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Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan · 05-28-2003, 11:34 PM

This is my new fan-fiction story. It's going to be an epsiode on my new show "The Facts are New." which is coming this fall. I can't WAIT! Anyways, hope you like it!

*The opening scene- Edna's Edibles. Jo is looking at a bike magazine, while Tootie is reading over her lines for a play she's going to be in. She stands up*

TOOTIE *reading from her script* How do I love thee? Let me count the ways! *Jo looks up from her magazine*

JO: How much do I want you to shut up? Let me count the ways.

TOOTIE: Jo, would you leave me be? I have to go over these lines.

JO: You've been going over these lines ever since you got that dang part. You even recite them while your taking a shower. *Blair enters*

BLAIR: Those of you who take showers! (Addressing Jo doesn't shower)

JO: Oh, go stick your beach blonde hair in a toilet! *Natalie enters*

NATALIE: I'm so excited! Todays' Fathers Day! (This is before her father dies)

BLAIR: I know! My daddy will come later on today to give his princess a kiss.

JO: Or he could be coming over to throw-up in your face! *A man enters*

MAN: I need to speak to Blair Warner.

BLAIR: I'm Blair.

JO: Don't rub it in!

MAN: Well, Blair. I came by to tell you somethng about your father. *Blair leds him into the living room. They sit down on the sofa*

BLAIR: Go on.

MAN: I work for your father. And I hate to be one telling you this, but your father.... your father is dead!

Continue?

Jo_Marie · 05-29-2003, 04:18 AM

Are you Jokin' Of Course You should continue.

JDS84 · 05-29-2003, 09:23 PM

Post more this is great!

MrsGarrettRocksMySocks · 05-31-2003, 12:18 AM

can't wait to see what happens next!

james_baby87 · 05-31-2003, 09:59 PM

Yea continue!

Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan · 06-01-2003, 04:13 PM

Hey, guys! Sorry I haven't posted any in a few days, but I was on a camping trip. Anyways, here's the last part!

*The living room. Later. Mrs. Garrett enters*

MRS. G: Hello, gang! *No reply* Hello? 8She walkes into the Edna's Edibles, and sees nobody* Now, I know how the people in the "Twlight Zone" felt. *Blair enters* Oh, Blair where is everybody?

BLAIR (dully): The movies. Mrs. Garrett, may I tell you something?

MRS. G: Sure.

BLAIR: A man came by, who works for my daddy, and he told me... he died. 8Mrs. G motions them to sit at a chair*

MRS. G: Blair, I'm so sorry. I know it's hard to lose someone you love. It hurts.

BLAIR: Tell me about it! I feel like jo pushed me infront of a car.

MRS. G:I know. But ting will get better.

BLAIR: Well, today's Father's Day! I didn't even tell me daddy I love him.

MRS. G: He knows you love him!

BLAIR: Man said he died in car crash. He was coming to see me! It's all my fault!

MRS. G: No, honey! It's not your fault! Thing happen. *A man ebters, holding roses.*

MAN: Blair Warner. *Blair stands up. The man hands Blair the roses and exits. Blair takes out a card that is in the roses*

BLAIR: Mrs. Garrett, would you-?

MRS G: Sure, honey. *Mrs. Garrett takes the card, and opens it*
"Dear, Princess. I love you more than life itself. I will ALWAYS love you even when I die because you are, and always will be my little princess. Love, Dad.

BLAIR: Why do I feel like such a spoiled brat? *Jo enters*

JO: Because it works for you, that's why. 8Blair gets up, walkes over to Jo, and hugs her. The 2 walk back to Mrs. G, sit down and start talking*

THE END

Feed back welcome!

Jo_Marie · 06-02-2003, 03:17 AM

It was Great, not as long as I'd liked but great just the same

MrsGarrettRocksMySocks · 06-02-2003, 02:34 PM

cool.

james_baby87 · 06-03-2003, 03:55 PM

It was cool, not to long but hey short stories go over well too.

Wait it wasn't cool it was great!

JDS84 · 06-03-2003, 07:19 PM

It was great.

Rebel Queen 1980 · 06-13-2003, 07:06 PM

It was good,but I was it was a little longer,but anyways
keep writing,you did a wonderful job!

05-28-2003, 11:34 PM	#1
Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 06, 2003 Location: Blair's house Posts: 326	Fathers Day This is my new fan-fiction story. It's going to be an epsiode on my new show "The Facts are New." which is coming this fall. I can't WAIT! Anyways, hope you like it! The opening scene- Edna's Edibles. Jo is looking at a bike magazine, while Tootie is reading over her lines for a play she's going to be in. She stands up TOOTIE reading from her script How do I love thee? Let me count the ways! Jo looks up from her magazine JO: How much do I want you to shut up? Let me count the ways. TOOTIE: Jo, would you leave me be? I have to go over these lines. JO: You've been going over these lines ever since you got that dang part. You even recite them while your taking a shower. Blair enters BLAIR: Those of you who take showers! (Addressing Jo doesn't shower) JO: Oh, go stick your beach blonde hair in a toilet! Natalie enters NATALIE: I'm so excited! Todays' Fathers Day! (This is before her father dies) BLAIR: I know! My daddy will come later on today to give his princess a kiss. JO: Or he could be coming over to throw-up in your face! A man enters MAN: I need to speak to Blair Warner. BLAIR: I'm Blair. JO: Don't rub it in! MAN: Well, Blair. I came by to tell you somethng about your father. Blair leds him into the living room. They sit down on the sofa BLAIR: Go on. MAN: I work for your father. And I hate to be one telling you this, but your father.... your father is dead! Continue?
	__________________ Brandon loves Blair Warner! Lisa, if you are reading this, I YOU!!! "One Life To Live" (coming soon) Last edited by Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan; 05-29-2003 at 02:33 AM.

05-29-2003, 09:23 PM	#3
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05-31-2003, 09:59 PM	#5
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05-29-2003, 04:18 AM	#2
Jo_Marie Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Oct 10, 2002 Posts: 385	Are you Jokin' Of Course You should continue.

05-31-2003, 12:18 AM	#4
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks Actors over 60 Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Jul 20, 2001 Location: The cookie jar--Any "Anyone Can Whistle" fans out there? Posts: 4,077	can't wait to see what happens next!

06-01-2003, 04:13 PM	#6
Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 06, 2003 Location: Blair's house Posts: 326	Hey, guys! Sorry I haven't posted any in a few days, but I was on a camping trip. Anyways, here's the last part! The living room. Later. Mrs. Garrett enters MRS. G: Hello, gang! No reply Hello? 8She walkes into the Edna's Edibles, and sees nobody* Now, I know how the people in the "Twlight Zone" felt. Blair enters Oh, Blair where is everybody? BLAIR (dully): The movies. Mrs. Garrett, may I tell you something? MRS. G: Sure. BLAIR: A man came by, who works for my daddy, and he told me... he died. 8Mrs. G motions them to sit at a chair* MRS. G: Blair, I'm so sorry. I know it's hard to lose someone you love. It hurts. BLAIR: Tell me about it! I feel like jo pushed me infront of a car. MRS. G:I know. But ting will get better. BLAIR: Well, today's Father's Day! I didn't even tell me daddy I love him. MRS. G: He knows you love him! BLAIR: Man said he died in car crash. He was coming to see me! It's all my fault! MRS. G: No, honey! It's not your fault! Thing happen. A man ebters, holding roses. MAN: Blair Warner. Blair stands up. The man hands Blair the roses and exits. Blair takes out a card that is in the roses BLAIR: Mrs. Garrett, would you-? MRS G: Sure, honey. Mrs. Garrett takes the card, and opens it "Dear, Princess. I love you more than life itself. I will ALWAYS love you even when I die because you are, and always will be my little princess. Love, Dad. BLAIR: Why do I feel like such a spoiled brat? Jo enters JO: Because it works for you, that's why. 8Blair gets up, walkes over to Jo, and hugs her. The 2 walk back to Mrs. G, sit down and start talking* THE END Feed back welcome!

06-02-2003, 03:17 AM	#7
Jo_Marie Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Oct 10, 2002 Posts: 385	It was Great, not as long as I'd liked but great just the same

06-02-2003, 02:34 PM	#8
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks Actors over 60 Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Jul 20, 2001 Location: The cookie jar--Any "Anyone Can Whistle" fans out there? Posts: 4,077	cool.

06-03-2003, 03:55 PM	#9
james_baby87 ~PussNBoots~ Senior Member Join Date: Jul 21, 2002 Location: JBoro Chica! Posts: 1,108	It was cool, not to long but hey short stories go over well too. Wait it wasn't cool it was great!

06-03-2003, 07:19 PM	#10
JDS84 Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Dec 11, 2001 Location: My Old Kentucky Home Posts: 3,377	It was great.

06-13-2003, 07:06 PM	#11
Rebel Queen 1980 Member Senior Member Join Date: Nov 05, 2002 Location: Watching Classic Sitcoms 24/7.... Posts: 1,509	It was good,but I was it was a little longer,but anyways keep writing,you did a wonderful job!