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TDfan69 · 08-13-2003, 03:30 PM

Okay- here goes another story.....

Nate kept checking his watch. Where was she? So much forher not changing her mind, although part of him knew that CD would never just leave him at the restaurant without at least calling. He was disappointed,he had been hoping this would work out with CD...his phone rang. "Nate," a voice said softly,he almost couldn't hear it."CD?" he asked. "I...I..Liz,"and the line went dead. "CD!" Nate yelled. He tried calliing back,but all he got was her voice mail.He ran to his car, calling the station at the same time. He asked for the Captain, and was surprised to get Kate. "Kate, what-never mind. Have you heard from CD tonight?" "No," Kate said, what's going on?" Nate told her of the phone call. When he mentioned Liz, Kate became concerned. "Nate, we just got some possible evidence linking Elizabeth Rue to another prison escapee that shared a cell with Ray Sanchez. We are waiting for some other paperwork from-wait, hold on," Nate was frustrated. CD could be anywhere. He started driving to CD's apartment. Kate came back on the line. "Nate, get over to Rue's apartment now! We have reports of shots fired." "I'm on my way!" Nate said, and turned on his lights and siren. He drove to the address that Kate had givien him. His heart sank when when he got there. CD's car was out in front of the building. He ran in, gun drawn. There weren't any other police there, so he knew the scene wasn't secure. Waiting for backup was out of the question-CD was involved. He went up to the third floor and pounded on Liz' door. "SFPD!" "Open up!" There was no answer, so he broke the door down. By this time, a small crowd of people on the same floor was watching the scene with great interest, but Nate was oblivious.

Who wants more????????????

CD_Thruma · 08-13-2003, 06:10 PM

I definitely want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *shouts out loud* Can't wait to read the next part so keep posting, please!!!!! Storyline's so great!!!!!!

Byebye
Britta

CD DeLorenzo · 08-13-2003, 07:22 PM

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Originally posted by CD_Thruma
I definitely want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *shouts out loud* Can't wait to read the next part so keep posting, please!!!!! Storyline's so great!!!!!!

Byebye
Britta

dito!

Laney · 08-13-2003, 07:33 PM

I agree, More!!

TDfan69 · 08-13-2003, 07:52 PM

Okay, here goes :

First,he saw Liz.She was clearly dead,her eyes vacant and had lost a lot of blood from the chest. He heard a small moan and turned. CD was lying against some boxes,bleeding profusely from the abdomen. He took off his jacket and shirt,using the shirt to help stop the bleeding and the jacket to keep her warm. He heard sirens,so he knew help was almost there. CD stirred,opened her eyes,and looked at him. She was so pale. Nate held her face the same way she had held his several days ago when he'd been hit in the head, and repeated the same phrase she said to him."I've got you partner," he said softly."Na-",
CD's voice dropped off and her eyes closed. He rode with her to the hospital,having to settle for riding in the cab while the medics worked on CD in the back. When they got to the hospital, he held her hand all the way until they reached the examining room and he had to leave her. Nate walked back out to the waiting room.Jinny and Magda were running in, all out of breath. "How is she?" Jinny asked, trembling. Last year she had had to go through this when Magda had been shot. This would be equally hard.She and CD were close, the whole group was. Nate sank down into a chair. "I don't know, but she's lost alot of blood. She was shot once in the abdomen and not the chest at least." Magda put a comforting hand on Nate's shoulder. "Do you know anyone stronger than 'Candace you better not mess with me DeLorenzo'?" she asked. "She'll make it Nate, I know she will." "She has to," Nate said, his eyes welling up with tears."I just wish it was me in there instead." Jinny and Magda looked at each other. They had both often wondered if something was going on between CD and Nate, but that would be so unlike CD to get involved with her partner that they had put it out of their heads. Now, they began to wonder again. Kate showed up with Louis in tow. Louis had wanted to just take Kate home, and people could keep her informed by phone,but no way. Kate and CD had known each other too long. CD had no family except a flaky mother. CD asked Kate long ago if she would be responsible for making medical decisions for CD if CD couldn't. It was all official, and Kate had kept the papers in her office.She had them with her now, and went up to the admitting desk to inform the nurse that she was Candace DeLorenzo's Captain, and that she would make any decisions for CD. Kate then went over to the others, and sat down next to Nate.

candace~n~nathan · 08-13-2003, 08:00 PM

OMG, this is great!!!! Post more, post more!!!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 08-13-2003, 08:32 PM

TDfan69 · 08-14-2003, 12:15 AM

okay, here goes:

"How are you holding up?" Kate asked Nate. Nate shook his head. "I know it's hard, Nate, but she will pull through, and you need to be strong." Nate looked at his boss. "I've never had a partner get hurt before. I just don't know why she went over there in the first place without calling me."(note to readers: wouldn't we ALL like to know that!

) Kate told the group what she had learned from Raina, who had gone to the scene to investigate. "We are assuming right now that CD went to Liz' after she went to the hospital and found out that Gina died. A nurse told her that Rue had been there also to see Gina, and right after she left, Gina died. They are doing an autopsy to determine cause of death." Kate paused, and then went on. "One of Rue's neighbors overheard Liz and CD arguing. The neighbor said that Liz admitted to killing Gina, and her partner as well. Then there were two or three shots,no one is sure." Kate put her arm around Nate. "She must have thought she could handle Liz, but I guess we won't know for sure until we can talk to CD."

A doctor came into the room. "Captain McCafferty?" she asked,checking her clipboard. Kate started to stand, but the doctor could see she was having difficulty, so she hurried over and sat down next to her. Everyone gathered around. "My name is Dr. Richards, and I am Chief of Surgery here. Inspector DeLorenzo is being prepped for surgery to have a bullet removed from her abdomen. She is weak, but I feel she can withstand surgery at this time. She is awake, and is aware of what is going on." The doctor paused, and Nate jumped in. "Doctor, can I see her before you take her in? It's very important." Dr. Richards looked at him. "Are you Nate, by any chance?" Nate nodded, and the doctor said, "Inspector Delorenzo told me to tell you that she is sorry about tonight, and she hasn't changed her mind.I am sorry,but there is no time for you to see her." She addressed the rest of the group again. "You all should move up to the surgical floor, and I will make sure you are kept updated." With that the doctor walked off, leaving them to start worrying again.

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup · 08-14-2003, 12:40 AM

That's really good. Please continue!!!!!

CD_Thruma · 08-14-2003, 11:22 AM

CONTINUE!!! CONTINUE!!! CONTINUE!!! That's an order.

Besides you can also post more on the list ...

Byebye
Britta

TDfan69 · 08-14-2003, 02:24 PM

Britta- I am working on a new part for the list.....

Here is more:

Several hours later:

Everyone had dozed off. Nate was sleeping fitfully,having bad dreams of CD being shot,and he wasn't able to help her. He decided to get up and go down the hall to the vending machines. As he stood there,looking for his favorite candy bar, he started remembering all the times CD had teased him about his chocolate habit,and also remembered the times she would bring him some just for the heck of it. He started getting emotional again. How long had she really cared for him? They had wasted so much time.... "Inspector?" Dr. Richards voice brought him back to the present. She came up to him.She looked exhausted and was rubbing her forehead."CD?" Nate asked hesitantly. The doctor smiled. She is one tough lady, but I think she will pull through. We got the bullet, and there wasn't too much internal damage. She is awake,and asking for you. I thought you might like a few moments alone with her before your friends wake up." Nate followed her down the hall and donned a gown to go into the ICU. CD was hooked up to several machines and still looked pale, but Nate thought she was beautiful. He sat down in a chair next to her bed and held her hand to his cheek. "Na-Nate?" CD asked weakly. 'Yeah, its me," he said softly. "The doctor says you're going to be fine. CD looked at him for a moment and drifted off without saying anything else. Nate had to leave the room while the nurses checked CD over, and he went back to the waiting room to wake the others. "Hey guys, she is going to be okay." Everyone woke up, and started hugging each other. Kate looked at Nate. "Have you seen her?" She asked. "Yeah, I just did for a couple of minutes. She is asleep right now and the doctor said she can have more visitors tomorrow." Nate cleared his throat. 'Kate, I need to stay with CD, but you and everyone else go home and get some sleep." Kate had no problem with this. It was a partner's job to stay with the injured one.jinny, Magda, and Raina all cleared out,telling Nate they would be back later when they could. Kate and Louis started to leave, and Kate told Nate that he could have the next few days off to be with CD. "Just tell CD I will be back,okay?" Nate said sure, and then he headed back to CD's room.For the rest of the night, CD woke up off and on,and was pretty much out of it. She didn't remember being shot, or anything else. She kept asking Nate what had happened, but Nate just held her hand and tried to keep her calm. CD woke up around 9 am. What in the-? she looked around, and then remembered the shooting. She looked down and saw Nate, his head face down resting on his arms. "Nate?" she said, running her fingers through his hair a bit. Nate woke up immediately. "How are you? Do you need anything?" "Just you," CD replied. Nate leaned over and kissed her gently on the lips. "What happened to Liz?" CD asked. Nate gazed at her. She seemed much more lucid and her voice was stronger. "Liz is dead. You apparently shot her, but she managed to shoot you before she died." "I shouldn't have gone over there by myself. I am so sorry about dinner, and I promise I will make it up to you." Nate smiled and gave her another kiss. "No need," he said. "I am just glad that you will be okay."

candace~n~nathan · 08-15-2003, 11:32 PM

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!

TDfan69 · 08-16-2003, 12:11 AM

it's coming! I promise............

CD DeLorenzo · 08-16-2003, 11:23 AM

we're waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiting...

TDfan69 · 08-16-2003, 02:31 PM

okay, I am trying to keep with the two fics(Note to self: write one at a time.....)

CD was in her room,packing her suitcase. She was finally out of here,thank you very much. She didn't care to see another doctor or nurse again for the rest of her life."Anyone see a pretty lady looking for a ride?" CD grinned and looked up at the door.Nate was there. "Yeah, me. Can you tell that nurse I'm ready to go?" She insists on me taking a wheelchair out of here." "Well, you know the rules, and it just so happens I have one already for you." Nate pushed a chair into the room and made a sweeping gesture with his arms. "Your chariot awaits, milady." CD just smiled and shook her head. "Nate, you are a nut." Nate handed her the rest of her flowers and slung her bag over his shoulder. He pushed CD outside and got her in the car. When they got to CD's, he helped her walk inside. She was doing better, but it still hurt to move too much. "Okay, where do you want to be?" Nate asked. Bed or the couch?" "I'll take the couch." They walked over and CD sat down,exhausted. The doctors told her it would take awhile to really get her strength back,but this was ridiculous. Nate looked at her. "Feel like lunch? I can make you some soup, or send out for something." "Don't you have to be back at work?" CD asked. Nate grinned, and sat down next to CD. "I have VERY strict orders to keep you company for the rest of the day. I also told everyone to hold off visiting until tomorrow, maybe we can finally be alone." CD put her arms around Nate. "Sounds like heaven to me."They kissed,at first gently, but then with more urgency. When they pulled away, Nate smiled. "I'm glad you are home," he said. Later, they had finished off Chinese food,and were watching a movie on TV. Nate looked down and realized CD was asleep, with her head on his shoulder. He gently moved her so her head was in his lap, and covered her up with a blanket."Goodnight my love," he said, and turned out the light. CD was right. This was heaven.

08-13-2003, 03:30 PM	#1
TDfan69 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 08, 2003 Location: Nevada Posts: 209	idea for S4-CD/Nate Okay- here goes another story..... Nate kept checking his watch. Where was she? So much forher not changing her mind, although part of him knew that CD would never just leave him at the restaurant without at least calling. He was disappointed,he had been hoping this would work out with CD...his phone rang. "Nate," a voice said softly,he almost couldn't hear it."CD?" he asked. "I...I..Liz,"and the line went dead. "CD!" Nate yelled. He tried calliing back,but all he got was her voice mail.He ran to his car, calling the station at the same time. He asked for the Captain, and was surprised to get Kate. "Kate, what-never mind. Have you heard from CD tonight?" "No," Kate said, what's going on?" Nate told her of the phone call. When he mentioned Liz, Kate became concerned. "Nate, we just got some possible evidence linking Elizabeth Rue to another prison escapee that shared a cell with Ray Sanchez. We are waiting for some other paperwork from-wait, hold on," Nate was frustrated. CD could be anywhere. He started driving to CD's apartment. Kate came back on the line. "Nate, get over to Rue's apartment now! We have reports of shots fired." "I'm on my way!" Nate said, and turned on his lights and siren. He drove to the address that Kate had givien him. His heart sank when when he got there. CD's car was out in front of the building. He ran in, gun drawn. There weren't any other police there, so he knew the scene wasn't secure. Waiting for backup was out of the question-CD was involved. He went up to the third floor and pounded on Liz' door. "SFPD!" "Open up!" There was no answer, so he broke the door down. By this time, a small crowd of people on the same floor was watching the scene with great interest, but Nate was oblivious. Who wants more????????????
	__________________ Nate:"What did he say?" CD: "No go" Nate: "So when do we leave?" CD: "Now."

08-13-2003, 06:10 PM	#2
CD_Thruma www.brittas-world.tk Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 07, 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 42	ME I definitely want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! shouts out loud Can't wait to read the next part so keep posting, please!!!!! Storyline's so great!!!!!! Byebye Britta
	__________________ CD and NATE 4EVER!!! The greatest thing You'll ever learn Is just to Love And be loved in return!

08-13-2003, 07:33 PM	#4
Laney Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 07, 2003 Location: Pittsburgh Posts: 76	I agree, More!!
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08-14-2003, 11:22 AM	#10
CD_Thruma www.brittas-world.tk Occasional Poster Join Date: Aug 07, 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 42	CONTINUE!!! CONTINUE!!! CONTINUE!!! CONTINUE!!! That's an order. Besides you can also post more on the list ... Byebye Britta

08-13-2003, 07:52 PM	#5
TDfan69 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 08, 2003 Location: Nevada Posts: 209	Okay, here goes : First,he saw Liz.She was clearly dead,her eyes vacant and had lost a lot of blood from the chest. He heard a small moan and turned. CD was lying against some boxes,bleeding profusely from the abdomen. He took off his jacket and shirt,using the shirt to help stop the bleeding and the jacket to keep her warm. He heard sirens,so he knew help was almost there. CD stirred,opened her eyes,and looked at him. She was so pale. Nate held her face the same way she had held his several days ago when he'd been hit in the head, and repeated the same phrase she said to him."I've got you partner," he said softly."Na-", CD's voice dropped off and her eyes closed. He rode with her to the hospital,having to settle for riding in the cab while the medics worked on CD in the back. When they got to the hospital, he held her hand all the way until they reached the examining room and he had to leave her. Nate walked back out to the waiting room.Jinny and Magda were running in, all out of breath. "How is she?" Jinny asked, trembling. Last year she had had to go through this when Magda had been shot. This would be equally hard.She and CD were close, the whole group was. Nate sank down into a chair. "I don't know, but she's lost alot of blood. She was shot once in the abdomen and not the chest at least." Magda put a comforting hand on Nate's shoulder. "Do you know anyone stronger than 'Candace you better not mess with me DeLorenzo'?" she asked. "She'll make it Nate, I know she will." "She has to," Nate said, his eyes welling up with tears."I just wish it was me in there instead." Jinny and Magda looked at each other. They had both often wondered if something was going on between CD and Nate, but that would be so unlike CD to get involved with her partner that they had put it out of their heads. Now, they began to wonder again. Kate showed up with Louis in tow. Louis had wanted to just take Kate home, and people could keep her informed by phone,but no way. Kate and CD had known each other too long. CD had no family except a flaky mother. CD asked Kate long ago if she would be responsible for making medical decisions for CD if CD couldn't. It was all official, and Kate had kept the papers in her office.She had them with her now, and went up to the admitting desk to inform the nurse that she was Candace DeLorenzo's Captain, and that she would make any decisions for CD. Kate then went over to the others, and sat down next to Nate.

08-13-2003, 08:00 PM	#6
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	OMG, this is great!!!! Post more, post more!!!!!

08-13-2003, 08:32 PM	#7
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376

08-14-2003, 12:15 AM	#8
TDfan69 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 08, 2003 Location: Nevada Posts: 209	okay, here goes: "How are you holding up?" Kate asked Nate. Nate shook his head. "I know it's hard, Nate, but she will pull through, and you need to be strong." Nate looked at his boss. "I've never had a partner get hurt before. I just don't know why she went over there in the first place without calling me."(note to readers: wouldn't we ALL like to know that! ) Kate told the group what she had learned from Raina, who had gone to the scene to investigate. "We are assuming right now that CD went to Liz' after she went to the hospital and found out that Gina died. A nurse told her that Rue had been there also to see Gina, and right after she left, Gina died. They are doing an autopsy to determine cause of death." Kate paused, and then went on. "One of Rue's neighbors overheard Liz and CD arguing. The neighbor said that Liz admitted to killing Gina, and her partner as well. Then there were two or three shots,no one is sure." Kate put her arm around Nate. "She must have thought she could handle Liz, but I guess we won't know for sure until we can talk to CD." A doctor came into the room. "Captain McCafferty?" she asked,checking her clipboard. Kate started to stand, but the doctor could see she was having difficulty, so she hurried over and sat down next to her. Everyone gathered around. "My name is Dr. Richards, and I am Chief of Surgery here. Inspector DeLorenzo is being prepped for surgery to have a bullet removed from her abdomen. She is weak, but I feel she can withstand surgery at this time. She is awake, and is aware of what is going on." The doctor paused, and Nate jumped in. "Doctor, can I see her before you take her in? It's very important." Dr. Richards looked at him. "Are you Nate, by any chance?" Nate nodded, and the doctor said, "Inspector Delorenzo told me to tell you that she is sorry about tonight, and she hasn't changed her mind.I am sorry,but there is no time for you to see her." She addressed the rest of the group again. "You all should move up to the surgical floor, and I will make sure you are kept updated." With that the doctor walked off, leaving them to start worrying again.

08-14-2003, 12:40 AM	#9
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup Member Eternal Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 09, 2003 Posts: 4,195	That's really good. Please continue!!!!!

08-14-2003, 02:24 PM	#11
TDfan69 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 08, 2003 Location: Nevada Posts: 209	Britta- I am working on a new part for the list..... Here is more: Several hours later: Everyone had dozed off. Nate was sleeping fitfully,having bad dreams of CD being shot,and he wasn't able to help her. He decided to get up and go down the hall to the vending machines. As he stood there,looking for his favorite candy bar, he started remembering all the times CD had teased him about his chocolate habit,and also remembered the times she would bring him some just for the heck of it. He started getting emotional again. How long had she really cared for him? They had wasted so much time.... "Inspector?" Dr. Richards voice brought him back to the present. She came up to him.She looked exhausted and was rubbing her forehead."CD?" Nate asked hesitantly. The doctor smiled. She is one tough lady, but I think she will pull through. We got the bullet, and there wasn't too much internal damage. She is awake,and asking for you. I thought you might like a few moments alone with her before your friends wake up." Nate followed her down the hall and donned a gown to go into the ICU. CD was hooked up to several machines and still looked pale, but Nate thought she was beautiful. He sat down in a chair next to her bed and held her hand to his cheek. "Na-Nate?" CD asked weakly. 'Yeah, its me," he said softly. "The doctor says you're going to be fine. CD looked at him for a moment and drifted off without saying anything else. Nate had to leave the room while the nurses checked CD over, and he went back to the waiting room to wake the others. "Hey guys, she is going to be okay." Everyone woke up, and started hugging each other. Kate looked at Nate. "Have you seen her?" She asked. "Yeah, I just did for a couple of minutes. She is asleep right now and the doctor said she can have more visitors tomorrow." Nate cleared his throat. 'Kate, I need to stay with CD, but you and everyone else go home and get some sleep." Kate had no problem with this. It was a partner's job to stay with the injured one.jinny, Magda, and Raina all cleared out,telling Nate they would be back later when they could. Kate and Louis started to leave, and Kate told Nate that he could have the next few days off to be with CD. "Just tell CD I will be back,okay?" Nate said sure, and then he headed back to CD's room.For the rest of the night, CD woke up off and on,and was pretty much out of it. She didn't remember being shot, or anything else. She kept asking Nate what had happened, but Nate just held her hand and tried to keep her calm. CD woke up around 9 am. What in the-? she looked around, and then remembered the shooting. She looked down and saw Nate, his head face down resting on his arms. "Nate?" she said, running her fingers through his hair a bit. Nate woke up immediately. "How are you? Do you need anything?" "Just you," CD replied. Nate leaned over and kissed her gently on the lips. "What happened to Liz?" CD asked. Nate gazed at her. She seemed much more lucid and her voice was stronger. "Liz is dead. You apparently shot her, but she managed to shoot you before she died." "I shouldn't have gone over there by myself. I am so sorry about dinner, and I promise I will make it up to you." Nate smiled and gave her another kiss. "No need," he said. "I am just glad that you will be okay."

08-15-2003, 11:32 PM	#12
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!

08-16-2003, 12:11 AM	#13
TDfan69 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 08, 2003 Location: Nevada Posts: 209	it's coming! I promise............

08-16-2003, 11:23 AM	#14
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	we're waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiting...

08-16-2003, 02:31 PM	#15
TDfan69 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 08, 2003 Location: Nevada Posts: 209	okay, I am trying to keep with the two fics(Note to self: write one at a time.....) CD was in her room,packing her suitcase. She was finally out of here,thank you very much. She didn't care to see another doctor or nurse again for the rest of her life."Anyone see a pretty lady looking for a ride?" CD grinned and looked up at the door.Nate was there. "Yeah, me. Can you tell that nurse I'm ready to go?" She insists on me taking a wheelchair out of here." "Well, you know the rules, and it just so happens I have one already for you." Nate pushed a chair into the room and made a sweeping gesture with his arms. "Your chariot awaits, milady." CD just smiled and shook her head. "Nate, you are a nut." Nate handed her the rest of her flowers and slung her bag over his shoulder. He pushed CD outside and got her in the car. When they got to CD's, he helped her walk inside. She was doing better, but it still hurt to move too much. "Okay, where do you want to be?" Nate asked. Bed or the couch?" "I'll take the couch." They walked over and CD sat down,exhausted. The doctors told her it would take awhile to really get her strength back,but this was ridiculous. Nate looked at her. "Feel like lunch? I can make you some soup, or send out for something." "Don't you have to be back at work?" CD asked. Nate grinned, and sat down next to CD. "I have VERY strict orders to keep you company for the rest of the day. I also told everyone to hold off visiting until tomorrow, maybe we can finally be alone." CD put her arms around Nate. "Sounds like heaven to me."They kissed,at first gently, but then with more urgency. When they pulled away, Nate smiled. "I'm glad you are home," he said. Later, they had finished off Chinese food,and were watching a movie on TV. Nate looked down and realized CD was asleep, with her head on his shoulder. He gently moved her so her head was in his lap, and covered her up with a blanket."Goodnight my love," he said, and turned out the light. CD was right. This was heaven.