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HIGH ENOUGH · 11-02-2003, 04:35 PM

I haven't seen any of the new season, considering Lifetime was taken off my net work! (They must DIE!!!)

Here's my version of how it started off.

Enjoy!

"Oh." Pain shot up and down CDs arm as she tried to move it. She put her hand over the gun wound, and then raised it to her face. Blood was everywhere.
"Damn."
As CD placed her hand back down, a thought came into her head. "Nate."

"Where are you CD?" Nate sighed, looking at his watch. Suddenly, a person he didn't want to see caught his view.
"Hey, Nate."
"Hey, Lily. Shouldn't you be off tourchering somebody?"
"Yes, but you're girlfriend isn't here."
"Lily, what the hell do you want?"
"To talk. I promise that's all. I'm having....problems."
"You're telling me." Said Nate. "I'm supposed to meet CD here and if she sees you sitting with me, she'll flip. So, meet me at my place tonight. ONLY to talk."

I promise future postings will be longer. That is, if you want more. Do ya?

maria1986 · 11-02-2003, 05:02 PM

It's great so far....KEEP GOING!!!!

*Nancy Mckeon* · 11-02-2003, 07:12 PM

kool! post mmmmmmoooooooooooooooooooorerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeee!!!

candace~n~nathan · 11-02-2003, 08:59 PM

that was a really great start! can't wait for more!!!

croatian_princess · 11-02-2003, 10:24 PM

Oooh, this should be good! Post more!

CD DeLorenzo · 11-02-2003, 10:49 PM

yeah I agree, keep going!

planet_stella · 11-03-2003, 04:56 PM

I agree.Don't stop!!!

HIGH ENOUGH · 11-04-2003, 07:41 PM

Because I'm nice.

A few minutes after Lily finally left, Nate gave up hope of CD coming. As he started to get into his car, Captain Kate pulled into the drive and parked her car beside his.
"Hey." She said, out of breath. "I tried to call your cell."
"I turned it off because I wanted a quiet dinner with CD, but..she never showed."
"That's why I tried to call you. CD's been shot."
"What?!"
"We got a call. A man..saying he heard 2 guns go off. I sent a few men out to the address and they told me CD and Liz were laying on the floor, bleeding."
"Is she...?" Nate couldn't say the last word.
"She's been taken to the hospital. Hop in. I'll give you a ride."

Nate stepped in the doorway to CD's hospital room. She was sound asleep. Tears came to his eyes. All of a sudden, a hand came upon his shoulder.
"How are you?"
"Been better. How are you, Jinny?"
"Same." Jinny's eyes come on CD. "She looks so...peacefull."
"Like an Angel."
Jinny smiled and walked away, thinking the two should be alone. Nate walked to CD's bed and sat in a chair beside her.
"I love you." Nate took CD's hands in his and kissed them. CD's eyes slowly came open, all most shutting them again because of the bright hospital lights. She moaned a little and looked to her right, where she saw Nate's face. She smiled. He smiled back.

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More?

candace~n~nathan · 11-04-2003, 08:14 PM

uh, DEFINITELY more!!!! that was really, really good!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 11-04-2003, 10:08 PM

absolutely!

croatian_princess · 11-04-2003, 10:24 PM

That was sooooooooooooo good. Post more ASAP.

HIGH ENOUGH · 11-08-2003, 10:01 PM

Jinny took out the car keys in her purse and clicked the button that unlocked the door. She opened the door and got in.
On the way home, her cell rang.
"Exstead."
"Hey, it's me." Said Captain Kate. "We have a...problem over at one of the apartments. On O'Barker Road."
"What's up?"
"The building's on fire."
"Damn!" This shocked Jinny. "Is Magda there?"
"Yes. She's going to meet you. Please becarefull."

Nate looked at his watch. "Hell. I'm supposed to meet....somebody at my house."
"Who?" CD asked.
"Um....nobody." Nate didn't want to tell CD that he was supposed to meet Lily.
"Is it Cap?"
"Yes. Yes, it's Cap. Want's to go over a case. I'll see you tomorrow. Bye." He leaned down and kissed the blonde on the lips.
"Bye."

Nate pulled into his drive way and saw Lily's car was already there.
"This'll be interesting." He said, getting out. Lily got out of her car.
"What took you?"
"Oh. CD had a little....accident. But, she's going to be fine."
"I'm sorry to hear that. The fine part, I mean."
You had no idea how Nate wanted to hit her, but he kept his cool.
"Shall we go inside?"

Jinny pulled to the apartment and got out of her car. Magda ran to her partner.
"I can't believe this!" Said Jinny, looking at the flames. "It's hell on Earth. Anybody hurt."
"A few. They may not make it."
They walked to a streacher, which had a body on it. Magda pulled back the blanket. What Jinny saw almost made her lose her lunch.

Captain walked into CD's room.
"How are you?" She asked.
"I'm fine, thanks. Why aren't you with Nate? He said you're going to meet him at his house to go over a case."
Kate had a confused look on her face. "No. I cleared all my meetings to stay here."
"Jinny?"
"On a case with Magda. And Raina's on vaction. She'll be back tomorrow."
CD's face became confused. "Well, then. Where is he?"

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*Nancy Mckeon* · 11-08-2003, 10:18 PM

what what what!!??!?!?!?!? you have have haaaaaaaaave to tell me who was under there!!!!!! who who who who whow!!!????? mooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeee nnnnnnnoooooooooowwwwwwwwwwww come ooooooon even if its just one little sentance you haaaaave to teeeeeeeelll meeeeee!!!! pppppplllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssseee!!!!!!!! whhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeen r u gonna post mmmmooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeee!!!!!!!!!! huuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrry uuuuuuuuuooooooooooooooooo nnnnoooooooooooowwwwwwwwww you have to post mmmooooooorrrrrrrreeeeeeee come on dude! if u post more ill post more on one of my fics! i promise plleeeeeeeeeaaaaaseee!! mmooooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee noooooooooowww!!! pwease?

CD DeLorenzo · 11-08-2003, 10:57 PM

keep going!

HIGH ENOUGH · 11-12-2003, 06:36 PM

Sorry I haven't up-dated in so long. I had school and not to mention... WRITER'S BLOCK!!

Enjoy.

"You want something to drink?" Nate asked Lily.
"Scotch on the rocks."
"OK. Tea it is." He started to make his way to the kitchen, but Lily grabbed him by the arm and pulled him back. She looked deep into Nate's eyes and started making her face closer to his. But.... Nate pulled back.
"I think you should go."
"You said we could talk."
"Well, they have people that get paid to do that."
Lily took a deep breath. "Fine. I'll go."
Nate sighed as Lily walked out the door.

"Excuse me, Cap."
Captain Kate looked to see who was calling her. "Jinny?"
"Can I see you... alone."
Cap. looked at CD. "I'll be back."
CD nodded and Kate walked out into the hall way with Jinny.

"Where's Magda?"
"She had to take Ben to the doctor's office for a check up. About the fire: we don't know who started it, but I talked to one of the fire fighters and he wasn't caused on an accident."
"Arsen?"
"We're looking into it."
"Any victims?"
"A few were injured. One died. His name was Mitch Field. He's in the mourge right now.
"Are you going back to the site?" Asked Kate.
"Yeah."
"Well, be careful. I have to stay here with CD."
"Give her my love."

I know that part was kinda boring, but there are some good parts ahead. I'm not going to give anything away but somebody's going to propose marriage.

11-02-2003, 04:35 PM	#1
HIGH ENOUGH Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 19, 2003 Location: making out with Hilary Duff and Tara Reid at the same time. Posts: 1,283	Love hurts. I haven't seen any of the new season, considering Lifetime was taken off my net work! (They must DIE!!!) Here's my version of how it started off. Enjoy! "Oh." Pain shot up and down CDs arm as she tried to move it. She put her hand over the gun wound, and then raised it to her face. Blood was everywhere. "Damn." As CD placed her hand back down, a thought came into her head. "Nate." "Where are you CD?" Nate sighed, looking at his watch. Suddenly, a person he didn't want to see caught his view. "Hey, Nate." "Hey, Lily. Shouldn't you be off tourchering somebody?" "Yes, but you're girlfriend isn't here." "Lily, what the hell do you want?" "To talk. I promise that's all. I'm having....problems." "You're telling me." Said Nate. "I'm supposed to meet CD here and if she sees you sitting with me, she'll flip. So, meet me at my place tonight. ONLY to talk." I promise future postings will be longer. That is, if you want more. Do ya?
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11-02-2003, 07:12 PM	#3
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11-02-2003, 10:24 PM	#5
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11-02-2003, 10:49 PM	#6
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11-02-2003, 05:02 PM	#2
maria1986 HATCHEE GAL Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 15, 2001 Location: FL Posts: 780	It's great so far....KEEP GOING!!!!

11-02-2003, 08:59 PM	#4
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	that was a really great start! can't wait for more!!!

11-03-2003, 04:56 PM	#7
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	I agree.Don't stop!!!

11-04-2003, 07:41 PM	#8
HIGH ENOUGH Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 19, 2003 Location: making out with Hilary Duff and Tara Reid at the same time. Posts: 1,283	Because I'm nice. A few minutes after Lily finally left, Nate gave up hope of CD coming. As he started to get into his car, Captain Kate pulled into the drive and parked her car beside his. "Hey." She said, out of breath. "I tried to call your cell." "I turned it off because I wanted a quiet dinner with CD, but..she never showed." "That's why I tried to call you. CD's been shot." "What?!" "We got a call. A man..saying he heard 2 guns go off. I sent a few men out to the address and they told me CD and Liz were laying on the floor, bleeding." "Is she...?" Nate couldn't say the last word. "She's been taken to the hospital. Hop in. I'll give you a ride." Nate stepped in the doorway to CD's hospital room. She was sound asleep. Tears came to his eyes. All of a sudden, a hand came upon his shoulder. "How are you?" "Been better. How are you, Jinny?" "Same." Jinny's eyes come on CD. "She looks so...peacefull." "Like an Angel." Jinny smiled and walked away, thinking the two should be alone. Nate walked to CD's bed and sat in a chair beside her. "I love you." Nate took CD's hands in his and kissed them. CD's eyes slowly came open, all most shutting them again because of the bright hospital lights. She moaned a little and looked to her right, where she saw Nate's face. She smiled. He smiled back. +++ More?

11-04-2003, 08:14 PM	#9
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	uh, DEFINITELY more!!!! that was really, really good!!!

11-04-2003, 10:08 PM	#10
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	absolutely!

11-04-2003, 10:24 PM	#11
croatian_princess ~~Lep andjeo~~ Frequent Poster Join Date: Sep 27, 2003 Location: Psych ward...I think....too much electroshock therapy... Posts: 402	That was sooooooooooooo good. Post more ASAP.

11-08-2003, 10:01 PM	#12
HIGH ENOUGH Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 19, 2003 Location: making out with Hilary Duff and Tara Reid at the same time. Posts: 1,283	Jinny took out the car keys in her purse and clicked the button that unlocked the door. She opened the door and got in. On the way home, her cell rang. "Exstead." "Hey, it's me." Said Captain Kate. "We have a...problem over at one of the apartments. On O'Barker Road." "What's up?" "The building's on fire." "Damn!" This shocked Jinny. "Is Magda there?" "Yes. She's going to meet you. Please becarefull." Nate looked at his watch. "Hell. I'm supposed to meet....somebody at my house." "Who?" CD asked. "Um....nobody." Nate didn't want to tell CD that he was supposed to meet Lily. "Is it Cap?" "Yes. Yes, it's Cap. Want's to go over a case. I'll see you tomorrow. Bye." He leaned down and kissed the blonde on the lips. "Bye." Nate pulled into his drive way and saw Lily's car was already there. "This'll be interesting." He said, getting out. Lily got out of her car. "What took you?" "Oh. CD had a little....accident. But, she's going to be fine." "I'm sorry to hear that. The fine part, I mean." You had no idea how Nate wanted to hit her, but he kept his cool. "Shall we go inside?" Jinny pulled to the apartment and got out of her car. Magda ran to her partner. "I can't believe this!" Said Jinny, looking at the flames. "It's hell on Earth. Anybody hurt." "A few. They may not make it." They walked to a streacher, which had a body on it. Magda pulled back the blanket. What Jinny saw almost made her lose her lunch. Captain walked into CD's room. "How are you?" She asked. "I'm fine, thanks. Why aren't you with Nate? He said you're going to meet him at his house to go over a case." Kate had a confused look on her face. "No. I cleared all my meetings to stay here." "Jinny?" "On a case with Magda. And Raina's on vaction. She'll be back tomorrow." CD's face became confused. "Well, then. Where is he?" +++ More?

11-08-2003, 10:18 PM	#13
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	what what what!!??!?!?!?!? you have have haaaaaaaaave to tell me who was under there!!!!!! who who who who whow!!!????? mooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeee nnnnnnnoooooooooowwwwwwwwwwww come ooooooon even if its just one little sentance you haaaaave to teeeeeeeelll meeeeee!!!! pppppplllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssseee!!!!!!!! whhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeen r u gonna post mmmmooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeee!!!!!!!!!! huuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrry uuuuuuuuuooooooooooooooooo nnnnoooooooooooowwwwwwwwww you have to post mmmooooooorrrrrrrreeeeeeee come on dude! if u post more ill post more on one of my fics! i promise plleeeeeeeeeaaaaaseee!! mmooooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee noooooooooowww!!! pwease?

11-08-2003, 10:57 PM	#14
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	keep going!

11-12-2003, 06:36 PM	#15
HIGH ENOUGH Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 19, 2003 Location: making out with Hilary Duff and Tara Reid at the same time. Posts: 1,283	Sorry I haven't up-dated in so long. I had school and not to mention... WRITER'S BLOCK!! Enjoy. "You want something to drink?" Nate asked Lily. "Scotch on the rocks." "OK. Tea it is." He started to make his way to the kitchen, but Lily grabbed him by the arm and pulled him back. She looked deep into Nate's eyes and started making her face closer to his. But.... Nate pulled back. "I think you should go." "You said we could talk." "Well, they have people that get paid to do that." Lily took a deep breath. "Fine. I'll go." Nate sighed as Lily walked out the door. "Excuse me, Cap." Captain Kate looked to see who was calling her. "Jinny?" "Can I see you... alone." Cap. looked at CD. "I'll be back." CD nodded and Kate walked out into the hall way with Jinny. "Where's Magda?" "She had to take Ben to the doctor's office for a check up. About the fire: we don't know who started it, but I talked to one of the fire fighters and he wasn't caused on an accident." "Arsen?" "We're looking into it." "Any victims?" "A few were injured. One died. His name was Mitch Field. He's in the mourge right now. "Are you going back to the site?" Asked Kate. "Yeah." "Well, be careful. I have to stay here with CD." "Give her my love." I know that part was kinda boring, but there are some good parts ahead. I'm not going to give anything away but somebody's going to propose marriage.