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Hi. I'm new to this board so please tell me what you think.
(We start this off at Nate's apartment. Drops his keys on the table) "I thought she loved me. We seemed like a good match." (answering machine) 'You have 1 new message' (beep) 'Hello. This is Dr. Ryans. I'm looking for Mr. Nate Basso. We found an in case of emergency card in Candace DeLorenzo's pocket. Please call Mercy hospital right away. Thank you.' "OH GOD!! What happend?? I have to get over there right away." "Hello. I'm Nate Basso. I'm looking for Dr. Ryans." "I'll get her for you. You can wait in the waiting room." "OK, just please hurry." "Nate Basso?" "Yes. I'm Nate" "Hi. I'm Dr. Ryans. I treated Candace DeLorenzo when she came in. "What happend??" "She was shot in the chest. We think she got into an argument with another officer who was found in the aprtment with her." "Is she going to be alright??" "She is about to go into surgery to get the bullet out. We won't know anything until then." "Thank you." (Nate had called Kate, Jinny, Magda, and Raina. They all came to the hospital.) Please tell me how it is s far. If its good I'll continue.
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yeah, keep it up.
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oooh continue!
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I love Miss. Diva Extraordinare Whitney Houston!! She is incredibly talented, beautiful and MY IDOL and if you dont like her, than you can kiss my ass!!! "Love Me or Leave Me, But Love Me, Because I Love You" ~~~ Whitney Houston Diane: Can I ask you how much you weight? Whitney: Sure... Diane: How much do you weight? Whitney: I 'aint telling you... Will and Grace is the best show on television! Megan Mullally, Debra Messing, Sean Hayes and Eric McCormack make up the greatest cast in the history of television! |
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TRACEY FOREVER!!!
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yeah ha! more!
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RIP Amadeus ![]() http://www.livejournal.com/users/cd_delorenzo/ http://www.livejournal.com/users/sfpd_cd/ - join the LJ TD RPG |
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Hey, welcome!! And yes, post more!!!!!
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WOW!! I never expected to get this many replies...I'll write some more.
Raina: Hey Nate. How's CD doing? Nate: She is in surgery. They won't know anything until she gets out though. Kate: All we have to do is hope and pray. Jinny: How about Magda and me go to Liz's apartment and see if anyone saw anything. Magda: That's a good idea. We'll be back soon. Nate: Thanks guys. (At Liz's apartment) Jinny: Oh my gosh. Look at this place. What the hell happend? Magda: Let's start knocking on some doors. Jinny: Hello Mister. I am Inspector Exstead. This is my partner Inspector Ramirez. We are investigating the crime that has been commited here tonight at apartment 6B. Did you see or hear anything? Neighbor: Well, let's see. I'm the pest around here so I hear everything that goes on around here. What have you got to offer? Money would be nice. Maybe some jewlery? Jinny: OK, listen up. If you don't tell me what went on here you are going to be considered an accompliss. Now, is that what you want? You talking about jail time here. Neighbor: GEEZ..must be her time of the month. Well, they were talking about this girl named Gina and Liz said she skilled Gina by an injection into her IV. Then Liz pulled out a gun and pointed it at CD. Then CD threw something at Liz. Liz shot but missed. CD shot and hit Liz, then before Liz went down, she shot CD. That's all I know. Magda: Wait, if you only listened in, how could you see that? Neighbor: Oh, I'm also the spy of the place. I look in peekholes. Jinny: Yeah, OK. You need to come down to the station and make a formal statement. Neighbor: Yeah, whatever. (he left) Jinny: Oh my god. Look at all the blood. Magda: I know. You really think you know someone. Jinny: Let's get back to the hospital. (back at the hospital) Nate: Hey guys. What did you find out? Jinny: Well, it looks like CD shot Liz before Liz shot her. Liz also killed Gina, one of the three convicts that escaped. Magda: Liz died from CD's shot. Nate: That's my girl! (wiping a tear away) Jinny: OOHH....excuse me. (goes to the bathroom) Kate: Is she alright? Magda... Magda: OK. I'll go check on her. Raina: I'm going to go find out what's going on. Kate: Nate, are you alright? Nate: Of course I'm not alright. Why... Kate: I know it's hard. She's my friend too. Nate: She is more than a friend. Kate: I know. (In the bathroom) Magda: Jin, are you alright? Jinny: (coughing) yeah...ooh...i'm fine. Magda: Are you sure? Jinny: Yeah. (comes out of stall) Magda: God Jin, you look like hell. Jinny: Gee, thanks! Magda: You know what I meant. Now, what's going on? Jinny: Well, you know that night before Jack left? Magda: Yeah, you said that that was the best sex you have ever had in your life. Jinny: Well, I think he left me a goodbye present. Magda: You mean? Jinny: Yeah, I think I'm pregnant. (back in the waiting room) Raina: CD is out of surgery. The doctor will be out soon to talk to us. Nate: What if it's bad news? What if... Kate: Nate, what if its good news? Nate: Yeah, you're right. Kate: Jinny, are you OK? Jinny: Yeah I'm fine. Magda: Yes, just too much fun the other night!!!! (Magda chuckles) Jinny: MAGDA!!!!! Kate: What was that supposed to mean? Jinny: Nothing. (looks at Magda) ABSOLUTELY NOTHING!!! Surgeon: Who's here for Candace DeLorenzo? Nate: Is she going to be alright? Surgeon: I am afraid I've got some bad news. Nate: Oh GOSH..... How is it coming???
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TRACEY FOREVER!!!
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AHHHHHHHHHHHH DON'T STOP THERE!!!! BAD NEWS??? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Not bad news!!!!!!!!!!!!!AAAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGHHHH
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MORE!! this is great
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omg! jinnys gonna be a mommy! and jacks gonna have to come back! yay!- in a sadish kinda way....
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You got it.
Kate: Give it to us straight. Surgeon: We got the bullet out in time. But during the surgery, she slipped into a coma. There is no telling how long she will be in this coma or if she will come out of it. I'm so sorry. Nate: (sits down and sobs) Surgeon: However, there is a special surgery that we can perform that might bring her out of this but let's wait to do that. She has been through alot. Kate: Can we see her? Surgeon: In about an hour you can come in. Sometimes just talking to the patient helps. Nate: Thank you. Surgeon: If you need me you know where to find me. (they all sit down and start talking) Jinny: Excuse me!!!! (runs to the bathroom) Kate: OK Magda. What the hell is wrong with her????? Magda: Nothing. Just had some bad Chinese food last night. Kate: Uh huh. (Jinny comes back out) Raina: Are you alright? Jinny: Yes, why does everyone keep asking me that. It's just the flu. Kate: Magda told me it was the Chinese food last night. Jinny: What? I hate Chi...Yeah, uh, Chinese. Right. Nurse: You can all see her now. (CD's room) Nate: oh...she looks so helpless. (tears in his eyes) Jinny: Oh, don't worry about her! She is a tough old broad. She'll make it through fine. (tears start coming in her eyes) Excuse me...(again runs to the bathroom) Raina: She does know that there is a can right here. Jinny: (peeks her head in the door) Magda, come here for a minute, please? Magda: Yeah? Jinny: I don't think I'm supposed to be this nauseated. I'm going to see one of the doctors here. Magda: Want me to come with you? You were there for me when I had my scare. Jinny: I thought you would never ask. Magda: Cap, Jin and I will be right back. We have to go do something really quick OK? Kate: OK. Raina: There is something fishy going on there. Nate: Maybe we should talk to her. The doctor said it would help. Kate: Let's give it a try. Nate: Hey partner. You trying to get some attention or something? We all miss you. Just please..(sobs)...wake up. Please? Oh, I can't do this. Nurse: Hi. I'm sorry to intrude but the surgeon knows it's soon but he has an opening at 9:00 tomorrow morning if you want to do the surgery. Nate: Could we have a minute? Nurse: Sure. I'll be in soon. Nate: Well? Kate: I think we should do it. Whatever we have to do to save her life. Nate: OK. I'll go tell the nurse. (Meanwhile, Jinny's exam) Doctor: Well, Miss Exstead, we'll just draw some blood and see if you're pregnant, OK? Jinny: Whatever you have to. Magda: You scared? Jinny: Very. Doctor: OK. There we go. We'll have the results soon. Where will you be? Jinny: We are visiting a friend upstairs. I'll be there for awhile. But if you see me there, don't say it out loud. Just call me out to the hall or something OK? Doctor: Well, a nurse will be coming up but I will be sure to tell her ok? Jinny: Thank you very much. (Next morning. CD is in surgery) Nate: I have never been so scred in my life. Kate: Everything will be just fine. Jinny: Absolutely. There is nothing to worry about. Nurse: Jinny Exstead? Jinny: Yes that's me. Nurse: I have you test result. Jinny: Well, let's go out.. Nurse: You are indeed pregnant. You should visit with your OBGYN to see how far along you are. Jinny: (with a very disgusted look on her face) Thank you. Nurse: No problem. Raina: Jinny? Kate: uh... Jinny: Excuse me. Nate: Magda? What's going on. I thought Jack left for Tousan? Magda: Well, Jack stayed over Jinny's house the night before he left. They had alot of goodbye to say. Kate: Well, I thought I lived to see everything, but Jinny, a mom. That's scary. (they all start laughing) Jinny: Are you done talking about me? Raina: When were you going to tell us? Jinny: Well, Raina, you found out when I did. Gosh, me, a mom. that's scary isn't it? (they all start laughing again) Doctor: Nate Basso? Nate: Yes. Doctor: She is out of surgery. Nate: And??? That might be all I'm writing for the night. If I get alot of replies after this, I will write one more for the night. So if you want to see what happens...WRITE WRITE WRITE!!! |
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me want more!!!!!
!MMMMMOOORREEE!! tonight!! |
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More TONIGHT!!!!!!
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pleeeeeeeeease write more! I am soooooooo hooked!
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OK OK. You've convinced me.
Doctor: I expect Candace to make a full recovery. Nate: THANK YOU GOD!!! Doctor: Now, we won't know anything until she come to but, I have high hopes. Kate: Can we go into her room and sit with her? Doctor: Sure. We'll get her settled into her room and then call you in. Nate: Thank you so much. Doctor: You are very welcome. (CD's room) Raina: Man, this has been a long day. Magda: It sure has. Jinny wanna get something to eat? Jinny: I would love to. (cafeteria) Magda: Wow. What a confusing week this is turning out to be. Jinny: Sure is. Hey, listen Mag, I have an appointment with my OBGYN today and I was sort of wondering... Magda: If I would go with you? Jinny: Well... Magda: Jinny, I would love to go with you. Jinny: Well, if you insist. Magda: Ha ha ha. (Jinny's examination room) Doctor: Why don't we do an ultrsound and see how your baby is? Would your friend like to stay? Jinny: Only if she wants to. Magda: Are you kidding?? I wouldn't miss this for the world. Doctor: OK. It looks like you are about 12 weeks along. And...wait a minute. Jinny: What? What's wrong?? Doctor: Nothing. I am pleased to tell you I hear not one but two heartbeats. Jinny: Wha...twins?? Magda: Oh Jinny. I am so happy for you. Jinny: (happy tears starting to appear) Doctor: Why don't we take some pictures of your babies. Jinny: Ok. (CD's room) Raina: Jinny. How was your meeting? Jinny: I didn't go to a meeting. Well, I.....Should I tell them? Magda: Go ahead. Jinny: I had an appointment with my OBGYN and it looks like I will be having twins. (they all go over to hug her) CD: Ooooh. (moans) What? Where? Nate: CD!! NURSE NURSE!!!! Kate: CD, do you know where you are? CD: The hospital. Where's Liz?? She...she kiled Gina. Kate: We know. Don't worry about it. CD: Where's Nate? Jinny: He's gone to get the doctor. CD: I heard twins. Someone said something about...twins? Jinny: Yeah, I'm having twins. CD: WOW. Congrats Jinny. Nate: She just woke up. Doctor: welcome back Candace. Can I have a minute alone with her. Kate: Sure. We'll be right outside CD. (waiting room) Jinny: I'll be right back. Raina: Gee, wonder where she's going. (Receptionist desk) Jinny: Is there a private phone I could use? Receptionist: Yes. In room 218. It's empty. Jinny: Can you call long distance on it? Receptionist: It all depends. Where are you calling? Jinny: Tousan. Well, I'm done for the night. I will continue tomorrow. Nighty night everyone! Please tell me how I'm doing!!!!!! |
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