A Thorn in My Side

[candace~n~nathan]

Hello everyone!! I'm an avid fan fic reader on here, and I'm the crazy one always bothering everyone to post more, lol!!!! Well, this week has been slow posting of these fics, and I'm lost without out it!! So, I have written my first fan fic. Bare with me! Here goes nothing:


“Honey, ya gotta get up NOW. We’re gonna be late again,” Nate Basso stepped out from his woman’s bathroom and walked over to the bed. “CD, it’ll be the second time this
week; Capt. said last time was our last warning.”
CD DeLorenzo stirred once more. “Dammit, Nate, I’m coming, I’m just really sleepy.” She got out of bed and walked over to her closet. She grabbed the first outfit she saw and threw it on. She grabbed a brush and her makeup bag. “I’ll do this in the car, let’s
go.” They walked out of the apartment and into the car. Nate, for once, got to drive.

CD and Nate had been dating secretely for the past seven months. They had overcome other relationships, a shooting, and other hardships to get what they had been
wanting for years before they were finally a couple. Lately, though, CD had become angry and distant towards Nate. She was shoving him away, but she didn’t know why. She
loved him with all of her heart, but she was just so tired all the time.

SFPD- Nate and CD walk in at 7:58. “Well, that was a close one you two,” Capt. McCafferty replied when she saw two of her inspectors running through the door. “Yep, but we made it with minutes to spare!” Nate said with a grin.
“Ok, so you get a gold star Inspector,” Kate smiled back. “CD, you owe my four files, and Nate you still have three out that I need by today, 5 o’clock. Got it?” “Yes,
Capt,” they both reply.
They go over to their desks and sit down silently. Raina noticed tension in the air, so for the first time ever, she didn’t tease them or try to get any gossip out. She sat quietly at her desk while Magda and Jinny rushed through the door. “Uh, sorry we’re late Cap, but traffic was a nightmare!” Magda exclaimed.
“It’s always something, isn’t it?” Kate shook her head, annoyed that her Inspectors couldn’t be on time. “Jin, Mag, you two have a new case that just came in. See me in my office, and I’ll brief you on the situation.”
“Alright, Cap, be there in a sec,” Jinny said. The two inspectors take off their coats and hang them up. Magda pulls something out of her pocket; something she’s been needing to give Nate for the past three days. She’s just been holding it, cowardly, because she couldn’t believe what was going on. She knew CD was going to be very hurt by this. Or extremely pissed off and come after her.


Okay, that's it for now. If people want more, I've written more, so just reply!!!

[TLC4Whitney]

PLEASE write more!!! I want to know what Magda has!!!

[TDfan69]

sounds really great so far................ I expect more when I come back from my interview this morning!!!!!!!!

Wendi

[Bonnie Is Great!]

Originally posted by TLC4Whitney
PLEASE write more!!! I want to know what Magda has!!!

I wanna know what mag has too, please go on this was awsome!

[candace~n~nathan]

Thanks for all the quick replies!! Here's a very short segment of the next part of this:

Magda knew she just had to let Nate accept his own consequences and deal with it now.
Then again, she knew about CD and Nate’s secret relationship. Jinny leaked it out to her on accident one day. It made her mad that those two didn’t tell her too. But she couldn’t worry about that now. She walked over to Nate’s desk. “Nate, can I see
you for a second?” Nate looks up from his report with a puzzled look on his face. “Uh, sure.”
He stands up, CD glancing up from her paperwork and frowns. “What’s going on you two?”
“Uh, nothing CD, I just had to ask Nate a question.”
“Um, alright. Something that I can’t hear?”
Magda looked up at Nate. “Yea, it’s a surprise,” Magda said stupidly and pulled Nate away before CD asked anymore questions.
They walked over to food and drink dispensers. “Magda, what the hell was that?” Nate asked angrily. “Nate, look I’ve been meaning to give you this.” She pulls out the note and hands it to him. “852-5356? What’s this?”
“Um, it’s a number you need to call.”
Nate was confused. “Who’s is it? I don’t recognize it.” Magda started stuttering,
“Well, uh, the person just moved to that location, and they want you to call them as soon as you get this.”
“Magda, what’s going on?”
“Nate, just call the number, it’s important. You need to know.”
Magda puts the number in his hand and walks away.
<<That was weird>> Nate thought to himself. He looks at the number, pulls out
his cell phone and dials. On the fourth ring, a quiet voice asks, “Hello?”
Nate replies back, “Yes, who am I speaking to?”

Sorry, I'm stopping here because i CRAVE feedback!!!

[Bonnie Is Great!]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! You can't just leave me there like that. You have gotten you reply, now you must post more.... LOL BTW that was awesome!

[TDfan69]

Boy, and she gets mad at me for leaving her hanging. Get typing girl! LOL

Wendi

[CD DeLorenzo]

hey! yay! this rocks. Please write more. And welcome to the feedback addicts I know that feeling.

[candace~n~nathan]

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
hey! yay! this rocks. Please write more. And welcome to the feedback addicts I know that feeling.

Hey, you've been getting feedback on yours, so YOU need to write more too!!! Esp. on Imag. from the Other Side (or whatever it's called), it's my favorite one!!!!!!

[candace~n~nathan]

ok, I shouldn't be doing this b/c this is short fic and I want it to last awhile, but I feel that I MUST post more!!! So here's some to keep ya going!!
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CD walks out to the candy machine just as Nate is putting away his phone. <<Wonder
what’s going on>> she thinks to herself. “Hey, honey, what’s going on?” she asked him.
Nate looks up guiltily. <<Wow, that’s the nicest she’s been to me all week. Good thing I have to go and ruin it.>> “Uh, hey CD, nothing’s going on, I just needed to make a phone
call.”
“Too important to make at your desk?”
“Yeah, listen, I can’t talk about it here. We really need to talk though. I think I’m going to go ask Cap if we can have the rest of the day off.” He walks back into the main area and knocks on Kate’s door. He goes in, leaving CD outside to think. <<What the hell’s going on? How does he know? The doctor didn’t call him, did she?>>
He walks back out and grabs their coats. “We can leave, CD, let’s go home.”
“Um, alright Nate.” They drive back to CD’s apartment in silence, Nate looking out the window, CD concentrating on the heavy traffic. Finally, after what seems like forever, they make it inside.
Nate grabs CD’s hand before she can shut the door completely. He shuts the door, and walks her over to the couch. “CD, there’s something very important I need to tell you.
I just found out today, and you’re going to be very upset with me.” He took a deep breath. “I hope you can forgive me. I love you with all of my heart; something happened before
we were together, something that might make you hate me. I just hope that....” he pauses, looking down at his hands, a single tear running down his soft cheek. “you can forgive
me.” He looks up and into her eyes. She sees he’s very troubled and reaches out to wipe the tear from his eye. She kisses his cheek, squeezes his hand, and looks into his eyes.
“What is it, honey?” He looks away, ashamed and scared. “CD, I’m sorry. I am so, so, SO sorry. Please forgive me!”
“Nate, calm down! I can’t forgive you if you haven’t told me what you’ve done wrong!”
He sighs a deep sigh and pulls out the number. “Magda gave me this today. She told me to call this phone number because it was very important. I didn’t know whose it
was, so i called it. I kinda wish I hadn’t.” He looked down at his feet again.
“Who was it, Nate?” CD asked quietly, already knowing the answer, but she didn’t know why SHE was calling him. “It was Lily, CD. She’s in trouble and needs my help.”
CD silently clenched a fist. “What does she want?”
“She needs me back, in a way. She is, uh, well.......” Nate stopped, too ashamed to finish.
CD reached over and pulled his face up, her eyes looking back into his. “She’s pregnant, isn’t she?” Nate looked back at her. He could see the pain in the big blue pools
of water. He nodded. “CD, I’m so ashamed. I should’ve been more careful, but we used protection every single time, so I don’t know how it happened. It was an accident, and
I’ve hurt you. Baby, I’m so sorry. Whatever I say, I can’t make it right. I’m going to have a child for the rest of my life now. And I know this is a mistake you just can’t shake off.
CD, please talk to me. What do you have to say?” CD stands up and walks to the other side of the room, her back turned to Nate. <<What the hell do you want me to say, Nate??Congratulations?? Way to go?? Dammit, why did this have to happen now?When everything was going right??> CD took a deep breath “Wow, Nate, this is a lot to deal with all at once. What are you planning on doing with the baby? Does Lily want it?”
“She said she did, but I honestly think she just wants me to get back with her. Listen, honey, if she has this baby, then I want to be a part of his or her life. I don’t want to abandon my child. Can you accept that?” CD turned to look at him. She was glad he didn’t just want to send a check every month or completely estrange himself from his child, like her father had done. She wanted Nate to have that baby, but it hurt so much
that LILY was the one who was the mother to his first child. “Nate, I love you, and I know you love me too. This happened before I even hinted that a relationship between us
could ever work. I want you to do this-- tell Lily you will be a part of the baby’s life. We should go see her tomorrow to make sure she has everything she needs to stay healthy for
the baby.”
Nate looked at CD with the weirdest look on his face. “Ya sure? I mean, you’re not mad at me?”
“Nate, I’m disappointed that a woman you will hopefully never marry is the mother to a child of yours, and I’m mad at myself for not snatching you up long before Lily did. But I’m definitely not mad at you for doing something you couldn’t have helped, since you were safe. I love you and I support you.”
“CD, thank you,” he said, as he wrapped his arms around her tightly. “Yes, she is a woman I will NEVER marry because I have you! I love you too, sweetheart.”
He kissed the top of her head,and they stayed in each other’s arms for a long time. CD was disappointed in herself for not telling Nate her news, but she decided it wasn’t the appropriate timing. He had a lot to deal with right now; she’d deal with her problem on her own. But her body was begging her to get it out. The worry built up pain in her abdomen. She needed to tell him soon, though, before it was too much to handle on her
own and lost it.

Well, that's probably it for today! Hope you liked it!!!

[CD DeLorenzo]

oh wow! I somehow knew that was what it was though. Lily pregnant I mean. And is CD too?

And I'm sorry that I haven't been posting as much lately. I'm at my parents place still and that's wearing me out so much. I'm wearing my innocent eyes day after day, putting on a disguise, pretending I'm something that I'm not, and all just because I don't wanna cause trouble, because that would upset my grandma, who lives here too, and who raised me, and who is the most important person in my life, and she just can't accept that I'm not happy here and that I'll never be happy here and that I just have to follow my heart and chase my dream and do this thing that I gotta do... anyhow, yeah that's why I'm not really in a writing mood lately. I'm sorry. But I still crave fanfic. It's my place to run to. So please keep on writing, because your fanfic really made my day today

[candace~n~nathan]

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
oh wow! I somehow knew that was what it was though. Lily pregnant I mean. And is CD too?

And I'm sorry that I haven't been posting as much lately. I'm at my parents place still and that's wearing me out so much. I'm wearing my innocent eyes day after day, putting on a disguise, pretending I'm something that I'm not, and all just because I don't wanna cause trouble, because that would upset my grandma, who lives here too, and who raised me, and who is the most important person in my life, and she just can't accept that I'm not happy here and that I'll never be happy here and that I just have to follow my heart and chase my dream and do this thing that I gotta do... anyhow, yeah that's why I'm not really in a writing mood lately. I'm sorry. But I still crave fanfic. It's my place to run to. So please keep on writing, because your fanfic really made my day today

I'm really sorry you're still stuck there, and all I've been worrying about is your fan fic!! I hope things get happier soon, and you get out of there. How much longer?? Glad I could make your day! And with that, there just might be a little something on here in a couple of minutes for ya and everyone else reading!! hint hint!

[candace~n~nathan]

Okay, I know I said I probably wouldn't post more today, I lied! I have to make SOMEONE a happier camper , so everyone benefits!! (Unless you don't like it of course, then, well, sucks to be you!! )
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The next morning the alarm clock went off at 6am. Nate turned it off quickly and looked
over at CD, who hadn’t heard it and was still resting peacefully. He loved to watch that
woman sleep. He brushed a blond lock of a hair from her face and gently kissed her
cheek. “Mmmm,” CD stirred and opened her eyes a little. She grinned, seeing Nate above
her, getting ready to kiss her again. “Sorry I woke you honey, you’re just too tempting
laying there, looking beautiful.” She grinned at that compliment. “That’s ok, I GUESS,”
she replied with a devilish look on her face. “But you’re gonna have to repay me for the
sleep I’m losing.”
“Oh yeah?” he says as he lifts her oversized t shirt a little to play with her belly.
“What do I need to do?” She moaned softly to his touch, even after 7 months she
couldn’t get used to how much she loved him. “Come here and see.” She grabs him by
the neck and pulls him down on top of her, their mouths crashing together. Nate has been
waiting for this all week-- she’d been stonewalling him, arguing with him. He didn’t
know why she was so emotional lately. Now she’s all over him. <<Man, this woman has
the biggest mood swings ever.>> He pulls her up and slides the t shirt off of her. He
slows the kiss, gently brushing against her neck with his tongue. He pulls the sheets back
and slips the pair of his boxers off of her. “CD, I want you. I love you.” He makes a line
of kisses down her belly, his hands on her red lacy panties, in position to take them
off.
CD sits up. “Nate, we don’t have time for this. We’re going to be late for work.”
Nate, still kissing her, “CD, we have close to 2 hours, we have time. I want you,
honey. I need you. I haven’t felt you close to me all week.”
“Well, who’s fault is that?” she yells, shoving him off of her and standing up. She
grabs the t shirt and puts it back on.
“CD, what are you talking about? What have I done that you’ve hated me so much
this week?”
“Nate, are you that stupid?! Hmm, let’s see, you can’t keep your pants shut, you’re
going to be a daddy, and now both Ramirez bitches are going to be in our lives forever. I
don’t know Nate, why would I be mad at you?”
“CD, that happened yesterday. I apologized, and you said you were alright with it.
You’ve been quiet all week. What’s up, CD? There’s something else.”
“Yeah, well, maybe there is.” CD walks to her closet and gets something to wear.
She silently walks to the bathroom, locks the door, and turns on the water for the shower.
<<Dammit, why can’t I just tell him?>> She wonders to herself, tears rolling down her
face. She steps underneath the hot water and lets it scold her body, the warmth feeling so
good. She was so upset, mainly at herself, and she knew she needed to be away from Nate
for a little while. She was going to drive into work by herself today. Maybe that time by
herself could calm her down, regroup and talk to the man she loves.

Sorry about the dumb spacing this keeps doing. When I copy and paste it it screws the spacing up. O WELL THOUGH! Anyway, that's DEFINITELY all for today (considering the fact that it's nighttime!!). If you liked it let me know!

[TDfan69]

you got me hanging by a thread..........okay, they need to make a smilie for that! Can't wait to read more tomorrow!

Wendi

[MovieHuntress17]

Post more sooooon this is great!!