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*Nancy Mckeon* · 11-29-2003, 10:49 PM

yet another 1 of my boring fics...
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jinny drove down the road to her new house. she was in the middle of nowhere. she was already starting to miss san-fran. jin saw her house at the end of the hill high abouve from where her car was. "i must have taken a wrong turn or sumthing" she said outloud to herself. she decided to try and take a shortcut thought the dirt path and woods that the road suddenly stopped at. but not far down the path there was a statue with a face on each side, and an old abandend building on the other side with a tunnel in the middle of it. jin got out of her car and even tho she knew she shouldn't she started walking thro the pitch black tunnel. it led out to a huge big feild covered in grass. she started walking out into the feild. then suddenly there was a bunch of buildings and a big thing of concrete stairs leading up to them. she could smell food cooking and hear low music playing in the background. but there was no one around. as she was walking thro the street she saw an even bigger stair case leading up to a huge building. as she walked towards the stairs she saw a bridge leading to the building. and she slowly walked over the bridge, but she stopped and looked over the sides but when she turned around a man was standing there." you can't be here. go run! get away from here!" and he walked over to her and lightly pushed her until she was off the bridge. and she started running down the stairs, but she stopped and looked back. "what's up with him" she thought but then she started running again as she came to the feild she'd been in earlier but as she ran out in it she discoved it was filled with water. she walked back up the stairs and looked out into the water. " this was where the feild was" she thought "and now...... this is like a dream or sumthing...i have to be dreaming.." ( it was nite time btw so it was pretty dark out so thaz why so didn't see the water when she ran into it) but it seemed so real. was she dreaming? or could this be real? where was she? and if this was real, how would she get out of there?~~~ then all of a sudden she heard sumthing.- it seemed really load yet she could barely hear it. then all of a sudden it became clear and she knew what it was. she listenes for a minute. she was scared to turn around, but she knew she had to. and she knew that if she didn't, the results could be fatal....

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k-i wanna post more sooooo bad but b 4 i make my hands tireder (if possible) lol i wanna no if u like it! lol so, do ya? do ya? do ya? huh? huh? huh? and ne guesses what the noise was?

Bonnie Is Great! · 11-29-2003, 11:36 PM

I have no idea what the sound is, but I really want to find out so I think ya should post more, yep that's what I think.

MovieHuntress17 · 11-30-2003, 07:15 PM

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Originally posted by Bonnie Is Great!
I have no idea what the sound is, but I really want to find out so I think ya should post more, yep that's what I think.

What Michelle said,lol post more soon!

*Nancy Mckeon* · 12-31-2003, 05:15 PM

as soon as jinny turned around, she woke up and looked around the room. she was right, she was dreaming. but how? it seemed so real.

J: *sigh* well, todays the day *picks up the phone and dials a number* hey teddy- did i wake ya up?........oh sorry....yea- ya ready yet?....yep, got all my stuff ready- how bout you?.....k- great- but i gotta say bye to my friends.... i kno- don't worry i won't tell them, ill leave a message on their answer machine so they won't try to stop us..... if their home ill leave a message on their cell machine.....if they answer that to, ill send an e-mail....if their online ill send a letter.....would you shut up already!!!! they won't try to stop us cuz they won't find out till to late!!.....*sigh* no, they won't find us.....yes im sure......yes im positive.....yeeeeeees i kno where it is....no, i won't get lost.......... yes im sure....if your so worried about me getting lost, why don't you drive!!...... you don't kno where it is!!!????- teddy, we're gonna live there for probly the rest of our lives- you have to kno where it is!!!.........yaaaaaaaaaaa...........k- ill see ya tonite..... i knooooooooo 10:30, don't be late.... k...love ya...bye *hangs up* *sighs* he's soooo annoying sumtimes..

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k-ang just told me in an im that a para graph wasn't enough but my hands are sore so.... yea

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 12-31-2003, 05:23 PM

YAY! Longer then a paragraph! It was a two paragraph post. Oh woo hoo! And great Teddy/Jinny scene! hehehe

*Nancy Mckeon* · 12-31-2003, 05:24 PM

yay!!! new reader!!!!!

croatian_princess · 12-31-2003, 07:42 PM

Hmm, that was a good start, post more soon!!!!

*Nancy Mckeon* · 01-02-2004, 04:20 PM

yay!! another new reader!!!
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jin picked up the phone again and dialed mag's number....."hello?" answered gabe.- jinny hung up quickly. "ugh! this is not gonna work!" she thought to herself."e-mails it is.." she walked out of her bedroom,and into the other room, where her comp. was, and started writing her e-mails

TO: SxySocrMM32 (Magda)
FROM: HttTeddysChick#1 (Jinny lol)

hey mag, i kinda wanted to say good-bye to you in person, but i kno that you'd only try to stop me so....uhhh bye! lol me and teddy are moving away from here, so we can be alone. im gonna miss ya a lot!! i guess i might call you later..i dunno- i guess ill talk to you later...ill still have the same screen name so you can e-mail me later if ya wanna...well, bye i guess...

Jinny E.

ps. tell ben i said hi!!

well, 1 down, alot more to go....

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well, its not much, but its something....

planet_stella · 01-02-2004, 04:38 PM

Yeah,it's not much,but it's great!!!!!! Next time post longer part ok????

And did i mention you have to post more NOW!?

*Nancy Mckeon* · 01-02-2004, 05:24 PM

yay!! new reader!!

maria1986 · 01-02-2004, 06:08 PM

....More.....

*Nancy Mckeon* · 01-02-2004, 06:16 PM

yay!! another new reader!!!!!!!!

zwalane · 01-02-2004, 11:42 PM

Sounds interesting keep going.

Snowfall · 01-03-2004, 02:09 AM

That was good, but too short! Post more soon!

*Nancy Mckeon* · 01-03-2004, 05:12 PM

yay!! 2 new readers!!! lol

11-29-2003, 10:49 PM	#1
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	The New World yet another 1 of my boring fics... ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ jinny drove down the road to her new house. she was in the middle of nowhere. she was already starting to miss san-fran. jin saw her house at the end of the hill high abouve from where her car was. "i must have taken a wrong turn or sumthing" she said outloud to herself. she decided to try and take a shortcut thought the dirt path and woods that the road suddenly stopped at. but not far down the path there was a statue with a face on each side, and an old abandend building on the other side with a tunnel in the middle of it. jin got out of her car and even tho she knew she shouldn't she started walking thro the pitch black tunnel. it led out to a huge big feild covered in grass. she started walking out into the feild. then suddenly there was a bunch of buildings and a big thing of concrete stairs leading up to them. she could smell food cooking and hear low music playing in the background. but there was no one around. as she was walking thro the street she saw an even bigger stair case leading up to a huge building. as she walked towards the stairs she saw a bridge leading to the building. and she slowly walked over the bridge, but she stopped and looked over the sides but when she turned around a man was standing there." you can't be here. go run! get away from here!" and he walked over to her and lightly pushed her until she was off the bridge. and she started running down the stairs, but she stopped and looked back. "what's up with him" she thought but then she started running again as she came to the feild she'd been in earlier but as she ran out in it she discoved it was filled with water. she walked back up the stairs and looked out into the water. " this was where the feild was" she thought "and now...... this is like a dream or sumthing...i have to be dreaming.." ( it was nite time btw so it was pretty dark out so thaz why so didn't see the water when she ran into it) but it seemed so real. was she dreaming? or could this be real? where was she? and if this was real, how would she get out of there?~~~ then all of a sudden she heard sumthing.- it seemed really load yet she could barely hear it. then all of a sudden it became clear and she knew what it was. she listenes for a minute. she was scared to turn around, but she knew she had to. and she knew that if she didn't, the results could be fatal.... xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx k-i wanna post more sooooo bad but b 4 i make my hands tireder (if possible) lol i wanna no if u like it! lol so, do ya? do ya? do ya? huh? huh? huh? and ne guesses what the noise was?
	__________________ Jenn Goodnight, Sleep tight, No more tears. In the morning, Ill be here, And when we say goodnight Dry your eyes. Because we said goodnight, not goodbye We said goodnight, not goodbye ~ Evanescence~ Last edited by Nancy Mckeon; 11-29-2003 at 11:01 PM.

11-29-2003, 11:36 PM	#2
Bonnie Is Great! Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 23, 2002 Location: Rock on! Can ya handle it? Cat is the best! Posts: 488	I have no idea what the sound is, but I really want to find out so I think ya should post more, yep that's what I think.
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12-31-2003, 05:23 PM	#5
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	YAY! Longer then a paragraph! It was a two paragraph post. Oh woo hoo! And great Teddy/Jinny scene! hehehe
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12-31-2003, 07:42 PM	#7
croatian_princess ~~Lep andjeo~~ Frequent Poster Join Date: Sep 27, 2003 Location: Psych ward...I think....too much electroshock therapy... Posts: 402	Hmm, that was a good start, post more soon!!!!
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01-03-2004, 02:09 AM	#14
Snowfall CD and Nate Forever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 18, 2003 Location: Stars Hollow (I wish!) Posts: 1,780	That was good, but too short! Post more soon!
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12-31-2003, 05:15 PM	#4
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	as soon as jinny turned around, she woke up and looked around the room. she was right, she was dreaming. but how? it seemed so real. J: sigh well, todays the day picks up the phone and dials a number hey teddy- did i wake ya up?........oh sorry....yea- ya ready yet?....yep, got all my stuff ready- how bout you?.....k- great- but i gotta say bye to my friends.... i kno- don't worry i won't tell them, ill leave a message on their answer machine so they won't try to stop us..... if their home ill leave a message on their cell machine.....if they answer that to, ill send an e-mail....if their online ill send a letter.....would you shut up already!!!! they won't try to stop us cuz they won't find out till to late!!.....sigh no, they won't find us.....yes im sure......yes im positive.....yeeeeeees i kno where it is....no, i won't get lost.......... yes im sure....if your so worried about me getting lost, why don't you drive!!...... you don't kno where it is!!!????- teddy, we're gonna live there for probly the rest of our lives- you have to kno where it is!!!.........yaaaaaaaaaaa...........k- ill see ya tonite..... i knooooooooo 10:30, don't be late.... k...love ya...bye hangs up sighs he's soooo annoying sumtimes.. &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& k-ang just told me in an im that a para graph wasn't enough but my hands are sore so.... yea

12-31-2003, 05:24 PM	#6
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	yay!!! new reader!!!!!

01-02-2004, 04:20 PM	#8
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	yay!! another new reader!!! """""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" jin picked up the phone again and dialed mag's number....."hello?" answered gabe.- jinny hung up quickly. "ugh! this is not gonna work!" she thought to herself."e-mails it is.." she walked out of her bedroom,and into the other room, where her comp. was, and started writing her e-mails TO: SxySocrMM32 (Magda) FROM: HttTeddysChick#1 (Jinny lol) hey mag, i kinda wanted to say good-bye to you in person, but i kno that you'd only try to stop me so....uhhh bye! lol me and teddy are moving away from here, so we can be alone. im gonna miss ya a lot!! i guess i might call you later..i dunno- i guess ill talk to you later...ill still have the same screen name so you can e-mail me later if ya wanna...well, bye i guess... Jinny E. ps. tell ben i said hi!! well, 1 down, alot more to go.... ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ well, its not much, but its something....

01-02-2004, 04:38 PM	#9
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	Yeah,it's not much,but it's great!!!!!! Next time post longer part ok???? And did i mention you have to post more NOW!?

01-02-2004, 05:24 PM	#10
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	yay!! new reader!!

01-02-2004, 06:08 PM	#11
maria1986 HATCHEE GAL Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 15, 2001 Location: FL Posts: 780	....More.....

01-02-2004, 06:16 PM	#12
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	yay!! another new reader!!!!!!!!

01-02-2004, 11:42 PM	#13
zwalane Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 08, 2003 Location: Southeastern Louisiana Posts: 228	Sounds interesting keep going.

01-03-2004, 05:12 PM	#15
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	yay!! 2 new readers!!! lol