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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 10-14-2003, 03:27 PM

This fic takes place January 5, 2008. Jinny is now married to Teddy and they have 2 kids, Kelly and Kiera, and one on the way. CD and Nate have been married for 4 years now and are trying to have children, Raina is still dating Johnny, Kate has a 5 year old grandaughter, Katie, and she is now Chief of police, and Magda is still married to Gabe and they have three children, Ben, Jinny, and Bobby. Jinny is taking her 2 year old twins, Kelly and Kiera for a walk in their stroller. She stops at a coffee shop. She looks up and sees the last person she expected to there.

Jinny couldn't tell whether to be happy or sad. "Jack? Is that you?"
"Jinny? Oh my God. How long has it been?" Jack said with a big smile on his face.
"Oh about 6 years. When did you come back to San Francisco?" Jinny asked.
Jack thought of what to tell her. "I came back about 6 months after I left here the first time. My ex wife and I figured out our problems and are now back together."
Jinny grinned because now she wouldn't feel bad about telling him she got married again as well. "That's great Jack. I got remarried myself."
"Congratulations Jin. And who are these pretty young ladies?" Jack knelt down to see the two cute toddlers.
"This one is Kiera and that one is Kelly. They are my twin toddlers."
"They are beautiful Jinny. And look at you. You're having another?" Jack questioned.
Jinny laughed. "Yes, this is my third. We think it is a boy but we're not sure."
"How far along are you?" Jack asked.
Jinny couldn't really remember. It seemed like years to her. "Oh about...eight months."
Jack was shocked. "Wow. And your new husband is letting you take long walks??"
"Well, he didn't want me to but I did anyway. I am not even on maternity leave yet." She laughed.
Jack smiled. "It was great seeing you again Jinny. I am in the phone book. Give me a call sometime. Take care." He put out his hand for her to shake.
She shook his hand. "I will. It was nice talking to you. Bye." Jack left and Jinny felt weird. "He used to be married to me and all he will do now is shake my hand??"
"Mommy! I want to cheesebugar." Kiera screamed.
Jinny laughed. "It's cheeseburger and yes, we can go get one." So they went to the most famous cheeseburger place, McDonalds.

Well, should I go on????

JohnstownBruja · 10-14-2003, 03:35 PM

awwwwww!!! how cuuuuuute! why am i always the twin of another on stories? lol kassie also had me as a twin in her fol reunion ff called 'a different way to reunite" post more! : )

and thanks for scarin me half to death by sayin' ya used my name n not tellin' me what for! jeez, i'm like "oh god, she got me arrested...."!!!

MovieHuntress17 · 10-14-2003, 03:39 PM

That was really cute !!

Post more soon please!!

Bonnie Is Great! · 10-14-2003, 03:41 PM

Yes, go on that was cute!

anaïsFANxx · 10-14-2003, 05:07 PM

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Originally posted by Bonnie Is Great!
Yes, go on that was cute!

I agree

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 10-16-2003, 02:01 PM

Thanks for all of the replies. At first I started writing this story, I only did it because I was bored but I am really glad you all like it. Here is more.
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Meanwhile, back at the Division, Raina and Nate were now partners since CD and him were married. Raina had just recieved information on a new case. Raina got Nate's attention while he was apparently daydreaming.
"Nate, we got a new case. There was a little girl who was hit by a motrocycle and the driver drove away. Nate? Are you listening to me?" Raina said, poking Nate in the head.
Nate suddenly looked up. "Oh what? Why are you poking me?"
"You haven't heard anything I just said have you?"
Nate acted smart. "Of course I have. I heard everything."
Raina stood there and crossed her arms. "Oh yeah? Prove it."
"Well, uh, you said that, uh, you were oing, to uh..." He said stubbornly.
Raina smiled and shook her head. "Yep. That's what I thought. Come on, I'll explain to you on our way to the crime scene."
"Alright but remember I have to leave work at 3:00."
"Oh, are you guys going to try again?" Raina asked being nosey.
Nate just looked at Raina. "That ould be absolutely none of your business Raina." Nate laughed. "Let's go."

Magda was at her desk when she got a phone call.
"Ramirez?" Magda asked in the phone.
Jinny answered her. "Hey Mag, it's Jin. We're are down at the McDonalds down near the station having some lunch. Want to join us?"
Magda smiled. "Sure. I'll be there in 10."
"Great. Bye." Jinny hung up.

Magda grabbed her coat and went into the elevator to go down to the parking lot. When she got to McDonalds, the twins went crazy.
Kiera screamed out. "Auntie Magda. You're here!!!"
Magda smiled and went up to them. " Hi everyone. Are you two giving your Mommy a hard time?"
Kelly answered very intellegently. "Well, Kiera might but I am being a precious little angel."
"Oh yeah right. You could even say cheeseburger."
Kelly looked over at Kiera. "I can say cheeseburgar. But obviously you can't because you said it wrong again!"
Jinny laughed and then became serious. "Alright girls. That will be enough. Why don't you two go and play on that big junglgym. I can see you from here."
"YAY! Come on Kelly." Pokes her on the back. "You're it!"
"No way. You're it." They ran off to play.
Magda smiled and then looked at Jinny. "So how are you feeling?"
"Besides fat, fine."
"C'mon Jin. You always get like this late in your pregnancies." Magda laughed.
"I do not. You do as well." Jinny said.
"Oh so you are admitting it??" Magda laughed even harder.
Jinny tried had not to laugh. "Oh Magda shut up." They both started laughing. "Oh I almost forgot the rason I invited you up here." Jinny said now getting serious. "You will never guess who I ran into at the coffee shop."
Magda thought. "Santa Claus?" Magda chuckled.
"No. Close though." Jinny just couldn't resist. "Jack."
"Jack as in the Jack who left you Jack?" Magda was babbling.
Jinny gave her a look. "Yeah that Jack."
Magda was surprised. "Well, what did he say?"
"He said he was back together with his exwife." Jinny said.
Magda look pissed. "He actually told you that?"
"Yeah, why not?" Jinny asked her. "I don't care. I am married to a wonderful man and have three wonderful children. He is happy and I am happy. That is all that matters."
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Sorry it is short but I have to do a couple things before drama class. I will post more later. It depends on how many replies I get.

CD DeLorenzo · 10-16-2003, 02:09 PM

yeah, keep on writing, and some more CD and Nate please lol

*Nancy Mckeon* · 10-16-2003, 07:54 PM

!!!!!!!MMMMMOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 10-19-2003, 10:10 PM

Sorry I haven't posted. Here is more. Kiera asked me if she could play herself in this and I couldn't say no. We hope you like it.
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Magda looked at Jinny and then nodded. "Yeah, I guess you're right." Then Magda hugged Jinny. "As long as you're happy.
"I am Mag. I really am." Jinny said with a great big smile.
Just then Kelly came running in from the junglegym crying. "Kiera pulled my hair mommy."
Kelly points to Kiera. "You did so. Mommy she is lying to you. I think you should punish her."
Kiera rolls her little eyes. "Please, you're such a baby"
Jinny looked at Magda, who was laughing. "Magda, you are not helping the situation. Kelly and Kiera, please stop fighting. Mommy has a little headache.
"Ok Mommy. I'm sorry Kiera." Kelly said with an angelic smile.
"I'm sorry too, sissy." She hugs her sister and they go play.
Jinny looked at Magda. "Well, you were a big help."
"I know. See, I am Auntie Magda. I am the person they run to when you wont get them something they want." They both laughed.
Jinny looked at her watch. "Well, we had better get back to work." Jinny went to the play area. "Kids, let's go."
Kiera nods and follows them. "Auntie Magda, can I have a dollar?"
Magda giggled. "Why?"
Kiera "Cos I do not got one. She smiled.
Magda reached into her pocket and was about to grab her money but then looked at Jinny who was glaring at her. But Magda then remembered something and got the dollar out and gave one dollar to each of the girls. "Here you guys go. Don't spend it all at once." She then looked at Jinny. "That's payback for the 'Little Red Riding Hood' story." They both started laughing as they walked out of the restraunt."
Kiera and Kelly giggled, remembering about what Jinny said about Ben and that night, with the story.

Meanwhile, Nate and Raina didn't get any information about the case, so they went back to the Division. At 3:00, it was time for Nate to go home.
"Well Raina, I gotta go now." Nate said while getting on his coat.
Raina smiled at him. "Enjoy yourself."
"Raina, shut up!" Nate laughed.

When he got home, CD was waitning for him. "Where have you been? I've been waiting forever!!"
Nate chuckled. "Traffic was terrible. So, what is it?"
"98.7. Just right. You ready?" CD said while slipping off her shirt.
Nate walked towards her. "You bet." They both got on the bed and started making out.

When Jinny got home, Teddy was there waiting for her. "Hey Jin."
"Hey. What are you doing home?" Jinny asked.
"I got off of work early to spend the day with you on your day off." He walked to her. "Is that alright?"
Jinny smiled. "Oh you bet!" She started kissing him.
Kiera and Kelly just stared at them. "EWWWWWW!"
Teddy laughed. "Why don't you girls go play in your room until dinner is ready. We're having hot dogs!"
Kelly jumped up and down. "Yay! Let'a go Kiera." They ran into their room.
Jinny sat down as best she could as let out a really big sigh.
Teddy looked at her. "What's wrong?"
"What? Oh, nothing I just had a bit of pain before and now I am just a little tired." Jinny said while closing her eyes but was rudely shooken awake by her husband.
"What do you mean pain?? Bad pain? Labor pain? Pl---" Teddy was saying until Jinny interupted him.
"Calm down Teddy. My lunch just didn't sgree with me very well. That's all." Jinny told him and just had to laugh about the way he was acting.
Teddy calmed down a little bit. "Well, I know how stubborn you can be sometimes. Last time you were in labor, you didn't tell me until ou were 9 cm dilated!"
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Well, what do you think? Should we continue?

maria1986 · 10-19-2003, 10:31 PM

yes you should continue!.....

candace~n~nathan · 10-19-2003, 10:41 PM

Of COURSE we want more!!! This is REALLY good!!!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 10-21-2003, 05:34 PM

Hello once again. Well, here is some more to keep you guys occupied!
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Jinny laughed. "Well, how was I supposed to know if I was really in labor or not? It was my first time."
Teddy started at her and giggled. "Uh huh. Okay. I am going to go make dinner now."
"Oh, can you put some ice cream on my hot dog. And some spray cheese." Jinny said with a big smile.
Teddy made a face. "That's disgusting! How can you eat that??"
"Don't ask me. Ask him." Jinny said pointing to her rather large belly.

After dinner, Jinny was feeling a little tired so she went to bed early. It was about 1:30AM when she woke up and had to go to the bathroom. When she came out, she woke up Teddy.

"Teddy, wake up." Jinny said trying to shake him awake.
Teddy opened his eyes to find Jinny standing there crying. "What's wrong?? Is it coming?"
"I don't know. I'm bleeding." Jinny said holding her stomach.

Meanwhile, at CD and Nates, they had just gotten finished have the most powerful sex ever.

CD was panting. "Oh my God Nate. That was wonderful. It has got to work this time. I have to be pregnant."
"Honey, you know I was thinking maybe we sould consider adoption. It will be a lot easier nd you won't have to go through all of that pain every other mother has to go through. You get it easy."
"I agree but Nate, do you realize how long it would be to get a baby through adoption? It could take years." CD said to Nate seriously.
Nate answered her back. "Well, how about we get in line and we can keep trying while we are on the waiting list?"
CD didn't really like that idea. "How about we just go to a fertility clinic? It will be easier and faster. We can find out what the problem is."
"I told you before. I don't want to pee in a cup and make love to my wife after watching dirty movies and then having some doctor tell me why I can't get my ife pregnant. It is humiliating."
CD frowned. "It is more humiliating passing a park or playground and looking at something you don't have. I want someone o love of my very own. I went and got my tubes untied so I can become a mother and no I can't seem to do it and I want to know why damnit!" CD said looking at the amazement in Nate's eyes. "Oh, Nate, I'm sorry I didn't mean to blow up at you like that. I just really wa---"
Nate interrupted. "It's ok. If it is really what you want then I will go." Nate smiled. "We'll go together and figure out what the problem is."
"Oh Nate!" She pushed him down and kissed him. "Did I tell you how much I loved you today??"

Teddy was ready to panic. "Ok Ok, let's just call the doctor. Yeah, call the doctor. Or maybe we should go right to the hospital. Yeah that might be better. Oh, but I really don't want to wa--"
Jinny interrupted. "Calm down. Everything is fine. Just call Dr. Thompson. She will tell you what to do."
"Yeah. That's a good idea. Why didn't I think of that. Alright, the phone." He dialed the number. "Hello?? Hello??? DR. THOMPSON? Where the hell is she?"
Jinny laughed. "Uh, honey. That's he TV remote control."
Teddy looked at it. "Yeah, I knew that. I was just practicing what I was going to say to her."
"You were oing to say 'Where the hell are you?' to our doctor?" Jinny said trying so hard to stop laughing.
"How can you be so calm??" Teddy asked her.
"It's ok now. The bleeding stopped." Jinny told him.
Teddy shook his head. "No, I am still calling the doctor." He picked up the phone this time and dialed then number. "Hello, Dr. Thompson? This is Mr.Blumenthal. My wife Jinny Exstead Blumenthal is one of your patients. You know her. She is the pregnant one."
Jinny shook her head and laughed.
"Well, she was in the bathroom and started bleeding. Yes it is stopped. *paused* Ok I will tell her. Thank you." Hangs up the phone and talks to Jinny. "Alright she said as long as the bleeding stopped, everything is fine but it is also a sign that you are working to hard for you being in your eighth month. She wants you to take an early maternity leave. You don't have to stay totally off of your feet but just take it easy and no more work for a while."
"What am I going to do with myself all day long? Work is what keeps me busy. I have to work." Jinny whined.
Teddy started getting mean. "Jinny Louise Exstead Blumenthal, you have been ordered by the doctor not to work and not working is exactly what you are going to do. Understand?"
Jinny thought he was joking and said. "Teddy--"
"Do you understand?" Teddy scolded.
Jinny mocked him. "Yes Daddy."
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I know it is short but I got a block. I will write more tonight though. Is it coming good? I wish a lot more people than this was reading it though.

CD DeLorenzo · 10-21-2003, 06:34 PM

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Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
I wish a lot more people than this was reading it though.

Don't we all?

keep going

maria1986 · 10-21-2003, 07:50 PM

well you better get rid of that block and write more...

It is really good so keep going....

candace~n~nathan · 10-21-2003, 08:15 PM

I love this fic SOOOOOOO much!! It has my 2 favorite couples in it!!!

Get over the mental block and get back here!!!

10-14-2003, 03:27 PM	#1
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	The Way We Were This fic takes place January 5, 2008. Jinny is now married to Teddy and they have 2 kids, Kelly and Kiera, and one on the way. CD and Nate have been married for 4 years now and are trying to have children, Raina is still dating Johnny, Kate has a 5 year old grandaughter, Katie, and she is now Chief of police, and Magda is still married to Gabe and they have three children, Ben, Jinny, and Bobby. Jinny is taking her 2 year old twins, Kelly and Kiera for a walk in their stroller. She stops at a coffee shop. She looks up and sees the last person she expected to there. Jinny couldn't tell whether to be happy or sad. "Jack? Is that you?" "Jinny? Oh my God. How long has it been?" Jack said with a big smile on his face. "Oh about 6 years. When did you come back to San Francisco?" Jinny asked. Jack thought of what to tell her. "I came back about 6 months after I left here the first time. My ex wife and I figured out our problems and are now back together." Jinny grinned because now she wouldn't feel bad about telling him she got married again as well. "That's great Jack. I got remarried myself." "Congratulations Jin. And who are these pretty young ladies?" Jack knelt down to see the two cute toddlers. "This one is Kiera and that one is Kelly. They are my twin toddlers." "They are beautiful Jinny. And look at you. You're having another?" Jack questioned. Jinny laughed. "Yes, this is my third. We think it is a boy but we're not sure." "How far along are you?" Jack asked. Jinny couldn't really remember. It seemed like years to her. "Oh about...eight months." Jack was shocked. "Wow. And your new husband is letting you take long walks??" "Well, he didn't want me to but I did anyway. I am not even on maternity leave yet." She laughed. Jack smiled. "It was great seeing you again Jinny. I am in the phone book. Give me a call sometime. Take care." He put out his hand for her to shake. She shook his hand. "I will. It was nice talking to you. Bye." Jack left and Jinny felt weird. "He used to be married to me and all he will do now is shake my hand??" "Mommy! I want to cheesebugar." Kiera screamed. Jinny laughed. "It's cheeseburger and yes, we can go get one." So they went to the most famous cheeseburger place, McDonalds. Well, should I go on????

10-14-2003, 03:35 PM	#2
JohnstownBruja !!!! K!wi !!!! Occasional Poster Join Date: Oct 08, 2003 Location: J*Town Posts: 14	awwwwww!!! how cuuuuuute! why am i always the twin of another on stories? lol kassie also had me as a twin in her fol reunion ff called 'a different way to reunite" post more! : ) and thanks for scarin me half to death by sayin' ya used my name n not tellin' me what for! jeez, i'm like "oh god, she got me arrested...."!!!
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10-14-2003, 03:39 PM	#3
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10-16-2003, 02:09 PM	#7
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10-16-2003, 07:54 PM	#8
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10-14-2003, 03:41 PM	#4
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10-16-2003, 02:01 PM	#6
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Thanks for all of the replies. At first I started writing this story, I only did it because I was bored but I am really glad you all like it. Here is more. ************************************************** Meanwhile, back at the Division, Raina and Nate were now partners since CD and him were married. Raina had just recieved information on a new case. Raina got Nate's attention while he was apparently daydreaming. "Nate, we got a new case. There was a little girl who was hit by a motrocycle and the driver drove away. Nate? Are you listening to me?" Raina said, poking Nate in the head. Nate suddenly looked up. "Oh what? Why are you poking me?" "You haven't heard anything I just said have you?" Nate acted smart. "Of course I have. I heard everything." Raina stood there and crossed her arms. "Oh yeah? Prove it." "Well, uh, you said that, uh, you were oing, to uh..." He said stubbornly. Raina smiled and shook her head. "Yep. That's what I thought. Come on, I'll explain to you on our way to the crime scene." "Alright but remember I have to leave work at 3:00." "Oh, are you guys going to try again?" Raina asked being nosey. Nate just looked at Raina. "That ould be absolutely none of your business Raina." Nate laughed. "Let's go." Magda was at her desk when she got a phone call. "Ramirez?" Magda asked in the phone. Jinny answered her. "Hey Mag, it's Jin. We're are down at the McDonalds down near the station having some lunch. Want to join us?" Magda smiled. "Sure. I'll be there in 10." "Great. Bye." Jinny hung up. Magda grabbed her coat and went into the elevator to go down to the parking lot. When she got to McDonalds, the twins went crazy. Kiera screamed out. "Auntie Magda. You're here!!!" Magda smiled and went up to them. " Hi everyone. Are you two giving your Mommy a hard time?" Kelly answered very intellegently. "Well, Kiera might but I am being a precious little angel." "Oh yeah right. You could even say cheeseburger." Kelly looked over at Kiera. "I can say cheeseburgar. But obviously you can't because you said it wrong again!" Jinny laughed and then became serious. "Alright girls. That will be enough. Why don't you two go and play on that big junglgym. I can see you from here." "YAY! Come on Kelly." Pokes her on the back. "You're it!" "No way. You're it." They ran off to play. Magda smiled and then looked at Jinny. "So how are you feeling?" "Besides fat, fine." "C'mon Jin. You always get like this late in your pregnancies." Magda laughed. "I do not. You do as well." Jinny said. "Oh so you are admitting it??" Magda laughed even harder. Jinny tried had not to laugh. "Oh Magda shut up." They both started laughing. "Oh I almost forgot the rason I invited you up here." Jinny said now getting serious. "You will never guess who I ran into at the coffee shop." Magda thought. "Santa Claus?" Magda chuckled. "No. Close though." Jinny just couldn't resist. "Jack." "Jack as in the Jack who left you Jack?" Magda was babbling. Jinny gave her a look. "Yeah that Jack." Magda was surprised. "Well, what did he say?" "He said he was back together with his exwife." Jinny said. Magda look pissed. "He actually told you that?" "Yeah, why not?" Jinny asked her. "I don't care. I am married to a wonderful man and have three wonderful children. He is happy and I am happy. That is all that matters." ************************************************** Sorry it is short but I have to do a couple things before drama class. I will post more later. It depends on how many replies I get.

10-19-2003, 10:10 PM	#9
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Sorry I haven't posted. Here is more. Kiera asked me if she could play herself in this and I couldn't say no. We hope you like it. ************************************************** Magda looked at Jinny and then nodded. "Yeah, I guess you're right." Then Magda hugged Jinny. "As long as you're happy. "I am Mag. I really am." Jinny said with a great big smile. Just then Kelly came running in from the junglegym crying. "Kiera pulled my hair mommy." Kelly points to Kiera. "You did so. Mommy she is lying to you. I think you should punish her." Kiera rolls her little eyes. "Please, you're such a baby" Jinny looked at Magda, who was laughing. "Magda, you are not helping the situation. Kelly and Kiera, please stop fighting. Mommy has a little headache. "Ok Mommy. I'm sorry Kiera." Kelly said with an angelic smile. "I'm sorry too, sissy." She hugs her sister and they go play. Jinny looked at Magda. "Well, you were a big help." "I know. See, I am Auntie Magda. I am the person they run to when you wont get them something they want." They both laughed. Jinny looked at her watch. "Well, we had better get back to work." Jinny went to the play area. "Kids, let's go." Kiera nods and follows them. "Auntie Magda, can I have a dollar?" Magda giggled. "Why?" Kiera "Cos I do not got one. She smiled. Magda reached into her pocket and was about to grab her money but then looked at Jinny who was glaring at her. But Magda then remembered something and got the dollar out and gave one dollar to each of the girls. "Here you guys go. Don't spend it all at once." She then looked at Jinny. "That's payback for the 'Little Red Riding Hood' story." They both started laughing as they walked out of the restraunt." Kiera and Kelly giggled, remembering about what Jinny said about Ben and that night, with the story. Meanwhile, Nate and Raina didn't get any information about the case, so they went back to the Division. At 3:00, it was time for Nate to go home. "Well Raina, I gotta go now." Nate said while getting on his coat. Raina smiled at him. "Enjoy yourself." "Raina, shut up!" Nate laughed. When he got home, CD was waitning for him. "Where have you been? I've been waiting forever!!" Nate chuckled. "Traffic was terrible. So, what is it?" "98.7. Just right. You ready?" CD said while slipping off her shirt. Nate walked towards her. "You bet." They both got on the bed and started making out. When Jinny got home, Teddy was there waiting for her. "Hey Jin." "Hey. What are you doing home?" Jinny asked. "I got off of work early to spend the day with you on your day off." He walked to her. "Is that alright?" Jinny smiled. "Oh you bet!" She started kissing him. Kiera and Kelly just stared at them. "EWWWWWW!" Teddy laughed. "Why don't you girls go play in your room until dinner is ready. We're having hot dogs!" Kelly jumped up and down. "Yay! Let'a go Kiera." They ran into their room. Jinny sat down as best she could as let out a really big sigh. Teddy looked at her. "What's wrong?" "What? Oh, nothing I just had a bit of pain before and now I am just a little tired." Jinny said while closing her eyes but was rudely shooken awake by her husband. "What do you mean pain?? Bad pain? Labor pain? Pl---" Teddy was saying until Jinny interupted him. "Calm down Teddy. My lunch just didn't sgree with me very well. That's all." Jinny told him and just had to laugh about the way he was acting. Teddy calmed down a little bit. "Well, I know how stubborn you can be sometimes. Last time you were in labor, you didn't tell me until ou were 9 cm dilated!" ************************************************** Well, what do you think? Should we continue?

10-19-2003, 10:31 PM	#10
maria1986 HATCHEE GAL Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 15, 2001 Location: FL Posts: 780	yes you should continue!.....

10-19-2003, 10:41 PM	#11
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	Of COURSE we want more!!! This is REALLY good!!!

10-21-2003, 05:34 PM	#12
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	Hello once again. Well, here is some more to keep you guys occupied! **************************************************** Jinny laughed. "Well, how was I supposed to know if I was really in labor or not? It was my first time." Teddy started at her and giggled. "Uh huh. Okay. I am going to go make dinner now." "Oh, can you put some ice cream on my hot dog. And some spray cheese." Jinny said with a big smile. Teddy made a face. "That's disgusting! How can you eat that??" "Don't ask me. Ask him." Jinny said pointing to her rather large belly. After dinner, Jinny was feeling a little tired so she went to bed early. It was about 1:30AM when she woke up and had to go to the bathroom. When she came out, she woke up Teddy. "Teddy, wake up." Jinny said trying to shake him awake. Teddy opened his eyes to find Jinny standing there crying. "What's wrong?? Is it coming?" "I don't know. I'm bleeding." Jinny said holding her stomach. Meanwhile, at CD and Nates, they had just gotten finished have the most powerful sex ever. CD was panting. "Oh my God Nate. That was wonderful. It has got to work this time. I have to be pregnant." "Honey, you know I was thinking maybe we sould consider adoption. It will be a lot easier nd you won't have to go through all of that pain every other mother has to go through. You get it easy." "I agree but Nate, do you realize how long it would be to get a baby through adoption? It could take years." CD said to Nate seriously. Nate answered her back. "Well, how about we get in line and we can keep trying while we are on the waiting list?" CD didn't really like that idea. "How about we just go to a fertility clinic? It will be easier and faster. We can find out what the problem is." "I told you before. I don't want to pee in a cup and make love to my wife after watching dirty movies and then having some doctor tell me why I can't get my ife pregnant. It is humiliating." CD frowned. "It is more humiliating passing a park or playground and looking at something you don't have. I want someone o love of my very own. I went and got my tubes untied so I can become a mother and no I can't seem to do it and I want to know why damnit!" CD said looking at the amazement in Nate's eyes. "Oh, Nate, I'm sorry I didn't mean to blow up at you like that. I just really wa---" Nate interrupted. "It's ok. If it is really what you want then I will go." Nate smiled. "We'll go together and figure out what the problem is." "Oh Nate!" She pushed him down and kissed him. "Did I tell you how much I loved you today??" Teddy was ready to panic. "Ok Ok, let's just call the doctor. Yeah, call the doctor. Or maybe we should go right to the hospital. Yeah that might be better. Oh, but I really don't want to wa--" Jinny interrupted. "Calm down. Everything is fine. Just call Dr. Thompson. She will tell you what to do." "Yeah. That's a good idea. Why didn't I think of that. Alright, the phone." He dialed the number. "Hello?? Hello??? DR. THOMPSON? Where the hell is she?" Jinny laughed. "Uh, honey. That's he TV remote control." Teddy looked at it. "Yeah, I knew that. I was just practicing what I was going to say to her." "You were oing to say 'Where the hell are you?' to our doctor?" Jinny said trying so hard to stop laughing. "How can you be so calm??" Teddy asked her. "It's ok now. The bleeding stopped." Jinny told him. Teddy shook his head. "No, I am still calling the doctor." He picked up the phone this time and dialed then number. "Hello, Dr. Thompson? This is Mr.Blumenthal. My wife Jinny Exstead Blumenthal is one of your patients. You know her. She is the pregnant one." Jinny shook her head and laughed. "Well, she was in the bathroom and started bleeding. Yes it is stopped. paused Ok I will tell her. Thank you." Hangs up the phone and talks to Jinny. "Alright she said as long as the bleeding stopped, everything is fine but it is also a sign that you are working to hard for you being in your eighth month. She wants you to take an early maternity leave. You don't have to stay totally off of your feet but just take it easy and no more work for a while." "What am I going to do with myself all day long? Work is what keeps me busy. I have to work." Jinny whined. Teddy started getting mean. "Jinny Louise Exstead Blumenthal, you have been ordered by the doctor not to work and not working is exactly what you are going to do. Understand?" Jinny thought he was joking and said. "Teddy--" "Do you understand?" Teddy scolded. Jinny mocked him. "Yes Daddy." **************************************************** I know it is short but I got a block. I will write more tonight though. Is it coming good? I wish a lot more people than this was reading it though.

10-21-2003, 07:50 PM	#14
maria1986 HATCHEE GAL Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 15, 2001 Location: FL Posts: 780	well you better get rid of that block and write more... It is really good so keep going....

10-21-2003, 08:15 PM	#15
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	I love this fic SOOOOOOO much!! It has my 2 favorite couples in it!!! Get over the mental block and get back here!!!