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Well,guys,I know I'm not through with my fan fic and I want to do
another one after that,but I decided to write one tonight, My other will be finished tomorrow ok. This story is taking place in season 2,and Jo's got a rivalry in a new tough girl named Erica (Opening Theme) The Girls Bedroom Mrs.Garrett knocks on the door and Tootie opens it. Mrs.Garrett(walks in) Good morning girls! All: Good morning. Jo:Mrs.G,can we at least have privacy while we get ready. Mrs.Garrett :In a minute Jo,I have some important news,Today a new student will coming in to take a test and her name is Erica,she will be joining you at Eastland soon! All: That's Great! Later In the Cafeteria Molly:So Nancy what's the scoop on the new student? Nancy:I don't know much,All Sue Ann said was we're getting someone new,but I didn't get to ask her anything else. Suddenly a girl in blue jeans,a flannel shirt and a black leather jacket walks in while all the girls are talking . Erica (in a tough voice):Yo,is this is Eastland school. Blair(extends her hand):Welcome!.Welcome! Erica(snickers):Hey who's the prom queen? Jo catches her and walks up Jo(moves up):You got something to say! Erica(angry): Beat it Fonzi! Jo (raises voice)What did you say to me!! Mrs.Garrett walks in before Jo does anything else. Mrs.Garrett:Welcome Erica,I assume you've met- Erica(cuts her off) Charlotte Bronson and Cleopatra! Jo angry): That does it!Mrs.Garrett(grabs Jo):Jo!we've been through this before! Exit to Lounge Mrs.Garrett:Ok Erica Jackson,you will room with Sue Ann Weaver. (Erica walks into the girls room after she is told.) Erica:So I guess you girls are all preppie lovas. Jo:And what makes you think that? Erica:Can it Private Benjamin!,I saw the way you walk! Tootie:I wouldn't talk to her that way that if I were you. Blair:Erica,You have just entered Eastland,It's a true experience. Erica:Out of my way Material Girl. Erica exits and pushes Blair out of her way. Later That Night Natalie walks up to Erica Natalie:Hey Erica we were going to movie tonight you wanna come ?,We get free popcorn since I know a guy who works at the snack bar and sometimes free drinks! Erica:Is that all you get for free! (Blair and Jo walk in arguing) Blair:Jo I told I don't want to see another biker flick! Jo:And I'm not seeing another love story! Erica:That biker flick seems cool! Jo:Great!,finally I got somebody took to take my side! Erica:Hey guys ever been to a free movie? Tootie:You mean sneak into the theater? Erica:Yeah,me and my friends always did that in Harlem,Anyways me and Jo can start a fight at the box office,and you,the fat girl and that Barbie doll can sneak in,Then watch the ushers come to check outside,me and Jo well run and sneak in the back. (The girls all stare at Erica in shock) To Be Continued.... |
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Great Story, please post more soon
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Here's a little more.
Tootie and Natalie are upstairs talking before dinner Tootie(worried voice):Natalie I don't asking Erica to the movies was such a good idea after all. Natalie(calmer voice):Tootie come on Erica's new and besides when can we show her around Peekskill,besides she got stuck with Sue Ann,you know she hardly does anything more because she feels she's too ugly to go out anymore. Tootie(calmer voice):Well,I guess you're right. They then head downstairs to serve dinner Erica stares at Tootie as she serves her some mashed potatoes. Erica(rudely):You no slavery ended a long time ago. Tootie(irritated):I know but this my punishment,keep moving Erica: What did you do? Tootie Well you we stole the school van and we- Natalie(yells):Tootie will you shut up and serve! Erica: You stole the school van and you what? Jo(raises voice):Hey motormouth get a move on will you! Erica (raises voice):Hey we're talking ok! Jo gives Erica an evil look and then Mrs.Garrett comes in Mrs.Garrett:All right why isn't this line moving!,dinner's almost over and you need to start clearing out. Jo:Well you'd better go tell motor lips over there! Mrs.Garrett: Jo! Erica:Keep talking and you will have no lips. Jo: You wanna try me! Mrs G:Girls never mind!,Just hurry up. Jo continues serving and Erica moves out of the line. More to Come later !! |
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This is super! I'm starting another fan-fic. tonight myself. Anyways, keep it up! BTW, I HATE Erica for making fun of my girl-friend (Blair) Jo needs to punch her.
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Ok,I'm not very busy tonight,so I'll post more.
After dinner in the lounge,Mrs.Garrett is sitting down on the couch and reading a magazine,and Jo and Blair are playing Scrabble when Tootie and Natalie walk in. (Lounge) Tootie:Hey you guys,I thought that we were going to the movies tonight,You two are still going aren't you. Jo:Oops,sorry Tootie,I guess we forgot.(get ups to clean.) Blair:Here,here,(she get ups and helps Jo clear up the table.) Jo:By the way will Motorboat Jackson be joining us? Mrs.Garrett:Jo,be nice you know how tough being new can be, you have your ride on the boat remember. Jo:Sorry Mrs.G Mrs.Garrett id you girls invite Erica?Natalie:Yes,last night. Mrs.Garrett:Good!,I'm sure all of you will become good friends, why don't you ask Sue Ann to join you also. Natalie:Oh Mrs.Garrett, Sue Ann never goes out anywhere. Mrs.Garrett:Well alright,if you say so. Erica then barges in. Erica:Yo.are we going or what?! Natalie:Erica,sorry to keep you waiting. Jo:Alright,lets go. Mrs.Garrett:Have fun girls and be back early! All:We will bye. (At The Movie Theater) The girls are all in the ticket line,it's a long one so they are at the end,It's cold outside and they start to shiver. Jo:If that line doesn't move any faster I'm going to go inside right inside to punch the manager! Erica:I think you should go for it! Jo (glares at Erica):Right after I punch you! Erica:Take your best shot! Jo raises her right fist in a warning,But Blair stops her Blair:Can't we all just try to get along? Jo:Can the sweet talk Madonna! Natalie:Jo shh!,you're going to get us kicked out. They then started to go inside the theater. Tootie:Let's stop at the snack bar first. Natalie:Great,Tootie,Matt's the guy with the spiked haircut behind the counter,just tell you know me,I need to go to the restroom. Tootie:Ok Nat. Blair:Hold on Nat I'll come with you. Blair and Natalie head into the restroom. They walk in and see no long line Natalie:Great there's no long line!(she walks inside a stall) Blair goes into a stall as well,they both lock their doors. Blair:Natalie,there's no toilet paper in this stall! Natalie takes out a roll of toliet paper out the holder and rolls it over to Blair. Blair:Thanks! (she picks it up) Natalie:No problem,there were two rolls in this stall. After that they wash their hands and head out to look for the others,Tootie is at the snack bar getting popcorn and drinks, but Jo and Erica are nowhere to be seen. Matt:Can I get you anything else ladies? Tootie:Um,one box of Jujubes please. Matt:There you go ,Thank you. Tootie: Anytime. Natalie:Tootie,where are Jo and Erica? Tootie:I thought that they went with you. Blair:No I went with her,where are they! Tootie:I don't know. Blair:In the words of Jo,when we find those two, ''I'm gonna loosen some teeth! Tootie:Well the movie is about to start so come on,they probably went inside early to catch the previews.'' Natalie:Maybe you're right. They follow Tootie inside. After a while the movie starts and still no Jo or Erica Suddenly the theatre lights turn on,the movie is stopped and two ushers come down the aisles with flashlights. Usher1:Have you caught her yet?! Usher2:Not yet,the girl with the ponytail was pretty quick. Tootie,Natalie and Blair all gasped at this. Blair:Oh my word! Usher1:I got her now!,alright young lady come with me! Usher2:The other one in the black jacket was easier to catch. The usher walks holding to Jo,the other holds on to Erica, A man walks to down to their aisle. Man:Excuse me ladies,but were those two with you? Natalie:Yes. Man :Sorry,but you all have to go to down the Peekskill Police Station these two who were both on probation got caught sneaking into a movie by the ushers. They all gulp and follow the man outside the theater. More to come later! |
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Everybody,I'm gonna be gone on vacation this week,probably
for about three or four days,but I'll post more when I get back, in the meantime enjoy what I have down so far!
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It's really Good Please post soon
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Hey guys I'm back!,Here's more.
(Eastland Lounge) Mrs.Garrett is talking to Mr.Parker . Mr.Parker:Anyways Edna I think you have done a wonderful handing the girls work around here until the van damage is paid. Mrs.Garrett:Oh it was no trouble at all Mr.Parker. The phone rings and Mrs.Garrett answers it Mrs.Garrett:Hello?,Tootie?!where are you?! Tootie:We are at the Peekskill Police Station Mrs.Garrett, Jo and Erica got caught sneaking into the movie and they got arrested!,please hurry and don't be mad at us! Mrs.Garrett:What?!!,alright I'll be there as soon as I can. Mr.Parker:Someone hurt? Mrs.Garrett:Oh no,I forgot to pick the girls up at the movies. Mr.Parker :The late show just started a few minutes ago. Mrs.Garrett: They didn't like the movie. Mr.Parker: Oh well hurry along. (Peekskill Police Department.) Jo and Erica are inside the jail. Jo:Great first Mrs.G tells me to be nice to ya and the next thing I know I'm in the slammah! Erica:Chill out this ain't no big deal! Jo:Blow it out your guchie bag!,I'm already on probation! Erica: Well so am I! Jo: What did you do? Erica:I threatened to assault my old gym teacher in Harlem. Suddenly Mrs Garrett shows up Mrs.Garrett:Girls!!! Jo: Mrs.G!!! Mrs.Garrett:Erica I'm greatly disappointed in you,You can not come into Eastland school acting like you own the show! Erica:Cool it!,don't get your support hose tied in a knot! Jo snickers at this and Mrs.Garrett scowls at her. Mrs.Garrett:I am talking to you! and I won't settle for backtalk!Th They then head out to talk to the Probation officer. |
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Thanks again! And now here's more!
Probation Officer: Excuse me?,but who is in charge of the two juvenile females who snuck into the Peekskill Theater? Mrs.Garrett:That would be me Mrs.Edna Garrett. Probation Officer:Haven't we met before? Mrs.Garrett :Well,yes,it the was the stolen van incident. Probation Officer :I thought so,anyways the case on Joanna Marie Polniaczek and Erica Dawn Jackson will be a curfew of ten o'clock and four months added to their probation,any violations by here whatsoever according the judge will result in juvenile hall . Mrs.Garrett:Are you sure,that seems so harsh. Probation: They have to learn some time. Mrs.Garrett:Well alright,come on girls let's go home. Later at Eastland (Mrs.Garrett,Erica and Jo are talking in the Lounge while Blair,Natalie and Tootie head on up to bed.) Mrs.Garrett:Girls,I'm greatly disappointed in both of you!, I send you out to have a good time and to make friends, but you two instead decided to boil a pot of trouble!,and Jo how could you be so stupid!,Why couldn't have you reasoned! Jo then starts to sob and tears fall down her eyes,she fights to keep from crying in order to answer Mrs.Garrett. Jo:I'm sorry Mrs.G.,honest,when Erica asked me to sneak with her,I wanted to say no,I tried to say no,but I couldn't,I was afraid she would think I was a sissy or something! Mrs.Garrett:Jo that's not the point!,go upstairs!,we talk more tomorrow morning,Erica stay here I need to talk to you. Mrs.:Well Miss Jackson,what do you have to say? Erica: I'm sorry okay. Mrs.Garrett: Sorry doesn't cut it Erica,do you know the amount of trouble you got yourself into,not only with the police,you were to have started classes at Eastland next week,but you are now expelled,and you will be joining the girls tomorrow morning before six o'clock to get ready before you start serving meals. Erica:What?!,you mean I have to work in that dump,you call a kitchen,that's not fair!,I'd rather hitchhike back home! Mrs.Garrett:Uh live's not fair honey,sometimes you just have to learn to suffer the consequences,now come along. Mrs.Garrett walks with Erica into the kitchen. Mrs.Garrett: Howard!,Howard!.Howard! Howard comes into the Cafeteria ,he winks at Erica. Howard:Nice try honey,but sneaking in the school dietician after Twinkie curfew won't get you any junk food Mrs.Garrett:Howard,this is our new student Erica she will joining the wonderful kitchen staff tomorrow. Howard:Great!,Tootie never takes out the garbage,you're hired! Erica: Trash taker!,what?! Mrs.Garrett:Honey,you only die from the smell!,now off to bed! remember you have to get up early ! Erica: Yeah,Yeah She goes upstairs. More to come later ! |
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Ok,here some more
(The Girls Bedroom) Erica slips quietly into Jo's bed by mistake, and goes to sleep,after awhile Jo begins to toss and turn and bumps her head against Ericas,She wakes up and turns on the lamp angrily to see who it was Jo: You!,get out ! Natalie wakes up from the glare of the lamp. Natalie:Who ever turned on the lamp,turn it off! Jo: Sorry Nat,but someone's been sleeping in my bed! she lifts the blanket and pushes Erica down to the floor. Erica: Hey where am I supposed to sleep?! Jo grins at her wickedly and looks over at Blair. Jo:Why don't you go over there and join Goldilocks? Natalie laughs at this and Jo turns out the lights. Early Morning soon comes. Jo is banging on the bathroom door. Jo:Move it Princess Di!! Blair: Turn Blue! Tootie:You guys hurry up!,we almost overslept! Natalie:You were the one who didn't set the alarm! Tootie:It was late and I was tired ok. Erica is still asleep on the floor and Jo kicks her. Jo:Ay!Rise and Shine! Erica:What is it? Natalie:6:01 am Erica:I'll be up by one Jo:You'll be up by one foot if you don't get up! Erica:Is that a promise?! Jo: You bet it is! Erica gets up fast. Downstairs Mrs.Garrett:Girls,move it,the students are lining up Tootie: Oatmeal's here! Natalie: Toast is ready! Jo: The eggs are almost done! Blair: I may have lost a fingernail in the oatmeal again! Erica: The bacon's frying Tootie wrinkles her nose after she notice a strong smell' Erica:It's also burning! They serve the students and then head to their classes. More to come later! |
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