~Outsider~

[james_baby87]

I didnt want to post this yet but since i start school Friday I guess I will.


My latest fan fic.


~Outsider~
~By: Meghan~

What iƒ Jo had Cerebral Palsy¿ How diƒƒerent would her liƒe have been¿ Would Rose have ever sent her to Eastland¿ What about Eddie would he ever have been crazy about her¿ Let’s ƒind out!

Ok I probably need to do a deƒinition. Cerebral Palsy (Let me find a dictionary. (Oh so heavy! Can’t liƒt! Slams the dictionary on the desk): Paralysis due to a lesion oƒ the brain, usually one suƒƒered at birth, and characterized cheiƒly by spasms. Ok I’m lost. Maybe I should have looked in the Children’s Dictionary instead oƒ my stepdad’s Dictionary that got him through high school and college. (Children’s Dictionary much lighter!) Ah much easier to understand! Cerebral Palsy: A condition in which there is some diƒƒculty in moving or speaking. It is caused by an injury to the brain before or during birth. I like the Children’s Dictionary a lot better. I understand it! Let me stuff the dictionary’s back on the shelƒ then I’ll start posting.

~Jo and Rose’s Apartment in the Bronx~
Rose: Jo! (Bangs on Jo’s bedroom door) Jo get up you gotta be at school in ten minutes!
Jo: Yea yea yea whatever ma. (Puts her pillow on her head)
Rose: (Goes into Jo’s room) Come on! (ƒlips the light on and snatches Jo’s covers)
Jo: Ma!
Rose: Get up!
Jo: All right all right I’m up.
Rose: You got one minute.
Jo: What! Give me ƒive¿
Rose: Alright but you get to explain to Woodward why your late.
Jo: All right. Get out. (Rose leaves) (In ten minutes Jo comes out oif her room and runs into the bathroom)
Rose: Come on Jo its your ƒirst day of your junnior year and you’re already late.
Jo: I’m ready. (Grabs her cane and they leave)

I know its not much but I'll give you more when I figure out what I'm gonna do with the rest. That's the only part that I know I wont change right now.

[Jo_Marie]

I Like it, I can't wait to read more

[james_baby87]

Ok I was wrong I did change something. Their in their junior year not eigth grade.



Here's more.

~At School~
On the schools clock Jo gets there at 7:59 but on her watch its 8:02. Jo hurries up and runs into the gym.
Jesse: Jo your late.
Jo: Yea yea yea I overslept.
Tess: You made it just ontime their dismissing us. (Jo Jesse Tess and Claire climb oƒƒ of the bleachers and go towards the eight grade rooms)
Claire: Ouick Warhead beƒore class¿
Jo: Lemon. (Kim gives her one)
Jesse: Apple. (Kim gives her one)
Tess: Apple. (Kim gives her one and Kim grabs a Blue Raspberry for herselƒ)
Jo: Let’s check Phil’s room ƒirst. (They walk up to his door and Tess runs her ƒinger down the list looking for one of their names)
Tess: Kim, Jesse, Jo, Mike, Ryan, Tim, Eddie, and me.
Jo: Yes!
Jesse: All right!
Jo: This is going to be the best year ever. (The ƒour of them chew up there Warheads and go into class)
They ƒind ƒour seats in the back that are unocupied Jo sits in the second to last row and Kim sits beside her. Jesse sits behind Jo and Tess sits behind Kim. Mike sits inƒront oƒ Tess and Tim sits inƒront of him, Ryan sits across ƒrom Tim
(Eddie walks in and looks around for one of his ƒriends and finds all three of them by the girls in the back)
Mike: Eddie over here! (Eddie sits inƒont oƒ Jo behind Ryan)
Eddie: Hey girls.
Jo, Jesse, Tess, and Claire: Hey.
Eddie: Any better Jo¿
Jo: I guess so.
Tess: (Whispers to Kim) He’ll never get it.
Claire: Nope.
Eddie: Hey Jo I sprained my ankle and their putting me in thearpy who should I hope for?
Jo: Lilli.
Eddie: Is that who you see?
Jo: Yep.
Eddie: Thanks. (Turns around)
(Mr.Phil comes in)
Mr. Phil: Welcome to eight grade. This year is going to be a lot diƒƒerent then seventh grade. This class will be a lot harder so will Math, and Social Studies.
Jo: (Claire leans back) No! (Tess,Jesse, and Jo start laughing)
Eddie: (Leans back and askes Jo) What’s so ƒunny?
Jo: Claire’s just gooƒing oƒƒ.
Eddie: Oh. (Leans ƒorward)
The rest of the class goes pretty much the same way except Claire didn’t make any more jokes.
They go through three more classes beƒore lunch. English, Art, and P.E

~Lunch~
(Jo, Jessse, Claire, and Tess are sitting on the picnic table eating and Eddie, Mike, Tim, and Ryan are sitting on the grinding rail.
Jo: Eddie got cuter over the summer.
Jesse: Yea he did. And he’s starin at ya.
Jo: I know he is. (Jo looks up and smiles at him he smiles back and goes back to eating) Now he’s not.
(The guys motion for the girls to come over, Tess, and Claire get up but Jo and Jesse grab them)
Jesse: Don’t go over there! Make them come to us.
Tess: As if that’ll ever happen. (Sits back down) Those lazy bums.
Jo: That’s what we like about them.
Jesse: (Laughs)
Claire: Tess here comes your lazy bums.
Tess: You gotta be kidddin!
Jo: She’s not! Jesse you were right.
Jesse: Told ya so.
Ryan: (Goes by Jesse) Why didn’t you ladies com to us¿
Tess: Jo and Jesse.
Jo: More Jesse.
Eddie: Yea we all know you wanted to come see me. (Joking and everyone knows it because Jo and Eddie like each other but wont admit it)
Secertary over the PA: Remember the ƒall ƒestival dance is Friday. Canatiandets and Represtentavies need to be here by 6:00.
Jo: So we going as a group¿
Jesse: Yep same as the past two years.
Jo: It’s gona be another boring dance.
Jesse: Let’s try to enjoy it it is our last dance.
Claire: We’ll try that’s as much as I can say for.
Tess: Yea. They usually are but I cant wait.
Jo: Ya usually cant.
Tess: I know.




Thats all I'm doing now I might post later on today.

[Rebel Queen 1980]

This Is Great!,Post More!

[james_baby87]

Heres more


~Later That Night at Jo’s Apartment~
Rose: Jo we need to talk.
Jo: Shoot.
Rose: How do you like your school¿
Jo: It’s great why¿
Rose: I want to send you to Eastland.
Jo: Where¿
Rose: Eastland School ƒor Girls. It’s in Peakskill.
Jo: But mom!
Rose: I’m taking you up there on Friday after school. There’s an entrance exam you have to take and Jo.
Jo: Yea.
Rose: I want you to actually try to do good on it.
Jo: All right. I’ll try. ƒor you.
Rose: Thanks.
Jo: But mom whats wrong with my school!
Rose: I just want you in a better neighborhood.
Jo: What about my ƒriends¿
Rose: Jesse, Tess, and Claire¿
Jo: Mike, Tim, Ryan, and Eddie too.
Rose: You’ll make new ƒriends.
Jo: I don’t want to!
Rose: Tough Jo.
Jo: I cant do it Friday.
Rose: And why not¿
Jo: ƒall ƒestival.
Rose: You’ll probably have to miss it.
Jo: Cant we go up a diƒƒerent day like Tuesday. (Skiping Monday because she knows Rose wont let her out oƒ thearpy)
Rose: No, we arent going to work around you’re social liƒe ƒor this.
Jo: Please mom this is the only Junior dance oƒ the year, besiudes prom but, please don’t make me miss it.
Rose: I’ll think about it. But right now it’s a no.
Jo: (Runs into her room and slams the door and throws herself down on her bed) I gotta blow the test. I just gotta, I cant leave this is my home.

[Rebel Queen 1980]

This Is Really Good!,Post More Soon!

[Blair_Warner02]

I like it, is there a reason all of the lower case f's are in italics, and the question marks upside-down? Post more soon.

[james_baby87]

Originally posted by Blair_Warner02
I like it, is there a reason all of the lower case f's are in italics, and the question marks upside-down? Post more soon.

No reason I just like playing with somw ALT Codes that you can get a www.firehotquotes.com


I'll post later tonight hopefully right now I gotta mess with homework. A Word Search is homework in 8th grade MAN I LOVE MY SCHOOL!

[james_baby87]

Well the word search is done and thearpy is... well I'm not goin' I'll post.



~The Next Day at School~
Jesse: Jo you were supposed to call me last night.
Jo: Sorry forgot.
Tess: Jo is something wrong¿
Jo: Huh, oh no.
(The guys come up to them)
Mike: Hey ladies.
Jesse: Jo talk to us.
Eddie: Whats up with Jo¿
Claire: We’re trying to ƒigure that out.
Jo: My mom wants to send me to a diƒƒerent school.
Jesse: She cant!
Jo: I gotta take an entrance exam that I’m planning on blowing.
Claire: I sure hope so.
Eddie: Wouldn’t be the same around here without you
Tess: No it wouldn’t.
Jesse: Come on gang lets go look up some information on this school. What’s it called¿
Jo: Eastland School foƒor Girls. Peakskill New York.
Jesse: Peakskill!
Jo: Yea.
Jesse: Let’s get to the Computer Lab. (All eight of them head for the Lab)
Mrs. Honey: How can I help you¿
Jesse: May we look up something. Jo may be switching schools and wants to find out some inƒormation on it.
Mrs. Honey: Why are all oƒ you here with her¿
Eddie: We’re curious.
Mrs. Honey: You the boyƒriend¿
Jo/Eddie: No!
Jo: Us, yeah right.
Mrs. Honey: Sorry my mistake.
Eddie: It’s ok.
Jo: Yea no problem.
Tess: Can we look the stuƒƒ up¿
Mrs. Honey: I guess so.
Claire: Thanks. (Jo sits down and Jesse sits on one side of her and Tess on the other. Eddie stands behind her with and Claire sits on the edge of Tess’s chair and Ryan, Mike, and Tim stand by Eddie)
Jo: I don’t wanna know the schools history, ok heres what I need, (Reads): Eastland is a private school ƒor girls grade 6-12. To enter Eastland you have to have a high acidemic recond and need a high percentage on your entrance exam. Eastland is a bording school. Young ladies from all over attend Eastland. Iƒ you live close to the school you don’t have to live there. Girls at Eastland wear uniƒorms! (Quits reading) Ok I’ve read enough.
All: I’ve heard enough.
Jo: I cant get in I gotta blow that test.
Eddie: You can do it. (Smiles at her and rests his arms on her shoulders)
Jo: Oh am I a personal armrest now¿
Eddie: Yea.
Jo: I’m supposed to go up there Friday after school.
Tess: You skiping the dance.
Jo: Iƒ I have to go on Friday yes, but I’m trying to get mom to think about going Tuesday so I have my eighth grade ƒall ƒestival.
Claire: We want you to come.
Ryan: We want you to stay in the Bronx too.
Jo: I want to stay.
Tim: We know.
Eddie: Jo can I talk to you ƒor a second¿
Jo: Sure. (Eddie helps her up and they go to the other side oƒ the room right when Jo gets up Claire sits in her chair) You’re getting up when I get back.
Claire: I might.
Eddie: I’ll miss you Jo.
Jo: Eddie not now. I don’t know iƒ I’m leaving yet.
Eddie: Jo I know you too well I know you can’t ƒail a test even iƒ you try to.
Jo: You’re right.
Eddie: I just want to make the next three days the best ƒor us.
Jo: What do you mean¿
Eddie: I really care about you Jo.
Jo: As a ƒriend.
Eddie: No as more than a ƒriend.
Jo:
Jesse: What do you think there talking about¿
Tess: I don’t know but look how close they’re standin.
Claire: Yea that’s not normal talking distance.
Jesse: I gotta agree with you there.
Mike: Just shut up and let them talk.
Tess: Oh Mike. Such a guy.
Mike: Thanks ƒor noticing.
(Eddie leans in and kisses Jo)
Jesse/Tess/Claire/Mike/Tim/Ryan: (Jaw drops)
(After Eddie breaks the kiss Jo just stands there)
Jo: What just happened.
Eddie: I think I just kissed you.
Jo: That’s what I thought.
Eddie: Hey iƒ you do make it to the dance you’re mine on the slow dances.
Jo: Got it. (They got back with the group everyones jaw still dropped) Whats wrong with you¿
Jesse: He kissed you!
Jo: Yea.
Tess: That’s great!
Claire: Yea it is.
Mike: We knew you were gonna talk to her but kiss her¿
Eddie: And you point is¿ I don’t have to discuss everything with you guys.
Ryan: He’s got a point.
Jo: I gotta go to the dance I just gotta.
Jesse: What you got a date¿
Jo: We’re all going together you know that. Just that Eddie put a claim on me ƒor all the slow dances.
Jesse: You gotta go!
Jo: I just gotta convince mom of that.
Jesse: I think she’ll let you go.
Jo: I hope so.
Tess: We better go Art starts in a few seconds.
Jo/Jesse/Tess/Claire/Eddie/Mike/Ryan/Tim: (Run into the Art room) and sees everyone standing at the wall with Mrs. Honey at her desk looking at whats obviously is a seating chart.
Mrs. Honey: Did you eight find what you needed.
Jo: Yes.
Mrs. Honey: Seating aragment: This table: (Points says four names) (Points to another table) Jo, Eddie, Jesse and Ryan next table. Tess, Tim, Claire and Mike. (Goes through the whole class and soon everyone is seated)



Prolly the hardest part of that was the paragraph on Eastland.


More some other day.

[Rebel Queen 1980]

This is really good!,post more!

[james_baby87]

I'll post more tomorrow or later havent made up my mind yet but now I gotta go get the mail and wait for Quint to play my song that I E-quested.

[james_baby87]

I know I havent posted in a while but.... I can do that Anyways for those who cares heres more.





~Later That Night~
(Rose and Jo are making dinner)
Rose: I guess you can go to that dance.
Jo: Thanks mom! (Hugs her mom) But when we going to that school.
Rose: Tomorrow.
Jo: Oh.
Rose: Jo it wont be so bad.
Jo: Yea it will be I gotta leave Eddie.
Rose: Eddie¿
Jo: A guy I really like.
Rose: Eddie Brenan¿
Jo: Yea. He kissed me today and said iƒ I make it to the dance I’m his on all the slow dances.
Rose: Oh (Not liking that he kissed her)
Jo: Mom I really like him, we’ve liked each other since last year.
Rose: You two could probably keep in touch.
Jo: It wont be the same!
Rose: You get to go to the dance don’t push it.
Jo: (Runs into her room she picks up the phone an calls Jesse)
Jesse: Hello¿
Jo: Hey Jesse.
Jesse: Hey can you go¿
Jo: Yea but I have to go to Eastland tomorrow after school.
Jesse: At least your ƒree Friday.
Jo: Yea.
Jesse: Eddie will be happy.
Jo: Yea.
Jesse: It’ll kill ‘em if you leave it’ll kill us all.
Jo: You’re acting like I wanna go.
Jesse: I know you don’t.
Jo: Why would anyone wanna leave there home and all their ƒriends¿
Jesse: I dunno. (Silence) You should probably call Eddie.
Jo: Hold on I gotta beep. (Hits the ƒlash button and it puts her on the other line) Hello¿
Eddie: Is Jo there¿
Jo: Hey Eddie.
Eddie: Jo whatcha up to¿
Jo: Nothing can you hold on a second¿
Eddie: Sure. (Jo goes back to Jesse)
Jo: I gotta go Eddie’s on the other line.
Jesse: He called you I like that.
Jo: Bye Jesse. (Jesse hangs up and Jo goes back to Eddie) Had to get Jesse oƒƒ the other line.
Eddie: Oh.
Jo: I’ll see you at the dance.
Eddie: That’s great.
Jo: Yea.
Eddie: So when you going to that one place¿
Jo: Tomorrow.
Eddie: Oh.
Jo: Yea it sucks.
Eddie: I bet. So do you want to hang out tonight or something¿
Jo: Sure what¿
Eddie: I don’t know I was thinking maybe treatin you to an ice cream at Swienys.
Jo: I’d love to.
Eddie: Pick you up at¿
Jo: Me and mom are getting ready to eat so how about 7¿
Eddie: Sure see you then.
Jo: Ok bye. (Hangs up and runs to the kitchen) Let’s hurry up and eat!
Rose: What got you in such a good mood.
Jo: Eddie called and I got a date. Well Eddie and I are walking up to Swienys.
Rose: Oh. I want to meet him first.
Jo: Yea yea yea.
(7.00 doorbell rings)
Jo: I got it!
Rose: No I do go get your jacket.
Jo: All right. (Runs into her room and Rose gets the door)
Rose: Hi you must be Eddie!
Eddie: Yes. You must be Mrs. Polniazeck. (Jo comes out of her room with her jean jacket on) Hey Jo.
Jo: Hey.
Eddie: What time should I have her home¿
Rose: 9.
Jo: Thanks mom. (Surprised that she let her out for a two hour desert)
Eddie: Bye Mrs. Polniazrck.
Jo: Bye mom.
Rose: Bye.

I dont know if its really called Swienys its an ice cream place I ate at in Madison MS. so.... But anyways later y'all!!

[Blair_Warner02]

It's been about what 10 days since you posted with no replies. Well here's one, It's great, I love it. Everybody else is probably just too busy to post since they went back to school. Some are busy writing other fanfics (me) and typing (me) so don't give up yet it's just gonna be slow for a while until everyone gets settled in school. Continue please.

[Rebel Queen 1980]

I hope you still post more!,I'd like to read before I start on my
other fan fic by next week .

[james_baby87]

Ok after some slight demand heres more

*its good to be postin this again*



~Swienys~
Eddie: So hows everything going with your dad¿
Jo: I have no clue where he is.
Eddie: Do you miss him¿
Jo: I used to miss him a lot I don’t too much anymore. He leƒt us why should I miss him.
Eddie: Cause he’s you dad and he cares about you.
Jo: Iƒ he cares he wouldn’t have leƒt. (All of a sudden the baseball game that was on the T.V. switched to the news)
Reporter: We interupt this program for a special news bulitan. Seems there has been a break in at a local typewriter store, the guys name is Pol…
Jo: That’s like two blocks away do you mind if we go down there that’s my dad.
Eddie: Sure. (They put down their menus and leave)
~Outside the Store~
(There is a big crowd but Jo tries to get up ƒront to see iƒ she gets to shoot her dad a nasty dissipointed look and then act all hurt Eddie knows her plan and has agreed to play along . The poliece bring Charlie out)
Jo: Dad! (Charlie looks up and sees Jo she looks dissipointed and puts her head in her hands and acts like shes crying and when she does that Eddie puts his arms around her and gives Charlie the “how could you hurt your own daughter like this¿” Charlie catches the look and looks away and is escorted into a police car.
Jo: (Looks up and smiles) Let’s go. Before reporters come looking for us.
(Eddie and Jo ran all the way back to Swienys and used the excuses Eddie ƒorgot his wallet to explain why they leƒt)
Jo: Thanks Eddie.
Eddie: It’s ok, I like helpin ya out.
Jo: (Smiles)
(They hang out there ƒor about another hour talking and laughing and making it real hard ƒor them to lose each other)
Eddie: I better take you home.
Jo: I guess so we got ten minutes.
(They walk back to Jo’s apartment hand in hand talking some more and get back to Jo’s place with ƒive minutes leƒt)
Eddie: Goodnight. (Leans in and kisses Jo)
Jo: Goodnight. (Kisses him then goes inside)
Rose: Three minutes early.
Jo: Eddies trying to make a good impression.
Rose: I’d like him iƒ you two wouldn’t kiss.
Jo: You’re not going to get that.
Rose: Tess called.
Jo: Thanks. Did you tell her I was out with Eddie¿
Rose: Yea. Well I’m off to work be home after you leave.
Jo: Ok bye. I got some splaining to do. (Dials Tess’s number)
Tess: Since when are you and Eddie the dating type?
Jo: Since I’m prolly leaving soon.
Tess: He really likes you.
Jo: I really like him too.
Tess: Could you see a ƒuture with him¿
Jo: I don’t know I think so.
Tess: Really.
Jo: Yea. We saw dad tonight.
Tess: Really¿ You guys saw that.
Jo: Yea.
Tess: I bet it was hard.
Jo: Yea it was. Not that were real close but knowing that’s my dad. Hold on call waiting. (Hits ƒlash) Hello¿
Eddie: Jo¿
Jo: Eddie.
Eddie: Hey my parents are out tonight.
Jo: So is my mom.
Eddie: You wanna hang out¿
Jo: My place¿
Eddie: Sure.
Jo: Eddie.
Eddie: Yea¿
Jo: I’m not going to have sex with you.
Eddie: I understand.
Jo: See you in a few. (They hang up and Jo goes back to Tess) You’ll never gues whos comin over.
Tess: Who¿
Jo: Eddie!
Tess: You little hoe.
Jo: I’m not goin to do anything.
Tess: I sure hope so.
Jo: Tess!
Tess: I’m gonna get oƒƒ unlike you I don’t have a boyƒriend
Jo: Bye. (They hang up) And Jo moves the 13” TV from the living room to her room for the night. She’s finishing hooking them up with Eddie knocks) Hey.
Eddie: I’ve missed you.
Jo: You saw me thirty minutes ago.
Eddie: So.
Jo: I missed you too. So you wanna go into my room. I set the TV up in there.
Eddie: Sure. (They go into Jo’s room and Jo sits on her bed and leans against the headboard and Eddie sits beside her)
Eddie: So whats on
Jo: Let’s see, 11 o’clock, um Boy Meets World, Brink,
Eddie: Ever seen Brink¿
Jo: No.
Eddie: You need to see it.
Jo: I’ll be right back, (Goes into the closet and changes into her pajamas she comes back in some hawiian print pants and red spagitti strap tank top) All right. (Puts it on that channel and they watch it for a little while after a while Jo starts to yawn and pretty soon she’s asleep Eddie holds her ƒor a while then he lays her down and leaves after he turns the TV oƒƒ and writes her a note and puts it by her alarm clock)

~The Next Morning~
Jo wakes up and sees the note and reads it aloud
Jo: Have a nice rest see you at school Love Eddie. Your so cute when you sleep. (Puts the note down) He’s so sweet. (Gets up and showers and hurries and gets ready)



Posted more than normal since its been so long.