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planet_stella · 07-24-2003, 08:26 AM

Hi, everyone.I'm new here and this is my first fanfiction, so if it sucks just tell me (me english is not very good but i hope you'll understand).

*Nate's apartment*

An alarm ring woke up Nate.Sleepy, he looked around the room and then, to a beautiful woman who was sleeping next to him. Nate had 2 hours left until until his job's start so he didn't rush. Slowly he leaned over the woman and gently kissed her lips.
"Hiya,beautiful"he put his arms around her.
"Hiyyyaaa......."she said and closed her eyes again.
"Awwwww, it seems like somebody doesn't want to get out of the bed this morning"Nate smiled.
"Actually, i wouldn't mind to stay here for the rest of the day"she turned on the other side.Devilish sparkles twinkled in Nate's eyes."Well, i know one way that could help you to get out of the bed"he kissd her witn passion.
"Then why don't you tell me?"
"I better show you".They started kissing and Nate climbed on top of her.....

*Half an hour later*

"Sooo, what do you think?"Nate took her in his arms and smiled.
"I think i'd trade you for my alarm clock"CD grinned and kissed him."and now we should really get up"and they both went to the shower,had breakfast and went to the Division, both hoping nobody would notice that CD was wearing the same clothes she was wearing yesterday.Normally, therethere have been a couple of her clothes at Nate's apartment but a few days ago she took them to wash. Now, she regretted she did.

*The Division*

"Ummm.... did i miss something ?"Mag asked jinny confused.
"What?"Jinny didn't understand.
"I mean, what's wrong with those two?"She pointed to CD and Nate,who were smiling and laughing at each other all the time since they came .
"Yeah,i see what you mean, but i have no idea.Let's find out!"Jinny stood up and headed to CD's desk.

So?What do you think?

MovieHuntress17 · 07-24-2003, 08:38 AM

I like it ,post more soon

*Nancy Mckeon* · 07-24-2003, 10:43 AM

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hi my name is jenna

CD DeLorenzo · 07-24-2003, 10:48 AM

I agree! Pleaseeeeeeeee write more!

TLC4Whitney · 07-24-2003, 11:18 AM

POST MORE...This is good

planet_stella · 07-25-2003, 02:34 PM

I'm so happy you liked my fanfic.And here's some more

Jinny and Magda stood next to CD's desk, both crossed their arms in front of their chests, and both staring at Cd and Nate.
"Sooooo..........."Jin looked at CD.
"Sooo......"she took a look at her and Mag confused,then glanced at Nate and and then, at her co-workers again.
"oh come on guys, what drugs did you take today?"Mag blurt out.There was a moment of silence.
"I,I,I don't understand what are you talking about"Nate said.He looked some kind of strange.His voice was trembling and he rubbed his wet palms to his pants.
"Yeah,right.Don't pretend dumb and..."Jinny was cut off by Kate."Jinny,Magda i've got a case for you two.Into my office,please.Oh, and CD, Nate ,good morning".
"Good morning,Cap"they both said at the same time and smiled in a relief.The captain saved them from Jinny and Magda, but as those two turned to go, Jin looked at Nate and said"this conversation isn't over yet".
The two lovers watched them disappearing in Cap's office and looked at each other with the eyes full of love.
"That was close"Nate tokk a deep breath.
"Yeahhhh.I hate this"CD growled.She hated cheating her friends at the Division,but she couldn't do anything.She knew that Cap wouldn't like that and that's why their love had to be a secret.
"I know, i feel the same way but there's nothing we can do about it.You know what the Cap would do if she finds out."Nate tried to comfort her .
It's true, but we can't hide this forever Nate.

And? feedback is welcomed

CD DeLorenzo · 07-25-2003, 02:39 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by planet_stella
I'm so happy you liked my fanfic.And here's some more

And? feedback is welcomed

And???? MORE! NOW!!!!

*Nancy Mckeon* · 07-25-2003, 05:10 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

planet_stella · 07-26-2003, 01:07 PM

Nate took CD's hands and looked in her babyblue eyes.They just stared at each other and kept silence. Then Nate looked aroun, gently pulled her hand at his mouth and kissed it.
"I love you Candance" he whispered. He wanted to cry out loud that everyone would know how much he loved CD but this time Nate had to satisfy with a quiet whisper.
"I love you too"CD smiled.Suddenly the Cap office's door opened and Mag with Jinny rushed out,but when they saw Nate holding CD by the hands,they both stopped and stared at the two lovers.By that time they were already back to work pretending that nothing happened but they both knew that Jin and Mag wouldn't let this go.Jin gave Mag a "let's go to them" look and they both went to NAte's desk.
"Care to explain what you were doing here while we were at the ofiice"Jin said mocking.
"And don't tell us that you don't know what are we talking about or that you did nothing.We saw.EVERYTHING!"Mag added.
"Oh,you mean that.Well I........I was holding CD's hand because,.....because...... Nate was stuttering.
"Because I hurt my hand and Nate wanted to find out if i was OK"CD tried to corner.
"Reeeeaaaally"it was obvious that Mag didn't believe them.
"And how bad is that?"Jin asked sarcasticly.
"It's just a scratch on my finger.Nothing serious.Really."CD said as if everything that she and Nate said was true.She knew that neither Magda nor Jinny believed them but this lie was better than nothing.
" You're still here?!"Kate cried standing in the door way.
"We were just leaving Cap"Mag said and she and Jinny left.

So what do you think about this part? Liked it?

*Nancy Mckeon* · 07-26-2003, 02:31 PM

!!!!!!MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!

btw- i just posted more on my fic and...uhh no1 replied.....not that it matters *cough read it please cough*

Swimfan85 · 07-26-2003, 04:45 PM

add more!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 07-26-2003, 05:00 PM

yeaaaah, I agree! Morrrreeeee!

planet_stella · 07-27-2003, 06:33 AM

You asked for it

"Hey you two!"Kate called still standing in the doorway "i've got a case for you too"she came by Nate's desk and handed him a folder.
"What's this case about?"CD asked.
"Male,black.His body was found in the dumpster.I want you on this case.Any questions?"she looked at them.
"No Cap.Let's go CD"Nate gave her a huge smile.
"Ah....yeah,OK"cd was confused.Why was Nate so happy?she couldn't understand.They stepped in the elevator and CD pushed the button.They were the only people there so Nate ambraced her from the back, turned her and kissed her lips full of fire.When they broke the kiss CD looked at Nate.
"What?"he smiled.She was watching him so intently.The elevator door opened and they headed to the car before CD could answer.When they got in the car and started to drive CD looked at Nate again.He noticed she was watching him again.
"You didn't answer my question yet"he glanced at her.
"OK.It's just........you are so happy.Why?" Nate laughed when he heard the answer to his question.
"what's so funny?"CD didn't understand anything.
"Nothing.You wanna know why i am so happy?I'll tell you why.Well, i am happy because, because i like hiding."he smiled at her.
"you like what?"CD was almost in shock.
"I like hiding.I mean,today.Didn't you like the thought that they almost found out about us?he grinned.
"I was a little scared but yeah,i did.I felt a strange quiver of some kinda excitement.I don't know."she smiled.
"Something like that.We're here."Nate said as he stopped the car.

That's it for this time.Maybe i'll be back tonight.

*Nancy Mckeon* · 07-27-2003, 11:33 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
!!!!!!MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!

btw- i just posted more on my fic and...uhh no1 replied.....not that it matters *cough read it please cough*

Sweetchild2005 · 07-27-2003, 12:18 PM

Wow this is great post more!!!!

07-24-2003, 08:26 AM	#1
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	FF: How will i tell averyone? Hi, everyone.I'm new here and this is my first fanfiction, so if it sucks just tell me (me english is not very good but i hope you'll understand). Nate's apartment An alarm ring woke up Nate.Sleepy, he looked around the room and then, to a beautiful woman who was sleeping next to him. Nate had 2 hours left until until his job's start so he didn't rush. Slowly he leaned over the woman and gently kissed her lips. "Hiya,beautiful"he put his arms around her. "Hiyyyaaa......."she said and closed her eyes again. "Awwwww, it seems like somebody doesn't want to get out of the bed this morning"Nate smiled. "Actually, i wouldn't mind to stay here for the rest of the day"she turned on the other side.Devilish sparkles twinkled in Nate's eyes."Well, i know one way that could help you to get out of the bed"he kissd her witn passion. "Then why don't you tell me?" "I better show you".They started kissing and Nate climbed on top of her..... Half an hour later "Sooo, what do you think?"Nate took her in his arms and smiled. "I think i'd trade you for my alarm clock"CD grinned and kissed him."and now we should really get up"and they both went to the shower,had breakfast and went to the Division, both hoping nobody would notice that CD was wearing the same clothes she was wearing yesterday.Normally, therethere have been a couple of her clothes at Nate's apartment but a few days ago she took them to wash. Now, she regretted she did. The Division "Ummm.... did i miss something ?"Mag asked jinny confused. "What?"Jinny didn't understand. "I mean, what's wrong with those two?"She pointed to CD and Nate,who were smiling and laughing at each other all the time since they came . "Yeah,i see what you mean, but i have no idea.Let's find out!"Jinny stood up and headed to CD's desk. So?What do you think?

07-24-2003, 08:38 AM	#2
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07-24-2003, 10:43 AM	#3
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07-24-2003, 10:48 AM	#4
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07-24-2003, 11:18 AM	#5
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07-25-2003, 02:34 PM	#6
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	I'm so happy you liked my fanfic.And here's some more Jinny and Magda stood next to CD's desk, both crossed their arms in front of their chests, and both staring at Cd and Nate. "Sooooo..........."Jin looked at CD. "Sooo......"she took a look at her and Mag confused,then glanced at Nate and and then, at her co-workers again. "oh come on guys, what drugs did you take today?"Mag blurt out.There was a moment of silence. "I,I,I don't understand what are you talking about"Nate said.He looked some kind of strange.His voice was trembling and he rubbed his wet palms to his pants. "Yeah,right.Don't pretend dumb and..."Jinny was cut off by Kate."Jinny,Magda i've got a case for you two.Into my office,please.Oh, and CD, Nate ,good morning". "Good morning,Cap"they both said at the same time and smiled in a relief.The captain saved them from Jinny and Magda, but as those two turned to go, Jin looked at Nate and said"this conversation isn't over yet". The two lovers watched them disappearing in Cap's office and looked at each other with the eyes full of love. "That was close"Nate tokk a deep breath. "Yeahhhh.I hate this"CD growled.She hated cheating her friends at the Division,but she couldn't do anything.She knew that Cap wouldn't like that and that's why their love had to be a secret. "I know, i feel the same way but there's nothing we can do about it.You know what the Cap would do if she finds out."Nate tried to comfort her . It's true, but we can't hide this forever Nate. And? feedback is welcomed

07-26-2003, 01:07 PM	#9
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	Nate took CD's hands and looked in her babyblue eyes.They just stared at each other and kept silence. Then Nate looked aroun, gently pulled her hand at his mouth and kissed it. "I love you Candance" he whispered. He wanted to cry out loud that everyone would know how much he loved CD but this time Nate had to satisfy with a quiet whisper. "I love you too"CD smiled.Suddenly the Cap office's door opened and Mag with Jinny rushed out,but when they saw Nate holding CD by the hands,they both stopped and stared at the two lovers.By that time they were already back to work pretending that nothing happened but they both knew that Jin and Mag wouldn't let this go.Jin gave Mag a "let's go to them" look and they both went to NAte's desk. "Care to explain what you were doing here while we were at the ofiice"Jin said mocking. "And don't tell us that you don't know what are we talking about or that you did nothing.We saw.EVERYTHING!"Mag added. "Oh,you mean that.Well I........I was holding CD's hand because,.....because...... Nate was stuttering. "Because I hurt my hand and Nate wanted to find out if i was OK"CD tried to corner. "Reeeeaaaally"it was obvious that Mag didn't believe them. "And how bad is that?"Jin asked sarcasticly. "It's just a scratch on my finger.Nothing serious.Really."CD said as if everything that she and Nate said was true.She knew that neither Magda nor Jinny believed them but this lie was better than nothing. " You're still here?!"Kate cried standing in the door way. "We were just leaving Cap"Mag said and she and Jinny left. So what do you think about this part? Liked it?

07-26-2003, 02:31 PM	#10
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	!!!!!!MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! btw- i just posted more on my fic and...uhh no1 replied.....not that it matters cough read it please cough

07-26-2003, 04:45 PM	#11
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	add more!!!

07-26-2003, 05:00 PM	#12
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	yeaaaah, I agree! Morrrreeeee!

07-27-2003, 06:33 AM	#13
planet_stella Member Forum Regular Join Date: Jul 13, 2003 Location: In LOVE with Jay... Posts: 961	You asked for it "Hey you two!"Kate called still standing in the doorway "i've got a case for you too"she came by Nate's desk and handed him a folder. "What's this case about?"CD asked. "Male,black.His body was found in the dumpster.I want you on this case.Any questions?"she looked at them. "No Cap.Let's go CD"Nate gave her a huge smile. "Ah....yeah,OK"cd was confused.Why was Nate so happy?she couldn't understand.They stepped in the elevator and CD pushed the button.They were the only people there so Nate ambraced her from the back, turned her and kissed her lips full of fire.When they broke the kiss CD looked at Nate. "What?"he smiled.She was watching him so intently.The elevator door opened and they headed to the car before CD could answer.When they got in the car and started to drive CD looked at Nate again.He noticed she was watching him again. "You didn't answer my question yet"he glanced at her. "OK.It's just........you are so happy.Why?" Nate laughed when he heard the answer to his question. "what's so funny?"CD didn't understand anything. "Nothing.You wanna know why i am so happy?I'll tell you why.Well, i am happy because, because i like hiding."he smiled at her. "you like what?"CD was almost in shock. "I like hiding.I mean,today.Didn't you like the thought that they almost found out about us?he grinned. "I was a little scared but yeah,i did.I felt a strange quiver of some kinda excitement.I don't know."she smiled. "Something like that.We're here."Nate said as he stopped the car. That's it for this time.Maybe i'll be back tonight.

07-27-2003, 12:18 PM	#15
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