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HATCHEE GAL
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Ok I started a new fic...tell my what you think...
![]() **************************************************** Two years had passed since CD left. No one had seen or heard from her. During the first couple of months everyone figured she just needed some time to think about things, and then she would be back. But as time went by, it became obvious she was never coming back. Nate was now engaged to his ex-wife Molly. They had seen each other at a high school reunion and began dating. Old feelings had returned, so they decided to give it another shot. Nate still thought about CD, but he was over her. He spent the first few months being mad. Then he was sad for awhile. Eventually he realised he was never going to be with her, so he moved on with his life. He and Molly had a house and were talking about a family. He was happy, or atleast he thought he was. CD was now a guidence counsler at a high school. Not something she ever pictured herself doing, but it paid the bills. She did enjoy helping the kids though. Her love life hadn't exactly been that great the past two years either, but things were looking up. She was now seeing a guy who she really liked. He was really handsom and had a great job. He treated her like a princess too. She still thought about Nate as well. She couldn't stand herself for what she did to him. The note she left was just a lie. She didn't leave him because of he reminded her of the job, she left him because it was moving so fast and she thought he would just break her heart like all the other men in her life. She of course later realised how dumb she was. Nate would never do that, but by that time she thought it was too late to go back to him. So she started dating again. Nate was woken early one morning by his fiance'. Molly:"Morning baby..." Nate:"hey..." he mumbled Molly:"time for work...get up..." Nate:"give me five more minutes..." Molly:"nope...breakfast is waiting..." she smiled and kissed his cheek... Nate:"fine...Im up..." He groaned and got out of bed. This was a typical morning since he and Molly had gotten together.She was your regular little house wife, always did everything for him, cooked everynight, ect. He had a shower and got dressed. He went downstairs where Molly had everything waiting for him. He sat down and started to eat. Molly:"sooo..." she grinned at him from the other side of the table. Nate:" sooo?..." Molly:"you gonna catch bad guys today?" she grinned Nate:"well I AM a cop..." he shoved some pancakes in his mouth. Molly giggled and got him a napkin. Molly:"Im gonna go do some shopping today, and then work some more on the wedding plans." Nate:"Molly I told you I just want to get married at city hall." Molly:"but Nate!....I have always wanted a big wedding!" Nate:"you had a big wedding the first time we were married!." Molly:"well I want another big wedding!" she protested Nate:"fine. whatever." he got up and grabbed his coat. He kissed Molly goodbye and left. He walked into the bullpin. Raina was already at her desk looking at a file. She looked up and smiled when she saw him walk in but then frowned. Raina:"why the long face?" Nate:"it's Molly. All this wedding stuff is driving me crazy." Raina:"why?" Nate:"she wants this big wedding. We have already did that once. whats the point of doing it again?" Raina:"I don't know" Raina shrugged, she didn't care for Molly too much anyway, but she would never told Nate that. Nate:"well anyway...most marriages end in divorce.so whats the point of going all out again?" Raina:"if you feel that way Nate, do you think you should get married?" Nate:"yeah...I mean we love each other...it's just...I don't know..." Raina just gave him a re-asurring smile and told him about the case. **************************************************** |
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TRACEY FOREVER!!!
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awwwwwwww that's sad so far :'( But I can't wait to read more again!!!! And THANK GOD it's not Lily!!!!!!!
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Good call! At least she's better than Lily!!! But CD's the best SO.............. Anyway, awesome start and keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Drunk guy: What's her name? Is it Jennifer? It's usually Jennifer. Is it Heather? Sometimes it's Heather. Nate- It's Candace. But we, uh, call her CD. |
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I love Nate and CD!
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it's good, i just hope Nate eventually breaks up with Molly and meets CD and they fall back in love............. lol good! keep it coming!
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http://www.tvlinksonline.com/boards/...postid=1437138 http://www.tvlinksonline.com/boards/...postid=1437174 CD: Just for the record, I would hide you in my attic any time Nate: Even if the Nazi's were after me? CD: even if Gestapo picked me up and tortured me, I wouldn't reveal your hiding place Nate: I always knew that about you ~~~~~~~~~~ Through the sun, through the rain, I will still feel the same Be it good, be it bad, I'll always understand When you're down, when you're blue, I will be there for you, 'Cause nobody does it better, We're gonna get there together ~ S Club (or, as I would like Nate to say to CD, and having them still together!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~~~~~ http://www.livejournal.com/users/deirdre_88/ |
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~Amy Lee Fan~
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mmmmmooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CD and Nate Forever
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Awww, that's so sad! How could Nate ever get over CD?
This is looking good, post more soon!
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HATCHEE GAL
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**************************************************** CD had gotten to the school late that morning. She quickly went to the front office to get her mail. The principal came out. Principal:"Did you hear about what happend last night?" CD:"no...what happend?" she asked confused Principal:"Melanie Johnson was killed." CD:"Oh my God!, what happend?" she asked shocked Principal:"She was stabbed to death." CD:"that is awful.Do they know who did it?" Principal:"no. The police are investigating it. Actually, they are sending a couple inspectors up here to question some of the students and teachers. Oh and you too." CD:"ok. I'll be in my Office then." CD went to her office and pulled up Melanie's file. She really missed being a cop. Sometimes she contimplated going back, but the students really liked her and she didn't want to leave them. Nate and Raina arrived to the High School a few hours later. Nate:"we should probably talk to the Principal first. Then the Guidence Counsler." Raina:"yeah." they walked to the Principals office first. She told them Melanie never came to her office, so she didn't know much about her. Principal:"Mrs. DeLorenzo's office is right down that hall" she told them and returned to a student she had been scolding. Raina:"Mrs. Delorenzo. Isn't that funny?" Nate:"Not really." Nate groaned They arrived to the office and Nate knocked on the door. CD:"Come on in." she said and hung up the phone.She couldn't believe what she saw. Raina:"CD!" she exclaimed. Nate just stood in shock. CD got up to hug them both. She hugged Raina first. CD:"wow you look great!" Raina:"thanks. You look good too!" CD then turned to Nate. CD:"Nate..." she smiled Nate:"CD.." he smiled back and hugged her. CD:"how are you?" Nate:"good. Guidence Counsler?" CD laughed a little. CD:"yeah. It's great though." She told Nate and Raina to sit down. She handed them Melanie's file. CD:"she was a good kid. She didn't have the best grades. But she got along well with everyone." Nate:"do you know who she hung out with? Her boyfriends?" CD nodded and wrote all the names she could think of. They talked some more about the case. It felt just like old times. CD was impressed at how much mature Raina was. She had also grew into a really great cop. Raina:"hey, you wanna come have lunch with us? Catch up on old times?" CD:"I don't know, Im really busy" Nate:"come on. We would like to know what you have been up to." he smiled CD:"ok, let me get my coat." The three of them drove to Anchorside. CD:"wow this place looks different!" CD said as they sat down at a table. Raina:"yeah they re-did the place. um, Im gonna run over to the station and see if Jinny and Magda wanna eat with us too" CD:"ok." CD smiled glad to see all her old friends again. Raina left and Nate and CD sat in an ackward silence. CD finally spoke up. CD:"Nate, about me leaving like I did...." Nate cut her off. Nate:"listen, I really don't care." he said rather rudely CD:"fine...I just thought you would like an explanation." she said back rudely That sat in silence for a few more minutes. Nate:"so, how have you been?" CD:"fine. really busy with my job. You?" Nate:"I have been really good. Im engaged" he wanted to act like she didn't even matter to him anymore, but in reality, he just wanted to lean over and kiss her. CD:"oh, Congratulations. To Lilly?" she asked feeling like someone just put a knife in her heart. Nate laughed Nate:"no. She is married to some rich guy in New York. Im engaged to Molly, my ex-wife." That made CD hurt even more. She remembered how Nate talked about how great she was and how shouldn't have let it slip away. CD:"thats nice..." was all she could get out **************************************************** |
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TRACEY FOREVER!!!
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awww that was great!!!!!! I can't wait to see the sparks fly between them two again!
Great job so far!!!!! So keep going!!!!!!!
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AWW!! that was really good!!!! i can't wait for those 2 to shut up and get it on!! LOL
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Great Job!,Keep It Going!
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I love Nate and CD!
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aww, that is soo sad! I'm really crying here.
I really hope it turns out good! lol keep going!!!
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CD and Nate Forever
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That was so wonderful! Post more soon!
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It's great so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.Post more.
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This fic is So great!!!!! Of course,it'd be better if CD and Nate got back together *wink wink* Post more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!
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I know! I'll give ya a new page and then you'll be forced to post more!
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