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monkeygirl · 12-27-2003, 02:13 PM

hey, I'm Deirdre, and I have decided to write a fanfic for the new season. tell me if it stinks, and I'll try to come up with a better plot, lol
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Nate sat in the little Italian place on polk, looking at his watch for the millionth time. The last words he had heard from CD kept on ringing in his head. "I"m not gonna change my mind, I'm not gonna change my mind, I'm not gonna change my mind" "but she must of changed" he thought "or else she would of been here by now." Nate tried her cell phone again. "Just her voice mail" he thought. Then he heard her voice "Hi! this is C.D. DeLorenzo, leave a message!" Too bad it's not her real voice. "hey, it's Nate again, I'm waiting, hope everythings ok" he hung up. "man, I'm gonna give her five more minutes". he took a drink of his soda, looked at his watch, and sighed. Left a few bucks on the table for his drink, and walked out

*

Jinny sighed. Running her hands through her hair she thought "why did I sleep with Jack? It is so over". She was thankful for all his help with her drug addiction, but she couldn't imagine spending the rest of her life with him. One name kept on going around and around in her head, a name she hadn't thought of in a long time. She had no idea why this name came to her, because she didn't even like this person when she had first met this person. With tears streaming down her face, she sighed and picked up the phone.

maria1986 · 12-27-2003, 04:41 PM

YAY!..a new fic....

...I hope Jinny is calling Teddy....

planet_stella · 12-27-2003, 04:44 PM

That was great!!! But too short

Keep it comin

candace~n~nathan · 12-27-2003, 07:39 PM

omg, definitely get a new plot line!!!

o WAIT!!! that was great, but too short, so get back here and give us some more!!!

croatian_princess · 12-27-2003, 10:53 PM

Oooh, this is good so far! Post more soon...

monkeygirl · 12-28-2003, 12:42 AM

aww, i feel so loved, lol jk, um I'll post more tomorrow it takes a long time to post and I don't have much time now

Snowfall · 12-28-2003, 01:48 AM

Um, more, please! This is great.

zwalane · 12-28-2003, 02:17 AM

how r u going to leave us hanging like that, more please

*Nancy Mckeon* · 12-28-2003, 12:13 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by monkeygirl
One name kept on going around and around in her head, a name she hadn't thought of in a long time. She had no idea why this name came to her, because she didn't even like this person when she had first met this person. With tears streaming down her face, she sighed and picked up the phone.

teddy teddy teddy teddy teddy teddy teddy teddy teddy!!!! (i luv teddy) teddy teddy teddy! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!

you registered on my birthday!!!!!!!!! 12/21 ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! teddy teddy......

*Nancy Mckeon* · 12-28-2003, 12:14 PM

oh and btw i want more!!!!

monkeygirl · 12-28-2003, 10:15 PM

here's my next installment:
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Kate had just gotten out of the shower when the phone rang. "it's a little late for calls, isn't it?" she thought out loud. She picked up the phone "hello?" "hey cap, it's Nate. I know it's late, but your my last hope. I'm really worried about CD. I can't find her anywhere" "why would you be worried about her?" Kate asked "It's a long story, and I don't have much time. I"ve always had a sixth sense when somerhing bad happens, and I feel it now" "sorry, Nate, I can't help you, I would really like to, but feel free to call me back when you know something" Kate hung up. "thanks for all your help, Cap" Nate mumbled under his breath, a little angry
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Jinny rumbled through all her drawers, but couldn't find the number. "damn it, it's not in my caller id memory anymore" she said to herself. "who else would have this number?" she looked through the phone book. "great, not listed". She tore apart her apartment, and when she was finished she was disgusted "why on earth did I tear my apartment apart? Sheesh! it's just a telephone number" she said. Then, just when she had turned her apartment back to normal, there was a knock on the door.

maria1986 · 12-28-2003, 10:23 PM

oh come on!...you gotta post more than that!...you are teasing us...

....now post more soooooooooon!!!!....

croatian_princess · 12-28-2003, 10:47 PM

That was good!!!!!!!!!! Nate'll find CD, right???!!!!

Hope soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

zwalane · 12-28-2003, 11:20 PM

Next installment please. Why the cliffhangers? I can't take them anymore.

Snowfall · 12-29-2003, 12:58 AM

Ooooh, I think I know what happens....

12-27-2003, 02:13 PM	#1
monkeygirl I love Nate and CD! Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 21, 2003 Location: drowning in a pool of tears Posts: 148	the new season: Jinny, Nate and CD hey, I'm Deirdre, and I have decided to write a fanfic for the new season. tell me if it stinks, and I'll try to come up with a better plot, lol ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nate sat in the little Italian place on polk, looking at his watch for the millionth time. The last words he had heard from CD kept on ringing in his head. "I"m not gonna change my mind, I'm not gonna change my mind, I'm not gonna change my mind" "but she must of changed" he thought "or else she would of been here by now." Nate tried her cell phone again. "Just her voice mail" he thought. Then he heard her voice "Hi! this is C.D. DeLorenzo, leave a message!" Too bad it's not her real voice. "hey, it's Nate again, I'm waiting, hope everythings ok" he hung up. "man, I'm gonna give her five more minutes". he took a drink of his soda, looked at his watch, and sighed. Left a few bucks on the table for his drink, and walked out * Jinny sighed. Running her hands through her hair she thought "why did I sleep with Jack? It is so over". She was thankful for all his help with her drug addiction, but she couldn't imagine spending the rest of her life with him. One name kept on going around and around in her head, a name she hadn't thought of in a long time. She had no idea why this name came to her, because she didn't even like this person when she had first met this person. With tears streaming down her face, she sighed and picked up the phone.
	__________________ http://www.tvlinksonline.com/boards/...postid=1437138 http://www.tvlinksonline.com/boards/...postid=1437174 CD: Just for the record, I would hide you in my attic any time Nate: Even if the Nazi's were after me? CD: even if Gestapo picked me up and tortured me, I wouldn't reveal your hiding place Nate: I always knew that about you ~~~~~~~~~~ Through the sun, through the rain, I will still feel the same Be it good, be it bad, I'll always understand When you're down, when you're blue, I will be there for you, 'Cause nobody does it better, We're gonna get there together ~ S Club (or, as I would like Nate to say to CD, and having them still together!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~~~~~ http://www.livejournal.com/users/deirdre_88/

12-27-2003, 04:41 PM	#2
maria1986 HATCHEE GAL Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 15, 2001 Location: FL Posts: 780	YAY!..a new fic.......I hope Jinny is calling Teddy....

12-27-2003, 07:39 PM	#4
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	omg, definitely get a new plot line!!! o WAIT!!! that was great, but too short, so get back here and give us some more!!!
	__________________ Drunk guy: What's her name? Is it Jennifer? It's usually Jennifer. Is it Heather? Sometimes it's Heather. Nate- It's Candace. But we, uh, call her CD.

12-27-2003, 10:53 PM	#5
croatian_princess ~~Lep andjeo~~ Frequent Poster Join Date: Sep 27, 2003 Location: Psych ward...I think....too much electroshock therapy... Posts: 402	Oooh, this is good so far! Post more soon...
	__________________ ~croatian_princess~ _________________________ "Don't hive up hope."~Candace DeLorenzo "Have some faith."~Dana Stowe

12-28-2003, 01:48 AM	#7
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	Um, more, please! This is great.
	__________________ Nate: When somebody asks for the salt, you hand them the pepper, too, even if they didn't ask for both. You never separate the salt and the pepper. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Luke: Will you marry me? Lorelai: What? Luke: Anything to shut you up.

12-27-2003, 04:44 PM	#3
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	That was great!!! But too short Keep it comin

12-28-2003, 12:42 AM	#6
monkeygirl I love Nate and CD! Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 21, 2003 Location: drowning in a pool of tears Posts: 148	aww, i feel so loved, lol jk, um I'll post more tomorrow it takes a long time to post and I don't have much time now

12-28-2003, 02:17 AM	#8
zwalane Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 08, 2003 Location: Southeastern Louisiana Posts: 228	how r u going to leave us hanging like that, more please

12-28-2003, 12:14 PM	#10
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	oh and btw i want more!!!!

12-28-2003, 10:15 PM	#11
monkeygirl I love Nate and CD! Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 21, 2003 Location: drowning in a pool of tears Posts: 148	here's my next installment: ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Kate had just gotten out of the shower when the phone rang. "it's a little late for calls, isn't it?" she thought out loud. She picked up the phone "hello?" "hey cap, it's Nate. I know it's late, but your my last hope. I'm really worried about CD. I can't find her anywhere" "why would you be worried about her?" Kate asked "It's a long story, and I don't have much time. I"ve always had a sixth sense when somerhing bad happens, and I feel it now" "sorry, Nate, I can't help you, I would really like to, but feel free to call me back when you know something" Kate hung up. "thanks for all your help, Cap" Nate mumbled under his breath, a little angry * Jinny rumbled through all her drawers, but couldn't find the number. "damn it, it's not in my caller id memory anymore" she said to herself. "who else would have this number?" she looked through the phone book. "great, not listed". She tore apart her apartment, and when she was finished she was disgusted "why on earth did I tear my apartment apart? Sheesh! it's just a telephone number" she said. Then, just when she had turned her apartment back to normal, there was a knock on the door.

12-28-2003, 10:23 PM	#12
maria1986 HATCHEE GAL Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 15, 2001 Location: FL Posts: 780	oh come on!...you gotta post more than that!...you are teasing us.......now post more soooooooooon!!!!....

12-28-2003, 10:47 PM	#13
croatian_princess ~~Lep andjeo~~ Frequent Poster Join Date: Sep 27, 2003 Location: Psych ward...I think....too much electroshock therapy... Posts: 402	That was good!!!!!!!!!! Nate'll find CD, right???!!!! Hope soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

12-28-2003, 11:20 PM	#14
zwalane Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 08, 2003 Location: Southeastern Louisiana Posts: 228	Next installment please. Why the cliffhangers? I can't take them anymore.

12-29-2003, 12:58 AM	#15
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	Ooooh, I think I know what happens....