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Well here's the story I've been working on,Two characters
in the story Ryan Morris and Annabelle Morris are used by permission from Ryan T. Morris,no challenge to ownership is intended,Thanks to Ryan T.Morris on that behalf, Alright,So here it begins . It was a dark cold September night in The Bronx as Jamie sat up in her room doing her homework,she had do it this time on her own as her father Rick was working late and her mother Jo was in bed,Jo had a bad cold and so far she wasn't getting any better,She had taken some cough syrup before bed in order to sleep,but it did no good ,and she couldn't breathe so she lay in bed awake all night,Jamie heard her mother's violent coughs from the bedroom next and gotten up from her bed,she put her books away and decided to check on her mother. ''Mom are you okay?''Jamie asked her mother in a tired voice,It was ten thirty and way past her bed time,''I'm fine baby'' Jo said in a hoarse voice,''Mom,maybe Dad's right maybe you should see a doctor,After all you have eaten in three days,all you wanted is sleep and you also threw up about six times last night and your cough sounds so awful. ''Jamie stated tiredly. ''I can't breathe,and this cough is killing me,Oh gosh I'm also burning up!''Jo said hoarsely,''I can go get the thermometer so we can check your temperature.'' Jamie said and she ran into the bathroom to retrieve it out of the medicine cabinet,She went back into the bedroom and put the thermometer slowly in Jo's mother, she took it it out and read 100 F,' 'You have a fever Mom,it says one hundred on this thermometer,I'm staying up with you until Dad gets home and I won't go to school tomorrow,instead I'll stay here with you while Dad goes to work ok?Jamie stated, ''But Jamie you have to go to school,It's just September and you'll get to far behind in your school work.''Jo said and started to cough,''I know mom but you always miss work when I'm sick so someone has to stay here and watch over you now lie down and try to get some rest'',Jo smiled at her daughter and so drifted off to sleep,Jamie shut the bedroom door and went back into her room she put on her pajamas and started to go to bed,But she couldn't sleep she went into the living and turned on tbe TV. ( TV Announcer) And now back to our show. It was midnight when Rick got home,he was surprised to the the living room light on,he opened the door and saw Jamie sitting on the brown recliner that Jo's father Charlie had given him for Christmas three years ago.''Should you be in bed young lady?'' Rick asked her.,''Dad I can't sleep,mom's getting worse,she can hardly talk,she throws up every five minutes and she can't breathe,she barely fell asleep an hour ago,I don't think I'll go to school tomorrow so I can stay here and watch her,Jamie said. '' Alright be careful when you help give your mom her medicine, and make sure she gets plenty of rest and fluids ok.Rick advised her,' 'I will dad,goodnight.''Jamie said,''Goodnight pumpkin and get plenty of rest,you know your mother's a handful wheb she's not feeling well.Rick said,''I know,I will,goodnight,'' Jamie yawned closed the bedroom door,she could hear him talking to her mother in the other room,''So how are you feeling baby.'' Rick asked softly as not to irritate Jo,'' God,I feel horrible,this cough syrup is not working and I can't breathe,I slept for awhile but I keep having to run to the bathroom because my stomach feels bad,I haven't go the strength to move,I can't sallow so I avoid eating and drinking '' Jo said in a barely audible tone,''Well listen you'te not going to talk anymore,from now on you just nod your head when you need something you just signal to me and I'll get for you, but for now just close your eyes and get try to get some rest, Jo nodded at him and shut her eyes,Rick looked at his wife with tears in his eyes and said a quick prayer. ''God there a lot things that I have that are great in my life, my parents,my daughter,my family,but most importanly my wife, I really love Jo,she means alot to me,Do me a favor God and please her get well,I don't even what she has,just please heal her and make herself again,Amen. He then shut off the light and climed into bed. |
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Aboloutly Brilliant! I can't wait to read more.
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Thanks for the Reviews!,I'll post more later.
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oMG!!! You gotta post more soon!
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great story can't wait to read some more
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Thanks Again,And Now Here's More.
Morning soon came and Rick awoke early in order to get Jamie up,They both ate some Corn Flakes for breakfast,Rick once again ensured to his daughter to be safe around her mother and to make sure to get her make-up work from school, Jamie nodded yes and shut the door as her father left,She then went to into her parent's bedroom to check on her mother,Jo was still weezing from her cough and her forehead was hotter than ever,''Mom!,you're burning up again!''Jamie cried as she ran to retrieve the thermometer once again,''Oh great just what I needed a teenager hollering at me when I'm ill.'' Jo thought to herself,Jamie ran back into the bedroom and placed the thermometer under her mother's tongue and waited patiently. She took the thermometer out of Jo's mouth,It read 102 F,''It's 102 F!,You need a cold cloth,I'll be right back!.'' Jamie said and she ran into the bathroom,she grabbed a white washcloth out of the linen closet to soak in the sink in cold water,After that she rang some of the water of the cloth and went to place on Jo's forehead,''There you should feel better,you also need fluids so I'll get you some orange juice,you just stay and got some rest and leave everything to me.'' Jamie said,Jo smiled at her daughter as she shut her eyes once again,Jamie went into the kitchen and poured orange juice into a small glass,she then placed it on top of the small nightstand that was near her parent's bed and right next to the door,Jo was asleep on the bed,She was shivering from bad chills,but Jamie didn't cover to avoid Jo's temperature from rising anymore,She knew this was dangerous and the fact that people can die from it.'' Well what do you think?.... |
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It is great!!
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Thanks Again,Now Here's More.
It was fine school day in Peekskill,New York,Tisha was excited about her new baby brother,Dorothy had been dating a guy named Deon Williams for four years and she just had a baby boy, they decided to name him Deon Isaiah Williams, but they called him by his middle name,Isaiah was a happy baby always smiling when ever his parents or his big sister smiled at him,Back at home Dorothy was watching a movie and taking care of Isaiah,He hardly ever cried except if he was hot,cold, hungry or if his diapers were soiled,Dorothy had decided it would be awhile before she returned to work again,so Deon decided it was best to get two jobs in order to support his family, Dorothy's mind wandered quickly and she had a knot in her stomach,suddenly she began to think about Jo,She knew something was wrong,She had never thought of Jo like this before,She hope she was ok,She decided she would call Natalie after giving Isaiah a bath and putting him to sleep that evening. More to Come Later! |
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It's Great
I can't wait to Read more!!! I hope you post soon, I wouldn't want to miss anything, while I'm gone.
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Thanks Again,Here's More.
Dorothy bathed her son and laid him down to sleep in his crib.After that she went into the living room picked up the telephone and dialed Natalie's number,Natalie was at home typing out another book,she decided to make this a love story, She had been typing since early morning but was the only free time she got away from her six year old son Thomas,Thomas was in kindergarten this year and he was curious little boy,always asking Natalie questions about everything, Natalie loved her son very much.She just wished she and Harper did not call it off,They were to marry in early 1997,but Harper broke the marriage when Natalie told him in early January that she was pregnant,Harper was there for Natalie when Thomas was born,but he suddenly decided he could not manage a wife and son on his salary. The phone rang just Natalie finished out another chapter on her story.''Hello?''Natalie responded when she picked up the reciever,''Hi Nat,this is Dorothy.''Dorothy answered back.''Listen I've been thinking alot about Jo for some reason.''I have a feeling that something's wrong,has Blair called you lately?'' Dorothy asked in a panicky voice.''No but I'm sure Jo's ok,maybe she's ill or something,I mean surely if she was involved in something serious Rick would called by now''. ''Maybe you're right,oh well if anything comes up please call to let me know,I gotta go,Tisha's almost home from school''. ''Ok,same here Thomas almost out from school too and I have to go to pick him up.''Ok bye Nat'' Dorothy said,''Bye.''Natalie responded and hung up the phone.'' More To Come Later!! |
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