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Jeanie · 08-10-2003, 09:34 PM

Well here is my season premiere for the fourth season:

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Looking inside the tiny apartment window Migel saw two ladies laying there with guns and blood all over the place, Migel notices that someone is entering the apartment, it is a man mid thirties. Was this the guy who shot these two coming back to see if the job was finished. Migel got up and ran to get help for these two women laying there bleeding profusely.

Back in the apartment Nate took out his cell phone as he called for an ambulance bending down to check if his partner was breathing, waiting for someone to answer his call, glad that he had called to see if CD went back to the station after visiting Gina. Finding out that Gina had died and Cap had told Nate of Liz’s involvement. He found a shallow pulse as he said, “Come on CD stay with me help is on the way.” He glanced over at Liz laying on the floor and all the blood surrounding her. The voice came on “911 what is your emergency?” Nate replied, “I have two officers down at 2858 Green Street. One of the officers is my partner and the other is a marshall. My partner has a pulse haven’t checked the other yet. Get someone here now.”

Swimfan85 · 08-10-2003, 09:38 PM

welll that isnt nice....just stopping there...add more! PLEASE! I KNO UR ON

CD DeLorenzo · 08-10-2003, 09:40 PM

ahhhhhh! I already told ya over im, but anyhow:

I'm already addicted! MORE!!!!! NOW!!!! ahhhhh!!!!!!

PLEASE! See? I'm begging!

This

ROCKS!!!!!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 08-10-2003, 09:46 PM

Yay! *claps* Continue... I know you have more written...*Looks at you*

ks · 08-10-2003, 10:55 PM

Yes! This beats waitin' til January. More please!

ks

Diamond_Dust_31 · 08-10-2003, 11:47 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ks
Yes! This beats waitin' til January. More please!

ks

No joke! and ditto... Or somethin...

Yeah... More, please!

CD DeLorenzo · 08-11-2003, 11:59 PM

awww Jeanie, please come online and post more!

Sweetchild2005 · 08-12-2003, 12:03 AM

See Cat...i'm here!!! This is really good and you realllllllly need to post!!!!!!!

Sweetchild2005 · 08-12-2003, 12:06 AM

Oh yeah I forgot to mention.........NOW!!!!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 08-12-2003, 12:07 AM

yes! See! and I swear I just asked her if she read it already!

Sweetchild2005 · 08-12-2003, 12:10 AM

Yes Jeanie I had read this like the first day you had it on here and I swear I would have replied but I had to go to band so no she didn't force me to post....I love this and you reallly do need to post more now!

CD DeLorenzo · 08-16-2003, 12:11 PM

Jeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *whines* POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jeanie · 08-22-2003, 02:22 AM

Okay this is dedicated to the one that doesn't have a conceited bone in her body and will gladly tell you all of her qualities at a drop of a hat. The one and only Miranda better known as (#1_Nancy_McKeon)

Hope you all enjoy.

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The sun was just starting to rise on the city as the ambulance pulled up to up to UCSF Medical Center at Mount Zion Emergency room, the E.M.T’s had radioed ahead and there was physicians all ready waiting. The ambulance came to a stop as they opened up the ambulance doors pulling CD out of the stretcher as the E.M.T’s gave the attending physician the stats on CD as Nate came around the side of the ambulance watching them take CD into the hospital while the second ambulance pulled up no sirens going, just silence as they pulled up and took the body bag out and headed to the morgue. Nate pulled out his cell phone again and called the Division to let someone at the Division know what had happened to his partner. They were just beginning to let their feelings come out into the open and this has to happen. Why CD? Why now? He heard someone pick up the phone as he relayed the message, “CD DeLorenzo wouldn’t be in today as she was in the hospital fighting for her life. This is her partner and let the acting Captain know that he was also at the hospital waiting to hear any word on his partner.” He quickly disconnected the call heading into the emergency entrance to wait for any news on CD.

The morning light was shinning thru the curtains showing lightly on the bed where Jinny was starting to stir. Jinny opened her eyes a crack as she looked at the sun shining thru the curtains as she sits up she thinks man the last year just seems to have flown by. She hears water running in the bathroom knowing her husband was already up and taking a shower, he must have shut off the alarm. Jinny rises out of the bed and heads for the shower to join her husband of 1 year in there. She still hasn't had a chance to tell him about the little bundle of joy that was on the way as he was sleeping already when she got home last night. Jinny walks in the bathroom letting the shirt fall around her ankles as she sees her husband's form thru the curtain. Walking to the shower she opens the curtain and enters the tub, putting her arms around her husband as she runs her hands over his chest saying seductively in his ear, "Can I help you with that."

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 08-22-2003, 02:25 AM

YEAH!!

*Bows... bows... catches the flowers thrown on stage* Thank you... really. You're making me blush...

Post again... and dedicate it to me. (It worked last time.) LOL

TLC4Whitney · 08-22-2003, 11:14 AM

More Please!!!!

08-10-2003, 09:40 PM	#3
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08-10-2003, 09:46 PM	#4
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Yay! claps Continue... I know you have more written...Looks at you
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08-10-2003, 10:55 PM	#5
ks Certifiably Insane Forum Veteran Join Date: Dec 21, 2000 Location: I live in my hole... Posts: 5,501	Yes! This beats waitin' til January. More please! ks
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08-12-2003, 12:03 AM	#8
Sweetchild2005 Nancy McKeon Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 29, 2002 Location: At my house in a room...with NO green carpet! Posts: 493	See Cat...i'm here!!! This is really good and you realllllllly need to post!!!!!!!
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08-22-2003, 11:14 AM	#15
TLC4Whitney WhitneyHoustons#1Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 04, 2003 Location: California Posts: 181	More Please!!!!
	__________________ I love Miss. Diva Extraordinare Whitney Houston!! She is incredibly talented, beautiful and MY IDOL and if you dont like her, than you can kiss my ass!!! "Love Me or Leave Me, But Love Me, Because I Love You" ~~~ Whitney Houston Diane: Can I ask you how much you weight? Whitney: Sure... Diane: How much do you weight? Whitney: I 'aint telling you... Will and Grace is the best show on television! Megan Mullally, Debra Messing, Sean Hayes and Eric McCormack make up the greatest cast in the history of television!

08-10-2003, 09:34 PM	#1
Jeanie Jinny & Theodore Fan Forum Regular Join Date: Nov 12, 2000 Location: NE Posts: 910	Confrontation Well here is my season premiere for the fourth season: ____________________________________________________ Looking inside the tiny apartment window Migel saw two ladies laying there with guns and blood all over the place, Migel notices that someone is entering the apartment, it is a man mid thirties. Was this the guy who shot these two coming back to see if the job was finished. Migel got up and ran to get help for these two women laying there bleeding profusely. Back in the apartment Nate took out his cell phone as he called for an ambulance bending down to check if his partner was breathing, waiting for someone to answer his call, glad that he had called to see if CD went back to the station after visiting Gina. Finding out that Gina had died and Cap had told Nate of Liz’s involvement. He found a shallow pulse as he said, “Come on CD stay with me help is on the way.” He glanced over at Liz laying on the floor and all the blood surrounding her. The voice came on “911 what is your emergency?” Nate replied, “I have two officers down at 2858 Green Street. One of the officers is my partner and the other is a marshall. My partner has a pulse haven’t checked the other yet. Get someone here now.”

08-10-2003, 09:38 PM	#2
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	welll that isnt nice....just stopping there...add more! PLEASE! I KNO UR ON

08-11-2003, 11:59 PM	#7
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	awww Jeanie, please come online and post more!

08-12-2003, 12:06 AM	#9
Sweetchild2005 Nancy McKeon Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 29, 2002 Location: At my house in a room...with NO green carpet! Posts: 493	Oh yeah I forgot to mention.........NOW!!!!!!

08-12-2003, 12:07 AM	#10
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	yes! See! and I swear I just asked her if she read it already!

08-12-2003, 12:10 AM	#11
Sweetchild2005 Nancy McKeon Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 29, 2002 Location: At my house in a room...with NO green carpet! Posts: 493	Yes Jeanie I had read this like the first day you had it on here and I swear I would have replied but I had to go to band so no she didn't force me to post....I love this and you reallly do need to post more now!

08-16-2003, 12:11 PM	#12
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	Jeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee whines POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

08-22-2003, 02:22 AM	#13
Jeanie Jinny & Theodore Fan Forum Regular Join Date: Nov 12, 2000 Location: NE Posts: 910	Okay this is dedicated to the one that doesn't have a conceited bone in her body and will gladly tell you all of her qualities at a drop of a hat. The one and only Miranda better known as (#1_Nancy_McKeon) Hope you all enjoy. ____________________________________________________ The sun was just starting to rise on the city as the ambulance pulled up to up to UCSF Medical Center at Mount Zion Emergency room, the E.M.T’s had radioed ahead and there was physicians all ready waiting. The ambulance came to a stop as they opened up the ambulance doors pulling CD out of the stretcher as the E.M.T’s gave the attending physician the stats on CD as Nate came around the side of the ambulance watching them take CD into the hospital while the second ambulance pulled up no sirens going, just silence as they pulled up and took the body bag out and headed to the morgue. Nate pulled out his cell phone again and called the Division to let someone at the Division know what had happened to his partner. They were just beginning to let their feelings come out into the open and this has to happen. Why CD? Why now? He heard someone pick up the phone as he relayed the message, “CD DeLorenzo wouldn’t be in today as she was in the hospital fighting for her life. This is her partner and let the acting Captain know that he was also at the hospital waiting to hear any word on his partner.” He quickly disconnected the call heading into the emergency entrance to wait for any news on CD. The morning light was shinning thru the curtains showing lightly on the bed where Jinny was starting to stir. Jinny opened her eyes a crack as she looked at the sun shining thru the curtains as she sits up she thinks man the last year just seems to have flown by. She hears water running in the bathroom knowing her husband was already up and taking a shower, he must have shut off the alarm. Jinny rises out of the bed and heads for the shower to join her husband of 1 year in there. She still hasn't had a chance to tell him about the little bundle of joy that was on the way as he was sleeping already when she got home last night. Jinny walks in the bathroom letting the shirt fall around her ankles as she sees her husband's form thru the curtain. Walking to the shower she opens the curtain and enters the tub, putting her arms around her husband as she runs her hands over his chest saying seductively in his ear, "Can I help you with that."

08-22-2003, 02:25 AM	#14
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	YEAH!! Bows... bows... catches the flowers thrown on stage Thank you... really. You're making me blush... Post again... and dedicate it to me. (It worked last time.) LOL