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ReturningFolFanKiera · 10-02-2003, 09:53 PM

GreetingS! : )
I'm sure you all know me as the author of SOS, SOS 2 Redone and co-writer og "Magda's Reality" but I'm here, to do a TD fic! -Gasp- It's inspired by a role play me and my friend Sara are doing. If you want me (us) to continue, (Not role playing exactly..., but to post) then let POST! : )

See, what happens is, this one guy, Jinny's steady B/f (-Another gasp-) ends up getting her pregnant but he breaks up with her the day after they do it.. well this other guy comes along and helps her out and ends up being her love interest. Sara loves romances ; P

Blessed be!
Kie

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 10-02-2003, 10:13 PM

You must post more of this soon. This is getting really good. I try to imagine Jinny as a wild teenager in high school. Now I get to see. Please please please post really soon. In like maybe one hour at the most? lol..Good luck you two with writing it. I will be one of your regulars!

*Nancy Mckeon* · 10-02-2003, 10:23 PM

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tonight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ReturningFolFanKiera · 10-03-2003, 08:06 PM

Here ya go! Our first post! : ) Hope you guys like it. (And again...VERY sory for the whole chat thing on Magda's Reality, I gotta fix that....

It was the day after Homecoming. After a few years of sleeping around, Jinny finally managed to hold a steady boyfriend. Brad was the typical high school guy that all of the girls loved and wanted. So, being the totally boy-crazy chick that she was, Jinny wanted him too. They started going out that year and were inseperable since. That is, until the next morning. Brad came to pick Jinny up and had something on his mind. She hears him honk his horn and runs out. Wearing a leather mini skirt, low-cut white midriff-baring top, a matching short leather jacket and boots coming up to her knees, 17 year old Jinny Exstead walked out of the tiny 4 bedroom house and down the stone steps to Brad and his truck. She gets in and he kisses her. Though, today his kisses seemed different. Empty. She decided to ask him about it when they got to school. Silent the whole way, and after what seems like an eternity, Brad finally pulls his pick-up into the school parking lot and gets out. When they reach the cracked cement sidewalk, he stops.

"I don't think we should see each other anymore." he simply stated.
"What? Wait, Brad you can't be serious." Jinny said, not wanting to believe him.
"It's just not working out. I mean, let's face it, you're only good for one thing. And Heather is much prettier."
"So, that's it? You're just gonna screw me 'N' lose me?" she asked, the anger raising in her voice.

Not thinking of what might happen next....

"Yep."

She punches him hard in the stomach and walks into school, while he writes on the sidewalk in pain and goes into a fetal position. Jinny's best friend, Jaclyn, walked up to her as she slammed her locker.

"Whoa... Hey, chica! What's buggin' you?" she asked.
"I think I'm gonna give up men." she stated.
"You? Give up men? Is that possible?" she asked, half joking, half serious.
"I can be satisfied by my toys." she said, grinning.
"Girl, you are too much." Jaclyn said, laughing, as they slapped each other a high five.

Hope you like! I'm not posting as much since well, I'm basically vamping on this first part, and I'm not even sure if you will like it or not! : P Blessed be.

*Nancy Mckeon* · 10-04-2003, 08:44 PM

!!!!!!!!!MMMMOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

ReturningFolFanKiera · 10-05-2003, 10:14 AM

Hmm, never thought I'd be posting a Division fan fic that people actually like. It's never happened before lol. Anyway, enough of my babbling. If some of this don't make any sense or w/e, gimme a break coz I just woke up

We're gonna fast forward to a week later since actually, the first part was sort of like the prologue. Here's more:

After hours of boring classes, some ditched, Jinny and Jaclyn walk to Gym class. After getting showered and changed, all the girls walk to the gymnasium. The boys are already there and after some strenuous exercises, the gym teacher blows her whistle and they start running laps around the gym. A few of the kids in class are just walking now, while others continue to run. Jinny, running with Jaclyn and Cale, running in-step in front of them beside Leo. Cale had liked Jinny for some time, but never really told her. He hated the way most guys treated her, even though she seemed to like it. Especially Brad. Half the time he treated her as if she didn't matter. But when he wanted a quickie, he'd sweet talk her just to that point. Now that it was out what had happened between him and Jinny, Cale felt sorry for her and was willing to do anything to help. Right now, they were just friends, Jaclyn too. But he hoped it might evolve into something more. While thinking about this, he noticed that nobody was really running anymore and there was a crowd gathered in a circle. He walked over and pushed her way through. The gym teacher was already there.

"What happened?" One girl whispered.
"She fainted" said the gym teacher. "Probably got overheated or something."
"Here, I'll take her." Cale said, picking her up.

Jaclyn followed and she helped him take Jinny to the Nurses' office.

: )

anaïsFANxx · 10-05-2003, 10:52 AM

This is awesomeee! ; ) Post more when U get the chance!!

PS *nancy mckeon* .. i looove your avatar! Memories

*Nancy Mckeon* · 10-05-2003, 02:59 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by anaïsFANxx
This is awesomeee! ; ) Post more when U get the chance!!

PS *nancy mckeon* .. i looove your avatar! Memories

wha? who? oh oh! me?! lol j/k sorry im in stupid mode today! lol j/k thanks! cat (cd delorenzo) made it for me! you have a cool av to! i love that band! whats your fave song they sing? did you really meet anais? i read sumwhere that you did.

what was teddy like? lol i only saw 2 eps with him in them lol in all of the fics he seems really nice soo thats why im obsesing over him all the time lol

neway !!!!!!MMMOOOOORRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!! now!!!

anaïsFANxx · 10-07-2003, 04:18 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
wha? who? oh oh! me?! lol j/k sorry im in stupid mode today! lol j/k thanks! cat (cd delorenzo) made it for me! you have a cool av to! i love that band! whats your fave song they sing? did you really meet anais? i read sumwhere that you did.

what was teddy like? lol i only saw 2 eps with him in them lol in all of the fics he seems really nice soo thats why im obsesing over him all the time lol

neway !!!!!!MMMOOOOORRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!! now!!!

Sry this is so OT Kie! But yayyy.. i <3333 Play too! Dude, finally, someone who likes Play also. YEAH! LOL. UM my fave song of theirz is... Whole Again, What Is Love, Us Against the World and Hot. What about you? And yup I've actually met Play three times through out the yr. When they went on promotional tours and mall tours.

Teddy was.. <333 darn I loved him lol! He was so perfect for Jinny. But i think she screwed up and she left him, then he found her kissing another guy, and he didn't wanna go back w/ her.

Again sry Kie =\! But post moore sooon!

ReturningFolFanKiera · 10-07-2003, 07:05 PM

"How did she faint?"
"I don't know." said Cale, "She was running in gym class. Do you think she got overheated?"
"That's possible. But not what I have in mind." inquired the nurse.

Cale sighs and sits on the other bed, while the nurse waits for Jinny to wake up. She soon wakes up and looks around.

"Uh, what am I doing here...?" she asked, confused.
"You fainted and I carried you here." implied Cale.
"Oh, well, uh... thanks." she said, smiling a little.

Cale smiles at her and looks back to the nurse, who speaks.

"Now, I don't want to alarm you dear, but I think you might be pregnant." said the nurse.
"What? I..... uh..... ohhhhhh...." Jinny mumbled untelligable, fainting again.
"Stop it! You're going to kill her!" Cale said, frantically.
"Oh, calm down. She'll be fine." said the nurse, reassuringly.

Sure enough, as if on cue, Jinny wakes up, sits up and once again, looks around. As soon as she sits up, the nurse gets a small cup and fills it with water.

"Are you feeling better?" asked Cale.
"For now." Jinny said.

Cale smiles at her and the nurse walks over.

"How are we?"
"Uhm... find I guess...." said Jinny, confused.
"Jinny, before you fainted, I told you I thought you might be pregnant. Correct?" she asked.
"Yeah... so...?" Jinny asked, lost.
"I want you to take a pregnancy test." the nurse said.

Jinny's eyes widen for a moment, and remembering Cale's in the room, she keeps her cool.

"Well, okay... but, uh, I don't have to, um... ya know..."

The nurse hands her the water.

"Then drink this until you do." she simply stated.

Jinny sighs and sips at the water.

"Drink, don't sip." she said.
"Oh, fine." Jinny said, slightly irritated.

She continues to drink the water until it's gone and then gets up to leave when the nurse hands her another cup. Jinny groans and takes the small cup. She drinks it quickly and looks at the nurse.

"Can I go now?" she asked.
"Alright, but come back in 20 minutes." she said.
"Yeah, yeah..." Jinny mumbled, walking out into the hall with Cale.

He slips her arm around her, hesitant at first, but then relaxes when she smiles at him. She sighs and they walk silently for a little bit until Cale speaks.

"You know... you were too good for him." Cale said.
"What?" asked Jinny.
"Brad. You were too good for him... and you didn't deserve what he did to you." he stated.
"Well, thank you, but I'm not worried about him now."she said, walking closer to him.

He sighs and pulls her closer.

"So... how's family life?" he asked, just for lack of nothing to say.

"Miserable... gotta pee."

She said, as she slipped out of his grasp and quickly walked back to the nurse's office.

*Nancy Mckeon* · 10-07-2003, 07:22 PM

!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

omg! its my 400th post!!!

anaïsFANxx · 10-08-2003, 03:30 PM

awesome awesome awesome post moreee!! <333

JohnstownBruja · 10-08-2003, 09:01 PM

Here's a little more. I wanna be off in time to watch Full House!

He laughed and followed to wait outside the door. She walks in and the nurse hands her the test, directing her to the small bathroom in the corner of the nurse's office. She walks in and does the test. Meanwhile, Cale is waiting outside and the nurse comes to talk to him.

"She should be out in a few minutes."
"Okay." said Cale, not paying attention.
"If she is... well, are you the father?" asked the nurse, tentively.

Cale's eyes widen and he almost falls over.

"NO!, I.. I mean, no." he said, trying to keep his cool.
"Oh, I see." said the nurse, not sure whether to believe him or not.

She walks back inside and knocks on the door. When no one answers, she opens it to find Jinny kneeling on the floor, with her head in her hands. She walks over and helps her up, leaving the test on the edge of the sink. She leads her over to one of the small beds and hands her a few tissues. She sits down on a chair and slides it over.

"We have to call your father, Jinny."
"No, please, he'd..."

She takes a deep breath and tries to finish her sentence. But before she can, the nurse speaks.

"Honey, I know you're scared, but maybe he'll understand. He has to know. And not to sound... foolish, but he is going to find out sooner or later." said the nurse.

Jinny manages to laugh a small, watery sounding laugh and wipes her eyes. The nurse goes to dial the phone, sighs and calls Cale back in.

"Is she alright? What's wrong?" he asked.

He could tell by the look in the nurses' eyes that something wasn't right.

"Come in and see your girlfriend." she said, coxing him in.

Cale blushed at the way the nurse had referred to Jinny as "his girlfriend" and walked in to see her, teary-eyed and shaking.

: )

*Nancy Mckeon* · 10-08-2003, 09:22 PM

kool! im atching full house too! DJ ROX! so does michelle and so does the guy who's into elvis, and so does every1 else!! lol
!!!!!!!MMOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!

Sweetchild2005 · 10-08-2003, 10:38 PM

This is awesome!!! Post more!

10-02-2003, 09:53 PM	#1
ReturningFolFanKiera Earth Air Fire Water Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 23, 2003 Location: J/Town Bruja, babi! Posts: 109	New Fan fic idea inspired by role play: Jinny in Highschool GreetingS! : ) I'm sure you all know me as the author of SOS, SOS 2 Redone and co-writer og "Magda's Reality" but I'm here, to do a TD fic! -Gasp- It's inspired by a role play me and my friend Sara are doing. If you want me (us) to continue, (Not role playing exactly..., but to post) then let POST! : ) See, what happens is, this one guy, Jinny's steady B/f (-Another gasp-) ends up getting her pregnant but he breaks up with her the day after they do it.. well this other guy comes along and helps her out and ends up being her love interest. Sara loves romances ; P Blessed be! Kie
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10-02-2003, 10:23 PM	#3
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10-03-2003, 08:06 PM	#4
ReturningFolFanKiera Earth Air Fire Water Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 23, 2003 Location: J/Town Bruja, babi! Posts: 109	Here ya go! Our first post! : ) Hope you guys like it. (And again...VERY sory for the whole chat thing on Magda's Reality, I gotta fix that.... It was the day after Homecoming. After a few years of sleeping around, Jinny finally managed to hold a steady boyfriend. Brad was the typical high school guy that all of the girls loved and wanted. So, being the totally boy-crazy chick that she was, Jinny wanted him too. They started going out that year and were inseperable since. That is, until the next morning. Brad came to pick Jinny up and had something on his mind. She hears him honk his horn and runs out. Wearing a leather mini skirt, low-cut white midriff-baring top, a matching short leather jacket and boots coming up to her knees, 17 year old Jinny Exstead walked out of the tiny 4 bedroom house and down the stone steps to Brad and his truck. She gets in and he kisses her. Though, today his kisses seemed different. Empty. She decided to ask him about it when they got to school. Silent the whole way, and after what seems like an eternity, Brad finally pulls his pick-up into the school parking lot and gets out. When they reach the cracked cement sidewalk, he stops. "I don't think we should see each other anymore." he simply stated. "What? Wait, Brad you can't be serious." Jinny said, not wanting to believe him. "It's just not working out. I mean, let's face it, you're only good for one thing. And Heather is much prettier." "So, that's it? You're just gonna screw me 'N' lose me?" she asked, the anger raising in her voice. Not thinking of what might happen next.... "Yep." She punches him hard in the stomach and walks into school, while he writes on the sidewalk in pain and goes into a fetal position. Jinny's best friend, Jaclyn, walked up to her as she slammed her locker. "Whoa... Hey, chica! What's buggin' you?" she asked. "I think I'm gonna give up men." she stated. "You? Give up men? Is that possible?" she asked, half joking, half serious. "I can be satisfied by my toys." she said, grinning. "Girl, you are too much." Jaclyn said, laughing, as they slapped each other a high five. Hope you like! I'm not posting as much since well, I'm basically vamping on this first part, and I'm not even sure if you will like it or not! : P Blessed be.
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10-05-2003, 10:52 AM	#7
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10-08-2003, 09:01 PM	#13
JohnstownBruja !!!! K!wi !!!! Occasional Poster Join Date: Oct 08, 2003 Location: J*Town Posts: 14	New username! Still Kiera, just a diff username : ) Here's a little more. I wanna be off in time to watch Full House! He laughed and followed to wait outside the door. She walks in and the nurse hands her the test, directing her to the small bathroom in the corner of the nurse's office. She walks in and does the test. Meanwhile, Cale is waiting outside and the nurse comes to talk to him. "She should be out in a few minutes." "Okay." said Cale, not paying attention. "If she is... well, are you the father?" asked the nurse, tentively. Cale's eyes widen and he almost falls over. "NO!, I.. I mean, no." he said, trying to keep his cool. "Oh, I see." said the nurse, not sure whether to believe him or not. She walks back inside and knocks on the door. When no one answers, she opens it to find Jinny kneeling on the floor, with her head in her hands. She walks over and helps her up, leaving the test on the edge of the sink. She leads her over to one of the small beds and hands her a few tissues. She sits down on a chair and slides it over. "We have to call your father, Jinny." "No, please, he'd..." She takes a deep breath and tries to finish her sentence. But before she can, the nurse speaks. "Honey, I know you're scared, but maybe he'll understand. He has to know. And not to sound... foolish, but he is going to find out sooner or later." said the nurse. Jinny manages to laugh a small, watery sounding laugh and wipes her eyes. The nurse goes to dial the phone, sighs and calls Cale back in. "Is she alright? What's wrong?" he asked. He could tell by the look in the nurses' eyes that something wasn't right. "Come in and see your girlfriend." she said, coxing him in. Cale blushed at the way the nurse had referred to Jinny as "his girlfriend" and walked in to see her, teary-eyed and shaking. : )
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10-02-2003, 10:13 PM	#2
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	You must post more of this soon. This is getting really good. I try to imagine Jinny as a wild teenager in high school. Now I get to see. Please please please post really soon. In like maybe one hour at the most? lol..Good luck you two with writing it. I will be one of your regulars!

10-04-2003, 08:44 PM	#5
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10-05-2003, 10:14 AM	#6
ReturningFolFanKiera Earth Air Fire Water Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 23, 2003 Location: J/Town Bruja, babi! Posts: 109	Hmm, never thought I'd be posting a Division fan fic that people actually like. It's never happened before lol. Anyway, enough of my babbling. If some of this don't make any sense or w/e, gimme a break coz I just woke up We're gonna fast forward to a week later since actually, the first part was sort of like the prologue. Here's more: After hours of boring classes, some ditched, Jinny and Jaclyn walk to Gym class. After getting showered and changed, all the girls walk to the gymnasium. The boys are already there and after some strenuous exercises, the gym teacher blows her whistle and they start running laps around the gym. A few of the kids in class are just walking now, while others continue to run. Jinny, running with Jaclyn and Cale, running in-step in front of them beside Leo. Cale had liked Jinny for some time, but never really told her. He hated the way most guys treated her, even though she seemed to like it. Especially Brad. Half the time he treated her as if she didn't matter. But when he wanted a quickie, he'd sweet talk her just to that point. Now that it was out what had happened between him and Jinny, Cale felt sorry for her and was willing to do anything to help. Right now, they were just friends, Jaclyn too. But he hoped it might evolve into something more. While thinking about this, he noticed that nobody was really running anymore and there was a crowd gathered in a circle. He walked over and pushed her way through. The gym teacher was already there. "What happened?" One girl whispered. "She fainted" said the gym teacher. "Probably got overheated or something." "Here, I'll take her." Cale said, picking her up. Jaclyn followed and she helped him take Jinny to the Nurses' office. : )

10-07-2003, 07:05 PM	#10
ReturningFolFanKiera Earth Air Fire Water Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 23, 2003 Location: J/Town Bruja, babi! Posts: 109	"How did she faint?" "I don't know." said Cale, "She was running in gym class. Do you think she got overheated?" "That's possible. But not what I have in mind." inquired the nurse. Cale sighs and sits on the other bed, while the nurse waits for Jinny to wake up. She soon wakes up and looks around. "Uh, what am I doing here...?" she asked, confused. "You fainted and I carried you here." implied Cale. "Oh, well, uh... thanks." she said, smiling a little. Cale smiles at her and looks back to the nurse, who speaks. "Now, I don't want to alarm you dear, but I think you might be pregnant." said the nurse. "What? I..... uh..... ohhhhhh...." Jinny mumbled untelligable, fainting again. "Stop it! You're going to kill her!" Cale said, frantically. "Oh, calm down. She'll be fine." said the nurse, reassuringly. Sure enough, as if on cue, Jinny wakes up, sits up and once again, looks around. As soon as she sits up, the nurse gets a small cup and fills it with water. "Are you feeling better?" asked Cale. "For now." Jinny said. Cale smiles at her and the nurse walks over. "How are we?" "Uhm... find I guess...." said Jinny, confused. "Jinny, before you fainted, I told you I thought you might be pregnant. Correct?" she asked. "Yeah... so...?" Jinny asked, lost. "I want you to take a pregnancy test." the nurse said. Jinny's eyes widen for a moment, and remembering Cale's in the room, she keeps her cool. "Well, okay... but, uh, I don't have to, um... ya know..." The nurse hands her the water. "Then drink this until you do." she simply stated. Jinny sighs and sips at the water. "Drink, don't sip." she said. "Oh, fine." Jinny said, slightly irritated. She continues to drink the water until it's gone and then gets up to leave when the nurse hands her another cup. Jinny groans and takes the small cup. She drinks it quickly and looks at the nurse. "Can I go now?" she asked. "Alright, but come back in 20 minutes." she said. "Yeah, yeah..." Jinny mumbled, walking out into the hall with Cale. He slips her arm around her, hesitant at first, but then relaxes when she smiles at him. She sighs and they walk silently for a little bit until Cale speaks. "You know... you were too good for him." Cale said. "What?" asked Jinny. "Brad. You were too good for him... and you didn't deserve what he did to you." he stated. "Well, thank you, but I'm not worried about him now."she said, walking closer to him. He sighs and pulls her closer. "So... how's family life?" he asked, just for lack of nothing to say. "Miserable... gotta pee." She said, as she slipped out of his grasp and quickly walked back to the nurse's office.

10-07-2003, 07:22 PM	#11
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10-08-2003, 03:30 PM	#12
anaïsFANxx i heart play. Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 28, 2003 Location: 2 blocks down in the park you can't miss it ;o) Posts: 338	awesome awesome awesome post moreee!! <333

10-08-2003, 09:22 PM	#14
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	kool! im atching full house too! DJ ROX! so does michelle and so does the guy who's into elvis, and so does every1 else!! lol !!!!!!!MMOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!

10-08-2003, 10:38 PM	#15
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