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Old 07-17-2003, 03:12 PM   #1
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Arrow Thus With A Kiss I'm Born Again CD/NATE !!!

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Thus With A Kiss I'm Born Again


A nurse chuckled to herself as she passed a couple kissing in the middle of the hallway. She walked up to a friend and collegue of hers. "They're cute." She motioned over to them.

"They're sucking face like the world is ending tomomorrow. It's going on for minutes already." Her co-worker informed her while setting up a syringe.

Handing her the material to prepare another one the slightly shorter nurse replied "You're just jealous."

"Hell yes I am!" She laughed and then sighed, both of them turning their attention to the two tall lovers again.

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okay that was the teaser
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Old 07-17-2003, 05:08 PM   #2
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That was awesome! I have been thinking what if like Mag, Jenni or Raina left something and then came back to get it and see CD and Nate SUCKING FACE! AWWW I just cant get over i mean i watch the one part like 50 times a day and still get that tug on my heart! lol Have ya'll noticed how when she brings the coffe to everyone and sits down she looks at Nate then he looks back. You could just see it there! lol Neways gotta go write somemore fic! BYE BYE!
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Old 07-17-2003, 10:11 PM   #4
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That was awesome! I have been thinking what if like Mag, Jenni or Raina left something and then came back to get it and see CD and Nate SUCKING FACE! AWWW I just cant get over i mean i watch the one part like 50 times a day and still get that tug on my heart! lol Have ya'll noticed how when she brings the coffe to everyone and sits down she looks at Nate then he looks back. You could just see it there! lol Neways gotta go write somemore fic! BYE BYE!
aww man! I'm DYING to watch it too!

And I have like a million ideas of what could happen and who could have walked in or so lol.

oh well, here's a lil more... I seriously need to write some more on this lol. And on my and Jeanie's other one too? Dunno if anyone's still reading that one.

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Nate pulled CD even closer to him, unable to believe this really was happening. First she had made him believe she didn't give a damn about his life or him at all and now she was kissing him like he never thought a kiss was possible.

CD wrapped both her arms close around his neck as she felt Nate drawing her closer with his arms around her waist now. All she cared about right now was how he was making her feel right there and then. The moment their lips locked everything else had become insignificant beyond belief and it seemed as if love had found it's way again, into two hearts that were only beating for one another from the first heartbeat to the last.

"Hey get a room!" A scruffy male voice sounded and CD felt Nate being pushed towards her slightly while he felt a rather hard slap to his shoulder. It made them realize where they were though and reluctantly they broke the kiss and first looked at each other completely bedazzled before turning around to see a bulky doctor walk away from them again before he entered a room.

Obviously he had caused them to get in touch with reality again. "God I hate doctors" CD muttered.

"I'm starting to see why." Nate agreed, having hoped their kiss would never end.

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and that was/is one of the ideas just in case you guys want me to go on of course.
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Old 07-20-2003, 04:05 PM   #5
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I'm really starting to think no one's reading either of my fanfics anymore here.
If you all think this sucks then just tell me and I'll stop bothering you with it.
For now here's nother part though cause I wrote it and oh well.

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"Anyhow... we should ge back to the Division." CD let out a small sigh.

Nate didn't like that at all. "But..." He started to protest.

"No but. We have to." She cut him off. "Come on now." With that she started to walk towards the exit.

Puzzled he followed her. "Women" He muttered under his breath. First she told him she didn't care. Then out of the blue she was interested, glad and even more than that kissed him like he was the only cure to her disease and now she just walked away again as if nothing ever happened. He just hoped to god she hadn't changed her mind, wasn't regretting it now.

CD got in the car, glad she was driving so she had to pay attention to the traffic, that helped to distract her a little bit at least. She wondered if she should speak up again, tell him she had wanted to kiss him from the day they met. But she decided against it. She had done the first huge step and kissed him, true he had kissed her back but didn't say a word about it. Was he just surprised? Or just hoping he'd get laid? Though right now she'd even settle for that. Better one night with him than nothing at all. Or was it that he suddenly realized how much it would complicate things at work and figured to better call it quits before it went too far? Of course she knew too what a possible thing between them meant. But she had finally made up her mind that it was definitely worth it all. If only he felt the same way about her.

Nate kept on glancing over at her. She still hadn't said a thing and he wasn't sure if he should. Scared he'd get an answer he didn't want to hear. But he wanted to talk to her, so many questions were racing through his brain. Why now? Why had she kissed him? Because he happened to be there or because she really had feelings for him? He wanted to tell her how much he loved her but he couldn't. And what was going through her head right now? Was she thinking about the kiss too? Finally he decided to ask her and opened his mouth but at the same momet she pulled up at the station.

"We're here." She announced the obvious and felt pretty stupid about that. But also because she had kissed him. How could she have done that? How could she have been so stupid? All the way back from the hospital there was silence between them and it was awkward. She hated that and felt like she had destroyed everything by kissing him. He was the best partner and an amazing cop and the best friend she had ever had. But she also never loved somebody close to how much she loved him. But now they couldn't go back anymore. Things would never be the same again between them. And it was her fault.

"Yeah we are." He nodded and looked out of the window but didn't make a move to get out of the car again. By now he was certain she probably had made up er mind and realized she had made a mistake. "Look CD..." He turned around to see she had left the car already. He sighed and followed her, his heart breaking because she was regretting the kiss.
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No ones reading my fics eather oh well- but im reading yours! so post more!
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Keep writin'! Maybe they'll talk eventually...








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aww thanks okay, I just wrote more, so...

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Both of their inner tumoils were completely unbeknownst to everybody else. Like usual they walked past the metal detectors and showed their badges. Like usual they got into the elevator and drove up to the 6th floor, people getting on and off at other floors. Like usual they walked over to their desks and sat down. And like usual Raina was there right away handing them information about one of their cases. They all were glad Kate would be okay again and everything had gone back to normal here. Jinny and Magda walked in, Magda looking relieved somewhat and Jinny teasing her partner and friend about something.

CD smiled at the two women before turning her attention to the sheet of paper Raina had handed her. They were still without Captain for now and had just solved a major case. She looked up at Raina. "That's not important anymore, we have all the information we needed." Then she looked at Jinny and Magda again. "Hey, we've all had a long day already, how about we finish the paperwork and go home? There's not much left we can do here right now, and everything else can wait til tomorrow."

Jinny nodded. "I second that." She had to smile. Whenever Kate was on vacation or had a day off CD was the one they turned to. She wasn't trying to boss them around or anything, it just came that way, like having a big sister or something.

"Yeah. I can't wait to go home to Ben and Gabe." Magda agreed too.

"And what about this then?" Raina asked holding up the paper again.

"You heard her, it's not important anymore. Hand it over to the DA's office, maybe they want another witness statement but we solved the case, it's no use for us anymore." Nate said, a tid more annoyed by Raina's overeagerness than he usually was. But then again right now pretty much everything seemed to annoy him.

"Alright then." Raina left to go do that.
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haha, I love that. I can totally see CD yelling "Everybody get the hell outta here" and then Nate wants to leave too and she like glares at him "YOU stay!"

LOL or something like that. But sorry, that's not happening here. I have this really cute idea for later but in order for that to work... oh well keep on reading and you'll see. Don't wanna spoil my own story here lol

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CD avoided to look at Nate and buried her head in the papers on her desk, trying to keep her mind off him with paperwork. She knew exactly he just broke up with Lily, how could she think he'd jump into a thing with her right away.

"Hey CD, what do you think about this?" Magda waved her over to her desk and she walked over to take a look at it.

Jinny joined them and Nate glanced up and dared to glimpse over at them. He sighed and then just saw how the three of them left together.

Since then he hardly saw CD anymore. But he heard that there was some trouble with the media and apparently Jinny and Magda had decided that CD had to take care of that. He had no doubt she was doing the best she could but he hated that it gave her an excuse to avoid him. He felt like she had gone away and was hiding from him now, not physically because she always was there somewhere. He had to find her again because they still hadn't exchanged another word and that was killing him.
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A couple of hours later she sat down at her desk again and quickly glimpsed over at Nate. With Kate gone it had been a day like hell for her. She wondered just why no matter where she had turned everybody wanted something from her. At least by now everything seemed to be at least semi-okay again. She really couldn't do more.

Nate handed her a folder. "Here. You just gotta sign it, then the paperwork's done too." He said matter of factly. With her being so busy with all the other troubles he had just done it himself.

"Uhh thanks." She took it and signed it. He really was the best partner ever and she knew she could count on him no matter what. But she missed their playful banter, the teasing, his smile. She wondered if she'd ever see that again. Sighing she looked back at him and wanted to ask him if they could go for a coffee and talk or something, but at that moment Raina, Magda and Jinny walked up.

"Here, we're done too." Magda handed her another folder.

"What am I supposed to do with it?" CD asked. "Put it on Kate's desk, I've done enough of her work for today! And I'm just an Inspector too, so please, give me a break, alright?"

They looked at her puzzled and she sighed. "Sorry guys... I just... this has been a long and stressful day... let's just head out of here okay?" She put the folder into her drawer, knowing she couldn't leave them hanging and Kate counted on her too.

"Yeah sounds good. Dinner anybody?" Jinny asked.

"I'm starving. Anchorside?" Magda looked at her partner who nodded.

"I'll come with ya!" Raina said right away, sounding excited.

They now looked at Nate who usually was the last one to say no to food of any kind. "Nah... I'm not hungry." He shook his head.

That surprised them but they shrugged and looked at CD. "I just wanna go home and sleep." She said. "Maybe tomorrow."

"Well then..." Magda shrugged and grabbed her stuff and walked over to the elevators, Jinny and Raina following her.

"What the hell is wrong with them?" Raina asked as she pressed the button.

Jinny shrugged. "I guess they're just tired. Or it's personal. Don't you ever wanna be left alone Raina?"

Raina gave her a look and rolled her eyes. "Something's up! I can smell it."

Magda nodded. "Yeah. Lily called me earlier. Apparently Nate broke up with her. But she's not mad at him, she's mad at CD. 'Damn slut' and 'stupid bitch' were the nicest things she called her."
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