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kingconan31 · 01-23-2004, 09:56 PM

Take my hand
By Eric Brown
AKA Dark Passion

Hello I saw you looking at me and I wanted to say hello, I can tell by the look in your eyes that you like what you see. And honey I can say after looking into your eyes I like what I see also. Let me ask you a question are you looking for a man that will treat you like a queen, a man who knows how to act like a real man. But not scared to show that he can love and feel.

Take my hand and let me sweep you into my arms; let me hold you close to my heart. I can see that you have been hurt many times in your life but don’t let that scare you from taking a chance with me. Don’t be afraid of love and passion, for I want to love you like no man has ever loved you in your life.

I want to take you to a height of passion you have never seen, make you yell my name in the passion of love. Love the way my name sounds from your mouth, dance with me in the passion and warmth of my love. Just want to get next to you and get to know you, if you are ready for the love of your life take my hand.

Parakeet03 · 01-23-2004, 10:00 PM

beautiful beautiful poem!!!

michelleLa · 01-23-2004, 10:00 PM

that's very nice. If you give that to a girl and ask her out... she'll say yes!

Parakeet03 · 01-23-2004, 10:01 PM

defintely!!!

i would, lol.

michelleLa · 01-23-2004, 10:08 PM

LOL. yo parakeet i like u! ur cool girl i like u.

Parakeet03 · 01-23-2004, 10:12 PM

Thanks!!!

kingconan31 · 01-23-2004, 10:39 PM

Thank you very much I love to write.

Superstar · 01-24-2004, 06:02 AM

Excellent. I'm better at stories than poem IMO. Apparently I'm good though, my English teacher usually gives me an A!

moeee · 01-24-2004, 06:15 AM

Great poem!!!!!!!!!Excellent news, Superstar!!!!!!!
Superstar stories!!!!

Superstar · 01-24-2004, 01:12 PM

LOL

kingconan31 · 01-24-2004, 04:01 PM

Thank you for all the kind words.

moeee · 01-24-2004, 04:08 PM

welcome

michelleLa · 01-24-2004, 09:10 PM

You wrote it?

Parakeet03 · 01-24-2004, 09:25 PM

man, if u wrote that, u defiantely got some talent! no, u got major talent!!!!!

Superstar · 01-25-2004, 05:39 AM

You should write a book of poems!

01-23-2004, 09:56 PM	#1
kingconan31 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 11, 2003 Location: New Carollton Maryland Posts: 487	A poem for you. Take my hand By Eric Brown AKA Dark Passion Hello I saw you looking at me and I wanted to say hello, I can tell by the look in your eyes that you like what you see. And honey I can say after looking into your eyes I like what I see also. Let me ask you a question are you looking for a man that will treat you like a queen, a man who knows how to act like a real man. But not scared to show that he can love and feel. Take my hand and let me sweep you into my arms; let me hold you close to my heart. I can see that you have been hurt many times in your life but don’t let that scare you from taking a chance with me. Don’t be afraid of love and passion, for I want to love you like no man has ever loved you in your life. I want to take you to a height of passion you have never seen, make you yell my name in the passion of love. Love the way my name sounds from your mouth, dance with me in the passion and warmth of my love. Just want to get next to you and get to know you, if you are ready for the love of your life take my hand.
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01-23-2004, 10:00 PM	#2
Parakeet03 :-) Forum Veteran Join Date: Jan 04, 2004 Location: does it matter? Posts: 6,809	beautiful beautiful poem!!!

01-23-2004, 10:00 PM	#3
michelleLa Giggles Senior Member Join Date: Aug 06, 2003 Location: My house Posts: 2,079	that's very nice. If you give that to a girl and ask her out... she'll say yes!

01-23-2004, 10:01 PM	#4
Parakeet03 :-) Forum Veteran Join Date: Jan 04, 2004 Location: does it matter? Posts: 6,809	defintely!!! i would, lol.

01-23-2004, 10:08 PM	#5
michelleLa Giggles Senior Member Join Date: Aug 06, 2003 Location: My house Posts: 2,079	LOL. yo parakeet i like u! ur cool girl i like u.

01-23-2004, 10:12 PM	#6
Parakeet03 :-) Forum Veteran Join Date: Jan 04, 2004 Location: does it matter? Posts: 6,809	Thanks!!!

01-23-2004, 10:39 PM	#7
kingconan31 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 11, 2003 Location: New Carollton Maryland Posts: 487	Thank you very much I love to write.

01-24-2004, 06:02 AM	#8
Superstar Member Forum Icon Join Date: Dec 08, 2003 Posts: 63,316	Excellent. I'm better at stories than poem IMO. Apparently I'm good though, my English teacher usually gives me an A!

01-24-2004, 06:15 AM	#9
moeee Peanut Butter Ice Cream Pie Forum Legend Join Date: Jul 31, 2003 Posts: 40,094	Great poem!!!!!!!!!Excellent news, Superstar!!!!!!! Superstar stories!!!!

01-24-2004, 01:12 PM	#10
Superstar Member Forum Icon Join Date: Dec 08, 2003 Posts: 63,316	LOL

01-24-2004, 04:01 PM	#11
kingconan31 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 11, 2003 Location: New Carollton Maryland Posts: 487	Thank you for all the kind words.

01-24-2004, 04:08 PM	#12
moeee Peanut Butter Ice Cream Pie Forum Legend Join Date: Jul 31, 2003 Posts: 40,094	welcome

01-24-2004, 09:10 PM	#13
michelleLa Giggles Senior Member Join Date: Aug 06, 2003 Location: My house Posts: 2,079	You wrote it?

01-24-2004, 09:25 PM	#14
Parakeet03 :-) Forum Veteran Join Date: Jan 04, 2004 Location: does it matter? Posts: 6,809	man, if u wrote that, u defiantely got some talent! no, u got major talent!!!!!

01-25-2004, 05:39 AM	#15
Superstar Member Forum Icon Join Date: Dec 08, 2003 Posts: 63,316	You should write a book of poems!