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candace~n~nathan · 10-11-2003, 06:25 PM

Hello!!! I was bored today because I had SATs and I had to mow, so I daydreamed a lot!!

I came up with a new idea, so tell me what ya think!!!!

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“So she ended up shooting you?” the man across from the blond
asked her.
“Yes, almost 5 years ago,” CD replied.
“My gosh, that seems like forever ago.”
“Yeah, I know. So much has happened since the last time we’ve
seen each other, hasn’t it?” CD said, as she rubbed her hand across
her belly.
The man nodded. “It sure has. Have far along are you?”
“Almost 5 months, but it seems like about 10.”
The man laughed. “Yeah, I’m sure.” He stood up and got the
ticket from the table. CD tried to grab it. “No, no, CD, I’m getting it.”
“Aw, come on, let me at least pay half!” CD exclaimed.
“Nope, I won’t hear of it. Consider it my treat to an old friend.”
CD grinned. “So you think I’m old?!”
The man laughed. “Of course not! If I thought you were old,
then I’d have to think that I’m old because we’re close to the same
age!”
“Okay, let’s be fair then. Neither one of us are old!” CD replied
and walked over to him.
He embraced her, and then they broke away for a quick kiss on the
cheek. “Well, CD, it was so good to see you again! We’re going to have
to go get lunch again really soon, like this week,” He said.
“Okay, that sounds good to me! Just let me know ahead of
time, so I can make arrangements.”
“Ok, great. Hey, um, CD?”
“What?” CD asked.
“Uh, could you not tell Jinny that we met tonight?”
CD understood. “Of course I won’t tell her.”
“Thank you,” he said, as he walked out of Anchorside.

Should I go on??

Bonnie Is Great! · 10-11-2003, 06:47 PM

PELASE post MORE!!! Who was the guy? Who was the guy? who was the guy? I have to know Who was the guy? LOL That was a great start.

candace~n~nathan · 10-11-2003, 06:51 PM

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Originally posted by Bonnie Is Great!
PELASE post MORE!!! Who was the guy? Who was the guy? who was the guy? I have to know Who was the guy? LOL That was a great start.

any guesses?!!

Bonnie Is Great! · 10-11-2003, 07:30 PM

My honest oppion sp is that it's teddy I at first thought that it was Nate, but then at the end you said that part about not telling Jinny...So I think it's either Teddy or Jack.

CD DeLorenzo · 10-11-2003, 07:37 PM

awww yeah! MORE!!! Definitely! I love it! That was so great!!!! Did ya get my mail btw? And I want you to come online and post more!!!!!! And I'm almost certain that the man is Teddy

candace~n~nathan · 10-11-2003, 07:49 PM

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Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
awww yeah! MORE!!! Definitely! I love it! That was so great!!!! Did ya get my mail btw? And I want you to come online and post more!!!!!! And I'm almost certain that the man is Teddy

hmmm i don't know!!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 10-11-2003, 07:53 PM

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Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
hmmm i don't know!!!!

phhhsh....

HIGH ENOUGH · 10-11-2003, 08:01 PM

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Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
hmmm i don't know!!!!

Add more this

minute! Oh. Sorry. Lost my cool for a minute.

Continue!

candace~n~nathan · 10-11-2003, 08:54 PM

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Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
awww yeah! MORE!!! Definitely! I love it! That was so great!!!! Did ya get my mail btw? And I want you to come online and post more!!!!!! And I'm almost certain that the man is Teddy

what mail???

CD DeLorenzo · 10-11-2003, 09:06 PM

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Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
what mail???

something about our fic, I'll just tell ya lol... I tried to send it earlier but the damn thing was bitching

sorry

candace~n~nathan · 10-11-2003, 11:09 PM

Ok, we won't find out who mystery man is for a few posts or so, but here's the next part!! ENJOY!!
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Candace DeLorenzo walked into the Division and sat down at her
desk. Raina noticed that she had made it back from lunch, so she
sat down in the adjoining desk. “Hey CD!! Where’d ya go, you were
gone forever!”
CD could tell that it was going to be an annoying afternoon.
“Raina, it’s called lunch. I went to Anchorside and had a quick
bite.”
“A quick bite! You were gone for an hour and a half!!”
CD sighed. “I’m pregnant, Raina. I have to eat slowly, and I
had to check in with the baby sitter to make sure Isiah was alright.”
“Oh, I see. How is he doing? I haven’t seen him in forever!”
“Who?” CD asked, alarmingly.
“Um, Isiah, CD. Remember we were just talking about him? How is
he? I haven’t been over to see him in forever!”
“Oh, uh, yeah,” CD stammered. “Isiah is fine; he misses his
Daddy, but for the most part, he seems pretty happy,” CD replied,
glad that that was who Raina was talking about.
“That’s good,” Raina said, as Kate McCafferty walked out of
her office.
“Raina, CD, what are you two still doing here? I told you to get
right on it, Raina!”
“Sorry, Cap, but I got to talking and....”
“Yeah, yeah, yeah. Have you briefed CD yet?”
“Um, actually that was my next order of business,” Raina
replied.
Kate rolled her eyes. “Sure, Raina. Just tell her and get busy!”
Kate walked back into her office while Raina told CD the
situation. “A robbery on 42nd Street. You and I are up.”
CD nodded. “Alright, let’s go.”
“Okay, then partner!” Raina exclaimed.
The two of them traveled downtown to brief the witnesses on the
robbery. A convience store was hit, and then a nursing home was
broken into. At the home, CD and Raina got some pretty interesting
statements-- “We couldn’t defend ourselves, it was kareoke night,
and we were getting down!”, “The Don’t-Stop-Dance contest was
going on, and we didn’t want to lose, so we just gave them
everything we had and continued dancing!”, and “My cane was in
my room, and I was in the tv room when they attacked!!”
After a long, exhausting day, CD and Raina finally made it
back to the Division. “Oh, I’m so tired,” CD said, as Kate came out of
her office and heard her.
“Candace DeLorenzo, you know you’re not supposed to be
overdoing it!”
“Cap, I’m not overdoing it, I’m just a little sleepy.”
“CD, don’t you lie to me! You went to far today, and your shift ended
2 hours ago. Go home to Isiah, and take the morning off. Just come
in for a half day tomorrow.”
“Cap, I don’t need special treatment. I’ll be back in the
morning, fresh as a daisy.”
“Well, if I ever hear you say that you’re exhausted again, or if
you look like you do now, then you’re definitely taking a day off!! Or
I’ll just start your maternity leave early!”
*****
ok, thought I'd stop it there, b/c i don't have a lot written b/c there's SO much stuff I want to include in it!! lol, FEEDBACK!!!

MovieHuntress17 · 10-11-2003, 11:17 PM

POst more soooon! This is great!

CD DeLorenzo · 10-11-2003, 11:23 PM

*yaaaaawn* This sounds so familiar... why does this sound so familiar? *smirk* I still want more though

candace~n~nathan · 10-11-2003, 11:31 PM

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Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
*yaaaaawn* This sounds so familiar... why does this sound so familiar? *smirk* I still want more though

well, maybe if you didn't force me to let you read ALL 10 pages that I've written so far, it wouldn't sound so familiar!!!

damn puppy eye smile

CD DeLorenzo · 10-11-2003, 11:33 PM

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Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
well, maybe if you didn't force me to let you read ALL 10 pages that I've written so far, it wouldn't sound so familiar!!!

damn puppy eye smile

*smirks triumphantly* I know who the guy is, I know who the guy is...

10-11-2003, 06:25 PM	#1
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	Till You Come Back To Me Again Hello!!! I was bored today because I had SATs and I had to mow, so I daydreamed a lot!! I came up with a new idea, so tell me what ya think!!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “So she ended up shooting you?” the man across from the blond asked her. “Yes, almost 5 years ago,” CD replied. “My gosh, that seems like forever ago.” “Yeah, I know. So much has happened since the last time we’ve seen each other, hasn’t it?” CD said, as she rubbed her hand across her belly. The man nodded. “It sure has. Have far along are you?” “Almost 5 months, but it seems like about 10.” The man laughed. “Yeah, I’m sure.” He stood up and got the ticket from the table. CD tried to grab it. “No, no, CD, I’m getting it.” “Aw, come on, let me at least pay half!” CD exclaimed. “Nope, I won’t hear of it. Consider it my treat to an old friend.” CD grinned. “So you think I’m old?!” The man laughed. “Of course not! If I thought you were old, then I’d have to think that I’m old because we’re close to the same age!” “Okay, let’s be fair then. Neither one of us are old!” CD replied and walked over to him. He embraced her, and then they broke away for a quick kiss on the cheek. “Well, CD, it was so good to see you again! We’re going to have to go get lunch again really soon, like this week,” He said. “Okay, that sounds good to me! Just let me know ahead of time, so I can make arrangements.” “Ok, great. Hey, um, CD?” “What?” CD asked. “Uh, could you not tell Jinny that we met tonight?” CD understood. “Of course I won’t tell her.” “Thank you,” he said, as he walked out of Anchorside. Should I go on??

10-11-2003, 07:37 PM	#5
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	awww yeah! MORE!!! Definitely! I love it! That was so great!!!! Did ya get my mail btw? And I want you to come online and post more!!!!!! And I'm almost certain that the man is Teddy
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10-11-2003, 11:17 PM	#12
MovieHuntress17 #1 Actress ever Forum Regular Join Date: Oct 28, 2002 Location: "Over yonder" Posts: 886	POst more soooon! This is great!
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10-11-2003, 06:47 PM	#2
Bonnie Is Great! Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 23, 2002 Location: Rock on! Can ya handle it? Cat is the best! Posts: 488	PELASE post MORE!!! Who was the guy? Who was the guy? who was the guy? I have to know Who was the guy? LOL That was a great start.

10-11-2003, 07:30 PM	#4
Bonnie Is Great! Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 23, 2002 Location: Rock on! Can ya handle it? Cat is the best! Posts: 488	My honest oppion sp is that it's teddy I at first thought that it was Nate, but then at the end you said that part about not telling Jinny...So I think it's either Teddy or Jack.

10-11-2003, 11:09 PM	#11
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	Ok, we won't find out who mystery man is for a few posts or so, but here's the next part!! ENJOY!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Candace DeLorenzo walked into the Division and sat down at her desk. Raina noticed that she had made it back from lunch, so she sat down in the adjoining desk. “Hey CD!! Where’d ya go, you were gone forever!” CD could tell that it was going to be an annoying afternoon. “Raina, it’s called lunch. I went to Anchorside and had a quick bite.” “A quick bite! You were gone for an hour and a half!!” CD sighed. “I’m pregnant, Raina. I have to eat slowly, and I had to check in with the baby sitter to make sure Isiah was alright.” “Oh, I see. How is he doing? I haven’t seen him in forever!” “Who?” CD asked, alarmingly. “Um, Isiah, CD. Remember we were just talking about him? How is he? I haven’t been over to see him in forever!” “Oh, uh, yeah,” CD stammered. “Isiah is fine; he misses his Daddy, but for the most part, he seems pretty happy,” CD replied, glad that that was who Raina was talking about. “That’s good,” Raina said, as Kate McCafferty walked out of her office. “Raina, CD, what are you two still doing here? I told you to get right on it, Raina!” “Sorry, Cap, but I got to talking and....” “Yeah, yeah, yeah. Have you briefed CD yet?” “Um, actually that was my next order of business,” Raina replied. Kate rolled her eyes. “Sure, Raina. Just tell her and get busy!” Kate walked back into her office while Raina told CD the situation. “A robbery on 42nd Street. You and I are up.” CD nodded. “Alright, let’s go.” “Okay, then partner!” Raina exclaimed. The two of them traveled downtown to brief the witnesses on the robbery. A convience store was hit, and then a nursing home was broken into. At the home, CD and Raina got some pretty interesting statements-- “We couldn’t defend ourselves, it was kareoke night, and we were getting down!”, “The Don’t-Stop-Dance contest was going on, and we didn’t want to lose, so we just gave them everything we had and continued dancing!”, and “My cane was in my room, and I was in the tv room when they attacked!!” After a long, exhausting day, CD and Raina finally made it back to the Division. “Oh, I’m so tired,” CD said, as Kate came out of her office and heard her. “Candace DeLorenzo, you know you’re not supposed to be overdoing it!” “Cap, I’m not overdoing it, I’m just a little sleepy.” “CD, don’t you lie to me! You went to far today, and your shift ended 2 hours ago. Go home to Isiah, and take the morning off. Just come in for a half day tomorrow.” “Cap, I don’t need special treatment. I’ll be back in the morning, fresh as a daisy.” “Well, if I ever hear you say that you’re exhausted again, or if you look like you do now, then you’re definitely taking a day off!! Or I’ll just start your maternity leave early!” ***** ok, thought I'd stop it there, b/c i don't have a lot written b/c there's SO much stuff I want to include in it!! lol, FEEDBACK!!!

10-11-2003, 11:23 PM	#13
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	yaaaaawn This sounds so familiar... why does this sound so familiar? smirk I still want more though