What happend???

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

I know this is my third thread, but hey, I thought why not??
I hope you guys enjoy this one. This one starts where Lifetime left off.

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By now, Kate was all settled into her office. She threw away Spivey's name plate and put her own back. Then she called Raina.

"Hello?
"Raina, it's the Captain."
"Hi Captain. What do you need?"
"I need you to stop by Liz's apartment."
"I have a date tonight. Well, it's not really a date, it's kinda like...
"Raina??"
"Sorry. I will stop by before I go. Why do I need to go there anyway?"
"I just need you to bring Liz in for some questioning."
"Alright. See you later."
"Thanks Raina!"

Raina knocks on Liz's door. She is all dressed up. No one is answering the door. But knowing Raina, that wouldn't stop her from getting inside. But then she heard moaning coming from inside. She knew it wasn't good.

Meanwhile, Nate it inside the restaraunt waiting and waiting. He starts talking to himself.

"Maybe I drove her away? Were the kisses in the park too much. It is probably best. If we got involved, we wouldn't be able to be partners."

Raina then started baging on the door even harder. Then she heard a familiar vioce say...

"Help. Help...me."

Raina knew it was someone she knew but couldn't point it out. So she busted down the door and saw CD laying there.

"CD. Hold on. I'll get help."

She talked on her cell phone and then ripped off the bottom a little part of her dress to help stop the bleeding. Raina then started talking to her.

"CD. Stay with me. Help is coming."

"Do...do I know you??
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How is it??? Should I continue???

[ReturningFolFanKiera]

keeeeeeeeeeewlieeeeeeeez! but warnin ya now, they might not respond as quickly. its greeeat! post more soon! I still gotta read ya otha 2!

[HIGH ENOUGH]

I like this. I think you SHOULD continue.

[CD_Thruma]

Hiya!

Do you really have to ask????????? Sure we want MORE!!! And don't you dare to let us just hang in the air somewhere!!!! ;-)

Byebye
Britta

[TLC4Whitney]

oooh totally post more!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Thank you for all the replies. Here is some more.
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"CD? Don't you know me?"
"I..I.."
"That's OK. Do you know what happend?"
"We got....."
"CD? CD? Wake up! Help us!!!!"

Just then, the paramedics came in.

"San Francisco Medic Department."
"Her name is Candace DeLorenzo. She is an Inspecor with the SFPD. She has a pulse. She has one gunshot wound to the abdomen."
"We need to get her out of here right now and get her to County General. I'm sorry miss. Are you family?"
"No but her family can't be here."
"Then she will have to go alone."
"God damnit, I will be going with her. Now I'm with the SFPD. I'm going!"
"I don't have time to argue with you. I have to try to save her life."

After Nate waited for three hours in the restaraunt, they told him he had to leave. So he went back to his apartment. He just got in and went straight to his bedroom.

"What did I do wrong? Maybe I should call her and ask her why she didn't show up."

(ring ring ring: Hi. You have reached CD. I'm sorry I'm not at home right now but if you leave a message, I will get right back to you. Thanks!! BEEP)

"CD. It's Nate. I waited for you at the restaraunt. I guess you did change your mind. Well, we could just forget that those kisses we shared never happend. If you still want to be with me, please call me. Bye."

"I guess she doesn't want to talk to me. I think I'll go take a shower."

While he is in the shower, the Captain calls.

"Nate, it's the Captain. I'm sorry to have to tell you this but CD has been shot at Liz Reux's apartment. She is at County General. I'm not there but Raina is and Magda might come. If you need to talk, call me please. Bye."

"Was that the phone. No, it was probably the TV."

At the hospital, Raina, Magda, and Kate are in the waiting room."

"I wonder where Jinny is. Where you able to get a hold of her on your cell phone Magda?"

"No. I don't know where she is. It's 2:30AM."

Magda's cell phone rings.

"Inspector Ramirez?"
"Inspector Ramirez? This is Inspector Exstead speaking!!" (laughs)
"Jinny? Where are you?"
"Where am I?? Where are you?" (laughs again)
"Where are you??"
"Me? Well, I'm at a place called...Anchorside. Where are you??"
"I'm on my way to get you. Stay there."
"Oh, I won't move an inch!!"
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I'm going to stop here for now. Do you all like it??

[candace~n~nathan]

Hello!!! Of course we like it!!! More please!!!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

I've got nothing to do, so i'll continue on this story. I like writing this one better than the other one!! lol..
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"Was that Jinny?"
"Yeah, her car broke down so I have to go pick her up."
"Magda, may I speak to you?"
"Sure Captain."
"What's going on?"
"What do you mean?"
"I mean with Jinny. He car is not broken."
"Yes it is. Honest."
"Alright. Tell me the truth. Off the record."
"Off the record?"
"Yes."
"I think she might be drunk."
"(sighs) Alright. But I will have to talk to her about this in the morning."
"Just..don't report her, please. I don't know what will happen if she loses her job."
"What do you mean? Do you mean she's...suicidal?"
"I don't know. I got to go."
"Let me know if she's alright."
Let me know if CD's alright."
"I will."

At the Anchorside, Magda walked in and saw Jinny.

"Jinny?"
"Hiya! Hey Shawn, this is my partner."
"I know who Shawn is Jin. You are not supposed to be drinking Jinny."
"And you're not supposed to be having an affair but you do it anyway!!! I need another drink!"
"No you don't. You have had quite enough. Thanks Shawn."
"Anytime."
"Yeah, thanks alot Shawn. I'll thank you even more if you give me one more drink!!!"
"I'm taking you home now Jinny."
"I'll take me home."
"Now, Jin.."
"Let go of me!"
"C'mon, we're going home."
"Yes, Mommy. Bye everyone!!"

Jinny passed out in the car so Magda let her stay at er house. Meanwhile, the doctor has just come out to talk to everyone about CD.

"Candace DeLorenzo?"
"I'm her Captain. Is she alright?"
"We got the bullet in time but there was some damage."
"What?"
"She is having some memory loss."
"I'm her partner. Can I see her?"
"Sure. But one at a time. She just woke up."

In CD's room, Nate came rushing. Everyone thought that he should go first.

"CD. It's me. It's Nate.
"Nate? I'm sorry, I don't remember."
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I know it's not much, but it's something. Hope you guys enjoyed it. Thanks to Kiera. She has helped me a lot with these fics!!!! Thanks again!!!!!!!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Even though no one replied, I'm going to continue anyway!!!!! realized that I forgot to have Nate rushing into the hospital. So let's pretend that he did before the Doctor came out and spoke of her memory loss. Again, sorry for the mistake. Here is a nice long one.
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"CD, you have to remember me. We were supposed to meet for dinner tonight, but you got shot."
"I what?"
"You got shot."
"By who?"
"By Elizabeth Reux."
"Who was she?"
"She was a US Marshall. Don't you remember that?"
"I know my is CD, I know where I live, and..and.."

Then the doctor comes in.

"Hello. How are we feeling?"
"Doctor, she doesn't remember me."
"From the test that I have run, it seems to me that she only has trouble remembering anything recent. Maybe in the last two weeks or so. This is a very uncommon memeory loss but it will return. It is just hard to say when. She may not remember some people because of all she has been through but people she should remember in a day or so. When the others come in, she may not remember them either."
"Thank you."
"I wish I could have done more."
"I will send someone else in."

As Nate walked out, he was thinking to himself, 'How could she not remember?? If she forgot the last two weeks, she must have forgotten the kiss. I guess it just wasn't meant to be.'

"Someone else can go in now."
"How is she?"
"She doesn't remember people right now. She will start remembering people in a day or so."
"Well, that's good to know. Will she remember any of the cases I assigned to her?"
"She won't remember any that have happend in the last two weeks or so."
"Well, that's not that bad. Raina went to get some coffee and Magda left so I guess I'll go in."
"Alright Cap."

When Captain left, Nate just started crying. He couldn't stop.

"Are you alright?"
"Raina, how long have you been there?"
"Long enough to see you crying. What's wrong?"
"What's wrong??"
"You wouldn't be as upset. Listen Nate, I know what has been going on."
"You do??"
"Yes. I am not blind!"
"Well, how much do you know?"
"I know you guys were kissing in the hospital. I saw you."
"I..we.."
"No need to explain."
"The reason I am upset is because CD doesn't remember things passed two weeks ago. She doesn't even remember the kiss."
"I'm sorry Nate. I know how hard this must be for you."
"Yeah well, I guess it just wasn't meant to be."
"Of course it was. Nate, the doctor said she will get her memory back. She will remember you."
"But that could take a long time."
"With true love, you shouldn't mind the waiting."

Nate realized, she was right. I shouldn't give up hope. CD will remember him. He won't give up.

"Thanks Raina. You have been a great help!"
"Sure. Anytime you need to talk, you know you can talk to me right?"
"Yeah, I do."

It is now the next morning at Magda's house. Jinny is still passed out on the couch and Magda is trying to wake her up.

"Wake up sleepy head."
"Wha...where..."
"You're at my house."
"What am I doing here?"
"You passed out last night. Do you remember anything at all?"
"Well, I remember after my therapy appointment, I met this guy in the doctor's office and he wanted to take me to dinner. I didn't have anything to do so I thought 'what the hell'. So, he gave me this drink and he said it was non alcoholic and...oh my god."
"It was alcoholic Jin."
"How did you know where I was?"
"You called me at the hospital."
"I didn't say anything bad. Did I?"
"Oh, you said quite enough, thank you."
"What did I say?"
"Oh, besides telling everyone I was having an affair, nothing."
"Oh Mag, I am so sorry. I didn't know I.."
"I know."
"Wait. What were you doing at the hospital?"
"CD was shot last night."
"What??"
"She was shot by the Mashall Liz Reux."
"But she..she semed so nice."
"Yeah."
"By the way, the Captain knows."
"What? How?"
"When you called me last night, I was in the waiting room with her. She was able to tell something was up."
"Great. I'm in for it now. Where's Gabe?"
"He is gone on another trip and Ben was at a friends house so nobody saw you."
"Thank God."

After she got cleaned up and sobered up, they both went to work.

"Jinny? In my office."
"We were just about to..."
"NOW!"
"Sheesh, alright."
"Have a seat."
"So, what did you do last night?"
"Oh, I just uh went out with a friend for dinner?"
"Have too much wine with your dinner?"
"Look Cap.."
"Jinny, I trusted you. You told me you were going to your meetings adn staying off of the booze. I really hate to do this but I have to."
"DO WHAT??"
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I will leave you here. I'm not sure when I will add. It depends on how may replies I get. lol.. I know. I'm cruel!!!!!!

[ReturningFolFanKiera]

AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!! MUST HAVE MOOOOORE!!!!! *pokes u til u give me more* AHHHHHH U EVIL LITTLE PERSON!!!!
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u dont love me nemore I see if ya could leave me hangin like dat!!! lol im j/k, this is great, post more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[candace~n~nathan]

Originally posted by ReturningFolFanKiera
AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!! MUST HAVE MOOOOORE!!!!! *pokes u til u give me more* AHHHHHH U EVIL LITTLE PERSON!!!!
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LOL, my kinda violent person!!!!! POST MORE SOON!!!!!

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Obviously people are mad at me for stopping so I will continue...no, maybe not. Just kidding. Here you guys go!!!
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"Do what?"
"I am suspending you for 2 weeks."
"What? You won't even let me explain!"
"I'm sorry Jin. I should be firing you. Consider yourself lucky."
"If you would just le me tell you why.."
"Jin, I don't want to do this. Believe me I don't. But I have to."
"Thanks a lot."
"Jin, please understand. I have let you off the hook too many times."
"Thank you very much."

Jinny stormed out of the office, grabbed her jacket off of her chair and went to the locker room. Magda, confused, saw Captain in her office looking very upset. So Magda ran after Jinny and went into the locker room.

"Jinny, what happend?"
"I've been suspended."
"For what?"
"Apparently, Captain has let me off the hook too many times so I have been suspended for two weeks."
"Oh, Jin. I'm sorry. At least it's only for two weeks."
"No, it's not."
"What do you mean?"
"I'm sick and tired of being judged for my past. I quit!"
"No, Jinny. You can't. You're my partner."
"I'm sorry, Mag. I'm doing what I have to. I'll see you later."

After watching Jinny walk out, Magda ran right in to the Captain's office.

"What the hell was that all about?"
"I did what I had to do Magda."
"I thought you told me it was off the record. You lied to me."
"If you think I did, then I'm sorry."
"Do you even know why she was drinking."
"I really don't.."
"The guy she was having dinner with gave her a drink and told her it was a non alcoholic drink. It was full of alcohol. It wasn't her fault."
"Magda, I didn't know. I.."
"She quit, by the way."
"What?"
"She quit. Now I don't have a partner."

Meanwhile, back at the hospital, Nate had spent the whole night there and fell asleep in the chair right next to her. CD tapped him on the shoulder.

"Nate? Nate, wake up."
"CD? You know who I am?"
"Of course I do. Where am I?"
"You are in the hospital. You have been shot."
"Shot? How? When?"
"Calm down. You are having some memeory loss."
"Memory loss. From the shooting?"
"Yes. CD, what is the last thing you remember?"
"Uh, I remember Kate being in sugery. But that is the last thing I remember."
"You don't remember when she got out of surgery?"
"Yes, yes I do. You had broken up with Lily and we shared a kiss."
"YES! Yes, you remember!!"
"But I don't remember quite frankly if we, you know, let it continue."
"Oh, CD!"

He kissed her for, to be frank, a long time.

"I guess we let it continue huh?"
"You bet your life on it!"
"Inspectors? Am I interupting something??"

When Magda stormed out of Kate's office, Kate made a phone call.

"Hello? This is Captain Kate McCafferty from the San Fransisco Police Department. How are you? Good. It's about Jinny. No, she's fine. Can you get her to go over your house tonight with me there. I need to talk to her but she won't meet with me. You'll find out tonight. Thanks again. See you later.

At around 9:00, Jinny showed up at her father's house. John told her he had to talk to her about something important.

"Hi Dad. How are you?"
"I'm fine. You can come out now."
"What?"
"Hi Jinny."
"What the hell are you doing here??"
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I'm done for the night. I will post more tomorrow!!!!

[candace~n~nathan]

Hey, this is really great!!!! More please!!

[JinKateFan]

post more asap!! i love this fic

[Jo_Luvs_Ketchup]

Thanks for all the replies!!!!! Here you go!!
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"I'm here to talk to you."
"We don't have anything to talk about."
"Magda told me."
"Told you what?"
"That the guy you were with gave you that drink."
"What does it matter? You wouldn't listen to me."
"John, could you excuse us please?"
"Sure, I'll just go make some coffee." (leaves the room)
"Jinny, I never told anyone this before, but I think you should know."
"What?"

That same night, somebody walked in on CD and Nate.

"Inspectors? Am I interupting something??"
"Raina, CD and I were just--"
"It's OK. I know everything. I just came to check on how CD was doing."
"I'm fine. Just very sore."
"CD, Raina is the one that saw you in the apartment and called the paramedics."
"You did that for me?"
"Of course I did. You're my firend."
"Thanks."
"You're welcome. Well, I'll just leave you and Nate to talk."

Back at Jinny's house...

"I was an alcoholic too."
"You were??"
"When I was very young. It was back in the day when it didn't matter how young you were."
"Why didn't you tell me?"
"I didn't think it was right. That is why during your intervention, I knew how sick you were. I don't want you to quit your job Jinny and considering the circumstances, I'm not even suspending you."
"Your not?"
"No. You are a great cop Jinny. I can't afford to lose you."
"Thanks Cap."
"You're welcome." (they hug)
"But Jinny, probably best not to tell anyone about this conversation. Especially about that hug!"
"I wouldn't have it any other way."

The next day, back at The Division, Jinny had just walked into work.

"Jinny, you're back!"
"Hi Mag."
"I thought you were going to quit."
"Yeah, Mag. Glad to see you too."
"You know what I mean."
"I decided not to. How else am I going to pay my rent?"
"Glad you're back."
"Me too."

Meanwhile a visitor walks into The Division for Raina.

"Did you forget something??"
"Oh, I'm so sorry. I meant to call you."
"You didn't want to go dancing with me I guess."
"No, I did. I was all ready to go and then my Captain wanted me to go by an apartment to check on someone and there I found one of my co workers bleeding on the floor. I had to take her to the hospital and I just forgot to call."
"I understand. So will you go out with me Friday night?"
"Well---"
"You'll like it!! I promise you, Raina Washington, you will have a good time!!"
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