Your Place Or Mine (Short very short CDNate fanfic)

[Bonnie Is Great!]

Fanfic: My place or yours
A/N: Okay so I am not good at short stories, so that’s why I am gonna try it out.

CD walked up to Nate’s deck, handing him a cup of coffee. “So, What are you doing after work? CD asked him

Nate says, “That depends.”

“On?” CD asked.

“You, “ Nate said with a knowing smile.

CD smiled back at him, and said, “Your place or mine.”

There was no one around so when he put his arms around her waste no one saw it, and he said, “Your place.” Then they started kissing.

~Finished~ So tell me what ya think was it any good?

[TLC4Whitney]

Any CD/Nate story is great to me!!! Good job, but it should have been longer...Do I hear sequel?

[CD DeLorenzo]

hey yeah! It's short but cute And I'm thinking MORE too!

[MovieHuntress17]

That was so cute! And yeah it shudda been a lil bit longer...but that was really good

[Bonnie Is Great!]

Thanks for the replies. You guys win, here’s more.
I am having a rating on this one for strong violence. This story has to do with the rest of the cast two. Please bear with me, and keep reading this..
Rate: PG 13 to R
Titled: After Work


CD had the lasagna in the oven cooking the rest of the way when the doorbell rang. She opened it up to see twelve red roses. “That’s nice of you thanks Nate.” She took the roses, and found a vase for them. She put them on her coffee table. When dinner was ready they sat pretty quietly eating, because they really weren’t interested in dinner, but each other. After dinner Nate helped CD clean up.

He asked, “So is it time for desert?

“That depends, on what kinda desert that your talking about.” CD said

“The only desert that I want baby is you.” He said with his cute little simile.

She gave him a playful look, and said, “Well I don’t know if I have that.”

He smiled, and put his hands around her waist, and said, “Oh, I think you.” They started kissing. CD when for Nate’s shirt, and pulled it over his head. He in turn did the same thing to her. With all the excitement of them making love, he had almost for got, Almost. “I have a surprise for you.” He said.

“What’s that?” CD asked somewhat breathless. Here he was talking about gifts, and the only thing she wanted to do was jump him. She thought, “would he just hurry up, I can’t take this much longer.

He came back and he was holding in his hands a bottle of whipped cream. “Got it.” He said with a smile.

She said, “I don’t know witch one I will like more,” She stopped for a second and looked down, and then back up at him. “You or the Whipped Creamed.”

He loved this part of there relationship. “Both I hope.”
*~~*~~*

After words they were laying in bed, and Nate was holding CD. God he loved her. It was then that his cell phone rang. “****,” He thought. He picked it up, and said, “Hello… But.. You know I can’t. What? Okay fine I will be there.” He said not happy at having to leave. “I am sorry CD, but I have to go.

CD rolled her eyes, and Said, Not again?! You always have to go after we have sex. Why?”

“I told you.” He lied, and both of them knew it. “It’s my mom.”

“Yeah, yeah, whatever” CD said, “But one day when you feel like telling me what’s really going on. I will be here.” She really didn’t mean to be rude, but this happened every time after they had sex, and it was starting to make her feel like she was being used. She got up, and handed Nate the rest of his close so he could get dressed.
*~~*~~*


Nate arrived home. He opened his door to his apparent, and slammed it shut. “You can’t keep doing this!” He Yelled

The women smiled, and said, “I can do whatever the hell I want, and you can’t do a damn thing about it.” Nate was ticked, and without even thinking about it he had his hands around her throat, and chocking her. She gasped out, “You hurting me.”

He was ticked he didn’t care, “I don’t care. I don’t care anymore what happens to me. I love her to much to keep doing this to her.”

Still gasping for air, “You love her that much that you are willing to kill me for her, and spend the rest of you life in prison. Being someone’s bitch?!”

He wanted to just slug her so bad, but he re-famed form it, and even let go of her throat. “And maybe you should keep in mind is the only reason your not dead right now is because of her.”

“Yeah, well,” She said, “It wasn’t me who got you into the mess that you are in. It was you, and now you are doing what I tell you too do. So take your close off.”

Nate tired to argue, but it was no use. She DID have all the power. “Look this is the last time that I will do this.

“You do ‘this’ anytime I want you to do this. And , “ She said bitterly, “You do this any time you have sex with another women. You know the role’s Nate., and Hat you not gone and did what you did we wouldn’t be here right now would we?”

Okay this is another one of those places Were I am stuck so I am finished for right now, I hope you liked, and tell me what you think.
A/N Okay So I didn't get the rest of the characters in like I said, maybe next time if ya guys liked this one.

[candace~n~nathan]

PLEASE post more soon; I HAVE to know what's going on here!!!

[Bonnie Is Great!]

Rating: PG 13 to R
Stick with me this might get a little more confusing.


“Look,” Nate said, “What I did, I didn’t mean to, alright? Now your making me pay with it for the rest of my life.”

She had a lot of anger towards him, and wanted him to pay for everything. Maybe she thought, “You could call it revenge. Making him do whatever she wanted him to do. Whatever, the case she enjoyed it. Wither he did or not.” She thought for another moment, and then said, “Your right, I am making you pay for the rest of your life. A kids died because of it.”

He sat down and put his hand though his hair. He thought, “God I feel bad for that, and what’s worse is that she knows this, and is using it against me.” He said, “Fine we will do it your way.” He started taking off his cloths. She eyed him with hunger. She wanted him, and she wanted him now. She couldn’t stand knowing that another women had had him. She started take off her cloths too. They started kissing He wanted to tell her NO so bad, but he knew that if he did then she would go to his captain, and he would lose his job. He hated her for this. She was black mailing him for this, and there was nothing he could do about it.
*~~*~~*

CD had been tossing, and turning. She couldn’t sleep, and it was about 2 am, she went, and got a mug of hot tea, she hoped that made her tired enough to sleep. She was up set that every time she made love to Nate he left. I mean it wasn’t like it was once it was all the time. He was always making these lame excuses. That neither one of them believed. She took the last sip of her tea and went to bed. She thought, “Maybe some day soon I will get to the bottom of this.”
*~~*~~*

A/N: I know this is going to get really confusing REALLY confusing, but please stick with me.

Women # 1 sat in her car as she saw women # 2 pull up. It was clear that women #2 had at man in the car with her that she was going to bring into her house, but once she saw women #1 She told the man that he would have to leave. That something must have come up. The man was disappointed, but left. Women #2 walked up to women # 1 car, and asked, “What’s going on is everything okay?” As women # 2 looked into the car she saw that women #1 had a black eye, and a split lip. Women # 2 said “OMG, Come in side let me get that cleaned up for you, and you can tell me what happened.”

Women #1 Looked at her she was fighting back tears. She said, “Okay, I am sorry I ruined your night.” She got out of her car, and followed Women #2 into her house, and to her bathroom.

Women #2 says, “This is gonna sting a little.” They sat in silence for a few minutes, and then women #2 asked, “So you gonna tell me what happened? Did he do this to you? If he did then I am gonna kill him!” She shouted.

Women #1 Says, “It doesn’t matter if he did do this to me. It’s over as of tonight I told him that he wasn’t going to black mailing me anymore. He tired to force himself on me, and for once I fought back and won.”

Women # 2 was glad “He deserved it then because, of everything that bastard has put you though. Hell he even tried to put me though it, but you stopped him by telling him that you would sleep with him more. Witch he liked even more because then he could control you, and make your life a living hell. He made it so that you couldn’t even have a personal life.” She was done patching up her face.

Women # 1 “Thanks.” She said. “Look can we not talk about this?”

Women #2 said “Sure. So, now what?” She asked

Women #1 asked, “Do you mind if, I just spend the night here. I will even take you to work tomorrow. No charge.”

Women #2 Said, “Yeah sure that’s fine, but uh, you might want to charge me, cause you may not have a job anymore after tonight.”

Women #1 said, “Thank again. It means a lot to me. I owe you one. And I don’t think I will lose my job over this cause then he will look just as bad as I do. If, not worse.”

Women#2 asked, “So you want to stay, up, and talk about it?”

Women #1 wasn’t sure. She didn’t like talking about this. She thought it made her look weak, and more then anything she was ashamed that she would let this happen. Let him black mail her of over fifteen years. “I think… that is if it’s okay that for right now I just want to go to bed, maybe talk about it tomorrow after work. If, that’s okay?”

Women # 2 said. “Yeah sure that’s fine. Anything you want. This happened to you not me.” They both went to bed, and got up the next morning. Women #1 had made some coffee, and they started driving to work together. They were listening to oldies, when women #2 asked, “Do we have to listen to this crap?”

Women # 1 said, “What you would rather listen to that head banging stuff?”

Women # 2 said,” To be truthful yes, I would.”

“Women #1 said, You know, that just makes you brain dead right?” She was joking around, and women #2 just laughed at her. They heard on the radio.

The radio voice, “This just in, DC. Charles Haysbert was found dead early this morning. They believe that it was a murder. But not news yet on whom they think it is.

At this moment women #2 Looked at women #1, and questioned, “OMG Cap, Please tell me you didn’t kill DC Haysbert?!

Kate looked at women #2, and said, “No Jinny, I couldn’t do that. I DIDN’T DO that.”


Okay tell me what you think good or bad I wanna hear it?!?!

[candace~n~nathan]

I'm still confused, but I definitely want more!!!

[MovieHuntress17]

Ok ,let me get this straight 2 make sure i got it rite....Haysbert was blackmailing Cap with sumthin...2 get..."sumthin" ,and the thing he is blackmailing her with has 2 do with Jinny...rite?lol

Anyways, that was really good,especialy if i got it rite lol...post more soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!

[Bonnie Is Great!]

I am sorry for making ya wait. I am also sorry for the confusion. If, it helps Emma was right. Charles was backmaleing Kate with something that Jinny had done. As for as Nate goes. WEll someone I can't say who yet, is blackmaleing him with sex as well. Alright I hope that helped. Here's more...Hope ya like...


CD came walking into The division. Their were only two other people in there becides her. One was nate, and the other was Magda.CD walked up to nate, She didn't want to talk about the night before. She just wanted to get her mind off of it. She asked, "Have you sceen Cap? It's not like her to be this late."

Nate looked at CD. GOod he wished he didn't have to lie to her. He loved her like no one else could. She was everything to him. He took a single strande of her hair that was out of place and tucked it behind her ear. "NO I haven't scene the Captain." He looked at her...He wasn't quite sure what he was seeing..He thought maybe sadness, but for once he couldn't be sure. HE said, "Are you okay? It's not like you to be this late either CD."

CD put her hand lightley on Nate's cheeck. "Nate." She sawid softley now's not the time to talk about us. Did you hear what happend this morning?"

Nate looked at her confused and said, "No what happend?"

Cd looked arould to make sure that no one else was looking. She said in a low voice, "D.C. Charles Haysbert died earleyer this morening. You yourself have scene all the fighting they have been doing aroud here. And in the past few weeks it has gotten even worse. YOu know this isn't going to look good for our captain."

Nate looked at her, and said, "Yeah, I believe one of those times, she even said something she was going to kill the bastartd."

CD looked down, and then back up at Nate, and said, "You know this is going to get worst before, it gets better. I was thinking you know maybe we could get some of the people around here to keep their mouth shut. you know? Like who ever they send over to question us about the captain, DC Haysbert we just have them tell them that we don't know anything. "

Nate looked at her, and pulled her into a hug. "Hey it sounds good to me. "
*~~*

Kate pulled her car over to the side of the road. They both sat in slince for a moment, Jinny was the frist one to say something. "Are you sure you didn't kill him. I mean like maybe it was an accident or something?"

"Jinny, I have been a cop for god knows how long. I think I would know if I had tired to kill the man. The only thing that I did was push him away..He fell, but he got right back up. I ran out of the house before he could brag me." Kate said, as a new batch of tears started rolling down her eyes. Then it was almsot as though it were a realizesion. "OMG, My finger prings, my dNA it's going to be all over his house. Oh, God, I was so stupid." Kate said

Jinny said, "Look cap, everything will be okay? We will find someone that you trust, and we will talk to them. I mean hell, Maybe even Teddy. Who knows. But if you didn't kill him then that is what the evdence will say, and you willl have nothing to worry about. "

"YOu really think so?" Kate asked.

"I know so." Jinny tired to say resureingly. Jinny was pretty sure that her Captain hadn't killed Cherles, but she wasn't postive, but what ever did happen last night Jinny, Made a voul to find out.
*~~*

They got to the Division, and As soon as she got there she ran into her office no one could ask her any questions..about her face. Everyone Kinda looked at each other questiongly, and wondering what had happend. Why did she have a black eye, and why was it on the same night that Cherles had died. There was a lot of chatter going around when Jinny said, "Don't you guys have work to do." That sounded odd comeing form Jinny since normaly it was the cap who was saying it, but they knew that Jinny was serious. "How would all of you feel if we were doing that to you when you walked in? HUH? I don't we try, and help the cap thought this instead of talking about her as though she wasn't even here."

CD jumped in, "Yeah, I agree with Jinny. This women has put her job on the line probably for everyone in this room..and this is how you repay her. She may ride you ass till it hurts, but she's fair. And that is something none of you are beeing right now.
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Okay that's it for now...Please tell me what you think good or bad.

[*Nancy Mckeon*]

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[MovieHuntress17]

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
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[Bonnie Is Great!]

Okay here's more..Hope ya like.


THey had all agreed to try, and protect the captain. Keep thier mouth shout. Little did they know they were probably protecting Jinny, and Nate too. What they also didn't know what that they were protecting the murder too.

For once Raina wasn't over joyed to be gossiuping about her Captain. Maybe it was even that now she had to much respect for her captain. Well, that and she could never think that her Captain could commit murder know matter what. When Nate saw CD go into the locker room he followed. "Hey CD." He said

She about jumped out of her skin. "Omg Nate you scared the crap out of me."

"Sorry, " He siad giving her a smile.

She said in a loving voice, "Who could refuse that Smile." She gave him a hug. After what had happend that moring she needed to feel his arms around her.

Nate thought to himeself more people then she thought could refuse that smile. CD and him started kissing. between the kisses he was trying to get out..."CD...there's....some...something...I need...to...talk....to you...about.."

There was a knock on the door, and CD, jumped again. She went to her locker, and pretended she was getting into it. CD said, "Nate I told about the...the...umm...suspect...Right?"

Nate trying to cover with CD said, "Uh..Yeah..I think so." Nate turned to look to see who it was. Someone he didn't know. "Who are you?" He asked.

She stated simpley, "Carrie, and You are?"

CD poped her head to the side, the voice, and the name sounds like someone she knew. She turned around faceing the women, and said, "Carrie? Is that really you?"

She smiled, and walked over to hug CD. "Yes, it is, but I am sorry." They pulled out of the hug and she finished what she was gonna say, "...I here officialy...not for a vist." Carrie had been In the SFPD With CD when CD was a rokie. Carrie had shown her all the ropes, and everything else. She had been a great friend, but then she got a very good job with the FBI.

Nate went to say something, but CD said first, This is Nate my parnter." CD thought better and said, "Police partner." Carrie smiled CD said, "Nate this is Carrie, She with the FBI. I am guessing that your here about DC Charles Haysbert."

"Good guess." Carrie said easily. A little to easy for CD. CD remembered that she could play it cool under the best, or worst circomstances. Carrie knew just as sure as she knew herself that CD wasn't going to give anything up on her captain, but she thought it was worth a try. "So either of you to know of any fights between Your captain, and the DC?

THey both looked at each other, and back at Carrie, both cd, and Nate said, "Nope, can't think of anything."
*~~*

Kate had sat thinking back to the frist day that Charles had blackmaliled her. Jinny had been deep undercover as a drug dealer. And one of the places that she was at had been busted. THe people who had brought her in didn't even give her a chance to tell them she was a cop. They had planted some Coke on her. Enough that She would lose her job, and maybe even go to jail. When Kate had finely found Jinny there was no mistake in her mind that it was a setup. THe question was who? Kate was soon to find out. Kate would do anything to help Jinny out. Kate had been up for a promosion. That was for her to be DC. When she saw Charles Haysbert come walking into the room, she thought, " I should have known it was him." She said flatley as she normaly did, "Charles."

He said in the same tone as Kate had, "Kate."
SHe asked, "What do you want?"
He smeiled at her. He hateded her with a pashion. "Now what makes you so sure I want something?"
Kate walked up to be face to face with the taller man, and said, "Not that you are above gloating, but in this case you would wait until we were out of work, So what do you want?"
"You know Kate once reason that I do like you, is becasue your to smart. Maybe to smart of your own good. Now we both know that evedince has to dissapear, and I can do that for you, but you would have to do something for me."
Kate went to walk away, and said, "YOur crazy!"
Before she got fare Charles grabed her by the arm, and said, "I don't think you want to walk out that door. You do and I will make sure that not only will you not get DC, but also that young officer, will lose her job, and go to jail."
Kate stoped trying to free herself. She galred at the man standing before her. "Let go of me." He did, and then she said, "What do you want me to do."
"Two things." He said, One withdrawl your name for the running of DC. And I will make sure the young officer doesn't go to jail."
She had known the first one was coming. She had no idea what the secound one was. She said, "And two?"
He had this huge smile on his face, he said, "Two, the officer gets to keep her job, and if i decdied to be really nice it maybe even go off her record. Depending on how good you are."
Kate was afraid, to aske, but she did, "Good at what?"
He pased for a secound, and said simpley, "Sex."
She Yelled, "GO to HELL!" She started walking for the door, but this time Charles though her against And pinned her arms. She strugled but it was no use, he was much bigger, and stronger.
AS he held her there he Yelled back, "YOu have no idea who I am, and what I can do to you. YOU don't do as I say, and you can bet that not only well that young officer go to jail, but she will also lose her job, and you will go with her. I am tired of playing our games Kate. Your doing what I tell you now, and if you don't then I will take your life. YOU got that?"
Kate was terified, she didn't know what to do. She thought to herself she would figure it out later, but she had to do what Charles said, "Yeah. Kate said, "NOw would you let me go?!"
"so we have a deal? "Charles asked.
Thought clenched teeth Kate said, "Yes, we have a deal."
*~**~*

Fifteen years later, Kate sat their with cold eyes, stareing into space. "He deserved it."
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Okay so that's it for now...What do you think should I go on?

[candace~n~nathan]

DEFINITELY more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MovieHuntress17]

Come u can do it---> Ya did it yesturday lol
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