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CD_Nate _4ever · 07-16-2003, 06:30 PM

"Nate" CD had to do something she couldnt stand it anymore. Nate turned around. "I lied to you" she wispered. Nate looked at her kinda puzzled so she moved closer to him. "I lied to you about Lilly." He just kept looking at her so she went on. " I am interested....Im glad" she reached up and grabbed his neck and their lips met. At that moment the knot in her stomach went away she felt so calm. <OH MY GOD! Shes kissing me> Nate thought as their kiss deepend. Finally, needing air they broke apart. "WOW" Nate wispered as CD stared at the floor. She had kissed him! WOW was right! Normally she would never have done that but she just got so sick of doing nothing and loosing him to other women. It happened to many times and it wasnt going to happen again. She had kissed him, she cant take it back now. Its a done deal. She was in deep thought when Nate put his hand on her chin and drew her eyes up to him. They stood there a moment just looking at each other then he embraced her. They both let out a sigh. He cupped her face in his hands and said "You wanna go somewhere and talk for a little while" She nodded, and he bent down and kissed her lightly once more.
***Nates House***
The whole car ride had been silent neither of them knew what to say. They pulled up to Nates house and he put the car in park. "CD i hope this is ok i mean i will take you home whenever you want,.... I mean i dont want this to seem like just because i brought you to my house that i want to get in your pants or nothing ok? Nate studdered out. CD looked at him for the first time since they left the hospital. "Nate.. its fine. We need to be somewhere private right now." She said reasuringly as she put her hand on his. He smiled then they both got out of the car.
"You wanna coke or anything?" Nate asked as CD was settling down on the couch. "That'd be great Nate" He handed her a coke then sat down on the coffee table infront of her. She took a few swigs of the coke then sat it beside him on the table. Then there was nothing, they both just sat there looking at the floor. <What is she thinking right now?> Nate thought. <Does she think that i dont want her? Why did she have to kiss ME? GOD that must of been hard on her! Why was i so stupid and stubborn! I should have made the first move!> Nate streches out his arms and grabs her hands in his. She looks up and their eyes meet again. The knot in her stomach returns. "CD... im glad too" Nate said. "About what" she asked. "About ending it w/ Lilly, about us kissing, about you being in my life and feeling the same way i do. Im so glad about all those things CD, You dont have to be afraid or scared or upset anymore.Its OK now, Its out... I love you" He said as he moved to the couch to sit beside her. She looked up at him and smiled "I love you too Nate" She said as a tear rolled down her cheeck. He reached his thumb up and pushed away the tear before he leaned in the their lips met again. This time it was a deep passionate kiss. She groaned a little letting him know it was ok. He lowered her down on he Couch and they continued to kiss passionatly.

HEHE So go on or what?!?!? IS this site R friendly or should i keep it clean? Let me know what you think!

TLC4Whitney · 07-16-2003, 06:44 PM

oooh more! Its everything friendly...heh heh...Your free to write what you want...Post more!!

CD DeLorenzo · 07-16-2003, 07:43 PM

yes yes! post more! And in case you don't wanna keep it clean... I have a CD Nate fanfic archive at my site

And I'd love to put your fic there, no matter what rating, and same goes for all CD Nate fics btw! If any you have any please send em over

CD_Nate _4ever · 07-16-2003, 11:11 PM

Ok well i decided to make 2 diff. fics one Nc-17 one PG-13 to R I will post one here and give the other one to CD Delerenzo for her site! This ismy 1st fic im so excited! hehe ok here goes a lil more!

Their kiss deepend. CD began to moan as Nate layed ontop of her on the couch. <What are we doing? We cant sleep together the first night we confess all this stuff!> Nate thought. He broke their kiss. "What?" CD said. Nate sat up. "We cant do this CD" he said. "Damn I figured this would happen!" CD yelled as she got up and grabbed her coat to leave. "Wait CD why are you leaving?" Nate went after her. Cd turned around in the driveway "Nate you just said we cant do this now let me go alright, i understand you dont want me ok!" <Her mood changes where coming more often the past few days i wonder if she is PMSing! NO! This is no time for sillyness> Nate told himself. He grabbed her by the shoulders as if he was going to shake her. "CD thats not it! And deep down you know that! I just want to make sure we arent making a mistake by sleeping together our first night!" CD looked at him w/ a odd expression "Is that all this is about?" she asked "Ya" She smiled as he drew her into his arms they stade that way for a moment then she pushed him slightly to get out of his grip. "And who said i was going to sleep with you Mr.Hotty pants!" She said as she slapped his shoulder. "OHH you know you want me baby!" He said as he grabbed her again and kissed her passionatly! Coming up for air she said "maybe we should go back inside before you neighbors see us doing the dirty on your lawn!" Nate laughed and they went back inside.
Now im gonna go and see how i can do the NC-17 part of this! lol I will post more on here either later tonight or tomorrow! Tellme what ya'll think!

CD DeLorenzo · 07-16-2003, 11:56 PM

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Originally posted by CD_Nate _4ever
Ok well i decided to make 2 diff. fics one Nc-17 one PG-13 to R I will post one here and give the other one to CD Delerenzo for her site! This ismy 1st fic im so excited! hehe ok here goes a lil more!

haha!!! Very cool! I'll get a new fic for my site! yippie yooo! I should add mine and Jeanies too though... lol, anyhow, keep on writing, it ROCKS!!!!

So post more!

CD_Nate _4ever · 07-17-2003, 08:21 PM

They barely made it through Nates front door before clothes started flying. Their lips would part only long enough to slip off a coat or shoes. After what seemed like eternity they finally reached Nates room. He broke their kiss as they entered the doorway. "You...You sure?" he said catching his breathe. What she did next was unthinkable when it came to Candace Delerenzo! She grabbed him and kissed him passionatly as she pushed him towards the bed. She threw him on the bed then climbed onto of him. Still kissing their bodys began to move w/ the motion of their kiss. He turned over so he was on top now. He slowed their kiss down then moved toward her neck. She moaned slightly. He began to unbotton her pink sweater. She pulled his shirt over his head and they began kissing again. After a moment he lifted her up and undid her lacy bra in on fast snap. <WOW she thought he's good at that> He then threw the bra on the floor. He was so taken aback by her beauty. He had never seen her like this and at that moment he loved her more than the thought he ever could. They kissed again this time flesh to flesh. She shuddered realizing it had never felt this good before. She loved him and this moment more then she did her first time w/ her ex-husband. She moaned as he got both her pants and hers off so they were complety nude w/ each other. By now she could feel his steel erection on her thigh as they kissed more and he ran his mouth down her stomach. She put her hands in his hair and moaned as she arched her back. "Nate" she said as she reached up to get his attention. "You gotta go...We've waited to long for this to waste it on silly foreplay" He chuckled and kissed her as he began touching her clit , it was wet very wet. he circled around and she let out one big moan "NNNNAAATTEE" she cryed. He decided it was time . He slipped his hard erection in her and they both moaned simutanusly. He began again kissing her from the mouth down the neck all the way to her nipples as he stade there and circled his tongue around them. Suddenly he jerked his **** out of her. <whats going on> she thought as she moaned from disapointment. Then he thrust one, two, then three fingers inside her and she moaned again. Her movemnts became erotic and he knew she was almost there so he slipped his steel back into her. This sent them both over the top. They began thrusting each other . Both moaning and sweating. "C..D.. I...I.. l..ove..you" he moaned out as he burst inside her. Not being able to respond she thrust into him once more and felt the wave come over her. "OhhhOhh " she cried out as they both spased. He fell ontop of her when they were both done. It had happened they both thought. They had finally slept together. After a few short moments Nate rolled off of CD and layed beside her as he pulled some covers over both of them. They layed there a moment looking at eachother soaking it all in. He brushed a lock of blonde hair out of her face then cupped her face and kissed her. Breaking away she yawned. "Goodnight CD" Nate said as he wrapped his arms around her. "Night Nate" She said smiling.

WEll hehe there it is hehe WOW i've never written smut before lol! Neways i wish they would do it for real! lol Dont ya'll! Well i gotta go fold some clothes but i will be back to write somemore im thinking ofmaybe making really long like the 1st year of their relationship w/ some of the other characters in it also! Well tell me what ya'll think!
CD AND NATE FOREVER!~!~!~!~!

CD DeLorenzo · 07-17-2003, 09:58 PM

ooooh very cool

hurry with the clothes

And come back and write more!

TLC4Whitney · 07-17-2003, 10:05 PM

Wowers...

disturbed child · 07-18-2003, 02:20 AM

That was freaking great! I loved it. MORE!!!! Must. Have. More.

CD DeLorenzo · 07-18-2003, 04:40 AM

LOL I just realized sumthin

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Originally posted by CD_Nate _4ever
im thinking ofmaybe making really long like the 1st year of their relationship w/ some of the other characters in it also!

Division goes orgy? LOL

j/k

Hey Miranda does that remind ya of something? LOL?

CD_Nate _4ever · 07-18-2003, 06:30 PM

HEY!
I like that orgy thought! lol j/k i could not picture any of them doing that lol. Well some friends of ours are getting married so i got that going on tonight and tomorrow but i promise tomorrow night i will get some more up of the fic! So i gotta go! BUH~BYE!!!
CD NATE FOREVER!~!~!

CD DeLorenzo · 07-18-2003, 08:42 PM

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Originally posted by CD_Nate _4ever
HEY!
I like that orgy thought! lol j/k i could not picture any of them doing that lol. Well some friends of ours are getting married so i got that going on tonight and tomorrow but i promise tomorrow night i will get some more up of the fic! So i gotta go! BUH~BYE!!!
CD NATE FOREVER!~!~!

LOL enjoy the wedding, and don't orgy around too much there

CD_Nate _4ever · 07-20-2003, 07:49 PM

ok heres somemore! hehe

She woke up to the smell of bacon the next morning. She smiled at the thought of what had happened the night before. How wonderful it was. She got out of bed and threw on a rope that Nate had lovingly put out for her and proceeded to the kitchen. "Nate Basso your cooking!" she said walking over to him at the stove. "Yes i am! Im cooking your favorite bacon,eggs, and pancakes" He replied putting his arms around her. "I guess this means i was good last night huh?" she questioned "Hell ya!" He replied handing her a plate. They sat down to eat but couldnt keep their eyes off each other. <If we cant even eat w/ out wanting to ravish eachother how are we suppose to work together> She thought. "listen Nate, We need to talk about work" she said laying down her fork. "Ya i guess we do" Nate laughed. "We cant let anyone know about whats going on w/ us, Kate would reassign us if she found out." CD said hoping he'd be serious about this for a minute. "I know CD we just gotta act like we used to, at least around everyone at the division ok?" "Aight Nate, i think i can do that" He got up to put their plates away and she went after him. She wrapped her arms around his waist and he turned around to do the same. He bent down to kiss her head. "I love you CD" he said. "I love you too Nate" They kissed, the first actuall kiss since they slept together. It was real this time more real than before, this time she was certain it was love.
***The Division***
CD and Nate were sitting across from each other at their desks as usuall. It was now 10:00am and they had been there four hours and noone had noticed anything different. They were both doing really good. But every once in a while CD would feel Nates foot slide up her leg a little. She would stop reading a file and look up at him w/ that "naughty naughty boy" look. She has to admit this is kinda fun. Just then Kate walked up and Nates foot slammed back to the ground. "Inspectors we gotta a call from St. Peters Home, a 17 year old girl that lived their was found dead this morning in a alley in Lakeshire. I want you two to go to St. Peters and question anyone you can about this case" Kate informed them "Ok Cap" Nate said as they both got up and grabbed their coats. They finally got to touch in the car as Nate drove they held hands and shared a few glances.
***St. Peters Orphanage***
"Yes, Im Inspector Basso this is my partner inspector De Lorenzo we need to speak to whoever is in charge at the home please" Nate said as he walked up to one of the nuns. "Yes sir, right this way."She replied. "Yes inspectors i have been expecting you Please have a seat" Dean Charleton said "We need to speak w/ whoever might of known Ally Wingett sir" CD said as they both sat down. "Well her roomate was the one who noticed when she didnt come home last night and she has already been informed Of Allys death. Its very hard on all of us." Charleton said. "Where is her roomate now?" CD asked "Her name is Jo.. Joey moore and i believe right now she is at basketball practice, shes our number 1 player here." The dean replied. "Nate im going to go see if i can talk to her and you keep talking to the dean" CD said as she left.
***St. Peters Gym***
"Joey Moore?" CD said walking over to the brunette playing basketball. "Yes." Jo replied. "Joey im inspector De Lorenzo and I need to ask you a few questions about Ally, your roommate" Jo took a free throw line shot and swished it. "Coach This woman needs to speak w/ me about Ally." Jo yelled to her coach at the side line. "Nope sorry kid 10 more min. of practice gotta get ready for playoffs." Jo turned back to CD who looked puzzled. "Would you mind waiting 10 more min. Coach is really riding my butt about these playoffs." Jo said. "Sure umm I'll just be over there on the bleachers" CD said. "Thanks" Jo replied.

Hey i will be back later to do more but i gotta print some stuff out for my mom lol bLAH!!!! heheh well i hope ya'll like this part.!

CD_Nate _4ever · 07-20-2003, 08:52 PM

Jo and her coach finished up practice while CD watched. She had to admit this girl was good. She missed one shot out of the whole 10 min. Jo grabbed her towel and walked over to CD "Sorry about that Inspector he's really pushy come playoff time" Jo said. "Its ok Joey, I need to take you down to the station to ask you a few questions about Ally ok?" CD asked. "Ya" Jo said sadly. "I was wondering where you were at" Nate said as he saw CD and the girl aproaching the car. "Joey this is my partner Inspector Basso" CD said. "Nice to meet you" Jo replied.
***The Division***
Nate had gone back to St. Peters to check out the dorm room and see if he could get anything on the case. And CD had Joey in for questioning.
CD: "When did you and Ally meet?"
Jo: "2 years ago when she came to the home, we were both 15 at the time and she had gotten kicked out of the last home she was in so i guess they sent her to St. Peters to get her back on track."
CD: "What was she like when you first met her?"
Jo: "Wild, Hair black, nose ring, devil music the whole works. But after about 6 months or so she calmed down a little. She's come to my games, and we actually started talking."
CD: "When did you notice somthing was wrong last night?"
Jo ran her fingers through her hair "I was done with practice and back to the room around 10 last night and since me and Ally are both 17 our curfew is 11. So i wasnt suprised when she wasnt home at 10. But then at 11 Mrs. Cain came in to make sure we were both in the room and Ally wasnt back yet. I asked Mrs. Cain to give her 30 more min maybe she just got stuck on the bus or something. Ally was never late, Even when she was wild she always made curfew." Joey said quitely
CD: "Do you know where she went?"
"No, outside of the room me and Ally hardly ever talked. She came to a few of my games but she's really a quite girl. I dont understand why this had to happen to her.... She was turning her life around! Why would someone do this" Jo cryed
CD sat down beside Jo. "Joey do you know anything that would possibly help us w/ what happened to her? Anyone else she hung out w/? Did she keep a Diary? Anything..?" CD asked. Jo wiped her eyes "I know she kept a diary in the first drawer in her desk. I wish i knew more but thats about it inspector im sorry" Jo replied sadly. "Its ok, Thank you for your help Joey" CD said as she patted Joey on the back. "Ok..Jo im gonna step right outside and make a phone call to my partner then i'll be right back ok?". "Ok".
"Nate I just dont know Joey has nothing except that Ally kept a Diary in her desk." CD said to Nate over the phone. "Ya i found that, I also talked to the Dean again and he said he wants us to put Joey somewhere safe tonight he doesnt want her to be at St. Peters tonight incase something else happens." Nate told CD "Well where are we suppose to put her?" CD questioned. "I dunno but im on my way their we will talk about it when i get back to the division." "Ok Nate talk to ya then buh~bye" She smiled and hung up.

Thats all i got for now cuz The Division is about to come on YAY!!!! Re-run but still exciting! lol
be back later! hope ya'll like it!~!~!

CD DeLorenzo · 07-20-2003, 10:55 PM

ooooh, it's cool!

Please write more soon.

07-16-2003, 06:30 PM	#1
CD_Nate _4ever Tracey Needham Rocks Occasional Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2003 Posts: 42	new fic (untittled for now) CD/Nate "Nate" CD had to do something she couldnt stand it anymore. Nate turned around. "I lied to you" she wispered. Nate looked at her kinda puzzled so she moved closer to him. "I lied to you about Lilly." He just kept looking at her so she went on. " I am interested....Im glad" she reached up and grabbed his neck and their lips met. At that moment the knot in her stomach went away she felt so calm. <OH MY GOD! Shes kissing me> Nate thought as their kiss deepend. Finally, needing air they broke apart. "WOW" Nate wispered as CD stared at the floor. She had kissed him! WOW was right! Normally she would never have done that but she just got so sick of doing nothing and loosing him to other women. It happened to many times and it wasnt going to happen again. She had kissed him, she cant take it back now. Its a done deal. She was in deep thought when Nate put his hand on her chin and drew her eyes up to him. They stood there a moment just looking at each other then he embraced her. They both let out a sigh. He cupped her face in his hands and said "You wanna go somewhere and talk for a little while" She nodded, and he bent down and kissed her lightly once more. *Nates House* The whole car ride had been silent neither of them knew what to say. They pulled up to Nates house and he put the car in park. "CD i hope this is ok i mean i will take you home whenever you want,.... I mean i dont want this to seem like just because i brought you to my house that i want to get in your pants or nothing ok? Nate studdered out. CD looked at him for the first time since they left the hospital. "Nate.. its fine. We need to be somewhere private right now." She said reasuringly as she put her hand on his. He smiled then they both got out of the car. "You wanna coke or anything?" Nate asked as CD was settling down on the couch. "That'd be great Nate" He handed her a coke then sat down on the coffee table infront of her. She took a few swigs of the coke then sat it beside him on the table. Then there was nothing, they both just sat there looking at the floor. <What is she thinking right now?> Nate thought. <Does she think that i dont want her? Why did she have to kiss ME? GOD that must of been hard on her! Why was i so stupid and stubborn! I should have made the first move!> Nate streches out his arms and grabs her hands in his. She looks up and their eyes meet again. The knot in her stomach returns. "CD... im glad too" Nate said. "About what" she asked. "About ending it w/ Lilly, about us kissing, about you being in my life and feeling the same way i do. Im so glad about all those things CD, You dont have to be afraid or scared or upset anymore.Its OK now, Its out... I love you" He said as he moved to the couch to sit beside her. She looked up at him and smiled "I love you too Nate" She said as a tear rolled down her cheeck. He reached his thumb up and pushed away the tear before he leaned in the their lips met again. This time it was a deep passionate kiss. She groaned a little letting him know it was ok. He lowered her down on he Couch and they continued to kiss passionatly. HEHE So go on or what?!?!? IS this site R friendly or should i keep it clean? Let me know what you think!
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07-16-2003, 06:44 PM	#2
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07-16-2003, 07:43 PM	#3
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07-20-2003, 07:49 PM	#13
CD_Nate _4ever Tracey Needham Rocks Occasional Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2003 Posts: 42	ok heres somemore! hehe She woke up to the smell of bacon the next morning. She smiled at the thought of what had happened the night before. How wonderful it was. She got out of bed and threw on a rope that Nate had lovingly put out for her and proceeded to the kitchen. "Nate Basso your cooking!" she said walking over to him at the stove. "Yes i am! Im cooking your favorite bacon,eggs, and pancakes" He replied putting his arms around her. "I guess this means i was good last night huh?" she questioned "Hell ya!" He replied handing her a plate. They sat down to eat but couldnt keep their eyes off each other. <If we cant even eat w/ out wanting to ravish eachother how are we suppose to work together> She thought. "listen Nate, We need to talk about work" she said laying down her fork. "Ya i guess we do" Nate laughed. "We cant let anyone know about whats going on w/ us, Kate would reassign us if she found out." CD said hoping he'd be serious about this for a minute. "I know CD we just gotta act like we used to, at least around everyone at the division ok?" "Aight Nate, i think i can do that" He got up to put their plates away and she went after him. She wrapped her arms around his waist and he turned around to do the same. He bent down to kiss her head. "I love you CD" he said. "I love you too Nate" They kissed, the first actuall kiss since they slept together. It was real this time more real than before, this time she was certain it was love. *The Division* CD and Nate were sitting across from each other at their desks as usuall. It was now 10:00am and they had been there four hours and noone had noticed anything different. They were both doing really good. But every once in a while CD would feel Nates foot slide up her leg a little. She would stop reading a file and look up at him w/ that "naughty naughty boy" look. She has to admit this is kinda fun. Just then Kate walked up and Nates foot slammed back to the ground. "Inspectors we gotta a call from St. Peters Home, a 17 year old girl that lived their was found dead this morning in a alley in Lakeshire. I want you two to go to St. Peters and question anyone you can about this case" Kate informed them "Ok Cap" Nate said as they both got up and grabbed their coats. They finally got to touch in the car as Nate drove they held hands and shared a few glances. *St. Peters Orphanage* "Yes, Im Inspector Basso this is my partner inspector De Lorenzo we need to speak to whoever is in charge at the home please" Nate said as he walked up to one of the nuns. "Yes sir, right this way."She replied. "Yes inspectors i have been expecting you Please have a seat" Dean Charleton said "We need to speak w/ whoever might of known Ally Wingett sir" CD said as they both sat down. "Well her roomate was the one who noticed when she didnt come home last night and she has already been informed Of Allys death. Its very hard on all of us." Charleton said. "Where is her roomate now?" CD asked "Her name is Jo.. Joey moore and i believe right now she is at basketball practice, shes our number 1 player here." The dean replied. "Nate im going to go see if i can talk to her and you keep talking to the dean" CD said as she left. *St. Peters Gym* "Joey Moore?" CD said walking over to the brunette playing basketball. "Yes." Jo replied. "Joey im inspector De Lorenzo and I need to ask you a few questions about Ally, your roommate" Jo took a free throw line shot and swished it. "Coach This woman needs to speak w/ me about Ally." Jo yelled to her coach at the side line. "Nope sorry kid 10 more min. of practice gotta get ready for playoffs." Jo turned back to CD who looked puzzled. "Would you mind waiting 10 more min. Coach is really riding my butt about these playoffs." Jo said. "Sure umm I'll just be over there on the bleachers" CD said. "Thanks" Jo replied. Hey i will be back later to do more but i gotta print some stuff out for my mom lol bLAH!!!! heheh well i hope ya'll like this part.! Attached Images

07-16-2003, 11:11 PM	#4
CD_Nate _4ever Tracey Needham Rocks Occasional Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2003 Posts: 42	Ok well i decided to make 2 diff. fics one Nc-17 one PG-13 to R I will post one here and give the other one to CD Delerenzo for her site! This ismy 1st fic im so excited! hehe ok here goes a lil more! Their kiss deepend. CD began to moan as Nate layed ontop of her on the couch. <What are we doing? We cant sleep together the first night we confess all this stuff!> Nate thought. He broke their kiss. "What?" CD said. Nate sat up. "We cant do this CD" he said. "Damn I figured this would happen!" CD yelled as she got up and grabbed her coat to leave. "Wait CD why are you leaving?" Nate went after her. Cd turned around in the driveway "Nate you just said we cant do this now let me go alright, i understand you dont want me ok!" <Her mood changes where coming more often the past few days i wonder if she is PMSing! NO! This is no time for sillyness> Nate told himself. He grabbed her by the shoulders as if he was going to shake her. "CD thats not it! And deep down you know that! I just want to make sure we arent making a mistake by sleeping together our first night!" CD looked at him w/ a odd expression "Is that all this is about?" she asked "Ya" She smiled as he drew her into his arms they stade that way for a moment then she pushed him slightly to get out of his grip. "And who said i was going to sleep with you Mr.Hotty pants!" She said as she slapped his shoulder. "OHH you know you want me baby!" He said as he grabbed her again and kissed her passionatly! Coming up for air she said "maybe we should go back inside before you neighbors see us doing the dirty on your lawn!" Nate laughed and they went back inside. Now im gonna go and see how i can do the NC-17 part of this! lol I will post more on here either later tonight or tomorrow! Tellme what ya'll think!

07-17-2003, 08:21 PM	#6
CD_Nate _4ever Tracey Needham Rocks Occasional Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2003 Posts: 42	They barely made it through Nates front door before clothes started flying. Their lips would part only long enough to slip off a coat or shoes. After what seemed like eternity they finally reached Nates room. He broke their kiss as they entered the doorway. "You...You sure?" he said catching his breathe. What she did next was unthinkable when it came to Candace Delerenzo! She grabbed him and kissed him passionatly as she pushed him towards the bed. She threw him on the bed then climbed onto of him. Still kissing their bodys began to move w/ the motion of their kiss. He turned over so he was on top now. He slowed their kiss down then moved toward her neck. She moaned slightly. He began to unbotton her pink sweater. She pulled his shirt over his head and they began kissing again. After a moment he lifted her up and undid her lacy bra in on fast snap. <WOW she thought he's good at that> He then threw the bra on the floor. He was so taken aback by her beauty. He had never seen her like this and at that moment he loved her more than the thought he ever could. They kissed again this time flesh to flesh. She shuddered realizing it had never felt this good before. She loved him and this moment more then she did her first time w/ her ex-husband. She moaned as he got both her pants and hers off so they were complety nude w/ each other. By now she could feel his steel erection on her thigh as they kissed more and he ran his mouth down her stomach. She put her hands in his hair and moaned as she arched her back. "Nate" she said as she reached up to get his attention. "You gotta go...We've waited to long for this to waste it on silly foreplay" He chuckled and kissed her as he began touching her clit , it was wet very wet. he circled around and she let out one big moan "NNNNAAATTEE" she cryed. He decided it was time . He slipped his hard erection in her and they both moaned simutanusly. He began again kissing her from the mouth down the neck all the way to her nipples as he stade there and circled his tongue around them. Suddenly he jerked his **** out of her. <whats going on> she thought as she moaned from disapointment. Then he thrust one, two, then three fingers inside her and she moaned again. Her movemnts became erotic and he knew she was almost there so he slipped his steel back into her. This sent them both over the top. They began thrusting each other . Both moaning and sweating. "C..D.. I...I.. l..ove..you" he moaned out as he burst inside her. Not being able to respond she thrust into him once more and felt the wave come over her. "OhhhOhh " she cried out as they both spased. He fell ontop of her when they were both done. It had happened they both thought. They had finally slept together. After a few short moments Nate rolled off of CD and layed beside her as he pulled some covers over both of them. They layed there a moment looking at eachother soaking it all in. He brushed a lock of blonde hair out of her face then cupped her face and kissed her. Breaking away she yawned. "Goodnight CD" Nate said as he wrapped his arms around her. "Night Nate" She said smiling. WEll hehe there it is hehe WOW i've never written smut before lol! Neways i wish they would do it for real! lol Dont ya'll! Well i gotta go fold some clothes but i will be back to write somemore im thinking ofmaybe making really long like the 1st year of their relationship w/ some of the other characters in it also! Well tell me what ya'll think! CD AND NATE FOREVER!~!~!~!~!

07-17-2003, 09:58 PM	#7
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	ooooh very cool hurry with the clothes And come back and write more!

07-17-2003, 10:05 PM	#8
TLC4Whitney WhitneyHoustons#1Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 04, 2003 Location: California Posts: 181	Wowers...

07-18-2003, 02:20 AM	#9
disturbed child Member Forum Regular Join Date: Aug 04, 2001 Location: In denial. Posts: 823	That was freaking great! I loved it. MORE!!!! Must. Have. More.

07-18-2003, 06:30 PM	#11
CD_Nate _4ever Tracey Needham Rocks Occasional Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2003 Posts: 42	HEY! I like that orgy thought! lol j/k i could not picture any of them doing that lol. Well some friends of ours are getting married so i got that going on tonight and tomorrow but i promise tomorrow night i will get some more up of the fic! So i gotta go! BUH~BYE!!! CD NATE FOREVER!~!~!

07-20-2003, 08:52 PM	#14
CD_Nate _4ever Tracey Needham Rocks Occasional Poster Join Date: Jul 16, 2003 Posts: 42	Jo and her coach finished up practice while CD watched. She had to admit this girl was good. She missed one shot out of the whole 10 min. Jo grabbed her towel and walked over to CD "Sorry about that Inspector he's really pushy come playoff time" Jo said. "Its ok Joey, I need to take you down to the station to ask you a few questions about Ally ok?" CD asked. "Ya" Jo said sadly. "I was wondering where you were at" Nate said as he saw CD and the girl aproaching the car. "Joey this is my partner Inspector Basso" CD said. "Nice to meet you" Jo replied. *The Division* Nate had gone back to St. Peters to check out the dorm room and see if he could get anything on the case. And CD had Joey in for questioning. CD: "When did you and Ally meet?" Jo: "2 years ago when she came to the home, we were both 15 at the time and she had gotten kicked out of the last home she was in so i guess they sent her to St. Peters to get her back on track." CD: "What was she like when you first met her?" Jo: "Wild, Hair black, nose ring, devil music the whole works. But after about 6 months or so she calmed down a little. She's come to my games, and we actually started talking." CD: "When did you notice somthing was wrong last night?" Jo ran her fingers through her hair "I was done with practice and back to the room around 10 last night and since me and Ally are both 17 our curfew is 11. So i wasnt suprised when she wasnt home at 10. But then at 11 Mrs. Cain came in to make sure we were both in the room and Ally wasnt back yet. I asked Mrs. Cain to give her 30 more min maybe she just got stuck on the bus or something. Ally was never late, Even when she was wild she always made curfew." Joey said quitely CD: "Do you know where she went?" "No, outside of the room me and Ally hardly ever talked. She came to a few of my games but she's really a quite girl. I dont understand why this had to happen to her.... She was turning her life around! Why would someone do this" Jo cryed CD sat down beside Jo. "Joey do you know anything that would possibly help us w/ what happened to her? Anyone else she hung out w/? Did she keep a Diary? Anything..?" CD asked. Jo wiped her eyes "I know she kept a diary in the first drawer in her desk. I wish i knew more but thats about it inspector im sorry" Jo replied sadly. "Its ok, Thank you for your help Joey" CD said as she patted Joey on the back. "Ok..Jo im gonna step right outside and make a phone call to my partner then i'll be right back ok?". "Ok". "Nate I just dont know Joey has nothing except that Ally kept a Diary in her desk." CD said to Nate over the phone. "Ya i found that, I also talked to the Dean again and he said he wants us to put Joey somewhere safe tonight he doesnt want her to be at St. Peters tonight incase something else happens." Nate told CD "Well where are we suppose to put her?" CD questioned. "I dunno but im on my way their we will talk about it when i get back to the division." "Ok Nate talk to ya then buh~bye" She smiled and hung up. Thats all i got for now cuz The Division is about to come on YAY!!!! Re-run but still exciting! lol be back later! hope ya'll like it!~!~!

07-20-2003, 10:55 PM	#15
CD DeLorenzo TRACEY FOREVER!!! Senior Member Join Date: Jun 20, 2003 Location: I don't wanna talk if it makes you feel sad Posts: 2,376	ooooh, it's cool! Please write more soon.