My little fanfic

[Dannie IsNotHere]

This is my little version of a Nanny story, no spin-off. It’s just my own. Please tell me what you think. I'm still working on it, so tell me if you think I should write more.

Fran Fine was sitting on the couch, thinking. She wasn’t sure if she truly loved Mr. Sheffield. She knew she liked him, or even like liked him, but she wasn’t sure whether to take the big step of love. She stood up and went to Mr. Sheffield’s office.
“Mr. Sheffield?” She saw the chair was turned around, and a head was resting against a hand on the arm of the chair, but it wasn’t Mr. Sheffield. “Niles?”
The chair turned around. Sure enough, Niles was sitting there. His eyes were shiny with tears.
“Niles, what’s wrong?” asked Fran, rushing to his side.
“Well... Ms. Babcock has another new boyfriend. Ever since I told her I loved her, she’s been avoiding me and trying to make me jealous. I can’t take it.” Niles’ face fell.
“Aww... poor sweetie.” Fran gave Niles a hug. “How about I talk to her for you?”
“Oh, would you? I’d really appreciate that.” Niles leapt up from his seat and hugged her.

It was a few days later, and Fran never saw C.C. Babcock. She wondered what could have happened to her. She hadn’t talked to Mr. Sheffield yet. So much was on her mind- Maggie was seeing a new boy, a terrible “bad boy”, Brighton was going through a boy phase, and Gracie wasn’t being herself lately. Plus she had to worry about Niles’ problem, plus her own problems. She didn’t know what to think.
When everything got to her head, she went for a drive after making sure there was no one home, and leaving a note. She didn’t have any specific place to go, she just wanted to see where her heart would take her. She ended up at C.C.’s home. She knocked on the door, and C.C. answered. Fran noticed her hair was a mess, and she was wearing a robe.
“Ms. Babcock? Everything okay?” asked Fran, eyeing the bathrobe.
“Uh... yes, thanks for asking. As a matter of fact, everything’s fine. Well I guess I’ll see you later.” C.C. slammed the door. Fran knocked again. When C.C. answered, Fran found herself bursting in.
“Ms. Babcock, I hope you know what you’re doing! There’s a poor man living at the house I live in who loves you to death!”
C.C.’s eyes lit up. “Maxwell? Oh, my God. Is it Maxwell?”
“No, not Maxwell.”
“Not Jason....”
“Jason? Oh, you mean Brighton. And no, it’s not him.”
C.C. paused and thought. Her eyes widened so much, Fran thought they would fall out. “It’s not you, is it?”
“Me?? Hell, no!” Fran backed away. “It’s Niles!”
“Oh.” C.C. walked toward Fran. “See you later.”
“Oh? That’s all you have to say?? You HATE Niles!”
“Um...” C.C. began to back away. “Nanny Fine it was so nice of you to drop by. Now, don’t you have some children to take care of?”
“Well, they’re not home, but would you mind if I use your powder room real quick?”
“Um... no, I guess not.” Fran began walking toward the bathroom. As she passed all the rooms, she peeped inside for any signs of something being wrong with C.C. She passed C.C.’s bedroom, walked past it, and thenran back. She couldn’t believe what she saw!
“Niles????” Fran nearly passed out. Niles was there, lying in C.C.’s bed.
“Umm... Hello, Miss Fine!” Niles pulled the sheets over his head. C.C. walked up, and found Fran looking in the bedroom.
C.C. sighed. “Well, I guess the secret’s out. MY GOD!! NANNY FINE YOU CANNOT TELL ANYONE WHAT YOU JUST SAW!!!”
“Who me?” Fran walked back to the door and back to her car. As she drove, she tried to get the image out of her head. It didn’t work. She suddenly thought about Maxwell, which made her stomach fill with butterflies. She got into such deep thought about what it was she felt for him, and she wasn’t paying attention to what was going on in front of her. She suddenly collided into a silver car, which put her into spin and suddenly flipped her over.

“Miss Fine? Miss Fine?” Fran was hearing things.
“Who are you?” Fran woke up to find Mr. Sheffield standing over her, his hand on her shoulder. “Why is your hand touching me? Please go away.”
“Miss Fine, it’s me. Mr. Sheffield... Maxwell.” Maxwell was concerned.
“I don’t know you. Where am I anyway?”
“My God...” Maxwell sighed. “You really don’t know who I am, do you?”
“No, I don’t.” Maxwell could tell Fran was becomming annoyed.
“Miss Fine... Fran... You work for me. I’m not sure where you went, but I got a call and the police told me that you were in a car accident, and that’s why you’re here.” He held his breath, wondering what her reaction would be.
“Oh. I work for you? Really?” Fran looked more interested. Maxwell let out the breath.
“Yes, you’re my nanny.” Maxwell cringed, wondering if that seemed insulting.
“Nanny? What’s what supposed to mean?”
“Daddy, how is she??” Another voice came about, and a figure appeared in the hallway.
“Gracie, what are you doing here? I told you to stay in the waiting room.” Maxwell stood up.
“Daddy, the nurse told me to come here.”
“Well... where’s Maggie and Brighton?”
“They’re on their way here.”
Just then, the two other children appeared. Niles and C.C. were with them.
“Excuse me, Mr. Sheffield, but I feel uncomfortable with all these people here.”

[Kristen]

OMG that is SUCH a good story. I assume from what you've posted that there's another chapter in the works. Please post that ASAP. I bet Max'll make some dramatic move to prove his love to Fran. (I'm a die-hard Fran/Max person, if ya couldn't tell! )

Kristen
PS--If you guys want I can post one of my own fics too.

[smokeypeach]

haha i liked it esp the part when fran walks in cc's room and niles was there haha that was good

[JDS84]

That was a good story.

[Dannie IsNotHere]

More coming...

LOL Kristen, you kinda gave part of it away. :P hehe... that's okay.

[Dannie IsNotHere]

Here's some more... and there's still more to come.

“Oh, sorry. Niles, C.C., why don’t you take the children somewhere and leave Fran with me?”
“All right,” they agreed.
Niles began leading the children out of the room. “Okay, children. We’ll drop you off at the mall and pick you up in... oh... say three hours.”
Maxwell looked over his shoulder in confusion as C.C. nudged Niles and giggled.
When they left, Maxwell turned to Fran and smiled. “I’m sorry about what you’re going through, Miss Fine.”
“Um... thanks, I guess.” She turned her face to the side and lowered her eyes. Maxwell just stared at her.
“Miss Fine, listen. I want you to continue working for me, but until you get better I don’t want you doing anything. Got it?”
Fran paused. “For the umpteenth time, I have NO IDEA who you are! Maybe you know me and maybe I knew you once, but I don’t wanna feel like I’m living with a complete stranger. Where’s my real home?”
At that moment, there was a knock on the door. Fran’s mother, Sylvia walked in the room.
“Oh, my poor baby! I got here as soon as I could!” Sylvia ran and hugged her daughter. Fran pushed her away.
“Who are you?” Fran eyed her mother suspiciously.
“She’s your mother!” exclaimed Maxwell.
“Oh. Hi, Mother.” Fran rolled to her side and shut her eyes, hoping everyone would go away.
“Fran? Darling?” Sylvia’s eyes filled with tears. “She really doesn’t know who I am does, she?”
“I’m sorry, Sylvia,” Maxwell replied.

A few days later, Fran was out of the hospital. She had reluctantly agreed to live with Maxwell. Everyone there was especially nice to her, know what she’d been through.
Niles was on top of the world. C.C. was as well. Maxwell was concerned about their behavior, and he wondered where it was coming from. He was more concerned for Fran, who had been lying around mostly. He felt a strange feeling about it, but he couldn’t quite figure out what it was. Soon enough, he realized what it was.
He was in love. With Fran.
The feeling scared him. He wanted so badly to tell her, but he was too scared that she would think the wrong thing. But he was desperate. He decided then and there that it was now or never.
He found Fran lying on the sofa, crying.
“Miss Fine, what’s wrong?” he sat next to her.
“Oh, Mr... whatever your name is... I think that it’s so great of you to be treating me like this, letting me live in your house. I know I’ve probably been a pain,” she wailed. “I really appreciate this.” She hugged Maxwell and sobbed into his shoulder.
“Miss Fine... Fran... I need to tell you something.”
“Oh, okay. What is it?”
“Fran... I think I love you.”
“Huh? You think you love me? Are you serious?”
“No, I’m not serious. What I mean is I DO love you.”
“How can you love someone who doesn’t even know your name??”
“It’s Maxwell.”
“Maxwell... wow, what a rich-sounding name.”
“Fran, look at these pictures. See if you can remember anything.”
Maxwell took out a photo album and showed Fran pictures of his children, her with the children, and her with him.
“I really did live here, didn’t I?” asked Fran.
“Yes.” Maxwell looked into her eyes.
“Maxwell, I think I remember something.....”
Maxwell looked hopefully at her.
“Well... I remember... nothing.” The tears sprang back to her eyes. “At least I know someone loves me.”
And at that moment, Maxwell leaned in and kissed Fran. And he meant it.

[Kristen]

Great job!!! Being the Fran/Max fanatic that I am, I love it!! Anytime you get those two kissing, I'm happy. Can't wait to read more. I also enjoyed seeing Sylvia, too. She's one of my faves.

Kristen

[Dannie IsNotHere]

This isn't a lot, but I'm working on it.


The next morning, Fran woke up feeling groggy. She remembered what happened the night before, but for some reason she couldn’t get a grasp on it. Everything was happening so fast. She doesn’t know who anyone is, she lives with a random man she used to know, the kids are nice to her, and all of a sudden the guy falls in love and kisses her.
She decided to get some time away from where she was. That day, she ran to her room, packed her things, and ran out of the house. She didn’t know where to go, so she ended up in the park. She sat on the first bench she saw and began to think. She tried hard to remember anything- even the slightest memory- of Mr. Sheffield.
“Franny?” Fran looked up to see a blonde girl.
“Who are you?” Fran arched her eyebrow.
“It’s me, Val, sweetie. Your best friend.”
Fran thought for a moment. “Why is it that I remember you but I can’t remember anything else?” She smiled and gave her best friend a hug.
“So how are you doing?” Val sat next to Fran.
“Val, Maxwell kissed me last night?”
“He kissed you?!? Oh my God!”
“What’s so exciting about that?”
“Fran, you have the biggest crush on Mr. Sheffield, remember?”
So it’s Mr. Sheffield. I’ll have to remember that, Fran thought. “Actually, no I don’t.”
“Oh. So how many more days until this memory loss thing wears off?”
“Val... no one ever said it’s gonna wear off!”
“Oh. I knew that.”
Fran sighed. “Val, please tell me something. Why am I suddenly having feelings for Maxwell?”
“Because you’ve been at him for the last four years!”
“Four years?? Man, I need to get a life... and a memory! But anyway, I think I love him. He’s been so nice to me.”
“Then you have to tell him.”
“I guess I will... Thanks Val, I’ll see you later.”

Fran returned home about 10 minutes later. When she walked in, Maxwell was the first person she saw. She was about to tell him her feelings, but couldn’t go through with it. She was like that the rest of the day. She didn’t talk to Maxwell all day.

[Kristen]

This story is getting really good! I think maybe Fran should talk to C.C. and get advice from her, not knowing that C.C. doesn't like her, LOL! That could get really funny!

Kristen

[DianeChambers87]

As always fantastic story!! I like the nanny...i've always liked the nanny since I've been watching it since it was actually on one of the mainstream networks. Anyways, original plot, love the interactoin between Cece and Niles, and ofcourse Fran and Maxwell. Can't wait for more.



~Maria

p.s. Finish the Rebecca/Sam/Diane story!!!! please please please

[smokeypeach]

its good keep going

[CheersChild4life]

That is really good. I'm not sure about the whole amnesia thing, but keep it up!

[Dannie IsNotHere]

Originally posted by Kristen
This story is getting really good! I think maybe Fran should talk to C.C. and get advice from her, not knowing that C.C. doesn't like her, LOL! That could get really funny!

Kristen

You know, last night I was writing what I think should be the next part, but you just gave me an even better idea!

[Kristen]

Originally posted by RebeccaHoweNo.2
You know, last night I was writing what I think should be the next part, but you just gave me an even better idea!

Awww, I inspired you! Now I can't wait to see what you do with that idea.

Kristen

[DianeChambers87]

Originally posted by RebeccaHoweNo.2
You know, last night I was writing what I think should be the next part, but you just gave me an even better idea!

Post it Post it post it! lol sorry I'm bored

what about "A new begginning" ?

*puts on puppy dog eyes* please please please post some more on that fic!!