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HIGH ENOUGH · 07-21-2003, 11:04 PM

I'm going to try (yet another) fan-fic. None of mine do well. I guess you people think I can't write write worth a damn!

Here goes:

Jinny walked the dark streets on her to Anchorside Bar and Grill.
'DAMN!' She said told herself. Why did her car have to break down?
All of a sudden, she heard a noise behind her. She turned and looked.
"Hello?" No answer. Jinny sighed, turned back around and saw this black fugure infront of her. It threw Jinny against a trash can.

"Hello?" Magda said into the phone. "Oh, hey Cap! What's up? What?!? Oh, my God! I'm going to call CD." Magda hung up the phone, picked it up again and dialed CD's number. "Hey, CD? It's Magda. Captain just called me and said Jinny's been... rapped."
****************************************************

A FEW MINUTES LATER...

"Mag! Would you stop helping me? I can walk on my own." Jinny walked into her house.
"Are you sure you'll be ok?" Asked Magda, a worried look on her face.
"I'll be fine. Beside's what could posibbly happen to me?"
****************************************************

"Make love to me, Jinny." The strange man said. He forced Jinny on the bed. No matter how hard she fought to get free, the man was stronger.
The man, kissing Jinny passionatly, pulled a rag out of his pocket. He put it around Jinny's neck and started choking her...
Jinny shot up in her bed, out of the awful dream. She knew that strange man looked like someone she knew, but who?
She plopped back down on the pillow's and turned over. Then, she knew who it was! When that man rapped Jinny, he took off his mask. That man that tried to kill her in the dream was the rapist!
"Hello, Jinny." She heard a voice behind her say. Jinny turned over and saw the rapist. The man from her dream, standing next to her bed!

Please tell me what you think. My baby, MAGDA

will be having some action soon!

Brandon (ONE LIVE TO LIVE)

*Nancy Mckeon* · 07-21-2003, 11:52 PM

no one reads my fics eather

oh well

!!!!!!MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

butterflykisses09 · 07-21-2003, 11:57 PM

It's great!Freaky,but great.

Ewan's My Man · 07-22-2003, 12:33 AM

I like it so far! Post more.

JDS84 · 07-22-2003, 06:53 PM

I like it.

*Marilyn Monroe* · 07-22-2003, 08:32 PM

I like it too. I'm liking this "scary" thing. Too much happiness isnt good all the time lol

Sweetchild2005 · 07-22-2003, 10:52 PM

This is really good...so you need to post more!!!

HIGH ENOUGH · 07-23-2003, 11:19 AM

I got replies.

Here's more. (and I'll cut down on the scary)
MAGDA'S HOUSE

"Magda?" Said Theodore, looking at Jinny's friend/partner. "Would you sit down? Jinny's a tough gal. She can take care of herself. Kinda like Jo on "The Facts of Life."
"You're right. I don't need this extra stress in my life." She down down beside Teddy on the sofa, and they curled up together. Just then, CD walked in and saw them.
"Oooooh, Magda. Dating your best friend's man behind her back. Isn't that kinda skanky?"
"We aren't dating!" Replied Magda. "We were... um.. crying."
"Sure. And I'm Britney Spears." She rolled her eyes and went over to join Theodore and Magda on the sofa.
"Where's Nate?" Asked Magda.
"He's coming in a little while."
****************************************************
LATER..

"We are here to talk about Jinny." Magda walked past Cap. "She has been acting strange lately."
"Well, duh." Said a voice. "She's just been rapped. How would she act. Happy? Jumping for joy saying 'I've just been rapped! I've just been rapped!"
Magda looked at who said that. It was CD. "You're acting funny."
"Mag. I need to talk to you... about Nate."
"OK."
CD and Magda walked out into the hall.
"What gives?" Asked Magda.
"Um. the reason why I've been acting strange is because... because... I... caught Nate in the act... with another woman."
"Hey. What's going on?" Asked a male's voice. Magda looked at who it was and gasped. It was Nate. CD turned around and glared at him, fire in her eyes.

I promise I'll cut down the cliff-hangers, too!

*Nancy Mckeon* · 07-23-2003, 05:08 PM

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ewan's My Man · 07-23-2003, 05:09 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ONE LIFE TO LIVE
I got replies. Here's more. (and I'll cut down on the scary)

WE LIKE SCARY!!

CD DeLorenzo · 07-23-2003, 06:24 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Ewan's My Man
WE LIKE SCARY!!

WE ARE SCARY you mean lol

*Marilyn Monroe* · 07-23-2003, 06:29 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ONE LIFE TO LIVE
I got replies. Here's more. (and I'll cut down on the scary)

no no no no no! You got that one wrong...we are demented people! We like the scary parts.

So, you must post more soon.

Sweetchild2005 · 07-23-2003, 07:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
WE ARE SCARY you mean lol

Yeah I'll have to agree with you on that one cat....but we like the scary parts too...POST MOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JDS84 · 07-23-2003, 09:23 PM

This is great!! You are a very talanted writer.

HIGH ENOUGH · 07-24-2003, 04:06 PM

Jinny got out of her fixed car, and walked into Anchor-Side. Lisa Marie Presley's song "S.O.B." filled the place. Jinny found a clear table and sat down.
"May I take your order?" A voice asked.
Jinny looked up. It was only a waiter. "Yeah. I'll take a light beer and water."
The waiter jotted the order down and walked off. When he was out of sight, Jinny looked through her purse and pulled out a bag of pills... that wasn't there before!
Slowly, she opened the bag and stuck her hand in it. She pulled out a pill and brought it to her mouth.

Sorry so short, but I have writer's block!

07-21-2003, 11:04 PM	#1
HIGH ENOUGH Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 19, 2003 Location: making out with Hilary Duff and Tara Reid at the same time. Posts: 1,283	Haunting Jinny I'm going to try (yet another) fan-fic. None of mine do well. I guess you people think I can't write write worth a damn! Here goes: Jinny walked the dark streets on her to Anchorside Bar and Grill. 'DAMN!' She said told herself. Why did her car have to break down? All of a sudden, she heard a noise behind her. She turned and looked. "Hello?" No answer. Jinny sighed, turned back around and saw this black fugure infront of her. It threw Jinny against a trash can. "Hello?" Magda said into the phone. "Oh, hey Cap! What's up? What?!? Oh, my God! I'm going to call CD." Magda hung up the phone, picked it up again and dialed CD's number. "Hey, CD? It's Magda. Captain just called me and said Jinny's been... rapped." ************************************************** A FEW MINUTES LATER... "Mag! Would you stop helping me? I can walk on my own." Jinny walked into her house. "Are you sure you'll be ok?" Asked Magda, a worried look on her face. "I'll be fine. Beside's what could posibbly happen to me?" ************************************************** "Make love to me, Jinny." The strange man said. He forced Jinny on the bed. No matter how hard she fought to get free, the man was stronger. The man, kissing Jinny passionatly, pulled a rag out of his pocket. He put it around Jinny's neck and started choking her... Jinny shot up in her bed, out of the awful dream. She knew that strange man looked like someone she knew, but who? She plopped back down on the pillow's and turned over. Then, she knew who it was! When that man rapped Jinny, he took off his mask. That man that tried to kill her in the dream was the rapist! "Hello, Jinny." She heard a voice behind her say. Jinny turned over and saw the rapist. The man from her dream, standing next to her bed! Please tell me what you think. My baby, MAGDA will be having some action soon! Brandon (ONE LIVE TO LIVE)
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07-21-2003, 11:52 PM	#2
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07-22-2003, 12:33 AM	#4
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07-22-2003, 06:53 PM	#5
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07-22-2003, 10:52 PM	#7
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07-21-2003, 11:57 PM	#3
butterflykisses09 Member Occasional Poster Join Date: Jun 06, 2003 Location: alabama Posts: 28	It's great!Freaky,but great.

07-22-2003, 08:32 PM	#6
Marilyn Monroe Diamonds... Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Aug 24, 2001 Location: Where gentlemen actually prefer brunettes Posts: 4,811	I like it too. I'm liking this "scary" thing. Too much happiness isnt good all the time lol

07-23-2003, 11:19 AM	#8
HIGH ENOUGH Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 19, 2003 Location: making out with Hilary Duff and Tara Reid at the same time. Posts: 1,283	I got replies. Here's more. (and I'll cut down on the scary) MAGDA'S HOUSE "Magda?" Said Theodore, looking at Jinny's friend/partner. "Would you sit down? Jinny's a tough gal. She can take care of herself. Kinda like Jo on "The Facts of Life." "You're right. I don't need this extra stress in my life." She down down beside Teddy on the sofa, and they curled up together. Just then, CD walked in and saw them. "Oooooh, Magda. Dating your best friend's man behind her back. Isn't that kinda skanky?" "We aren't dating!" Replied Magda. "We were... um.. crying." "Sure. And I'm Britney Spears." She rolled her eyes and went over to join Theodore and Magda on the sofa. "Where's Nate?" Asked Magda. "He's coming in a little while." **************************************************** LATER.. "We are here to talk about Jinny." Magda walked past Cap. "She has been acting strange lately." "Well, duh." Said a voice. "She's just been rapped. How would she act. Happy? Jumping for joy saying 'I've just been rapped! I've just been rapped!" Magda looked at who said that. It was CD. "You're acting funny." "Mag. I need to talk to you... about Nate." "OK." CD and Magda walked out into the hall. "What gives?" Asked Magda. "Um. the reason why I've been acting strange is because... because... I... caught Nate in the act... with another woman." "Hey. What's going on?" Asked a male's voice. Magda looked at who it was and gasped. It was Nate. CD turned around and glared at him, fire in her eyes. I promise I'll cut down the cliff-hangers, too!

07-23-2003, 05:08 PM	#9
Nancy Mckeon ~Amy Lee Fan~ Forum Regular Join Date: May 22, 2003 Location: my own crazy world... Posts: 878	!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

07-23-2003, 09:23 PM	#14
JDS84 Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Dec 11, 2001 Location: My Old Kentucky Home Posts: 3,377	This is great!! You are a very talanted writer.

07-24-2003, 04:06 PM	#15
HIGH ENOUGH Member Senior Member Join Date: Jun 19, 2003 Location: making out with Hilary Duff and Tara Reid at the same time. Posts: 1,283	Jinny got out of her fixed car, and walked into Anchor-Side. Lisa Marie Presley's song "S.O.B." filled the place. Jinny found a clear table and sat down. "May I take your order?" A voice asked. Jinny looked up. It was only a waiter. "Yeah. I'll take a light beer and water." The waiter jotted the order down and walked off. When he was out of sight, Jinny looked through her purse and pulled out a bag of pills... that wasn't there before! Slowly, she opened the bag and stuck her hand in it. She pulled out a pill and brought it to her mouth. Sorry so short, but I have writer's block!