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TRACEY FOREVER!!!
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Alrighty... yet another one lol. I wrote this together with my twinny a couple of weeks ago after 'Thus With A Kiss I Die' aired. (and at that time neither of us had seen it yet) so... oh well. LOL It turned out pretty soap opera-ish. But it's just for fun, right? So here it goes...
Disclaimers: The Division belongs to DJL and Lifetime and they better not do anything stupid there! This story's is set right after the kiss between CD and Nate in the hospital. feedback please: Britta - thruma17@aol.com & cat - cat2014@web.de CB Twinny Productions proudly presents the soap opera of the year: COMPLICATIONS Lily arrived at the hospital a little upset still. But Magda had asked her to pick her up so she had agreed. But when she got there Magda was nowhere in sight. Instead she had to grin when she saw a couple smooching in the middle of the hospital. But her grin faded as soon as she realized who that was. "What the hell?" She called out and pulled Nate away from CD. "Lily?" Nate asked his 'ex', still in surprise about CD's reaction. Not that he hadn't liked her response but she still took him by surprise. That was the best answer she could have given. CD looked at Lily rather shocked. She knew she and Nate had broken up earlier but she knew what this must have looked like to her. "So let me get this straight." Lily glared at Nate. "You're doing her already? Since when?" "Lily, you're getting this wrong. It's not what it looks like. Believe me!" Nate tried to explain looking at CD begging her for help. CD nodded. "Yeah. He's not 'doing me'." She mocked her. "He was just... no actually I was... we were... nothing." She didn't know what to say "Nothing? He was giving you a more intense tonsils examination than any of the doctors here would!" She glared at them. "Lily, believe me. Nothing like this happened during our relationship. We were just ... uhm ... talking." Yeah, what actually were they doing until Lily showed up? Nate didn't even know either. "Talking..." Lily looked at him in disbelief. "I saw your lips were moving, but I didn't actually hear a word!" "Lily, please believe him." CD spoke up again. "I'm the one who started that... he told me he broke up with you and I..." "You damn bitch!" Lily was furious and attemted to slug her with her purse. "Hey whoa!" CD saw that quick enough and caught the purse. At that a little box fell ot of it and straight into CD's hands. She looked down at it and read that what she was holding there was a pregnancy test. Shocked she looked at Lily and then at Nate. |
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The One and Only
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Yay!! Post more even though I have already read it. lol (See I help everyone else out. lol)
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TRACEY FOREVER!!!
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LOL daaaaamn, I need to stop giving you this stuff to read. lol but okay. Cuz I'm all nice... (and innocent *smirk*) here's sum more.
**************************************************** "No Lily, stop!" Nate didn't want her to blame CD for this. He was the one to blame. He stepped between the two women. "Go Lily, just go. That would be the best for you. Leave me and CD alone! We have nothing in common anymore. It's over and you won't change it by behaving like a bitch." Then he too saw what CD was holding in her hands. He too was shocked and looked over at Lily. What if she was pregnant now and he was the father? That would make things even worse than they were already. Lily grinned at them as she too saw what had slipped out of her purse. She looked at CD. "What? Didn't he tell you why he broke up? He wants me to have an abortion and he threatened me when I refused. I said I'm gonna have it no matter what, so he said fine and he could easily get into your pants as well, that he didn't need me anymore." "What?" CD couldn't believe what she was hearing there and looked at Nate and then at Lily who put her hands over her belly protectively. "Lily, stop that!" He turned to CD. "Please believe me CD. Nothing like that happened. You know me, don't you? And I don't just want to get 'into you pants'. She's just saying that because she's angry at me and you!" His eyes emphasized the words he said and he hoped CD would believe him. Lily started to cry at that and slapped him. "I hate you so much!" She sobbed. "Break up with me, fine, but how can you do that to your baby?" She kept on crying and ran away. Nate sat down. That was too much for him. He was about to lose the woman he really loved, because CD would surely believe Lily. CD still looked at him shocked. After a moment she finally found her voice again. "Well congratulations daddy." She said calmly and pushed the box into his hands and walked away, not sure what had just happened here or whom to believe now. "CD, please wait." He ran after her. He wouldn't just give in. But she just walked faster. "CD" He stepped into her way and faced her. "Please, I'm sure that it is just another of Lily's games. She's always been jealous of you and I didn't even know about her pregnancy. I'm sure she isn't even pregnant because we always used protection and she was on the pill too!" She glared at him. "What the hell do you expect me to say now? 'Sure, of course, forget her, let's go to my place and hit the sheets'?" "No, no. I don't want you to do anything you don't want to. I just want you to think about it and please come to a conclusion fast now, please." His eyes begged her. Then he turned and went into the other direction. Nate was sure that she would need some time alone and so would he. But in the meantime he also wanted to talk to Lily. "This is a nightmare. Somebody please wake me up." CD whispered to herself and blinked the tears away that were threatening to show. |
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Aww!!! Please post more!!...And soon!!!
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Dammit, I HATE Lily!!! And, of course, post more NOW!!!!!
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ahhhh yes! Welcome to the lily hater club! We hate lily too! actually we hate magda as well. We hate the ramirez whores sisters. Yessssss... ehhh.... anyhow. **************************************************** Down in the parking lot Nate met Lily. Furious he walked over to her. "What did you think you were doing up there?" "You have one helluva nerve to ask me that!" She glared at him. "Yes I have. So what was this all about? We broke up, remember and I can do what ever I want. And you aren't pregnant, right?" He said angrily. "You broke up with me. I never said I'm okay with that! I want you back and I'm gonna fight for you. I already told your little bitch she'd get a fight if she'd try something." Lily was furious. "She's not a bitch. The only bitch around here is standing opposite of me! Don't try anything on CD or you will get to know me!" Nate said stepping closer. "Oh yeah?" She glared at him even more. "Whatcha wanna do? Hit a pegnant woman, huh?" She pushed him, hoping to get him angry enough to actually hit her. "You're not pregnant, remember?" He was about to hit her but then he stopped himself from doing that because of what CD would think then. It would give Lily just more she could use on making him and CD drift apart. "How do you wanna know? Maybe I wasn't using the pill. And you remember that one time where we were drunk? We didn't use a condom then!" She smirked at him. It was true, they hadn't used a condom, but just because she had gotten Nate so drunk that he passed out and it was hard to use a condom when nothing happened in the first place. But he didn't remember that and she wanted to win no matter what. "I can't remember any time we didn't use protection. But that doesn't matter anymore. We both walk in the hospital again right now and have you checked and I'll ask the doctor for the results. And if you're not pregnant then help you God!" He took her arm and pushed her in the hospital. Lily started to scream and yell for help at that. "He's hurting me! somebody help me please!" "Lily, stop it!" Angrily he pulled her to a doctor. "Doctor, I need you to check her if she's pregnant. I could be the dad." The Doc nodded and looked at Lily. "Would you please follow me?" Lily nodded and followed him. Once inside the room she sat down and smiled at him sweetly and started to undress. "I'm sure you're gonna find out that I'm pregnant...." She winked at him, hoping she could seduce him. "Yeah, Ma'am. And you'll be a happy family then. So let's start!" The Doc said with a huge grin. She smirked and laid back on the table. "Get it on doc." |
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lol It is very good please continue can't wait til you get to a certain part. lol
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Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy? Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic. Teddy: Well, you do give good organic. <marquee> Jinny and Theodore together forever </marquee>Check out our websites Miranda and mine that is my partner. Hope you enjoy. Division S.F.P.D In Honor of Nancy McKeon Jay’s Fan Connection |
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Eww Lily, shes making me mad...K well anyway POST MORE
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More more mmmmmmmmmooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And i H-A-T-E Lily
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TRACEY FOREVER!!!
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Huh? In this one? I think you mean a certain part in another fanfic, or? If you really mean this one, I'm so confused now. okay here's more though **************************************************** Meanwhile CD leaned against a wall for a moment to regain her composure somewhat. That kiss had been so wonderful but Lily had destroyed it all. Magda and Jinny walked inside again and saw CD leaning against a wall. "Hey CD, where's Nate?" Magda asked "Going to hell if he knows what's best for him." CD muttered. "Huh?" Jinny was surprised. Normally CD spoke differently about Nate. "Everything alright?" "Yeah... no... nevermind." She sighed. Magda shrugged. "Hey have you seen my sister by chance? Lily was supposed to pick us..." Before she could finish her sentence CD threw her hands up in the air, grumbled and walked away from them. "I wonder what that was about!" Jinny said and followed her. "Hey, wait. What's wrong?" "Nothing. Everything's wonderful. Nate and Lily are having a baby and I just found out and am happy for them." She said, not sounding one bit happy though. "Uhm, you're getting something wrong here. It's Magda we worry about. She could be pregnant but not Lily." Jinny answered. CD frowned and suddenly it all made sense. "And she was supposed to pick you up here... with a pregnancy test?" Magda walked up to Jinny and CD. "So have you seen Lily or not?" She asked impatiently. "She has something that I really need." "Wrong. Nate has that now. But I don't know where he is either. But this is a hospital Magda." CD said. "Well thanks for pointing that out. I thought it's a giant Burger King" Magda rolled her eyes. CD looked at her because Magda didn't get it. "Hello? Sold your brain or what?" Jinny grinned. "Well, Magda. CD's right, you could get checked here. Don't you even know a doc here?" Then she turned to CD. "Lily was supposed to get her pregnancy test and it's very urgent." Magda glared at CD. "Watch it!" But then she nodded at Jinny. "Good idea actually." CD rolled her eyes. "Hey can you wait a minute maybe and give us a ride seeing my sister can't be found?" Magda asked CD. She sighed and nodded. "Yeah, sure." She didn't feel like playing taxi for Magda but Jinny was her friend no matter whatever both Ramirez sisters were up to again. And Jinny already looked like Magda was driving her insane. |
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so is it gonna be a happy ending? is it? is it?! MUST HAVE MORE !
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MOREEEEEEEE
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TRACEY FOREVER!!!
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Here's some more
![]() **************************************************** When the doc was finished he told Lily to put back on her clothes. "I'm sorry but family has to wait. But you're 'pregnant'." He grinned. It has been pretty pleasant with this woman just as it had been with Magda. She grinned at him and put her clothes back on again. "I knew it." They both went outside and the doc told Nate: "Congratulations, you're gonna be daddy!" Nate was shocked. He couldn't explain this to himself. "But how?" "How? Did ya skip classes in biology so often?" Lily grinned triumphantly. "You ****ed me, that's how." "What?" Magda asked as they walked around the corner. She saw her sister and had overheard the rest of the conversation and then saw her current affair standing next to them too. Nate was pretty shocked. This couldn't be true. And then he saw CD in the corridor with a sad look on her face. He managed to part them before they even were together. He was such an idiot. Looking in CD's eyes he saw the pain and his eyes were trying to tell her "I'm sorry.". Also Jinny was very surprised. How could Lily just be pregnant? The doctor was shocked when he saw Magda coming down the corridor. "Uhm, I gotta go." Magda saw him first though. "Jonah!" She called out and rushed up to him. "Oh, uhm, hi Magda. How are you doing?" Jonah said uncomfortably. CD looked at Nate and then at Lily. "You little lying piece of ****!" She glared at her. "Hey, pay attention to how you talk to me. I'm pregnant with Nate's baby and you don't wanna hurt it, do you?" Lily smirked at CD. "Oh really? Where's the proof?" CD asked, stepping in front of Nate to show she was on his side completely now. "Because he just ****ed me like the world's end was tomorrow!" Lily grinned brightly not to show that she was upset with the current turn of events. She'd thought CD wouldn't be on Nates side anymore. "Yeah, but we used protection!" Nate added getting strength from CD's support. 'This is getting very interesting.' Jinny thought to herself unsure which way too look because both confrontations were getting suspenseful. "I'm caught in a soap opera." She muttered to herself as she glanced to Magda who now grinned at Jonah. "Actually... " She then reached for Jinny. "My friend here thinks she's pregnant. And we need a pregnancy test." "HEY!" Jinny protested at that. CD glared at Lily and then was shortly distracted by Jinny's protest. "What's going on here? A friggin baby boom?" "Uhm, so you want a test for your friend here?" Jonah looked irritated at Magda. "Well then, Ma'am, please follow me!" he finally said to Jinny. "Actually she's kind of shy and she wants me to stay with her." Magda spoke up again. "How about you give us the test and then she can pee on it and we give it back to you?" Jinny made a face. "No way! I'm not going to do that! I don't want that test!" Nate looked over to Jinny and whispered to CD: "What's Mag up to? Jinny and shy? Not the Jinny I know!" "That would be fine too!" Jonah turned to get a test. "I'll be back in a minute!" CD chuckled. "Ya know what? This is getting funny" She whispered back to Nate "Yeah, actually ... " But he was interrupted by Lily. "Hey, stop talking. We have to buy some baby clothing and get rid of that slut!" She glanced at CD. "Lily!" Nate protested. Magda nudged Jinny. "He can't know it's me! We go to the ladies room together, I pee on it and you give it to him!" "Ewwww, I'm not gonna watch you do that!" Jinny protested. Jonah got back and handed Jinny the test. "Here you go, I'm in my office!" Jinny handed Magda the test. "I'll just wait here. Seeing I'm so shy you can give it to him." |
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