"The Jagerson's" (3rd pilot)

[Archie and Edith]

I'm going to make a new pilot for "The Jagerson's".

a new cast:

Pete (the dad), Andrew (child who's 10), Maxine (the maid) and Jim Hanks (a neighbor).

This time Jim doesn't have a son and Pete's divorced, his ex-wife will hardly ever be in any episodes.

1.1 "Pete and Jim's Night Out"
Guest Star: Barney (bartender)

(starting just as Pete leaves)

Pete: Andrew, I'll be home later. oh and Maxine make sure Andy takes his bath.

the doorbell rings.

Maxine: I'll get it.

Jim: Hi Maxine, How are you?

Maxine: I'm fine. Come in.

Jim comes in the house and Pete walks down the stairs.

Pete: Hi Jim. Let's go.

Jim: ok. Bye Maxine and tell Andrew I said hello.

Jim and Pete drive to BB's Bar.

Jim: here's a good place.

They pull up and walk in.

Barney: Howdy fellows, I'm Barney. What would you like?

Pete: I'll have a martini.

Jim: I'll have an old fashion.

Barney: alright one martini and one old fashion.

(back at the house)

Maxine: Andrew go take your bath.

Andrew: ok Maxine.

Andrew finishes his bath and he walks downstairs.

Maxine: Here's some Cheerios for you.

Andrew: thank you, Maxine.

Maxine takes Andy to bed.

(2 hours later, at the bar) Pete is passed out by now.

Jim: I'll have another one, Barney.

Barney: no you're drunk. come lay on my couch in the bathroom.

Barney takes Jim to the couch.

To Be Continued.......

What does everone like it so far?