Season FOUR Episode ONE (I'm picking up where the season finale left off.)

[iliveforjayandnancy2]

Not that I have alot of time, but I think it's time I get back to writing fan fic, with what little time I do have, in between my hectic life! lol It may take awhile, but I REALLY miss writing fan fic. So I'm going back to it no matter how long it takes.....I just hope people read it. lol BUT before I go back to my ORIGINAL fan fic of yesteryear, LOL I think I'd like to write one picking up right after CD got shot in the season finale. Ya know, as if I'm writing the first episode of season four. So, here it is.

Season Four Episode One

*Camera focuses in on Nate sitting alone in the restaurant. It shows him looking at his watch. Then it shows CD still slumped in the chair. Then it pans to the marshall lying on the floor. Camera goes back to Nate. It shows him calling the waiter over, giving him money for the drinks he bought. One for him and one for CD. Then he gets up and goes to his car. He gets out his cell, and calls CD's cell. Camera shows CD lying shot but you can hear her cell phone ringing. Nate lets it ring 5 times before her voice mail picks up.

Voice Mail: Hi you've reached Inspector DeLorenzo. I'm unable to come to the phone right now. Please leave a brief message and I will get back to you as soon as I can. Beeeeeep.
Nate: Uh hi, CD. It's Nate. I don't know where you are,
(You can hear the disapointment in his voice.)
but I guess you ended up changing your mind after all, huh? I just hope everything is ok.
(Nate knows it's not like her to not answer her cell phone.)
I guess I'm going to head home. You have my house number and my cell. Please call me, ok? I'm worried.
He slowly presses the end button on his cell phone. The cell phone reads Duration of phone call: 32 seconds. Nate just sits there alone, for a minute then says out loud to himself.
Nate: No (pauses) something isn't right here.
He puts the car into drive and takes off, tires screeching.

.....What ya think so far?


Should I continue?

[MovieHuntress17]

This is really good,keep goin

[CD DeLorenzo]

yes, please go on!

[iliveforjayandnancy2]

I think everyone will REALLY like this post. And the next one too.

*Nate pulls up outside the Marshall's apartment.* (I'll get to know how Nate knows CD's there in the next post! lol) hehehe

With Nate's gun pointing downward in his left hand he knocks on her door with his right, and with no response after about 5 seconds he shoots at the lock. Nate opens the door. The whole scene is in slow mo. Nate's eyes first go to the Marshall on the floor then as he opens the door further, he notices CD. Nate goes to the marshall, kicks the gun away from her hand, and checks for a pulse to make sure she's dead, then rushes to his partners' side.

Nate: CD?! He says shaking her slightly to try and awake her.
Nate: CD! Wake up, please wake up! Oh God.
Nate unbuttons her shirt, just below her bra to check out the shot. He very carefully and very slowly slides his hand around to her back.
Nate: No exit wound. He says outloud to himself.
He moves her to a flat position on the floor, so she's not slouched in the chair anymore. Just then she starts to move her head a little to the left.
CD: N...Nat.... she trys to smile as hard as she can when she notices Nate's by her side.
Nate: Yes CD, it's me. I'm here. Don't try to talk. You'll be fine. We've got to get you to the hospital.
Nate proceeds to pick her up and carry her out of the door, as a groom would carry his bride.

*At the hospital.*

Nate pulls up to the hospital door, with a screech of the brakes, and goes around to the back seat where he has CD laying down, his coat proping her head up. He once again grabs her as he did in the Marshall's apartment. He kicks his car door shut, then kicks open the hospital door, approaching the nurse's desk.

Nate: Get me a gerny, (I think that's how it's spelled lol) I'm a cop, my girlfr....(he corrects himself) my partner's just been shot!
The nurses look at each other and none of them move.
Nate: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU WAITING FOR! One of the nearby doctor's overhears the rucus and rushes over and takes CD from Nate. (His left hand still under her head to make sure it rests gently on the gerny.)

(In the waiting room.)

Nate is pacing back and forth in the hospital waiting room. Awaiting news from the doctors. His right arm is folded at his chest, with his left hand resting under his jaw, in an attempt to stop his hands from shaking. Just then Jinny, Magda and Kate show up from the Division.
Nate: Oh thank God you guys are here.
Jinny: Oh Nate. She says with the utmost simpathy.
She goes up to Nate and gives him a tight hug.
(She's always the shoulder to cry on it seems and yes she's done some crying of her own. lol)
But as she approaches she can tell he's trying really hard to hold back a flood of tears, because they have all accumulated in his bottom eyelid. Knowing that the next thing that he says or does, will bring them all flowing down like a waterfall.
Kate: We came as soon as we got your call. How is she?
Nate: (The tears escape in one big rush.) I don't know. (His voice cracks.) They've still got her. You can hear the crying in his voice. These damn doctors don't seem to know anything. They took her five minutes before I called you guys.
Magda: Huh, five minutes before.....
she cuts herself off and looks at the clock and sees 8:52 PM.
Magda: That was over two hours ago.
Nate: I know. (His bottom lip quivers)
Kate: Oh Nate. (she gives him a hug too.) She'll be fine, trust me. She's a fighter.
Nate: Oh yeah. That she is. And very stubborn too. (He trys to force a smile...and fails miserably.)
Just then a doctor walks out. Nate looks at his name badge as he approaches. It reads Dr. Davis Chief of Surgery.
Dr. Davis: Hi are you Nate Basso?
Nate: Yes..Yes I am.
Dr. Davis: Hi I'm Dr. Micheal Davis. Candace is out of...
Nate cuts him off.
Nate: CD.
Dr. Davis: Excuse me?
Nate: I said CD. He pauses for a brief second. She likes CD.
Dr. Davis: Oh, my apologies. Well CD is out of surgery. They managed to removed the bullet. She was just wheeled into recovery. It seems that the bullet penetrated her ribs on the right portion of her body. She'll be in pain for several weeks to a month, but she should make a full recovery with no permenant damage. It really is a miracle. A shot like that would have surely killed anyone. Most people, it would shatter there ribs and bone fragments would break off and affect other organs. But not with CD. God Lord, she was a real fighter.
Nate: IS!
Dr. Davis: I beg your bardon?
Nate: Not WAS, IS. She IS a fighter. Speak proper English. You're talking as if she's DEAD! He yells the word dead.
Dr. Davis gives Nate a dirty look.
Jinny: When can we see her?
Dr. Davis: In about 20 minutes or so. But one at a time. and only for a short while. Visiting hours will be over in an hour.
Nate: Can I go first, guys?
The gang all nods in aggreement.

[candace~n~nathan]

This is really good; post more soon!!!!

[Sweetchild2005]

MMMMMOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

[chrissbabe101771]

[iliveforjayandnancy2]

Hey everyone! The screenname above is my sisters. She's on the board for the first time ever! I got her adictted! lol Say hi everyone to my sis!!!! And here's more.

*A half hour later.*

Nate walks into CD's room, and notices her lying...AWAKE, to his surprise. He goes and sits on the foot of her bed.
CD smiles from ear to ear. Nate managed to get his composure.
CD: Hi!
Nate: Hey there...how ya doing? He asks in a very gentle tone.
CD's voice sounds like a whisper.
CD: I feel like a million bucks.
Nate: Well at least you haven't lost your sarcasm.
CD: Nate?
Nate: Yeah?
CD: How did you know...
Nate cuts her off.
Nate: How did I know where you were?
CD: Yeah. she laughs a little.
Nate: Simple. I've worked with you long enough to know how stubborn..and smart....you are. And I knew you were on to her and where you'd be. If only we had had dinner, and gone over there together. But nope. You had to do to it on your own. Tisk, tisk. Nate says in a funny voice, while skaing his finger at CD. IT's ok though, not your fault. You won't change your ways, just like Zebras can't change there stripes.
CD laughs then grabs her right side.
CD: what kind of metaphor is that? she asks.
Nate gives a cute shrug.
CD: Please don't make me laugh now, Nate! It hurts to much!! She laughs more.
Slowly they both lessen there smiles.
Nate: All joking aside now, why did you feel you had to see her alone, don't you like me to work with you? He asks with a non-serious frown.
CD: Well I didn't want anything to happen to you.
Nate: Yeah? Well it never bothered you before, on all the other raids and busts we did together.
CD: True, but I never really liked you much then. She grins.
Nate: I see. So, I take it you like me now?
CD taps the side of the bed.
CD attempts to pick up her head silghtly and kiss Nate.
CD: Does THAT answer your question?
Nate: Ohhhhhhh YEAH I'd say so.
Nate: I'm so glad I didn't lose you. I couldn't live without you.
CD: I know. But everything will be ok now......I love you.
Nate: Oh, I love you too, but CD...I need to ask you something.

And NO he won't propose! But keep reading and you'll find out what it is!!!!!! Hehehe I love fan-fic!

[candace~n~nathan]

I love fan fic too!!! More please!!!

[iliveforjayandnancy2]

CD: Yes?
Nate: Well, sure we have feelings for each other, and we've shared kisses and all but I just need something cleared up. Are we boyfriend/girlfriend, or are we just interested in each other?
CD: Well, what do you feel?
Nate: HA! As if you don't already know. I want to be with you, permenantly. More then anything. he pauses. Don't you feel the same?
CD: Nate! Of COURSE I do, I just don't want to be hurt again, that's all.
Nate: (he's quiet for a moment) Do you think I'd hurt you?
Nate: No of course not, but if you were to ever fall out of love with me, then...
Nate: (puts a finger up to CD's lips) Don't finish that sentence. That would never happen...don't you know that?
CD: I know, but you can't control what you'll feel..or not feel for me a few years down the road.
Nate: Are you trying to dump me, but let me down easy at the same time?
CD: (laughs) Don't be rediculous! I'm just going by past experiences. No matter what I feel for you, the other guys in my past have said the exact same things you're saying, and have left me anyways. I want to believe you won't do the same, but I don't know. I want to make up my mind, before I fall anymore in love with you. It's just no fun at all getting hurt. (she starts to cry)
Nate: Oh, CD, honey. I understand your reservations believe me I do and I wish I could prove to you forever that I will never hurt you, but I don't know how to do that. All I can do, is hope you'll give me the chance to show you and I'll prove you wrong.
CD: (still crying) You mean put my heart on the line again?
Nate: ... yes pretty much. I know that's alot to ask, and if you feel like it will be to hard, then let me know and I'll accept defeat like a man and I'll walk away. Don't worry about my feelings. What's more important, are yours.
CD: No, yours are just important. Are you kidding? Ok I'll give you that shot.
Nate: Thank God! You had me worried there for a second.
CD: Hey, was that a guilt trip you were trying to lay on me?
Nate: What?! he asks pretending to be surprised.
CD: YOu know when you said not to worry about your feelings.
Nate: OH that, well maybe. he laughs.
CD: Well whatever it was, it worked.
Nate: Well good!
*As they attempt to show each other how they feel, the nurse walks in.*
Nurse: Oh, my lord! Sorry! She says covering her eyes, and leaving the room.
CD and Nate gather themselves, and Nate goes out to the nurses station to find out when she can be released. After he speaks to the same nurse that walked in on her and Nate, he finds out she can be released tommoroww, and heads back to CD to inform her.

[candace~n~nathan]

that was such a good post!! it made me so happy!! more!!

[*Nancy Mckeon*]

omg im actually reading a cd/nate fic! i usually jut read jinny/teddy lol

!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!

[iliveforjayandnancy2]

*Nate walks into CDs room. She is lying on the bed, as she sees him enter a wide smile comes across her face.*

CD: Welcome back. she says motioning him over to her.
Nate: You'll be pleased to know you will be released tommoroww, once they've finished all there paper work on you.
CD is eager to ask: How long before I can go back to work?
Nate: Well, that will be a little while.
CD: How long?
Nate: Well the Doctor said anywhere from 6 to 8 weeks depending on how good you feel, and how fast your wound heals.
CD has a depressed look on her face.
Nate: Hey hun, look at me. Just think of it this way. Now that we have confessed our feelings for each other, we don't have to worry about having to wait until we go to work to see each other. I can visit ya at your house and visa versa.
CD: Oh my God. For a second, I had forgotten we even told each other how we felt! It's that hard to believe that we are finally able to be open with each other. I'm so used to having to keep my feelings a secret.
Nate: So am I, but we don't have to worry about that anymore. We both know how each person feels.
CD smiles when he says that.
CD: Oh no. One problem.
Nate: And what could that be?
CD: What about when I go back to work? I'll have to go back to pretending that there's nothing happening between us. she says discouraged.
Nate: Why do you say that?
CD:Well, you know Captain. She might not like the fact that we have a different relationship besides just a partner/partner one.
Nate: CD, think about what you're saying. What reason would she have not to like it? I mean really. It can only make us working on our cases better. Because we will have the stress of keeping our feelings a secret, off our shoulders. And we'll be able to concentrate on our work more.
CD: (thinks for a second) I guess that makes sense. Besides if Captain says anything anyways, we can back-up our theory with that. That getting together will help us concentrate on our cases better. Because we don't have to hold back our strong feelings anymore. We will be able to be totally open. I sure hope that is convincing enough for her.
Nate: Don't worry I'm sure it will be. So what do you say, I go home and take a shower....I have been here all night, (he jokes) then I'll come back and stay till visiting hours are over. How's that?
CD: Sounds great. I can't wait until tommoroww so I can get out of here.
Nate: Me either. But I'll be back in about an hour or so. See ya soon, CD. he says kissing her gently on the lips.
CD: Hurry back to me.
Nate: I will. he says as he shuts the door to CD hospital room door behind him, breathes a sigh of relief that his soulmate will finally be alright, and he heads down the hall.

[*Nancy Mckeon*]

!!!!!!!!MMMMMOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

[CD DeLorenzo]

aww that was so totally cute! You gotta write more!!!!!!!!