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chapter 1: a dog called sammy
background info: Jinny and Teddy are married and live in an apartment with Jin's younger brother Casey. The 3 decided to get a house pet and they all decided on a dog ...big mistake (Jin talking to her dad on the phone) JD: Jinny girl,you don't want a dog,your just going to make your life more complicated. you'll have to come straight home after work to walk it. Trust me, owning a dog isn't what you think. J:how would you know,you've probly never even touched a dog , let alone own one, anyway me, Teddy and Casey are going to the shelter saturday JD: Saturday! why so soon? aren't you going to think about this? does your apartment allow pets? Is Teddy ok with this? is Ca... J: Because, no, yes, yes, and for your last question yes! i gotta go now talk to ya later dad,bye love ya *hangs up* JD: *hangs up* sorry it stinks but it's all i could think of - should i post more? |
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Good start!
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I think that is a nice start. Can't wait to see where this is going. More please.
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Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy? Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic. Teddy: Well, you do give good organic. <marquee> Jinny and Theodore together forever </marquee>Check out our websites Miranda and mine that is my partner. Hope you enjoy. Division S.F.P.D In Honor of Nancy McKeon Jay’s Fan Connection |
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thanks,heres more
*Saturday at shelter* C:well, wich one, there's like a million here T:i don't know J:come on lets look over there *leads them to a row of dog cages and walks over to the third dog* hey buddy, do ya like me? *sticks hand in cage and he starts to lick her hand* awww he likes me T: are you sure he doesn't just like the bacon you ate for breakfast J:*to dog* you like me don't you? C:he seems friendly enough well thats all for now and HAPPY MEMORIAL DAY
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Good so far!
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pretty good so far, keep going
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Howdy! :-D Stacy:Sorry to bother you. Cap:You've still got time to reconsider. Crazy is normal,and Normal is crazy! Optimism can be a real b!t(h sometimes. "I've discovered the hardest discovery to make is who you are."-Bonnie Bedelia. "It's Not reaching your dreams that counts. It's going towards them."-Cher Somebody once said(I don't remember who) "I know that God won't give me more then I can handle...I just wish he didn't trust me so much." <- - I liked that. God Bless EVERYONE ~Emma~ |
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J:yeah he is pretty friendly
T:he's pretty cute too C:how much is he J:who knows? but i know a way we can get him for free,all we... T:forget it Jin J:but can i at least tell you how C:fiiiiiiine go ahead J: thank you, anyway i have a cousin who used to work here and when he quit he got to keep his uniform and since he lives here in San Fransisco i could go get it and come here about an hour before closing and pretend i work here and then hide in the bathroom or something then as soon as everyone is gone simply leave with the dog C:you know, thats not a bad idea T: Casey!were not going to do that! should i continue? |
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lol!
Good plan, Jinny (and *Nancy McKeon*) Can't wait to see how it turns it out!
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It is great so far!
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T: Casey! were not going to do that!
C: I know, but it is a pretty good plan J:thanks Cas, * whispers to him* we'll talk when we get home *later that night-jin's apartment* C: Jin i'm not so sure about this, what if we get caught? J: Cas, if anyone gets caught it's going to be me,im the one taking the dog C: but i'm your "partner in crime" and if you get in trouble than i get in trouble J: Cas, all you have to do is guard the hallway that the bathrooms are in C:how, tell them sorry you can't go in there my sister is planing to take a dog J: no,hide in a tree or sumthing and when somone is cuming page me or sumthing C: im still not sure about this,what would your captain say? J:she won't say anything because she won't find out C:but... J: Cas she won't find out,now i have to go call Mag,i'll be right back *walks out of room* |
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I have one word to say about this..... SUPER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Post more ASAP!
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This is great
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Interesting story... Stealing a dog though?? I just don't see it- She and Casey are cops they're supposed to prevent things like that from happening. I could see it if they were kids and pulling a prank like that, but not now... Just my opinion. Good luck on writing....
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*phone*
M ?J:hey mag M: Jinny,hey hows hound-hunting going? J: great,we found a lot of great dogs M:but your only getting one, right J:yea,he's really friendly and really cute M:i bet he's really exspensive to huh? J:yea i guess so i mean evenchually (sp) you know... M:evenchually (sp) what?your not going to steel him are you J: no no of coarse not its not stealing its just borrowing without permission and with no intention to return M:thats stealing jin J: mag im not going to acually steal him,i'll pay for him-later M:jin... J: mag, im not even sure im going to do this,and if i do i will pay-later M: jin,i really don't think you should do this J:don't worry mag i gotta go Casey's waiting for me,bye *hangs up* Brandon~can you post the next part,im not sure whether or not to make Jinny steal the dog cause like you guy's said she's a cop but like my mom said "knowing Jinny,anything's possible" and if you don't want to post can you at least tell me what you think she should do
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