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02-06-2004, 12:29 AM
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I love Nate and CD!
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Butterfly Effect
Here's my new Fan Fic! I hope you enjoy!!!!!
Nate after and evening of looking for CD, finally found her at Liz's. He called for an ambulance, and they whisked her and Liz off to the hospital. Nate waited anxiously in the waiting room for hours, and finally the doctor came out. "Well, how is she?" Nate jumped out of his seat and looked at the doctor. "Are you a relative?" the doctor asked "No, but I'm her police partner." Nate replied "Fine, well, um, Liz seems to be doing fine, but CD on the other hand......." "What? what? For God's sake tell me!!!" Nate grabbed the doctor by his collar. "sir, I know you're upset, but please put me down." Nate looked down, and the doctors feet were dangling. "oops, sorry. now please, tell me!!!" Nate placed the doctor down. "Well, Mz. DeLorenzo is on life support, and I think it's time you start making your goodbyes" |
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http://www.tvlinksonline.com/boards/...postid=1437138 http://www.tvlinksonline.com/boards/...postid=1437174 CD: Just for the record, I would hide you in my attic any time Nate: Even if the Nazi's were after me? CD: even if Gestapo picked me up and tortured me, I wouldn't reveal your hiding place Nate: I always knew that about you ~~~~~~~~~~ Through the sun, through the rain, I will still feel the same Be it good, be it bad, I'll always understand When you're down, when you're blue, I will be there for you, 'Cause nobody does it better, We're gonna get there together ~ S Club (or, as I would like Nate to say to CD, and having them still together!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~~~~~ http://www.livejournal.com/users/deirdre_88/ |
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02-06-2004, 12:39 AM
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ok, very sad start, but I just HAD to laugh at that line!!! hehe, great so far, keep it comin!! and o no, is this based on the movie the butterfly effect? 
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Drunk guy: What's her name? Is it Jennifer? It's usually Jennifer. Is it Heather? Sometimes it's Heather. Nate- It's Candace. But we, uh, call her CD. |
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02-06-2004, 01:32 AM
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  ........................Or I would kill her.  j/k, Dee!
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02-06-2004, 09:55 AM
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02-06-2004, 11:53 AM
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"Number one, you're very close to having a bond between my foot and your ass, alright, and that's about the only bond we're ever going to share, and number two, the 'chick's' name is Inspector DeLorenzo, and if I ever hear you refer to her as a 'chick' again, I'm going to go ahead and refer you to number one. OK?!" ~ Nate Basso |
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02-06-2004, 12:09 PM
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I MISS YOU! :(
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yeah more and she better not die, or I think you might have so me people out for your life too. hehehe j/k And if Liz lives and she dies, ohhhhhh that would suck! lol And that song ROCKS! lol Little Moments! I too replace it with CD! lol I thought I was the only one hehehehe
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CHECK OUT THESE LYRICS TO THESE TWO SONGS, and think CD AND NATE and JINNY AND TEDDY! Truly, Madly, Deeply http://www.lyrics007.com/Savage%20Garden%20Lyrics/Truly%20Madly%20Deeply!!%20Lyrics.html And I'll Go On Loving You http://www.lyrics007.com/Alan%20Jackson%20Lyrics/I%27ll%20Go%20On%20Loving%20You20Lyrics.html MY QUOTES \/ \/ \/ "Being alone with my thoughts can be dangerous."- by Me "I'll lose but I won't quit."- by Me "The heart is an amazing thing. Unlike anything else, once it's broken it can't be fixed."- by Me "Men. Can't live with em, and can't live with em." (that's not a typo)- by Me "Always be yourself. No matter what. At least if you're hated, you're hated for what you are. Not for what you're not."- by Me <<<< MY FAVORITE QUOTE ...You hear that CD?!?!?! NOW COME BACK!! ****************************** Angie, and I'm this sn.......for now, until I get hassled signing in. lol |
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02-06-2004, 11:55 PM
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yeah when i saw Full Moon for the THIRD time, lol, i was like that is SO Little Moments!! hehe and o no!! i hated the ending to that movie, so it BETTER not end like that, or ur gonna get it!  lol, j/j of course! violence is not the answer!!! 
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02-07-2004, 12:07 AM
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I love Nate and CD!
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Nate looked like hell. He stared at the doctor with a "Cary-Grant-in-Arsenic-and-old-lace" look, and ran into CD's room. He stopped dead in is tracks, and stared at CD. She was laying there on the hospital bed, with her eyes closed, hooked up to a whole bunch of wires. He heard the beep every few seconds of her heart. beep....beep....beep....beep.... "I'm glad it's still beating" he thought to himself Nate knelt besides her bed, and started crying. "Oh, CD, I love you so much!!! Please don't die!!! PLEASE!!!!" He burried his head in his hands and started bawling. After a few minutes, he lifted his head. "CD, I remember, since the first day i saw you, I knew there and then that you are special. It only took me a few weeks to relize i loved you. A few more daysm I relized I loved you as more than a friend. Then, after that, I knew you were the one for me. That's why, when we were in that old synagogue, I was willing to die for you. If I could, now I'd trade places with you so that I could lay there in that hospital bed, and you go on living, be an inspector, get married to a guy that treats you like the princess you are. If only I could trade with you." Nate sat there with his hands up to his face, tears streaming down his cheeks. "Nate?" Nate turned and looked. Jinny put a hand on his shoulder. "Hey, I know it's been a long night, why don't you let me take you home." "NO! I'm staying here with her. Till her heart takes that last beat, even if it takes 10 years" Nate replied, crossly, but still with a load of sadness in his voice. "Nate, really, I think it would be best.." "No!" Nate cut her off "what would be best was if this never happened. Now I'm staying! You can leave if you like. but I'm not." "Ok, fine!" Jinny walked out to the hallway, and came back in a few seconds later. Jinny pulled up a chair next to Nates, and sat down. They sat in silence, just listening to the machines running. After a few minutes a member of the hospital staff came in, pushing two roll-away beds. "what are these for?" Nate asked. "well, if you're staying, I want you to be comfortable, and i don't want you to be alone, so I'm staying too." Jinny gave a tiny smile. Jinny set up one of the beds right next to CD's, and another one accross the room. "Here, I want to be here for you, but I also don't want to be in your way." Jinny told Nate. "thanks, Jinny, you're a real friend." "No problem." Jinny walked accross the room, and sat down on her bed. "hmm, these aren't the most comfortable things, are they?" Jinny asked. Nate just shrugged. "hey, did ya here the one about the guy in the pub with three beers.." "listen, Jinny, if you're trying to cheer me up it's not working." Nate interupted. "ok, well, I'm gonna go out and get us some coffee." Jinny walked out. "Yeah, thanks." Nate called after her. Nate grabbed CD's hand, and held it to his cheek. "I'll be here for you. I'm never gonna leave you" |
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02-07-2004, 12:39 AM
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awwwwwwwwww!!! that was soooo sweet of Nate!!!!! And Jinny was really great too!!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!
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02-07-2004, 01:47 AM
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Oh this fic is going preety well, keep going!
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02-07-2004, 02:28 PM
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Awww, I just wanted to cry when I read Nate pouring his heart out to her! I love this, post more soon!
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02-07-2004, 02:30 PM
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Don't let CD die!!!!!And Nate was soo sweet! Post more soooooooooooooon!
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02-07-2004, 03:28 PM
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mmmmmmmmmooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrreee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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02-07-2004, 04:24 PM
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Oh this is a great fic. I just love how Nate won't leave her side and Jinny is right there with him. More please?
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02-07-2004, 04:29 PM
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This is sad, but please post more!
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