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CD DeLorenzo · 08-29-2003, 02:05 AM

I'm desperately craving CD/Nate fanfic

So I figured I'll post a challenge... (open to any pairings though, but if ya wanna make me happy write CD/Nate

at least as one of they pairings hehe...

Anyhow here it goes: Write a fanfic that contains the following words & phrases somehow.

*rainbow
*69
*Ghirardelli Square
*cinnamon
*bubble gum
*watercolors
*racoon
*ocean
*puppy
*booze

*You wear them so well, those innocent eyes, you're putting on a wonderful disguise.
*wherever you go, whatever you do, I will be right here waiting for you
*when we were strangers I watched you from afar, when we were lovers I loved you with all my heart

PS: btw did ya know there's actually a Division Street in San Fran? no joke! And here's a nice San Fran link: http://www.mapwest.com/

Now write some nice stories everybody!

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 08-29-2003, 06:54 AM

OMG OMG! LOL Where I work at Walgreens, they sell Ghirardelli Chocolates, and I NEVER KNEW it was a place in San Francisco. What a do-do head I am! I am going to HAVE to try that next time I'm at work! What a coincidence, that's tonight! lol I'll let everyone know what happens! If it's good or not! lol TTYL! Yippie!! To me the chocolate didn't look that great from the package but who cares, I'm gonna try it. lol I'm also going to give your fan fic a shot. Just gimmie a little while to get it together.

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 09-20-2003, 05:35 PM

STILL working on that fan fic it's coming along though. But here's something to think about in the meantime.

Isn't this wierd!

At the Walgreens I work at in Fall River, Massachusetts, we sell Girardelli's candy bars, (Girardelli's is a place in San Francisco...it's like a food court) Then we have Seattle's Best coffee which was featured in the Journey episode Raina and Kate had some in her office. And THEN we have a coffee place in a mall in a neighboring town called Dartmouth that has a coffee place called Nancy's Cafe'! lol How awesome is that! I'm going out today to buy a pound of the Seattle's Best coffee. I'll write back and let you know how it tastes. It BETTER taste good for 8 bucks a bag! lol I'm surrounded by the Division! YIPPIE! lol

CD DeLorenzo · 09-20-2003, 05:44 PM

yay that rocks!

and that coffee better inspire you on your story too! And I hope maybe somebody else will write other challenge stories!

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 09-20-2003, 05:48 PM

lol hahaha I think it will inspire me! lol I have half of it written, but using those words are harder then I thought it would be. lol But I'll make it work, you'll see.

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 09-24-2003, 10:23 PM

I'm posting my story tommoroww. But for now, here's pictures of what I was talking about. Both the chocolate and coffee are excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The coffee is definetly worth the 8 dollars!!!!!!!!!!!

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 09-24-2003, 10:24 PM

Sorry the last pic was so big!!! Didn't know it was going to do that!!

CD DeLorenzo · 09-24-2003, 11:02 PM

the pics are both huge, but that's cool

I'm glad they're good and I can't wait to read the story!!!!!!!

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 09-25-2003, 11:25 AM

I KNOW! I'M SORRY! lol I didn't plan on it being that big. I actually thought it was going to be really small. My bad! lol I'm finishing the fan fic now. Another half hour of writing and I should be ready to type it up. lol So keep checking the board! :-D

CD DeLorenzo · 09-25-2003, 04:43 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
I KNOW! I'M SORRY! lol I didn't plan on it being that big. I actually thought it was going to be really small. My bad! lol I'm finishing the fan fic now. Another half hour of writing and I should be ready to type it up. lol So keep checking the board! :-D

np, like this we can see all tiny details at least

And you better hurry up! I'm dying in suspense!!!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 09-25-2003, 04:52 PM

ehhhhh...

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 09-25-2003, 05:43 PM

hahahahahahaha I got a late start I'm typing now!!!

iliveforjayandnancy2 · 09-25-2003, 06:20 PM

This picks up as any other episode would. Not directly after the finale or anything. But after Cd and Nate had confessed there feelings to each other. Anyway this is going to stink! Sorry but I had to try!

lol

Part 1:

It's a Saturday morning, and CD wakes up to an alarm going off on the side of her unfamiliar bed. She sees that the clock only reads 5AM, so she hits the snooze button and rolls over. A half hour later the alarm goes off again. And once more she hits the snooze button. At 7 AM shes awoke the last time to her cell phone ringing. DAMN IT! She says as she gets up to answer the phone. HELLO! She yells into the phone, not even thinking to answer with Inspector DeLorenzo, had it been someone from work. There's a short awkward silence. ...Hello? Comes an unassured male voice.
CD: Oh my god. Nate I'm sorry I didn't mean to yell at you. It's just this DAMN alarm keeps going off. I must have accidently set it for 5 AM thinking it was a workday.
Nate: Are you SURE that's why you set it for 5AM?
CD: Yeah I guess. CD says rubbing her eyes. I mean, I don't know what else it could b..." she cuts herself off. Oh I didn't. Nate I totally forgot! What an IDIOT I am. I'm so sorry!
Nate: AH, you remember now huh?
CD: Yes I remember.
Nate: How could you forget to wake up for this?
CD: Well, as you know I'm not that big of a morning person. Even when I have to get ready for work and all. You know I'm always late. But this. How could I forget that we planned to go see the sunrise together on the beach! I have ALWAYS wanted to do that. Just to lay in the arms of the ONE that I knew I would spend the rest of my life with. It's something that I swore I would NEVER do with ANY GUY except my soulmate. It must be amazing to be there with the one you love on the warm sand, feeling the ocean breeze on your face and watching the sunrise. And...
Nate: CD, relax. he says w/ a chuckle. It's ok. You were tierd. And besides this is the month of June. Do you have any idea how many other mornings we have of good weather left? Especially living in California!! Of course, if you were here with me spending the night, I could have woken you up...my way. Nate says slyly.
Cd: Ummm...and as good as THAT sounds, I would have felt bad. I mean afterall, my cousin was good enugh to offer me her extra room for a few days while my apartment was being fumagated. I just couldn't say no. Especially after all the arguments we've been having lately. I just want to make peace. And this was my chance so...
Nate; Oh, ok I see how it is. You don't love me.... (You can tell he's joking by the sound in his voice.)
CD: No, it's not like that at all, and you know it.
Nate: Ok. So how is it then??
CD: Well, why don't you let me off the phone, so I can shower and get dressed, and I'll come over and show you EXACTLY how it is.
Nate: Ummmmm let me think about that for a second....
CD: NATE!
Nate: Ok ok! He laughs.
CD: Ok I'll be there in an hour. See ya soon.
Nate: Ok Cya. Love ya babe.
CD: Good.
Nate: CD!
CD: What?.... OK, I love you too, alright?
Nate: Ok. See ya shortly. Bye.
CD: Bye.

maria1986 · 09-25-2003, 06:33 PM

It's pretty damn good so far!....

Goofy · 09-25-2003, 06:33 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
Anyway this is going to stink!

Stink?!?!?! No way!!! This is really good

Please post more soooooooon

Hadar

08-29-2003, 02:05 AM	#1
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	challenge! I'm desperately craving CD/Nate fanfic So I figured I'll post a challenge... (open to any pairings though, but if ya wanna make me happy write CD/Nate at least as one of they pairings hehe... Anyhow here it goes: Write a fanfic that contains the following words & phrases somehow. rainbow 69 Ghirardelli Square cinnamon bubble gum watercolors racoon ocean puppy booze You wear them so well, those innocent eyes, you're putting on a wonderful disguise. wherever you go, whatever you do, I will be right here waiting for you *when we were strangers I watched you from afar, when we were lovers I loved you with all my heart PS: btw did ya know there's actually a Division Street in San Fran? no joke! And here's a nice San Fran link: http://www.mapwest.com/ Now write some nice stories everybody!
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08-29-2003, 06:54 AM	#2
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	OMG OMG! LOL Where I work at Walgreens, they sell Ghirardelli Chocolates, and I NEVER KNEW it was a place in San Francisco. What a do-do head I am! I am going to HAVE to try that next time I'm at work! What a coincidence, that's tonight! lol I'll let everyone know what happens! If it's good or not! lol TTYL! Yippie!! To me the chocolate didn't look that great from the package but who cares, I'm gonna try it. lol I'm also going to give your fan fic a shot. Just gimmie a little while to get it together.
	__________________ "Being alone with my thoughts can be dangerous."- by Me "I'll lose but I won't quit."- by Me "The heart is an amazing thing. Unlike anything else, once it's broken it can't be fixed."- by Me "Men. Can't live with em, and can't live with em." (that's not a typo)- by Me "Always be yourself. No matter what. At least if you're hated, you're hated for what you are. Not for what you're not."- by Me <<<< MY FAVORITE QUOTE iliveforjayandnancy2- AKA Angie Last edited by iliveforjayandnancy2; 08-29-2003 at 07:27 AM.

09-24-2003, 10:23 PM	#6
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	I'm posting my story tommoroww. But for now, here's pictures of what I was talking about. Both the chocolate and coffee are excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The coffee is definetly worth the 8 dollars!!!!!!!!!!! Attached Images

09-24-2003, 10:24 PM	#7
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	Sorry the last pic was so big!!! Didn't know it was going to do that!! Attached Images

09-25-2003, 06:20 PM	#13
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	Nothing but Cd and Nate This picks up as any other episode would. Not directly after the finale or anything. But after Cd and Nate had confessed there feelings to each other. Anyway this is going to stink! Sorry but I had to try! lol Part 1: It's a Saturday morning, and CD wakes up to an alarm going off on the side of her unfamiliar bed. She sees that the clock only reads 5AM, so she hits the snooze button and rolls over. A half hour later the alarm goes off again. And once more she hits the snooze button. At 7 AM shes awoke the last time to her cell phone ringing. DAMN IT! She says as she gets up to answer the phone. HELLO! She yells into the phone, not even thinking to answer with Inspector DeLorenzo, had it been someone from work. There's a short awkward silence. ...Hello? Comes an unassured male voice. CD: Oh my god. Nate I'm sorry I didn't mean to yell at you. It's just this DAMN alarm keeps going off. I must have accidently set it for 5 AM thinking it was a workday. Nate: Are you SURE that's why you set it for 5AM? CD: Yeah I guess. CD says rubbing her eyes. I mean, I don't know what else it could b..." she cuts herself off. Oh I didn't. Nate I totally forgot! What an IDIOT I am. I'm so sorry! Nate: AH, you remember now huh? CD: Yes I remember. Nate: How could you forget to wake up for this? CD: Well, as you know I'm not that big of a morning person. Even when I have to get ready for work and all. You know I'm always late. But this. How could I forget that we planned to go see the sunrise together on the beach! I have ALWAYS wanted to do that. Just to lay in the arms of the ONE that I knew I would spend the rest of my life with. It's something that I swore I would NEVER do with ANY GUY except my soulmate. It must be amazing to be there with the one you love on the warm sand, feeling the ocean breeze on your face and watching the sunrise. And... Nate: CD, relax. he says w/ a chuckle. It's ok. You were tierd. And besides this is the month of June. Do you have any idea how many other mornings we have of good weather left? Especially living in California!! Of course, if you were here with me spending the night, I could have woken you up...my way. Nate says slyly. Cd: Ummm...and as good as THAT sounds, I would have felt bad. I mean afterall, my cousin was good enugh to offer me her extra room for a few days while my apartment was being fumagated. I just couldn't say no. Especially after all the arguments we've been having lately. I just want to make peace. And this was my chance so... Nate; Oh, ok I see how it is. You don't love me.... (You can tell he's joking by the sound in his voice.) CD: No, it's not like that at all, and you know it. Nate: Ok. So how is it then?? CD: Well, why don't you let me off the phone, so I can shower and get dressed, and I'll come over and show you EXACTLY how it is. Nate: Ummmmm let me think about that for a second.... CD: NATE! Nate: Ok ok! He laughs. CD: Ok I'll be there in an hour. See ya soon. Nate: Ok Cya. Love ya babe. CD: Good. Nate: CD! CD: What?.... OK, I love you too, alright? Nate: Ok. See ya shortly. Bye. CD: Bye.

09-20-2003, 05:35 PM	#3
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	STILL working on that fan fic it's coming along though. But here's something to think about in the meantime. Isn't this wierd! At the Walgreens I work at in Fall River, Massachusetts, we sell Girardelli's candy bars, (Girardelli's is a place in San Francisco...it's like a food court) Then we have Seattle's Best coffee which was featured in the Journey episode Raina and Kate had some in her office. And THEN we have a coffee place in a mall in a neighboring town called Dartmouth that has a coffee place called Nancy's Cafe'! lol How awesome is that! I'm going out today to buy a pound of the Seattle's Best coffee. I'll write back and let you know how it tastes. It BETTER taste good for 8 bucks a bag! lol I'm surrounded by the Division! YIPPIE! lol

09-20-2003, 05:44 PM	#4
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	yay that rocks! and that coffee better inspire you on your story too! And I hope maybe somebody else will write other challenge stories!

09-20-2003, 05:48 PM	#5
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	lol hahaha I think it will inspire me! lol I have half of it written, but using those words are harder then I thought it would be. lol But I'll make it work, you'll see.

09-24-2003, 11:02 PM	#8
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	the pics are both huge, but that's cool I'm glad they're good and I can't wait to read the story!!!!!!!

09-25-2003, 11:25 AM	#9
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	I KNOW! I'M SORRY! lol I didn't plan on it being that big. I actually thought it was going to be really small. My bad! lol I'm finishing the fan fic now. Another half hour of writing and I should be ready to type it up. lol So keep checking the board! :-D

09-25-2003, 04:52 PM	#11
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	ehhhhh...

09-25-2003, 05:43 PM	#12
iliveforjayandnancy2 \/ \/ TY CAT! \/ \/ Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 03, 2002 Location: Fairhaven, Massachusetts Posts: 512	hahahahahahaha I got a late start I'm typing now!!!

09-25-2003, 06:33 PM	#14
maria1986 HATCHEE GAL Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 15, 2001 Location: FL Posts: 780	It's pretty damn good so far!....