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Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan · 05-10-2003, 02:22 AM

One of the women gets kidnapped. Guess which one!

Jinny's alarm clock went off at it's normal time: 7:00 a.m. She Pushed the 'Snooze' button, and went back to sleep. She was in the middle of a GREAT dream. She was having sex with Brad Pitt.
(I'm not gay. My mother has a MAJOR crush on him. lol.) A few mintues later,the alarm went off again. So, Jinny shut it off, got out of bed, and went to the bathroom to take a shower and brush her teeth. She took a 15 min. shower, got out, and put her robe on. Then she brushed her teeth. After she did that, Jinny went to her bed room to get dressed. Wearing black slacks, a blue shirt, and her black leather jacket/coat (which ever you prefer), Jinny walked out of her house, thinking she'll get breakfast at the "Waffle House" on her way to T.D. But when she got in her car, somebody from the back seat put a rag over Jinny's mouth, smothering her! She tried to fight back, but couldn't! Her vision was getting blury. Finally, she passed out.

What do you think? More?

Swimfan85 · 05-10-2003, 01:32 PM

yah good start add more!

jinnygirl2005 · 05-10-2003, 05:39 PM

It caught me attention you should continue!

Ewan's My Man · 05-10-2003, 11:18 PM

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Originally posted by jinnygirl2005
It caught me attention you should continue!

Yea, ditto

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 05-11-2003, 01:43 AM

Nice story so far... When you messaged me telling me about it first I thought you were talking about a FOL Fan fic so I was surprised when I saw it on here. You've got a nice start... LOL I was laughing over Jinny's dream. haha... See you've got more replies now then just the one when you messaged me. Keep going don't just abandon the fic... Looking forward for more...

JDS84 · 05-11-2003, 10:08 PM

It's really great.

Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan · 05-12-2003, 04:04 PM

Thanks for all the replys guys! Here's more!

Magda walked through the The Division doors, and into her office where she and her gal-pals worked. She looked over at Jinny's desk, which was empty. "Where's Jinny?" Magda asked. "She mainly gets here before I do. "I don't know." Her friend C.D replyed. "Maybe she's sick or something." But that wasn't it. Magda couldn't explain it.. but... a felling told her that just wasn't true. "I hope that's all it is."

Sorry so short, but I'm starting to write the next part now. I WILL post it soon!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 05-12-2003, 05:22 PM

Hey, good thing you're writing more now. People that like a fan fic get, ummm what's the word? ABUSIVE??! lol At least mine do... they have developed their own "Mafia" against me... It's scary.

lol Great fic... Keep going!! I have to add more to my fan fic today also- so you're not the only one. haha

*Marilyn Monroe* · 05-12-2003, 10:46 PM

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Originally posted by #1_Nancy_McKeon
Hey, good thing you're writing more now. People that like a fan fic get, ummm what's the word? ABUSIVE??! lol At least mine do... they have developed their own "Mafia" against me... It's scary. lol Great fic... Keep going!! I have to add more to my fan fic today also- so you're not the only one. haha

Oh, shut up and post. lol JK! Well, you can talk. For right now. lol

BlairFan101...you should post soon too! Its great!

JDS84 · 05-13-2003, 06:05 PM

I love it!!!!!! Post more as soon as you can!!!

Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan · 05-13-2003, 06:49 PM

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Originally posted by JDS84
I love it!!!!!! Post more as soon as you can!!!

Thanks, guys! Here's the next part. It's short, and kind of a cliff-hanger *evil laugh* lol! Read in good health.

lol! Enjoy!

When Jinny came to, the room she was was TOTALLY dark. "Where the hell am I?"she asked out loud. She heard a noise. A creaking noise. "Who's there?" Nobody replyed. Jinny, starting to get a little scared, heard heavy breathing, then a GUN shot! Frightened more then ever, Jinny tried to get up from the thing she was laying on. (She couldn't see what it was, it was so dark), but she couldn't! She was tied down! Thinking fast, Jinny screamed: "HELP!!!!!!!!!!! SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!!!!!" Just then, a hand came across her mouth. "Shout like again, and I'll blow your f***ing brains out!" It sounded like a mans voice. The kidnapper took his hands off of Jinnys mouth and, thinking he was lieing, Jinny screamed again: "HELP ME PLEASE!!!!" The kidnapper pulled the trigger on the gun, then came a loud BOM! He didn't hear Jinny scream anymore more.

Is that cliff hanger enough for ya! lol! Will post more soon!

Ewan's My Man · 05-13-2003, 09:03 PM

jinnygirl2005 · 05-13-2003, 11:43 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by #1_Nancy_McKeon
Hey, good thing you're writing more now. People that like a fan fic get, ummm what's the word? ABUSIVE??! lol At least mine do... they have developed their own "Mafia" against me... It's scary. lol Great fic... Keep going!! I have to add more to my fan fic today also- so you're not the only one. haha

Yupp and if you don't post soon we will have to get it started up again!

as for this fan fic I think "Ewan" said it all... Oh but there is one last thing POST, don't turn into Miranda on us!

Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan · 05-15-2003, 07:07 PM

"Mag." Angela said. "Don't worry. I'm sure Jin's fine!" Just then, Kate walked in. "Hello, ladies." she said, going into her office.
Magda got an idea. She got up from her chair and followed Captain Kate into her office, closing the door behind her.

"There." The kidnapper said. "Maybe death will teach you to close your mouth!" He walked over to to the thing Jinny was on (a chair.) and felt around to see if she was alive, but... the chair was EMPTY! "What on hell!" The kiddnapper said out loud. He stumbled in the dark to find the light switch. Once he found it he turned it on, looked over at the chair, and Jinny was not sitting in it. Just then, he fell to the floor. Once he did, he reavled the person behind him.
It was... Jinny!

Will post more soon! I'm on my summer break so I won't have school work interfear with the thing I love to do: WRITE!

jinnygirl2005 · 05-15-2003, 10:17 PM

your on summer vacation already!!!! god my school sucks!!!

post more! It's good who is the kidnapper

I get to go see down with love tomorrow I'm soo excitied and then I'm going to see it saturday too! and my parents leave for a week saturday too, if you and miranda and michelle post twice a per day It will be the best week of my life, maybe...

05-10-2003, 02:22 AM	#1
Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 06, 2003 Location: Blair's house Posts: 326	Kidnapped One of the women gets kidnapped. Guess which one! Jinny's alarm clock went off at it's normal time: 7:00 a.m. She Pushed the 'Snooze' button, and went back to sleep. She was in the middle of a GREAT dream. She was having sex with Brad Pitt. (I'm not gay. My mother has a MAJOR crush on him. lol.) A few mintues later,the alarm went off again. So, Jinny shut it off, got out of bed, and went to the bathroom to take a shower and brush her teeth. She took a 15 min. shower, got out, and put her robe on. Then she brushed her teeth. After she did that, Jinny went to her bed room to get dressed. Wearing black slacks, a blue shirt, and her black leather jacket/coat (which ever you prefer), Jinny walked out of her house, thinking she'll get breakfast at the "Waffle House" on her way to T.D. But when she got in her car, somebody from the back seat put a rag over Jinny's mouth, smothering her! She tried to fight back, but couldn't! Her vision was getting blury. Finally, she passed out. What do you think? More?
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05-10-2003, 05:39 PM	#3
jinnygirl2005 Thank you Miranda! Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 10, 2002 Location: I'm in my room waiting for TD and Miranda and Michelle to post! Posts: 777	It caught me attention you should continue!
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05-11-2003, 01:43 AM	#5
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Nice story so far... When you messaged me telling me about it first I thought you were talking about a FOL Fan fic so I was surprised when I saw it on here. You've got a nice start... LOL I was laughing over Jinny's dream. haha... See you've got more replies now then just the one when you messaged me. Keep going don't just abandon the fic... Looking forward for more...
	__________________ "See I know people too. Next time....Don't screw with me"-Jinny Magda: "Listen, people from my Country" Jinny: "Oh Magda Please, your country, you're from the mission district." ---------------- Jeanie & My Websites: Division S.F.P.D In Honor of Nancy McKeon Jay’s Fan Connection

05-11-2003, 10:08 PM	#6
JDS84 Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Dec 11, 2001 Location: My Old Kentucky Home Posts: 3,377	It's really great.
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05-10-2003, 01:32 PM	#2
Swimfan85 Member Forum Veteran Join Date: Jul 04, 2001 Posts: 7,030	yah good start add more!

05-12-2003, 04:04 PM	#7
Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 06, 2003 Location: Blair's house Posts: 326	Thanks for all the replys guys! Here's more! Magda walked through the The Division doors, and into her office where she and her gal-pals worked. She looked over at Jinny's desk, which was empty. "Where's Jinny?" Magda asked. "She mainly gets here before I do. "I don't know." Her friend C.D replyed. "Maybe she's sick or something." But that wasn't it. Magda couldn't explain it.. but... a felling told her that just wasn't true. "I hope that's all it is." Sorry so short, but I'm starting to write the next part now. I WILL post it soon!

05-12-2003, 05:22 PM	#8
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Hey, good thing you're writing more now. People that like a fan fic get, ummm what's the word? ABUSIVE??! lol At least mine do... they have developed their own "Mafia" against me... It's scary. lol Great fic... Keep going!! I have to add more to my fan fic today also- so you're not the only one. haha

05-13-2003, 06:05 PM	#10
JDS84 Member Forum 3000 Club Member Join Date: Dec 11, 2001 Location: My Old Kentucky Home Posts: 3,377	I love it!!!!!! Post more as soon as you can!!!

05-13-2003, 09:03 PM	#12
Ewan's My Man I'll Cover You Forum Veteran Join Date: Sep 29, 2001 Location: Beneath the opera house... Posts: 5,682

05-15-2003, 07:07 PM	#14
Lisa_Marie_Presley_Fan Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 06, 2003 Location: Blair's house Posts: 326	"Mag." Angela said. "Don't worry. I'm sure Jin's fine!" Just then, Kate walked in. "Hello, ladies." she said, going into her office. Magda got an idea. She got up from her chair and followed Captain Kate into her office, closing the door behind her. "There." The kidnapper said. "Maybe death will teach you to close your mouth!" He walked over to to the thing Jinny was on (a chair.) and felt around to see if she was alive, but... the chair was EMPTY! "What on hell!" The kiddnapper said out loud. He stumbled in the dark to find the light switch. Once he found it he turned it on, looked over at the chair, and Jinny was not sitting in it. Just then, he fell to the floor. Once he did, he reavled the person behind him. It was... Jinny! Will post more soon! I'm on my summer break so I won't have school work interfear with the thing I love to do: WRITE!

05-15-2003, 10:17 PM	#15
jinnygirl2005 Thank you Miranda! Forum Regular Join Date: Sep 10, 2002 Location: I'm in my room waiting for TD and Miranda and Michelle to post! Posts: 777	your on summer vacation already!!!! god my school sucks!!! post more! It's good who is the kidnapper I get to go see down with love tomorrow I'm soo excitied and then I'm going to see it saturday too! and my parents leave for a week saturday too, if you and miranda and michelle post twice a per day It will be the best week of my life, maybe...