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Old 08-05-2003, 10:58 PM   #1
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Ok well it has been about 3 days since the show aired and im still depressed. So i decided to write through my pain even if it does suck! lol So here we go! This is what it would have been like if that witch Whatsherface RUE wouldnt have come in! UGGG i hate her!

***8:45pm***
Nate was starting to get impatient. <shes already 15 min. late> he thought looking at his watch for the umpteenth time since he got to the little italian place on polk 30 min. ago. CD rushed in the door. Nate stood as he saw her aproching. "Oh God Nate im sorry!" she said walking towards him. "I thought you changed your mind" he said feeling relieved that she hadnt. "No actually i just couldnt figure out what to wear" "Your wearing the same thing you wore to work today" Nate laughed. CD looked down at her pink shirt. "You look beautiful" He said leaning in and kissing her on the cheeck. "Sit down" he motioned to the chair as he pulled it out for her. "MMMmmm who knew you were such a gentleman!" CD exclaimed. Just then the waiter came up "Could i offer ya'll some fine wine sir?" The sharply dressed waiter asked. "Yes, the best wine you got please" Nate said smiling at CD. CD smiled back as the waiter left. Silence fell over the pair. "Kinda weird huh?" Nate said. "Ya, but this is wonderful Nate! This place is gorgeous." CD reached across the table and put her hand ontop of his. "You think anyone knows about us?" Nate asked. "I dunno...I dont care, im just glad theirs an US" CD said smiling. "Me too" Nate looked out the window and CD's eyes followed."Hey! Its raining" CD said. "Sure is, and im sharing it with you" Nate said thinking of their conversation the day before.
***9:45***
CD and Nate walked out of the little italian place on polk hand in hand. "The rain stopped, wanna take a walk" Nate turned and asked CD "Sure" she smiled. The two walked silent hand in hand down the road to the little park they were at earlier that week. "Lets go sit at the table" CD motioned him towards the green table. They sat down side by side "Deja vu" Nate chuckled. CD turned and looked at him. <is this real? The man i have loved for so long... sitting next to me?> CDs thoughts were interupted by Nates hand on her chin. "Whacha thinkin?" Nate asked. She sighed and looked down at her hands. "How this has to be to good to be true. That this isnt real. That i dont deserve this" CD said in one breath. Nate got off the table and stood infront of her. Cupping her face in his hands he said "This IS real CD. Its not to good to be true because if it was it wouldnt feel like this. And as for you not deserving this...We have BOTH been hurt in our lives, After all that we've been through, together and apart, we DESERVE EACH OTHER. You deserve someone who will love you everyday, every second. You deserve someone that looks at you and melts. You deserve someone who knows what your feeling cuz they can see it in your beautiful blue eyes. Thats ME CD You deserve me! And i deserve you. This HAS to be real, Because if its not, If this is FAKE, Then i dont want to be real. Me and you will live forever in fakeness" Nate chuckled. Tears began falling from CDs blue eyes. Nate pulled her close and she embraced him.

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Old 08-05-2003, 11:04 PM   #2
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MMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEE!!! This is awesome and I'm so peeved at Lifetime... I mean, it's not like we waited 2 years for that... I can't wait til January...... *sighs* Anyway, this is awesome. More please!
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Old 08-05-2003, 11:41 PM   #3
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This is SO great!!!! Post again really, REALLY soon!!!
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Old 08-06-2003, 03:49 AM   #4
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yeah! Totally! You gotta post more!
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Old 08-06-2003, 06:47 AM   #5
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This is soooooo cute.You MUST post more.Now!
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Old 08-06-2003, 12:03 PM   #6
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This is soooooo cute.You MUST post more.Now!
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Nate leaned in to kiss her and she backed up. "Nu uhh! No kissy kissy on the first date" She smiled as she teased him. He smiled back as he grabbed the back of her head pulling it towards him "I'll show you kissy kissy" He said as their lips met hard and passionatly. Their tongues colided in fury. After a moment they broke apart both breathing heavy Nate took her in his arms. "I love you Candace De Lorenzo" "And i love you Nathan Basso." They stade that way for what seemed like eternity neither wanting to let go for fear of loosing eachother. CD yawed and Nate let go and grabbed her hand. "Come on I'll walk ya home" CD reached up w/ her other hand and gripped his neck and kissed him gently before they walked to CD's house hand in hand. Stopping ever so often to embrace in a moon light kiss under the stars and to take in the reality of their new relationship.

hehe ok well thats all i got for now umm i should be able to post somemore tonight sometime so check back! Cuz next is the GOOD part lol if ya know what i mean!
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Old 08-06-2003, 10:15 PM   #8
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hehe ok well thats all i got for now umm i should be able to post somemore tonight sometime so check back! Cuz next is the GOOD part lol if ya know what i mean!
haha. Gotcha. So come on and bring it on!
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Old 08-07-2003, 08:43 PM   #9
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haha. Gotcha. So come on and bring it on!
Bring it on HUH? You cant handle this! lol Aight.. Aight just cuz you asked for it! ITS ON!!!!!

They stood infront of the door steps to her apartment building. Neither had even thought about what was going to happen once they arrived their. <Should i ask him up, or should we take it slow?> she thought. Nate pulled her into his arms. His head went into the crook of her neck and he planted small kisses all down the right side of her neck. "My heart feels like its about to expload." he said. She moaned in response as he began licking and nipping her neck and earlobe. "Nate" she smiled as he kissed more. "What" he murmered then went back to the task at hand. "Maybe we should go inside" She said pulling back to look him in the eyes. "You sure?" he asked kissing her forhead. She took his hand and led him in the building, through the hall, up the elavator, and into her apartment without saying a word. CD slammed the door shut with her foot as Nate turned around and pinned her up against the door as he began kissing her. She moaned into his mouth. He slid her coat of and it fell to the ground she did the same w/ his. Still kissing him she managed to get his shirt and hers off. So they were skin to skin. He reached around her back and undid her bra and it to fell to the ground. She jumped and wrapped her legs around his waist. He pressed her up against the door more and she felt his hard erection pushing into her. He began to move backwards towards her bedroom. She took his lower lip and sucked on it and he moaned . "You like that" She said "Mmmm" was all he could get out. They reached the bedroom and he flug her on the bed then climber on top of her. He looked at her, her blue eyes glittering and shinning BRIGHT blue. Her blonde hair frizzed from all the action. She nodded her head letting him know it was safe to go on. He kissed her lips gently then made his way down her neck, breast, stomach, belly button, then he unzipped her pants and pulled them down taking the pink thong w/ them. She reached up and slid his pants off letting his boxers follow also. Finally they were flesh to flesh. He began kissing her all over again as she massaged his back and neck and running her hands through his hair. He placed one of his hands on the inside of her thigh mear inchs from her throbbing spot. He jutted a few fingers in and massaged their till she cupped his face in her hands and said "Nate dont be a tease" as they exchanged smiles he slipped himself inside her and they became one. Something they had only dreamed of for 2 years. An hour later they both layed still nacked in each others arms. Neither saying anything but "i love you" as they slowly and gently exchanged kisses. CD felt SAFE like she had told him. No longer did she have to go to bed alone. He was there. He was there to protect her. He wrapped her naked body in his arms and she matched her breathe w/ his and let herself drift off to sleep knowing he would be there when she woke up.

heheh! See told ya you couldnt handle it!!!! lol I hope ya'll like it. I wish they would do it for real! lol Anyone else wish theyw ould? lol
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hah, hey I can handle a lot MORE, so keep on writing.

And what I wish for is that she survives for a beginning *sighs*
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You just HAD to bring that up didnt you! GOSH ! now im so upset i cant post no more! Shes gonna survive she HAS TO! *runs off crying*!! BOOOHOOOO
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Of course she will. *passes box of Kleenex over* I'm still all upset about it too and I haven't even seen it yet!
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What are you waiting for? What do you mean you havent seen it yet?!?!?! Go watch it!
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What are you waiting for? What do you mean you havent seen it yet?!?!?! Go watch it!
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Hell yeah! Give me a tape and I will right away! They don't air Division is this ****ing deprived country where even cow**** sucks!
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Where the hell you at that they dont show the division? And how do you see the division if they dont air it there lol
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