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Old 02-02-2004, 12:53 AM   #1
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Hi. I know another fic but I think you will all like this one. Enjoy
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It’s January 5th, 1979. All the students from West San Francisco High School had just returned from Christmas vacation. Jinny Exstead is a 15 year old freshman. Her best friend, Magda Ramirez, is a 16 year old freshman. Then there was their good friend Candace DeLorenzo who is a 15 year old freshman. Her boyfriend, Nate Basso, is a 16 year old sophomore. Jinny’s boyfriend, Jack, is the star quarterback for West San Francisco. He is a 17 year old senior. Stacey Reynolds, a 16 year old junior, is trying her best to keep Jack from Jinny so she can have Jack all to herself. It is now lunchtime and the group is trying to find a table to sit at and eat.

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Jinny- So Mag, how was your Christmas?
Magda- Boring. Lily of course stole every single piece of clothing that I got.
Jinny- Hey at least you get clothes. I know my mom means to but she doesn’t go Christmas shopping. My Dad does but he doesn’t know anything about clothes.
Magda- Yeah. Your mom will come around.
Jinny- I hope so. So CD, what about you?
CD- *Giggles from Nate kissing her ear* Oh what did you say?
Jinny- What did you get for Christmas?
CD- *Shows her wrist* Nate gave it to me.
Magda- Wow .. that’s gorgeous!
CD- Isn’t it? *Then got back to what Nate and her were doing*
Jack-*Sits at table* Hey guys. May I join you?
Magda- Sure Jack.
Jack- Thanks. So how’s my Jinny girl today? *He said and tried to kiss her*
Jinny- *Pulls away* Not in front of them.
Jack- *Felt hurt but understood* Ok. I will see you guys later then. *Left*
Magda- What’s the matter with you?
Jinny- Nothing why?
Magda- You keep trying to push Jack away from you?
Jinny- I just don’t like him kissing me in front of you guys.
Magda- Oh please get real. Look at these two. *Points to CD and Nate daydreaming about making out*
Jinny- Good point. It’s just .. never mind.
Magda- What?
Stacy- Yeah what? I would certainly like to know.
Jinny- Go away Stacy. Isn’t there an ambulance waiting for you to chase it?
Stacy- Oh I am chasing something. Just not an ambulance.
Magda- Would you mind getting lost?
Stacy- I have other places to go anyway.
Jinny- Like going to get a lobotomy?
Stacy- Very funny. I bet you won’t find this funny. *Shows wrist*
Jinny- Any reason why I should care?
Stacy- No but I will let you guess who gave it to me. *Walks away*
Jinny- That slut!
Magda- Calm down. You aren’t sure it was Jack who gave her the bracelet.
Jinny- Maybe I should break up with him and just let Stacy have him.
Magda- You are actually going to let that beast win??
Jinny- I guess so. He is going to dump me anyway after I tell him.
Magda- Tell him what?
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Old 02-02-2004, 01:51 AM   #2
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Hey, this looks good! I can't wait for more!
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Old 02-02-2004, 12:45 PM   #3
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I love that song!!!!!!

Those were the days my friend
We thought they'd never end
We'd sing and dance forever and a day
We'd live the life we choose
We'd fight and never lose
For we were young and sure to have our way.
La la la la...
Those were the days, oh yes those were the days


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Old 02-02-2004, 01:55 PM   #4
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this is pretty good! keep going!
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Through the sun, through the rain,
I will still feel the same
Be it good, be it bad,
I'll always understand
When you're down, when you're blue,
I will be there for you,
'Cause nobody does it better,
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Old 02-02-2004, 02:12 PM   #5
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That was great!!!! Btw,make Jinny dump Jack so she can be with Teddy! And what does she have to tell Jack?I know i know!She's gonna tell him that she's in love with a guy named Teddy,right? Post more sooooooooooon!
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Old 02-02-2004, 03:45 PM   #6
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I love that song!!!!!!

Those were the days my friend
We thought they'd never end
We'd sing and dance forever and a day
We'd live the life we choose
We'd fight and never lose
For we were young and sure to have our way.
La la la la...
Those were the days, oh yes those were the days


Do you mean the one in my sig? Yeah, I love that song, too. I love "Those Were The Days", too!
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Old 02-02-2004, 04:02 PM   #7
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Do you mean the one in my sig? Yeah, I love that song, too. I love "Those Were The Days", too!
That's a good song too, but I meant "Those Were The Days" lol

Do you remember the "Everlasting Love" version from... I dunno who was that again? PJ&Duncan or something? Or Caught In The Act??? I don't remember LOL, but that came out when I switched schools, and one of my new friends there totally was into them and kept on listening to it all the time... oh yeah... those were the days....





oh, it was Caught In The Act!!!! The others had Eternal Love... LOL
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I hope u r not goin keep sticking us with these cliffhangers. BTW good start keep goin.
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Old 02-03-2004, 12:19 AM   #9
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WAHOO, that was great!!! Excellent start!! Loved THAT CD and Nate moment!! hehe MOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!
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That's a good song too, but I meant "Those Were The Days" lol

Do you remember the "Everlasting Love" version from... I dunno who was that again? PJ&Duncan or something? Or Caught In The Act??? I don't remember LOL, but that came out when I switched schools, and one of my new friends there totally was into them and kept on listening to it all the time... oh yeah... those were the days....





oh, it was Caught In The Act!!!! The others had Eternal Love... LOL
I don't know....Probably if I heard it I'd remember it. I have a hard time placing titles with songs. Sometimes I think I have no memory whatsoever!
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Thanks for all the replies!!!
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Magda- Calm down. You aren’t sure it was Jack who gave her the bracelet.
Jinny- Maybe I should break up with him and just let Stacy have him.
Magda- You are actually going to let that beast win??
Jinny- I guess so. He is going to dump me anyway after I tell him.
Magda- Tell him what?
Jinny- I’ll tell you when you come over tonight.
Magda- Okay.

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The rest of the day went alright. Stacy spent the rest of the day showing off her bracelet from “Jack”. Magda came home from school with Jinny. It was 6 o’clock and time for dinner. Casey kept staring at Magda. He has had a crush on her since she was in 7th grade. Jinny found it rather funny. John Sr. and John Jr. of course talked about guns and stuff. Jinny’s mother did not join them for dinner. She ate in her room. After dinner Jinny and Magda went into her bedroom to talk.

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Magda- Alright now what is it that you want to tell me?
Jinny- Well...wait a minute. *Gets up and opens the door. John Jr. stood there* Get out of my doorway John.
John Jr.- Fine. I didn’t want to listen to your girl stuff anyway! *Storms downstairs*
Jinny- *Slams door* Well that takes care of him.
Magda- Alright. Would you please tell me already? I am dying!!!!!
Jinny- Okay. Now I am not certain but I think I am pregnant.
Magda- What!? Oh my God!! You are only 15 years old!!
Jinny- Yeah tell that to my biological clock.
Magda- Is it Jack’s?
Jinny- Of course it is Jack’s!!! Who else would it be??
Magda- You’re right. I’m sorry.
Jinny- It’s ok.
Magda- You said you aren’t sure?
Jinny- No I’m not. I know that I am 2 weeks late.
Magda- Well that can be from stress. Have you bought a test?
Jinny- Yeah. *Gets her book bag and pulls out the test* I stole it from a drug store two days ago.
Magda- Why did you steal it?
Jinny- I didn’t actually want people seeing me buy that thing.
Magda- True.
Jinny- Plus I left money and a note. I even left a tip so I didn’t do anything wrong.
Magda- Ok I believe you. When are you going to take it.
Jinny- Well I will go into the bathroom now. Will you keep a lookout?
Magda- Sure.
Jinny did her thing in the bathroom and she came out and Magda ran into Jinny’s bedroom after Jinny.
Jinny- Ok now it says to wait 2 minutes. *Sets alarm clock for 2 minutes from then* *1 minute has already passed*
Magda- Why do they make people wait for these things?
Jinny- Cause if you don’t they won’t be accurate.
Magda- They aren’t totally accurate anyway.
Jinny- Yes they are. See it says on the box 100% accurate.
Magda- Not all sticks are-- *Alarm clock goes off*
Jinny- Well, I guess it is ready.
Magda- Yeah I guess so.
Jinny- You go over.
Magda- ME!? No way, you go.
Jinny- Fine. *Went over to the test* It is negative.
Magda- *Big sigh* Wow thank god.
Jinny- *Sigh* Yeah, thank god.
Magda- What’s wrong?
Jinny- Nothing. Nothing at all.

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Magda called her mom and asked if she could sleep over Jinny’s house and Magda’s mom said yes. During the night, Jinny raced out of her bed and rushed to the bathroom. Magda heard her and ran after her. When Magda saw she was puking her guts out. Magda grabbed Jinny’s hair back. After 10 minutes, she was done.
Jinny- *Wiped her mouth* Thanks.
Magda- You okay?
Jinny- Don’t feel too well.
Magda- You probably just need a good nights sleep. Just don’t eat anymore of your dad’s cooking! *They both laughed and went to sleep*.
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of course we want more now!!!!!!!!!
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That was great! Post more soon!
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Old 02-06-2004, 01:55 PM   #14
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I am such a ditz I forgot to add something in the first post. I was writing this fic because my friend Kiera couldn't finish her fic about Jinny in Highschool so I just wanted to give credit to Kie!!! THANKS FOR LETTING ME USE THE IDEA!
And again, sorry I forgot that.
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Hey! I'm gonna give ya a new page on this fic too!
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