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06-26-2003, 10:21 PM
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The One and Only
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Consequences & Surprises
This fan fiction was done in roleplay format by myself and CDDeLorenzo... Everyother post is a different person. I begin so then the second is CDDeLorenzo's then the third is mine, and so on....
--------------------------------------------------------------- A camera flashes, and as her eyes readjust she sees, again, the body of a young woman lying lifeless on the ground. Rummaging through her wallet Jinny pulls out the victims drivers license and recites, "Jericka Kelly. San Francisco address, D.O.B. August 15th, 1967." and glances up at her partner that was still leaning over the body examining the marks on her throat. Magda looked up at her friend. Somehow these cases always troubled her, no matter how many of them she saw. "Anything else? Family?" Shrugging Jinny glances back down and moves a few more things around in the victim's wallet, "Nah not that I can see. A few slips of paper with phone numbers." she couldn't help but smirk slightly to herself she had done that before. Collected phone numbers of any available, or come to think of it unavailable men she came across. Not that she ever used them the next day after she left their place though. "Maybe we should check out the bar next door." she points behind her with her pen in hand. "See if they saw anything suspicious last night." Magda nodded. "Good idea. Maybe they knew her too" The brunette nods, "Or at least seen her." she pulls a photo of the victim from the wallet and glances at it for a second before passing it to her partner. "Husband? Boyfriend maybe?" "Or brother. Anything's possible. But whoever he is, we should find him." She handed her the photo back. "Maybe they know him too at the bar. Let's go?" Just then a small oriental woman with a suit moves through the surrounding police officers and under the yellow tape that had been put around, "Good morning Inspectors." she nods to them as they pass. "Yeah, what a wake up call." Jinny nods, "We'll be back in a few to get your information from her." Nora nods, "Right. " The tall blonde walked into the bullpen and smiled at her partner before helping herself to a coffee. She circulated her shoulders a little because her right shoulder was itching a little. Though it was something else, something between itching and pain. More annoying than anything, but it would go away, she knew that. Having watched his partner's actions he asks, "Everything all right?" with that he stands to grab himself a cup of the watered down Division coffee. C.D. still standing near the coffee pot near the window. "Yeah." She smiled at him. "And you?" "Of course, as usual." he smirks as he looks to her placing the coffee pot down again after filling his mug. "Was making sure. Gotta keep tabs on my partner, you know." he adds again and friendly pats her shoulder. She cringes and flinches at that as that had hurt. "The partner's feeling abused." She tried to joke it off. |
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06-26-2003, 10:39 PM
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Great start!!!!!! add more please!!
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06-26-2003, 10:54 PM
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Thank you, thank you
Hmh... hey Miranda, we have one reader already!
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06-26-2003, 11:50 PM
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------------------------------------------------- Pulling his arm back from the blonde he looks at her, "Apparently you're delicate today." he answers and takes a sip of his coffee. "What's wrong anyway?" he asks as he slowly makes his way back over to his desk across from hers. "Nothing's wrong." She walks back to her own desk. "And I'm not delicate, I just don't like getting hit" He chuckles, "Hit? Who hit you?" he asks, "I know I didn't. That's called a pat, C.D." he jokes, but is seriously waiting for her response. "Nate" She says a little whiney and gives him a puppy look. "I was joking around, okay? I know you didn't hit me. So drop it and get back to that paperwork in front of you. Cap said before she doesn't have all files that she needs she won't let us back out again." Giving his partner a suspicious look then glances down to his work infront of him, "That's it. We're never going to see the light of day again." he stops. "You want to know why?" She looks up at him smiling and raises her eyebrow questioningly, curious to hear what insights he had to offer next. Leaning back into his chair he crosses his arms in front of him with a sly smile, "Because I'm not going to work until you tell me what's wrong." She openes her mouth and shuts it again and shakes her head. "You're incredible, you know that? Nothing's wrong Nate, Really, I promise." "Incredible." he grins, "You really think I'm incredible?" he asks again with a smile as he jokes. Kate then walks from her office heading his question. "Yes, I think you're incredibly behind on your work." CD smirked at that and pointed her forefinger at him teasingly. "Told ya..." Nate then sits up in his seat, "I'm working..." he assures as he moves a few papers around on his. "See?" he asks C.D. jokingly as he actually does continue onto his work. Kate stood behind the man to the side of the Division pushing through some files in a filing cabinet. She couldn't help but smile as he heard Nate's ending remarks to C.D. "I'm amazed" CD chuckles and gets back to her own work Walking down the hall of the Sixth floor of the Central Station Police department Jinny and Magda were on their way back in from their call this morning. Pushing the Division door opened Jinny enters first with the case file in her hand and moves straight for her desk. |
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06-26-2003, 11:52 PM
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oh, snap!
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I'ma reader!! I like it
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06-26-2003, 11:55 PM
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*Waving arms frantically* ME!!! ME!!! I'm reading too!!!! I'm here!!! Add more.
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06-26-2003, 11:56 PM
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oh, snap!
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the same readers....BE PREPARED TO BE STALKED...again
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06-27-2003, 12:00 AM
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<<< READER NUMBER FOUR!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT SO FAR!!!
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I love Miss. Diva Extraordinare Whitney Houston!! She is incredibly talented, beautiful and MY IDOL and if you dont like her, than you can kiss my ass!!! "Love Me or Leave Me, But Love Me, Because I Love You" ~~~ Whitney Houston Diane: Can I ask you how much you weight? Whitney: Sure... Diane: How much do you weight? Whitney: I 'aint telling you... Will and Grace is the best show on television! Megan Mullally, Debra Messing, Sean Hayes and Eric McCormack make up the greatest cast in the history of television! |
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06-27-2003, 12:06 AM
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 ME! ima reader!
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06-27-2003, 12:09 AM
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06-27-2003, 12:09 AM
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OMG so many! Look at that lol
Hehe *waves at all readers and is all proud to be writing with Miranda*
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06-27-2003, 12:28 AM
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06-27-2003, 12:36 AM
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06-27-2003, 01:26 AM
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--------------------- Magda follows her, looking through some notes she had made. And then looked up to see their captain. Dropping the file on her desk Jinny then pulls her leather jacket off and settles down on the back of her chair as she sees Kate approaching. Glancing from the two woman the auburn haired woman asks, "What'd ya get?" "Female victim, from 67, caucasian." Magda started to tell her Grabbing the folder from the surface of her desk Jinny turns around and props herself ontop of it and rests her feet on her chair. "We did talked with the bartender next door to where the victim was found. He remembers her being in there late last night to early this morning. He said the regulars may have something to say they all seemed to know eachother." Kate nods and pulls on her glasses the had been hanging from a string around her neck as she reaches for the case file in Jinny's hand. "Any ID?" Nodding in response to her partner's word Jinny then continues, "Captain, this is the fifth case of a woman being attacked or killed while leaving a bar in the last two months." Kate nods as her eyes scan the paper work in front of her in the file. "You think they may all be related?" Jinny nods, "I'm beginning to. The attacking technique isn't the same in all of them, but the perp could be doing that on purpose. We're going to go back to the bar tonight and question some of the regulars there. Some that may have know Ms. Kelly." Shaking her head Kate answers, "Why don't You send some officers down? Have them do the word. Besides if you're right about this we may need some undercover work to be done meaning you and Magda. We don't want your faces to be burnt into their memories." Magda nodded. "Good idea." She looked over at her partner slightly worried though, wondering if working undercover at a bar was good for her. Kate nods, "Keep be informed." "Okay." Jinny replies promptly as the folder is handed back to her as she stands, and then sits back down but this time in her chair. "Mag..." the brunette says as she turns to ask her partner a question then sees her face. "What?" "Nothing. Just... the undercover thing. You think you can deal with that? Because if you rather not do it all of us will understand." |
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