Originally posted by dovesong


History *cringes* ick.

I hated history. Okay, I hated school in general, and now, I'm going back. Why I don't know, I must have had a brain infarct when I went and took that test.

But at least there is no History. Little English. Just lots of Anatomy and Physiology, and science stuffs. Which was yet another subject I HATED in school.

But I do get to learn about drugs. That's a plus. lol, j/k. And I get to learn how to give shots. So, um, I might be tempted to post, if I can get a victim, I mean a um, volunteer to let me practice on. And I don't mean practice giving them drugs, either! hehe. Anyone game?

*demonic laugh*
*lightening flash*

(This is the 500th reply btw)

*pushes Alex off the couch* Here ya go!!

*curls up* I'm scared of shots...

Originally posted by ks
mm-hmm...aka, "Torturer of the Couch Partners"


ALEX!! SHHHHHHHHHH!!! *puts my hand over Alex's mouth* Heh...I think skool is doing something to her mind...*hands Alex my duct tape*

500!!!!!!!!!!!! WooHoo!!!!
I have to do something really great for 500.....
Think.... think.....

OH YEAH, I could post more!!!......

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(Jinny entered her bedroom, only seconds before Teddy. She made a swipe at the clothes still piled on the bed, and they were once again in the floor. Teddy did not give her time to turn back around, but placed his hands on her sides and turned her to face him. They stood there staring at each other, neither moving for a few seconds before Teddy hungrily took her mouth in his own, in a kiss that stunned her and took her breath away. Her surprise lasted only briefly, as her hands moved to finish removing his tie, and unbutton his shirt. She traded kisses with him, pushing his hands away from her scantly clad body.)

Teddy: (taking a time out, to catch his breath) I kept thinking about what you said earlier. And your hands. And I just couldn’t concentrate on work. Now, I have to go in early Monday to finish my deposition on time.

Jinny: Yeah? Darn. And I was seriously concentrating on the laundry while you were at work goofing off.

(Teddy only smiles as he bent to kiss her again, his arms reach up to push her bra straps down, off her shoulders. He sighed heavily as he was rejected again. Jinny finished unbuttoning his shirt and pulled the tail up, out of his pants before sliding it down his arms and letting it fall to the floor. Her hands slid across his chest, slowly. Teddy closed his eyes and tilted his head back, savoring the feelings shooting through his body, like electricity. Teddy felt his pants being unbuttoned and slid to the ground. He felt Jinny’s hands on his legs and he lifted them one at a time as she slid them off. Jinny ran her hands all the way up he back of his legs, as she stood. She noticed the chill bumps standing up on his arms when she finally stood up completely. The look of desire on his face told her all she needed to know. )

(She slowly put her arms around his waist as she closed the gap between their bodies. Teddy followed suit and pull her tightly against him as he was finally able to gain access to her bra. Once the bra was out of the way, he just held her against him, growing more excited by the mere skin on skin contact. Though Teddy held her tightly, Jinny’s hands never stopped moving, stroking his back and arms, wherever she could reach. Teddy sighed one final time and turned them so that he could sit, then lay back on the bed, Jinny following suit.)

(Jinny waited until Teddy had scooted back onto the bed before joining him. As she started at his stomach and began a trail of kisses that lead to his nipple, where she paused briefly, then continuing on, to his neck, where she again slowed. When she paused to look at him, his eyes were closed and his jaw was clenched. When he opened his eyes to look at her a few seconds later, he took his first audible breath. Jinny smiled.)

Jinny: Hey, where have you been?

(Teddy only rolled his eyes, unable to speak, from the pleasure running through his body. Jinny grinned again, and continued her plight to who knows where. Teddy wasn’t sure where she was headed, but knew his self-control was taking an early detour. He put his arms underneath hers and pulled her up to face him, where he doesn’t give her time to protest before her takes her mouth in his, causing her to go weak.)

(Teddy soon had Jinny on her back, and began to visit all the landmarks that Jinny had visited on her map of his body. He could feel her body quiver as she sighed heavily, trying to control her breathing. She was unsuccessful and moaned softly. He could hear her occasionally gasp for breath as he continued his exploration. He stopped once he reached her flat stomach, knowing that in just a few short months, his son or daughter would change that, and kissed it once before he began his assent back up.)

(Jinny was shaking her head by the time he reached her top half again. Teddy could tell she was losing the battle to remain in control. She slips an arm underneath his as he kisses her neck, slowly, tenderly one last time before allowing himself to give in to her urgent gestures.)

(Jinny’s breathing finally returned to normal laying in Teddy’s arms afterwards. Neither spoke, but just lay, holding each other. Teddy turned onto his side and put his hand on her stomach, gently rubbing his hand back and forth across it. Jinny watched his face for a few minutes and smiled when he finally looked at her. He gave her a sheepish grin and shrugged. She put a hand up to his face and lightly pulled him down toward her own and lightly kissed him.)

Teddy: (smiling) I love you.

Jinny: (returns smile) I love you, too.

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*needle glistens in the light* *innocently* OH, Allllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeexx

Originally posted by dovesong
500!!!!!!!!!!!! WooHoo!!!!
I have to do something really great for 500.....
Think.... think.....

YAY!!!!!!!!!! UR SO NICE!!!



*needle glistens in the light* *innocently* OH, Allllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeexx


*closes my eyes* I can't look! I'm sorry Alex!! I really am!!! *hands u my teddy bear* Here...hold Mr. Bigglesworth!!!

dude whats up? im jus chillin like a villian laughin my booty off at my stupidity and I dont wanna go to school but I do...but not really...I spent so much money on a pair of pants last night and oooh well..and I got a white tank top...I was going get this other shirt but i was "hey thats what parents are for!"


AT THE COUNT OF 3 I WANT EVERYBODY IN THE PLACE TO BE TO SOME NOISE IF YAH DOWN WITH ME!



OOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH UR FIC IS AWESOME BY THE WAY!! i THINK U SHOULD ADD MORE!!!!!!!

your browsing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! add add add add add add add!

Originally posted by hockeybabe528
your browsing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! add add add add add add add!
*points fingers* BROWSER!!

shes been browsing for a while...could she be....ADDING!??!?!!?

Originally posted by hockeybabe528
shes been browsing for a while...could she be....ADDING!??!?!!?

She betta be!

It's the weekend, and I expect lots of posts to keep me entertained...POST MORE!! (its awesome btw)

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


(This is the 500th reply btw)

*pushes Alex off the couch* Here ya go!!

*curls up* I'm scared of shots...



:eek: ... :( I'm scared of shots, too! We can go hire someone to be her practice dummy...that could be a could method of sucking up!





ks

Originally posted by dovesong


*needle glistens in the light* *innocently* OH, Allllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeexx


Lauren! I leave for school for ten hours and I come back to find she is about to jab me with a needle. *grabs Mr. Bigglesworth* Ok, I can take it, as long as for every jab you make you post more... *closes eyes tightly and clinches teddy bear* Give me your best shots...just post more. I'm back for 48hrs and I expect a lot of posts!

Couch partner, get the orange juice and crackers ready-I might faint.






ks

Originally posted by ks




:eek: ... :( I'm scared of shots, too! We can go hire someone to be her practice dummy...that could be a could method of sucking up!


Maybe like...a heroin addict?

Originally posted by ks



Lauren! I leave for school for ten hours and I come back to find she is about to jab me with a needle. *grabs Mr. Bigglesworth* Ok, I can take it, as long as for every jab you make you post more... *closes eyes tightly and clinches teddy bear* Give me your best shots...just post more. I'm back for 48hrs and I expect a lot of posts!

Couch partner, get the orange juice and crackers ready-I might faint.


*runs to get the orange juice and cracker* Come on Alex! You can do it!!! :D

And Michelle, we DO want more for every shot.

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


*runs to get the orange juice and cracker* Come on Alex! You can do it!!! :D

And Michelle, we DO want more for every shot.


Exactly! I ain't doin' this for nothin'. Make it quick will ya...please?;)









ks

Originally posted by ks



Exactly! I ain't doin' this for nothin'. Make it quick will ya...please?;)


Come on Michelle!! She can't wait this long for a shot!!!! It's traumitizing to her small brain...I MEAN...um :D...*grins innocently* NVM...

Michelle...the heroin addict we hired is getting impatient

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


Come on Michelle!! She can't wait this long for a shot!!!! It's traumitizing to her small brain...I MEAN...um :D...*grins innocently* NVM...


Aye! Don't insult the size of my brain...blah. I think you need the shot!








ks

Originally posted by ks



Aye! Don't insult the size of my brain...blah. I think you need the shot!


Naaaaaaaah

Michelle, the heroin addict is getting really...really...freaky. He's being really impatient. You don't wanna loose two of ur fav ppl?! Do uuuuuuuuuu?! Wait...don't answer that

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
Michelle, the heroin addict is getting really...really...freaky. He's being really impatient. You don't wanna loose two of ur fav ppl?! Do uuuuuuuuuu?! Wait...don't answer that


Shh! Don't give her the opportunity to answer that. SHEESH! ...(rookie)


Michelle, I've built up myself so that I was ready for the shot, we went out and allowed some addict to pay us to let you give him the shot, and still you haven't arrived with it or more fic. I'm about to have to turn my attention to Chemistry *shutters* so please post more soon. I mean, REALLY soon! I'm even willing to get a shot, and so is Lauren...please, stick away!


*hands Lauren half of Mr. Bigglesworth*






ks

Originally posted by ks



Shh! Don't give her the opportunity to answer that. SHEESH! ...(rookie)


Michelle, I've built up myself so that I was ready for the shot, we went out and allowed some addict to pay us to let you give him the shot, and still you haven't arrived with it or more fic. I'm about to have to turn my attention to Chemistry *shutters* so please post more soon. I mean, REALLY soon! I'm even willing to get a shot, and so is Lauren...please, stick away!


*hands Lauren half of Mr. Bigglesworth*



:eek2: WHEN WAS THIS SAID?!?! I DON'T RECALL SAYING SHE COULD GIVE ME A SHOT! *squeezes Mr. Bigglesworth* DON'T COME NEAR ME WITH THOSE NEEDLES!

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


:eek2: WHEN WAS THIS SAID?!?! I DON'T RECALL SAYING SHE COULD GIVE ME A SHOT! *squeezes Mr. Bigglesworth* DON'T COME NEAR ME WITH THOSE NEEDLES!


I volunteered you. I figured the more people she has to practice on the more posts we should get. *grabs Mr. Bigglesworth* Here, Michelle, now you have FOUR objects to practice on. *hands Lauren an oreo* Chew on this, it might help!








ks

I am so TERRIBLY, TERRIBLY sorry guys. My computer decided to do some freaky stuff on me the other day and I couldn't get on. I finally got if fixed but I've been fighting with it for two days and haven't written.


I will thought and I promise I will post as soon as I can.

And thank you for all the volunteers.lol

Originally posted by dovesong
I am so TERRIBLY, TERRIBLY sorry guys. My computer decided to do some freaky stuff on me the other day and I couldn't get on. I finally got if fixed but I've been fighting with it for two days and haven't written.


I will thought and I promise I will post as soon as I can.

And thank you for all the volunteers.lol



Ugh, that computer of yours is so uncooroperative.

*hits couch partner with pillow to wake her up* I figured out what we should get, Michelle! ...a comoputer! Let's go find that Steve dude from Dell... *packs a bag of oreos and heads out the door dragging couch partner behind...leaving Mr. Bigglesworth to watch the computer for us.*






ks

K, scratch that plan. I just realized Steve is in Paris (according to his last commercial) and I'm broke. Also, Mr. Bigglesworth is stingy and won't tell us when Michelle posts more because he wants it all to himself. THEREFORE, we can collect all the change out from under the couch and sent Steve express mail. Here's the letter:


Steve,

Dude, Michelle needs a Dell ASAP.


The Couch Partners



There ya go. Now, we must venture under the cushions of the couch in order to gather enough change. You go down first, Lauren. If you're not up shortly I'll sent the bear down after ya!








ks

Originally posted by ks
K, scratch that plan. I just realized Steve is in Paris (according to his last commercial) and I'm broke. Also, Mr. Bigglesworth is stingy and won't tell us when Michelle posts more because he wants it all to himself. THEREFORE, we can collect all the change out from under the couch and sent Steve express mail. Here's the letter:


Steve,

Dude, Michelle needs a Dell ASAP.


The Couch Partners



There ya go. Now, we must venture under the cushions of the couch in order to gather enough change. You go down first, Lauren. If you're not up shortly I'll sent the bear down after ya!



*yawn* Mmhmm. *climbs under the couch and falls asleep*

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


*yawn* Mmhmm. *climbs under the couch and falls asleep*


Aye, aye, aye. Michelle, where you be?! I have a test everyday this week. Please relieve some of my stress...please!










ks

Originally posted by ks



Aye, aye, aye. Michelle, where you be?! I have a test everyday this week. Please relieve some of my stress...please!

ks

I can understand that. Here's more...

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(Teddy laid his head down on Jinny’s shoulder. They lay there for a time, until Teddy drifted off to sleep and rolled over. Jinny watched him get settled on his other side and turned back onto her back. She placed both hands on her stomach and lay their quietly, thinking to herself. She couldn’t imagine a living thing growing inside of her. She drifted off to sleep seeing herself tending to Joy, because she could not fathom what a child she produced would look like, or…)

(Jinny sat strait up in bed, startling Teddy. Was she to expect that any child she bore would act like her? Could she handle a tiny Jinny? She knew her life had been all but calm and copasetic. She had given her dad a run for his money as a young lady. She also knew that her life, up until now, had been crazy. Was she to expect the same from her own children?)

Teddy: (hand on her shoulder) Jinny?

Jinny: What?

Teddy: What is it?

Jinny: Nothing. Nothing, I’m fine. I’m sorry. Go back to sleep.

Teddy: Still dreaming about babies?

Jinny; (not completely a lie) Yeah. I’m okay. Go back to sleep.

Teddy: Okay. (kissing her) Night.

Jinny: Goodnight.

(Jinny still lay awake, now dreading more than just the next nine months of her life. She finally drifted off to sleep, to be awaken the next morning by Teddy, and his well placed kisses.)

Jinny: (smiles)

Teddy: Good morning.

Jinny: Morning. (stretching) You’re up early.

Teddy: It’s um, (turning to look at the clock) actually eleven.

Jinny: You’re kidding.

Teddy: (shakes his head)

Jinny: Wow. I haven’t slept this late, since… (trails off)

Teddy: (smiles) Everyone deserves a late day every now and then. (hoping up, taking Jinny’s hand to help her up) But, we have plans today, don’t we?

Jinny: We do indeed. So, you’re up for it?

Teddy: I’m up for the challenge. (nods) Yes.

Jinny: Great. I’ll shower and we can go.

Teddy: (smiling as she walks off) Need any help?

Jinny: (turns at the door and stops him) Oh, no. You’re not getting off that easily. Remember what I said. You got all the incentive you are going to get, last night.

Teddy: (kissing her) Can’t blame me for trying.

Jinny: (smiling) I’d blame you if you didn’t try.

Teddy: (smiles curiously as he watches Jinny walk away)

(Teddy knew that next weekend was Jinny’s birthday, so he sat on the edge of the bed and took this opportunity to think of something to do for her. His eyes wandered to her night table and quietly and slowly pulled the drawer out. He searched through the things in it and found nothing of circumstance, until he was putting things back the way he’d found them. He heard something rake across the bottom of the drawer. He searched a little deeper until he found the culprit. Teddy smiled to himself and nodded as a plan began to unfold in his head. He heard the shower turn off and quickly replaced everything as best as he possibly could. Jinny came from the shower rapped in a towel, drying her hair with another towel.)

Jinny: (smiling curiously) Why do you, all of the sudden, look like the cat that ate the canary?

Teddy: (smiling back) I was just thinking about how beautiful you are.

Jinny: (suspicious) And I believe you. I really do.

Teddy: Good. Ready?

Jinny: Sure. (looking down at her towel covered body) Should I just grab my bag, or do you think I’m still overdressed? (pulling off her towel) Better?

Teddy: (smiling) I think I’d like to keep that view to myself. (walking up and pulling her to him)

Jinny: (kissing him quickly and pulling away) No distractions for you today.

Teddy: (sighs and rolls his eyes) What happened to incentive?

Jinny: You got a preview last night.

Teddy: Then hurry up and get dressed. I can’t take much more of this.

Jinny: (smiling as she turns to dress)

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It isn't much, but I hope you like...........

Yes, indeed, I like. Now, it's off to study for tomorrow's Chemistry test...




Psssss....Lauren, did she get you with the shot or has she forgotten? :D








ks

I really enjoyed this but shame on you for leaving us wondering what is happening next. And poor Teddy he has to wait to for more incentive. lol.... MORE please.

hey Michelle...come on...dont you think we deserve some more..wait I dont even need to think about I know we deserve more!! please im tired and broke and tired and broke...please add more and help me!!:)

Originally posted by ks
Yes, indeed, I like. Now, it's off to study for tomorrow's Chemistry test...




Psssss....Lauren, did she get you with the shot or has she forgotten? :D


*slaps u* Shhhhh!!!!!

:D! Michelle, as always, this fic rox! More soon!

BROWSER BROWSER!!! hehe I love your fic and i hope that my pm did the trick;)

Originally posted by hockeybabe528
BROWSER BROWSER!!! hehe I love your fic and i hope that my pm did the trick;)

Okay, before I get ANOTHER post like this tonight, I'll post...

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(Jinny came from the bedroom shortly carrying her large black duffel. She smiled at him. He retrieved his own gun and they were finally on their way. Jinny was soon pulling into a parking lot in a part of town that was unfamiliar to Teddy. She looked over at him and gave him a reassuring smile. She reached into the backseat, grabbed her bag and opened the door. Teddy followed her into the building, where she showed her badge and chatted easily with the gentleman at the desk.)

Man: New partner again?

Jinny: Partner? Yes. But not that way.

Man: (curious look) ???

Jinny: Harry, meet Mr. Blumenthal. My husband.

Harry: Husband? You? (laughs loudly) Very good one, my friend. (barely able to talk) Very good.

Teddy: (just looks between them and smiles at Harry)

Jinny: Well, we’re going to be around for a while.

Harry: (smiling, nods) You know what to do.

Jinny: (nods her head as she turns to go) Thanks.

(Jinny grabbed some paper targets from a box as she walked into the firing range and piled everything on the small bench in front of her. Teddy watched as she set up a target and watched as the mechanism pulled it back against the far wall. Jinny took his gun and her own out of the bag and lay then on the bench. Then she got the ammunition out and loaded them both. Teddy noted how comfortable she was as she did so. He was just amazed at quickly and easily weapons handling came to her. He decided then that this might be good for him, to get a little more comfortable with his own weapon.)

Teddy: (takes the gun that Jinny offers him)

Jinny: So, you shoot pretty well, huh?

Teddy: (holding his weapon; shrugs; nods) Pretty well, yeah.

Jinny: Show me. For an officer, you have to score 129 out of 150, but since you’re only holds 7 rounds, we’ll say, 35 out of 70 will score you points, 50 out of 70, we‘re talking major rewards. Let’s see what you can do.

Teddy: (nervously) Um, okay. (holds gun up towards target)

Jinny: Okay, first of all, (placing her hands on his shoulders) You need to relax my friend. You fire it like that, and as little as it kicks, you’re shoulders are gonna be sore in the morning.

Teddy: (deep breath) Right. Relax.

(Teddy fired off all his rounds and Jinny brought the target in for closer inspection. There were only a few holes in the target, and Jinny smiled at him. She put up a new target and reloaded Teddy’s gun. She fired one shot, and brought the target close for inspection. It was slightly off center of the head. She nodded and sent the target back. She finished off the rounds in the gun and brought the target back. Each round was accounted for, and not far off from dead center. She laid the gun aside and removed the target, handing it to Teddy as she replaced it with a fresh one. Teddy stood, holding the target up, staring at it in amazement. He had only hit one, dead center, and he guessed it was probably only a lucky shot. This was amazing.)

Jinny: (having called his name for the third time) Hey!

Teddy: (startled) What? Sorry?

Jinny: (holds up her earphones to indicate that Teddy needs to put his on too)

Teddy: Right, sorry. (knowing she couldn’t hear)

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Hope you like it. :D

Originally posted by dovesong


Okay, before I get ANOTHER post like this tonight, I'll post...





oh come on, you know you love them!!!!

add more soon!!!!! BROWSER BROWSER!!!!;) lol this is sweet

YAY!!! Post more ASAP!!

*sits on the couch and stares*

here let me bump this fic up for you........you....you BROWSER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAHHHHHHHHHHAHAHAH

Originally posted by hockeybabe528
here let me bump this fic up for you........you....you BROWSER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAHHHHHHHHHHAHAHAH

Okay Okay!!! I get it. I'll post, sheesh...

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(Jinny turns back to the target firing off a lot more rounds than his own gun held. She brought the target back in and showed him the well placed holes. He counted a score of 140 for her. He raised his eyebrow and looked at her. She pointed to his headphones and he took them off self-consciously.)

Teddy: Sorry. 140? Wow. That’s got to be a record.

Jinny: Actually, that’s the lower end of my norm. You remember CD’s old partner, Angela? She holds the official record at 149. But we gave it back to CD when Angela left. She’s got 148.

Teddy: Wow. Out shot by a woman. A bunch of them.

Jinny: (smiles) You’ve just got to remember, we’ve made a profession out of it. Our lives, along with the lives of everyday Americans, like you, depend on it.

Teddy: And I’m just a lawyer.

Jinny: That’s an important job, too. A lot of criminals would walk without you.

Teddy: Thanks.

Jinny: (reloads her weapon hands it to Teddy) Here. Try this.

Teddy: What’s this? (checks the safety and flips the switch) (waving the gun around to feel the weight) It’s heavier than mine.

Jinny: (takes the gun back, after dodging Teddy’s aim a couple of times) Um, one point, your safety goes up, but, um, my safety goes down (flips safety back down) (nods).

Teddy: Sorry. I didn’t mean to…

Jinny: It’s okay. (hands it back) It’s a SIG Sauer P226. 9mm parabellum. Automatic. It is heavier than yours. Bigger too. (teasing) But don’t worry. No one has to know that your wife has bigger toys than you do. (winks)

Teddy: (smiles; slightly embarrassed; obviously intimidated) Right. So it holds…

Jinny: It holds 15 rounds. Weights just a little over 2 pounds fully loaded. The magazine release is here at the base of the handgrip. Kicks a little more, but once you’ve shot it a few times, you’ll learn to adjust. (points to the target at the end of the line, waiting for Teddy) Give it a shot.

Teddy: Right. (Teddy looked down the sights of the gun; concentrating hard on the target and pulls the trigger; nothing)

Jinny: (reaches over and hits the safety) That might help. (smiling innocently)

Teddy: Right. I looked at it, I guess I forgot.

Jinny: No big deal.

Teddy: (puts the gun down, turning around) You’re enjoying this aren’t you?

Jinny: (nods, smiling) Tremendously, yes.

Teddy: (mumbles to himself as he turns back around)

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Okay, there, lol, I hope you're happy, now. lol Enjoy it.

Originally posted by dovesong


Okay Okay!!! I get it. I'll post, sheesh...



i think Jinny should get 149...because I said so..yah hahah u know you love my posts! lol broswer wanna add more cuz once again im broke and bored

and i made a new page!!!!

*sits all alone on couch*

*pouts*

Michelle this fic rox, now I'm gonna sit all alone and wait

yes...got my school schedual...and yah no one has any classes with me...yup..pretty much..haha im trying to find someone anyone with a class with me...hmph please michelle dont you see my agony and pain adddddddddddddddddddd

I love it post more soon plz!

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
*sits all alone on couch*

*pouts*

Michelle this fic rox, now I'm gonna sit all alone and wait


:( I'm sorry I had to leave you alone for so long, couch partner. This has been the most hectic week yet. If it is a sign of things to come I might not make it through the school year. Anywhoo, I'm back on the couch, but you'll have to watch the computer for me because I have A LOT of studying today. Homework in every subject and plenty of tests tomorrow...ugh. Spring break...how far away are you?!

Oh well...Michelle, heeeeeeeelp...post more.







ks

Originally posted by ks



:( I'm sorry I had to leave you alone for so long, couch partner. This has been the most hectic week yet. If it is a sign of things to come I might not make it through the school year. Anywhoo, I'm back on the couch, but you'll have to watch the computer for me because I have A LOT of studying today. Homework in every subject and plenty of tests tomorrow...ugh. Spring break...how far away are you?!

Oh well...Michelle, heeeeeeeelp...post more.


Lauren do this, LAUREN do that...EXPECT PAY BACK STARTING MONDAY! Grr...

uhh yah im still going be here till sept 4th...so keep on adding!!!:)

Originally posted by hockeybabe528
uhh yah im still going be here till sept 4th...so keep on adding!!!:)

Haha, I'm happy for you. Wish I was. No, actually I don't, cuz I"m too excited now. I start school monday, so, there may be little of this fic, for a while....like for the next year.

I'll do my best to keep up with it, but here's more for you for now....

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(Teddy fired off two shots quickly and stopped to regain his balance, then continued, slowly, until he finally emptied the gun. He laid the gun down, turned around and sighed at Jinny, with raised eyebrows. Jinny laughed as she got up to bring the target in for inspection. She made a face as she contemplated his score.)

Teddy: Well?

Jinny: (still studying)

Teddy: Well? (pause; no reply) Jinny.

Jinny: (shrugs) 72.

Teddy: That’s not even half.

Jinny: (shakes her head) Nope.

Teddy: Damn.

Jinny: But, hey, it’s only your first time. Try again.

Teddy: Um, well, (shrugs) okay.

(Jinny loaded and reloaded her gun several times, allowing Teddy to discharge it. The final time, he held the gun up with shaking hands and arms. Jinny smiled and took it from him, discharging and reloading it one final time before putting it away. Upon inspection of her target, she pointed out that she scored a 145, about fifty points more than Teddy’s highest score. She winked at him as she turned to leave, him following closely behind.)

Teddy: Okay, I give. You win.

Jinny: Huh?

Teddy: You win. What do you want?

Jinny: (at the car as Jinny is putting the bag back in the trunk) It wasn’t win or lose, love. I told you that; just, I wanted you to be comfortable using a gun…

Teddy: Hey. I know that. And I know it wasn’t a bet. But, negotiations, well, I’m willing to admit that there are things that my wife are better at than me. (raising his eyebrows) And I’m not too proud to admit that I stink at this. So, I owe you. What do you want?

Jinny: (raises her eyebrow; smiles) Hmmmmm……

Teddy: No, you know what? Next weekend is your birthday. Let me plan something.

Jinny: (nods; smiling) Okay.

(They went through the weekend at home, quietly. Monday Jinny went back to work, happy to see Magda back at her desk waiting for Jinny. She quietly hugged Magda as she made her way to her desk. Kate instructed Jinny and Magda to include Raina in all further interrogations, and proceedings in the case at hand. Thought Jinny wasn’t completely pleased with her instructions, they traveled to the school one last time to question the students. They grouped the remainder of the students in a room and sat quietly, watching them for a few seconds. The kids stared curiously back and forth at each other.)

Jeremy: (to Jinny) What are we doing here?

Jinny: (raises her eyebrow) Any ideas?

Jeremy: No. We told you everything we know. Leave us alone.

Jinny: Well, see, (pause while she walks over to the table and leans down in front of him) I don’t think so.

David: (angry) We told you everything we know.

Jinny: (still face to face with Jeremy) No. You didn’t.

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Well, there you go, Enjoy.

ooh alright let me see...hmm this fan fic is awesome!!!! please add some more to keep me occupied....YOU SHOOK ME ALL NIGHT LONG YES YOU......sorry im listening to some quality music!! lalala add more

Originally posted by dovesong


Haha, I'm happy for you. Wish I was. No, actually I don't, cuz I"m too excited now. I start school monday, so, there may be little of this fic, for a while....like for the next year.



For...the...next...year?!?!?! *pulls out my frying pan* THIS IS ABSURD!!! *starts hitting everything in sight* I CAN'T WAIT THAT LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T EVEN WAIT A FRICKIN DAY *spazzes out* *stops* :lookaroun :blush:

I'm ok...*sits down and looks like a perfect chyld*

*gets up off the couch* *walks to the door* Sorry Alex, I'm going to Virginia...till laaaaaaaaaaaate Sat. but don't worry, I STILL might have internet connections...if we remember the laptop...

so my friend has our P/E teacher from last year and I have a study the period she has P/E soo I am like going switch into her class because our teacher was the greatest guy and I want him sooo badly this year as a teacher!!!!! yep...you see my sitution..pleae add for me!!

*screams* Im connected!!! For now at least, the place we're staying at is weird and we haveta do long distance to get on, so, I won't be on much. NEwho, post more while I'm on before I throw another temper tantrum

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


For...the...next...year?!?!?! *pulls out my frying pan* THIS IS ABSURD!!! *starts hitting everything in sight* I CAN'T WAIT THAT LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T EVEN WAIT A FRICKIN DAY *spazzes out* *stops* :lookaroun :blush:

I'm ok...*sits down and looks like a perfect chyld*



Aye, aye, aye....I leave her for a short time and she's threatening to beat herself.



Virginia?! That's like, four states north of me. Our couch isn't THAT big. Ugh...*gets Mr. Bigglesworth out from under the couch and sits him by me* There! Now I have a new, temporary couch partner.

Hurry back, Lauren, I don't know how trustworthy this bear is! ...or how good at Chemistry he is...-hmph-








ks

Originally posted by ks




Aye, aye, aye....I leave her for a short time and she's threatening to beat herself.



Virginia?! That's like, four states north of me. Our couch isn't THAT big. Ugh...*gets Mr. Bigglesworth out from under the couch and sits him by me* There! Now I have a new, temporary couch partner.

Hurry back, Lauren, I don't know how trustworthy this bear is! ...or how good at Chemistry he is...-hmph-



Actually, I was threatening to beat Michelle and everyone else in the world BEFORE I beat me. Um...maybe I shouldn't have said that.

BTW, I'm back *shoves Mr. Bigglesworth off the couch then picks him up and gives him a hug and sets him GENTLY on the ground* BTW, HE IS VERY TRUSTWORTHY!!! HMPH! I won him at this horse racing game...that is a lot like gambling *cough*

And I'm no betta at chemistry then him...I don't even have chemistry in 8th grade...sooooooo...-hmph-

NEW PAGE!! :dance: This calls for more!

Michelle- please add more!! we are like dying here, it is a crime to just leave us here like you did and since I dont have school for a while why dont you add more?? please??

Michelle, please!!!!!!!! I start skool tomorrow!!!!!! I go back to that hell hole! Just post!!!

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
Michelle, please!!!!!!!! I start skool tomorrow!!!!!! I go back to that hell hole! Just post!!!


:eek: They're doing it to you, too. AHHHH! I feel your pain, couch partner...I feel your pain:crying:








ks

Originally posted by ks



:eek: They're doing it to you, too. AHHHH! I feel your pain, couch partner...I feel your pain:crying:


I kno...*handcuffs myself to couch* I'm not going!

Okay, you all are the greatest. So, I have to post more...

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David: What do you want?

Jinny: (turning her head to face David) The truth.

David: We told you the truth.

Jinny: (standing up to face the three youths before her) That’s not the truth that Missy swears to.

David: (exchanging a glance with Jeremy) (stuttering) What’d she say?

Magda: (calmly from the corner) What do you think she said?

David: (shaking his head) What ever it was, it was a lie.

Jinny: Fine. Then we’re still at not knowing the truth. (shaking her head; then looking back at the kids) Someone is going down for murdering this kid. And it’s looking more and more like it’s going to be the four of you.

Jeremy: (quietly to David) Man, I don’t want to go to jail.

Jinny: (laughing) Jail? (shaking her head) No, my friend. We’re talking prison. (hard stare) Okay? You are at the age, where you’ll be tried as an adult.

Jeremy: (looking at David; fear in his eyes) No, man. I’m not going to prison.

Jinny: Very smart. Talk to me.

David: (puts a hand on Jeremy’s arms, shaking his head) Shut up.

Jinny: You know, why don’t you just sit down and shut up.

David: (staring at Jinny, quietly, jaw flexing)

Jinny: See, we’ll get to the bottom of this, with or without you.

Magda: (again, calmly from the corner) Only thing is, if it’s without you, there may be some obstruction charges tacked on to your sentence, too. Even if it turns out, you didn’t kill him.

Jeremy: (looks at David who shrugs and throws his hands up) We were painting the bridge.

Jinny: You mean you were vandalizing the bridge

Jeremy: (shrugs) Whatever. Jimmy; we tied a rope around his waist and he climbed over. He was almost finished, and we heard this noise at the other end of the bridge; like big heavy footsteps. Only, the started and stopped. We couldn’t decide if there was really someone there or if it was just our imagination. Then all of the sudden there was this guy standing there with a gun pointed at us, yelling to get off his property and leave him alone. Well, he kinda forgot about that rope we were holding and we ran. And when we got to the woods on the other side, we realized that Jimmy wasn’t with us. But we were too scared to go back.

Raina: So you just left him.

Jeremy: What were we supposed to do?! He was going to kill us!

Raina: You could have called the police for one.

Jeremy: Yeah? And tell them what? We were out after curfew; we were intoxicated. (shrugs) some of us; we were vandalizing public property; and what? While we were out running amuck, someone tried to kill us so we dropped our friend off a bridge and left him for dead while we ran for our lives?

Jinny: Well, that would have been a good start. Now, you have to add to that explanation, why you lied. (all three silent)

Monica: (speaking up for the first time, now through tears) Where’s Missy?

Jinny: She’s in a holding cell, at the station. We need a description of the man you said was on the bridge. The type of weapon he was using… (shaking her head) anything?

David: (finally giving up) We didn’t get a great view of him. He scared us, and we ran. He was tall. Older.

Magda: Thin? Overweight? What color hair?

David: Skinny. Tall and skinny. He had a hat on. I don’t know what color his hair was.

Monica: It was like, gray, or what do they call it? Salt and pepper hair.

Magda: Complexion?

David: He was white, but he was darker skinned, like he’d worked outside a lot.

Jinny: (nods) We’re bringing a sketch artist in. He’ll work with you all on a sketch of the man you saw.

Jeremy: What’s going to happen to us, now?

Jinny: That’s up to the DA. We can probably offer a good case for leniency. With continued compliance.

Jeremy: I don’t want to go to jail.

Jinny: We can’t make you any promises like that. Just that we’ll run it past them.

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There you go. Enjoy it.

I did enjoy it. That was awesome

cos of my addiction to your fan fic I have been trying to get my mind of it by doing other things which always leds me to the mall and now im a shopping addict and practically broke again (80$?) and its ur fault soooooooo please man i need more;) hehehhe

I'm back on the couch and I'm waiting for more!

still waiting for more cuz this rocks;)

Same here- hey let's get this party started (time for more)

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
I'm back on the couch and I'm waiting for more!



Yep, yep, I'm back too! The couch partners are here so let's get this fic on the road!

Couch partner, how was the first day of prison, eh, I mean school?








ks

Originally posted by ks




Yep, yep, I'm back too! The couch partners are here so let's get this fic on the road!

Couch partner, how was the first day of prison, eh, I mean school?



2 days down, 178 to go

It was boring...I like spanish though!

I can't stand my Spanish class. It is a bunch of spanish speaking people who are in there for an easy A.

I know it seems like I have dropped off the face of the earth, and so, I think I have. I'm sorry that I haven't posted, but I have been studying and too busy to write more. I do promise that I will write tons more and post it this weekend (okay, Sunday) if not sooner. But it doesn't look promising. I'm terribly sorry.

At the moment I have taken a short break from researching the West Nile Virus/Encephalitis for a formal paper. Anyways, back to the grind stone.



I did not fall off the face of the earth.... I was sucked up by aliens:
:ufo: :D

Originally posted by dovesong
I know it seems like I have dropped off the face of the earth, and so, I think I have. I'm sorry that I haven't posted, but I have been studying and too busy to write more. I do promise that I will write tons more and post it this weekend (okay, Sunday) if not sooner. But it doesn't look promising. I'm terribly sorry.

At the moment I have taken a short break from researching the West Nile Virus/Encephalitis for a formal paper. Anyways, back to the grind stone.



I did not fall off the face of the earth.... I was sucked up by aliens:
:ufo: :D


Michelle, I miss reading your fic, but to be quite honest I'm not around nearly as much as I was during the summer, therefore I'm not sitting around hourly for updates. I guess that's to say you're slightly forgiven;) I understand what you're going through with school...big time...ahh! Three tests Friday and more to come...aye,aye,aye...anywhoo, Labor Day I'll be back on on the couch, so I guess that's to say you have until this weekend:D



Couch Partner...now we have no excuse to not do our homework. Let's get bust on our work shall we!






ks

Originally posted by ks



Michelle, I miss reading your fic, but to be quite honest I'm not around nearly as much as I was during the summer, therefore I'm not sitting around hourly for updates. I guess that's to say you're slightly forgiven;) I understand what you're going through with school...big time...ahh! Three tests Friday and more to come...aye,aye,aye...anywhoo, Labor Day I'll be back on on the couch, so I guess that's to say you have until this weekend:D



Couch Partner...now we have no excuse to not do our homework. Let's get bust on our work shall we!


*stares at u blankly* Homework?! O, I've already done it. :D. I did it in like...two seconds. 27-51 ODD, for math, read part of a book, write a summary, make a text to self connection, and went up to a million ppl and said, "Hola, me llamo Magdelena"

As far Michelle...grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...I'll wait...I SUPPOSE

alright thanks for the update!!:) sweet...yah labor day...still not in school hehe but I cant wait for more

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


*stares at u blankly* Homework?! O, I've already done it. :D. I did it in like...two seconds. 27-51 ODD, for math, read part of a book, write a summary, make a text to self connection, and went up to a million ppl and said, "Hola, me llamo Magdelena"

As far Michelle...grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...I'll wait...I SUPPOSE



Oh me...don't worry, Michelle, I'll take care of her and the bear until Sunday. If it ain't up Sunday though, I'm gonna let her loose and I'll be riiiiight behind her;)

Have a nice day:D







ks

Originally posted by ks




Oh me...don't worry, Michelle, I'll take care of her and the bear until Sunday. If it ain't up Sunday though, I'm gonna let her loose and I'll be riiiiight behind her;)

Have a nice day:D


*growls*

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE














please!

yah the boards are up....so you wanna add more!!!:)

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


*growls*


*shakes couch partner furiously* Wake up! The boards are back that means Michelle will be back from her home planet soon! YAY! She should have tons to post....


Michelle, come out, come out, wherever you are...







ks

Okay, before I start studying the five chapters I'm having a test on tomorrow, and begin reading the five chapters (what they consider ONE lesson) that I have due for tomorrow, here is what I have written....

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Jeremy: I don’t want to go to jail.

Jinny: We can’t make you any promises like that. Just that we’ll run it past them.

Jeremy: (nods) How soon will we know?

Jinny: Probably not for a while.

Jeremy: (nods) Okay.

Jinny: We’re finished for now.

Monica: What about Missy?

Magda: She’s being released as we speak.

(Friday rolled around quickly and nothing more had been discovered on the case Jinny and Magda were working on. They sat at their desk eating pizza and chatting with Raina, CD and Nate. Teddy came through the door quietly, looking around to see about all the commotion. Jinny had her feet propped up on the desk, but quickly put them down and stood to greet him.)

Jinny: (quick hug) Hey. What are you doing here?

Teddy: I just came to check up on you. Remind you to hurry home tonight. It is your birthday.

Jinny: I know. And you’ve given me no hints. I thought you’d forgotten.

Teddy: I could never forget about you. I have a great night planned for us. I’m ordering take out.

Jinny: Yeah?

Teddy: (nods) Yes.

Jinny: And?

Teddy: (shakes his head) And you’ll just have to wait until you get home.

Jinny: (sighs heavily) Not even a slight hint?

Teddy: A hint?

Jinny: Yeah.

Teddy: (to himself) A hint? Well, let’s see, a hint. How about…

Jinny: Yeah?

Teddy: I can’t think of one, you’ll just have to wait.

Jinny: (bigger sigh, drops her head against his chest)

Teddy: The day’s almost over.

Jinny: (picks her head up and rolled her eyes)

Teddy: (looks at his watch) I’ve gotta go. I’ll see you later. (kisses her on the cheek) I love you. I’ll see you this evening.

Magda: (watches Teddy leave, then watches Jinny sit down, frustrated) Got something hot planned for tonight?

Jinny: (throws her hands up) I have no clue. He won’t give me any information. I’m dying here, and that’s all I get.

Raina: Must be something pretty special.

Jinny: He hasn’t breathed a word all week. It’s driving me crazy.

Raina: He’s such a sweet guy.

Magda: Yeah. And any other day, Jinny would agree with you.

Nate: Hey, a guy’s got to have his secrets. Come on. I mean, (shrugs) we can’t tell you everything about our lives. You guys surely don’t share everything with us. I mean, did was that red dress REALLY on sale? No, I didn’t think so. Thank you.

Jinny: (smiles but makes no comment)

Magda: All the same, I want details first thing Monday morning.

CD: Yes, details. If I can’t get a date for the weekend, I can at least get details from you guys about what I’m missing.

(Jinny is welcomed into her apartment by the cinnamon-tinged air as she pauses and breathes deeply. Teddy emerges from the kitchen, apron over his t-shirt and shorts, wiping his hands on a dish towel. Jinny’s eyes take in his appearance and smile.)

Jinny: Take out, huh?

Teddy: (shrugs) Last minute change of plans.

Jinny: (nods) Change of plans. Right. Smells good. I think.

Teddy: I’ve laid you out some clothes and some bath oils and stuff. Go take a good hot bath and change. Take you time. Dinner is still a ways off.

Jinny: Oooh, I’m feeling pampered.

Teddy: (smiles) (reaches down, kissing her lightly, lingering)

Jinny: (after breaking the kiss) Wow.

Teddy: That’s all you get until after dinner.

Jinny: Dinner? (reaching up for another kiss)

Teddy: Nice try.

Jinny: (sighs)

Teddy: Go. Bath. Change. Dinner.

Jinny: (in an exasperated tone) Sex?

Teddy: Maybe.

Jinny: Maybe?

Teddy: (smiles) Go. Bath…

Jinny: Change. Dinner. (turning around) I know. I’m going. God!

Teddy: (watches Jinny walk away, then turns back to his previous task; smiling; feeling rather proud of himself for coming up with such a great idea)

(Jinny looked at the clothes laying on the bed for a few minutes. Nothing out of the ordinary. Sweats and an old sweatshirt that she had stuffed in the back of her closet, and a pair of socks. Cinnamon bath oils. Jinny tried to think of what Teddy could possibly have planned, dressing her in such a way, but could really think of nothing. He had her completely perplexed. She sauntered into the bathroom and ran water, testing it with her foot before submerging herself and forgetting the past week and its disappointments. They still had not located anyone matching the description of the man the teens had described, yet there was still a young man dead, and an upset family looking for answers.)

(The longer Jinny soaked, the less she worried about the rest of the week, but grew more anticipatory of the things to come. She was still confused, making the events of the remainder of the evening even more exciting. She dried off slowly and lingered, while dressing. The shirt Teddy had chosen for her was too tight, causing her to examine herself closely in the mirror. She returned to the bathroom and weighed herself. This is where Teddy caught her.)

Teddy: (curious look) Hey. What are you doing?

Jinny: (obviously startled) You scared me.

Teddy: (smiling) Sorry. What are you doing?

Jinny: (smiling; holding up the shirt she had tried to put on) It didn’t fit. I just wanted to see if I had, (shrugs, suddenly feeling ashamed) you know, gained any weight.

Teddy: (puts his arms around her and kisses her) You’re beautiful. All of you, and I’m going to love you if you gain ten pounds or if you gain a hundred and ten pounds.

Jinny: Let’s not go that far.

Teddy: Sorry. But I will love you, no matter what.

Jinny: (smiles, looking into his eyes) I love you, too. (rolls her eyes in the direction of the hallway) So…

Teddy: Dinner? Yes, it’s ready. Come on.

Jinny: I have to put some clothes on first. (holding up the shirt still in her hands)

Teddy: Okay. Wear something old.

Jinny: Why? What are we doing? Repainting the guest room?

Teddy: Well, no. Just… Well, I guess it really doesn’t matter, but still…

Jinny: Okay. Old shirt. I get it.

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There temporarily ends the continuing saga of Teddy and Jinny. Where we go from here is anybody's guess. :D Until next time...:wave:

YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! Michelle posted more! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY!

Now can ya pleeeeeeeeeeease do it again 'czu school just started and I need something to boost my happy-ness to the next level! :D HEHE!

I LOVE IT! MORE PLEASE!

Okay, I haven't been on this site in a while because my computer and I have no seen eye to eye for a little while and then when I thought we had straightened out our differences my favorties disappeared! But I think we finally have it all worked out.

Anyway the point is I have spent the last 4 hours and 40 minutes reading all of this story and I love it! I can't wait to read more! So don't make me wait too long.

This is awesome!! I love this fic!! dude wht does teddy have planned??!//!/1/ school tomorrow please add more!

MICHELLE!!! U MOST POST!!! U HAVE NO IDEA WUT KINDA LIFE I'M HAVING. See, I won't be on the net as much b/c I have an attitude problem, and until my mom sees improvement, I won't be on...or maybe it was b/c I cussed in front of her...hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...does this explain wut kind of trauma I'm suffering?!?!?! And THEN, u leave us with a cliffhanger!!!! THIS IS CAUSING ME SERIOUS PSYCHOLOGICAL HARM!!!!!! *whines*

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
MICHELLE!!! U MOST POST!!! U HAVE NO IDEA WUT KINDA LIFE I'M HAVING. See, I won't be on the net as much b/c I have an attitude problem, and until my mom sees improvement, I won't be on...or maybe it was b/c I cussed in front of her...hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...does this explain wut kind of trauma I'm suffering?!?!?! And THEN, u leave us with a cliffhanger!!!! THIS IS CAUSING ME SERIOUS PSYCHOLOGICAL HARM!!!!!! *whines*



*tosses Lauren Mr. Biggleswroth and a handful of oreos* Dang it couch partner, just squeeze the bear and stuff your mouth before you get in even MORE trouble. This is no time to have parents on us, we have to be prepared for the rest of this fic!



Speaking of this fic...this is AWESOME! Heck, forget the guest room, are they turning it into a babies room?! This could be fun:D







ks

Originally posted by ks




*tosses Lauren Mr. Biggleswroth and a handful of oreos* Dang it couch partner, just squeeze the bear and stuff your mouth before you get in even MORE trouble. This is no time to have parents on us, we have to be prepared for the rest of this fic!



*squeezes da bear and stuffs my mouth full of the oreos* *puts tape on my mouth* Nope, I won't get in trouble

NEW PAGE!!! :dance:

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


*squeezes da bear and stuffs my mouth full of the oreos* *puts tape on my mouth* Nope, I won't get in trouble



Good! This is our cue to stare blankly at the computer in anticipation...*jeapordy music*







ks

please add more cos i am dying here, I wrote my first essay and it sucks egg, and I am spazing cuz it is like trash....yah haha please add more to inspire me to do better...I gotta go do homework:( ttyl but please add more!!! this is awesome!!

COME ON!!! ANY DAY NOW!! I'M GETTING IMPATIENT HERE!!! I HAVE ONLY 2 HOURS ON THE COMP A DAY DURING THE WEEKENDS!!! *stops*


:lookaroun

I need a sedative...

dude!!! I am on my first weekend!! I KNOW you want to add more!!!

COME ON!! I GOT ON EVEN WHEN IM NOT SUPPOSED TO JUST TO SEE IF U POSTED!!! *cries*

*pries eyes open and stares at computer blankly*








ks

Originally posted by ks
*pries eyes open and stares at computer blankly*


I'm gonna be sick, pleez Michelle, I feel siiiiiiiiiiiiiick

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


I'm gonna be sick, pleez Michelle, I feel siiiiiiiiiiiiiick



*nods in agreement* Me too...something fierce!










ks

Hey, here I is. Okay, so I'm late. Okay, so I'm REALLY late. But I have something that I really hope that you will enjoy, and perhaps you will find it in your little ole pea-pickin' hearts to forgive me *bats eyelashes* *innocent smile* I know it isn't much, but I'm trying really hard to keep it up so that I can post again this week....

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Teddy: Well, no. Just… Well, I guess it really doesn’t matter, but still…
Jinny: Okay. Old shirt. I get it. I’m going.
Teddy: Oh, and, um, no bra. (winks at her) I love you.
Jinny: Yeah, I’m sure you do.
Teddy: I do. Dinner is on. Hurry up.
Jinny: Okay.

(Jinny put her clothing on quickly and returned to find a table full of wonderful foods. She raised her eyebrows and looked at Teddy who smiled at her. He took off his apron and laid it on the counter as he came over and pulled out the chair for her. She kissed him quickly and sat down. Dinner was over in about an hour and they sat talking softly for a few minutes. Jinny got up to clear the table, but Teddy stopped her.)

Teddy: I’ll clear the table and do the dishes later.
Jinny: No, it’s okay, I don’t mind.
Teddy: No, (taking the plate out of her hands) I’ll do them later.
Jinny: (feeling the challenge) Oh? And how are you going to stop me?

(Smiling, Teddy reached out and grabbed Jinny’s arm and turned her around. He kissed her on the neck as she felt something cold go around first one wrist and then the other. Jinny suddenly felt panic and pulled away, trying to free herself to no avail. So looked up at Teddy, eyes wide. Seeing him smiling back at her for some reason, provided her no reassurance.)

Teddy: I was just curious, you know. Have you ever actually been handcuffed yourself? (shrugging) Happy birthday.
Jinny: There’s always a first time. (watching Teddy come toward her slowly) What are you doing?
Teddy: (backing her against the counter, kissing her neck; speaking softly) Watch and learn.
Jinny: No, (turning her head away) I’m mean, really. What are doing?
Teddy: Birthday surprise. (backing away, slightly) Surprise!
Jinny: (taking a deep breath as he continues) Teddy.
Teddy: Shhhhhh… Don’t talk.

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Like I said, sorry it isn't much, but I'm working on it, and I promise to TRY to have more for you tomorrow. Let me know if you are enjoying it. I can always stop it or postpone it for a year. LOL








Would I do that???

Originally posted by dovesong
Hey, here I is. Okay, so I'm late. Okay, so I'm REALLY late. But I have something that I really hope that you will enjoy, and perhaps you will find it in your little ole pea-pickin' hearts to forgive me *bats eyelashes* *innocent smile*

Gee, I didn't even ask if you missed me....:D lol

Originally posted by dovesong
Hey, here I is. Okay, so I'm late. Okay, so I'm REALLY late. But I have something that I really hope that you will enjoy, and perhaps you will find it in your little ole pea-pickin' hearts to forgive me *bats eyelashes* *innocent smile* I know it isn't much, but I'm trying really hard to keep it up so that I can post again this week....

Like I said, sorry it isn't much, but I'm working on it, and I promise to TRY to have more for you tomorrow. Let me know if you are enjoying it. I can always stop it or postpone it for a year. LOL

Would I do that???

Well I should hope you wouldn't do that. I have already have enough bad news to last me the rest of this year. I mean can you believe they have the nerve to think they can recast Theodore with an imposter. I can't believe it. So for you wanting to postpone your story for a year forget it. How can you do that to these two. Jay is also unreplaceable. Jay is the one and only Teddy.

Originally posted by Jeanie


Well I should hope you wouldn't do that. I have already have enough bad news to last me the rest of this year. I mean can you believe they have the nerve to think they can recast Theodore with an imposter. I can't believe it. So for you wanting to postpone your story for a year forget it. How can you do that to these two. Jay is also unreplaceable. Jay is the one and only Teddy.

*stares* What?

NEwayz...Michelle...sweet caring Michelle...HOW could u POSSIBLY leave us right THERE?!?!

599

600!!! This calls for mooooooore

AHA! New page tooooooo!!

holy wack unlyrical lyrics andre- alright nvm....THIS IS AWESOME AND PLEASE ADD MORE!!!!:)

Wow, 600, huh? How great. Okay, well, here's more.. I worked long and hard on this, so I really hope that you enjoy it..............

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(Jinny does as she is told and closes her eyes, forgetting about her predicament momentarily. Teddy puts his arms around her waist and directs out of the kitchen and down the hall, backwards, as he continues his trek from one side of her neck to the other, occasionally stopping to nibble on an earlobe, or to kiss her on the lips, which she hungrily accepts. As he begins to neglect her lips more, she makes an effort to draw him closer, only to be reminded that she cannot. She whispers his name in her urgency to be freed, but is hushed by his mouth on hers, again. Jinny stops as she feels the bed against her legs. Teddy guides her onto the bed slowly, laying down beside her.)

(She squirms slights, trying to find a comfortable position to lay in. Finally, she is quiet, looking up into his smiling eyes. He bends down and kisses her again, pulling away slowly. He reaches a hand to slide it up, under her shirt, to run it across her soft skin. She smiles at him, as he watches her face for signs of pleasure. She began to relax slightly as he continued to move his hands underneath her shirt. She closed her eyes, enjoying every moment. When her eyes opened again, his shirt was gone and she sat up, slowly so that he could undo her restraints. He shook his head and presented a pair of scissors as he winked at her.)

Jinny: (eyes wide)

Teddy: That’s the reason I wanted you to wear something old. Because I know you. And I know that if they come off, they aren’t going back on. Not you anyways.

Jinny: Ahhh. (smiling shyly) Just remember, my friend. Paybacks are hell.

Teddy: (smiling) That’s what I’m counting on.

Jinny: (smiles) So, what are you saying? That you want…

Teddy: No. What I mean is, (pause, shaking his head) never mind.

(Jinny watches as her shirt is shed off, in two separate directions and she’s left topless. She looks up at Teddy one last time, timidly, which was a feeling she had not felt around a man for a long time. Teddy smiled reassuringly as she scooted closer to her, kissing her shoulder, and around the back of her neck. A sigh escaped her lips, though she tried to refrain. As he continued, chill bumps erupted all over her body and she shivered slightly from his breath on the back of her neck. Jinny tried to position herself so that she had some access to him, with her inhibited reach, but it did not last long.)

(Teddy smiled behind her back, and removed himself from her reach. He placed pillows behind her back and slowly eased her to a laying position. He resumed his place beside her for several minutes, alternating kisses from her neck to her chest. She closed her eyes as her breathing became more deep and slower. Teddy could tell she was becoming more aroused with each passing minute, but did not halt his efforts. He slowly lingered to her lips, where he was met with a fierceness that he could never have imagined. Teddy found it very difficult to resist her and found himself enjoying her rebuttal for several minutes. He did not want his own urges to overshadow his carefully planned evening, and so he reluctantly pulled away. Teddy had to remain quiet, eyes closed, for several minutes to regain his composure. When he opened his eyes and took a deep breath, he found Jinny smiling back at him.)

Teddy: (smiling) Almost.

Jinny: (smiling back) Haha. Let me go, and I’ll show you exactly what I can do to help those urges.

Teddy: (shaking his head; smiling) Not a chance.

Jinny: (frustrated) Why are you doing this to me?

Teddy: (worried for a minute) What? You mean you don’t like it? This? (kissing first one side of her neck) Or this? (then the other) Or maybe this? (ducking his head to her breasts, where he lingered)

Jinny: (eyes closed; savoring the moment; not immediately realizing he had stopped again)

Teddy: Somehow, it seems like you’re enjoying it.

Jinny: (deep breathing; no immediate response)

Teddy: But, if you’re not, just tell me where the keys are and I’ll let you go.

Jinny: (finally finding her voice) I didn’t exactly say I didn’t enjoy it, I just… (pause; thinking)

Teddy: You just didn’t think I had it in me? Is that it? (teasing) Me? College prep, momma’s boy…

Jinny: No, that’s not exactly what I was thinking.

Teddy: Oh?

Jinny: You said, if I tell you where the keys are?

Teddy: Yeah…

Jinny: (panic beginning to show) Where did you get these? Did you get them out of my bag?

Teddy: No. I didn’t touch your bag. Why?

Jinny: Teddy… Where did you get them from?

Teddy: I got them out of your night stand. Why? What’s the big deal?

Jinny: Out of that (indicating with her head) night stand?

Teddy: Yeah, (beginning to worry himself) Why?

Jinny: Oh, God. Oh, God.

Teddy: What?… Jinny, what is it? What?

Jinny: I don’t have a key for these.

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Okay, well, now we must part, cuz I have HOMEWORK!!! ick

:eek2: No keys! :lol: FUNNAY! More please! Let's see what's gonna happen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE IT!

Dern it, Michelle! Get yourself back here! This is the first day in so long that I'm not like enveloped with homework, and you leave me THERE! HELLO?! Have some sympathy. PLEASE post more.






ks

She doesn't have the keys? Oh this is great!! Post MORE soon!

:rotflmao:

OMG, Michelle, this rox, u gotta post more!

Michelle, more please? I need something to lighten my mood.

wait whats going on? please add more to help me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 this rocks

MICHELLE! MORE PLEASE!

I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE

Michelle! Where are you? It's been way too long a wait.









ks

Originally posted by ks
Michelle! Where are you? It's been way too long a wait.

ks

I'm here, just way behind. Here's more.........

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Teddy: You’re joking right? I mean, as some evil plan to get back at me? You’re joking?

Jinny: No. Teddy, these are Magda’s. She has the keys.

Teddy: Oh, God. I thought they were all the same. I mean, like, if you have a key for one, you have a key for all. It doesn’t work that way?

Jinny: (head back on the pillow, eyes closed) No.

Teddy: Then I’ll just call Magda. She can come over here and…

Jinny: No, I don’t think so.

Teddy: What? Why? You can’t stay like this.

Jinny: You think I want my partner to know all my kinky sex habits? You are not calling Magda. Absolutely not. No way. Out of the question.

Teddy: Then how are you getting them off? Want me to call the Captain? See if she has a spare key?

Jinny: (stares at him harshly)

Teddy: I’ll call Magda. I’ll drive over there or I’ll have her meet me somewhere.

Jinny: Oh, God. I’m dead. I’m never going to live this down. (bright idea) Hey wait, you’re a lawyer, you’re good at making up lies…

Teddy: Why, thank you.

Jinny: No, come on. Really, you can’t make up something? Teddy, if Magda found out about this…

Teddy: (picking up the phone) I’ll come up with something. What’s her number.

(Teddy dials the number that Jinny quotes from memory, but there is no answer. After leaving a message he tries a second number, but still hangs up without saying a word. When he looks at Jinny, her expression is quizzical. He smiles and tosses the phone aside, jumping on the bed. When the bed stops bouncing and he settles beside her, head on his hand, he answers her.)

Teddy: I guess she isn’t home. There wasn’t any answer.

Jinny: Oh, great. Absolutely wonderful. What are we supposed to do now?

Teddy: (watched her for a minute then bent down to kiss her neck and whisper in her ear) Lay back and enjoy the ride.

Jinny: (trying to pull away, but finding herself unsuccessful) You are so, NOT funny right now.

Teddy: (still low, suckling her earlobe) I’m trying to be funny. I’m trying (pause to kiss her) to get you to calm down and enjoy it. She’ll call back.

Jinny: (opening her mouth to speak)

Teddy: Shhhh…… don’t speak. (kissing her neck) Just relax.

Jinny: Relax?

Teddy: (still kissing; calmly) Um hmm.

Jinny: (relaxing) Um hmm. (deep breath; eyes closed; enjoying every moment) Right.

(Teddy once again agreed with her. Sliding down beside her more, he began paying more attention to other parts of her body, that he had so far neglected. Her breathing came more rapidly now as she tried to maintain some semblance of being calm. Though he could not see them, her hands clenched the bedspread beneath her. He undressed her lower half, lightly massaging her bare feet before working his way back up.)

(Teddy eased himself down, on top of her, holding himself up, slightly, to keep from hurting her hands. Jinny raised herself up slightly, giving herself access to his chest, for which she took full advantage. The longer Jinny continued her efforts, the less control Teddy maintained, until he finally gave in, himself. She and accepted him eagerly, and inhaled deeply as she did so.)

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There you go, Until next time. Wish me luck.

Well...at least they're Magda's...not like...John Jr's...*cackles evilly*

*ahem* NEwayzie, this is great *expecting more ASAP*

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
Well...at least they're Magda's...not like...John Jr's...*cackles evilly*

*ahem* NEwayzie, this is great *expecting more ASAP*

Oh now that wpuld make for an interesting twist! :lol: I LOVE IT MORE PLEASE!

ahhhhhhhhh add more!

Good luck, cause if you don't post soon you'll need it;)

Just kiddin'...kinda. Ya never know what Mr. BIgglesworth is capable of.

Anywhoo, awesome as ever. Looking forward to more so incredibly soon...









ks

Originally posted by ks
Good luck, cause if you don't post soon you'll need it;)

Just kiddin'...kinda. Ya never know what Mr. BIgglesworth is capable of.

Anywhoo, awesome as ever. Looking forward to more so incredibly soon...



MR. BIGGLESWORTH IS NOT A MURDERER!!!!!!!!!!!!!

O well...I could change that if u don't post

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
MR. BIGGLESWORTH IS NOT A MURDERER!!!!!!!!!!!!!

O well...I could change that if u don't post



I didn't say he was a murdered. (I might of thought it, but I didn't see it) Who knows, he could go into her room one night and still all her school books and leave her tons of money and fully educate her daughter and then she would have nothing to do with her time but post more for our enjoyment.

...To quote Jo:

"Now there's an idea!"


More soon please, or ya never know what couch partner and I are capable of;)





ks

Originally posted by ks
I didn't say he was a murdered. (I might of thought it, but I didn't see it) Who knows, he could go into her room one night and still all her school books and leave her tons of money and fully educate her daughter and then she would have nothing to do with her time but post more for our enjoyment.

...To quote Jo:

"Now there's an idea!"


More soon please, or ya never know what couch partner and I are capable of;)


Muaha

MICHELLE! I'M USING MY 5000 POST ON THIS STORY SO PLEASE HURRY UP AND POST MORE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


















Thanks! :p

please add!!!

Have you gotten pre-occupied again?







ks

Ooooooooooo Micheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelle. I need mooooooooooooooooooooooore. I mean, I've been having a pretty crummy time here, I am suffering from box syndrome, when I get shoved in a box by sista (aka Kerri) and then when I come out I get poked with sticks. And THEN she ate my support group. AND THEN I tried killing Larry, the devil like object who's a turtle that rox on it's back, by DROWNING HIM, yet I failed to notice that he's a turtle and they can't be drowned. And THEN I lit him on fire, but then I hadta to put him out, b/c I felt I wouldn't have NE place in life if I didn't have a devil like object to torture. So, NOW, I've been told that I'm a monster, and I need more fic!!!


This all happened last night *sniff*

BROWSER!!! BROWSER!!! U ARE BROWSING!!! BROWSER!! *turns on sirens and lights* *get on intercom* ATTENTION LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!! WE HAVE A BROWSER ON THE LOOSE!!

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
BROWSER!!! BROWSER!!! U ARE BROWSING!!! BROWSER!! *turns on sirens and lights* *get on intercom* ATTENTION LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!! WE HAVE A BROWSER ON THE LOOSE!!

Hey, I'm not JUST browsing, I posted... on another story, but I POSTED!!!!!!!
Here, I'll post more, lol......

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(Neither were aware that such ecstasy could exist. The duration of their love-making extended for many hours, until neither felt capable of continuing. Teddy held Jinny in his arms afterwards inhaling her scent of her recently washed hair. Neither spoke for a time afterwards. The phone rang, startling an almost asleep couple. Teddy glanced at the clock to notice the time was almost midnight.)

Teddy: (answering the phone) Hello? (pause) Hey, Magda. Yeah, I did call. (pause) Good, thanks. Hey, listen, um, Jinny wanted to talk to you…
Jinny: Oh, I wanted to talk to her? Wait just a minute here… Hey, Mag, (as the phone is thrust to her ear), Yeah, I’m having a great birthday. Yeah. (pause) Yeah, yeah. Everything is great. (pause) Thanks. Listen. I need you to do me a favor and don’t ask any questions. Can you do that? (pause) Yeah. Okay. Here’s the deal. You remember the handcuffs that I have of yours? (pause) Yeah, well, I need the keys to those. (pause) Yes, tonight. Now. (pause) I told you not to ask. Can you just do that for me? (pause) Please. Thank you. (pause) What? (pause) Where? (pause) I’ll have Teddy meet you there. Great. Bye.
Teddy: I’m meeting her where?
Jinny: They are in her locker at the station. I told her you’d meet her there.
Teddy: (nods) Okay. I’ll be back.
Jinny: (calls to him as he’s leaving) Don’t you dare tell her anything!
Teddy: Not a word, I promise.
Jinny: (skeptical; calling after him) And I believe you, too.

(Magda sat in her car waiting outside the station waiting for Teddy to show up. Her wait wasn’t long, so she got out of her car, and walked across the street. Teddy was looking around, so she called out to him.)

Magda: Teddy, hey.
Teddy: Hey. Thanks for coming out. I really appreciate this.
Magda: It’s really not a problem. So, why isn’t Jinny here?
Teddy: Um, she’s not feeling well.
Magda: (not believing) Uh huh.
Teddy: (caught) (innocent look)

(They traveled up in the elevator in the silence to the sixth floor. When the doors opened, they were met by a tired eyed Captain McCafferty.)

Kate: Magda, you’re here late. (looking at Teddy) Everything okay?
Magda: (eyes wide) Um, yeah. Everything’s good. Jinny just needed…, um, something… um, out of her… Uh, I mean, MY locker. Teddy, uh, (putting her hands on his arm) is just here to pick it up.
Kate: (skeptical; looking between them) Uh huh. Okay. Well, I’m going. (pushes past them to the elevator) Have a good weekend. Mr. Blumenthal.
Teddy: Captain.
Magda: You too, Captain. See you Monday morning. (when the elevator closes; looks at Teddy and rolls her eyes) Oh, God. That was bad.
Teddy: (smiles)
Magda: (on their way into the locker room) You tell Jinny that she owes me big time for this.
Teddy: I’ll tell her. (as he accepts the keys) Thank you so much.
Magda: You’re welcome. (pause) You, uh, think you can figure out how those work? Or do you think you need me to stop by and help out?
Teddy: (shocked) Uh, I think I can figure it out. Thanks.
Magda: You mean, Jin would kill you.
Teddy: (innocent smile) Uh, yeah. Something like that. (holding up the key) Thanks.
Magda: Sure. (calling after him) Tell Jin Happy Birthday.
Teddy: (waving back over his shoulder) I will, thanks.

(Teddy returned home shortly to find Jinny in much the same manner as he had left her, only her disposition was not as cheerful. She turned over quickly, presenting to him her hands. Jinny heard the keys hit the night stand then felt the bed depress with Teddy’s weight. Then she felt his fingers caressing her arms lightly.)

Jinny: Hello?
Teddy: (quietly) Hey.
Jinny: Let me go.
Teddy: (still caressing; quietly) Oh, come on.

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There.........forgive me?

Originally posted by dovesong

There.........forgive me?

No..b/c...u left us hanging again.

:D

NEwayz, post more soon!

Browser...








ks

Michelle,

Great job as usual and it seems like they always catch you browsing don't they. More please

Originally posted by Jeanie
Michelle,

Great job as usual and it seems like they always catch you browsing don't they. More please

It's our job. It's our purpose in life. ;)

New page! Go ME!!

BROWSER!! *turns on the browser sirens again*

BROWSER!!!

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
It's our job. It's our purpose in life. ;)


Yep, it's quite fulfilling.







ks

Okay, since I'm being stalked and tracked on every board in this place, lol, *coughkscough* I'll post more....

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(Teddy took a deep breath and found his way through her thick hair to her neck. He kissed her softly causing chill bumps to rise all over her body. She closed her eyes and drew in a deep breath, savoring the moment. As he continued, Jinny moaned softly, speaking softly, inaudible to Teddy’s ears. Jinny tried to turn back, but Teddy stopped her. A louder sigh escaped her lips and Teddy laughed.)

(Teddy quickly reached for the keys and released her hands. She turned quickly, rubbing her wrists. Once Teddy returned from putting the cuffs away, Jinny was undressing him immediately. It took no time for Jinny to have teddy completely undressed and pinned on his back. He was slightly shocked at the urgency with which she worked. She showered him with kisses from his head and neck to his waistline and then returned. He waited no longer. He rolled, forcing Jinny onto her back. After a few quick, hard kisses, he made love to her with renewed strength.)

(Jinny laid in Teddy’s arms, breathing heavily. The sun was beginning to peep through the window and Jinny was still caressing Teddy’s chest with her finger, breathing in his scent. Jinny was just beginning to drift off when the phone rang. She jumped and reached for it.)

Jinny: Hello? (pause) Hey, Mag. (pause; blushing) Yeah, I’m feeling better thanks. (pause) No, it wasn’t morning sickness. (pause) Well, I was, um, well… morning sickness, I guess. (pause) Yeah, thanks, Mag. Bye. (hanging up the phone; sarcastically) Happy birthday to you, too.

Teddy: I can’t believe you just (emphasizing) LIED to your BEST friend.

Jinny: (stretching) Yeah, well…

Teddy: (smiling)

Jinny: (laid for a few more minutes, looking at the ceiling and then rose) I need to get up.

Teddy: (grabbing her arm) Why? Come on, day down and sleep for a while. (smiling) You wore the baby out last night. Come lay down, and let the baby get some rest.

Jinny: (blushing, smiling)

Teddy: Come on. You know you want to…

Jinny: That is so tempting…

Teddy: It’s Saturday…

Jinny: (climbing back into bed and cuddling with him) Okay, you talked me into it.

Teddy: I knew I could.

(They lay together, finally drifting off into a dreamless sleep. Neither stirred for several hours. The phone rang several hours later, awakening them both. Teddy made it to the phone first, answering it.)

Teddy: Hello? (pause) Hey dad. What’s up? (pause) I don’t know, I’ll ask her. (to Jinny) Hey, mom and dad want to know if you want to join them for dinner tonight?

Jinny: (makes a face) Um, sure, we don’t have anything else to do.

Teddy: Sure, dad, we’d love to come. (pause) Great. We’ll see you tonight at seven. (pause) Give mom my love. (pause) Bye.

Jinny: (smiles at Teddy once he hung up the phone)

Teddy: You really don’t want to go, do you?

Jinny: (smiles shyly) It’s not that. I’m still just tired.

Teddy: Well, we have some time. Why don’t you lay back down, and get some rest.

Jinny: (shakes her head) No, I’ll just going to lay here for a minute, and them I’m getting up.

Teddy: Okay.

(Teddy walked through the apartment and then returned to find Jinny sleeping soundly, once again. He laid the blankets over her lightly, so that he didn’t wake her and wandered off to shower and prepare for their evening with his parents. He was glad that his parents liked Jinny. He was really afraid that they wouldn’t not agree with his decision to rekindle their relationship. They had been appalled by her actions at his birthday party, but had supported his decision to get back together with her, and marry her, without offering any unwanted advice.)

(Teddy finished showering and dressed. Once again, he checked on Jinny to find her in the same position as before, snoring lightly. He let her sleep as long as he could before waking her to get ready for the evening. She prepared quickly, fretting the entire time. As she rushed by Teddy one last time, muttering to herself, he grabbed her shoulders and stopped her. He kissed her, harshly, at first. She melted into his arms, then returned the kiss. They parted after a moment longer.)

Teddy: (putting his arms around her) When are you going to stop panicking every time my parents want to get together?

Jinny: (smiling; hugging him in return) Probably never. Why?

Teddy: You know, tonight would be a great night to tell them they’re going to be grandparents for real.

Jinny: (deep breath, eyes wide) Um, well, (stuttering) yeah, we could.

Teddy: They’re going to find out eventually. (rubbing her stomach)

Jinny: (blushing) I know.

Teddy: What do you think of tonight?

Jinny: I’ll think about it.

Teddy: (smiles; arms around her) Deal.

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There you go, enjoy it......

:clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

YAY MICHELLE! I LOVE IT! MORE PLEASE!

Haha so what is that? 3? 4 times in one night?

:grineyes: :grineyes: :grineyes:

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
Haha so what is that? 3? 4 times in one night?

:grineyes: :grineyes: :grineyes:

haha, who's counting, lol

Afterall, it IS her birthday.

*demonic laugh* *lightning flash*

Originally posted by dovesong
haha, who's counting, lol

Afterall, it IS her birthday.

*demonic laugh* *lightning flash*

Hehehehe! :grineyes:

please add more because I suprisingly did well on my physics quiz and I really want more!!! this rocks!

Originally posted by dovesong
Okay, since I'm being stalked and tracked on every board in this place, lol, *coughkscough* I'll post more....





*innocent look* ME? :lookaroun



Someone has to keep up with you! ...You're welcome;)









ks

Haha, well thank you.... I have more written, but it isn't typed yet, so I can't post it... I will type it up tonight and tomorrow, and post tomorrow for the weekend, or at least until Sunday or so, because I work Friday night.

So, if I don't post tonight, I will definitely post tomorrow. Unless I'm dead....

Originally posted by dovesong

So, if I don't post tonight, I will definitely post tomorrow. Unless I'm dead....



Looking forward to it, and 'death' is no excuse. I say you teach your daughter how to type. A back up plan is needed!








ks

because of the door that got in my way, I got hurt, and I think you should add more;) haha this rocks

Originally posted by ks
Looking forward to it, and 'death' is no excuse. I say you teach your daughter how to type. A back up plan is needed!



:rotflmao: Yea, that's wut I'm saying...either that or write it all and send it...tooooooo...me?

Originally posted by ks
Looking forward to it, and 'death' is no excuse. I say you teach your daughter how to type. A back up plan is needed!

ks

So, death isn't a good excuse? Cuz I'm puking my guts up and I'm really wishing I was dead...

I got sick at shcool and now, I'm high on Phenergan, so I will post it Saturday... I'm terribly sorry to make you have to wait....

If I were feeling good, I'd be posting:

*demonic laugh**lightning flash*

But I'm not even feeling good enough to do that so....

Saturday....

I'm sorry

Originally posted by dovesong
So, death isn't a good excuse? Cuz I'm puking my guts up and I'm really wishing I was dead...

I got sick at shcool and now, I'm high on Phenergan, so I will post it Saturday... I'm terribly sorry to make you have to wait....

If I were feeling good, I'd be posting:

*demonic laugh**lightning flash*

But I'm not even feeling good enough to do that so....

Saturday....

I'm sorry



Ok, well death may be no excuse but puking out your guts surely is. That's never any fun. Get lots of rest and drink plenty of liquids, if you can, and I hope you're up and feeling better soon.



Saturday...I'll be waiting;)






ks

Originally posted by ks
Ok, well death may be no excuse but puking out your guts surely is. That's never any fun. Get lots of rest and drink plenty of liquids, if you can, and I hope you're up and feeling better soon.



Saturday...I'll be waiting;)



I'm gonna pay for ur ADORABLE daughter to go to typing classes. Ok? Ok.

Um...I just hope they're cheap

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man



I'm gonna pay for ur ADORABLE daughter to go to typing classes. Ok? Ok.

Um...I just hope they're cheap



Couch Partner, that is a BRILLIANT idea!

*goes to break open piggy bank*

I'll chip in as much as I can!







ks

Originally posted by ks




Couch Partner, that is a BRILLIANT idea!

*goes to break open piggy bank*

I'll chip in as much as I can!



ks


hey Ill chip in too!!!!!

*pours money out of the coke bottle*

See, Michelle, your daughter can start lessons ASAP. Between the three of us, she'll be typing in days. ...She is tall enough to reach the keyboard isn't she? If not, I guess we can buy a large stool too...









ks

Originally posted by ks
See, Michelle, your daughter can start lessons ASAP. Between the three of us, she'll be typing in days. ...She is tall enough to reach the keyboard isn't she? If not, I guess we can buy a large stool too...




Suddenly my wallet feels so much lighter...

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


Suddenly my wallet feels so much lighter...



yah...and suddenly, I have l have no more money to feed the children, OHHH well...getting Michelles daughter typing lessons was worth it;)

Originally posted by Swimfan85




yah...and suddenly, I have l have no more money to feed the children, OHHH well...getting Michelles daughter typing lessons was worth it;)

:rotflmao: I luffed so hard when I read that!!

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


:rotflmao: I luffed so hard when I read that!!



:lol: Ditto! I agree though, well worth it;)



Ok, so it's Saturday...she should be here soon. :lookaroun


Plops down on the couch and waits.









ks

Okay, I'm here, kinda. I'm writing as we speak... so somone do me a big favor, and name Teddy's dad for me. I get tired of writing DAD....

How about Jason? Or Charles?

Well...an hour and 10 minutes later, and still no fic...

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
Well...an hour and 10 minutes later, and still no fic...

Okay, okay. I'm back, gosh. So much for taking time out to visit the family.... Well, I'm back, still slightly ill, but not puking my guts out anymore....

I have written more, so I will share it with you....

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(Jinny and Teddy met his parents in the parking lot of the restaurant. They were seated and their meal orders were taken. Teddy and his father spoke for a while, the ladies being reasonably silent; volunteering an occasional comment. Their meal was served shortly, and it was quiet around the table as they ate. The conversation again picked up slowly.)

Olivia: Oh, dear, (to Teddy’s father) Have you told Theodore the news?

Jason: What news is that dear?

Olivia: You know. About Jenny and Joshua. (turning to Teddy and Jinny) You know Jenny married Joshua Dunn, from your father’s business?

Teddy: Yeah, I remember you mentioning that.

Olivia: Well, I saw her mother at the market this past weekend and guess what… (not giving anyone a chance to reply) …she’s pregnant! Jenny. Can you imagine?

Teddy: (exchanges a look with Jinny) Wow.

Olivia: I’ll bet that poor girl is just having fits. No poor child deserves to be spoiled like that one will be.

Teddy: (smiles; changes the subject) So, how is the business, dad?

Jason: Great. Just great. Should have another very profitable year. But let’s not go into details about that now. We’re celebrating your wife’s… your very beautiful wife’s (tipping his glass to Jinny) birthday.

Jinny: (smiles and nods shyly)

Teddy: (turns to Jinny; a questioning look on his face; whispering) Have you thought about it?

Jinny: (smiles; nods)

Teddy: (excited whisper) I can?

Jinny: (bigger smile; nods) Yes.

Teddy: (excitedly turning to his parents) Mom. Dad.

Jason: (sees the excitement) Son?

Teddy: (big smile) Jinny’s birthday isn’t the only thing we’re celebrating.

Jason: (smile) Oh?

Teddy: No. (deep breath)

Jason: (waiting for Teddy to continue) Well, are you going to share it with us, or are we supposed to guess?

Teddy: (nervousness showing) Oh, uh, yeah. (taking Jinny’s hand) Um, Jinny and I, uh, well, we have some good news of our own.

Olivia: Theodore, dear. Spit it out.

Teddy: (still nervous) I’m pregnant…

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There you go.... I hope you enjoyed it... more later.

Oh yes, teddy is the pregnant one now! Call up the freak show, we've got a pregnant man here!










:lol: I love it. More please!

thanks for laughing guys, but michelle....PLEASE ADD MORE!!!!


before 10 years pass and teddy isnt the only whos pregant;) alright I havent eaten dinner...so if it didnt make sense...theres an excuse

new page:) thats gotta get me somewhere

:rotflmao:

I'm pregnant...LOL!!!

Ok...*sits and waits for more*

Are ya pregnant couch partner, or are all the oreos finally catchin' up with ya?



Waiting here, Michelle...*jeapordy music*








ks

I'm posting more just cuz I like ya'll....

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Teddy: (still nervous) I’m pregnant… (stuttering) …we’re pregnant…uh… (still stuttering) …She’s pregnant… Jinny…

Jinny: (interrupting calmly, but not feeling calm inside at all) What he’s trying to say is that in a few months, you’re going to be grandparents, for real this time.

Olivia: (smiling, patting Teddy’s dad on the leg) I told you she didn’t’ look well, dear.

Jason: Liv, she looks just fine.

Olivia: Yes dear, but she just looks pale. (to Jinny) Have you been sick, dear? You’ve barely touched your meal.

Jinny: No, I’m fine. Really.

Jason: (slapping Teddy on the back) Congratulations, son. (extends a hand to Jinny and embraces her) Congratulations, my girl.

Jinny: (smiling) Thank you.

Olivia: (embraces Jinny more gracefully than Teddy’s father) Congratulations, dear.

Jinny: (rolling her eyes) Thanks.

Olivia: You don’t look excited.

Jinny: (weak smile)

Olivia: (reassuring smile) Scared?

Jinny: Terrified.

Olivia: You’ll do just fine. How far along are you?

Jinny: I’m not sure yet. I go to the doctor Wednesday.

Olivia: You’ll be fine, dear. (as they are returning to their seats) How is Joy? Have you heard?

Jinny: No. I haven’t heard.

Olivia: She was such a joy to have around. I can’t wait until this little one is born.

Jinny: I can.

Olivia: You did wonderfully with Joy. You’ll be a wonderful mother.

Jinny: I’m glad someone is sure of that.

Teddy: See, I told you not to be so hard on yourself.

Jinny: (smiles, embarrassed)

Olivia: Theodore is right, dear.

Teddy: (looking to Jinny) Thank you , mom.

Jinny: (playfully slaps Teddy on the arm nearest her)

(They finish their meal chattering good naturedly; Jinny sat quietly observing how happy she had just make Teddy’s family. She sat questioning herself in the midst of all the commotion. Why could se not be happy? Why was she so afraid of being a mother? She could not answer herself.)

(Teddy’s father paid for the meal as they retrieved their coats. Teddy and Jinny were again embraced and congratulated as they separated and parted ways with his parents. Teddy and Jinny were quiet on the return home. Half-way home, Teddy looked over at Jinny and then reached over and ran his hand through her hair, resting on her neck. She looked over and smiled at him, but kept quiet, turning back to look out the window.)

(Teddy parked as close as he could to their apartment and rushed around to open Jinny’s door. Once she was out of the car, Teddy put his arm around her as they walked to their apartment. Once inside, Jinny sighed heavily and sat down on the couch. Teddy hup up their coats and watched Jinny curiously.)

Teddy: It wasn’t that bad, was it?

Jinny: For who?

Teddy: (sighs) You didn’t eat much tonight. Was the food bad? (sitting down next to her; slipping his arm around her)

Jinny: No, it was good. (shrugs) I just wasn’t hungry.

Teddy: Still sick at your stomach?

Jinny: (shrugs)

Teddy: Yes?

Jinny: Its better, but…

Teddy: But, you’re still sick.

Jinny: Some, yeah.

Teddy: It’ll get better. Didn’t I tell you Mom and Dad would be happy?

Jinny: It’s not that I thought they wouldn’t be happy.

Teddy: Then what?

Jinny: (quiet)

Teddy: Hey… (turning her face to him) What then?

Jinny: It’s stupid, really.

Teddy: No, it’s not.

Jinny: You don’t know.

Teddy: Jin…

Jinny: (deep breath) …Why do your parents always bring Jenny up when we’re together?

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There ya go... I hope you like it...

Thought I would add a pic also. Great story by the way.

YAY! Why CAN'T Jinny be happy? HMMMMMMMMMMMMM. Anyway, hope your feelin' better and I'll be sittin' here waitin' for more soon, since ya like me and all;)







ks

Originally posted by Jeanie
Thought I would add a pic also. Great story by the way.

Thank you....

Ain't he jest cuuuuute????

Originally posted by dovesong


Thank you....

Ain't he jest cuuuuute????



BROWSER!








ks

Originally posted by Jeanie
Thought I would add a pic also. Great story by the way.

Now THAT is the hottest he has ever been...

GREAT story...more...ASAP!!!

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


Now THAT is the hottest he has ever been...

GREAT story...more...ASAP!!!

He looks nice in jeans.

*whines* Michelle! More please! You've abandoned us!

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
*whines* Michelle! More please! You've abandoned us!

Okay, okay, since I won't be home tomorrow at all after 6a I'll post tonight...

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Teddy: (pauses for a minute; unsure of what to say)

Jinny: See… I told you … stupid.

Teddy: No. No, not stupid. I just never really thought about it before. Jinny, Jenny and I dated for a while, and we were engaged. You know that. My parents and Jenny’s were close, you know; still are. They were at our reception, you know. Jenny was out of state or she would have been, too. I’m sorry if it makes you uncomfortable. I just never thought about it. I’m sure my parents hadn’t either. I’ll talk to them about it…

Jinny: No. No, don’t do that. I…

Teddy: If it makes you uncomfortable, then I’ll…

Jinny: No. It’s okay, really. I just, I thought maybe that was their way of telling you that you were making the biggest mistake of you life or something.

Teddy: I’m a big boy. They don’t tell me what to do anymore. Unless I ask.

Jinny: (nods)

Teddy: Feel better?

Jinny: (sighs) Yeah.

Teddy: Good. But I will ask mom not to mention her anymore.

Jinny: No. Don’t do that, please.

Teddy: Okay… Let’s go to bed. You look tired.

Jinny: (yawns as if on cue) I am, yeah.

(Teddy took Jinny by the hand and escorted her to their room. They watched the nightly news before going to sleep. Teddy glanced down before the news cast was over to find Jinny already asleep beside him. He smiled as he turned off the television and lights and joined her.)

(Sunday was a quiet day, spent at home in each others arms. Monday, however, was back to work for both of them. Jinny sighted one last time as she picked up the handcuffs from her bedside table, slipping them into her jacket pocket along with their keys. They should have been returned long ago, she told herself, but she had thought them to be safe in the location they had been in. She now doubted the safety of any of her toys and devised a plan to relocate them as she blushed to herself.)

(Jinny barely beat the time clock this morning, finding everyone else seated at their desk waiting for the captain to appear. Jinny removed the keys and cuffs from her jacket as she walked by Magda’s desk. She laid the cuffs down, heavily as she and Magda made eye contact. Nate, CD, and Raina all looked up from their respective tasks.)

Jinny: (to Magda’s smiling face) Not a word.

Magda: (smile broadening) Good morning.

Jinny: It is definitely morning.

Magda: (still probing) I take it you’re feeling better this morning?

Jinny: (passing Magda’s desk to sit at her own) I feel fine. Thanks.
Magda: (sitting back in her seat; full attention on Jinny; drawing CD and Nate’s attention) You know, I’m sensing a lot of (pause) frustration coming from you this morning…

Jinny: (interrupting; but smiling) Don’t even go there…

Magda: (big smile) Did you enjoy your birthday?

Jinny: (leading off the subject) I did. We had dinner with Teddy’s parents.

Magda: Oh? (playing along) And how’d that go?

Jinny: Fine. Jenny is also pregnant. How much fun can that be?

Magda: (laughing)

Nate: (confused) Who’s Jinny?

Jinny: It’s J-E-nny, and SHE is Teddy’s ex-fiance.

Nate: (to CD) Jealous.

Jinny: (overhearing) I am NOT jealous.

Nate: Then you call it, what?

Jinny: It just intrigues me to know that, (pause) that…

Nate: (matter-of-factly) You’re jealous.

Jinny: Okay, yes. So, I’m jealous. Wouldn’t you be a little jealous if your wife’s parents still kept in touch with her ex-husband and they were constantly talking about him like he’s still part of the family? (gesturing madly) I’m sorry, I have a problem with that.

(CD looked up toward the door as Jinny heard Magda clear her throat loudly. She turned to look toward the door, but found out too late who had been there. She glanced up to notice Teddy’s back as it exited the door. She rose to follow him, but Kate chose that moment to step out of her office and ask for everyone’s attention. Jinny paused, unsure of what to do. She glanced back toward the door one last time, but sat back down. She put her head in her hands, sighing.)

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There you go, I'll be back later to see if you liked it...

yah this aawesome plesae add more!!!!! I love this! it is amazing!

:eek2:

MORE!!

Jinny's timing is the pits, but it certainly makes for an interesting story! More ASAP please!








ks

Post more!!! It's um...my sisters birthday!!!

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!









Some of us are hanging my a thread here. Without our daily fix of Michelle.... we lose it. Now youw ouldn't want that now would you?

Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Some of us are hanging my a thread here. Without our daily fix of Michelle.... we lose it. Now youw ouldn't want that now would you?

Okay, let me see what I have.....

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Kate: (watching Jinny briefly) Jinny, are you alright?

Jinny: (looking up) No. Can I… (pointing to the door)

Kate: Go.

Jinny: (bolted toward the door)

(Jinny stopped outside the Felony Division trying to decided which way Teddy had gone. She spied Casey, and ask if he’d seen Teddy from the way he had come, but Casey said he had not. Jinny hugged him quickly and headed in the direction of the elevator. She caught sight of him getting on the elevator and made a mad dash for the elevator, catching it just before it closed completely. Several people stared at her harshly as she entered the elevator, out of breath. She said nothing and made her way to the back of the elevator to stand with Teddy. She made no comment there in front of everyone, but rode the elevator to the basement, where Teddy finally exited.)

Jinny: (putting her hand on his arm) Hey…

Teddy: Jinny, I really don’t think it would be a good idea to talk about this right now.

Jinny: Teddy, I’m sorry, I didn’t think…

Teddy: (stops walking, takes her by the arms as he turns) That’s right, Jinny. You didn’t think. You know, I gave you an opportunity to talk to ME about this last night. I would have understood perfectly had you told me you were uncomfortable with any of this. But you said you were fine with it.

Jinny: (looks away; nods) I know. I know, and I’m sorry.

Teddy: Jinny, look, I can’t talk about this right now. I have court in about an hour. This is going to be a tough case, and I need to stay focused on it. We can talk about this later, but right now, I’ve got to go. (quick kiss on the forehead; turns and leaves) Bye.

Jinny: (watches him walk away; her heart sinks) (to herself) Bye.

(Jinny returns back to the Division, and sinks down into her chair. Kate watches her for a few minutes before interrupting her thoughts.)

Kate: Jinny?

Jinny: Yeah, Cap? What do you have for us?

Kate: I thought I’d start by asking you what you had on the Jimmy Hatcher case?

Jinny: Oh, uh, yeah. Right. (rubbing her forehead) We’re still waiting for the kids to identify the man who was on the bridge with them that night. The girl, uh, Missy, is coming in to look at some photos we’ve gathered up.

Kate: (nods) When?

Jinny: Um, this afternoon, when she gets out of school.

Kate: Great. Are you two looking for something to do this morning?

Jinny: (sighs, shrugs) Sure.

Kate: (hands her a folder) You and Magda look over this information. Tell me what you think of it.

Jinny: (accepts folder; nods) (less than enthused) Great.

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Well, there is pretty much all I have, I'll try to write some Saturday. Until then, thanks for putting up with all of this slacking. One day you will love me again, I promise... I'll make up for it.:D

YAY!

Oh Michelle, we love you! We just hate when youd on't post! Hehe! Anyways, I'll be looking forward to more!

YAY!!! *dances* It's great, as always!

Originally posted by dovesong
Well, there is pretty much all I have, I'll try to write some Saturday. Until then, thanks for putting up with all of this slacking. One day you will love me again, I promise... I'll make up for it.:D




Saturday?! That's like, not tomorrow or the next day. Ahh! I'm experiencing withdrawls I do believe.

*pulls out a calendar and begins to count the days to when I love Michelle again*


This calendar only goes until Halloween of 2002, Michelle..........



ks

this is awesome!!:) add more today instead!!!!!!!

Originally posted by Swimfan85
add more today instead!!!!!!!


*jumps up out of chair with hand raised* I second that motion!







ks

Originally posted by ks



*jumps up out of chair with hand raised* I second that motion!



I THIRD THAT MOTION!!

well....that didnt happen.. *pulls out wallet* who else is putting out money again for michelle's kids typing lessons??

Originally posted by Swimfan85
well....that didnt happen.. *pulls out wallet* who else is putting out money again for michelle's kids typing lessons??


Well, since it's Saturday and it's nothing we've got...guess I'll go up town and beg for money. I'm dead broke;)









ks

Its saturday!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhhhh wheres more?

*waves around $67 hard earned dollars* TAKE IT OR LEAVE IT!

its sunday?? please add more...*pulls of 67 cents...*

Sunday...wow. Let's buy her daughter typing lessons and Michelle herself a calendar...*sits and waits*








ks

Originally posted by ks
Sunday...wow. Let's buy her daughter typing lessons and Michelle herself a calendar...*sits and waits*








ks


ditto ta dat!!! lol

and then came monday......I am enrolling your daughter today!!!!

Um...uh...what topic am I on again?

*scrolls down* O...YEAH!

Um...well...I only have $44...I think...*covers my eyes and shoves it in ur face* Here...TAKE IT! *bawls*

Dang, at this rate it'll be Tuesday in a matter of hours...








ks

and wends came.....ahhhhh

...Thursday begins to ease near.



(Any confirmation of life would be nice, Michelle.)





ks

Originally posted by ks
...Thursday begins to ease near.



(Any confirmation of life would be nice, Michelle.)



LOL! *rocks bak and forth possessively* MUST HAVE FIC...MUST...HAVE...FIC!!

*jeapordy music* ...We're all loosing it in this waiting process... *eats the cat and let's the food out the door*








ks

"COME ON EILEEN...OH I SWEAR THIS EILEEN.." wait doesnt work your names Michelle....come on in the words of michelle (michelle tanner from Full House that is)*well in the facial expression* gives puppy dog face.......alright I have physics calling my name, because unlike your fan fic which is good, teachers keep giving us homework...which is bad....AHHH how many people did I lose besides myself? well once again I say I am going to engage myself with an interesting lab on velocity....and motion.....umm right

I'll be celebrating the weekend soon...










ks

Michelle, answer this yes or no question.

Are you alive?

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
Michelle, answer this yes or no question.

Are you alive?


holy wack somebody send michelle a map...because I think shes lost herself in attempts of finding her way to the comp.

Originally posted by Swimfan85



holy wack somebody send michelle a map...because I think shes lost herself in attempts of finding her way to the comp.

LOL!! MICHELLE!! WE'RE GETTING PISSED OFF HERE!

its saturday...lets try this again...MICHELLE PLEASE ADD I JUS TOOK THE PSATS!!!!

This is strange .

I hope everything is ok...


She usually at least browses .


Michelle, confirmation of your existence would be comforting...







ks

yAh michelle...just say hello....or browse...

Something...anything!


*chews on fingernails nervously wondering what has become of Michelle*






ks

Originally posted by ks
Something...anything!


*chews on fingernails nervously wondering what has become of Michelle*


*chews fingernails also* *can't chew them NEmore* *puts on fake nails and chews those*

Can we at least get a 'hello, im alive'?

Yeah, anything. Perhaps an "I hate you guys for stalking me" or "my daughter ate the computer" ... anything!



*chews on Lauren's fake nails as well*




ks

Originally posted by ks
Yeah, anything. Perhaps an "I hate you guys for stalking me" or "my daughter ate the computer" ... anything!



*chews on Lauren's fake nails as well*


:rotflmao: My daughter ate the computer...*laughs* Ooooo...god that was funny

*throws Alex a pack of fake nails* Here ya go

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


:rotflmao: My daughter ate the computer...*laughs* Ooooo...god that was funny

*throws Alex a pack of fake nails* Here ya go



:lol: See, Michelle, she's even laughing at the corny jokes I'm making! We're BOTH delirious! Heck, we're all three delirious...KT is so delirious she's not here at the moment, out looking for something to chew...where ARE you, Michelle?


*Opens pack of nails and begins chewing*






ks

Originally posted by ks
KT is so delirious she's not here at the moment, out looking for something to chew


Whoa...pervert thought...:grineyes:

SEE MICHELLE!!! NOW IM BECOMING PERVERTED!! I GOTTA GO DO HW!! *cries*

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


Whoa...pervert thought...:grineyes:
*

:eek: :eek:

Um, hello? I'm alive?

lol

I'm really sorry I haven't been posting. I've been really busy studying and trying to keep up with everything at school and work. I pulled an extra shift this weekend and they've called me twice to work tonight, and when I said no, they called me to work tomorrow morning.

But anyways, I'm not sure when I 'm gonna be able to write more, but I'm trying really hard. Sorry

seeing that you replied made me excited....i stopped chewing, but I guess I can let it slid and continue to chew....hehe but nice pic

She lives!!

I knew it was just skool, it was couch partner that was gettin all worried...

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
She lives!!

I knew it was just skool, it was couch partner that was gettin all worried...



-ahem- Might I point out it was YOU who supplied the fake finger nails to chew AND who thought of such fouled up thoughts...


Well Michelle, now that I know your alive I guess it's back to begging relentlessly...



PLEASE!


How much is it for good typing lessons these days?






ks

Originally posted by ks




-ahem- Might I point out it was YOU who supplied the fake finger nails to chew AND who thought of such fouled up thoughts...


Well Michelle, now that I know your alive I guess it's back to begging relentlessly...



PLEASE!


How much is it for good typing lessons these days?


I got...3 bux...

*looks around* I wasnt worried..... course not;) (IM GOING TO STOP CHEWING NOW;) ) school is a bummer:(

finally finished catching up on this one! now maybe i can actually start my anthro work at 2 in the morning. lol. must stop this...but btw, lovin this one, it's written really well. which, ya know, means you should definitely post more. :crazy:

anyone else watch tonight's gilmore girls? nate (who's name i am currently forgetting - jon hamm? is that it?) was lorelai's date. i was like, hey, that's the guy from the division and my friend's looked at me like i was nuts, but hey, what can ya do, i know i was right. just thought i'd share.

Originally posted by blast_that_sugarhigh
anyone else watch tonight's gilmore girls? nate (who's name i am currently forgetting - jon hamm? is that it?) was lorelai's date. i was like, hey, that's the guy from the division and my friend's looked at me like i was nuts, but hey, what can ya do, i know i was right. just thought i'd share.

Yep, I posted that in TDMMB.

NEbody notice how this is sloooooooowly sinking down the page?

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
NEbody notice how this is sloooooooowly sinking down the page?


mm-hmm. I check on it daily and each day it's further and further down...where did Michelle say she was again?






ks

Originally posted by ks



mm-hmm. I check on it daily and each day it's further and further down...where did Michelle say she was again?

Uh...working?

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man


Uh...working?


yah...good excuse...all this crazy talk of "working"...yah...right....uhuh I think someone needs to add more...anyone else agree? lets try to add some more before halloween or the month gets over with!!!

22 days since no fic and counting...*whimpers*

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
22 days since no fic and counting...*whimpers*


has it been that long?????????????? :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(

Originally posted by Swimfan85



has it been that long?????????????? :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(

23...

Wow, November already...at this rate we might get the season premiere first...Michelle!:(







ks

Originally posted by ks
Wow, November already...at this rate we might get the season premiere first...Michelle!:(







ks


PRETTY Much!!:(:( or at least winter hoildays

*jeapordy music*









ks

anymore michelle sightings?

Originally posted by Swimfan85



has it been that long?????????????? :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(

23??? Boy has it really been that long??? Boy, I'm losing it aren't I? Well here is what I have written so far....

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(Jinny and Magda took the folder they had been given and retreated to the room at the back of the office. Jinny spread the information out across the table and looked for a current date. She shook her head, confused, and picked up the closest photo.)

Jinny: I don’t get this.

Magda: (looking from the photo to her partner) What?

Jinny: There’s nothing here less than two years old.

Magda: Yeah? So?

Jinny: So, what’s the deal? Since when were we elected to the cold case squad?

Magda: Well, this (indicating the photo in Jinny’s hand) happened almost two years ago. (looking around and picking up another photo) This one, almost a year before that, then… (another photo) two… (another photo) three… (last photo) and five years before that.

Jinny: So that’s a total of (counting) fourteen years.

Magda: Yeah.

Jinny: Yeah. So what? What’s the deal?

Magda: Maybe they think it’s going to happen again?

Jinny: Hmmm… Maybe. (studying the photos) So what’s the deal with these guys being on their faces?

Magda: I don’t know. Maybe someone couldn’t stand to look at their faces?

Jinny: Maybe he couldn’t have followed through with it?

Magda: (nods) Yeah.

Jinny: So, what do you think? (turning the photos from one side to the other) Male? Female?

Magda: What the culprit?

Jinny: Well, yeah that too, I was talking about in the photos.

Magda: (reading a report) That is a male. Andrew Seth Wilson; age 27. My guess is they all are. (explaining) Male.

Jinny: Okay, who did it?

Magda: (thinking) I don’t know. (guessing) Male?

Jinny: Why?

Magda: I don’t know. You asked.

Jinny: Yeah, and I just asked why you thought that.

Magda: I don’t know. I’m just guessing. Most serial killers are men.

Jinny: (silent; still looking at the photos and reviewing the information)

Kate: (walks in) I hope you’ve had time to review what’s in that folder.

Jinny: What’s up with this stuff. There’s nothing here less than two years old.

Kate: You noticed.

Jinny: Yeah, I did.

Kate: Good. These photos are of men that one Joetta Hillary have dated, or married.

Jinny: Wow. What happened to them?

Kate: We aren’t sure. We think that it was her ex-husband; a guy she married right out of high school. He disappeared not long after they split up and she started dating this Andrew Wilson guy. We haven’t been able to catch up with him. He has mysteriously disappeared off the face of the earth. No traces.

Magda: (making a face) He’s probably got a new ID.

Kate: That’s what we’re thinking. She’s made several reports of vandalizing and harassments, but nothing that we can confirm. She seems to go about her business for a while, then someone ends up dead. Then the reports and calls stops, for a while, and the cycle starts all over again. It’s been quiet for a few years now, but… (handing them another folder) It’s started again. She called this morning, said there was a note left on her car. Said she was more terrified now than ever. I told her I’d send someone to check it out.

Jinny: (reviewing the paperwork and a copy of the note that Kate had just given them) Sure. Nothing better to do this morning.

Kate: Jinny, are you okay?

Jinny: Okay? Well, let’s see… I just pissed my husband, of what? A month? …off. I try to talk to him and he’s suddenly the busiest person on the earth… what reason do I have not to be okay?

Kate: (watching Jinny; nods) What time was that girl coming in this afternoon?

Jinny: Late.

Kate: Okay. Get busy, let me know what you have before you leave this evening.

Jinny: Right. Sure. (getting up with the papers in her hand)

(Jinny rolled her eyes at Magda as they got up and gathered up the information they had been given. Jinny crammed them back into the file folder and stuck it under her arm. She turned and walked out the door that Magda stood holding open for her. She walked toward her desk to grab her note book. As she stood, she grabbed her stomach and sat down quickly. Laying her head on her arm, on the desk. Kate and Magda came up behind her, cautiously, curiously.)

Magda: Jinny. (putting a hand on her back) Jinny, are you okay?

Jinny: (waving Magda off) Yeah. Yeah, I’m fine. (trying to stand) You ready?

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Okay, now really.... did you really think I'd leave you in a comfy place where you could patiently wait for more?

I did get great news today.... I asked my hubby's boss about the mystery dinner theaters that they host each winter, because I wanted to know the price for guests...... He said they were looking for people to participate.... so I may get in free, get free dinner, and get to be a part of it!!!!!!!! Now, I just have to find a way to fit it into an already PACKED schedule. I have never worked so hard for anything in my life as I am working now, but Wednesday is my birthday and so I decided to take the night off and spend it with who of all people??? YOU GUYS!!! Don't you jess feel special??

Okay, nuff said.........:wave:

:eek: :eek2: FIC!!! ACTUAL FIC!!! OMG...I'm seeing things...

This...ROX!!!!!!!!!!! Happy Birthday in advance...I'll hopefully remember to say it then too. That's like...a day b4 my lil sisters.

NEwayz...thaaaaaaaaaaaaank u for saving me from dying of lack of fic.

OMG OMG OMG OMG YOU ADDED!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!:)

Happy early bday:)

Where is couch partner?! COUCH PARTNER!!! SHE POSTED!!! R we gonna haveta start a 'Couch Partner Sightings' post...

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
Where is couch partner?! COUCH PARTNER!!! SHE POSTED!!! R we gonna haveta start a 'Couch Partner Sightings' post...




:eek: Go away for one day and you post! WOW! I should go away more often if this is what we get...


...I'm gonna go read it now;)


I'm still in a state of shock though...whew.


ks

*sings loudly* HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO UUUUUUUUUUU
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO UUUUUUUUUUUUU
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR MICHEEEEEEEEEEELLE
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO UUUUUUUUUUU

*streamers fly, balloons float, poppers pop*

ICE CREAM AND CAKE FOR EVERYONE!!!

Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhere o whhhhhhhhhhhhhhere has Micheeeeeeeeeeeeelle gone...o whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhere o whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhere can she beeeeeeeeeeeeeee? I have looked on the boards, and stalked her a lot, o whhhhhhhhhhhhhhere o whhhhhhhhhhhhhhere can she be??

I kno...it's a great song...*bows*

just a note to let you know that Michelle said she post more tomorrow... So be prepared. here is a pic til then..

Originally posted by Jeanie
just a note to let you know that Michelle said she post more tomorrow... So be prepared. here is a pic til then..



*claps* YAY! Thanks, Jeanie. I guess Michelle is now sending messangers so we can't accuse her of browsing. *shrugs* Clever. Anywhoo, can't wait for more fic, and until then...*stares at the picture so graciously provided to us*










ks

:lookaroun













It's tomorrow.

Originally posted by Babes_Cat
:lookaroun













It's tomorrow.





mm-hmm...she has approximately 14 and a half more hours...







ks

Originally posted by ks




*claps* YAY! Thanks, Jeanie. I guess Michelle is now sending messangers so we can't accuse her of browsing. *shrugs* Clever. Anywhoo, can't wait for more fic, and until then...*stares at the picture so graciously provided to us*


ks

Haha, guilty.... figured it'd take longer than that to figure out though... plus I have massive amounts of home work and can't take much time out to browse, but here's the more I promised you, hope you enjoy it....

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Kate: Having pain?

Jinny: No. No, I’m fine, really. (pain evident on her face when she tried to stand)

Magda: Jinny, you are not fine. You’re in pain. Where are you hurting?

Jinny: Um, my stomach, (sitting back down with some urging from the captain) it just started.

Kate: (nodding) Call your doctor. Go see him. I’ll send Raina to take a statement from Miss Hillary, she can give you guys a verbal when you get back.

Raina: (perking up as her name was mentioned) Did you need me, Cap? (looking at Jinny, then to Kate) What’s up with her? Is she okay?

Jinny: Yes. I’m fine. (trying to standing again, but not managing well)

Kate: Raina, Jinny is going to the doctor, I need you to go (picking up the slip of paper off Jinny’s desk and handing it to Raina) to this address and interview Miss Joetta Hillary about the murders you researched for me. You can give Magda and Jinny your version when they get back this afternoon.

Raina: (perky) I can handle this, Captain. I’d really like to work this case.

Kate: (quickly) I’m sure Jinny and Magda wouldn’t mind you working the background to this case. It could be good experience for you. (heading into her office) Jinny, let me know what the doctor says. (turning around at her door) Would you like me call Mr. Blumenthal and let him know where you’re going?

Jinny: (eyes wide, head shooting up) No! (more calmly) No. Um, I don’t want to worry him. It’s nothing.

Kate: (thinking for a minute, nods, turns into her office)

(Jinny finally gets up the courage to attempt to stand again. As they are exiting, Raina knocks on Kate’s open door and is welcomed in to sit. She sits for a minute, waiting for Kate to acknowledge her. Kate looks up and raises her eyebrow, waiting.)

Raina: I can handle this case, Captain. I just know it.

Kate: (thinks for a minute, sighs) Raina… It’s not that I don’t think you can’t handle this case. (pulls her chin down, looking over her glasses at Raina’s reaction) This is a very difficult case. It’s gone on for years and the professionals have yet to solve it. Your help, your insight, (nodding) they’ll all be greatly appreciated, but… I can’t turn this case over to a rookie. Watch how Magda and Jinny handle it. I think you’ll learn a lot.

Raina: (depressed look; sigh) I thought you had faith in me.

Kate: Raina… (grasping for an acceptable explanation) It isn’t that I don’t have faith in you. You’re learning very quickly, but I just don’t think you’re ready to for the magnitude of this case. You need a little more experience under your belt before you jump on something like this. Jinny and Magda will be happy to have your help. You’re doing great.

Raina: (more depressed; gets up and walks to the door)

Kate: Raina…

Raina: (turning back)

Kate: You’re doing remarkable things… give it some time.

Raina: (smiles dejectedly) Thanks, Captain. (leaves)

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There you go. I'm singing at church tonight, and if it goes well, I'll post more, lol, so pray that it goes REALLY well... haha.... until next time..........:wave:

YAY! :dances: Good luck Michelle!

:eek: :eek2: :eek: :eek2: :eek: :eek2: :eek: :eek2:

what is wrong with jinny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


new reader post some more just for me!

*gets on floor and prays for hours*

SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING BEAUTIFULLY!!!

POST MOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!