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HIGH ENOUGH · 07-28-2003, 09:04 AM

This show is about what if Blair and Jo and never met, and if there was no Eastland. Hope you like it!

"Peekskill, NY."
Episode 1.

David Warner sat in the Warner dinning room, when his daughter Blair walked in."
"Good moring Blair." David said as Blair took a seat at the table.
"Hey, daddy."
"Oh, I forgot to tell you. We're going to be have a young woman coming to our house today."
"Another nanny? Dad, I told you I'm old enough to take care of myself!"
"No, Blair. It's not a nanny. It's a young woman named Jo."
"Is she rich?" Blair took a bite a food off a plate the maid had just laid in front of her."
"No. She's from the Bronx."
"You mean your going to let a poor girl jsut come into our home... just like that with out asking my permission?"
"Princess, you know I love you, but everything I do, I do not have to ask you." David put down his glass of water and got up from his chair. "Please excuse me. I have to go to work." And with that, he walked out of the dinning room. Blair had an evil look on her face.
****************************************************

"Mr. Warner." The maid walked into the reading room, which only contained Blair.
"He's not here." Blair looked up from the book she was reading called 'War and Peace.'
"Well, that young woman is here to see him."
"I'll see her." Blair closed the book and put it aside.
"Very well." The maid walked out of the room, and came back a few minutes later, with a girl whom had on a black leather biker-girl jacket and a plaid shirt, along with faded jeans. Blair looked at Jo, lost for words. The maid left the room.
"Hey." Jo said, as she walked to Blair. "I'm Jo."
"I'm Blair. Please don't take this the wrong way, put don't anything until you had a bath."
Jo looked hurt. "OK." She wanted to call this Blair-person a dirty name, but Blair might tell dear daddy and he might send her back to the Bronx. Blair walked out of the room, eyeing Jo. Now, with princess gone, Jo could say that awful thing under her breath:
"Tramp."
****************************************************

"I'm telling you, Ally! The girl needs to get a life....and not mine." Blair sat on her bed, talking on the phone. "I should tell daddy she did something awful that way he will HOPFULLY send her back where she belongs! As a matter of fact, that's what I'm goign to do. I'll call you back?"
"Oh, Blair. You are so evil."
"Thank you. I'll call you back."
"Blairy-pie."
"Ally-kins." Blair hung up the phone, got up from her bed with the silk sheets and walked over to the door. She opened it and saw her father standing there. "Daddy. What are you doing here?"
"Jo told me something interesting."
"What?"
"She told me that you... hit her over the head with a kitchen pot."
"Well, she's lying! I would never do that!"
"OK. Please behave yourself." David walked away. A few minutes later, Jo walked into her room.
"Excuse me." Said Blair. "You have no right to be in here."
"Free country. I might just have to tell dear daddy that you hit me again."
"Oh, black-mailing me? Well, listen here Bronx girl, in this house, there is only room for one diva."
"Right. And that's me. Sorry, princess. You're over. I'm the new queen." Jo plopped down on Blair's bed. Blair gave her an evil look and walked out of the room.
****************************************************

"Daddy?" Blair waked into the reading room to find her father. "Why does Jo have to be here?"
"I was hoping you wouldn't have asked that question."
"Of course I'm going to ask that question. That... girl is a total fake!"
"Ok, Blair. Sit here."He patted beside him. Blair walked over to him and sat down. David looked at his daughter. "I have reason to believe Jo is your sister."
"Sister?! That's crazy."
"No it's not. Just hear me out. Afte you were born, your mother found out she was pregnant again. Well, when that baby was born, we had to give her away because you were too much of a handful."
"So?It couldn't be Jo. She's a pain in the-"
"Blair!" David looked at his watch. "Excuse me. I'm late for a Mettung. He walked out of the room. Blair sighed and laid her head back on the sofa.
"So, we meet again." A voice called out.
Blair rasied her head and saw Jo, sitting in a chair.
"How long have you been here?"
"I came in when your dad left. And I heard everything."
"Well, listen here." Blair got up and walked to Jo. "What you heard isn't true. You could never be realted to me because I have blonde hair and have gresy, brown hair."
"Well. You listen to me. If I am your sister, I swear I'll make your life a living hell."

THE END..

Blair (voice over): On the next Peekskill, NY:
David walk in on Jo and Blair.
David gives Blair a warning.
Something happens to Blair.

Please tell me what you think of this episode. I promise the next episodes will be longer.

james_baby87 · 07-28-2003, 03:03 PM

Great looking foward to reading more

JDS84 · 07-28-2003, 07:04 PM

I like it.

Rebel Queen 1980 · 07-28-2003, 11:02 PM

Nice job!

MrsGarrettRocksMySocks · 07-28-2003, 11:27 PM

innnnteresting....

Ryanmo97 · 07-28-2003, 11:46 PM

Keep it up.

james_baby87 · 09-05-2003, 08:32 PM

Will there ever be a next ep.?

HIGH ENOUGH · 09-06-2003, 10:11 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Biker Chick/Jo Fan
Will there ever be a next ep.?

YOU GUYS MUST REALLY LIKE THIS.

YES, IF IT MEANS THAT MUCH TO YOU, I'LL POST ANOTHER EPISODE AFTER I POST THE NEXT PART TO "BREAKING POINT." I'M GLAD YOU GUYS LIKE IT!

HIGH ENOUGH · 09-06-2003, 06:21 PM

"Peekskil, NY."
Episode 2.

(WRITER'S NOTE: I CHANGED THE WRITING FORMAT)

JO (Voice over) Perviously on "Peekskill, NY." I moved in with the Warner's. Blair and me are in the reading room.. alone!

(The opening scene- the reading room. Jo and Blair. Jo is sitting in a chair. Blair is sitting on the sofa.)

JO : If you are my sister, I swear I'll make your life a living hell
BLAIR: Is that a threat?
JO : You ask me, Princess!
BLAIR: You son of a-
JO : No cursing. OUR dad might hear.
BLAIR: (Gets up and attacks Jo. The two start fighting in the chair, pulling each other's hair and name calling. David Warner walks in.)

DAVID: I forgot my- (He sees the two girls fighting.) Blair! Stop! (He walks over to the two and pulls them apart.) Blair, what has gotten into you?
JO: She started it. (Fake's crying)
DAVID: I'm sorry, Jo. Go get ready for dinner. I have to talk to Blair. (Jo exits)
BLAIR: That little liar! SHE threatend ME!!
DAVID: Blair, I'm not going to say anything because I'm late for a metting. But, please TRY to like Jo.
BLAIR: It's kinda hard to like a hairy mole.
DAVID: Blair.
BLAIR: But, I'll try.
DAVID: Thank you. And if you don't, I'll have to ground you from dates and telephone. (He exits)
BLAIR: But, that's not fair! (to herself) It's ok, Blair. You'll have your chance to get even with that wannabe. And daddy will never find out it's me.

**The Next Day**

(Blair's bed room. Blair enters, tired. She stops and gasps)

BLAIR: Get the hell out of my room!
JO : You gonna make me, Warner?
BLAIR: Jo, please. I've had a bad day at school. Can't you ruin my life tomorrow?
JO : Oh, don't worry. I will. (She gets off Blair's bed and exits. Blair sighs a "thank you" and flops on her bed. Her telephone rings. Blair groans and get up to answer it.) Hello? (No reply. Just heavy breathing) Hello? This is Blair Warner? Hello? (All of a sudden, a big base-ball comes flying through the window. It hits Blair in the head. She drops the phone and falls to the floor.)

DAVID (Voice over) : On the next "Peekskill, NY"
Blair is rushed to the hospital
Jo sees an old rival of hers.
David hire's a new house keeper.

james_baby87 · 09-07-2003, 12:15 PM

Good good good

07-28-2003, 09:04 AM	#1
HIGH ENOUGH Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 19, 2003 Location: making out with Hilary Duff and Tara Reid at the same time. Posts: 1,283	"Peekskill, NY." (a new drama show.) This show is about what if Blair and Jo and never met, and if there was no Eastland. Hope you like it! "Peekskill, NY." Episode 1. David Warner sat in the Warner dinning room, when his daughter Blair walked in." "Good moring Blair." David said as Blair took a seat at the table. "Hey, daddy." "Oh, I forgot to tell you. We're going to be have a young woman coming to our house today." "Another nanny? Dad, I told you I'm old enough to take care of myself!" "No, Blair. It's not a nanny. It's a young woman named Jo." "Is she rich?" Blair took a bite a food off a plate the maid had just laid in front of her." "No. She's from the Bronx." "You mean your going to let a poor girl jsut come into our home... just like that with out asking my permission?" "Princess, you know I love you, but everything I do, I do not have to ask you." David put down his glass of water and got up from his chair. "Please excuse me. I have to go to work." And with that, he walked out of the dinning room. Blair had an evil look on her face. ************************************************** "Mr. Warner." The maid walked into the reading room, which only contained Blair. "He's not here." Blair looked up from the book she was reading called 'War and Peace.' "Well, that young woman is here to see him." "I'll see her." Blair closed the book and put it aside. "Very well." The maid walked out of the room, and came back a few minutes later, with a girl whom had on a black leather biker-girl jacket and a plaid shirt, along with faded jeans. Blair looked at Jo, lost for words. The maid left the room. "Hey." Jo said, as she walked to Blair. "I'm Jo." "I'm Blair. Please don't take this the wrong way, put don't anything until you had a bath." Jo looked hurt. "OK." She wanted to call this Blair-person a dirty name, but Blair might tell dear daddy and he might send her back to the Bronx. Blair walked out of the room, eyeing Jo. Now, with princess gone, Jo could say that awful thing under her breath: "Tramp." ************************************************ "I'm telling you, Ally! The girl needs to get a life....and not mine." Blair sat on her bed, talking on the phone. "I should tell daddy she did something awful that way he will HOPFULLY send her back where she belongs! As a matter of fact, that's what I'm goign to do. I'll call you back?" "Oh, Blair. You are so evil." "Thank you. I'll call you back." "Blairy-pie." "Ally-kins." Blair hung up the phone, got up from her bed with the silk sheets and walked over to the door. She opened it and saw her father standing there. "Daddy. What are you doing here?" "Jo told me something interesting." "What?" "She told me that you... hit her over the head with a kitchen pot." "Well, she's lying! I would never do that!" "OK. Please behave yourself." David walked away. A few minutes later, Jo walked into her room. "Excuse me." Said Blair. "You have no right to be in here." "Free country. I might just have to tell dear daddy that you hit me again." "Oh, black-mailing me? Well, listen here Bronx girl, in this house, there is only room for one diva." "Right. And that's me. Sorry, princess. You're over. I'm the new queen." Jo plopped down on Blair's bed. Blair gave her an evil look and walked out of the room. ************************************************** "Daddy?" Blair waked into the reading room to find her father. "Why does Jo have to be here?" "I was hoping you wouldn't have asked that question." "Of course I'm going to ask that question. That... girl is a total fake!" "Ok, Blair. Sit here."He patted beside him. Blair walked over to him and sat down. David looked at his daughter. "I have reason to believe Jo is your sister." "Sister?! That's crazy." "No it's not. Just hear me out. Afte you were born, your mother found out she was pregnant again. Well, when that baby was born, we had to give her away because you were too much of a handful." "So?It couldn't be Jo. She's a pain in the-" "Blair!" David looked at his watch. "Excuse me. I'm late for a Mettung. He walked out of the room. Blair sighed and laid her head back on the sofa. "So, we meet again." A voice called out. Blair rasied her head and saw Jo, sitting in a chair. "How long have you been here?" "I came in when your dad left. And I heard everything." "Well, listen here." Blair got up and walked to Jo. "What you heard isn't true. You could never be realted to me because I have blonde hair and have gresy, brown hair." "Well. You listen to me. If I am your sister, I swear I'll make your life a living hell." THE END.. Blair (voice over): On the next Peekskill, NY: David walk in on Jo and Blair. David gives Blair a warning. Something happens to Blair. Please tell me what you think of this episode. I promise the next episodes will be longer.
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HIGH ENOUGH Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 19, 2003 Location: making out with Hilary Duff and Tara Reid at the same time. Posts: 1,283	"Peekskil, NY." Episode 2. (WRITER'S NOTE: I CHANGED THE WRITING FORMAT) JO (Voice over) Perviously on "Peekskill, NY." I moved in with the Warner's. Blair and me are in the reading room.. alone! (The opening scene- the reading room. Jo and Blair. Jo is sitting in a chair. Blair is sitting on the sofa.) JO : If you are my sister, I swear I'll make your life a living hell BLAIR: Is that a threat? JO : You ask me, Princess! BLAIR: You son of a- JO : No cursing. OUR dad might hear. BLAIR: (Gets up and attacks Jo. The two start fighting in the chair, pulling each other's hair and name calling. David Warner walks in.) DAVID: I forgot my- (He sees the two girls fighting.) Blair! Stop! (He walks over to the two and pulls them apart.) Blair, what has gotten into you? JO: She started it. (Fake's crying) DAVID: I'm sorry, Jo. Go get ready for dinner. I have to talk to Blair. (Jo exits) BLAIR: That little liar! SHE threatend ME!! DAVID: Blair, I'm not going to say anything because I'm late for a metting. But, please TRY to like Jo. BLAIR: It's kinda hard to like a hairy mole. DAVID: Blair. BLAIR: But, I'll try. DAVID: Thank you. And if you don't, I'll have to ground you from dates and telephone. (He exits) BLAIR: But, that's not fair! (to herself) It's ok, Blair. You'll have your chance to get even with that wannabe. And daddy will never find out it's me. The Next Day (Blair's bed room. Blair enters, tired. She stops and gasps) BLAIR: Get the hell out of my room! JO : You gonna make me, Warner? BLAIR: Jo, please. I've had a bad day at school. Can't you ruin my life tomorrow? JO : Oh, don't worry. I will. (She gets off Blair's bed and exits. Blair sighs a "thank you" and flops on her bed. Her telephone rings. Blair groans and get up to answer it.) Hello? (No reply. Just heavy breathing) Hello? This is Blair Warner? Hello? (All of a sudden, a big base-ball comes flying through the window. It hits Blair in the head. She drops the phone and falls to the floor.) DAVID (Voice over) : On the next "Peekskill, NY" Blair is rushed to the hospital Jo sees an old rival of hers. David hire's a new house keeper.

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