Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

[CD DeLorenzo]

Okay, so this is what happens when girls who just wanna have fun and are big CD/Nate shippers write a fanfic together So... FEEDBACK! Please?

Disclaimers: DJL, Lifetime, and so on...

Girls Just Wanna Have Fun
by Lisa (candace~n~nathan) and cat (CD DeLorenzo)


“Game time guys! Let’s go! We’re not losing to Spivey’s team this year, ya got me!!” CD DeLorenzo shouted to her team to get them pumped up. “Let’s kick some ass, ladies!!”

It was the 7th annual powder puff football game between Divisions-- Spivey had gotten a new job at another division. It was his Division vs. Kate’s Division. CD was quarterback of her team-- the most demanding woman at the Division, she wasn’t going out until they won. Magda, Jinny, and Raina were playing, too. There were other women from their Division playing, too, and Kate was the coach. They had to provide their cheerleaders, too, so they had to pick some male Inspectors to do that job.

They of course, chose Nate as the main cheerleader to a bunch of usually tough guys that worked at the felony division. And the girls had insisted on them wearing short pink dresses and make up. Actually CD had helped Nate with the make up part. She had laughed her ass off and insisted on shaving his legs. And now he was rather pissed because he was the only guy with no hair left exept on his head because CD had loved to tease him and shaved everything else off as well while she was at it.

They took the field and got down and ready. CD called out plays, running the ball. She usually looked for Jinny because she knew she could always count on her to actually catch it. Raina was spunky, so she was on defensive and tackled left and right. Magda filled in wherever, not as big as the others, so she usually tossed the ball to CD.

It was supposed to be flag football, where everyone would have a flag sticking out of the back of their shorts for the defensive to pull out, but Jinny had the great idea of tackle football. Kate, of course, gave that a hell yeah, and commanded her team to get rough with Spivey’s wimps. They did, sacking their offensive over and over. CD threw great passes and Jinny and Co. caught them. Final score: 49-21. Kate’s Division out on top.

Of course Nate and his cheerleaders did their best on cheering them on and tried to dance and even tried a pyramid but that ended looking more like the tackling on the field as well. Nevertheless it caused everybody to applause and laugh. All in all they had a great time even though apart from Magda who most of the time was scared to break a nail, they all had some bruises.

After their huddle broke, CD asked her Division buddies, “Who’s up for a beer at Anchorside?” She looked at Nate, who was trying to put a pair of shorts on underneath his dress. “And she’s buying!” CD said with a laugh.

Nate shook his head and grinned. “Fine, I’ll buy everyone a drink if Jinny tackles CD right NOW!” Nate turned to put his other leg through the shorts hole and tripped over his own feet, falling to the ground.

Everyone pointed and laughed and CD just shook her head. She went over to him and helped him up. “Nate, honey, if you want to be a good cheerleader, you’re going to have to work on your balance.”

Nate growled and glared at her. "Is that another advice like 'you'll have to shave your legs, all the guys are gonna do that. And actually, you can't just shave your legs, that would look stupid. We're just gonna have to shave it all. Here let me help.'" He was still mad at her for that.

CD couldn't help but burst out laughing. "But it suits you! Really, right girls?" She asked her friends who laughed and nodded.

"Hey if I were you I'd worry that he's wearing my undies from now on." Kate said.

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

OMG!!! That was great you guys. It was soo funny and romantic at the same time. I hope that this isn't a one post deal. You must add more. Oh, by the way, did I meantion NOW!! lol..

[croatian_princess]

OMG! That was so hilarious! OK, we need lots MMMMMMMOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!!

[candace~n~nathan]

no that was definitely not a one time post for this fic!! Cat and I have been writing for HOURS at a time to bring you this!! So we'd better get more than just TWO replies next time!!!
Here's some more:
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Nate blushed a deep red and turned away. “Well, guys, it’s been fun, but see ya later.”

Jinny called after him as he was walking away. “Nate, you were buying us beer, weren’t ya? I was actually looking forward to it!”

Nate turned back, knowing Jinny was kidding. She was still on the wagon and would hopefully stay there. “Jin, if you didn’t have such mean people on your team, I’d come and buy. But, since you have her,” he pointed to CD, “making fun of me, I guess I’ll just go home and rest my aching legs.”

CD giggled. “Aw, come on ya big baby! Come with us and I’ll only make fun of you a little!” She smiled the smile only he got to see. “And why would your legs hurt? You didn’t just play football!”

Nate shook his head. “No, I didn’t, but I did attempt the splits. Found out the there’s no way in hell, and I’m pretty sure I’m never going to be able to walk straight again.

CD laughed again. "Well as long as your legs are all you hurt in that attempt..."

He glared at her. "And apart from that they hurt because you cut me!"

"What? I did not." She protested.

"Yes you did! Here!" He pointed at the tiniest scratch ever that was hardly even visible.

CD gasped in feigned shock at that. "Oh my god no! I almost killed Nate! Someone call 911 and tell them he lost a lot of blood!" They all laughed again.

"Yeah, then we're all gonna turn into vampires and drink the blood." Jinny joked. "That's way better than beer anyways."

CD laughed. “Yep, I’m sure it would be. Nate’s blood is probably really sweet, isn’t it honey?”

“Don’t talk to me, Candance DeLorenzo. I’m taking my pink dress and I’m outta here!!”

They all laughed at Nate’s attempt of a joke. “Nathan, come on now, have a sense of humor! You’re too serious and you need to loosen up a bit.” CD winked at him.

“Now you’re contradicting yourself, CD! Last night you told me to be serious, remember? When I took my tongue and put it on your.......”

“NATE!” CD interrupted him, her cheeks turning extremely red.

"Now now, we're curious." Raina giggled. "Just where did you have your tongue Inspector Basso?"

"In places that no tongue has ever seen before." He winked at her and looked at CD. "Right honey?"

"Oh I wouldn't be too sure about that." CD glared at him.

Magda asked, “What do you mean by that, CD?”

“Oh, you know, it was pretty amateur last night, Nate.” Still baring her teeth at him. “I’ve had better.”

So, tell us what u think!!

[croatian_princess]

I this story! It's really !

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

YAY!!! More please!

[CD DeLorenzo]

hehe... Hopefully you guys have as much fun reading as we have writing it

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Nate, who started out joking, was starting to get embarrassed and pissed now. “Oh, really, you, too? I was thinking that last night, but I didn’t want to say anything to hurt your feelings. But now since you’ve let it out, yeah, you were pretty boring last night. You couldn’t even keep up; I was like ‘CD, really now, you can do that so much better than what...”

Kate had heard enough of this. “Alright you two, that’s enough. You’re just saying stuff you’re going to have to apologize for at some point. I’m going to settle this now-- Nate, get better at what you do to her so she won’t complain. CD, don’t ever shave his legs again and hopefully we don't have to have this conversation EVER again. Is that clear?”

They nodded and their humor had returned.

“Okay, you two, kiss and make up!” Kate exclaimed now.

They looked at each other, and CD gave the okay with her eyes. Nate walked over to her and softly brushed his lips against hers.

Kate accepted that. “Okay, now let’s get out of here. I really need that beer right now.”

But CD and Nate didn't hear her anymore as their kiss turned more passionate and they switched from powder puff football to tonsil hockey.

Kate cleared her throat and tried again. "Guys..." But it was successless. They were in their own world.

Jinny laughed and looked at their coach. "Well YOU wanted them to kiss."

"Kiss, yes, not make out like there's no tomorrow." Kate rolled her eyes and took a bucket, filled that with water and splashed it all over them.

“Holy hell!!” Nate screamed and looked up. He hadn’t even noticed that their kiss had deepened like that in front of everyone. He’d forgotten they were on a football field and not in the privacy of their own home. “Damn, Captain, that was freezing!!”

“Serves you two right! We didn’t want to see that!” Jinny exclaimed.

“I did!!” Raina and Magda said in unison.

“Yeah, but you two are weird,” Jinny said back.

“No we’re not!!” The two again exclaimed together.

Jinny taunted back. “Are so!”

Kate shook her head. “Now you three are NOT doing this to me!! I am definitely not making you guys kiss and make up, so SHUT up, and let’s go to Anchorside, if you’re coming. If not, well, see ya tomorrow at 8.”

"Ooooh but I wanna kiss and make up!" Raina whined and looked at Jinny, making a kissy face.

"No way!" Jinny took a step back.

But there was Magda, doing the same now. "Come on Jin. Kissy kissy."

"Leave me alone!" Jinny exclaimed and ran for it, with both Magda and Raina running after her.

At that moment ADA Blumenthal arrived in his best suit. "Sorry I'm late, I had court and the judge..." He apologized when he saw what was going on. "What the hell?"

CD laughed. "They wanna kiss and make up with your girl."

He made a face at that and suddenly Jinny had seen him as well and ran up to him and jumped at him full force. "Be my knight in shining armor and rescue me!"

But he totally hadn't expected that so he fell backwards into the puddle of mud that had formed because Kate had to splash CD and Nate. Jinny landed on top of him and even though his best suit was ruined now they both laughed and he glared at Magda and Raina best he could. "Hey she's MY girl."

[maria1986]

this is great!....keep going...

[CD DeLorenzo]

we keep on going without end lol.

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“Where have you been, Teddy?” Jinny asked, as she helped him out of the little puddle.

“I’m sorry, honey, court ran over.” He looked at the field sadly. “I missed you play! I’m so sorry! How’d you do?”

“Well, we kicked some ass, didn’t we girls?” She looked over at the rest of them.

“Oh yeah!” they all shouted.

Teddy glanced at Nate. “And, sweety, how did you do?”

Nate looked down and noticed he was still wearing the pink dress. “Aw, dammit,” he muttered to himself as he lifted it over the top of his head. “I did just fine Teddy, thank you very much. My splits aren’t what they could’ve been though.”

Teddy laughed and put his arm around Jinny. “So what are you guys up to now?”

“We’re going to Anchorside to celebrate. Wanna come, too?” she looked at his clothes, smiling. “After you change, of course.”

He grinned. “You don’t like this look?”

“Well, I like it just fine. I don’t know if it’s appropriate though. But, hey, Nate’s not appropriate either, so why not wear that?” She motioned at him and chuckled.

They all looked over at Nate as he was scrounging around looking for his shirt that he brought with him for when he was done cheerleading. “CD, do you know where my shirt’s at? I don’t remember what I did with it.”

CD grinned, knowing exactly where it was. “Yes, Nate, of course I know where it is. You left it by your make up bag, remember?”

Everyone laughed as CD walked over to a bench, picked up her make up bag and lifted the shirt from underneath it. “Nate, I think you’re going to need this,” she handed him the shirt, “and this.” She pulled out some make up remover. “As cute as you look, it would be better if everyone else couldn’t see your true beauty when you wear make up.”

At that point Nate decided that offense was the best defense and donned the dress again and blinked at her innocently. "What are you jealous that some other guy could hit on a beautiful lady like me?"

CD laughed again. "Go ahead and try your luck." She was sure he'd drop the dress again right away.

But she was wrong. He walked up to Teddy, swaying his ass like a model on the catwalk, which caused even more laughter. He then blinked at Teddy. "Hey you." He purred seductively.

Teddy tried to keep a straight face and decided to play along. "Hey yourself... now what is a beautiful lady like yourself doing in a place like this?" He gave 'her' the corniest line he could think of.

"Waiting for my Mr Right." Nate cracked, his voice pitched up.

"Now really? What a coincidence! My name is Right." He did his best 007 imitation. "James Right."

Jinny groaned at that comment. "Oh my gosh, CD, why do we put ourselves through this?"

CD grinned. "I don’t know, Jin. It’s obvious that those two are meant for each other." CD linked arms with Jinny. "I guess you’ll be my date to Anchorside then." They started walking towards their cars. Nate and Teddy linked arms as well, and Raina, Kate, and Magda all followed far behind, hoping not to be seen with the other four.

Catcalls came from Spivey’s team when Nate and Teddy walked by. "Thank you, thank you," they said in unison.

"Those guys are ridiculous," Jinny said to CD.

CD smiled. "Yeah, but you gotta love em."

Jinny nodded. "And that we do."

[croatian_princess]

Write MMMOOORRREEE! ASAP. okay?

[CD DeLorenzo]

Originally posted by croatian_princess
Write MMMOOORRREEE! ASAP. okay?

okay

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Anchorside was buzzing when all of them arrived. Nate and Teddy had both changed and had swithched partners-- CD and Nate were hand in hand, Teddy and Jin likewise. Everyone was talking about the Division’s big win over Spivey. The Anchorside owners bought the first round for the players and cheerleaders, while, as promised, Nate bought the second. They sat around toasting and laughing, everyone having a good time. Every once in awhile, CD would put her hand on Nate’s thigh, just to remind him that she was thinking of him.

CD looked up into Nate’s eyes. "Hey, Nate?"

"What is it, CD?" He smiled at her.

She whispered into his ear. "Did I ever tell you that smooth, silky legs turn me on?"

Nate blushed and whispered back. "CD, what are you saying?"

"I’m saying we should leave soon." She grinned mischeviously

"Candace, you’re sick." He made a face.

She looked at him weirdly. "What are you talking about?"

"If you like smooth, silky legs, does that mean you’re attracted to other women?" He had jumped to conclusions and that idea scared him.

"No, you sicko!" she shouted, forgetting that she was supposed to be whispering, since she was just talking to him.

Kate looked up. "Oh, PLEASE don’t start this again!" she exclaimed from the other side of the table.

Nate grinned back at his captain. "Sorry, Cap, we won’t start anything. Actually we should probably get going, huh, CD?"

CD smiled and looked at Kate. "Yeah, Cap, we had some other plans for today. We’re gonna leave then."

Kate nodded. "Okay, guys, we’ll see ya later."

"Alright," they said. "Bye guys!"

"Bye CD! Bye Nate!" everyone shouted as the two went through the front exit.

After they had gone Jinny nudged Teddy and motioned towards the exit. He frowned at first but then she gave him a meaningful look and he got it. "Ooooh." He checked his watch and yawned. "We uhhh probably should get going as well, huh?"

"Good idea." Jinny nodded and yawned herself.

Magda chuckled because she was suspecting that neither of them was actually tired. "Be safe."

Jinny gave her a small glare at that and Teddy wrapped his arm around her as they said their goodbyes and left.

Nate pulled up to CD’s apartment in record time. He raced over to the other side, like he usually did, and opened the passenger door for her. They walked hand in hand into her place and quickly shut the door.

“Jeez, Nate, I thought we’d never get here. I was about ready to tell you to pull over because I didn’t think I could wait any longer!” CD obviously was glad they were home.

Nate grabbed her middle and pulled her close. “I know EXACTLY what you mean. Come here, you.” He grabbed her neck and put his mouth all over hers. Her mouth opened up for him, and he shoved his way in. She hungrily met his tongue in the middle, and they played hockey more intently this time. He grabbed at her football jersey and ripped it over her head. She felt her way through his thin shirt before taking it off of him.

He picked her up and carried her, like a groom carries his bride over the threshold, into her bedroom. As soon as they had reached the bed they tore the rest of each other's clothes off. "I'll show ya 'you've had better' Nate muttered and went down on her immediately.

CD enjoyed that immensely and when the lay in each others arms eventually, both panting heavily. "Okay, that was better than yesterday." CD grinned at him. "But what I meant was that I've had better, yeah, but from you" she winked at him.

He laughed. "Oh you!" And claimed another kiss from her before she pushed him back on the bed and returned the favor. She kissed her way down his body, stopping at his stomach and drawing out her tongue.

She sexily slid her weapon around and around his belly button, while her hands were all over the place, starting at his chest. She slowly stroked his upper body, and then moved south. Her hands rested on each inner thigh, gently caressing that sensitive area. He moaned as she did it, and she rose her head back up to his to capture his mouth. Her hands went faster and she could feel what she was doing to him on her own thigh. CD looked into his eyes. “Nate, I’m ready to go.”

He didn't need to hear that twice and gently laid her back down on the bed again and claimed her mouth again as he entered her. She moaned as her walls adjusted around him. She still couldn't believe how incredible he made her feel. Slowly he started to move and at the same time played with her breasts.

Her hands found their way in between their bodies and she massaged his balls. Their caresses turned them on all the more and they continued to increase their pace. She rode him like there was no tomorrow and was not stopping until he did. She moved her hands to his ass and gently shoved him, penetrating him in further. “More, dammit, more.”

He laughed at how erotic she was acting. He kicked into super mode and they went at it like there was no tomorrow. Finally, after a very long period of time, they came to a conclusion. They panted and gasped for air as they collapsed on top of one another. Nate brought her into his arms and gently held his slightly trembling CD. CD snuggled close to him, as she yawned and closed her eyes.

“Tired, honey?” Nate asked as he push a strand of hair out of her face.

She nodded. “Football will do that to ya.”

"Football huh?" He kissed her temple.

"Of course." She grinned. "And just that. You don't believe you'd wear me down, do ya?"

He chuckled. "No way, of course not." Then he had to yawn himself. "But you wear me out."

"Then go to sleep. Sweet dreams my love." She kissed him again.

"I love you too and sweet dreams yourself." He kissed her back and snuggling close to each other they fell asleep.

[croatian_princess]

2 words,.... More please.



PS, this is so good. i'm writing my own right now, and i need some ideas.
Thanx, ~Jordan

[candace~n~nathan]

Originally posted by croatian_princess
2 words,.... More please.



PS, this is so good. i'm writing my own right now, and i need some ideas.
Thanx, ~Jordan

Thank you very much for always posting on our story!!! LOL, I think you and JinnyGirl88 are the only ones reading!!! So everyone else, note to self-- post your comments NOW!!! Or I'll tell Cat to stop posting it!!

Hmmm, ideas, huh?!! Well, let's see. There's a lot of cd/nate fics here, which i LOVE , but how about a teddy/jinny fic?!! With a lot of CD and Nate, too. Just a suggestion!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
Thank you very much for always posting on our story!!! LOL, I think you and JinnyGirl88 are the only ones reading!!! So everyone else, note to self-- post your comments NOW!!! Or I'll tell Cat to stop posting it!!

Didn't you read the rules?? In section 28354-2974, it says:
"No Stopping Posts If JinnyGirl88 Is Reading Them And Absolutely LOVES The Fic."

Now do you really want to break the rules? HUH??
POST MORE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!

[CD DeLorenzo]

Originally posted by JinnyGirl88


Didn't you read the rules?? In section 28354-2974, it says:
"No Stopping Posts If JinnyGirl88 Is Reading Them And Absolutely LOVES The Fic."

Now do you really want to break the rules? HUH??
POST MORE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!

LOL, yeah I remeber that part, it's right under
"No Stopping Posts If CD DELORENZO Is Reading Them And Absolutely LOVES The Fic."
and above
"If candace~n~nathan tells CD DeLorenzo to stop posting CD DeLorenzo has to obey immediately."

So I think I can squeeze another post in, seeing she hasn't actually told me to stop yet... but the threat is there, so better make her happy and post comments, or else she's gonna tell me to stop I'm afraid... and then there's nothing I can do...

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The bright sunshine shone through the window VERY early in the morning. CD stirred as the ray caught a glimpse in her eyes. She groaned rolling over and saw lucky Nate still fast asleep. *I won’t stand for this* she thought to herself. *If I have to wake up, then so does he.* She sat up and turned her body to where she was right over him. She lifted a leg and slid it across to the other side of his body. She was in position. As fast as she could, she threw her hands on his love handles and tickled the living daylights out of him.

Nate woke with a start. “What the hell??” he shouted as he started giggling ferociously. She quickly moved to his feet where she knew he’s most ticklish.

Nate squirmed and shouted, “CD, stop, stop it PLEASE!! You know I can’t stand to be....AHHHHH!!! STOP!!!” He rolled around, trying his hardest to get away from her. He tossed himself off of the bed and threw CD down as well.

“OW!” she shouted as her tailbone hit the hard floor.

He stood up and said, “Ha! Serves you right for tickling the crap out of me!! You’re going to get it now!” he shouted as she stood up to run away. He chased after her, until she reached the bathroom and locked herself inside of it.

“Now try and get me!!” she yelled, as she heard a noise from outside. It was her cellphone going off.

Nate answered, talked to whoever was calling, and hung up. CD came out of the bathroom. “Who was it?”

“Cap needs us in ASAP.” He sighed.

“Damn, I guess no more tickling for now, huh?” she smiled as he shook his head.

“No, but I DEFINITELY owe you!” he grinned back.

"We should take a shower though." CD said.

Nate put his hands on her waist and kissed her. "How about we save some time and take it together?"

"Good plan." She pulled him into the bathroom with her and they kissed right away.

Of course in the end what was supposed to save them time only cost them more time because they weren't able to keep their hands off each other and had given in to the temptation of making love right there and then.

So instead of having breakfast they just had to rush to work and didn't even have the time to dry their hair. They walked into Cap's office, both with still wet hair and looking like they didn't get much sleep.

Kate looked up when two of her Inspectors came running through her office door. “Uh, you two running a little late? I know I said be here as soon as you can, but you could’ve used a blowdryer or SOMETHING!”

Nate looked over at CD. Her hair was frizzing a little in the front and his was sticking up in the back. They were panting a little from hustling into the Division. The bags under their eyes were obvious.

“You two ever think about sleeping?” Kate asked suspiciously.

Nate smiled and looked down. “Well, not lately, Cap.”

CD giggled as he said that. “Yeah, I guess we’ll have to start going to bed earlier, Captain.”

Kate shook her head and mumbled under her breath, “Or start sleeping in separate beds to keep your hands off of each other.”

CD looked at her. “KATE! I can’t believe you just said that!”

Kate shook her head and grinned. “Well, it’s the truth, isn’t it?” CD and Nate blushed, and Kate laughed. “Okay, ANYWAY, I have your next assignment for you. It’s a little different from what you’re used to.”

“What’s the situation, Cap?” Nate asked her.

“Well, there’s been a string of prostitutes being found murdered in relatively the same neighborhood. These ladies are independents and are making a hell of a lot of money, so that could be a motive for the murders.” Kate started to explain.

“So what do you want us to do? Question other prostitutes in the area and ask them what to look for?” CD asked.

“Well, not exactly, CD” Kate had a little smirk on her face. “You two have a different job than usual, like I said.”