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CANDACE DELORENZO1 · 02-01-2004, 09:07 PM

CD and Nate were coming back from dinner at their favorite Italian Restaurant. They had decided to go to CD's place since they went to Nate's the last time they went out.

CD: Nate dinner was great, and the company too!

Nate: Same here *he leaned in to give CD a peck on the cheek and it made CD blush a bit*

As they turned the corner CD saw an hipanic looking girl that didn't look more than 13 or 14 sitting/sleeping outside her door.

CD: What the hell who is that.

Nate: What are you talking about?

CD: I'm talking about her *pointing to the young girl in front of her apartment*

Nate: Ohh. Well, maybe we should wake her up and find out who she is and find out why she came here.

*CD agrees and bends down to wake the young girl up*

The Girl: Oh, hey I was wondering if you know who Candace DeLorenzo is? I was waiting for somebody to talk to but no one came and I guess I fell asleep.

CD: Uh, yeah that's me, may I help you?

Girl: Great, could we talk inside a minute.

CD: Yeah sure. *CD, Nate and the mysterious girl went inside CD's apartment, and Nate went to get all three of them some drinks*

CD: So who are you and why are you here looking for me?

Girl: My name is Valerie DeLorezo and I am 14 years old and I have something important to tell you, but I don't now how.

That is all for now. I will keep it coming don't worry.

CD: Its okay you can tell me, what's on your mind?

Valerie: okay, I have been doing research on my family while I was in the orphange.it showed that I have and aunt name Candace DeLorenzo. So since that is you, I guess that means I am your niece. I think that I met you when I was 4 years old, but I couldn't quite remember. *some tears started to come out and flow down her cheeks and CD went beside her and put her arm around her*

Nate: I think I better go it looks personal.

CD: Okay I will see you tomorrow then *goes to see Nate out and then returns her attention to Valerie again*

Valerie: Do you recognize me?

CD: At first I didn't, but now I remember you mom coming over to my place so I could see you, you see the reason your mom and I never came over to each other's place or talked much is because we didn't get along that well.

Valerie: Oh, well I was wondering if you could get custody of me and I could live with you, because to tell you the truth I hate it and the orphange.

CD: *coming closer to Valerie* I would love to have you live here since you hate to live at the orphange so much. I will set in appointment with the courthouse so we can get started, Okay.

Valerie: Okay, can we go to bed I am a little tired.

CD: Yeah I am beat myself

The girls went down the hall and went to sleep the night away.

That's all for tonight it is getting late.

The next morning Valerie woke up to the smell of eggs, toast and bacon. She got out of bed and went into the kitchen to find that CD had made breakfast for the both of them. CD had called the Captain already to tell her she would not be able to come in that morning because of 'personal' reasons, so she decided to spend time with Valerie.

Valerie: *Coming into the kitchen* Wow, this looks great I can't believe you did this for me.

CD: Hey good morning, and I am glad that you like it. I would do anything for you. Hey I was hoping to get to know you better, so I planned a whole day just for us, what do you say.

Valerie: *with enthusiasum* Yeah, that be great!

CD: Great!

After the girls eat their breakfast they both go their stuff together to go out.

Bye guys for now

(In the car)

CD: What do you want to do today?

Valerie: I really would like to go to a movie.

CD: Great me too! Let's go.

When they reached the movie theater, they got drinks, popcorn and some candy.hehe kind of like me at the movies!!

After they came back from the movie, CD set a day with the courthouse to plan CD's custody of Valerie.

CD: Well, Valerie I set a date next week to go to the courthouse.

Valerie: ALLRIGHT!!

CD: I can see you are excited even though you don't know if you are going to be able to stay with me.

Valerie: Well I am just thinking on the positive side, I mean so far you are great with me and I cannot see why any body would not see that. I do.

CD: Well thankyou. I will be sure to remember that.

Valerie: You're welcome, and you do that. Okay since there will probably going to be a good chance that I will be living with you, what should I call you? Aunt Candace?

CD: My friends and co-workers call me CD and you will hear that all the time, so you can call me CD. Is that okay with you?

Valerie: Yeah, that's fine. So CD it is. *looks at the clock* Oh God I have to go meet someone I will be back at 6:30 I promise.

CD: WAIT A MINUTE! Who are you meeting can I have a number and the place you are going.

Valerie: Yeah sure. *writes some stuff down for CD* Bye

CD: Hey, be back promptly and 6:30 or I am going ou looking and you don't want me to go out looking

Valerie: Alright, alright. I will be back at 6:30 don't worry

CD: Okay have fun

Valerie: okay bye CD

CD: bye Valerie

That's all for now I will be back to post more later!! :wave

****************************************************

At 6:30 Valerie came through the door of the apartment as promised. And went into her room to change and then went into the kitchen.

Valerie: *entering the kitchen* Hey CD, I am back and to find you making dinner for me thanks.

CD: Hey. Oh this, it is no big deal. So did you have fun with your friends.

Valerie: Yeah we just hang out at the mall for a while. Um, about the fact that I had to rush out is because I had to go down to the orphanage to tell them that i would be staying with you. Is that okay?

CD: Yeah, that is great!

After the girls talked for a while and had dinner they cleared the dishes and hang out in the apartment for a bit. Soon it got late and the girls went to bed.

Sorry guys for making it so short it is just because I have so little time this weekend to do stuff, but there will be more so hang in there!!

CD DeLorenzo · 02-01-2004, 09:26 PM

who the hell are you? LOL just kidding... welcome to the boards... I'm cat, and keep it coming!!!

croatian_princess · 02-01-2004, 09:29 PM

:cat,

the pic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And CANDACE DELORENZO1,

I'm Jordan. Please post more.

candace~n~nathan · 02-01-2004, 10:00 PM

Hey, that was EXCELLENT!!!!! can't wait for more!!!!!!!

btw, I'm Lisa!!!! WELCOME!!!!

maria1986 · 02-01-2004, 10:39 PM

This is great so far!!!!!...Keep it coming!

Im Maria btw....

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 02-01-2004, 11:39 PM

Come on don't leave us there!! MORE!!

monkeygirl · 02-01-2004, 11:45 PM

hi, I'm Deirdre, welcome to the boards! the fic is real intersesting, keep it coming!

Snowfall · 02-02-2004, 01:32 AM

Hey, there!

I'm Tara. Welcome to the boards! Your story is great. Keep it coming!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 02-02-2004, 01:48 AM

Oh, where are my manners!!! I am Kelly, the BIGGEST Nancy McKeon fan in the world! Welcome aboard!

planet_stella · 02-02-2004, 02:08 PM

Whohoooo! New fanfic!And a new person on the boards! Welcome.Btw I'm Rasa.

*Nancy Mckeon* · 02-02-2004, 08:07 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Oh, where are my manners!!! I am Kelly, the BIGGEST Nancy McKeon fan in the world! Welcome aboard!

yep!! almost as big as me!! lol and im Jenna btw.....

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 02-02-2004, 10:31 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
yep!! almost as big as me!! lol and im Jenna btw.....

I don't think so...I am DEF the biggest. Ask Cat and Lisa. They will tell you..hehe

turtle63102 · 02-07-2004, 01:19 AM

Hey, great fic! Btw, I'm Mary Kate, welcome to the bourds!

CANDACE DELORENZO1 · 02-17-2004, 09:32 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by turtle63102
Hey, great fic! Btw, I'm Mary Kate, welcome to the bourds!

Hey Mary Kate, I am Maria and I am sorry I haven't been posting that much lately. I am telling you and everybody that I have been busy and I will be back on to post more when I am no so busy. See, it is just my cousins came in from Seattle and I only get to see them once or twice a year and I wanted to visit them. And of course I have been busy with school, so yeah I have had my hands full, but I promise when I am free I will post more soon!

zwalane · 02-17-2004, 11:52 PM

Hey Maria I'm Sequoyah sorry I haven't posted sooner. BTW great fic.

02-01-2004, 09:07 PM	#1
CANDACE DELORENZO1 Tracey Needham Rocks Occasional Poster Join Date: Feb 01, 2004 Location: North Carolina Posts: 46	The Visitor Of A Lifetime CD and Nate were coming back from dinner at their favorite Italian Restaurant. They had decided to go to CD's place since they went to Nate's the last time they went out. CD: Nate dinner was great, and the company too! Nate: Same here he leaned in to give CD a peck on the cheek and it made CD blush a bit As they turned the corner CD saw an hipanic looking girl that didn't look more than 13 or 14 sitting/sleeping outside her door. CD: What the hell who is that. Nate: What are you talking about? CD: I'm talking about her pointing to the young girl in front of her apartment Nate: Ohh. Well, maybe we should wake her up and find out who she is and find out why she came here. CD agrees and bends down to wake the young girl up The Girl: Oh, hey I was wondering if you know who Candace DeLorenzo is? I was waiting for somebody to talk to but no one came and I guess I fell asleep. CD: Uh, yeah that's me, may I help you? Girl: Great, could we talk inside a minute. CD: Yeah sure. CD, Nate and the mysterious girl went inside CD's apartment, and Nate went to get all three of them some drinks CD: So who are you and why are you here looking for me? Girl: My name is Valerie DeLorezo and I am 14 years old and I have something important to tell you, but I don't now how. That is all for now. I will keep it coming don't worry. CD: Its okay you can tell me, what's on your mind? Valerie: okay, I have been doing research on my family while I was in the orphange.it showed that I have and aunt name Candace DeLorenzo. So since that is you, I guess that means I am your niece. I think that I met you when I was 4 years old, but I couldn't quite remember. some tears started to come out and flow down her cheeks and CD went beside her and put her arm around her Nate: I think I better go it looks personal. CD: Okay I will see you tomorrow then goes to see Nate out and then returns her attention to Valerie again Valerie: Do you recognize me? CD: At first I didn't, but now I remember you mom coming over to my place so I could see you, you see the reason your mom and I never came over to each other's place or talked much is because we didn't get along that well. Valerie: Oh, well I was wondering if you could get custody of me and I could live with you, because to tell you the truth I hate it and the orphange. CD: coming closer to Valerie I would love to have you live here since you hate to live at the orphange so much. I will set in appointment with the courthouse so we can get started, Okay. Valerie: Okay, can we go to bed I am a little tired. CD: Yeah I am beat myself The girls went down the hall and went to sleep the night away. That's all for tonight it is getting late. The next morning Valerie woke up to the smell of eggs, toast and bacon. She got out of bed and went into the kitchen to find that CD had made breakfast for the both of them. CD had called the Captain already to tell her she would not be able to come in that morning because of 'personal' reasons, so she decided to spend time with Valerie. Valerie: Coming into the kitchen Wow, this looks great I can't believe you did this for me. CD: Hey good morning, and I am glad that you like it. I would do anything for you. Hey I was hoping to get to know you better, so I planned a whole day just for us, what do you say. Valerie: with enthusiasum Yeah, that be great! CD: Great! After the girls eat their breakfast they both go their stuff together to go out. Bye guys for now (In the car) CD: What do you want to do today? Valerie: I really would like to go to a movie. CD: Great me too! Let's go. When they reached the movie theater, they got drinks, popcorn and some candy.hehe kind of like me at the movies!! After they came back from the movie, CD set a day with the courthouse to plan CD's custody of Valerie. CD: Well, Valerie I set a date next week to go to the courthouse. Valerie: ALLRIGHT!! CD: I can see you are excited even though you don't know if you are going to be able to stay with me. Valerie: Well I am just thinking on the positive side, I mean so far you are great with me and I cannot see why any body would not see that. I do. CD: Well thankyou. I will be sure to remember that. Valerie: You're welcome, and you do that. Okay since there will probably going to be a good chance that I will be living with you, what should I call you? Aunt Candace? CD: My friends and co-workers call me CD and you will hear that all the time, so you can call me CD. Is that okay with you? Valerie: Yeah, that's fine. So CD it is. looks at the clock Oh God I have to go meet someone I will be back at 6:30 I promise. CD: WAIT A MINUTE! Who are you meeting can I have a number and the place you are going. Valerie: Yeah sure. writes some stuff down for CD Bye CD: Hey, be back promptly and 6:30 or I am going ou looking and you don't want me to go out looking Valerie: Alright, alright. I will be back at 6:30 don't worry CD: Okay have fun Valerie: okay bye CD CD: bye Valerie That's all for now I will be back to post more later!! :wave **************************************************** At 6:30 Valerie came through the door of the apartment as promised. And went into her room to change and then went into the kitchen. Valerie: entering the kitchen Hey CD, I am back and to find you making dinner for me thanks. CD: Hey. Oh this, it is no big deal. So did you have fun with your friends. Valerie: Yeah we just hang out at the mall for a while. Um, about the fact that I had to rush out is because I had to go down to the orphanage to tell them that i would be staying with you. Is that okay? CD: Yeah, that is great! After the girls talked for a while and had dinner they cleared the dishes and hang out in the apartment for a bit. Soon it got late and the girls went to bed. Sorry guys for making it so short it is just because I have so little time this weekend to do stuff, but there will be more so hang in there!!
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02-01-2004, 09:26 PM	#2
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02-01-2004, 09:29 PM	#3
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	__________________ ~croatian_princess~ _________________________ "Don't hive up hope."~Candace DeLorenzo "Have some faith."~Dana Stowe

02-01-2004, 10:00 PM	#4
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	Hey, that was EXCELLENT!!!!! can't wait for more!!!!!!! btw, I'm Lisa!!!! WELCOME!!!!
	__________________ Drunk guy: What's her name? Is it Jennifer? It's usually Jennifer. Is it Heather? Sometimes it's Heather. Nate- It's Candace. But we, uh, call her CD.

02-01-2004, 11:45 PM	#7
monkeygirl I love Nate and CD! Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 21, 2003 Location: drowning in a pool of tears Posts: 148	hi, I'm Deirdre, welcome to the boards! the fic is real intersesting, keep it coming!
	__________________ http://www.tvlinksonline.com/boards/...postid=1437138 http://www.tvlinksonline.com/boards/...postid=1437174 CD: Just for the record, I would hide you in my attic any time Nate: Even if the Nazi's were after me? CD: even if Gestapo picked me up and tortured me, I wouldn't reveal your hiding place Nate: I always knew that about you ~~~~~~~~~~ Through the sun, through the rain, I will still feel the same Be it good, be it bad, I'll always understand When you're down, when you're blue, I will be there for you, 'Cause nobody does it better, We're gonna get there together ~ S Club (or, as I would like Nate to say to CD, and having them still together!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~~~~~ http://www.livejournal.com/users/deirdre_88/

02-01-2004, 10:39 PM	#5
maria1986 HATCHEE GAL Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 15, 2001 Location: FL Posts: 780	This is great so far!!!!!...Keep it coming! Im Maria btw....

02-01-2004, 11:39 PM	#6
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02-02-2004, 01:32 AM	#8
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02-02-2004, 01:48 AM	#9
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Oh, where are my manners!!! I am Kelly, the BIGGEST Nancy McKeon fan in the world! Welcome aboard!

02-02-2004, 02:08 PM	#10
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02-07-2004, 01:19 AM	#13
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	__________________ "Number one, you're very close to having a bond between my foot and your ass, alright, and that's about the only bond we're ever going to share, and number two, the 'chick's' name is Inspector DeLorenzo, and if I ever hear you refer to her as a 'chick' again, I'm going to go ahead and refer you to number one. OK?!" ~ Nate Basso

02-17-2004, 11:52 PM	#15
zwalane Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 08, 2003 Location: Southeastern Louisiana Posts: 228	Hey Maria I'm Sequoyah sorry I haven't posted sooner. BTW great fic.