CD/Nate Fic (To Cheer Everyone up From the Finale!) - Sitcoms Online Message Boards

::ActriceDouce:: · 08-04-2003, 01:40 AM

The scene begins in a dimly lit resteraunt. Nate is sitting at a table by the window, looking for CD. Suddenly, his phone rings. He answers it quickly.
"CD?" he says.
"It's Kate," replies Kate, the captain of the SFPD where Nate and CD work as inspectors.
"Hey Captain, what's going on?" he asks, a little annoyed that she'd call at such a time.
"You might want to come to the hospital," Kate replies, "Something happened."
"What?"
"I'll explain when you get here."
Nate hears the dial tone. His pulse raises. He quickly grabs his coat but doesn't bother to put it on as he jumps in the car. He drives off quickly and heads for the nearest hospital. When he gets there he sees Kate sitting near the entrance waiting.
"What happened?" he asks. He notices his voice is shaky and Kate looks upset.
"The new inspector was found dead in her apartment," Kate replies, "The cops found the body after a neighbor heard gunshots and called 911."
"Oh." Nate sighs with relief but sees Kate still looks unnerved.
"There's something else," she says, "CD was also found in the apartment."
"Oh my god, is she alright?" Nate sits in a nearby chair and looks up at Kate.
"They found her unconcious and had surgery to remove the bullet. Though it went well, she hasn't woken up. They think she's in a coma and don't know yet."
"Can I see her?"
"That's why I called you."
"Thanks captain." Nate slowly walks up to a nurse and finds out what room CD is in. He goes in and sees her laying in bed, and for the first time knows in his heart that she's the woman he'll always love. He starts to pull up a chair next to her but instead sits on the edge of her bed. He takes her hand and just watches her. A nurse walks in to give her medication and smiles at him.
"She can hear us," the nurse says, "So talk to her, it might help."
Nate nods and the nurse leaves.
"Hey CD," Nate says, trying to sound normal. "I thought you stood me up. When Kate told me what happened, I got this feeling I'd never had before. I just froze, the tone in her voice...Then when she explained everything I hated that woman so much, the woman that hurt you. Anyone who will stop us from being together doesn't deserve to be alive. They don't deserve happiness. But you do. You have so much left that I'm going to give you. If you could just open your eyes and tell me that we're going to be together for the rest of our lives, I'd love that more then anything in the world."
Nate turns towards the doorway that Kate's leaning on, smiling at them. "Keep going," she says.
"It's my turn," CD replies. He lifts her hand up and pulls Nate in for a kiss. When it's over she kisses him again and asks, "Was that a proposal?"
"Yeah," Nate replies, smiling.
"Then yes, I'll spend the rest of my life with you. I'd love to marry you."
"I don't have a ring yet," Nate says, laughing.
"This'll make it official," CD replies, then they kiss again. Meanwhile Kate walks back into the hallway and the nurse grabs her arm.
"She's awake?" the nurse asks.
"Yes," Kate replies.
"I just got her test results back," the nurse says, "And if she's awake and talking..."
"Don't forget kissing," Kate replies.
"And that," the nurse says, "She's going to be fine."

CD DeLorenzo · 08-04-2003, 01:44 AM

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
*sniff*
that is so *sniff* *passes around Kleenex box*
I love it! Thanks so much!

*Nancy Mckeon* · 08-04-2003, 01:04 PM

!!!!!!YAYY!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!....or was that the end?

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!-k got that out of my system~ oh god! 3 months till a new td! i can't wait that long! i have to know if cd will live! (starts pacing till tha new season)

*MIBabe03* · 08-04-2003, 03:17 PM

I need more!!!!!!!!!!!

planet_stella · 08-04-2003, 04:00 PM

Awwwwwwwwww

this is so........so.........so.........nice. And write continuation. Plese please pleeeease.........

TLC4Whitney · 08-04-2003, 04:19 PM

LOVED IT!!!!!

JDS84 · 08-04-2003, 07:33 PM

This is great! Please post more...

80s90sFanatic · 08-04-2003, 10:24 PM

I really like this story, please continue. I cannot wait for more of the story.

::ActriceDouce:: · 08-04-2003, 11:17 PM

Wow you guys, thanks. I wasn't planning on adding more but I've changed my mind. I'll post again in a few.

::ActriceDouce:: · 08-04-2003, 11:38 PM

I really don't like what I've written for the addition, but I'll try and redo it and post that later.

A few weeks have passed and CD’s close to leaving the hospital and coming home. No one except Kate knows of their plans to get married, but CD wonders if the marriage will take place since only the rest of the division have visted since the night she was shot.

“Hey wait a second,” CD says as Kate and Jinny start to leave. They’ve just been to her room for a couple hours visiting, during which time CD has spent worrying about her relationship with Nate and wishing she could tell someone how she feels. Finally she gives in and explains to Jinny what’s happened.
“But he proposed,” Jinny says, “He’s obviously going to marry you. You two are meant for each other.”
“Then why hasn’t he visited?”
Kate sits next to CD and glances at Jinny. Jinny doesn’t move but after an even longer stare and a strange look from Kate she drops in her chair.
“You only had to ask,” Jinny says.
Kate laughs then turns toward CD, “I’m sure he’s just nervous. He told you exactly how he feels about you, he’s taken away any doubts in your mind that he’s totally in love with you. He’s probably scared that he’ll come back and you’ll tell him ‘Sorry, I was just scared that night and you were there. I didn’t mean what I’d said.’”
“How can I make him believe me?”
“You don’t have to.” Nate steps into the room carrying a boquet of roses.
“Where have you been?” Jinny asks.
“Well,” Nate replies, then looks at Kate, “Either I’m gonna sit on your lap or you’re gonna have to move over.”
“I think I’ll go find another chair,” Kate replies, then coughs while glancing at Jinny, “In the hallway.”
“Oh...right. We’ll be just outside,” Jinny says. She and Kate leave while Nate sits beside CD.
“I wanted to get you these,” Nate says to CD as he hands her the roses. “I heard what Kate said and she was right. But I just have to know...”
“I meant what I said, I want to be with you,” CD replies.
“Good,” Nate says, taking a ring out of his pocket. He slips it on CD’s finger, “I also brought you this.”
As CD looks down at her ring Nate lifts her chin and kisses her.

CD DeLorenzo · 08-04-2003, 11:39 PM

very cute again!

yaya!

TLC4Whitney · 08-04-2003, 11:48 PM

Awww sooo cute...post more!

candace~n~nathan · 08-04-2003, 11:56 PM

This is so great!! Doesn't need to be redone at all!! But...... POST MORE!!!!!!

80s90sFanatic · 08-05-2003, 07:42 AM

I love this story. It doesn't need to be redone. It's prefect so far. I can't wait for more.

*Nancy Mckeon* · 08-05-2003, 03:58 PM

owwwww! that is sooooo sweet!

!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRREEE!!!!!!!!!!!

08-04-2003, 01:40 AM	#1
::ActriceDouce:: ::Martina:: Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 02, 2003 Location: In Harmony... Posts: 181	CD/Nate Fic (To Cheer Everyone up From the Finale!) The scene begins in a dimly lit resteraunt. Nate is sitting at a table by the window, looking for CD. Suddenly, his phone rings. He answers it quickly. "CD?" he says. "It's Kate," replies Kate, the captain of the SFPD where Nate and CD work as inspectors. "Hey Captain, what's going on?" he asks, a little annoyed that she'd call at such a time. "You might want to come to the hospital," Kate replies, "Something happened." "What?" "I'll explain when you get here." Nate hears the dial tone. His pulse raises. He quickly grabs his coat but doesn't bother to put it on as he jumps in the car. He drives off quickly and heads for the nearest hospital. When he gets there he sees Kate sitting near the entrance waiting. "What happened?" he asks. He notices his voice is shaky and Kate looks upset. "The new inspector was found dead in her apartment," Kate replies, "The cops found the body after a neighbor heard gunshots and called 911." "Oh." Nate sighs with relief but sees Kate still looks unnerved. "There's something else," she says, "CD was also found in the apartment." "Oh my god, is she alright?" Nate sits in a nearby chair and looks up at Kate. "They found her unconcious and had surgery to remove the bullet. Though it went well, she hasn't woken up. They think she's in a coma and don't know yet." "Can I see her?" "That's why I called you." "Thanks captain." Nate slowly walks up to a nurse and finds out what room CD is in. He goes in and sees her laying in bed, and for the first time knows in his heart that she's the woman he'll always love. He starts to pull up a chair next to her but instead sits on the edge of her bed. He takes her hand and just watches her. A nurse walks in to give her medication and smiles at him. "She can hear us," the nurse says, "So talk to her, it might help." Nate nods and the nurse leaves. "Hey CD," Nate says, trying to sound normal. "I thought you stood me up. When Kate told me what happened, I got this feeling I'd never had before. I just froze, the tone in her voice...Then when she explained everything I hated that woman so much, the woman that hurt you. Anyone who will stop us from being together doesn't deserve to be alive. They don't deserve happiness. But you do. You have so much left that I'm going to give you. If you could just open your eyes and tell me that we're going to be together for the rest of our lives, I'd love that more then anything in the world." Nate turns towards the doorway that Kate's leaning on, smiling at them. "Keep going," she says. "It's my turn," CD replies. He lifts her hand up and pulls Nate in for a kiss. When it's over she kisses him again and asks, "Was that a proposal?" "Yeah," Nate replies, smiling. "Then yes, I'll spend the rest of my life with you. I'd love to marry you." "I don't have a ring yet," Nate says, laughing. "This'll make it official," CD replies, then they kiss again. Meanwhile Kate walks back into the hallway and the nurse grabs her arm. "She's awake?" the nurse asks. "Yes," Kate replies. "I just got her test results back," the nurse says, "And if she's awake and talking..." "Don't forget kissing," Kate replies. "And that," the nurse says, "She's going to be fine."

08-04-2003, 01:44 AM	#2
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sniff that is so sniff passes around Kleenex box I love it! Thanks so much!
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08-04-2003, 01:04 PM	#3
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08-04-2003, 04:19 PM	#6
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08-04-2003, 04:00 PM	#5
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08-04-2003, 07:33 PM	#7
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08-04-2003, 10:24 PM	#8
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08-04-2003, 11:17 PM	#9
::ActriceDouce:: ::Martina:: Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 02, 2003 Location: In Harmony... Posts: 181	Wow you guys, thanks. I wasn't planning on adding more but I've changed my mind. I'll post again in a few.

08-04-2003, 11:38 PM	#10
::ActriceDouce:: ::Martina:: Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 02, 2003 Location: In Harmony... Posts: 181	I really don't like what I've written for the addition, but I'll try and redo it and post that later. A few weeks have passed and CD’s close to leaving the hospital and coming home. No one except Kate knows of their plans to get married, but CD wonders if the marriage will take place since only the rest of the division have visted since the night she was shot. “Hey wait a second,” CD says as Kate and Jinny start to leave. They’ve just been to her room for a couple hours visiting, during which time CD has spent worrying about her relationship with Nate and wishing she could tell someone how she feels. Finally she gives in and explains to Jinny what’s happened. “But he proposed,” Jinny says, “He’s obviously going to marry you. You two are meant for each other.” “Then why hasn’t he visited?” Kate sits next to CD and glances at Jinny. Jinny doesn’t move but after an even longer stare and a strange look from Kate she drops in her chair. “You only had to ask,” Jinny says. Kate laughs then turns toward CD, “I’m sure he’s just nervous. He told you exactly how he feels about you, he’s taken away any doubts in your mind that he’s totally in love with you. He’s probably scared that he’ll come back and you’ll tell him ‘Sorry, I was just scared that night and you were there. I didn’t mean what I’d said.’” “How can I make him believe me?” “You don’t have to.” Nate steps into the room carrying a boquet of roses. “Where have you been?” Jinny asks. “Well,” Nate replies, then looks at Kate, “Either I’m gonna sit on your lap or you’re gonna have to move over.” “I think I’ll go find another chair,” Kate replies, then coughs while glancing at Jinny, “In the hallway.” “Oh...right. We’ll be just outside,” Jinny says. She and Kate leave while Nate sits beside CD. “I wanted to get you these,” Nate says to CD as he hands her the roses. “I heard what Kate said and she was right. But I just have to know...” “I meant what I said, I want to be with you,” CD replies. “Good,” Nate says, taking a ring out of his pocket. He slips it on CD’s finger, “I also brought you this.” As CD looks down at her ring Nate lifts her chin and kisses her.

08-04-2003, 11:39 PM	#11
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	very cute again! yaya!

08-04-2003, 11:48 PM	#12
TLC4Whitney WhitneyHoustons#1Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 04, 2003 Location: California Posts: 181	Awww sooo cute...post more!

08-04-2003, 11:56 PM	#13
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	This is so great!! Doesn't need to be redone at all!! But...... POST MORE!!!!!!

08-05-2003, 07:42 AM	#14
80s90sFanatic Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 19, 2003 Posts: 123	I love this story. It doesn't need to be redone. It's prefect so far. I can't wait for more.

08-05-2003, 03:58 PM	#15
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	owwwww! that is sooooo sweet! !!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRREEE!!!!!!!!!!!