status on Inspectors Exstead and Ramirez’s case.” Charles said. “They’re making good progress.” Kate said trying to brush it off. She wanted to get straight to the point. “Charles, close the door and take a seat. I need to speak to you.” Kate said. Charles closed the door and took a seat just as Kate had told him to do.

“Yes Kate?” Charles asked. Kate wasn’t even sure if she wanted to this yet. But she already told Charles that she had something to say. Kate sighed. “Look, Charles, before you go off on a rampage, I just want you to know that what I’m about to tell you has been going on for the past three months and has never affected my job. It was kept aside.” Kate explained. Charles nodded. “Go on.” He said. “Charles, I have been involved in a relationship with Inspector Basso for the past three months. We have put it aside during working hours and nobody knows about it.” Kate explained. Charles stood up and looked at Kate. “Now I have the opportunity to get rid of you. That’s interference of work. It’s a conflict of interest.” Charles said. Kate stood up. “Charles, please let me keep my job.” Kate pleaded. “Why should I?” Charles said. “Because I’m about to give you an offer.” Kate said. “You’re bribing me now? Heh. What’s the offer Kate?” Charles said. Kate could not believe she was about to say this, but she had to. “If you let me keep my job…” Kate started to say. She paused. “If I let you keep your job what?” Charles asked. “If you let me keep my job, I’ll sleep with you. But only once.” Kate cringed as she said the words. “Once isn’t enough Kate.” Charles said as he accepted the offer. Kate couldn’t believe she was stooping so low and betraying Nate. “How many times…?” Kate’s voice trailed off. “As many times as I say.” Charles said. Kate wanted to scream. She didn’t want to do it at all, but for the sake of her job, she had to. “Charles, that’s going a little overboard.” Kate suggested. “I’m going overboard? You’re the one who offered.” Charles said with a smirk on his face. “You’re the one who accepted!” Kate exclaimed. “Fine Kate. Once will be enough. But what are you gonna tell your little lover after you’ve done it?” Charles said. Kate looked out of the window of her office. She saw Nate, the man she had grown to know and love. She looked down at the floor. “The truth.” Kate said. “So when?” Kate asked. “How about tonight? I think I deserve some affection after a long hard day of work.” Charles said as he put his hand on Kate’s arm. Kate rolled her eyes. “Alright.” Kate agreed.

Charles walked out of Kate’s office and out of the division. Kate walked back to her desk and plopped down in her chair. Nate knocked on her door. “Hi Captain.” Nate said. “Hi Nate.” Kate said with a sigh. Nate walked in, closed the door behind him and sat down. “Kate, CD wants me to go to dinner with her. I don’t wanna…” Nate started to say. “Just go. It’s alright.” Kate said. “Are you sure?” Nate asked. “I’m positive.” Kate reassured him. “Okay. Bye.” Nate said. “Bye Honey. Nate…” Kate said. Nate turned around. “Yeah?” He said. “I love you. Remember that. Okay?” Kate said. “I love you too.” Nate said. “Bye.” Nate said with a smile. He made his way out of Kate’s office.

Kate put her head in her hands. She figured that when Nate was having dinner with CD, she could go over to Haysbert’s house. She really didn’t want to do it. She wanted to talk to Nate about it, but figured it would be better to tell him after it had happened.

That evening, Nate stopped by Kate’s office. “I’m gonna go meet CD now.” Nate said. “Yeah I’m on my way out as well.” Kate said as she stood up. She put her coat on and grabbed her bag. They left the building together. As they stood outside, the held each other close. “I gotta go now.” Nate said. “Okay.” Kate said. Nate kissed her. She smiled. “I love you.” Kate said. “Love you too.” Nate said. He hugged her and then waved down a cab.

Kate made her way to her car. She got in and started to drive. She read the directions Haysbert had give her. After forty five minutes of driving, Kate finally found his house. Kate parked her car by the curb and stepped out. Kate walked up to the house. Before she knocked on the door, she said a little prayer. After knocking on the door, Charles opened the door.

“Kate. Hi.” Charles said. “Hi Charles.” Kate said. Charles stepped aside and let Kate in. Kate walked into the house. Charles was close behind her. He took her coat of off her body. “Uh…thanks.” Kate said. Charles grabbed Kate’s arm and led her to his living room. It was a big living room. It was lighted with candles. Kate looked around the room and then up at Haysbert. “What is this?” Kate said. “I set it up.” Charles said. “I see. But Charles, its not like…” Kate cut herself off. She just wanted to get it over with.

Nate met CD for dinner. CD had already been seated. “Hey CD” Nate said with a smile. “Hey Nate. How’s it goin’?” CD asked. “Good. How about you?” Nate said. “I’m alright. I’m hungry though.” CD said. “Yeah I’m hungry too.” Nate said. CD laughed. “You’re always hungry.” She said. The two partners sat and chatted. They laughed. For the first time in a while they were actually getting along. CD had put Nate’s affair with Kate behind her. Nate was glad to have the old CD back.

Back at Haysbert’s house, Kate was struggling with her decision to do this. After a few moments of thought, she decided to just go for it. She grabbed Haysbert’s hand and led him to the couch. She sat him down. She began to remove bits and pieces of her clothing. She sat on his lap and began kissing him. Through all of this, Nate was in the back of her mind. She missed him. Charles was kissing her back and put his hands on Kate’s body. Kate was not enjoying this at all.

An hour later, it was finally over. Kate had done her dirty work. As she put her clothes back on, she could feel Haysbert’s breath on the back of her neck. He put his hands on her shoulders. “What?” Kate said. Charles didn’t answer her. As Kate buttoned up her blouse she turned around. “Charles, I gotta go. This can never happen again.” Kate said. Charles looked at her. “I know. But you’re affair with Nate should’ve never happened.” Charles said. “But it did.” Kate said. “And so did this.” Charles snapped back. “Charles, theres a big difference between my affair with Nate and what happened tonight.” Kate said. “And what’s that?” Charles asked. “I wanted to be with Nate. I care about him. I never wanted to be with you. I mean, God help me if I’m ever attracted to you. I did this because I wanted to keep my job.” Kate explained. “I see. Well Kate, your work is done here. And since you completed your part of the deal, you can keep your job. Just don’t let your relationship with Inspector Basso get in anyone’s way.” Charles said. A small smile came to Kate’s lips. “Thank you.” Kate said.

Kate finished getting dressed and headed home. Luckily she got home before Nate. She opened her front door and walked in. She hung her coat in the closet. She went upstairs to the bedroom to change. She sat in bed and waited for Nate to come home. She knew she would have to tell Nate what happened.

Nate had finished dinner with CD. They were both on their way out. “CD I gotta go. I’m beat.” Nate said. “Yeah me too. I guess I’ll see you tomorrow.” CD said. “Yeah.” Nate said with a smile. He hugged CD and left.

Nate inserted his key in the keyhole and unlocked the door. He walked in and hung his coat in the closet. He made his way upstairs and to the bedroom. He found Kate sitting in bed. “Hey” Kate said. “Hey.” Nate said with a smile. “How was dinner?” Kate asked. “It was good. CD and I actually got along for the first time in a while.” Nate explained as changed his clothes. “Nate, I need to talk to you about something.” Kate said. Nate got in bed. “What?” Nate asked.

Kate hesitated. She was so afraid to lose him. She rubbed his back. “Nate, I talked to Charles today. I told him about us.” Kate said. “How’d he take it?” Nate asked. “At first he was furious. He told me I was going to be out of a job. And then…” Kate’s voice trailed off. She looked at Nate. “And then I promised him something in order to keep my job.” Kate said. Nate was confused. “What did you promise him?” Nate asked. Tears were already welling up in Kate’s eyes. She grabbed Nate’s hand. “Sex.” She said. Nate looked at her. He couldn’t believe what he was hearing. “Nate, I didn’t know what else to do.” Kate said. “Did you do it?” Nate asked. “Do what?” Kate said. “Did you have sex with him?” Nate said. Kate looked down. “While you were out with CD…I went to his house. I just wanted to get it over with. And I did. I did do it.” Kate explained. Nate was hurt. He couldn’t believe that Kate would do such a thing. “Nate, I don’t care about him. Not the way I care about you. I didn’t feel anything for him tonight. It was something that I really didn’t want to do. My mind was on you the whole time.” Kate said.

Nate was very quiet. He wasn’t sure what to say. Nate decided to lie down. He turned his back to Kate. Kate felt so bad. She knew she damaged their relationship. She hadn’t meant to. She looked at Nate. She wanted to comfort him. She leaned over and began running her fingers through his hair. “Sweetie, I’m sorry. You have no idea how horrible I feel right now.” Kate said as tears rolled down her cheeks. She lied down next to him and hugged him. “Maybe we should take the day off tomorrow. I think some things need to be discussed.” Kate said. “I think that’s a good idea.” Nate said.



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i was bored so i wrote a little more....

The next day both Kate and Nate called in sick. They really hadn’t spoken to each other all day. Nate found himself trying to kill time by sitting on the couch and watching T.V. Kate could see him from where she was standing in the hallway. She saw his face. ‘Look at his face’ Kate thought. Kate shook her head. She was so disappointed in herself. How could she jeopardize their relationship like that? She knew she was wrong.

She knew that she hurt him. Kate made her way to the couch in her living room. She seated herself beside Nate. Nate didn’t even bother to look at her. He couldn’t. “Hi.” Kate said in a soft voice. Nate didn’t say anything in response. Kate grabbed his hand. “Honey, I know that you’re upset. And I know that what I did was wrong. But I didn’t do it because I wanted to. How else was I gonna keep my job?” Kate said. “You could’ve offered him something else. Overtime or something.” Nate said. Kate looked down. “Nate, I love you. I care about you. I didn’t want to hurt you. I didn’t mean to hurt you. I made a mistake. A stupid mistake.” Kate said. She was furious with herself. She was angry for messing everything up. She was angry for hurting the man that she loved. She was angry because he wouldn’t listen to what she had to say. But she understood how he felt. She understood how angry he was. “I’m sorry.” Kate said. She leaned in and kissed him on the cheek. She continued to hold his hand. They both sat there, in each other’s presence, in silence.

At the division, everyone began to wonder why the Captain or Nate hadn’t shown up for work today. Raina had taken the message from the Captain that things weren’t going well for her and that she wouldn’t be in today. From Nate, she heard that he was sick and wouldn’t be in today either. Raina repeatedly explained their excuses to Magda. Magda knew something was up. Or at least she thought something was going on. Jinny just brushed it off as usual and let Magda be her nosey self. CD was worried that she in some way had offended Nate, but she really didn’t pay attention to it.

D.C. Charles Haysbert entered the division looking for Kate. When he didn’t find her in her office he turned to her inspectors for further information. “Where is she?” Charles said. “Who? Captain?” Raina asked. “Yes. I need to speak with her.” Charles said. “Oh she called in sick today” Raina informed. “What about Inspector Basso? Is he in?” Charles said. “No. He called in sick as well.” Raina informed Charles once again. A small evil smile came to the lips of Charles Haysbert. Kate’s little side job had damaged her relationship with Nate. He knew it. “What the hell are you smiling for?” Magda was frustrated. “Nothing.” Charles said as he left the division.

Kate and Nate were still sitting on the couch. They were still silent. Kate occasionally glanced at Nate. He showed no emotion towards her. Nate felt so empty. He felt as though his heart had been ripped out. He didn’t hate Kate. He was just angry with her. He decided to speak. “Kate.” He said. Kate looked at him. She gave him her full attention. She wanted to hear what he had to say. “Kate, I love you. You know that. I’m just really angry and confused. Last night when you told me what happened, I was mad. I was mad at you, mad at Haysbert, mad at everybody. You always made me feel like I was the only one. The only one you ever touched. The only one you ever made love to. And then last night, that feeling just went away. I want that feeling back.” Nate said. Kate looked at him. “ I don’t know how long its gonna take for that to happen. But Nate, you’ll always be special to me.” Kate said. Nate smiled. “Can I kiss you?” Kate asked. Nate hesitated. He was afraid it wasn’t going to be the same. “Sure.” He said. Kate kissed him passionately. It became intense. Then Nate pulled away. He looked at kate. “That’s what I mean. That’s what I want.” He said. Kate smiled at him. She rested her head on his shoulder. He put his arm around her.

This was just the beginning of mending their relationship. They both knew it was going to take a lot of work, confidence and trust to get back to where they were. They also had to make it through telling everyone that they were a couple and dealing with Haysbert.


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When morning arrived, Kate and Nate woke up early to get ready for work. Niether of them was sure that they were ready to go back. They knew everyone would suspect that something was up because they had both called in sick. They knew they had to tell everyone that they had been lying about everything. They knew it was going to be tough, but they had to do it. They had to explain what was going on.

Kate parked the car in the parking lot. Her and Nate sat there in silence for a minute or so. Kate put her hand on Nate’s lap and smiled at him. “Are you ready?” Kate said. Nate nodded. Kate and Nate stepped out of the car and began walking. They entered the building and got in the elevator.

Kate and Nate entered the division clinging to each other. They didn’t care about what everyone though. Magda was the first one to notice the change in their attitudes. She looked at Jinny and smiled. Jinny got the message. Raina had an inkling that they had been together since yesterday. CD was a bit confused. She wasn’t sure what to make of it.

Kate and Nate parted from each other and Kate went to her office. Nate walked to his desk and sat down. Jinny, Magda, and Raina all had smirks on their face. “What?” Nate said. “Nothin’.” Jinny answered as she went back to work. Nate turned around and looked at CD. He couldn’t quite read the expression on her face. He wasn’t sure what she was thinking or feeling.

That afternoon, after making a few phone calls, Kate decided it was time to call a meeting in her office. She walked out of her office and looked at everybody. “Guys.” Kate said. Everyone looked up. “Can I see you all in my office for a minute?” She said. Everyone stood up and headed to her office. Kate let them in. When they were all situated, Kate closed the door and took her seat. “What’s goin’ on?” Jinny asked. “Well, I assume that you all noticed a change in Nate and I.” Kate began. Everyone nodded. “We wanted to confess something. And I know this isn’t the best place to do it, but we’ve got no other choice.” Kate explained. “Go on.” Magda said. “Do you all remember three months ago when Nate and I broke up?” Kate asked. “Yeah.” Raina said. “Well, we never broke up to begin with. We had to keep it a secret and we figured that if you all thought that him and I weren’t together, that it would be less of a risk.” Kate explained. “I knew it! Didn’t I tell you Jinny?” Magda exclaimed. “Yeah ya did.” Jinny said. CD wasn’t sure how she felt about the issue. She had put it behind her but she was still kind of hurt. “I understand why you both lied, but why don’t you trust us? I mean, we’re all friends here.” CD said. “CD, we lied to everybody. Not just you. Everybody.” Nate said. “What about D.C Haysbert?” Raina asked with curiosity. “He already knows.” Kate said point blankly. “Are you serious?” Magda asked. “He let you keep your job?” Jinny asked. “Yeah. He let me keep my job, surprisingly.” Kate said. “Is that it?” CD asked. Kate looked up at CD. “Yeah that’s it.” Kate said. Everyone walked out of Kate’s office and went back to work.

Two hours later, D.C. Charles Haybert strolled into the division. Nate looked at him with disgust. He found himself cursing Haysbert out under his breath. Charles made his way to Kate’s office. He knocked on the door and let himself in. Kate looked up at him and rolled her eyes. “Charles.” She nodded. “What can I do for you?” Kate said. Charles took a seat across from Kate. “So Kate…” Charles said. “So Charles…” Kate said mockingly. “I wanted to talk to you about the other night.” Charles said. “Charles, this isn’t the place to discuss what happened the other night.” Kate said. “Does Inspector Basso know?” Charles asked. “Yes he does. I told him that night.” Kate said. “You did?” Charles was puzzled. “Yes I did.” Kate said. “How’d he take it?” Charles asked. Kate was getting frustrated but she answered his question. “Nate was a bit shocked, but he’s okay now.” Kate said. “Are you two still together?” Charles asked. “Yes we’re still together. Charles, what are you after here?” Kate said. Charles looked at Kate. “Kate, I’m not after anything.” Charles said. Kate looked at him in disbelief. She knew something was up. “Charles, I don’t know if you’ve noticed, but I have a lot of work to do.” Kate said. Charles took the hint and stood up. “Alright Kate. I’m leaving.” Charles said.

As Charles exited Kate’s office he bumped into Nate. “Inspector Basso.” Charles said as he nodded. Nate didn’t even bother saying anything. Nate made his way into Kate’s office and shut the door. Kate looked up. “Hey.” She said with a smile. “Hey. What’d he want?” Nate said. “I really don’t know. He came in here asking pointless questions. He frustrates me.” Kate said. “Oh I see. Did he say anything about the other night?” Nate asked. “He asked me if you knew what happened and if we were still together. That was really it.” Kate said. “Oh I see.” Nate said. There was a brief moment of silence. “I’m gonna go now. I’ll see you later.” Nate said.




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As Nate sat at his desk going over the case, CD just stared at him. She was disappointed. She wanted to be with him. Hearing that Nate and Kate were still together brought back those jealous feelings once again. “Nate.” CD said. Nate looked up. “Yeah?” He said. “Do you think we could have dinner together again? I need to talk to you.” CD said. “I don’t know. I’ll have to talk to Kate. I don’t know if she has anything planned.” Nate said. CD nodded. “I see.” She said. “I’ll…uh go ask her now.” Nate said as he stood up. “Okay.” CD said.

Nate made his way to Kate’s office. He knocked on the door and let himself in. Kate looked up. “Hi Honey.” Kate said with a smile. “Hi.” Nate said as he took a seat. “What can I do for you?” Kate asked. “Well, CD asked me to go to dinner with her again. She said she needed to talk to me.” Nate explained. “And…?” Kate said. “I just wanted to know if you were alright with me going with her. I mean, I don’t want you to feel like I’m abandoning you.” Nate said. “I don’t feel like you’re abandoning me. Go with CD. Its okay.” Kate said. “Are you sure?” Nate asked. “I’m sure. Really. Its okay. I’ll be fine.” Kate said. “Okay.” Nate said. As Nate began to head out the door, Kate called him back. Nate walked over to her. “What?” He whispered as he leaned over. Kate pulled at his collar and brought him down to her level. She kissed him. “You can go now.” Kate said. “Wait, one more.” Nate said. He kissed her this time. “Now I can go.” Nate said. Kate smiled. Nate walked out of Kate’s office and back to his desk.

“So what happened?” CD asked eagerly. “We have nothing planned so I can go.” Nate explained. “That’s good.” CD said. “Yeah. So when and where?” Nate said. “Tonight. At Anchorside. After work.” CD informed. “Okay.” Nate said.

That evening, Nate entered Kate’s office. CD was waiting outside for him. “Hi Kate.” Nate said. “Hi.” Kate said with a smile. “You’re leaving now?” Kate asked. “Yeah. I just wanted to say bye before I left.” Nate said. Kate stood up and walked over to Nate. Nate hugged her. “I guess I’ll see you later.” Nate said. “Yeah.” Kate answered. After a long embrace, Nate kissed Kate. “Bye.” He said. “Bye. Have fun. Not too much fun though.” Kate said. Nate smiled. Kate winked at him. “I love you.” Nate whispered to Kate. “I love you too.” Kate whispered back.

At Anchorside with CD, Nate was having a good time chatting away with CD. The conversation became serious. CD was ready to confess her feelings for him. She wasn’t sure how this was going to go but she figured she’d give it a shot. “Nate.” CD said. Nate looked up. “Nate, I wanted to tell you something tonight.” CD started to explain. “Uh-huh.” Nate said. “Look, I don’t know how to say this, but I’ve wanted to be with you for a long time. I mean, when I found out that you were involved in a relationship with the Captain, my heart sunk. I was so angry and jealous. I’ve had these feelings for a long time.” CD explained. Nate looked at CD. “I’ve known that for quite some time now.” Nate said. “You have?” CD asked. “Yeah. It was kind of obvious.” Nate said. “You don’t have any feelings for me, do?” CD said as she shook her head. “CD, you’re a wonderful person. I care about you as a friend. But not the way I care about Kate. I love her. You’re my partner and…” Nate was interrupted by a kiss from CD. Nate was in shock. He had no idea what had just happened.

Just as CD kissed Nate, Kate passed by Anchorside. She saw the two of them in the window. Her jaw dropped. ‘An hour ago, he was telling me that he loved me.’ She thought to herself. Kate was hurt. She walked away right before Nate pulled away from CD and yelled at her.
“CD! What the hell was that!?! What were you thinking?” Nate yelled. CD didn’t say anything. “You have nothing to say for yourself now. Do you?” Nate said. Still no answer from CD. “Thought so.” Nate said. He was furious with her. He thought about sitting there and talking it out but he was too angry. Nate walked out on CD and waved down a cab.

The drive home was long for Kate. Tears were streaming down her cheeks. ‘I knew it was too good to be true.’ Kate said to herself. Kate got home before Nate did. She entered the house, went upstairs, changed and got in bed. She sat in bed for at least twenty minutes before Nate got home. When Nate entered the bedroom, Kate just stared at him. “Hi.” Nate said with a slight smile. Kate continued to stare at him. “What’s the matter?” Nate asked. “How could you do that?” Kate asked. “Do what?” Nate said. “Don’t play dumb with me. I saw you kissing CD. I saw you.” Kate said as tears welled up in her eyes. “Kate, I wasn’t kissing her. She kissed me. I pulled away and yelled at her.” Nate tried to explain. “Why don’t I believe you?” Kate said. “I don’t know. I wish you would.” Nate said as he sat down on the bed next to Kate. Nate put his hand on Kate’s. “Kate, you have no idea how much I care about you. I would never do something like that to you.” Nate said. Kate still disbelieved him. She wanted him out. Just as she was about to kick him out, she took a minute to think about how he had forgiven her for what she did. She decided not to kick him out. Instead she just looked at him and smiled.

“Sweetie, I know you care about me. I care about you too. I just don’t want to lose you. I want to be with you and I want you to be with me. “ Kate said. “I know.” Nate said. “But Nate, I’m gonna have to have a talk with CD. I want to invite her over tomorrow. But I want to talk to her alone.” Kate explained. Nate nodded his head. He finished changing and got into bed. He kissed her. The kiss never seemed to end. And before they knew it, they were all over each other, stripping each other down, and then eventually disappearing under the covers.


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sorry about the last post it was suppose to be post more soon please

Okey dokey....heres some more...its not much so..

The next morning, Nate and Kate arrived at the division as happy as they could possibly be for a couple who had been through hell in the past few days. Nate sat at his desk across from CD. He was still angry at her for what she did. “Do I have any messages?” Kate asked Raina as she rushed into her office. Raina jumped up from her seat and followed the Captain into her office. “You have one message today. D.C Haysbert called. He said he needed to speak with you. He said it was very important.” Raina explained. Kate rolled her eyes. “Everything is very important to him.” Kate mumbled. “Oh and thanks Raina” Kate said. “You’re welcome Captain.” Raina said. Instead of leaving, Raina lingered in Kate’s office. Kate looked up. “What?” Kate shrugged. Raina closed the door and sat down. “So, how are things going with Nate and you?” Raina asked. Kate sat down. “Raina, this is none of your business. But if you must know, everything’s fine. We are doing just fine.” Kate said. Raina looked down. “That’s not what we heard from CD.” Magda said as she entered Kate’s office and closed the door. Kate looked up at Magda and her eyes widened. “What did she say to you?” Kate asked.

Magda took the other available seat across from her Captain. “CD told us, that her and Nate had dinner together last night. She said that Nate was a wreck and that he was telling her how bad things were with you. CD said that he told her that you and Nate fight all the time and that he’s not happy.” Magda explained. Kate leaned back in her chair. She couldn’t believe what she had just heard. Kate didn’t speak. She didn’t know what to say. “Captain, is that true?” Raina asked. Kate snapped back into reality and looked at Raina. “Huh? Oh. Well the past few days have been rough for us, but we don’t fight. We’ve never fought.” Kate said. “CD also said that her and Nate kissed and that he seemed to enjoy it.” Magda explained. Kate looked down. “Nate told me about the kiss. He said that she kissed him and that he pulled away.” Kate said. “Do you believe him?” Raina asked. “Yes. I believe him. I mean, why shouldn’t I? He gave me a second chance when I…” Kate’s voice trailed off. Magda and Raina looked at each other. “When you what?” Magda asked. Kate looked at her. “Uh…nothing.” Kate said. “Look guys, I think I’d better get Nate and CD in here. I need to speak with them.” Kate said. “Alright Captain. If you need anything, I’m here okay?” Magda said. Kate smiled. “Thanks Magda.” Kate said. Magda and Raina left Kate’s office. “CD, Nate. Captain wants you.” Magda said. CD and Nate stood up and headed for Kate’s office.

They entered her office. Nate closed the door. They both took seats. “What’s the matter?” Nate asked. “There a few things that need to be discussed. I want you to tell me straight out what the hell has been going on here.” Kate said as she stared directly at CD. CD looked down at the ground. She thought for a moment and then looked back up at Kate. She opened her mouth to speak.



thats it for now...tell me wut ya think....

ok this is geating better and better but, I want so more please.

U stopped! How on earth cud u stop like that!?
Ahhhhh!!!!!! U have 2 post more like now!!!
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez!!
I am going insane from the suspence!!
:crazy: :crazy: :crazy:

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!
U stopped! How on earth cud u stop like that!?
Ahhhhh!!!!!! U have 2 post more like now!!!
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez!!
I am going insane from the suspence!!
:crazy: :crazy: :crazy:

DITTO!! I NEED A LOT MORE NOW!! :D

heres some more....its not a lot tho....


“Captain, I don’t know what to say.” CD said. Kate sighed. “Do you even know what I’m referring to?” Kate asked. “You’re talking about what Raina and Magda told you, right?” CD asked. “Exactly.” Kate said as she leaned back in her chair. “Last night when Nate and I had dinner…” CD started. At that moment Raina opened the door. “CD, Nate. There’s been a murder downtown in an alley by. This can’t wait.” Raina informed. CD and Nate looked at each other and then at the Captain. Kate nodded her head. “Go. We’ll talk later.” Kate said.

CD headed out the door right away, but Nate lingered. He walked over to Kate. “I don’t know what’s been going on but I’m gonna find out.” Nate whispered. He leaned over and kissed. “Bye sweetie.” Kate said. “Bye.” Nate answered. He walked out of Kate’s office and caught up with CD. “CD, what was Kate talking about?” Nate asked. “What do you mean?” CD said. “You know what I mean.” Nate said. CD sighed. “Nate, she was talking about last night. I told Raina and Magda about last night.” CD said. “Did you tell them about how I yelled at you? And about how I walked out on you?” Nate asked. “I must have left out those minor details.” CD said. “CD! Why did you do that!?! CD, I don’t know what’s gotten into you.” Nate said as he threw his arms up in the air. He didn’t even want to be with CD at that point.

Kate sat at her desk and sighed. It seemed that it was never the right time to talk with CD. She worried that the situation would worsen if she didn’t speak with her soon. Kate brushed it off for a while and started her day of work.

That afternoon, Charles Haysbert stopped in to visit with Kate. He opened her door and let himself in. Kate looked up at him. She sighed. “Charles.” Kate said as she nodded her head. “Kate.” Charles nodded his head. He took a seat across from Kate. “So, what can I do for you?” Kate asked. Charles looked down. “Kate, remember the other night, when we were together?” Charles said. “Yes.” Kate said as she thought back to that horrible night. “Kate, I want that again. It’s been really lonely since my wife and I split up. I need some affection.” Charles said. Kate laughed. “Charles, you’re not serious.” Kate said as she shook her head. “I am serious.” Charles said. Kate’s eyes narrowed. “Charles, what’s the matter with you? You know that I’m in a relationship. I can’t do this. Even if I weren’t in a relationship, I wouldn’t do it.” Kate said as she stood up. Charles stood up. “Kate, come on.” He said as he walked towards Kate. He put his hand on her hip. Kate looked at him. “Charles. No.” Kate said as she took his hand off her hip and walked away. “Why not?” Charles asked. Kate turned around and looked at him. She was furious. “Are you that desperate Charles? Huh? You know I can’t do this. I don’t want to do it.” Kate said. Charles sighed. “I can take away your job.” Charles said. “Don’t you dare threaten me.” Kate said with firmness in her voice. “Then do it.” Charles said. “NO!” Kate yelled so loud that everyone outside her office could hear her. Raina ran into Kate’s office. “Is everything okay Captain?” Raina said as she peeked through the door. “Yes Raina. Everything’s fine.” Kate sighed. She put her hand on her head. “Okay.” Raina said as she closed the door to Kate’s office.

Kate walked over to Charles. She put her hand on his back. “Charles, you have to go. I can’t have this going on in my office. All the yelling and frustration, it’s just too much.” Kate said. “Just think about it Kate.” Charles said. Kate rolled her eyes. “Yeah. Okay. Just go.” Kate said. “I’ll give you a call tonight.” Charles said. Kate sight. “Yeah yeah. Just go.” Kate said as she nearly pushed Charles out the door. Kate closed the door and walked back to her desk. She sat down. She was very disturbed by Haysbert’s behavior. She didn’t know what had gotten into him. She knew this would cause more problems for her and Nate. Everything had gotten to be so weird ever since her and Nate had gotten together.


thats all for now....maybe i'll post more later.......

Now Haysbert is after Kate?! *busts out laffing* I luv it!!:lol: :lol: :lol:
this fic just keeps getting better and better and better and better!!







1 more: and better!!

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!
Now Haysbert is after Kate?!

Haysbert isnt after her...he's just....oooh...i told you already...i'm not gonna say it on here cuz then everybody'll know...

Originally posted by consentida25


Haysbert isnt after her...he's just....oooh...i told you already...i'm not gonna say it on here cuz then everybody'll know...
yep, ya did.
Oh well. Haysbert going after Kate wud have been interesting,
but what does happen'll be even better.

Anyway, like i've said a 1000 times before : post more sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!

Please post some more soon or I am going to bug you about it until you do! :lol: :p :happyface :crazy: :talk: :wave:

Heres some more.....


Later that day, Kate decided to call CD into her office once again. CD entered Kate’s office and took a seat. There was a brief silence and then Kate spoke. “CD, could you come over my house tonight? I think you and I need to talk some things out.” Kate said. CD was reluctant to say yes but she did anyway. “What time?” CD said. “Eight o’clock. Is that a good time for you?” Kate asked. “Yeah.” CD nodded. “Okay.” Kate said as she nodded her head. “Thank you.” Kate said as she smiled. “Can I go now?” CD said as she pointed towards the door. “Yeah.” Kate nodded her head. CD stood up and started to walk out of Kate’s office. Kate looked up. “Oh and CD.” She said. CD turned around. “Tell Nate to come in here.” Kate said. “Sure” CD said. CD walked out of Kate’s office.

CD walked over to Nate and tapped him on the shoulder. “Nate, Captain wants you in her office.” CD said. Nate nodded. He stood up and walked to Kate’s office. He walked in and closed the door. He smiled. “Hey.” He said as he took a seat. “Hi.” Kate said. “What’s up?” Nate asked. “Well, I invited CD over tonight. And like I told you before, I want to talk with her alone. So, do you think you could find somewhere to go tonight?” Kate said. “Yeah. I’ll figure something out.” Nate said. “I’m sorry to make you leave, but I’d rather speak with her alone.” Kate explained. “Its okay. I understand.” Nate said. “Okay.” Kate said with a smile. Nate smiled back. “Thanks Hon.” Kate said. “No problem.” Nate said. “Is that all?” Nate said as he stood up. “Yeah. I guess I’ll see you later.” Kate said. “Yeah. See ya later.” Nate said as he walked out of Kate’s office.

That night, Kate awaited CD at her house. Nate had left around seven thirty. Kate wasn’t quite sure where he had gone. A knock on the door startled Kate. She walked to the door and opened it. There was CD standing at the door. “Hi CD.” Kate said as she stepped aside to let CD in. “Hi.” CD said. “Have a seat.” Kate said as she motioned towards the couch. CD took a seat on one end of the couch. Kate seated herself at the other end. Kate looked at CD. “Look, let’s get straight to the point. Why are you doing this? Are you trying to break Nate and I up?” Kate asked. “Captain, I was so jealous. I was jealous three months ago and I’m jealous now. Nate meant more to me than anyone. And to know that someone else at work is holding him every night just tears me up inside.” CD explained. Kate looked down at the ground. She felt so bad.“Oh CD. I’m sorry. I didn’t know. If I’d known, I wouldn’t have even gone through with all of this. But I didn’t know. I can’t change what happened. I care about him. I love him.” Kate explained. “I know it wasn’t your fault. I know that you can’t change what happened. I just wish that I would have let Nate know how I felt.” CD said. “I know this must be hard on you. I know that it must be hard seeing Nate and I together at work. From now on, Nate and I will keep our relationship out of our work. Okay?” Kate said. CD smiled. “Thanks.” CD said. “So, are we on good terms now? No hard feelings?” Kate asked. “No hard feelings.” CD said. Kate smiled. “Good.” Kate said. “Well, I better go. I have some things to do around the house.” CD said as she stood up. Kate stood up as well. “CD.” Kate said. CD turned around. “Thanks for coming over. I’m glad we set the record straight.” Kate said. CD smiled. "Yeah me too.” CD said. Kate opened the door. CD walked out. “Goodnight Captain.” CD said. “Goodnight.” Kate said. CD got in her car and left. Kate closed the door and sat back down on her couch. It was still early. She opened up a book and began to read.


Half an hour later another knock on Kate’s door startled her. Kate put down her book. She got up from the couch and walked to the door. She thought it was Nate. But when she opened the door she was surprised to find a teary eyed Jinny.



sooooo...watcha think?

You HAVE I repeat HAVE to go on! :D

I love it Tara, I want more! BTW, I used to have the same avatar, No Doubt is so f*ckin awesome! I have that poster on my wall too...anyway my point is you have sweet-ass taste lol.

Originally posted by Divisionbabe05
I love it Tara, I want more! BTW, I used to have the same avatar, No Doubt is so f*ckin awesome! I have that poster on my wall too...anyway my point is you have sweet-ass taste lol.

LOL...Thanks...No Doubt rocks....

Okay some of you have already read this cuz i've emailed it to u...but, here's some more...theres A LOT


“Jinny? What happened? Are you okay?” Kate asked as she reached for Jinny’s arm and pulled her into the house. Jinny stumbled into Kate’s house. Kate could tell that Jinny had been crying. Kate took Jinny’s coat and hung it up. “Here. Have a seat.” Kate said as she motioned towards the couch. Jinny sat down. Kate seated herself next to her. “Jinny, what’s the matter? What happened?” Kate asked worriedly. Jinny didn’t speak. Kate looked at the inspector that was sitting beside her. “Jinny. Talk to me. What happened?” Kate said. This was hard for Jinny. “Captain…” Jinny started in a shaky voice. “Captain, I took a drink…” Jinny started to explain. “What?” Kate said in disbelief. “I took a drink. I took a drink because my dad died tonight. He died in his hospital bed. He died holding his other daughter’s hand. Not mine. He died with her on his mind and not me. He died with her by his side and not me.” Jinny explained as she began to cry hysterically. Kate felt so bad. She didn’t know what to say or what to do. She watched as Jinny fell apart. Kate put her arm around Jinny. She did her best to comfort her. “I’m sorry Jinny. I’m sorry.” Kate said. Jinny looked at Kate through her tears. “I drank alcohol. Alcohol. I’m not supposed to do that. Its not supposed to be this way. I’m supposed to be strong enough to handle this.” Jinny said. Kate was disappointed in Jinny but she understood. “Jinny, we all fall down sometimes. You just have to get back up.” Kate said. “I’m sorry that I came to you. I just had nobody else. I would have gotten a long lecture from Magda. And my family is a wreck. I had no one else, Captain.” Jinny said. “Its okay Jinny. You’re always welcome in my home.” Kate said. Jinny looked down at the ground. “Thanks. I should go home. I don’t want to interfere with you and Nate.” Jinny said as she stood up. Kate pulled Jinny’s arm. “No. It’s okay. You’re not interfering. Nate’s not even here right now. He left so I could talk with CD. He should be back in a little while.” Kate explained. “CD? What happened with her?” Jinny asked. “I just needed to set some things straight with her.” Kate said. “Oh.” Jinny looked down at the ground. “Jinny, if you wanna talk about anything…you can always come to me. I got an open ear and an open mind, so anytime.” Kate said. “Thanks Captain. But I really should go.” Jinny said. Kate stood up from the couch. “ Do you mind if I use the phone to call a cab?” Jinny asked. “No. Go right ahead.” Kate said. Jinny picked up the phone and dialed the number.

Ten minutes later the cab was waiting for Jinny outside. Kate grabbed Jinny’s coat and gave it to her. She opened the door to let Jinny go. Just as Jinny was about to step out the door, Kate pulled Jinny back. “Jinny, whatever you do, don’t drink. Please.” Kate said. Jinny looked down. “I’ll try.” Jinny said. “I’m gonna help you get through this.” Kate said. Jinny looked at Kate. “Thanks Captain.” Jinny said. Kate smiled. “Will you be at work tomorrow?” Kate said. “I don’t know.” Jinny said. “You don’t have to come in tomorrow. Be with your family.” Kate said. “Thanks Cap.” Jinny said as she turned around and walked away. Kate closed the door and sat back down on the couch.

Kate sat there for a while. She had Jinny on her mind. She was worried about her. She was still trying to figure out why Jinny had come to her. Kate knew that she had to be there for Jinny just like she had been there for everyone else in their time of need. She had to keep her job, but with Haysbert threatening to fire her that was going to be hard.

When Nate got home, Kate had fallen asleep on the couch. He went over to her and kissed her on the forehead. Kate woke up. “Hi.” Nate said with a smile. “Hi hon.” Kate said. “I’m gonna go take a shower. Okay?” Nate said. ‘Okay.” Kate said. Nate made his way upstairs. Kate stood up from the couch. She made her way upstairs and to the bedroom. She got in bed and fell right to sleep.

The next morning Kate was up earlier than usual. She woke Nate up. “Come on sweetie. Get up.” Kate said with a smile. Nate opened his eyes. Kate kissed him. “Come on.” Kate said as she started to walk away. Nate grabbed her arm and pulled her back. He pulled her into bed. He hugged and kissed her. “I love you.” Nate said. Kate smiled. “I know.” Kate said. “Now come on. Get out of bed.” Kate said.

Later that morning Kate and Nate arrived at the division. Kate looked around. Everyone was there but Jinny. Kate knew Jinny was probably with her family but part of her was still worried. Kate rushed into her office as usual. Raina and Magda followed her. Kate looked at them. “What?” Kate said. “Haysbert called. He’ll be stopping by.” Raina said. Kate rolled her eyes. “And Jinny isn’t coming in. Family emergency or something.” Raina said. “That all?” Kate asked. “Yeah.” Raina said as she walked out of Kate’s office. “Now, Magda. What can I do for you?” Kate asked. “Captain, I was going to tell you that Jinny wasn’t here because her father died.” Magda said as she looked down at the ground. Kate acted as if she hadn’t known. “Oh my God. If you talk to her, send her my condolences.” Kate said. “Will do.” Magda said. Magda walked out of Kate’s office and closed the door behind her. Kate sat down. Once she got herself settled she picked up the phone. She dialed Jinny’s cell phone number. “Hello?” Jinny said. “Jinny. Its Kate.” Kate said. “Hi Captain.” Jinny said. “Hi. Um…how are you doing? Is everything okay?” Kate asked. “Well, its hard right now. Everyone’s trying to be strong. But it’s still hard.” Jinny explained. “Yeah. Well, I was just calling to make sure everything was okay.” Kate said. “Oh. Thanks.” Jinny said. Kate lowered her voice to a whisper. “Jinny, you didn’t drink did you?” Kate asked. Jinny didn’t answer. “Jinny?” Kate said in a soft voice. “Captain…” Jinny sighed. “Jinny, you cant let this thing control you. You have to fight it.” Kate said. “I know. I’m trying. But it’s so hard.” Jinny said as she started to cry. “Jinny, its gonna be okay. Jinny just go be with your family. They need you right now. If you want, you can come over again tonight and we can talk. I think you need someone to talk to.” Kate said. “Thanks Captain.” Jinny said in a shaky voice. “No problem” Kate said. “Bye.” Jinny said. “Bye Jin.” Kate said. She hung up the phone.

That afternoon, Charles Haysbert paid a visit to Kate. He knocked on her office door. “Come in.” Kate said. Charles opened the door and walked in. “Kate.” Charles nodded. “Charles.” Kate said. She knew what he was there for. “What can I do for you?” Kate asked. Charles took a seat. “Like I told you yesterday, another night with you or you lose your job.” Charles said point blankly. Kate looked down at the ground. She knew what she had to do. She loved her job and she loved Nate. She needed to be there for everyone, especially Jinny. Kate sighed. “When?” Kate asked reluctantly. “Tonight.” Charles said. Kate shook her head. “Tonight’s not good.” Kate said. “Tomorrow night then?” Charles asked. Kate put her hand on her head. “Fine.” Kate said through her teeth. She really didn’t want to do it. But how else was she going to keep her job? “Good.” Charles said. He stood up and walked out of Kate’s office. Kate slouched in her chair. She couldn’t believe that she agreed to this again. What was she going to tell Nate? How was she going to handle this? Kate knew that if she lost her job, that she wouldn’t be able to work with Jinny closely and help her.

Kate spent most of the day worrying about Jinny. She was in her own little world. She didn’t even notice that Nate had come into her office. “Kate.” Nate said. Kate snapped back into reality and looked up at Nate. “Hi.” Kate said in a low voice. Nate could tell that something was up. “What’s wrong?” Nate. “Close the door and sit down.” Kate said. Nate closed the door and took a seat across from Kate. “What’s the matter?” Nate asked. “Honey, Haysbert just came in here asking for another night with me.” Kate started to explain. “What’d you say?” Nate asked. Kate looked down at the ground. That’s when Nate knew. “I said yes.” Kate said. “But why?” Nate asked as he stood up. “Nate, sweetie, you don’t understand. I have to keep my job. I need to be here.” Kate said. “I know you have to keep your job. I know you love your job but you didn’t have to go this far. I thought you cared about me.” Nate said. Kate stood up and walked over to Nate. She rubbed his back. “Honey, I care about you very much. I love you. You know how much I love you. But I have to keep my job. I have to figure out a way to get out of this. I’ll go to his house but I won’t do anything with him.” Kate said. “Why don’t you just file a sexual harassment report on him?” Nate asked. “I could do that but I doubt that he’ll be penalized for it. He is the D.C. He’s authority.” Kate said. “Damn.” Nate said in disappointment. “Look, you’d better get back to work. We’ll talk about this later okay?” Kate said. “Okay.” Nate said as he leaned in for a kiss. “Uh-uh. I promised CD.” Kate said. “Oh okay.” Nate said. “See you later.” Kate said. “Bye.” Nate said.

As Nate left Kate’s office, Magda entered. She closed the door. Kate looked up. “Hi Captain.” Magda said. “Hi Magda. What can I do for you?” Kate said. Magda took a seat and looked at her Captain. “How are things going? Is everything okay?” Magda asked. “Well, I’m gong to do my best to fix everything here. If all this continues, Nate and I aren’t gonna be able to stay together. It would be too difficult for us.” Kate explained. “Is this all because of CD?” Magda asked. “Its not all because of CD. Charles Haysbert has something to do with it as well.” Kate said. “Haysbert? Why? What’s he doing?” Magda asked. Kate sighed. She didn’t want to say anything but Magda already asked and she couldn’t think of another lie to tell. “Well, he’s been threatening my job.” Kate said. “How? On what conditions?” Magda asked. Kate looked down at the ground. She thought for a moment. Then she looked up at Magda once again. “He asks me to do sexual favors for him. And if I don’t, I’ll be fired.” Kate said. Magda grew angry. “What!?!” Magda exclaimed. Magda shook her head. “Captain, you haven’t been doing these favors, have you?” Magda asked. Kate looked down at the ground in guilt once more. Magda stood up. “Captain! I can’t believe you. How could you?” Magda asked. “Magda, calm down. Please.” Kate shook her head. “Captain, what the hell has gotten into you? You are NOT the respectable woman you used to be.” Magda said. “Magda, please. Just calm down. Sit down. Talk to me.” Kate said. Magda reluctantly took a seat. “Captain, you…you.” Magda managed to say through her anger. “Magda, I didn’t do it because I wanted to. Charles was threatening my job. I couldn’t let him fire me.” Kate explained. “Captain, I would have rather gotten fired than sleep with a man that I couldn’t stand to be in the same room with.” Magda said. “It only happened once. He asked me again. I have to do this.” Kate said. “Captain, listen to yourself. You’re sleeping with a man you don’t even care about just to keep your job.” Magda said. Magda you don’t understand. I need to be here.” Kate said. Magda looked at her. “I need to be here.” Kate said softly. Magda didn’t quite understand what the Captain was getting at. “Yeah I know. This is your job, of course you need to be here.” Magda said. “No, you don’t understand.” Kate said. Magda stood up once again. “What? What don’t I understand?” Magda asked. “I can’t tell you. I just need to be here.” Kate said. “Alright then. I’ll just go. But Captain, don’t sleep with him if you don’t care about him. Don’t do it.” Magda said as she made her way out of Kate’s office. Kate leaned back in her chair. She knew Magda was right.

As Nate sat as his desk trying to review the case with CD, he worried. He worried about Kate. He worried about Haysbert. It was bothering him. He needed to let out his frustrations, but he wasn’t sure how. CD noticed that there was something wrong with Nate. “Nate, is everything okay?” CD asked. Nate shook his head. “Everything is fine.” Nate said. “Are you sure?” CD asked. “CD, everything is fine.” Nate said in reassurance. CD backed off. “Okay.” She said.

That night at Kate’s house, after Kate and Nate had gotten settled, they sat down on the couch. Kate needed to talk with him. She wanted to let him know how she felt about everything that had been going on. Nate wanted to let some things out as well. “Nate, look, I know this is hard. I know you must be hurt. I’m sorry that this is happening.” Kate started to explain.

So many things had been interfering in Kate and Nate’s relationship. Only a few of those things were they able to get out of the way. But every time a new door opened for them, another one closed. They cared for one another, but everything got in their way.

“I don’t want this to break us. I need your support. I don’t care about Charles. If I did, I would have told you a long time ago. I just need to keep my job. And tomorrow night when I go over there, I’m gonna have a talk with him. He won’t manipulate me like that. I won’t let him.” She said. “Kate, this has been bothering me. I feel like I’m losing you. You know? I care about you.” Nate said. “Honey, I care about you too. You know that. I’m gonna get us out of this. I don’t know how, but I will.” Kate said. They both leaned in and a kiss took place.

That kiss was interrupted by a knock on the door. They pulled away from each other. Kate then remembered that she asked Jinny over. “That must be Jinny.” Kate said. “Jinny?” Nate asked. “Yeah.” Kate said as she stood up. She made her way to the door. Nate was right behind her. Kate opened the door. There stood Jinny. “Hi.” Kate said. She could already smell the alcohol. “Hey.” Nate greeted Jinny as well. Jinny looked at him, then back at Kate. “If this is a bad time, I could…uh leave.” Jinny said. “Jin. It’s okay. I asked you over.” Kate said. “I could leave if you want.” Nate suggested. Kate looked up at him. She nodded. “I’ll go change and then I’ll be out of your way.” Nate said. “Thanks baby.” Kate said as she winked at him. Nate made his way upstairs to change. Kate was still standing there face to face with Jinny. “Come in.” Kate said as she stepped aside to let Jinny in. Jinny walked in. “Look, I’m sorry. I just need to talk to somebody.” Jinny said. “It’s okay. Stop apologizing.” Kate said. “Here. Let me take your coat.” Kate said. Jinny took off her coat. Kate took it and hung it up. “Thanks.” Jinny said. “No problem.” Kate said. “Um, do you want some coffee or something?” Kate asked. “Sure.” Jinny said. They made their way into the kitchen. Jinny took a seat at the kitchen table. Kate began to prepare the coffee. Nate walked into the kitchen. He was already dressed and ready to go. “I’m gonna go now.” Nate said. “Okay. Where are you going?” Kate asked. “I was thinking about going to get something to eat or something.” Nate explained. “Okay. Just keep your cell phone on so I can call you if I need to.” Kate said. “Okay.” Nate said as he leaned in for a kiss. Kate kissed him. “Bye.” Kate said. “Bye. Bye Jinny.” Nate said as he left the kitchen.

Ten Minutes later Kate had finished preparing the coffee. She handed a mug to Jinny.
Kate sat down next to Jinny at the table. “Jinny, I know you were drinking. I smell the alcohol.” Kate said. Jinny looked down at the ground in guilt. “How am I gonna get through this?” Jinny said. “Jin, I’m gonna help you get through this. You came to me. You came to me for help and I’m gonna help you.” Kate said. “Captain…” Jinny started to say. “Kate. Call me Kate.” Kate said. “Um…Kate.” Jinny laughed as she said it. “Kate, since my dad passed away, none of us can afford to keep the house. I can’t afford an apartment…” Jinny’s voice trailed off. Kate looked at her. She knew what she was getting at. “You know what? I shouldn’t have come to you. I’m sorry.” Jinny said as she stood up. Kate shook her head. “Jinny. Sit down. It’s okay.” Kate said. Jinny looked at Kate gratefully. Jinny sat down. “I don’t know how to ask you this. I just have nowhere else to go.” Jinny said. Kate felt bad for Jinny. She knew that her and Jinny hadn’t always gotten along. And she wasn’t sure how this was going to work out. She just hoped that it wouldn’t interfere with her and Nate. Kate looked at Jinny. “Jinny, you’re always welcome here. I’ve told you that before. If you’re asking for a place to stay until you get back on your feet…” Kate’s voice trailed off. Kate was still reluctant. “Jinny, you can stay here. But you can’t drink. That’s all I ask. Just don’t drink.” Kate said. Jinny got teary eyed. “Thanks Cap.” Jinny said gratefully. Kate smiled and put her hand on Jinny’s arm. “No problem.” Kate said. “But Jin, just give me a day. So I can talk to Nate about it.” Kate said. “Okay.” Jinny said. Kate smiled. “Captain…” Jinny said. “Kate. It’s Kate.” Kate said. Jinny laughed once again. “Look, I really appreciate this. You didn’t have to do this. I mean I could go somewhere else.” Jinny said. “Jinny, no. You’re staying here with us. And that’s that. Okay?” Kate said. “Thanks.” Jinny said.

There was a long silence. Jinny and Kate occasionally glanced at each other. Neither of them said a word. Kate decided to end the silence. “So, when’s the funeral?” Kate asked. “Saturday.” Jinny answered. “Oh I see.” Kate said. Are you coming in to work tomorrow or…?” Kate asked. “I should be in tomorrow.” Jinny said. “Good.” Kate said. “Look, I uh, better go.” Jinny said as she stood up. “Do you need a ride?” Kate asked. “No. I can call a cab.” Jinny said. “You sure?” Kate asked. Jinny nodded. “Yeah.” She said. “Okay.” Kate said. Kate stood up and got the phone. She handed it to Jinny. Jinny took the phone and dialed the number.

A few minutes later the cab had arrived. Kate took Jinny’s coat from the closet and gave it to her. “I guess I’ll see you tomorrow.” Kate said. “Yeah.” Jinny said. “Alright.” Kate nodded. “Thanks a lot.” Jinny said. “No problem Jinny.” Kate said with a smile. Kate looked at jinny who was standing in front of her. Kate extended her arms and hugged Jinny. Jinny tentatively hugged Kate back. “I’m glad you’re letting me help you.” Kate said. After a minute or so, they parted from one another. “Thanks again.” Jinny said. “Anytime.” Kate said. “Bye” Jinny said as she began to walk away. “Bye Jin.” Kate said. She closed the door.

Kate walked to the couch and sat down. She hoped this would work out. Kate tried to figure out how she was going to tell Nate that Jinny was moving in.

When Nate came back home, he found Kate sitting quietly on the couch. He walked over and sat next to her. “Hey.” He said with a smile. “Hi honey.” Kate said. “How’d everything go?” Nate asked. “Fine. Look, I have to talk to you about Jinny.” Kate said. Nate was confused but he decided to listen to what Kate had to say. “Go ahead.” Nate said. “Jinny’s father died. She has no place to stay. And she’s started drinking again because of all of this. I offered to help her. And tonight she asked if she could stay here just until she gets back on her feet. I said she could stay with us just as long as she doesn’t drink. Is that okay with you, hon?” Kate said. “That’s fine with me. I mean, this is your house. You can have whoever you want here.” Nate said. Kate smiled. She quickly kissed him. “Thanks sweetie.” Kate said. “For what?” Nate asked. “For being you. You make everything so easy.” Kate said with a smile. “So when is she moving in?” Nate asked. “Tomorrow…I think.” Kate said. “Oh.” Nate said. “Look, I’m really tired. So why don’t we just head upstairs and go to sleep?” Kate said. “Sounds good to me.” Nate said.

Kate and Nate headed upstairs hand in hand. When they reached their room, they got in bed. They kissed each other goodnight and went to sleep.

The next morning, Kate and Nate walked into the division as usual. Kate rushed into her office and on her way there she tapped Jinny on the shoulder. Jinny stood up and followed kate into her office. “Close the door.” Kate said. Jinny closed the door behind her. “Hey. What’s up?” Jinny said. “I just wanted to let you know that I spoke with Nate last night and everything’s okay with him.” Kate explained. “That’s good I guess.” Jinny said. “So, are you coming tonight or…?” Kate asked. “Yeah, tonight if that’s okay with you.” Jinny said. “That’s fine, but I wont be there right away. I have something to do.” Kate explained. “Okay.” Jinny said. There was silence for a minute or so. “That all Cap?” Jinny asked. “Yeah.” Kate said. “I’ll uh…see you later.” Jinny said. “Yeah.” Kate said. Jinny walked out of Kate’s office and to her desk.

Magda was suspicious. She didn’t know what to make of Jinny’s little meeting with the Captain. “What was that all about?” Magda asked. Jinny wasn’t sure what to say but she said whatever came to mind first. “She wanted to know if everything was alright with my family and everything.” Jinny said. “Oh.” Magda brushed it off and proceeded with her work.

The day had been pretty calm. No disturbances, no problems, nothing. That was until Charles Haysbert stopped by the division to visit with Kate. Nate watched as he walked in. Nate grew angry. Charles politely smiled at Inspector Basso as he walked passed him to Kate’s office. Nate wanted to kill him. Charles knocked on Kate’s door. “Come in.” Kate said. Charles opened the door and walked in. “Kate.” Charles nodded as usual. “Charles.” Kate was not amused by his presence. Charles closed the door. He sat down. “What?” Kate asked. Charles didn’t hesitate to speak. “So are we still on for tonight?” Charles asked. Kate sighed. “Yes.” Kate said. “Good.” Charles said as he stood up. “Charles, why are you doing this to me?” Kate asked. Charles refused to give her an answer. He just walked out of her office. Kate sighed and put her head in her hands.

Just then Nate came into Kate’s office. He closed the door. He walked over to where she was sitting and knelt down beside her chair. “Kate, what’d he say to you?” Nate asked. By this time tears were streaming down Kate’s cheeks. “Honey, I’m sorry about all of this. I have to go to his house tonight. I’m gonna try to talk to him about this.” Kate said. Nate put his hand on Kate’s arm. “Kate, do what ever you have to do to get him off your back. Just don’t sleep with him. Please.” Nate said. Kate looked at him. She hugged and kissed him. “I won’t sleep with him.” Kate said. Nate let out a sigh of relief. “Thank you.” He said. They continued to kiss. It grew intense. Then Kate pulled way. They looked at each other. “We both have work to do.” Kate said in a soft voice. Nate smiled. “Yeah.” Nate said. Nate stood up and walked out of Kate’s office.

Kate tried to get back to work but it was no use. She decided to take the rest of the day off and go home. She needed to think. She stood up from her chair, grabbed her coat and bag and walked out of her office. “Guys, I’m gonna take the rest of the day off. I need to go home and rest.” Kate said. Magda laughed. “What? Is Nate wearing you out?” She said. Kate chuckled. “No man can wear me out.” Kate said with a grin. Everyone laughed. “No, I’m just kidding. I just need some time to myself. I need to think about some things.” Kate explained. “Cap, you okay?” Jinny asked. “Yeah. I’m okay.” Kate said. Kate looked at Nate. “Nate, I’ll see you later.” Kate said. Nate stood up and walked to Kate. He kissed her. “Okay.” Nate said as he sat back down. Kate walked out of the division.

Nate slouched in his seat. “What’s the matter Nate?” CD asked. Nate looked at CD. “Nothing.” Nate answered. Jinny wasn’t feeling well and she was tired. She decided to leave as well. “Guys, I’m not feeling well. I think I’m just gonna go home.” Jinny said. “You too?” CD asked. Jinny nodded. “Jinny are you alright?” Magda asked. “Yeah Mag. I’m fine. I just need to be home.” Jinny said. “Okay. I’ll talk to you later then.” Magda said. “Okay. Bye guys.” Jinny said as she walked out of the division.

When Jinny got downstairs, she called a cab. The cab took her to her dad’s house where she got all of her stuff and said one last goodbye to the house. In tears, Jinny made her way back to the cab and got in. The cab took her to Kate’s house. Jinny paid the cab driver, got all her stuff and headed to Kate’s front door. She knocked on the door.

Kate had been resting on her couch. When she heard the knock on the door she stood up and walked to the door. She opened. “Jinny. What are you doing here so early?” Kate asked. “I uh…wasn’t feeling well. And I’m kinda tired.” Jinny explained as she made her way into the house. Kate closed the door. Jinny put down her huge bag. “Where am I staying?” Jinny asked. Kate started up the stairs. “Come on. I’ll show you.” Kate said. Kate led Jinny to the spare bedroom, which was next to Nate and Kate’s bedroom. “Here.” Kate said. “Thanks.” Jinny said as she lugged her bag into the room. Jinny started unpacking. “Do you need any help?” Kate asked. “Uh sure.” Jinny said. Kate walked into the room and helped Jinny unpack. As she unpacked, Kate stumbled upon a rather large bottle of Vodka. Kate looked disappointedly at Jinny. With the bottle in hand, Kate walked over to Jinny. “Jinny.” Kate said as she shook her head. Jinny looked at the bottle and then at Kate. Kate sat down on the bed. “Jinny, sit down.” Kate said. Jinny sat down on the bed next to Kate. “Jinny, you can’t do this.” Kate said. A tear rolled down Jinny’s cheek. “I know.” Jinny said. Kate put her hand on Jinny’s arm. “Jinny, talk to me. What’s bothering you?” Kate said. Jinny looked down at the ground. “Captain, I just miss him. That’s all. My dad, he used to drink. I drink. I feel like it’s the best way to remember him.” Jinny said. Jinny began to cry more hysterically now. Kate patted Jinny’s back. “Jinny, I know it’s hard. But hurting yourself isn’t the best way to remember someone.” Kate said as she stood up. Kate walked over to the bag she had been unpacking. She took out an envelope. “Jinny, look at this. You have all these pictures of your father. This is the way to remember him.” Kate said as she walked back over to Jinny. She handed the envelope to Jinny.

Jinny sat on the bed with the envelope in her hand. Kate sat back down. Jinny took the pictures out. Her and Kate began to look at them.


okay..there ya go....

*even tho ive aready read this...;)*

THIS IS SOOOO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bonnay da gangsta bunnay and her hat want some more too....

Originally posted by Blair n' Jo Rock
[Bbonnay da gangsta bunnay and her hat want some more too.... [/B]

Bonnay's keepin' it GANGSTA.....lol

I'm gonna post more later tho...for u and bonnay da gangsta bunnay....

*whispers to kerray* It's gettin' hot in herre...lol

WOW! I want more posts like that! LOL! The longer the better! MORE Please! Thank you!

wow, this is great, So good , so much agnst . I LOVE it. Can you please post more.

I was sick today, aand you know what would make me feel a whole lot better? If you posted some more. Please! :)

Okay....here we go...sorry its been so long....
oh yeah....theres gonna be more explicitness in this part....bwahaha


A few hours later, Nate had gotten home from work and Kate was ready to go to Haysbert’’s house. Just as Kate was about to walk out the door, Nate pulled her back. He kissed her. “I love you.” Nate said. Kate looked up at him. “I love you too.” Kate said. Just then Jinny made her way down the stairs. “Cap, where ya goin’? Jinny asked. “I have to meet someone.” Kate said. “Oh. Well see ya later.” Jinny said. “Yeah. Bye.” Kate said as she walked out the door. “I’m gonna go grab something to eat. Wanna come?” Nate asked Jinny. “Sure.” Jinny said.

A half an hour later, Kate had arrived at Haysbert’s house. Kate parked the car by the curb and got out of the car. She walked up to the house and rang the doorbell. Charles opened the door and let her in. Kate walked into the house. She had no intention of sleeping with Charles. She just wanted to talk. Charles led her to the living room. Kate took a seat on the couch. Charles sat next to her.

“Look, Charles, I came here tonight to talk to you. I don’t want to sleep with you. I don’t want any of that. I just want to talk with you.” Kate explained. “Okay. What do you want to talk to me about?” Charles said. “Well, I just want to know why you’re putting me through all of this.” Kate said. “You’re the one who offered in the first place.” Charles said. “Yes that’s true, but that doesn’t mean you had to accept the offer.” Kate said. Charles looked down at the ground. “Kate, I’m sorry. I don’t know what I was thinking.” Charles said. “Charles, just don’t let it happen again. Don’t accept anything that you don’t really want. I shouldn’t have even offered.” Kate said. “You’re right. I shouldn’t have accepted. I never really wanted you. I wanted it.” Charles said. Kate nodded. “I know what you wanted. That was very low and disgusting. For you to use me as a sex object was completely inappropriate. And for me to allow you to use me was inappropriate as well.” Kate said. Charles looked down at the ground in guilt. He didn’t say anything.

Charles stood up. “Do you want a cup of coffee?” Charles asked. Kate stood up. “Uh…sure.” Kate said. Kate didn’t really want coffee but she figured she’d be courteous and have some anyway. Charles headed to his kitchen. Kate followed. Charles had coffee already prepared. He handed Kate a mug. Kate took it. “Thank you.” Kate said. Kate took a few sips of the coffee. She put the mug down. “I really should go.” Kate said. “Um…okay.” Charles said. Kate started heading to the door. Charles followed her. “Um…I’ll see you tomorrow I guess.” Charles said. “I guess so.” Kate said as she walked out the door.

Kate arrived home a half an hour later. Jinny and Nate had ordered pizza instead of going out to eat. They were sitting on the couch eating when Kate came in. “Hey guys.” Kate said. “Hi Cap.” Jinny said with a full mouth. Nate stood up. “Hi. How’d it go?” Nate said. Kate nodded. “Good.” She said. Nate kissed her on the cheek. Kate took off her coat and sat on the couch next to Jinny. Kate nudged Jinny with her elbow. “How’s it going?” Kate asked. Jinny nodded. “Okay. Well, I’m gonna go get changed.” Kate said as she stood up from the couch. She made her way up the stairs and to the bedroom and changed.

“So how’s it going with you and Cap?” Jinny asked Nate. “It’s going good.” Nate said. “You two getting’ along well and everything?” Jinny asked. Nate nodded his head. “Yeah.” He said. Kate walked down the stairs and to the couch. She took a seat in between Nate and Jinny. “So, how was your night?” Kate asked. “Good.” Jinny said. “Yeah.” Nate agreed. “Pizza, huh?” Kate said as she grabbed a slice from the box. She took a bite. “Mmm. Good.” Kate said with a smile. Kate, Jinny, and Nate all finished eating and decided to watch some T.V.

Jinny sat there and looked at Kate and Nate. She thought about how weird the situation was. She never thought she’d be living with her captain or Nate. Jinny really appreciated the favor the Captain was doing for her. She never thought Kate would do her such a favor. “Captain.” Jinny said. Kate looked at her. “Yeah?” Kate said turning her attention from the T.V to Jinny. Jinny sat up in her seat. “Look, I know I’ve told you this before, but I want you to know that I really appreciate you letting me stay here. It means a lot to me.” Jinny said. Kate stared at Jinny. “You’re welcome.” She said. “And I’m sorry if I’m interfering with your lives. I feel really bad about that.” Jinny further explained. Kate shook her head. “Jinny, don’t worry about it. You’re not interfering. I’m glad you’re staying with us.” Kate said. Nate, however, felt differently on the issue, but he decided not say anything.

Jinny stood up from her seat. “Well, it’s getting late. I’m gonna hit the sack.” Jinny said as she made her way to the stairs. “Yeah, it is getting late. We should go to bed too.” Kate said to Nate. Nate nodded and stood up from the couch. He extended his hand and Kate grabbed it. He pulled her up from the couch. Hand in hand and clinging to one another, Kate and Nate followed Jinny up the stairs. Before Kate went to her room, she followed Jinny into hers. “Hey Jin.” Kate said as she sat down on the bed. “Hi Cap.” Jinny said. Kate shook her head. “It’s Kate. Remember?” Kate said with a smile. Jinny smiled. “Kate.” She said. “I just wanted to tell you that I’m really glad that you’re letting me help you. I’m glad you came to me.” Kate said. Jinny looked down at the ground. “I needed someone. I knew I could go to Magda. I could go to Magda for anything, but this time it was different. I don’t know why it was different, but for some reason it was. And I came to you for help.” Jinny said. “Well, there’s a reason for everything. We’ll see what happens. Only time will tell.” Kate said. There was a brief silence. Kate got up from the bed. “Well, I’m gonna get to bed. I’ll see you tomorrow.” Kate said. “Okay. Goodnight.” Jinny said. “Goodnight Jin.” Kate said as she walked out of Jinny’s room and next door to her own.

Nate was already in bed when Kate walked in. Kate closed the door and walked to the bed. “Hey.” Kate said with a smile as she crawled into bed. “Hey.” Nate said. Kate kissed him. “How are you?” She asked. “I’m okay.” Nate said. “That’s good.” Kate nodded. “So, what happened at Haysbert’s house?” Nate asked. “Well, I spoke with him about this whole thing. He apologized.” Kate explained. Nate nodded. “You didn’t…” Nate said. “No. We didn’t do anything. All I did was speak with him. That’s all I wanted to do.” Kate said. Nate smiled. He kissed Kate. The kiss was long and intense. It was another one of those kisses that never seemed to end. Nate’s lips made their way down Kate’s neck. Kate closed her eyes. Nate started to remove articles of Kate’s clothing. Then Kate stopped him. “What?” He asked. “We can’t. Jinny’s here now.” Kate said. “So, we’ll just be quiet.” Nate said with a smirk. Kate smiled. “Okay…” She said. Nate began kissing her again. Once more his lips made their way down her neck. And once again Kate closed her eyes. She stopped him again as well. “What?” Nate said. Kate sat up. She took Nate’s shirt off and threw it to the side. She smiled at him. He smiled back at her. Nate began to kiss her. They reclined into the bed. Both of them were removing each other’s clothes. Kate placed her hand on the back of Nate’s neck and pulled him down, bringing his body as close to hers as possible. Kate closed her eyes. Every moment seemed to go by so slowly. Every movement of their bodies seemed to make the situation more intense.

Meanwhile, Jinny could not fall asleep. Not with all the commotion going on in Kate and Nate’s room. She could hear them. And she could hear their bed banging against the wall. It was not a pleasant experience hearing her Captain and fellow inspector. ‘Geez. You’d think they’d have a little respect for other’s in the house.’ Jinny thought to herself. She just wanted to leave, but she couldn’t. She had no place to go. And she knew the Captain would be upset if she left.

Kate and Nate were really going at it. Kate was finding it hard to keep herself quiet. She dug her nails into Nate’s back. Nate flinched. But Kate made it up to him with a kiss. She wrapped her legs around his body. She did everything possible to keep herself from being too loud. But it was no use. Kate didn’t care anymore. She finally let it out. She screamed. Kate couldn’t help it. Nate looked at her. He loved to hear the sound. And as usual, the more intense the situation was, the louder Kate was. And Nate certainly knew how to make the situation more intense.

Jinny had had it up to the neck with the two of them. She couldn’t take it anymore. She got up. She grabbed a pillow and a blanket and made her way downstairs. She fell asleep on the couch.

The next morning, Kate made her way downstairs. She found Jinny sleeping on the couch. She laughed to herself. Kate walked over to Jinny and tapped her arm. “Jinny. Wake up.” Kate said. Jinny opened one eye and looked at Kate. “What?” Jinny asked. “Wake up.” Kate said. Jinny sighed and stood up. Nate made his way down the stairs. He walked over to Kate and put his hand on her hip. He kissed her cheek. “Hey beautiful.” Nate said to Kate. Kate smiled. “My Italian Stallion.” She said. Kate hadn’t called him that in a long time. Nate was happy to hear her say it. Jinny rolled her eyes. “You know, I didn’t get much sleep last night because of the two of you.” Jinny said. “Why? What’d we do?” Kate asked innocently. Jinny’s eyes narrowed. “You know what? Never mind.” Jinny said. Jinny walked off into the kitchen. Kate and Nate looked at each other. Kate chuckled. She kissed him.

tell me wut ya think.....

I loved it I thought it was so funny. I can say i never imaged kate as a screamer which made it even funnier. I did really like the fact that Kate finally stood up for herself . finally I am dieing to know how the whole jinny liveing with them is going to effect the dynamic.

Goodness you are good at this! More soon please! Thank you!

that was awsomeness taray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait for more :)

More pretty please! I am so bored right now, so if you post more I won't be bored. :lol: TGIF everyone! :cool:

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OMGsh!!! That was absolutely hilarious!!!


some advice for nate and Kate:

Give Jinny a break! I mean my gosh, i don't think She doesn't even really wanna be there,but she is, AND she has 2 listen 2 you guys scream and moan all night long!AND on her 1st night there! Sheesh!

Okay, i'm done talking 2 fictional characters now:D




oh,yeah, just let me add a couple more of these:

:rotflmao: :rotflmao: .........:rotflmao: :rotflmao:


k,now I'm done

Goodness Emma! :lol: Anyway, post some more sooN! Pretty please!

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!

AND she has 2 listen 2 you guys scream and moan all night long!


hey....thats all Bonnie does in her movie roles anyway...*mumbles* such a freak :joke:

Wow that was good! And HOT!!! I needed some :cool: shades to keep reading. LOL I don't know if Jinny will be able to stand another night like that one! LOL

Okay.....well...heres moooorrrrre:


Kate and Nate walked into the kitchen clinging to each other. Jinny was preparing coffee for everyone. Kate and Nate sat down at the kitchen table. “So, Jinny…” Kate said. “So, Kate…” Jinny said mockingly. Kate laughed. A few minutes passed in silence. Jinny had finished preparing the coffee. She handed one mug to Kate and one mug to Nate. With her own mug in hand, she took a seat at the table with them. They sat in silence. Jinny wasn’t exactly sure what to say to them. Kate wasn’t sure how to address the events that occurred the night before. She knew she had to apologized but she wasn’t sure how. Nate didn’t feel like talking. He just sat back and watched. Kate looked down into her cup of brown coffee. “Look, uh, Jinny, I just wanted to um…apologize for last night.” Kate started. She put her hand on Nate’s. “We um…it was completely inappropriate. We’ll try not to let it happen again.” Kate said. Nate looked at Kate. He wanted to say something, but he let it pass. Nate didn’t want Jinny’s presence interfering with their relationship, especially the intimate part of their relationship. “Um yeah.” Was all Jinny managed to spit out. Nate stood up and started to walk out of the kitchen. Kate grabbed his arm and looked at him questioningly. “Where you going hon?” Kate asked. Nate thought for a moment. “I’m gonna start getting ready for work.” Nate said. Kate nodded. “Okay.” She said.

Kate and Jinny finished their coffee in silence for the most part. Every few minutes someone would comment on something. “Jinny, how are you feeling?” Kate asked. Jinny nodded. “I…I’m okay. I’m coping, I guess.” Jinny said. Kate put her hand on Jinny’s arm. “Jinny, feel free to talk to me if you need to.” Kate said. “I will. Thanks.” Jinny said with a smile. Kate stood up. She rubbed her belly. “Coffee was good.” Kate said with a smile. Jinny smiled. “Well I’m gonna go start getting ready for work as well.” Kate said. Jinny nodded. “Okay.” She said.

Kate made her way upstairs. She went into the bathroom where Nate was taking a shower. Kate stripped out of her clothes and got into the shower. Nate smiled. “Hi.” Kate said. Hey” Nate said. Nate looked up and down at Kate. He raised his eyebrow. Kate knew what he was getting at. She moved closer to him. He kissed her. They kissed for a while. Finally, Nate grabbed her hands and pinned her against the wall. He kissed her lips and neck. Kate released her hands from Nate’s grip and put her arms around him. She brought him closer to her. Kate found herself beginning to breathe more heavily as minutes passed. Nate touched her like she had never been touched before. She finally felt what he had felt when she touched him, when she showed him affection. Now she knew what he meant.

Jinny made her way upstairs to her room passing the bathroom. Once again, she heard them. “What the hell, man? This is ridiculous.” Jinny said aloud. Jinny threw her hands up in the air and walked to her room.

Ten minutes later Kate and Nate walked out of the bathroom in their towels. Kate was still out of breath. Together, they made their way to their room and shut the door. They both stripped of their towels. They picked out one another’s clothing and dressed each other. It was the closest they’d been in a while. It was reminiscent of their first few days as a couple. They were happy and content.

The time came when Jinny had to take a shower. She stepped into the shower and thought about what had taken place in it. “Oh God.” She said to herself. Jinny took the quickest shower she had ever taken in her life. In her towel, she quickly ran to her room to get dressed.

Kate and Nate were ready to go. They were just waiting for Jinny. Jinny finished getting dressed and ran down the stairs. Kate and Nate were waiting by the door. “Ahh, long time no see Exstead.” Kate said with a smirk. Jinny rolled her eyes. “Come on. We’re late.” Kate rushed Jinny.

Arriving at the division twenty minutes late wasn’t the best way to start their day. With all three of them entering the division at the same time would raise some eyebrows. Especially Magda’s. Everyone knew about Kate and Nate, but Jinny too? Magda watched as they all walked in. She kept her eye on Jinny the most. Jinny seemed uncomfortable. But she noticed other things between Jinny and the Captain. As Kate passed by, she rubbed Jinny’s arm and smiled at her. Magda was curious as to what was going on. “Hi Jin.” Magda said. Jinny turned around. “Oh, hi Mag.” Jinny said. “I called you last night. You didn’t answer the phone.” Magda explained. “Well, to tell you the truth Mag, I wasn’t home last night. I won’t be home anymore.” Jinny explained. Nate turned around hearing what Jinny was saying. “Why…why not?” Magda asked. “We’re selling the house because of my dad and everything. None of us can afford to keep it.” Jinny explained. Magda’s eyes narrowed. “So where are you staying?” Magda asked. Jinny looked from Magda to Nate to the floor and then to Magda again. “Well, I uh…I’m staying with…um….Nate and the Captain.” Jinny explained. Magda’s jaw dropped. “You’re staying with the Captain?” Magda asked. Jinny nodded. “Yeah.” Jinny said. Magda was kind of hurt. “Jinny, you could’ve come to me if you needed a place to stay.” Magda said. “I know, but I didn’t want to bother you and Gabe and Ben.” Jinny said. “But you wanted to come bother us.” Nate mumbled as he turned around. Jinny heard Nate mumble something but she wasn’t sure what he said. So she just brushed it off.

Magda stood up. “Jin, can we talk?” Magda asked. “Um…sure.” Jinny said. Magda made her way to the conference room. Jinny followed. They walked in and Magda closed the door. Magda stared at Jinny. “Jinny, what’s going on?” Magda asked. Jinny looked down at the floor. She knew she had to tell Magda what was really going on. “Mag…” Jinny sighed. “Magda, I couldn’t afford to pay for my father’s house. I can’t even afford an apartment. And it’s been hard, you know? I don’t have him around anymore. He was my dad. And when he died…” Jinny paused. She tried to fight back the tears. “When he died, he died holding her hand. He died with her next to him. I wasn’t with him Mag. I wasn’t with him.” Jinny explained through her tears. “Jinny, who’s ‘her’?” Magda asked. Jinny looked at Magda. “Ronnie. My dad’s other daughter.” Jinny said in a shaky voice. Magda extended her arms and embraced Jinny. Magda wasn’t sure what else to do. This was her best friend. She had to comfort her. “Mag, I started drinking again.” Jinny said. Magda pulled out of the embrace and looked at Jinny. “What?” Magda said. Jinny sighed. “I started drinking again. When my dad died, I didn’t know what to do. I didn’t know how to cope, Mag.” Jinny explained. Magda was really disappointed. “Jinny, how could you do that? How could you ruin everything you’ve worked for?” Magda said. “See Mag, that’s just it. Instead of being supportive enough to say ‘I’ll help you’, you start lecturing.” Jinny said. Magda looked down at the ground. “I’m sorry.” Magda said. “That’s why I went to Captain. She’s got an open mind. She’s gonna help me through this. And I hope you’ll help me as well.” Jinny said.




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MORE SOON! :D

this is....AMAZING!!!!!!!! i can NOT waiiit for more :D

That was awsome! Post more ASAP!!!

Please post some more tonight! I can not wait to see what is going to happen next! :D

thanks for the compliments guys.......here's a lil more....

Magda listened as Jinny explained how she felt. She didn’t realize how hard she was being on Jinny. “Jinny, is it that hard to be my friend?” Magda asked. Jinny shook her head. “Mag, its just that I wish you’d be a little more supportive sometimes. When I need you, I want you to be there. And when you need me, I’ll be here for you. This is a mutual thing, isn’t it? We’re friends. That’s what friendship is all about.” Jinny explained. Magda started to get teary eyed. “Jinny, I’m sorry I was hard on you. As your friend, I want the best for you. I want you to be safe and happy.” Magda explained. “Thanks Mag.” Jinny said just as Kate walked in. “Is everything okay in here?” Kate asked as she saw her two teary eyed inspectors. “Yeah.” Jinny nodded. “Uh, Jinny, can I talk to you for a second?” Kate. “Um, sure.” Jinny answered. Magda took the hint, walked out of the conference room and closed the door.

“What’s up?” Jinny asked. “Did you tell Magda what happened?” Kate asked. Jinny nodded. “Yeah, I did.” She said. Kate nodded. “How’d that go?” Kate asked. “She was kind of disappointed at the fact that I started drinking again, but I asked her to help me. I mean, Captain, I know I need help. I just need a support system.” Jinny said. Kate nodded. “I know. I know.” Kate said as she patted Jinny’s back. Tears streamed down Jinny’s cheeks. Kate slightly hugged Jinny. “Okay. Come on, don’t do that. Don’t cry. It’s gonna be alright.” Kate said. Jinny continued to cry. She didn’t know how she was going to get through this. She didn’t know if she could. Losing her dad and everything had turned Jinny’s world upside down. “Jinny, I know this is hard but you’re gonna pull through. I know you will. You always have. You’re strong enough to get through this.” Kate said as she continued to hug Jinny. “Come on. Let’s get to work. You can go to the bathroom and freshen up and everything will be fine. Okay?” Kate said. Jinny nodded. Kate opened the door and they walked out together. Kate still had her arm around Jinny. “It’s okay. Just do what you have to do today. Be Inspector Exstead for now, and when we get home, we’ll talk more. Okay?” Kate whispered as they walked together. A teary eyed Jinny nodded as she listened to Kate’s words.

Nate watched as Kate and Jinny walked together. He saw Kate’s arm around Jinny, he saw her comforting Jinny, and Kate talking to her. He was kind of jealous. Now Kate’s attention was on someone else other than him. That bothered him. It always bothered him. The way Kate had invited Jinny into their home, they way she was so protective of her. It all bothered him. He wanted to know why Kate had to be the one to take Jinny in. He liked living alone with Kate. They could be themselves. They could be a couple. But now, with someone else living with them, they couldn’t be who they were before, so Nate thought. He didn’t know how Kate really felt. He only knew what he heard come out of her mouth. They hadn’t had a real conversation in a while. Nate thought it was about time they did, but it was never the right time.


I know that wasnt much, so I apologize for that. I'll probably post more later.

I want more! :) Soon! :lol: Please! ;) Thank you! :D

Okay...here ya gooooo......oh and Emma....if you read this...ur gonna love the end...bwahahahahahahahahahaha *ahem*

Late that afternoon, Charles Haysbert stopped by the division. He strolled in and walked over to Nate. Charles extended his hand. “Inspector Basso.” Charles nodded. Nate shook his hand, nodded and smiled. Charles went from Nate’s desk to Kate’s office. The door was open and Charles walked right in. Kate looked up. She smiled slightly. “Charles.” She said. “Kate.” Charles nodded and smiled. It was obvious that the two of them were on pleasanter terms with one another. “What can I do for you?” Kate asked. Charles lowered his voice down to a whisper. “I just want to thank you for stopping by last night. I’m glad we were able to talk.” Charles said. Kate shook her head. “Oh, no problem.” She said. Charles began to walk out of Kate’s office. “Is that all? After all we’ve been through, that’s all you’re gonna say?” Kate said loudly, forgetting the door was open. Charles turned around. He gave her a puzzled look. “I mean, you could at least stay and have a cup of coffee.” Kate said. “No. I really should go.” Charles said. “Okay then.” Kate said. Charles left Kate’s office. Jinny had heard everything that was said. She was curious as to what had gone on between them, but she decided not ask at that moment.

Nate walked into Kate’s office and closed the door. Kate looked up. She smiled. “Hi hon.” She said. Nate sat down. “Hi.” He said. Nate didn’t look or sound too happy. “What’s the matter?” Kate asked worriedly. “I wanna know what that was all about.” Nate said. Kate was confused. “What?” She asked. “With Charles. You asked him to stay. I heard you.” Nate said. Kate paused. ‘I spoke that loudly.’ Kate thought to herself. “Well, I was just being polite. I mean, we were intimate with each other. The least I could do was offer him some coffee.” Kate explained. Nate read too much into her answer. “So what are you saying?” Nate asked. Kate was still obviously confused. “What do you mean?” Kate asked. Nate’s eyes narrowed. “Are you saying that you enjoyed being with him?” Nate asked. Kate couldn’t believe this. She couldn’t believe Nate would think something like that. “No! I didn’t enjoy it. And that’s not what I was implying. Would you blow someone off after being intimate with them?” Kate said. Nate didn’t say anything. “See, that’s the type of person I am. I would never just blow someone off after being with them. It just turns out, that I don’t love Charles. I love you. You’re the one that I want to be with. You know that. I mean, after last night and this morning…well you know how good it was.” Kate said. Nate smiled. “I love you.” He said. Kate smiled. “I love you too.” Kate said. Nate stood up and walked over to Kate. He gently grabbed her face and kissed her passionately. From outside, they could hear everyone saying ‘ooh’. They stopped and looked out the windows of Kate’s office. There were Magda, Raina and CD, all standing there and smiling. Kate and Nate looked at one another. Kate smiled. “You’d better go.” Kate said. “Okay.” Nate said as he leaned in to kiss Kate once more. “Love you.” Kate said with a smile. “Love you too.” Nate whispered. Nate walked out of Kate’s office and back to his desk trying to ignore Magda, Raina and CD.

Jinny had been sitting at her desk the whole time. She’d heard more than enough from Kate and Nate during the past two days. Magda walked over to Jinny’s desk and sat on it. “Hey.” Magda said. Jinny looked up. “Hey.” She said. “How’s it going? How you feeling?” Magda asked. Jinny sighed. “I’m okay. I feel better than I did before. You know, I’m hangin’ in there.” Jinny explained. Magda nodded. “Yeah. Well, if you need anything, don’t hesitate to ask. Okay?” Magda said. “Thanks Mag.” Jinny said.

That evening, everyone had gone hom. Only Kate, Nate and Jinny were still there. Nate and Jinny were waiting for Kate to finish up some paper work. Nate peeked into Kate’s office. “Hey.” He said. Kate looked up. “Oh, hi. I’m almost finished.” Kate said. “Okay.” Nate said. He walked over to Jinny. “She’s almost finished.” Nate informed Jinny. “Yeah. Okay.” Jinny said. Kate finished what ever needed to be done. She grabbed her coat and bag and walked out of her office. “Come on guys.” Kate said. Jinny stood up and put her coat on. Nate walked over to Kate and put his arm around her. Jinny followed behind them.

The ride home was pretty quiet. Nobody really had anything to say. When they arrived home, everything was quite calm. They watched television for a while. They ate a little snack. They chatted a bit. Nothing major.

They each showered and changed. Kate was the last to take a shower. When Kate had settled into the comfortable atmosphere in the house, she paid a visit to Jinny. Jinny was sitting on her bed, looking at her family pictures. Kate walked in and closed the door. “Hey Jin.” Kate said. Jinny looked up. “Hi.” Jinny said. Kate sat on the bed. “How’s it going?” Kate asked. “Okay. Everything’s okay.” Jinny nodded. There was a long silence. Neither of them knew what to say next. All they did was look at each other. “So…” Kate said. Jinny laughed. “I don’t know.” She said. Kate smiled. “Well, I guess I’ll uh…leave you alone.” Kate said as she stood up. “Okay.” Jinny said. “And Jinny, I’m sorry about last night and this morning. Nate and I will try to control our…needs from now on.” Kate said with a smirk. Jinny laughed. “Oh yeah. I’m sure you will.” Jinny said. Kate laughed as she walked out of Jinny’s room.

Nate had been waiting for Kate in the hallway. “Hi sweetie.” Kate said with a smile. Nate extended his arms and brought Kate in for a hug. “Hi.” He said. He kissed her on the forehead. “You ready to go to bed?” Nate said with a smirk. Kate raised her eyebrow. “It’s still kind of early. What do you have in mind? Hmm?” Kate said. “Well, you’ll just have to see.” Nate said with a smirk. Nate led Kate to their bedroom. There, Kate was dazzled by the sight before her. Kate grabbed Nate’s arm. “Baby, I can’t believe this.” Kate said as she looked at the candles set all over the room. The atmosphere in the room was so romantic. The candles were only part of it. Nate set out on the bed, his favorite piece of lingerie that Kate owned. Kate walked over to the bed and looked at it. She rolled her eyes. And then she looked at Nate. “You want me to put this on?” Kate asked. Nate closed the door to the room and locked it. He walked over to Kate and put his hands on her hips. “Yeah.” He said. Kate turned around and looked at him. “I’m not as young as I used to be. I won’t look good in it.” Kate made Nate aware of her insecurities. “You look good in anything. But you know what?” Nate said. “What?” Kate asked. “Forget about the lingerie. Let’s go.” Nate said. Kate smiled. Nate leaned in a kissed her. He grabbed her t-shirt and took it off of her. She did the same for him. They removed the remainder of each other’s clothes. Kate got in bed. Nate got in with her. They kissed each other.

In the room next door, Jinny knew something was going on. She rolled her eyes. Jinny stood up from her bed, grabbed a pillow and a blanket and headed downstairs. She decided to get out while she still could. She watched T.V.

By the time Jinny got downstairs, Kate and Nate had just gotten started. From downstairs Jinny could hear Kate giggling and what not. And eventually she once again heard the bed banging loudly against the wall. All Jinny could think was ‘OUCH!’. Jinny could also hear the screaming and moaning. She couldn’t believe she was living with a bunch of sex fiends. ‘My God. Don’t they ever stop?’ Jinny thought to herself. Jinny tried hard to fall asleep, but she couldn’t. She wanted so bad to knock on their door and tell them off, but she wasn’t interested in seeing Nate or the Captain. Hearing them was enough. She’d talk to them in the morning.


*innocent look* you all kno you love my fic no matter how many times Kate and Nate um...well yeah. i love writing those scenes...they make me laugh...bwahahaha

:rotflmao: :rotflmao: :rotflmao:

U're right! I thot it was great, as usual hilarious!

And,yeah i know you luv to write those scenes!
Poor Jinny! She's having to live with a couple of nymphos!
My gawd,they are worse then a couple of horny rabbits on viagra!


post more ASAP!

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!
Poor Jinny! She's having to live with a couple of nymphos!
My gawd,they are worse then a couple of horny rabbits on viagra!


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This fan fiction just keeps getting better and better with every post! Please post some more soon! Thankies! :D

Hey guys...I'm really swamped with homework and school and everything, so I'm not sure when my next post will be. I'll post maybe tomorrow or later this week. :wave:

Originally posted by consentida25
Hey guys...I'm really swamped with homework and school and everything, so I'm not sure when my next post will be. I'll post maybe tomorrow or later this week. :wave:

I totally understand the whole homework thing. ;) I have a lot too. :( Snyway, this fan fiction is so great! :D it just keeps getting better and better with every post! :) I can not wait to find out what is going to happen next! :D

heres some more. Its not a lot but its something...

The next morning Jinny woke up on the couch of the living room. She smelled coffee brewing in the kitchen. She stood up and walked to the kitchen. She found Kate sitting at the kitchen table staring at Nate. Nate was preparing coffee for everyone. Jinny walked into the kitchen and took a seat at the table. “Hi Jinny.” Kate said with a smile. “Yeah. Hi.” Jinny said unenthusiastically. Kate noticed Jinny’s lack of enthusiasm right away. “What’s the matter with you?” Kate asked. Jinny didn’t even think about what she was going to say. “Hmm…let’s see, I had to sleep on the couch for the second night in a row because I didn’t want to hear you two moan and scream all night long. As a result of this, my back is killing me and you two seem to have a lack of respect for me!” Jinny raised her voice. Kate looked down in guilt. She sighed. “Jinny, I’m sorry. I know I told you that we would try to control that part of our lives. I’m sorry.” Kate said as she put her hand on Jinny’s arm. ‘She’s sorry?! SORRY?!?’ Nate thought. Nate turned around. “Um, Kate…can I talk to you for a minute?” Nate said. Kate looked up at him. “Uh, sure.” Kate answered. Nate led Kate to the living room. They stood there face to face. “Honey, what’s the matter?” Kate asked as she stroked Nate’s hair. The minute Nate felt Kate put her hands on him, he felt secure once again. Nate didn’t answer her. Kate brought Nate closer to her. She put her hand on the back of his neck and brought his face closer to hers. She looked at the face of the man she loved. “Sweetie, I cant help you if you don’t tell me what’s wrong.” Kate said. Still, Nate didn’t answer her. Kate grabbed his hand and led him to this stairs. Hand in hand, they made their way up the stairs and to their bedroom. Kate sat down on the bed and Nate sat with her. They looked at each other. “Nate, baby, talk to me. What’s bothering you?” Kate said as she once again stroked his hair and the side of his face. Nate was silent for a moment, then he spoke. “Kate, that past few nights have been wonderful. But every time Jinny complains about it, you apologize. I feel like I’m losing you in a way. I miss us. I miss living alone with you and being able to do things without having to worry about who might be watching or listening. I just miss it.” Nate explained. Kate looked at him for a few seconds. Then she kissed him. “You have no idea how much I care about you. I miss all that too. But I made a promise to Jinny. She needs me.” Kate said. Nate looked down. Kate watched his facial expression change. “Just because she needs me right now, doesn’t mean that I won’t be there for you. I’m always here. You know that. Don’t feel bad. You’re my main man. And I love you.” Kate said. Nate smiled slightly as he still looked down at the ground. Kate looked at his lips. She laughed. “I see that smile. I know I make you happy.” Kate said. Nate nodded. “Yes, you make me happy.” Nate said. Kate hugged him. “You make me happy too.” Kate said.

okay...thats it for now...watcha think?

I think that it is great!!!!!!!! :D Please post more sooon.

Aww! How sweet! I luf it! More ASAP! Thankies! :D :D :D

Awwwwww! how sweeeeeeeet!:D

I can't wait till you post more! *HINT- HINT!!*






oh,yeah I almost forgot!......... Pooooooor Jinny!

Boy, she really told the 'rabbits' (sry I cudn't resist!) didn't she!

Emma is right. MORE! *Hint hint* :D Thankies! :D

THIS IS GRRRRRRRR8! CANT WAIT 4 MOOORE

Ditto! :D

Heres some more...its not much tho....

Later that morning, Jinny, Kate and Nate arrived at the division. Kate and Nate walked into the division clinging to one another. Their bond as a couple felt as strong as ever. Before Kate rushed into her office, she gave Nate a quick kiss on the lips. Everyone watched and smiled. They all still couldn’t believe that they were together. It was almost unreal. Jinny dragged herself into the division. She had bags under her eyes. She was exhausted due to lack of sleep. Magda watched as Jinny plopped down in her seat. “What happened to you?” Magda asked. Jinny looked up at Magda. “Huh? Oh, I haven’t gotten much sleep the past two nights.” Jinny said. “Why not?” Magda asked. “Let’s just say the Captain and Nate…well it takes a lot to ware those two out.” Jinny said. Nate turned around and looked at Jinny. She looked at him and laughed. Magda laughed as well.

Kate sat in her office, thinking. Thinking about everything that had happened and everything that could happen. She wasn’t sure where her relationship with Nate was going. She didn’t know why this had come to her at that moment, but it did. She cared about Nate very much. And she knew that he cared about her, but something just wasn’t right. She felt it inside. Almost every possible thing had gone wrong with their relationship. How they managed to fix it, she didn’t know. And now Nate was worried about Jinny interfering with their relationship. What was she going to do about all this? If Jinny’s little complaints bothered Nate that much, how were they all going to live in the same house and live happily. Kate felt as though she was stuck in between two unbreakable forces. She was supposed to be the person who kept everyone together. She was supposed have enough strength to keep everyone as close together as possible. Now she felt like she had to choose. She had to choose between the man that she loved and a woman with an alcohol problem. Who was more important? Was helping Jinny more important than being with Nate? Or was being with Nate more important than helping Jinny fight her battle with alcoholism? Kate didn’t know. She didn’t want to leave either of them. She wanted to talk to them. She needed to talk to them.


there ya goooooooo....:D

so whats gonna happen?? I have to know. Post more soon please!

It's freakin' miracle! You posted more!! Yaaaaay!

That was great!
Now be a good little girl,and post some more,okay.
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!
It's freakin' miracle! You posted more!! Yaaaaay!

That was great!
Now be a good little girl,and post some more,okay.
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!

That is exactly what I was going to say! :lol:

Hey guys...I plan on posting more later....I hafta get my imagination workin' sooooo yeah...i'll post more later....

heres some more...its not much tho

That evening, Kate sat alone at the kitchen table in her home. She contemplated whether or not to talk to Jinny and Nate. She wasn’t sure if she should even bring it up. It was a difficult situation and she wasn’t sure how to handle it. She sat there with her coffee mug in hand. A tear rolled down her cheek. She didn’t want to choose between two people that she cared about so much. Maybe she should leave Nate and be alone. Or maybe she should give up on Jinny. So many things were going through Kate’s head. She just wanted to be there for everyone and help. But it was impossible to be there for everyone at once and try to solve everyone’s problems.

Nate walked into the kitchen and found Kate sitting at the table. He saw that worried look in her eyes. Something was wrong. Something was bothering her. He knew it. As he approached the table, Nate noticed tears in Kate’s eyes. Kate tried to avoid making eye contact with him. She was afraid that if she looked at him, she would break down. Nate walked passed Kate and stood behing her. Kate felt two hands on her shoulders. She closed her eyes and put her hand on one of the hands that were on her shoulders. More tears streamed down Kate’s face. She was so confused and she had no idea what she was going to do with this situation. “What’s the matter baby?” Nate asked in a whisper. Kate sighed. She turned around and looked up at him. He looked at her. He was worried about her. He didn’t know what to do or what to say. Kate stood up. “Hold me.” She said in a soft voice. Nate wrapped his arms around Kate. He held her tightly. Kate felt safe.

Ten minutes later, after Kate had gathered her emotions and was ready to come forth with her contemplations, she called Jinny and Nate into the living room. Kate and Nate sat close together on the couch. Jinny seated herself on the loveseat across from them. Kate took Nate’s hand. She needed to hold on to something, she needed to be comforted. Jinny looked at Kate and Nate. She was kind of confused. She wasn’t sure what was going on. Nate was still worried about Kate. Even he had no idea what was going on. Kate looked at the both of them. She thought about everything that had happened, everything that had gotten them where they were. She didn’t want to ruin her relationship with Nate and she didn’t want to ruin her newfound friendship with Jinny. She didn’t want to break the bond between her and Jinny. She had finally gotten Jinny to trust her. And she finally was able to trust Jinny. Kate thought for a moment. Then she decided to speak.



there ya go. hope ya liked it...tell me wutcha think....

OMG! That was so good! Please post some more VERY SOON! Thankies! Oh yeah! What did she say? :lol: :D

I think that it was great, but could you Pleeeeeeeeease stop leaving us hangin like that. LOL Post more soon please.

I need more today! :) Please! :) Thankies! :D

here ya go...sry i kept ya waiting...

“I’m in a very difficult position right now. I feel as thought I must make a decision. I need you two to cooperate with me. You might think I’m insane after I tell you this. But this is how I feel. And I need to let you know.” Kate explained. Kate gripped Nate’s hand even tighter. She sighed and went on, “You both obviously have your differences. Jinny, your complaints have been bothering Nate. And Nate, you’re worried that Jinny is interfering with our relationship. Frankly, I don’t want to choose anyone over the other. I wanna be here for both of you. I care about both of you as people. I need you both to understand what kind of position I’m in. It’s so hard. I was seriously thinking about leaving you, Nate.” Kate said as tears streamed down her face. “Leaving me? Why?” Nate asked. Kate looked down at the ground. “So many things have gone wrong with our relationship. I wasn’t sure if it was going to last.” Kate explained. Nate shook his head. “But it’s lasted for almost four months now.” Nate said. “I know that. But I just wasn’t sure. I haven’t been sure about a lot of things lately. And Jinny. Jinny, I wanna help you. I wanna be with you to guide you through your rough times. I feel like we’ve come to a new understanding in the past few days. I trust you. And I think you trust me. I don’t want to ruin that.” Kate explained. Jinny looked at Kate sympathetically. “Nothing you do can ruin that. We have come to a new understanding. I now realize that you support me and are willing to help me.” Jinny explained. Kate nodded. “You see, I just feel as though things won’t work out with all of us living in the same house. I’d appreciate it if we can make this work. We need to speak to one another and express our feelings. Without being able to do that, we have nothing. We have no relationship or friendship at all.” Kate explained. There was a long period of silence. Kate was hoping that she wouldn’t have to make a decision between the two of them. It was hard enough having to talk to them like this. Jinny looked at Kate. “Look, I can uh…find another place to stay if that’s what you want.” Jinny said. Kate shook her head. “No. I just want everyone to work out their differences. I want to be able to live in the same house with you without any problems or complaints. I need you both to understand how I’m feeling. I’ve sacrificed so much of my career to be with Nate and I’ve also sacrificed much of my personal life to help you Jinny. It’s difficult to be the medium in this situation. I have to be the glue that keeps this together.” Kate explained. Jinny and Nate both understood what Kate was saying. They felt bad that they had made her feel this way. “Jinny, I hope you’ll stay with us. I really don’t want either of you to leave. I just felt so stuck. I didn’t no what to do.” Kate explained. Nate put his arm around her and brought her body closer to his. Kate closed her eyes and smiled. Nate kissed her forehead. “Thank you.” Kate said. “Kate, I wanna stay here.” Jinny said. Kate smiled. “Good.” She said. Kate was relieved. It didn’t go as badly as she thought it would.


arite...thats it for now....

That was great!!

Post More SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



I'm just gonna add a few more of these: !!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!
That was great!!

Post More SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



I'm just gonna add a few more of these: !!!!!!!!!

She said it all! :D :lol: :D

Hola a todos mis amigos! No puedo escribir mas de my fan fiction porque estoy muy ocupado.



arite...what that meant was: Hi to all my friends. I wont be able to write more of my fan fiction because i'm very busy...i'm just practicing my Spanish. But I wont be able write any more until this weekend because i'm like.....soooo swamped in homework...soooo....just hang on...okay? :D

Ahhhh Tara!!!! I don't know if I can wait that long!

but I guess I'm a hafta try. *gigantic sigh*

*thinks* Gawd, I hope this week goes by fast.

Yahoooooo, Tara!!!!!

I want...................

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!







and hey, I gave ya a new page, now ya gotta post more!
mhmmm,yep *nods head vigorously*

here ya gooooo.....

Over the next few weeks things had finally calmed down in Kate’s house. Nobody was complaining or anything. Everyone was getting along just fine. Kate felt so relieved and stress free for once in her life. That was until one evening when she found Jinny lying on the couch. She had passed out. She’d been drinking. There was a very large bottle of Vodka lying on the floor. It was almost empty of course. Kate was so disappointed. It wasn’t the first time, but it was still very disappointing. Every once in a while, Kate would find Jinny passed out on the couch or something. She just wish she could get through to her. Jinny knew she had a problem, she just couldn’t fix it. That was the thing that Kate couldn’t understand. If only Jinny would come to her senses and do what’s best for her health. Kate tried to wake Jinny. “Jinny. Jinny, come on wake up.” Kate said. Kate was getting frustrated. Kate began to shake Jinny’s body vigorously. Still Jinny would not budge. Kate shook Jinny’s body harder. Nothing. Kate was getting worried. “Nate!” Kate called. Nate came running down the stairs. He knew something was up. He could hear the concern in Kate’s voice. “What? Is everything okay?” Nate asked. “No. We gotta get Jinny to the hospital.” Kate said. “Why? Wha-“ Nate began. “Just hurry. We gotta go. Come on!” Kate rushed him.

Nate drove as fast as he could to the nearest hospital. Kate was already in tears. She couldn’t believe this could happen. Nate saw the tears in Kate’s eyes. “It’s gonna be okay. She’ll be fine.” Nate tried to comfort Kate. “No! It’s not okay. Jinny’s lying in the back seat and she’s barely conscious. She drank too damn much and it’s not okay!” Kate yelled at Nate. Kate finally broke down. She just cried hysterically.

When they reached the hospital, Nate carried Jinny. Kate followed them. They walked as fast as they could into the emergency room. There was so much commotion in the emergency room. Kate pushed her way through the crowd and to the desk. Nate followed with Jinny in his arms. “Ma’am, you have to wait your turn.” The nurse said to Kate. “No! You don’t understand. I think she surpassed her blood alcohol level. You need to take of her. Now.” Kate said. “No. You’ll have to wait.” The nurse said. Kate pulled out her badge. “I am NOT waiting. You have to take care of her now.” Kate said. “Okay. Okay.” The nurse said nervously.


thats all for now.....

Well, it's about d@mn time!!

That was GREAT!!!!

You gotta post more AS SOOOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!


Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez, tell me Jinny's gonna be okay!!

okey dokey...heres some more....its not much tho..

Nate and Kate had been waiting for an hour when the doctor came out. “Is anyone here for Jinny Exstead?” Dr. Reeves said. Kate immediately stood up. The doctor walked over to her. He extended his hand and shook Kate’s. “Hi.” He said. “Hi.” Kate said. “Jinny’s going to be alright.” The doctor informed Kate. Kate let out a sigh of relief. “We had to pump her stomach. She consumed an extremely large amount of alcohol. She could’ve died tonight” Dr. Reeves said. Kate nodded. “I found her on my living room couch. She had passed out and she wouldn’t wake up. She’s an alcoholic.” Kate said. The doctor made a face. “She needs help. She really does.” He said. Kate nodded. “I know.” She said. They were silent for a moment. Then Kate spoke. “Can I see her?” Kate asked. “Yes. Just follow me.” The doctor said as he turned around and led Kate to where Jinny was.

Kate walked into the room. She was so glad that Jinny was okay. She walked over to Jinny’s bed. Jinny opened her eyes and slightly smiled. Kate pulled a chair over and sat down. “Hi.” Kate said. “Hi.” Jinny said in a low voice. Jinny still felt a little queasy. “How you feelin’?” Kate asked. “I still feel kinda sick.” Jinny said. “Yeah. Look Jin, you can’t keep doing this.” Kate said as a tear leaked from her eye. “You could’ve died tonight. You drank too much this time. This should be a wake up call for you.” Kate said. “I know. I’m sorry.” Jinny said as she began to cry. “Jin, I don’t want to lose you to an addiction. You need help.” Kate said. Jinny looked down. Another tear streamed down her cheek. She nodded. “I know.” She said.


thats all for now....

This is sooo good! You have to post more soon please!!!!!

More! Pretty please with sugar AND a cherry on top! Thankies! :lol:

*Enormous sigh of relief* She's okay!!

great Jin/Cap moment.

and like I've said about a 1000 times before ( Wait a minute, I've said that 1000times before 2...huh)

POST MORE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!
*Enormous sigh of relief* She's okay!!

great Jin/Cap moment.

and like I've said about a 1000 times before ( Wait a minute, I've said that 1000times before 2...huh)

POST MORE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!

I do not think that I can add anything more to that! :lol:

heres a lil bit more....

The doctor walked into the room. He looked at Jinny. “Ms. Exstead, I want you to stay here for the night so we can monitor you.” Dr. Reeves said. Jinny nodded. Kate stood up. “Jin, I’ll be right back. I’m gonna talk to Nate for a minute.” Kate said. “Okay.” Jinny said. Kate made her way back to waiting room. She found Nate slumped over in a chair. He was almost asleep. She walked over and sat in the seat next to him. “Nate.” She said. Nate looked at her. “Hi.” He said. “Hi honey.” Kate greeted him with a smile. “Jinny has to stay here overnight. I’m gonna stay with her so I can take her home in the morning. Is that okay with you?” Kate said. Nate sighed. He was upset. Why did she always have to stay with Jinny? What was so damn special about her? “Its okay.” Nate said reluctantly. Kate saw the disappointment in Nate’s face. “Are you sure? I mean, I just want to be here to take her home. If you want, I can go home. I just thought it’d be best if I stay here.” Kate explained. “I really wanted to be alone with you tonight. We haven’t been alone for a while.” Nate said. Kate nodded. “I know.” She said. They were silent for a moment. Kate looked at Nate. “Nate, I’m sorry about all of this. I hate having to choose between the two of you in situations like this. See, this is what I mean. Its difficult.” Kate explained. Nate nodded. He knew what Kate really wanted. She wanted to be with Jinny. Nate sighed. “Stay with Jinny. Its okay.” Nate said. Kate smiled slightly. She gently grabbed Nate’s face and brought it close to her. She kissed him. “Thank you.” Kate said. Kate and Nate both stood up. Kate hugged him and once again kissed him. “I’ll see you in the morning.” Kate said. “Okay.” Nate said.

i'm gonna post more tomorrow.....

That was sooooooooo good! More please!!!!

That was coolies. It's tomorrow now! More! Thankies! *smiley* :lol: :D

*Ahem*...........WE ARE STILL WAITING!!! *taps foot*

:dance: <---- thaz the closest thing to sumbody tapping their foot I cud find lol, so......

geez...i forgot i was supposed to post more....ahhhh i'm sooooo sorry guys....im writin more as we speak - i mean type...sooo yeah...

I can't wait to read it! :D Where is it? :lol:

here ya go peoples...

Nate turned away from Kate and walked out of the hospital. Kate felt so bad for leaving him. She watched as he walked away and then she turned around and walked away herself. She made her way back to Jinny’s room. Jinny had been waiting for her. “Hey.” Jinny said. “Hey.” Kate said with a smile. “Where’s Nate?” Jinny asked. “I told him to go home.” Kate said. “Oh.” Jinny said as she nodded. “I’m gonna stay here with you tonight. If that’s okay with you?” Kate said. “It’s okay. You can keep me company. I hardly ever sleep.” Jinny explained. Kate smiled.

Three hours later, Jinny had finally fallen asleep. She and Kate had been chatting away. It was almost one in the morning. Kate stood up. She looked at Jinny and smiled. She patted Jinny’s arm and turned around. She walked out of the room.
A half an hour later Kate was back at her house. She made her way upstairs to the bedroom. She found Nate sleeping like a baby. She crawled into the bed and kissed him on the forehead. Nate jumped up and almost screamed. Kate held him down gently. “It’s okay sweetie. Its me.” Kate said with a chuckle. Nate let out a huge sigh of relief. “I thought you were staying at the hospital. “ Nate said in confusion. “I was but Jinny fell asleep and I decided to come home and be with you tonight.” Kate explained. “I’m glad.” Nate expressed his happiness. Kate kissed his lips. She placed herself in Nate’s arms. And there they lay, safe and secure with each other.

The next morning Kate was awoken by the sound of the ringing phone. Kate answered the phone. “Yeah…okay. Will do. Buh Bye now.” Kate spoke into the phone. Nate woke up. “Who was that?” He asked. Kate turned around and looked at Nate. “The hospital. I gotta pick Jinny up.” Kate said as she got out of bed. Nate grabbed Kate’s arm and pulled her back. “She can wait. Can’t she?” Nate said. Kate smiled. “No. She can’t wait.” Kate said as she once again made her way out of bed.

Twenty minutes later, Kate was ready to go. Kate walked out of the bathroom and into her bedroom. “I’m leaving now. I’ll see you later.” Kate said as she walked over to Nate who was still in bed. She leaned over and kissed him. “Aren’t you going to work?” Nate asked as he noticed Kate wasn’t dressed for work. “No. I think I should stay home today.” Kate said. She decided not to go to work today so she could be with Jinny and have a decent talk with her. Nate nodded. “Okay.” Nate said in a low voice. Kate sat down on the bed. She ran her fingers through Nate’s hair. “Nate, I gotta be there for Jin. I know that bothers you but you have to understand that I can give you all of my attention. As much as I love and care about you, there are other people who need my attention. Jinny needs help and I wanna be there for her.” Kate explained.

argh....that was boring....

That was SO NOT boring! :lol: Anyway I want more! :D

Imma try to post more later tonite so just be patient.....

okay, I have tried to be patient, to the best f my ability. But it's a well known fact that I'm not a very patient person, okay.
Sooo.................................

POST MORE SOOOOOOOOOOON!

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!
okay, I have tried to be patient, to the best f my ability. But it's a well known fact that I'm not a very patient person, okay.
Sooo.................................

POST MORE SOOOOOOOOOOON!

I couldn't have said it better myself. :lol:

its not much but here u go...


Kate walked into the hospital and found Jinny waiting in the waiting room. “Hey” Kate said as she rushed in. “Hey.” Jinny said as she waved. “You ready? The car’s right out front.” Kate said. Jinny nodded. They both walked outside and to the car. Kate opened the door for Jinny. “Thanks” Jinny said as she got in the car. “No problem.” Kate said as she shut the car door. She walked around the tail of the car and to the driver’s side. She opened the door and got in. She started the car and drove.

Kate decided to take Jinny home first so she could shower and change. Kate wanted to take Jinny out somewhere so they could talk. Or maybe it was better that they stay home and talk. She didn’t know anymore.

Kate and Jinny arrived at home half an hour later. Nate had already left for work. ‘Good. We can stay here and talk’ Kate thought. Kate made her way to the front door and unlocked it with her key. She walked in and Jinny followed. Jinny immediately walked up the stairs and into the bathroom. She was dying to take a shower. She just wanted to get the hospital smell off her body. From downstairs, Kate heard the shower go on. Now she had more time to prepare herself to talk with Jinny. Kate knew that Jinny wasn’t going to be happy with what she had to say. Kate sat at the kitchen table and put her head in her hands. She sat like that until Jinny walked in. “Hi.” Jinny said. Kate looked up. “Oh. Hi.” Kate said back. “What’s wrong?” Jinny asked. Kate sighed. “Sit.” Kate said as she motioned toward the chair next to her. Jinny seated herself next to Kate. “What?” Jinny asked worriedly. Kate paused for a moment. Then she opened her mouth to speak.

thats all for now...i'm so extremely exhausted its not even funny.

this fanfic is awesome.. rest up and write some more lol

What does Kate have to say!? Why isn't Jinny gonna like it?!

post more sooooooooooooooooooooooon

Originally posted by TeddyisMINE!!!!
What does Kate have to say!? Why isn't Jinny gonna like it?!

post more sooooooooooooooooooooooon

What she said! :lol:

here ya go...sry it took so long..

“I’m not sure how to address this issue but I’m gonna do it the best way I know how. Jinny, you need help. Last night was the last straw for me. I’m not angry. I’m just scared. I’m scared that you’ll go overboard. I’m afraid to lose you to something that you can overcome.” Kate explained as a tear streamed down her cheek. Jinny was already crying. She was almost hysterical. She had no idea that Kate cared about her well being so much. “Jinny, I know you just got out of rehab but I think you need to go back. We’d better handle this problem before it gets worse. I did all the paper work for you already. All you have to do is pack.” Kate continued. She saw the hurt in Jinny’s eyes. Jinny didn’t want to go. She knew she had a problem and that she needed help but she didn’t want to go back to rehab. It was hell for her the last time and she knew this time it wasn’t going to be any better. “Jinny, I’m sorry…” Kate began. Jinny interrupted her. “It’s okay. I’ll go.” Jinny said. Kate’s jaw almost dropped. She couldn’t believe Jinny was taking this so well. Jinny got up from her seat and walked out of the kitchen. She headed upstairs to her room.

Kate watched as Jinny walked away. She hoped that what she just said didn’t ruin their friendship. Kate stood up and walked out of the kitchen. She made her way upstairs to Jinny’s room. She found Jinny sitting in the corner of the room, crying hysterically. Tears came to Kate’s eyes. She knew Jinny was hurt. Kate walked over to Jinny and sat next to her on the floor. She put her arm around Jinny. “Jin, it’ll be alright. You’re gonna get through this.” Kate whispered. In the corner of Jinny’s room is where they sat. They stood there for a long while. They cried together, they hugged one another but not once did they say a word. It was the closest of friends showing support for one another. It was there, in the corner of the room,that they fell asleep.

Two hours later, Kate woke up. She looked around. She wasn’t sure where she was. She looked at Jinny who was next to her, and then she remembered what happened. Kate got up from the floor. “Oh boy.” She said as she put her hands on her back. Kate decided to let Jinny sleep for a while. She needed to rest.

At the division, Nate sat at his desk. He wanted to be home with Kate. He wanted to see her face. Magda sat at her desk. She kept staring at Nate. She was dying to ask him why Jinny or Captain hadn’t shown up for work. Magda wheeled her chair over to Nate. Nate looked up at her. “Hey Magda.” Nate said. “Hey.” Magda greeted him. “What’s gpin’ on?” Nate asked. “I just wanted to know why Jinny didn’t show up for work. And what about the captain?” Magda said. Just as Magda finished her statement, CD walked over and sat at her desk. “She um…well they had to do something.” Nate did his best to explain without giving away any clues. “Whose they?” CD asked. “Um…Kate and uh…her daughter.” Nate said nervously. “Yeah. Okay.” CD said as she went back to work. “I’ll talk to you later.” Magda whispered to Nate as she wheeled her chair back to her desk.

Jinny opened her eyes. She found herself on the floor of her room. She barely remembered what happened. She stood up. She walked out of her room and searched the house for Kate. Kate was in her bedroom. She was cleaning up the minor mess that was left in her room by Nate. “Hi.” Jinny said. Kate looked up. “Oh, hi Jin.” Kate said with a slight smile. “How’s it going?” Jinnt asked. “Alright. I’m okay. And you?” Kate said. Jinny sighed. “I’m alright I guess. I don’t know how I’m gonna get through this.” Jinny explained. “Yeah. I know. Hopefully, you wont be in rehab for too long. Jinny, I’m really sorry. I just want you to be healthy. I want you back. I want the Jinny I know.” Kate explained. “I know. I want her back too.” Jinny said with a chuckle.


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Awwww! That was sweet! Anyway, I would like to read some more please! Thankies! :D :lol: :D

I loved it please post more soon!

I want more! I more! Iwant more! :lol: Reminder: LIFETIME 8pm EASTERN THIS FRIDAY NIGHT PRESUMED INNOCENT! Don't forget! * I feel like I am making a Student Council Announcment* :lol: :D :D

Hey I hope that you post again soon.

So do I! :D :D :D

imma post more soon...i promise...

Yippie! You go girl! :D :D :D

finally....here's some more:


That night, Kate, Jinny and Nate met Magda, CD, and Raina at Anchorside. Kate had planned the surprise dinner so everyone could say goodbye to Jinny before she entered rehab the next day. Kate, Nate and Jinny walked in and found everyone else sitting at a big table. Nate headed right over to them. Kate followed Nate but she realized Jinny wasn’t behind her. Kate turned around and looked at Jinny. She walked over to her and put her arm around Jinny. “Come on Jin. They’re here to show their support for you. Don’t worry. Okay?” Kate said. Jinny nodded.

Kate and Jinny headed to the table. Everyone stood up. “Hi Jin.” Magda said. “Hi Mag.” Jinny said with a slight smile. It was an uncomfortable situation. Jinny felt most uncomfortable. Everyone knew that she screwed up again and now they were there to show their “support”. Jinny took a seat between Kate and Magda. Jinny looked to her left and saw the face of her best friend. Magda smiled. Jinny could tell that it took some effort for Magda to smile. Magda on the other hand was feeling so badly about Jinny’s situation. She only wanted the best for Jinny. It was hard to smile and it was hard to keep from crying. Magda stood up. “I’ll uh…I’ll be right back.” Magda said as she headed to the bathroom. Jinny stood up and went after her.

Magda had gotten to the bathroom before Jinny did. And by the time Jinny walked in, Magda was already hysterically crying. Jinny knew right then what was wrong. “Mag, don’t worry about me. I’m gonna get some help. I’ll be alright.” Jinny tried to explain. “No. It’s not all right. Jinny I’m losing more and more of you to alcohol everyday.” Magda said in a weary voice. A tear rolled down Jinny’s cheek. “Mag, don’t worry about me. Please.” Jinny said. Magda sighed. “Jinny, you’re my best friend. I hate seeing this happen to you…again.” Magda said. Kate walked into the bathroom. She made her way to the two inspectors. “Is everything okay?” Kate asked. Magda nodded. Kate noticed the tears in her eyes. “Magda, are you okay?” Kate asked once again. “Yeah. I’ll be fine.” Magda reassured Kate. “Okay then. Come on, everyone’s waiting for you.” Kate said as she led them out of the bathroom.


tell me wutcha think....

I think hat you need to add some more. :lol: :D

mmk...its not much but its sumthin....

Kate, Jinny and Magda walked back to the table and were greeted by the curious faces of the rest of the group. Kate smiled slightly. “Heh…yeah.” She mumbled. Everyone could tell Magda had been crying. “Magda, are you okay?” CD asked. Magda nodded.

The night was going by very smoothly and quickly. Everyone had expressed their love and support for Jinny and then it was time to go. For Magda, it was a very tearful goodbye. Magda grabbed hold of Jinny and embraced her. She didn’t want to let Jinny go. It was hard seeing her best friend go through such difficulty. Everyone walked away and let Jinny and Magda have their few minutes alone.

“Jinny, I just want you to know that if you ever need to talk or anything, just call me. Okay? I’m always here for you and I’m sorry if I haven’t always supported you and been there for you. I’m glad you’re getting help Jin, but I’m gonna miss you.” Magda explained. “Mag, I’m gonna miss you too. But this’ll be for the best. You know? I mean, I’m gonna get some help. So, just let me go. I’ll be all right.” Jinny said to Magda. Magda wiped a tear from her eye. “Bye Jin.” Magda said. “Bye Mag.” Jinny said as she pulled away from Magda, turned around and headed for the door.


yay! go me! go me! i posted! i posted! *ahem* yeah...

Well, it's about freakin' time!!!!!!

That was great! Post more sooooooon!

And when I say 'Sooooooooon' I mean like NOT six months from now. ;-)

It's about time! :D :D :D

hey guys...i shall be posting more of my fic soon....i'm sorry its been so long but i've been soooooooooooo busy and i havent had time to write any more of my fic sooo just hold on tight....k?

We will! :lol:

here ya go for those of u who still wanna read this:

The next morning, Kate had woken up bright and early. She took the day off to be with Jinny. Kate turned over in bed and found Nate staring at her. Kate smiled. “Hey.” She said. “Hey.” Nate said with a smile. Kate quickly kissed him and then got out of bed. She grabbed her robe and put in on. She then made her way to Jinny’s room. She knocked on the door and let herself in. Jinny was already awake. She was lying in her bed with her back facing Kate. Kate walked over to her. “Jin, it’s time to get up.” Kate said. Jinny turned around and looked at Kate. “Oh you’re up already.” Kate said. “Yeah.” Jinny said as she sat up in her bed. There was an awkward silence. Kate sensed that there was something wrong with Jinny. She seated herself on Jinny’s bed. “What’s the matter?” Kate asked. Jinny shook her head. “Nothing.” She mumbled. Kate stared at Jinny. “Jin, what ever it is, just let it out. I’m here to help. To listen.” Kate explained. “I just don’t want to have to go through this again. It was hell the first time. Its only going to be worse this time.” Jinny said. “Just get it over with. Before you know it, you’ll be back on your feet and back on track. Its for the best Jin.” Kate said. Jinny nodded as tears streamed down her cheeks. “I know.” Jinny said.

An hour and a half later Jinny, Kate and Nate were ready to leave. Nate and Kate quickly kissed each other and then parted. Nate got in his car and headed for work. Kate and Jinny got in Kate’s car. They sat there for a few seconds. Then Kate started the car and started to drive. The car ride was quiet and calm. Jinny was nervous. Kate could tell. She could tell by Jinny’s actions. She put her hand on Jinny’s and held it tightly. Jinny smiled slightly. Kate smiled back. Kate pulled into the parking lot of the rehabilitation center and parked the car. She looked at Jinny. “You ready?” She asked. Jinny looked up at Kate. “I guess so.” She replied. The two women stepped out of the car and walked into the building.


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Hey this fan fic is coming along great! Make sure we don't have to wait as long for the next part.

mmk...i kno its been a long while but here...

As Kate and Jinny entered the building, they were greeted by several people there. One woman told Jinny and Kate to take a seat in the waiting area. They seated themselves. After a few minutes, Kate noticed Jinny’s hands were shaking. Kate put her hand on Jinny’s and held it tightly. A few minutes later a woman walked over to Jinny and Kate. Jinny and Kate stood up. She introduced herself, “Hi. My name is Joan.” She said as she shook Jinny’s hand and then Kate’s. Jinny and Kate stood up. The woman led them passed the sign-in desk and down a long hallway. “The bathroom’s right there. All these rooms are for rehab patients. This is your room right here.” Joan said as she walked Jinny and Kate down the hallway. “So, where’s all your stuff?” Joan asked. Jinny sighed. “I left it in the car.” She said. “I’ll get it.” Kate suggested. “No, no. I’ll get its okay.” Jinny said. Jinny started heading out to the building not realizing that Kate was following her.

When Jinny reached the car, she was startled by Kate’s hand on her back. “Hey. I thought I’d come and help.” Kate said. “Thanks.” Jinny said with a smile. Kate opened the trunk of her car and Jinny pulled her luggage out.

The two women headed back to the building and back to Jinny’s room. “Do you want me to help you unpack?” Kate asked. Jinny shook her head. “No. It’s okay. You should go.” Jinny said. Kate looked down at the ground for a brief second and then back up ay Jinny. “You sure?” Kate asked. Jinny nodded. “Yeah.” She said. “Okay.” Kate sighed. Kate put her arms out and embraced Jinny. “Jinny, good luck. I’m gonna miss you.” Kate said as she shed a tear. “Captain, thank you so much for everything you’ve done for me. I really appreciate it.” Jinny said. “No problem. Jin.” Kate said as she pulled away from Jinny and wiped tears from her eyes. “Bye.” Kate said as she started to walk away. “I’ll call you when I get the chance to. Okay?” Jinny said. “Okay. Bye.” Kate said as she finally left the room.

After Kate left, Jinny sat on her bed and cried. She didn’t want to be there. It was hell for her. But she knew she needed to be there to get better.



i kno its not much but w/e...

Your fic rox please post more soon!

i was surfin threw the main ff page and found ur fic (i almost forgot about it) like it seems u have. J/K. Just thougth that if u saw it u'd POST MORE

Originally posted by Jo/Blair_fan
i was surfin threw the main ff page and found ur fic (i almost forgot about it) like it seems u have. J/K. Just thougth that if u saw it u'd POST MORE

omg...i havent posted on my fic in a looooong time. everyone always remminds me and i'm like "yeah...i'll post but i'll do it tomorrow." and then i never post. But honestly I do plan on posting more. Probably this weekend since I have off for the next two weeks...so yeah i do plan on postin more. :D

Goody! Goody! Gumdrops! :)

OMG...its been FOREVER since I posted last. i'm so so so sorry to those people who were waiting...heres more:


The drive home was long for Kate. She had taken the day off to be with Jinny but now that Jinny was gone it made no sense to stay home. When Kate arrived at her house, she marched herself directly up stairs and into the bathroom. She took a long shower. An hour and a half later Kate was dressed for work and ready to head out the door.

Arriving at the division almost three hours late, Kate rushed into her office while Magda, Raina, CD and Nate watched her in confusion. Nate stood up from his chair and headed to Kate’s office. He quietly knocked on the door. Kate hung up her coat and slowly turned around. “Hey.” Nate said softly. Kate smiled slightly. “Hi.” Kate said in a weary voice. Magda entered Kate’s office. “Hi Cap.” She said. Kate smiled. “How’d it go with Jinny?” Magda asked as she took a seat. Kate sat down. She sighed. “It went okay. It was a bit emotional, but it was okay.” Kate said. “Oh.” Nate said. ‘How was Jinny though? Was she upset or angry or anything?” Magda questioned Kate. Kate shook her head. “No she was fine. I mean I could tell she really didn’t want to be there, but there was really nothing I could do about that.” Kate explained. Magda nodded. “Captain, thanks for taking care of her when I couldn’t. I’ve been so caught up in my own life that I really didn’t notice that she was having a rough time. And I know that she appreciates everything you have done for her.” Magda said. Kate smiled and nodded. “I’d do anything for Jinny or any one of you guys. So, no problem.” Kate said. With that said, Magda and Nate left Kate’s office. Kate went back to making phone calls and paper work.

That night when the long day was over, Nate met Kate in her office. She was still trying to finish up some work. Nate put his hand on Kate’s shoulder. She looked up at him. “Come on. Let’s go home.” Nate said. Kate nodded. She stood up, grabbed her coat and put it on.

When the couple got home, they were both exhausted. Kate took her coat off and hung it up in the closet. She took Nate’s coat as well. Nate went into the kitchen and got a drink, while Kate plopped herself on the couch in the living room. Nate walked into the living room and sat himself beside Kate. He put his arm around her. They both smiled. “This is our first night alone in a long time.” Nate said. “I know.” Kate said with a smile. They both leaned in for a kiss. Like so many times before it was a long, passionate kiss. Kate wrapped her arms around Nate and brought him in closer to her. They stopped kissing for a brief moment. They looked at one another. “I love you.” Nate said. Kate smiled. “I love you too. And thanks for everything.” Kate said. Nate nodded and started kissing her again. This time Kate pulled away. She stood up and took Nate by the hand. Clinging to one another, they made their way upstairs to their bedroom. Kate closed the door.


yep..thats about it for now...

Well, It's about time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was begginning 2 ownder if were ever gonna post again!!

That was great!
Post more!,and Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!
Not like 6 months from now pleez.

I was in a good mood so I wrote some more for you guys...:D

The next morning, like every other morning, Kate and Nate woke up early. But this morning, for some reason, they had woken up before the alarm clock woke them. They both sat up in bed in complete silence. Nate looked at Kate. “I don’t feel like working today.” He said. Kate shook her head. “Nate, we have to go to work. Everyone is working on very important cases. We need to be there.” Kate said. “Kate, come on. We’re finally alone. Let’s just spend the day together. I miss this so much, being alone with you. Is hasn’t been this way in a while. Can’t we just have one full day alone? Just you and me.” Nate said as he put on his best puppy dog face. Kate grinned. She rubbed his arm. “Okay…but this is the last time I’m doing this. Okay?” Kate said. “Okay. Thanks." Nate said.

Later that morning at the division, Raina, CD, and Magda all sat around drinking coffee and chatting. It was already nine o’ clock and Kate and Nate hadn’t shown up yet. “Hey, where’s the Captain and Nate?” CD asked. “I don’t know. Should I call them?” Raina asked. “No. They’re probably just spending time with each other. Knowing Cap, she’ll probably call in to check up on everyone. So, don’t worry about them.” Magda said. “Yeah.” CD agreed. “Okay then.” Raina said.

Back at the house, Kate was in the shower and Nate had started making breakfast. Kate came downstairs and entered the kitchen just as Nate was setting the table for breakfast. “Oh you made breakfast?” Kate was surprised. “Yeah.” Nate smiled. They both sat down at the kitchen table and began to eat. It was a quiet breakfast.

There was something on Kate’s mind. She kept fighting with herself. She was contemplating whether to ask him or not. She finally decided she would ask him later on in the day.

After breakfast, Kate and Nate helped each other clean up. “I’m glad we took off today. I’ve missed you.’” Nate said as he rubbed Kate’s back. Kate smiled slightly. “I’ve missed you too.” She whispered to him. They spent the next few minutes cleaning up the kitchen. When they were finished they just stood there. There wasn’t really much else to do. They both look at each other and shrugged. Kate grabbed Nate’s hand and led him to the living room. They both sat down on the couch. “What’s going on?” Nate asked. Kate paused. She thought for a moment or so. “Well, we’ve been together for a while now. And I think its time that we met each other’s families. I would love to meet your family. I mean, I met your sister at you mother’s funeral, but that wasn’t exactly the proper time and place for me to introduce myself as your partner. We were just getting started then. And I want you to meet my daughter. I don’t have many people on my side of the family for you to meet but it’s just a suggestion. What do you think?” Kate explained. A smile came across Nate’s face. “I’ve wanted to ask you that for such a long time. I want you to meet my family so badly.” Nate said. “Oh really? Have you even told them about me?” Kate asked. “I haven’t told them anything about us. To be honest, my other sister and my brother have a problem with me dating older women. They’re afraid that older women will take advantage of me. My brother went through that. I didn’t tell them because I didn’t want them to cause any problems. You know?” Nate explained. Kate looked down. “I’ve never dated a younger man before. This is the first time for me. So I know its kind of awkward, but we love each other and I care about you, that’s all that should matter to your family.” Kate said. Nate nodded. “Yeah I know. I’ll just have to talk to them first. But no matter what, I still want them to meet you because you’re the woman I love and care about.” Nate said. Kate smiled. She kissed him on the lips. “I love you.” Kate said. Nate grinned. “I know.” He answered back.

yay!!! U posted!!!! It was soooooooooo good that I think that U should post more NOW!!!! Waits.... Keeps hitting the reload button....Cries....she didn't post more Yet....

It was around one in the afternoon at the division when Raina received a phone call from Kate. Raina picked up the phone at her desk. “Hello?” Raina said into the phone. “Raina, its me.” Kate answered. “Oh, hey Captain. How’s it going? Is everything alright?” Raina asked. “Everything is fine Raina. Nate and I just took the day off for some personal reasons that’s all. Its nothing to be worried about.” Kate explained. “Oh.” Raina commented. “Well, I was just calling to check up on everyone. How is everything?” Kate asked. “Everything is okay here. A lot of work though.” Raina said. Kate chuckled. “It’s always like that. But listen, I’m gonna go. I’ll talk to you later. Tell everyone I said hello. Okay?” Kate said. “Okay Captain.” Raina said before she hung the phone up.

Kate hung up the phone and headed to the kitchen where Nate was making lunch. For some reason, nate felt like cooking that day. Kate approached him and she put her arms around him. Nate smiled and turned his head just enough so he’d be able to see her. Kate kissed him. “Hey” Nate said with a smile. Kate smiled. “Hey.” She replied. Removing her arms from Nate’s body, Kate then stood beside him. “So when are we going to arrange a meeting with your family?” Kate asked. “I’m not sure. I’ll have to talk to them first. We'll meet with them soon, though. You know what? I call them right after lunch." Nate said. Kate didn't want to say it, but she was kind of shaky about the whole thing. After what Nate had told her about his family, she wasn't sure things were going to work out.

Nate and kate sat down to a very quiet lunch. It was very peaceful. Quiet and peaceful...those words hadnt used to describe their lives since before Jinny had moved in. It was really nice. After lunch, Nate decided to call his sister and brother. he headed toward the living room.

Nate wanted everyone to come over to Kate's house to meet, but he hadn't asked Kate yet. He turned around and headed back to the kitchen where Kate was cleaning up. For some reason Nate was afraid to ask Kate if his siblings could come by for dinner and to talk. "Kate..." Nate's voice trailed off. Kate turned around. "Yeah?" she said. "Um...I just wanted to ask you...when you meet my family, can they come here? I mean, I know it would be awkward but I just think its the best place for us to sit together and talk." Nate explained. Kate thought for a moment. "Um...sure." Kate kind of let it go passed her head. She hadnt realised what had gotten herself into. "Thanks." Nate said with a smile.

Once again he headed toward the living room. This time Kate followed close behind. Nate seated himself of the couch. kate seated herself beside him. Nate picked up the cordless phone. He decided to call his brother first, he was more understanding. "Kevin? Hey. It's Nate. Yeah I know. Haha yeah. Look, I um...I was wondering if you'd be willing to come over my house to meet my girlfriend. We can have dinner and talk. I would really appreciate it. Um...hold on a second." Nate held the phone away from his face and covered it with one hand. "Kate, whens a good time?" Nate whispered. Kate thought for a moment or so. "Saturday night at 7." Kate whispered back. Nate nodded and began to talk into the phone. "How's Saturday night at 7? Great. I'm glad you can make it. Yeah. In San Francisco. 112 Maxwell Road. Okay. i'll talk to you later then. Bye." Nate clicked the "Talk" button on the phone to turn it off. 'Well, one down. One to go." Nate said as he looked at Kate. He sighed and began to dial his sister's number. "Jenny? Yeah hi. I know. Long time no talk. I miss you too, Jen. well I was wondering if you could come over on Saturday night at 7 to meet my girlfriend. This is really important to me. And I would really appreciate it. You can? Thats great. Thank you so much. Yeah in San Francisco. 112 Maxwell Road. Yeah. Well, I moved in with her. Yes, I did. Oh dont start with me. We'll talk on Saturday. Okay? Alright. i'll see you then. Bye." Nate hung up the phone once again.

"Everything okay?" Kate asked as she began to stroke Nate's face. "Yeah. everythings fine but I'm nervous about all of this. They've never met any of my girlfriends, so this is a bit out of the ordinary." Nate explained. "To be honest, I'm nervous too. I'm not sure what's going to come out of this. I dont want this to harm our relationship. You know?" Kate said. "Kate, baby, our relationship has ben tested and tested and nothing has come between us yet. Certain things have ALMOST come between us, but our bond is too strong." Nate explained. Kate smiled. "You're so cute and you're right as well." Kate said. she leaned in and kissed him. Their lips didnt part for a long while. This was the kind of love and passion that kept their relationship going. It kept them going as well. Kate loved feeling wanted and appreciated. It had been such a long time since she had been with anyone before Nate. And now that she had him, she didnt want to let go.

Awww it was so awsome, and sweet!!! Please post more soon!!

Haha. This ones for Emma:

When Saturday came, both Nate and Kate were wrecks. It was only four o' clock, but their nerves were already starting to show. Kate was so nervous that she didnt know what to do with herself. She was so scared. Nate was worried. He wasnt sure what was going to come of the meeting with his siblings. He just wanted everything to be okay.

Kate sat at the kitchen table with her cup of coffee. She was contemplating whether to go through with this or not. She wanted to get out of it so badly but then again she wanted to do it for Nate. Nate entered the kitchen and seated himself at the table next to Kate. He put his hand on hers. "So..." Nate said. Kate chuckled. "So..." She mimicked Nate. "Are you nervous?" Nate asked. Kate nodded. "Yeah. I'm really nervous. How are they going to react? I mean, I'm almost old enough to be you mother...almost." Kate said half smiling. Nate smirked. Kate saw his reaction to her comment and hit his arm jokingly. "Hey! Thats not funny. Its the truth. The sad truth..." Kate said as her mood quickly changed. She looked down at her cup of coffee. "Kate, age shouldnt matter with us. We love each other. Remember that." Nate reassured Kate.

Kate looked up at Nate. She leaned over and kissed his lips gently. Nate smiled. Nate paused for a moment. Then he leaned in and kissed her this time. The kissed lasted for a long while. It became more and more intense. Kate grabbed Nate by the collar and pulled him closer. She wanted him. She always wanted him. But now it was all about getting her mind off of meeting Nate's family. Kate pulled away. From there she continued with her usual routine. She grabbed Nate's hand and instead of leading him to the couch, she led him to their bedroom upstairs. Kate closed the door then leaned against it. She looked Nate dead in the eye and smirked. Nate then knew. He walked over to her and put his hand on her hip. Kate put her hand on his and grabbed it. She guided his hand to different places on her body and finally let it rest near the top button of her shirt. Kate looked him in the eye once more and smiled. Nate stood there just looking at the woman standing before him. Kate was becoming impatient. "Come on baby. Come on." Kate whispered. Nate loved how she took control. It made him feel just like a little boy. He wanted to be controlled. It was the best part for him. He unbuttoned Kate's shirt and slipped it off her shoulders. He put his hands on both of her shoulders and rubbed them. Then he removed the shorts she was wearing. Kate took the initiative and began unbuttoning his pants. She pushed his pants as far down as he could. Nate slipped them off. Then they decided to go to the bed. Kate pushed Nate down on the bed. She placed her body on top of his. Kate looked down at him, raised her eyebrows and smiled. Ten minutes later, Nate was in full control of the situation. He always gained control of those situaions. When Kate wanted more than she could take from him, she gave Nate all the control. Nate was the only man that could make her feel the way she did when she was with him. Not even her ex-husband could do it the way Nate did. It was just one of the many reasons Kate loved Nate so much.

A half an hour later, Kate and Nate were putting their clothes back on. Now they had to go and face reality. Sex had definitely taken their mind off of things but that couldnt last forever. It was now 6:45. Kate and Nate headed downstairs. Kate headed to the kitchen and put the finishing touches on the lasagna she had prepared. Nate was busy cleaning up the rest of the house, making sure everything was in its right place. Then came a knock at the door. Kate came out of the kitchen and looked at Nate. Nate motioned for her to come with him to answer the door. She walked over to him. She was almost shaking. She couldnt believe how nervous she was letting herself get. Together they walked to the door and opened it.


Emma...hahaha...