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Family Ties Forever! · 04-28-2003, 06:30 AM

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Brad Russ · 04-28-2003, 07:08 AM

Very good job! I visualized your story in my head with the actual characters, and it looked pretty darn good. My favorite parts were when Steven says: I see, and Alex responds by saying, or in Mallory's case you F. I also liked where Alex says to Mallory: Anyone next to me would look dumb, you just happen to be at the top of the list. That part made me laugh. Anyway, nice job. I hope you write more fan fics in the future!

04-28-2003, 06:30 AM	#1
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04-28-2003, 07:08 AM	#2
Brad Russ Member Forum Fanatic Join Date: Feb 17, 2002 Location: Portland, Oregon Posts: 10,085	Very good job! I visualized your story in my head with the actual characters, and it looked pretty darn good. My favorite parts were when Steven says: I see, and Alex responds by saying, or in Mallory's case you F. I also liked where Alex says to Mallory: Anyone next to me would look dumb, you just happen to be at the top of the list. That part made me laugh. Anyway, nice job. I hope you write more fan fics in the future!
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