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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 01-01-2004, 06:55 AM

This fic is based upon the 2003 Lifetime Original movie-Comfort and Joy. If you liked the movie, I am pretty sure you will like tis. Enjoy!

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It is a regular Monday morning and everything is going well at the Division. They just got a new case about a woman who was murdered and Jinny and Magda are in the car on their way to the crime scene. Jinny is now divored and single at the moment but she never went back to drugs or alcohol. Magda never saw Jonah again and was very content with Gabe. After they questoned the neighbors and herd the usual, "I don't know anything" , they went to the anchorside for a cup of coffee.

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They sat down and started talking.
"Are you okay Jin?" Magda asked.
Jinny sighed. "Yeah, I am fine why?"
Magda took a sip of her coffee. "Well, you haven't been the same since the divorce was finalized."
"If your divorce was just finalized, would you be in a good mood?" She asked sarcastically.
"I guess not. We should get back to the Division." She said a paid for the coffees and they left.

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When they got back, Kate came out of her office to talk to them.
"So how did it go at the crime scene?" Kate asked them.
Jinny took off her leather jacket and sat in her chair. "Well, no one saw anything. We are going to talk to her children because we just found out that her 3 children are supposed recieve $2.5 million dollars each when she passed. This woman was only 61 years old and had no medical problems."
"$2.5 million dollars each? Boy, I wish she weren't dead. I would have her adopt me!!" Kate said and laughed.
Everyone stared at her. "It was just a joke! Geez.." Kate said and went back into her office.
Jinny got up out of her chair and felt dizzy and grabbed on to he closet thing trying not to fall over. It was CD.
"Oh my God Jinny. Are you okay?" CD asked.
Jinny put her hand up to her forehead. "What? Yes, I'm...uh.. fine...fine."
"If you are fine, why are you still hoding on to me?" She said laughing.
"What?" Jinny realized she was holding CD's arm rather tight. "Oh I am so sorry. Guess I am not feeling to well."
Magda walked over to them. "Go home and get some rest. We can wait until tomorrow to question the kids. They aren't suspects."
"Yeah you are probably right. I will see you guys tomorrow." Jinny said and left for the evening.

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She went out to her car and go in. She started her car and began to make her way for home. She all of a sudden felt dizzy ad very light headed. She closed her eyes for a second because her vision got blurry and when she opened them, she accidentally swerved into the other lane and crashed into all of the cars in that lane stopped at a red light. She was unconsious when the paramedics got there.

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She finally woke up in the hospital a week later. When she awoke, a man sitting ina chair next to her bed had a very happy look on his face. Jinny had no idea who he was.
"You're awake!" He said and kissed her forehead. "Oh wait until you see her!" He then ran out of the room.
Jinny was really freaked out by that. "Who was that??" She shrugged and closed her eyes until the doctor came into the room.
"Hello Mrs. Rhiley. How are you feeling?" The doctor asked.
Jinny sat up. "Fine and--what? Wait a minute. Mrs. what??"
"Mrs. Rhiley." the doctor said.
Jinny was now totaly lost. "That's not my name."
The doctor sat next to he. "What is your name?"
"Jinny Estead. Inspetor Jinny Exstead." She said making him aware she was the police.
The doctor wrote that down. "And why are you here? What is te last thing you remember?"
"I was felling dizzy at work and went home early but got into a car accident on the way home. Why are you asking me this? Shouldn't you know why I am here?" She asked.
"Well I know why you are here but it is for different reasons." He answered.
Jinny was once again confused. "What do you mean?"
"Wait here." The doctor left and came back in again."This is why you are here."
Jinny's eyes popped. "A baby??"
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Well? What do you think? Should I go on?

*Nancy Mckeon* · 01-01-2004, 12:33 PM

yay!! lol i was thinking about writing a comfort and joy fic but if i started it i probly wouldn't finish it for a couple of years lol

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

croatian_princess · 01-01-2004, 05:21 PM

That was good!!!!! Post more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

candace~n~nathan · 01-01-2004, 07:49 PM

i REALLY liked that movie, so yeah, post more.

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 01-01-2004, 08:23 PM

Three replies? That's it? Oh well. I am glad some people like it at least. Enjoy this next part.
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Jinny was once again confused. "What do you mean?"
"Wait here." The doctor left and came back in again."This is why you are here."
Jinny's eyes popped. "A baby??"
The doctor handed Jinny her newborn baby girl. "Yes. You gave birth to your daughter two days ago."
"No I don't think so. I am divorced and have never ever thought of having a baby so this is not my baby. You have got me mixed up with someone else."
Just then, Mr. Rhiley walked into the room. "Isn't she beautiful sweetheart?" He leaned over and kissed her.
Jinny pulled him away. "Get away from me!"
"Honey what's wrong?" He aksed.
Jinny got very angry. "Call me honey again and I swear to God.."
The doctor got up. "Hank, may I see you outside for a minute?"
They stepped out while Jinny lay in her bed still stunned by what is happening.

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"What is going on with my wife doctor?" He asked.
"She says the last thing she remembers is being in a car accident. Was she ever in a car accident?" The doctor asked.
Hank thought for a minute. "Yes. She had a case of dizziness about five years ago and got into an accident on her way home from work. I am the one who found her in the car and stayed with her until she became consious. We have never been apart since. "
"I believe that might be what she is referring to. Did you say five years ago?"
Hank shook his head. "Yes."
"That should be around the year 2003. Let me ask her something." He walked back into the hospital room.

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The doctor sat back down. "Jinny, may I ask you a few questions?"
"Why not." She replied.
"Do you know where you are?" He asked.
She thought. "I know I am in a hispital but I am not sure which one."
He wrote that down. "Ok. What is your full name?"
"Jinny Louise Exstead. Formerly Ellis." She said.
"Ok...and what is todays date?" He finally asked.
Jinny had to think back. "Well, the day I got into my accident, it was Monday January 12, 2004."
The doctor realized what the problem was. "Okay. Will you excuse us?"
Jinny rolled her eyes. "Well aren't you going to let me in on what is going on?"
"We will be right back." He said and left the room.

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"It is some sort of a situational amnesia. It was brought on by trauma or shock. She only remembers her life from before you two met." The doctor explained.
Hank sighed. "So you are saying she doesn;t know who I am and doesn't remember our life together?"
He shook his head. "I am sorry but no. For the time being, she will not know you, as you have already seen. To try and calm her down, I think we should surround her with fimilar settings and people."
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That's all for right now? Does it suck? Please tell me. If it does I will try to change it to make it better.

HIGH ENOUGH · 01-01-2004, 09:12 PM

Good so far.

Snowfall · 01-02-2004, 02:21 AM

This is great! I just started reading it, and no, it certainly doesn't suck! Post more soon!

1strunfan · 01-02-2004, 11:51 AM

Great Job. I just read it, too. Sorry, I wanted to read it earlier, but I don't like to be reading too many fics at the same time. It's too easy to get confused. LOL. Anyway, excellent job, and now you can post more.

croatian_princess · 01-02-2004, 02:50 PM

You posted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so awsome!!!! Post more soon!!!

*Nancy Mckeon* · 01-02-2004, 03:25 PM

mmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

planet_stella · 01-02-2004, 03:29 PM

That was really great!!! Post more!

Bonnie Is Great! · 01-03-2004, 04:52 PM

Great job! More please!

bananasplit · 01-03-2004, 06:24 PM

That's really good. I hope you post more soon!

1strunfan · 01-06-2004, 09:39 PM

Hello, JinnyGirl88, do you remember us? We are the people waiting for you to POST MORE on this fic!!!

We are still waiting!!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 01-09-2004, 03:22 AM

WOW! Thats a lot of replies!!!!! Sorry I didn't post sooner. I had temporary amnesia? No? Ok well at least I tried. You guys are lucky I can't get to sleep and I decided to post more on this fic tonight. I will just have to sleep during classes tomorrow.

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"It is some sort of a situational amnesia. It was brought on by trauma or shock. She only remembers her life from before you two met." The doctor explained.
Hank sighed. "So you are saying she doesn;t know who I am and doesn't remember our life together?"
He shook his head. "I am sorry but no. For the time being, she will not know you, as you have already seen. To try and calm her down, I think we should surround her with fimilar settings and people."
Hank was trying to think of people he could call. "I could bring in people from the department. She will definitly know them!"
"Sounds like a good idea. Give them a call. The sooner the better." The doctor said.

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A few hours later, there was a knock on Jinny's hospital room door but she didn't hear it because she was sleeping so Hank answered the door. It was Kate.
"Hi Hank." She said.
Hank smiled. "Hi Kate. Uh, as I discussed with you over the phone, the doctor and I both think that maybe if we surrounded her with people she worked with and were very close to, she might start to remember some things or at least calm down."
"She is flipping. Heh, that's the Jinny Exstead I know! I will go talk to her. The other inspectors are on their way so they will be arriving shortly." Kate said and walked into the room.

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She sat down in the chair next to the bed and held Jinny's hand. Jinny felt someone touching her and immediately woke up.
"Cap, what are you doing here?" Jinny said with a smile, very glad someone familiar was there.
Kate smiled. "Well, I heard you were causing a comotion because you are saying you don't remember anything." Kate smiled.
Jinny laughed. "I seriously don't. I thought I was in the hospital because of the accident i was in and now I find out I am in here because I had a baby. Some guy named Hank is saying he is married to me. I am trying to explain to him that I don't have a husband and I just got a divorce from Jack but no one is listening to me. You believe me don't you Cap?"
"I believe you. I think you might be having a case of amnesia." Kate explained.
"Me? No way!" Jinny said in denial.
Kate smiled because Jinny was still her stubborn self. "OK well what year is it?"
"Man, everyone keeps asking me that. I think you are the ones with the memory problems. It is 2004." Jinny said.
Kate gave her a look. "No, it is 2009."
"I think I know what year it is and I am telling you it is 2004 Captain!" She said getting frustrated.
"It's D.C." She corrected.
Jinny was now lost. "What?"
Kate started to explain. "I am the D.C. When I didn't make Chief, they gave me the position of D.C. about 3 years ago. But you wouldn't know that because you weren't there."
"Why wasn't I there?" She asked.
"Well, you were in a car accident about 5 years ago and that is when you met Hank. After you two got married 10 months later, you quit the force to be a stay-at-home mom."
Jinny got it now. "Did you say 5 years ago I had an accident?"
"Yes. It was on the way home from work when you went home early cause you were a little sick and you got dizzy and crashed your car." Kate said.
"YES! That is the accident I was in and that is why I am here." She said.
Kate shook her head. "No you are here because you had little Sophie."
"All I know is that the last thing I remember doing is getting into that car accident." She said and started to cry.
Kate sat on the bed next to her and gave her a hug. "It's Ok. Maybe things will all come back to you when you see your daughter and your son."
"Son??" Jinny said now alarmed.
Kate looked at her. "Oh. Yes you also have a 13 month old son named Sam."
"What am I going to do?? I don't know who my husband and kids are, I don't know where I live or how I live, what my job is, nothing!" Jinny said as there was a knock on the door.
Jinny wiped her tears. "Come in."
It was CD. She looked just as she did the last day Jinny saw her in 2004.
"Hi Jinny. How are you feeling?" CD asked.
She smiled. "I am good. How are you?"
"I'm great!"
Kate got up from the bed. "Well, I am going to go outside and talk to Hank. I will be back to see you later ok Jin?"
"Alright. Thanks for coming." Jinny said and hugged Kate.
Kate hugged back. "Of course I would come. You may not be one of my inspectors anymore but you are still a damned good cop!"
Jinny smiled. "Thank you."
Kate nodded and left the room to talk to Hank and the doctor.

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Kate, Hank, and the doctor were all talking in the hallway.
"She told me the last thing that she remembers is the accident she had in 2004 and that is why she is here in the hospital." She explained.
"This amnesia she has is only temporary I promise. I will release her to you Hank tomorrow. Hopefully getting her home sooner will help her remember things a little more." The doctor said.
Hank smiled. "I hope so. Even if she doesn't remember our life together, I will still love her and try to help her as much as I can." Hank paused. "I am going to go back in with her." Hank went into the room.

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"No kidding? You are now the Captain?? That is great! You deserve it!" She said.
CD smiled. "Thank you."
Hank went over. "So how is everything going in here?"
CD looked at him. "Everything is going great. We were just catching up with each other."
"I am sorry to disturb you but couldI have a minute alone with Jinny?" Hank asked politely.
CD nodded. "Absolutely. I will be right outside if you need me Jinny." She said and left.
Hank sat down. "How are you feeling?"
"Stupid." She paused. "See, I do believe me and you are married and we do share a life together but I am sorry I just..I don't remember. Please don't be too angry at me."
"That is okay. I could never be mad at you. The doctor said I could take you home tomorrow. Hopefully the surrounding of the house will jog your memory." Hank explained.
Jinny smiled a little. "I hope so. It feels soo horrible not being able to know anything about your own life."
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Thats all I can do for tonight. If I get anough replies, maybe I will post some more when I get home from school.

01-01-2004, 06:55 AM	#1
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Comfort and Joy: The Division Version (If you liked the movie, you will love this!) This fic is based upon the 2003 Lifetime Original movie-Comfort and Joy. If you liked the movie, I am pretty sure you will like tis. Enjoy! ____________________________________________________ It is a regular Monday morning and everything is going well at the Division. They just got a new case about a woman who was murdered and Jinny and Magda are in the car on their way to the crime scene. Jinny is now divored and single at the moment but she never went back to drugs or alcohol. Magda never saw Jonah again and was very content with Gabe. After they questoned the neighbors and herd the usual, "I don't know anything" , they went to the anchorside for a cup of coffee. ------------------- They sat down and started talking. "Are you okay Jin?" Magda asked. Jinny sighed. "Yeah, I am fine why?" Magda took a sip of her coffee. "Well, you haven't been the same since the divorce was finalized." "If your divorce was just finalized, would you be in a good mood?" She asked sarcastically. "I guess not. We should get back to the Division." She said a paid for the coffees and they left. ------------------- When they got back, Kate came out of her office to talk to them. "So how did it go at the crime scene?" Kate asked them. Jinny took off her leather jacket and sat in her chair. "Well, no one saw anything. We are going to talk to her children because we just found out that her 3 children are supposed recieve $2.5 million dollars each when she passed. This woman was only 61 years old and had no medical problems." "$2.5 million dollars each? Boy, I wish she weren't dead. I would have her adopt me!!" Kate said and laughed. Everyone stared at her. "It was just a joke! Geez.." Kate said and went back into her office. Jinny got up out of her chair and felt dizzy and grabbed on to he closet thing trying not to fall over. It was CD. "Oh my God Jinny. Are you okay?" CD asked. Jinny put her hand up to her forehead. "What? Yes, I'm...uh.. fine...fine." "If you are fine, why are you still hoding on to me?" She said laughing. "What?" Jinny realized she was holding CD's arm rather tight. "Oh I am so sorry. Guess I am not feeling to well." Magda walked over to them. "Go home and get some rest. We can wait until tomorrow to question the kids. They aren't suspects." "Yeah you are probably right. I will see you guys tomorrow." Jinny said and left for the evening. ------------------ She went out to her car and go in. She started her car and began to make her way for home. She all of a sudden felt dizzy ad very light headed. She closed her eyes for a second because her vision got blurry and when she opened them, she accidentally swerved into the other lane and crashed into all of the cars in that lane stopped at a red light. She was unconsious when the paramedics got there. ------------------- She finally woke up in the hospital a week later. When she awoke, a man sitting ina chair next to her bed had a very happy look on his face. Jinny had no idea who he was. "You're awake!" He said and kissed her forehead. "Oh wait until you see her!" He then ran out of the room. Jinny was really freaked out by that. "Who was that??" She shrugged and closed her eyes until the doctor came into the room. "Hello Mrs. Rhiley. How are you feeling?" The doctor asked. Jinny sat up. "Fine and--what? Wait a minute. Mrs. what??" "Mrs. Rhiley." the doctor said. Jinny was now totaly lost. "That's not my name." The doctor sat next to he. "What is your name?" "Jinny Estead. Inspetor Jinny Exstead." She said making him aware she was the police. The doctor wrote that down. "And why are you here? What is te last thing you remember?" "I was felling dizzy at work and went home early but got into a car accident on the way home. Why are you asking me this? Shouldn't you know why I am here?" She asked. "Well I know why you are here but it is for different reasons." He answered. Jinny was once again confused. "What do you mean?" "Wait here." The doctor left and came back in again."This is why you are here." Jinny's eyes popped. "A baby??" ____________________________________________________ Well? What do you think? Should I go on?
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01-01-2004, 12:33 PM	#2
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	yay!! lol i was thinking about writing a comfort and joy fic but if i started it i probly wouldn't finish it for a couple of years lol mmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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01-01-2004, 05:21 PM	#3
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01-01-2004, 07:49 PM	#4
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	i REALLY liked that movie, so yeah, post more.
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01-01-2004, 08:23 PM	#5
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Three replies? That's it? Oh well. I am glad some people like it at least. Enjoy this next part. ____________________________________________________ Jinny was once again confused. "What do you mean?" "Wait here." The doctor left and came back in again."This is why you are here." Jinny's eyes popped. "A baby??" The doctor handed Jinny her newborn baby girl. "Yes. You gave birth to your daughter two days ago." "No I don't think so. I am divorced and have never ever thought of having a baby so this is not my baby. You have got me mixed up with someone else." Just then, Mr. Rhiley walked into the room. "Isn't she beautiful sweetheart?" He leaned over and kissed her. Jinny pulled him away. "Get away from me!" "Honey what's wrong?" He aksed. Jinny got very angry. "Call me honey again and I swear to God.." The doctor got up. "Hank, may I see you outside for a minute?" They stepped out while Jinny lay in her bed still stunned by what is happening. -------------------- "What is going on with my wife doctor?" He asked. "She says the last thing she remembers is being in a car accident. Was she ever in a car accident?" The doctor asked. Hank thought for a minute. "Yes. She had a case of dizziness about five years ago and got into an accident on her way home from work. I am the one who found her in the car and stayed with her until she became consious. We have never been apart since. " "I believe that might be what she is referring to. Did you say five years ago?" Hank shook his head. "Yes." "That should be around the year 2003. Let me ask her something." He walked back into the hospital room. -------------------- The doctor sat back down. "Jinny, may I ask you a few questions?" "Why not." She replied. "Do you know where you are?" He asked. She thought. "I know I am in a hispital but I am not sure which one." He wrote that down. "Ok. What is your full name?" "Jinny Louise Exstead. Formerly Ellis." She said. "Ok...and what is todays date?" He finally asked. Jinny had to think back. "Well, the day I got into my accident, it was Monday January 12, 2004." The doctor realized what the problem was. "Okay. Will you excuse us?" Jinny rolled her eyes. "Well aren't you going to let me in on what is going on?" "We will be right back." He said and left the room. -------------------- "It is some sort of a situational amnesia. It was brought on by trauma or shock. She only remembers her life from before you two met." The doctor explained. Hank sighed. "So you are saying she doesn;t know who I am and doesn't remember our life together?" He shook his head. "I am sorry but no. For the time being, she will not know you, as you have already seen. To try and calm her down, I think we should surround her with fimilar settings and people." ____________________________________________________ That's all for right now? Does it suck? Please tell me. If it does I will try to change it to make it better.
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01-01-2004, 09:12 PM	#6
HIGH ENOUGH Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 19, 2003 Location: making out with Hilary Duff and Tara Reid at the same time. Posts: 1,283	Good so far.
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01-02-2004, 02:21 AM	#7
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01-02-2004, 11:51 AM	#8
1strunfan FOL Forum Regular Join Date: Oct 26, 2002 Location: Oklahoma Posts: 817	Great Job. I just read it, too. Sorry, I wanted to read it earlier, but I don't like to be reading too many fics at the same time. It's too easy to get confused. LOL. Anyway, excellent job, and now you can post more.
	__________________ Kat with a "K" It's so much more romantic. What is greater than God, More evil than the devil, The poor have it, The rich need it, And if you eat it, you'll die? I asked God for all things that I might enjoy life. God said, No. I will give you life, so that you may enjoy all things.

01-02-2004, 02:50 PM	#9
croatian_princess ~~Lep andjeo~~ Frequent Poster Join Date: Sep 27, 2003 Location: Psych ward...I think....too much electroshock therapy... Posts: 402	You posted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so awsome!!!! Post more soon!!!

01-02-2004, 03:25 PM	#10
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01-02-2004, 03:29 PM	#11
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01-03-2004, 04:52 PM	#12
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01-03-2004, 06:24 PM	#13
bananasplit 'Whatsoever' Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 04, 2003 Location: Chi-Town Posts: 786	That's really good. I hope you post more soon!
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01-06-2004, 09:39 PM	#14
1strunfan FOL Forum Regular Join Date: Oct 26, 2002 Location: Oklahoma Posts: 817	Hello, JinnyGirl88, do you remember us? We are the people waiting for you to POST MORE on this fic!!! We are still waiting!!

01-09-2004, 03:22 AM	#15
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	WOW! Thats a lot of replies!!!!! Sorry I didn't post sooner. I had temporary amnesia? No? Ok well at least I tried. You guys are lucky I can't get to sleep and I decided to post more on this fic tonight. I will just have to sleep during classes tomorrow. ____________________________________________________ "It is some sort of a situational amnesia. It was brought on by trauma or shock. She only remembers her life from before you two met." The doctor explained. Hank sighed. "So you are saying she doesn;t know who I am and doesn't remember our life together?" He shook his head. "I am sorry but no. For the time being, she will not know you, as you have already seen. To try and calm her down, I think we should surround her with fimilar settings and people." Hank was trying to think of people he could call. "I could bring in people from the department. She will definitly know them!" "Sounds like a good idea. Give them a call. The sooner the better." The doctor said. -------------------- A few hours later, there was a knock on Jinny's hospital room door but she didn't hear it because she was sleeping so Hank answered the door. It was Kate. "Hi Hank." She said. Hank smiled. "Hi Kate. Uh, as I discussed with you over the phone, the doctor and I both think that maybe if we surrounded her with people she worked with and were very close to, she might start to remember some things or at least calm down." "She is flipping. Heh, that's the Jinny Exstead I know! I will go talk to her. The other inspectors are on their way so they will be arriving shortly." Kate said and walked into the room. -------------------- She sat down in the chair next to the bed and held Jinny's hand. Jinny felt someone touching her and immediately woke up. "Cap, what are you doing here?" Jinny said with a smile, very glad someone familiar was there. Kate smiled. "Well, I heard you were causing a comotion because you are saying you don't remember anything." Kate smiled. Jinny laughed. "I seriously don't. I thought I was in the hospital because of the accident i was in and now I find out I am in here because I had a baby. Some guy named Hank is saying he is married to me. I am trying to explain to him that I don't have a husband and I just got a divorce from Jack but no one is listening to me. You believe me don't you Cap?" "I believe you. I think you might be having a case of amnesia." Kate explained. "Me? No way!" Jinny said in denial. Kate smiled because Jinny was still her stubborn self. "OK well what year is it?" "Man, everyone keeps asking me that. I think you are the ones with the memory problems. It is 2004." Jinny said. Kate gave her a look. "No, it is 2009." "I think I know what year it is and I am telling you it is 2004 Captain!" She said getting frustrated. "It's D.C." She corrected. Jinny was now lost. "What?" Kate started to explain. "I am the D.C. When I didn't make Chief, they gave me the position of D.C. about 3 years ago. But you wouldn't know that because you weren't there." "Why wasn't I there?" She asked. "Well, you were in a car accident about 5 years ago and that is when you met Hank. After you two got married 10 months later, you quit the force to be a stay-at-home mom." Jinny got it now. "Did you say 5 years ago I had an accident?" "Yes. It was on the way home from work when you went home early cause you were a little sick and you got dizzy and crashed your car." Kate said. "YES! That is the accident I was in and that is why I am here." She said. Kate shook her head. "No you are here because you had little Sophie." "All I know is that the last thing I remember doing is getting into that car accident." She said and started to cry. Kate sat on the bed next to her and gave her a hug. "It's Ok. Maybe things will all come back to you when you see your daughter and your son." "Son??" Jinny said now alarmed. Kate looked at her. "Oh. Yes you also have a 13 month old son named Sam." "What am I going to do?? I don't know who my husband and kids are, I don't know where I live or how I live, what my job is, nothing!" Jinny said as there was a knock on the door. Jinny wiped her tears. "Come in." It was CD. She looked just as she did the last day Jinny saw her in 2004. "Hi Jinny. How are you feeling?" CD asked. She smiled. "I am good. How are you?" "I'm great!" Kate got up from the bed. "Well, I am going to go outside and talk to Hank. I will be back to see you later ok Jin?" "Alright. Thanks for coming." Jinny said and hugged Kate. Kate hugged back. "Of course I would come. You may not be one of my inspectors anymore but you are still a damned good cop!" Jinny smiled. "Thank you." Kate nodded and left the room to talk to Hank and the doctor. -------------------- Kate, Hank, and the doctor were all talking in the hallway. "She told me the last thing that she remembers is the accident she had in 2004 and that is why she is here in the hospital." She explained. "This amnesia she has is only temporary I promise. I will release her to you Hank tomorrow. Hopefully getting her home sooner will help her remember things a little more." The doctor said. Hank smiled. "I hope so. Even if she doesn't remember our life together, I will still love her and try to help her as much as I can." Hank paused. "I am going to go back in with her." Hank went into the room. -------------------- "No kidding? You are now the Captain?? That is great! You deserve it!" She said. CD smiled. "Thank you." Hank went over. "So how is everything going in here?" CD looked at him. "Everything is going great. We were just catching up with each other." "I am sorry to disturb you but couldI have a minute alone with Jinny?" Hank asked politely. CD nodded. "Absolutely. I will be right outside if you need me Jinny." She said and left. Hank sat down. "How are you feeling?" "Stupid." She paused. "See, I do believe me and you are married and we do share a life together but I am sorry I just..I don't remember. Please don't be too angry at me." "That is okay. I could never be mad at you. The doctor said I could take you home tomorrow. Hopefully the surrounding of the house will jog your memory." Hank explained. Jinny smiled a little. "I hope so. It feels soo horrible not being able to know anything about your own life." ____________________________________________________ Thats all I can do for tonight. If I get anough replies, maybe I will post some more when I get home from school.